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Ray - Kimi to Ita Sora

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SkyFlame
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 17, 2018 at 11:52:24 PM

Artist: Ray
Title: Kimi to Ita Sora
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: aokana ao no kanata four rhythm ending beyond the sky into the firmament visual novel eroge akitoshi -laura- corinn
BPM: 161
Filesize: 3525kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.41 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (3.19 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Insane (4.54 stars, 373 notes)
  4. Laura's Sky (5.08 stars, 379 notes)
  5. Normal (1.95 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Ray - Kimi to Ita Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Awaiting BN

Thanks Meyrink for mp3!

Hitsounding
Hitsounds by -Laura-

Log
5/1/17: Changed BG
8/15/17: Removed Limitless Diff
8/16/17: Added Laura's Sky

Mapset
Easy - Me
Normal - Me
Hard - Me
Insane - Me
Laura's Sky - Akitoshi

Special thanks!
Modders:

GD:
-Laura-

Douky
-Raijin
miradzin
Yamicchi
Lumario
DJ Fish
Katyusha
ShogunMoon
Mir
-Liddell
William K
siiickx
depzdai
Neoskylove
SolariS
-Latias-
I Am Kawaii
Venix
cooldude4232
Neptunee
_DT3
SST SnowTiger
Creminite
Sidetail
gottagof4ast
- Sophia
paydayzcool
Itasha_S13
-Laura-
YO_WUZ_UP
July - San
fieryrage
Sinnoh
Arphimigon
Gottagof4st
Hanasaka Yui
Meyrink
this mp3 u used in this map ! it was an unofficial edited version of the full version by me ! i mentioned that in my map's description :c
that was some pretty effort put into it to edit this mp3
you should use the official tv size from the episode 12 of the anime

Phoenixmaster5 wrote:

any sort of criticism/tips will be helpful
this isnt bad as a new mappers map ! but most important part ! is
when trying to use parts of others mappers map's ! u should at least ask them for it ! like (mp3 or video or background)
and when that's done ! u should credit for it in map's description ! like (mp3 taken fro X's map)

otherwise map is good ! gl
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Meyrink wrote:

this isnt bad as a new mappers map ! but most important part ! is
when trying to use parts of others mappers map's ! u should at least ask them for it ! like (mp3 or video or background)
and when that's done ! u should credit for it in map's description ! like (mp3 taken fro X's map)

otherwise map is good ! gl
Thanks! I will add it to the description :D

Also sry for not giving you credit >.<
Tari
I love this song! Good map for a new mapper surprisingly, get some more mods and you should be good to go. By the way, a full spread of difficulties is needed unless your going for approval.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Thank you so much for your advice! I'm going to try my hardest to make my map as good as I can get it!
Douky
Hey ! Passing by ! Liked the song , and liked the map , good one for a new mapper ^^ Little mod for you on Insane diff !

00:08:512 (3,4) - Here , you do a left-right pattern just before , and then a right-up one , The map will flow better if you do a right-left one or a left-right , I'd suggest something like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5172108

00:10:375 (7,8) - Thoses 2 breaks the jumps , and it is easily missreadable, maybe you should consider replacing it by another jump or stack the 8 on the next slider , either possibities are good

00:13:729 (4) - Try doing what we call a blanket with this slider , basically , a blanket et when a slider covers a note or another slider like a blanket ^^ (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5172133)

00:14:474 (2,4) - If you stack the 2 sliderstart, it will look nicer , even if distance will be a little modified , it's not a big jump anyway

00:19:692 (5) - Try not to overlap things on other things unless you really want to make a style, the map will look cleaner :D

00:20:809 (5,1,2) - Same here you can do a good blanket with thoses ones

00:27:518 (1,4) - Here the overlap isn't very pretty, you should change it

00:29:195 (1,4) - Stack thoses two notes, it's an interesstiing pattern

00:33:108 (1,4) - You wanted to stack thoses 2 , you missed ^^

00:34:226 (3,1) - While we're on stacking , you could put the not on the slider end

