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Gloom v2 (no hitsounds)
hope this help, if you don't understand anything you can PM me in gameif my net is not dying in the moment and I can playtest it 1000 times if you need or smth, oh also I can help with hitsounds if you need
GL
Gloom v2 (no hitsounds)
- 00:01:700 (3) - make this a reverse? (and the rest of sliders in the same sund?) so you hear there's a sound witha triplet and you get bit more prepared to play this 00:03:072 (1,2,3) - *not a super necesary changes, I just think so*
00:05:129 (3,1) - stack?
00:07:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tbh I didnt liked playing this once again here, try another pattern? felt a bit boring-
00:11:300 (3,4,5,6) - here I think you can rotate this a bit or smth, because the sound changes here 00:11:643 (7,8,9,10,1) - its totally NOT the same sound of 00:11:300 (3,4,5,6) - so maybe you can try to break that stream or smth, just a little change of direction
00:17:386 (2) - this is like.. out of nowhere and its the ONLY part you mapped like this in the whole map + the circle is not exactly between the 2 sliders, its closer to the previous one http://prntscr.com/dc0r1c parts like that is fun to play with that spacing, but only once?? nahh.. yeah the song doesnt repeat the same sound in this part but you can do it in the other parts like this
00:21:929 (2,3) - I think you should not stack these, here the music is already changing but the map isnt, you still force a stop here and the song doesnt really feel like you need a stop here like the rest before, so why not move this 00:22:100 (3) - to -- idk... 260/304?
*00:22:957 - I think the spacing in this whole part its too much, in the other parts of the song with even more intense sounds you didnt use such spacing, I feel like this part has the longest jumps.. and it doesnt deserve it imo*
00:33:500 (2,3) - why u didnt used that long spacing like before?
00:33:929 (1) - this sound here is not loud like the rest, but you still mapping it like the rest, I recomend to reduce its sv and make something like this http://prntscr.com/dc0u0c I think it fits the song better
00:38:729 (1,2) - should make these into triplets because playing these sliders for a long time gets boring, add triplets there to more variety and it will make this part less boring to play
00:44:215 (1,2) - and these two should have MORE distance than the rest because their sound its most intense than the rest before, a spacing like this 00:38:043 (1,2) -
00:57:929 (1) - ***FIXXX MEEEEE***w8, pls don't tell me this is on porpuse ;--;
01:11:643 (5,6,7,8) - these circles should change the flow, I mean.. this is a whole pattern that plays the same 01:10:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but the sounds on 01:11:643 (5,6,7,8) - changes, and its really noticeable while playing, but why they play the same ??? make a change of direction on 01:11:643 (5,6,7,8) -
01:16:443 (1,2) - make these a jumps too? but with lesss spacing of course
01:22:615 (5,6,7,8) - the same of above**
01:28:100 (1,2,3,4,1) - at least add a super spaced jumps here? this part felt really easier than 00:22:957 (1,2) - but the song there is way MORE intense
01:53:472 (3) - will look better if you move the first red anchor to the right n up like http://prntscr.com/dc0xbd
02:15:757 (2,3) - ctrl+g?
02:19:529 (1) - *I have a complain about this shape but don't want to push you to change it if you don't want*
02:20:729 (4,5) - trl+g?
02:44:215 (1,2) - isnt the spacing here too much ? becuase they end on blue ticks
02:45:586 - since here you map this the same way as before, even if both parts have different intensity, so I recommend to add more spacing from here 02:45:586 - or reduce the spacing in the whole section just before this *because I can't feel the change while playing, it was like playing the same again.. even if the song goes super intense, its the kiai, should have more spacing than before!*
02:49:700 (1) - move a bit up xD
03:07:872 - and from here the song becomes really quiet but the spacing doesnt change much :/
03:16:272 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - see this spacing, its the same or almost the same as the last stream of the kiai time, (yeha the one in kiai reduces its spacing gradually* but the start has the same spacing, and this part is QUIET, MUCH more silent than the kiai, but the spacing its the same :/
03:25:186 (7,2) - stack properly xd
and from here 03:18:843 - the spacing becomes really short, while the sound changes and its more intense than the part just before, but the part just before has moreee psacing
*the mapping its perfect, the only problem is the spacing that doesnt express the song imo*
04:17:472 - this part its better than the first kiai, the patterns change a bit of direction to express the change in the song better, but I recomend to add NC here 04:18:157 (5) - (and all of these) to make more emphasis on the change :l
04:32:557 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - where are the super long jumpsfor the PP?even this part was easier than 00:22:957 (1,2) -
hope this help, if you don't understand anything you can PM me in game
GL