00:36:276 (1,2) - Here on the contrary , stacking isn't a good option , because it reduce the jump spacing very much , and it is surprising while playing if the song does not fit it

00:37:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you listen to the song , it is a full stream that begins on the first 3 , so either you do a longstream , either you do the same pattern as before ( this one 00:12:238 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - )

00:40:189 (3) - Don't cover beats under slider , you can hear there is a beat during the slider , because you tried to map the lyrics. On priority , map always the beat first

00:44:661 (4,1) - There is a beat between thoses 2 , you can place a note , or not , your choice

00:45:965 (2,3,4,4) - Stack the slider with the Triple

00:55:095 (3,1) - You can place the 1 everywhere , it would be prettier not on the 3 ^^

00:59:567 (4,1) - Blanket ?

01:01:058 (5,1) - They are almost overlapped , it's estheticaly not good

01:11:866 (4,1) - You could place the 1 under the slider to make a blanket and replace the pattern to avoid overlapping too much

01:28:263 (3,1) - stack thoses 2

Voila , it's globally what I saw on your map ! This is good for some firsts maps ! I'll give you some advice for your nexts ones:
1) Try to avoid random overlappings , the less you got , the more clear your map will be
2) Be carefull about stacking, especially about how it plays, this is an interessting way of mapping , but not always
3)Listen carefully to the song , the best maps are often the ones that follow the beat perfectly
4) Read the wiki for some Dank Patterns like little blankets ^^
And the best one ! 5) Enjoy Mapping , map what you like and inspire you :D
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Douky wrote:

Hey ! Passing by ! Liked the song , and liked the map , good one for a new mapper ^^ Little mod for you on Insane diff !

00:08:512 (3,4) - Here , you do a left-right pattern just before , and then a right-up one , The map will flow better if you do a right-left one or a left-right , I'd suggest something like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5172108

00:10:375 (7,8) - Thoses 2 breaks the jumps , and it is easily missreadable, maybe you should consider replacing it by another jump or stack the 8 on the next slider , either possibities are good

00:13:729 (4) - Try doing what we call a blanket with this slider , basically , a blanket et when a slider covers a note or another slider like a blanket ^^ (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5172133)

00:14:474 (2,4) - If you stack the 2 sliderstart, it will look nicer , even if distance will be a little modified , it's not a big jump anyway

00:19:692 (5) - Try not to overlap things on other things unless you really want to make a style, the map will look cleaner :D

00:20:809 (5,1,2) - Same here you can do a good blanket with thoses ones

00:27:518 (1,4) - Here the overlap isn't very pretty, you should change it

00:29:195 (1,4) - Stack thoses two notes, it's an interesstiing pattern

00:33:108 (1,4) - You wanted to stack thoses 2 , you missed ^^

00:34:226 (3,1) - While we're on stacking , you could put the not on the slider end

00:36:276 (1,2) - Here on the contrary , stacking isn't a good option , because it reduce the jump spacing very much , and it is surprising while playing if the song does not fit it

00:37:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you listen to the song , it is a full stream that begins on the first 3 , so either you do a longstream , either you do the same pattern as before ( this one 00:12:238 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - )

00:40:189 (3) - Don't cover beats under slider , you can hear there is a beat during the slider , because you tried to map the lyrics. On priority , map always the beat first

00:44:661 (4,1) - There is a beat between thoses 2 , you can place a note , or not , your choice

00:45:965 (2,3,4,4) - Stack the slider with the Triple

00:55:095 (3,1) - You can place the 1 everywhere , it would be prettier not on the 3 ^^

00:59:567 (4,1) - Blanket ?

01:01:058 (5,1) - They are almost overlapped , it's estheticaly not good

01:11:866 (4,1) - You could place the 1 under the slider to make a blanket and replace the pattern to avoid overlapping too much

01:28:263 (3,1) - stack thoses 2

Voila , it's globally what I saw on your map ! This is good for some firsts maps ! I'll give you some advice for your nexts ones:
1) Try to avoid random overlappings , the less you got , the more clear your map will be
2) Be carefull about stacking, especially about how it plays, this is an interessting way of mapping , but not always
3)Listen carefully to the song , the best maps are often the ones that follow the beat perfectly
4) Read the wiki for some Dank Patterns like little blankets ^^
And the best one ! 5) Enjoy Mapping , map what you like and inspire you :D
Fixed All :)

Thank you so much for your mod/advice! I really appreciate it :D
Kyle Y
My Hard diff finished, but un-hitsound.

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Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Kyle Y wrote:

My Hard diff finished, but un-hitsound.

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Updated. Thanks a lot!
Clarity
here ya go

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Topic Starter
SkyFlame
updated thanks!
Ice Poseidon Cx

Insane Difficulty


  • 00:10:748 (1) - In that section you can add a burst to make it more interesting . But if you thought about it before and just did not do it to keep the stars / difficulty reasonably good for players such as 50k or lower , then it is good ;).

    00:16:338 (1) - My recommendation would be to remove that big slider and just add one 1/2 slider in the start of the beat and one note in the end of the beat , because it feels a bit empty and it has a big impact and it does not sound very good

    00:30:499 (1) - Move that note to the end of the 1st slider , you know the red tick 00:31:058 - and move the slider to this note 00:30:499 - (The note where the hitcircle was) so it goes more to the beat .

    00:27:331 - Add a hitcircle close to the slider (Example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791698 ) so it goes better to the beat.

    00:34:971 (1) - Move that hitcircle over here 00:35:530 - and move 00:35:158 (2) - that slider to the note that the hitcircle was ( 00:34:971 - ) .

    00:36:089 (5) - Remove that hitcircle . And add a slider like I did (or make it similar just add a 1/2 slider there because there is a piano note and make it a new combo hitcircle.) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791753 .

    00:40:189 (3) - Remove that slider and split it to two hitcircles and one slider , in this note pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791818 (Ignore where i placed the hitcircles and the slider that is totally up to you just look at the highlighted parts on top :P ). This way it doesn't feel empty and just goes better with the beat

    00:40:934 (4) - Make that a 1/2 slider. After that add a 1/1 repeat slider here 00:41:307 - so that it looks better and does not feel empty , plus there is an impact kind of sound. And make this a 1/2 slider 00:41:679 (5) - and add a hitcircle here 00:42:052 - .

    00:42:797 (2) - Switch this hitcircle with the triples and put that hitcircle to this note 00:43:170 - , believe me it will sound a TON better.

    Make this 00:46:338 (1) - slider smaller so that it goes to the white tick ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792025 The pointer that my mouse is on.)

    00:48:760 - Add a 1/2 slider and remove this hitcircle 00:48:946 (1) - .

    00:50:996 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:50:996 -

    00:51:555 (4,5) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:51:555 -

    00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Replace those with two triangles . That part is more like a triangle > 1-2 jumps.

    01:07:394 (1) - Remove this slider and add a hitcircle here 01:07:399 - (Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792213 )

    01:13:356 (1) - Remove this slider and divide it to two 1/2 sliders , 1st starting from here 01:13:356 - and 2nd from here 01:13:729 - but you have to remove this hitcircle 01:13:915 (2) -

    01:20:810 (1) - Move the slider next to the stream , because it's considered a stream speed jump which for most average players it is pretty hard to aim and you rarely see that happening in ranked beatmaps.

    01:16:710 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Change those to 1/2 sliders like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792541 (Check on the timeline).

    01:22:114 (1,2) - Replace those two hitcircles with a 1/2 slider.

    01:23:791 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider (This part comes to personal preference though if you like it as circles it can be as circles, either way or the other it goes to the beat) .

    01:24:536 (5,1) - Remove the hitcircle and move the slider to the White Tick.(From there you make it a repeated slider)

    01:25:095 (2,3) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider there.

    01:38:698 (2) - Swap this hitcircle with these triples 01:38:884 (3,4,5) -

    01:38:512 (1) - Combo should not start from here , but from here 01:38:698 (2) - .

    Same for 01:39:257 (1) - and these 01:39:443 (2,3,4) -

Time taken probably over like 2:30 hours but it was a nice map and I hope I helped ;) . If you have any questions :?: do not hesitate to ask me 8-)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
mod

jimdevl wrote:

Insane Difficulty


  • 00:10:748 (1) - In that section you can add a burst to make it more interesting . But if you thought about it before and just did not do it to keep the stars / difficulty reasonably good for players such as 50k or lower , then it is good ;). Yea I think it should be fine

    00:16:338 (1) - My recommendation would be to remove that big slider and just add one 1/2 slider in the start of the beat and one note in the end of the beat , because it feels a bit empty and it has a big impact and it does not sound very good changed thanks!

    00:30:499 (1) - Move that note to the end of the 1st slider , you know the red tick 00:31:058 - and move the slider to this note 00:30:499 - (The note where the hitcircle was) so it goes more to the beat . also changed


    00:27:331 - Add a hitcircle close to the slider (Example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791698 ) so it goes better to the beat. ok changed

    00:34:971 (1) - Move that hitcircle over here 00:35:530 - and move 00:35:158 (2) - that slider to the note that the hitcircle was ( 00:34:971 - ) .
    ok switched

    00:36:089 (5) - Remove that hitcircle . And add a slider like I did (or make it similar just add a 1/2 slider there because there is a piano note and make it a new combo hitcircle.) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791753 . I feel this section is fine with the jumps

    00:40:189 (3) - Remove that slider and split it to two hitcircles and one slider , in this note pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791818 (Ignore where i placed the hitcircles and the slider that is totally up to you just look at the highlighted parts on top :P ). This way it doesn't feel empty and just goes better with the beat I changed this part differently, but it sounds less empty now

    00:40:934 (4) - Make that a 1/2 slider. After that add a 1/1 repeat slider here 00:41:307 - so that it looks better and does not feel empty , plus there is an impact kind of sound. And make this a 1/2 slider 00:41:679 (5) - and add a hitcircle here 00:42:052 - . I also changed this part a little differently but I used most of the recommendations

    00:42:797 (2) - Switch this hitcircle with the triples and put that hitcircle to this note 00:43:170 - , believe me it will sound a TON better. OK changed :D

    Make this 00:46:338 (1) - slider smaller so that it goes to the white tick ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792025 The pointer that my mouse is on.) Fixed :)

    00:48:760 - Add a 1/2 slider and remove this hitcircle 00:48:946 (1) - . changed

    00:50:996 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:50:996 - changed

    00:51:555 (4,5) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:51:555 -changed

    00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Replace those with two triangles . That part is more like a triangle > 1-2 jumps. Gotta love triangles

    01:07:394 (1) - Remove this slider and add a hitcircle here 01:07:399 - (Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792213 ) changed a little differently

    01:13:356 (1) - Remove this slider and divide it to two 1/2 sliders , 1st starting from here 01:13:356 - and 2nd from here 01:13:729 - but you have to remove this hitcircle 01:13:915 (2) - This part i think is fine

    01:20:810 (1) - Move the slider next to the stream , because it's considered a stream speed jump which for most average players it is pretty hard to aim and you rarely see that happening in ranked beatmaps. changed

    01:16:710 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Change those to 1/2 sliders like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792541 (Check on the timeline). changed thanks!

    01:22:114 (1,2) - Replace those two hitcircles with a 1/2 slider. Did this one a little differently

    01:23:791 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider (This part comes to personal preference though if you like it as circles it can be as circles, either way or the other it goes to the beat) . I'd like to keep it as hitcircles

    01:24:536 (5,1) - Remove the hitcircle and move the slider to the White Tick.(From there you make it a repeated slider) I feel that the hitcircle should be there

    01:25:095 (2,3) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider there. changed


    01:38:698 (2) - Swap this hitcircle with these triples 01:38:884 (3,4,5) - I think this part is good, it feels better to play IMO

    01:38:512 (1) - Combo should not start from here , but from here 01:38:698 (2) - . changed

    Same for 01:39:257 (1) - and these 01:39:443 (2,3,4) - I think this one is fine

Time taken probably over like 2:30 hours but it was a nice map and I hope I helped ;) . If you have any questions :?: do not hesitate to ask me 8-)

Thanks for mod!
Ice Poseidon Cx

Phoenixmaster5 wrote:

mod

jimdevl wrote:

Insane Difficulty


  • 00:10:748 (1) - In that section you can add a burst to make it more interesting . But if you thought about it before and just did not do it to keep the stars / difficulty reasonably good for players such as 50k or lower , then it is good ;). Yea I think it should be fine

    00:16:338 (1) - My recommendation would be to remove that big slider and just add one 1/2 slider in the start of the beat and one note in the end of the beat , because it feels a bit empty and it has a big impact and it does not sound very good changed thanks!

    00:30:499 (1) - Move that note to the end of the 1st slider , you know the red tick 00:31:058 - and move the slider to this note 00:30:499 - (The note where the hitcircle was) so it goes more to the beat . also changed


    00:27:331 - Add a hitcircle close to the slider (Example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791698 ) so it goes better to the beat. ok changed

    00:34:971 (1) - Move that hitcircle over here 00:35:530 - and move 00:35:158 (2) - that slider to the note that the hitcircle was ( 00:34:971 - ) .
    ok switched

    00:36:089 (5) - Remove that hitcircle . And add a slider like I did (or make it similar just add a 1/2 slider there because there is a piano note and make it a new combo hitcircle.) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791753 . I feel this section is fine with the jumps

    00:40:189 (3) - Remove that slider and split it to two hitcircles and one slider , in this note pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5791818 (Ignore where i placed the hitcircles and the slider that is totally up to you just look at the highlighted parts on top :P ). This way it doesn't feel empty and just goes better with the beat I changed this part differently, but it sounds less empty now

    00:40:934 (4) - Make that a 1/2 slider. After that add a 1/1 repeat slider here 00:41:307 - so that it looks better and does not feel empty , plus there is an impact kind of sound. And make this a 1/2 slider 00:41:679 (5) - and add a hitcircle here 00:42:052 - . I also changed this part a little differently but I used most of the recommendations

    00:42:797 (2) - Switch this hitcircle with the triples and put that hitcircle to this note 00:43:170 - , believe me it will sound a TON better. OK changed :D

    Make this 00:46:338 (1) - slider smaller so that it goes to the white tick ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792025 The pointer that my mouse is on.) Fixed :)

    00:48:760 - Add a 1/2 slider and remove this hitcircle 00:48:946 (1) - . changed

    00:50:996 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:50:996 - changed

    00:51:555 (4,5) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider here 00:51:555 -changed

    00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Replace those with two triangles . That part is more like a triangle > 1-2 jumps. Gotta love triangles

    01:07:394 (1) - Remove this slider and add a hitcircle here 01:07:399 - (Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792213 ) changed a little differently

    01:13:356 (1) - Remove this slider and divide it to two 1/2 sliders , 1st starting from here 01:13:356 - and 2nd from here 01:13:729 - but you have to remove this hitcircle 01:13:915 (2) - This part i think is fine

    01:20:810 (1) - Move the slider next to the stream , because it's considered a stream speed jump which for most average players it is pretty hard to aim and you rarely see that happening in ranked beatmaps. changed

    01:16:710 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Change those to 1/2 sliders like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5792541 (Check on the timeline). changed thanks!

    01:22:114 (1,2) - Replace those two hitcircles with a 1/2 slider. Did this one a little differently

    01:23:791 (1,2) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider (This part comes to personal preference though if you like it as circles it can be as circles, either way or the other it goes to the beat) . I'd like to keep it as hitcircles

    01:24:536 (5,1) - Remove the hitcircle and move the slider to the White Tick.(From there you make it a repeated slider) I feel that the hitcircle should be there

    01:25:095 (2,3) - Remove those two hitcircles and add a 1/2 slider there. changed


    01:38:698 (2) - Swap this hitcircle with these triples 01:38:884 (3,4,5) - I think this part is good, it feels better to play IMO

    01:38:512 (1) - Combo should not start from here , but from here 01:38:698 (2) - . changed

    Same for 01:39:257 (1) - and these 01:39:443 (2,3,4) - I think this one is fine

Time taken probably over like 2:30 hours but it was a nice map and I hope I helped ;) . If you have any questions :?: do not hesitate to ask me 8-)

Thanks for mod!
np ;) it's a good beatmap :)
miradzin
mod
Insane diff

00:18:760 (2,3) - Replacing them for a 1/1 slider would sound better in my opinion.
01:07:953 - A stream here would fit pretty well in my opinion, or another triple at 01:08:512 would fit pretty well too.
It is pretty well made, I liked it a lot, those were the only things that you could improve in this diff, congrats. :)


Clarity's Extra diff

00:13:729 (1,2) - Probably a 1/1 slider would fit better and a 1/2 slider right after would fit better too in my opinion.
00:15:220 (1) - You should make this slider bigger and put a beat right after it at 00:15:779.
00:16:710 (1,2,3) - Adding a 1/1 slider would sound really better, just as at 00:18:201 (1).
00:17:270 (7,8) - Spliting it and making a triangle in specific here would be more interesting.
00:18:760 - I think you should add a 1/1 slider here, then 2 hitcircles and a 1/2 slider at 00:19:692.
00:21:182 (1,2) - It should sound better if you replaced them for a 1/1 slider
00:27:145 (1,2) - Probably a 1/1 slider would fit better
01:04:412 (1) - A bigger slider here too.
01:07:766 - My recomendation is to make a stream here, it would sound pretty well in my opinion.
01:16:151 (7) - I think this slider should be splited in a 1/2 slider and one hitcircle.
01:24:536 (5,6) - Replacing those for a 1/1 slider would sound better.
01:29:195 - A triple here should be really fine.
01:30:499 (3,4) - I think a 1/1 slider would be better.
I'm a jump lover but some of those jumps give me the sensation it was made just for increasing the difficulty, I think they should be more living, well just my opinion though, for example 01:18:946 (9,10) this. Most of them are great, there are just a little that I don't agree. I hope you understand.
00:14:847 (6,7) - Those are another example, I think they should be closer than that, and one 1/1 slider after, just as one of my recomendations, and this slider you should make with a farther distance.
Most of those recomendations probably will decrease the stars difficulty of the map, but it will probably sound better in my opinion, also adding some simple hitsounds should make it perfect.
Nice map and I love this music, hope I helped you. :)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

miradzin wrote:

mod
Insane diff

00:18:760 (2,3) - Replacing them for a 1/1 slider would sound better in my opinion. Ok i changed!
01:07:953 - A stream here would fit pretty well in my opinion, or another triple at 01:08:512 would fit pretty well too. I agree, but I added the triples in a different area
It is pretty well made, I liked it a lot, those were the only things that you could improve in this diff, congrats. :) Thank you so much!
Nice map and I love this music, hope I helped you. :)
Thanks for mod!!
Clarity

miradzin wrote:

mod
Clarity's Extra diff

00:13:729 (1,2) - Probably a 1/1 slider would fit better and a 1/2 slider right after would fit better too in my opinion. i prefer having the 1/2 slider instead of a 1/1 silder
00:15:220 (1) - You should make this slider bigger and put a beat right after it at 00:15:779. done
00:16:710 (1,2,3) - Adding a 1/1 slider would sound really better, just as at 00:18:201 (1). dont want to have a 1/1 slider here
00:17:270 (7,8) - Spliting it and making a triangle in specific here would be more interesting. really confused to what you really mean here
00:18:760 - I think you should add a 1/1 slider here, then 2 hitcircles and a 1/2 slider at 00:19:692. done
00:21:182 (1,2) - It should sound better if you replaced them for a 1/1 slider don't want a 1/1 slider there
00:27:145 (1,2) - Probably a 1/1 slider would fit better ^
01:04:412 (1) - A bigger slider here too. ^
01:07:766 - My recomendation is to make a stream here, it would sound pretty well in my opinion. don't really think it would
01:16:151 (7) - I think this slider should be splited in a 1/2 slider and one hitcircle. done
01:24:536 (5,6) - Replacing those for a 1/1 slider would sound better. i dont think it would
01:29:195 - A triple here should be really fine. done
01:30:499 (3,4) - I think a 1/1 slider would be better. dont want a 1/1 slider here
I'm a jump lover but some of those jumps give me the sensation it was made just for increasing the difficulty, I think they should be more living, well just my opinion though, for example 01:18:946 (9,10) this. Most of them are great, there are just a little that I don't agree. I know this diff wasn't made by you, but I hope you understand. fixed
00:14:847 (6,7) - Those are another example, I think they should be closer than that, and one 1/1 slider after, just as one of my recomendations, and this slider you should make with a farther distance. fixed
Most of those recomendations probably will decrease the stars difficulty of the map, but it will probably sound better in my opinion, also adding some simple hitsounds should make it perfect.

someday ill add some hitsounds

someday
diff: http://puu.sh/qLzyJ/d729c6a854.osu
miradzin

Clarity wrote:

00:17:270 (7,8) - Spliting it and making a triangle in specific here would be more interesting. really confused to what you really mean here
Oh I really did a confusing explanation, you can keep it the way it is, it was just an idea.

someday ill add some hitsounds

someday

hitsounds give more life to the map, so I hope this day is soon :lol:

diff: http://puu.sh/qLzyJ/d729c6a854.osu
Yamicchi
[General]

  • • Turn off Widescreen Support and letterbox if you don't use SB, or turn on for "Insane" if you intend to add it in later
    • I'd suggest adding some custom combo colours
[Easy]

  • 00:04:785 (1) - this, for consistent with the 2 first objects

    00:16:710 (4) - NC here instead of 00:18:201 (1) - then add a NC at 00:19:692 (3) - and remove NC at 00:21:182 -
    00:25:654 (4) - Nc here instead of 00:26:027 -
    00:36:462 (5) - weird slidershape tbh, change?
[Normal]

  • 00:07:766 (5) - Nc here instead
    00:13:729 - Idk the next object after the spinner comes so early, ask someone to know if it's unrankable but I'm sure it is
    00:56:959 (1,2) - what the giant spacing? Fix
    00:59:940 (1,2,3) - here too? wtf
    Omg almost 70% of the spacing in Kiai was messed up. Please keep the spacing unchange.
[Ky's]

  • 00:31:431 (5) - doesn't have to be a 1/8 slider. Just a triple circle would do
    00:41:679 (4,1,4,1) what's with the different spacing here?
    01:04:412 (1) - unsnapped object
    01:29:567 (5) - same as mentioned inb4
I can see the Normal diff wasn't pretty well-mapped, which kinda annoys me because I want each and every mapset good enough, not because you mapped Insane first then mapped the other diffs just to have a mapset then wish for it to be ranked. Call me again if you still want me to mod, but only after you made Normal good. Good luck
Yamicchi
Demn internet posted twice. Sorry
Jennifer
Rooting for you c:
+1 star
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
mod

Yamicchi wrote:

[General]

  • • Turn off Widescreen Support and letterbox if you don't use SB, or turn on for "Insane" if you intend to add it in later turned off letterbox, but idk what widescreen support is
    • I'd suggest adding some custom combo colours not sure how to but ill try
[Easy]

  • 00:04:785 (1) - this, for consistent with the 2 first objects Yep changed

    00:16:710 (4) - NC here instead of 00:18:201 (1) - then add a NC at 00:19:692 (3) - and remove NC at 00:21:182 - Fixed
    00:25:654 (4) - Nc here instead of 00:26:027 - Also Fixed
    00:36:462 (5) - weird slidershape tbh, change? Fixed
[Normal]

  • 00:07:766 (5) - Nc here instead Fixed
    00:13:729 - Idk the next object after the spinner comes so early, ask someone to know if it's unrankable but I'm sure it is I think it is rankable
    00:56:959 (1,2) - what the giant spacing? Fix Fixed
    00:59:940 (1,2,3) - here too? wtf Also FIxed
    Omg almost 70% of the spacing in Kiai was messed up. Please keep the spacing unchange. Ok I see the problem here, fixed spacing :D

I can see the Normal diff wasn't pretty well-mapped, which kinda annoys me because I want each and every mapset good enough, not because you mapped Insane first then mapped the other diffs just to have a mapset then wish for it to be ranked. I think it's just that I dont have that much experience mapping normal diffs >.<

Call me again if you still want me to mod, but only after you made Normal good. Good luck OK Thank you!

Thank you for mod!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Yamicchi wrote:

Demn internet posted twice. Sorry
Don't worry about it you're fine :D



[Jenn] wrote:

Rooting for you c:
+1 star
Thank you so much for your support! It really means a lot :D
Zyl
Remember TO NOT hitsound the map, i will and please WAIT FOR IT.
I take some time to make a good hitsounding so please wait


From my Queue~


& Also search a better mp3 quality *cof*


And fix metadata


Aritst: Ray
Romanised Artist: Ray
Title: 君といた空
Romanised Title: Kimi to Ita Sora
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Zyl wrote:

Remember TO NOT hitsound the map, i will and please WAIT FOR IT.
I take some time to make a good hitsounding so please wait
No Problem, thanks for hitsounding :D

From my Queue~


& Also search a better mp3 quality *cof*
It's actually the same one ;)

And fix metadata
Fixed thanks :D

Aritst: Ray
Romanised Artist: Ray
Title: 君といた空
Romanised Title: Kimi to Ita Sora
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Lumario
All in all I couldn't notice many things that should be fixed, so I went after the sliders :3

Easy diff:

Try this to sync up the slider with the song:


Normal diff:

Did not find anything :)

Dank's Light Insane:

00:21:182 (3) - Why does this one has two direction changes?
00:34:599 (1) - Why isn't this one round like all the other "long" sliders?
00:42:425 (1) - 00:43:356 (1) - Make these one's round, keep these 00:43:915 (2,3,4) - as they are and map 00:40:934 (1,2,3) - those also a bit "edgy" instead of round, that way you can see the difference between main singer and the background singers inside the map.

Well, I hope this helps :D
Luma
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
mod

KawaiiLuma wrote:

All in all I couldn't notice many things that should be fixed, so I went after the sliders :3 Ok :D

Easy diff:

Try this to sync up the slider with the song: Fixed!


Normal diff:

Did not find anything :) Thank you!

Dank's Light Insane: Dank Meme gave me permission to edit his map

00:21:182 (3) - Why does this one has two direction changes? Changed it to one
00:34:599 (1) - Why isn't this one round like all the other "long" sliders? Fixed
00:42:425 (1) - 00:43:356 (1) - Make these one's round, keep these 00:43:915 (2,3,4) - as they are and map 00:40:934 (1,2,3) - those also a bit "edgy" instead of round, that way you can see the difference between main singer and the background singers inside the map. Also fixed!

Well, I hope this helps :D Thank you it really helps a lot!
Luma

Thank you so much for mod!
DJ Fish
Hello from my queue

Dank's Light Insane
00:07:766 (2,3) - Looks kinda awkward. Maybe try making a little blanket with them
00:08:512 (4,5) - Similar problem ^^^
00:09:816 (2) - Move this to the left side to keep the Clockwise flow like the one at 00:07:766 (2,3,4,5,6)
00:15:220 (6) - NC
00:16:338 (8) - Move two grids to the left so it would look more symmetrical and also fix the distance of 00:16:151 (7) - until its distance with 00:16:338 (8) and 00:15:220 (6) is equal
00:21:182 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:21:741 (4,5) - ^^
00:30:126 (3) - Make this a little bit more curvier so it would look better with its stack with 00:30:685 (5)
00:58:449 (1,2,3,4) - Make these all curvier
01:05:903 (1,2) - Blanket
01:06:276 (2,3,4) - Make these all curvier
01:20:437 (4) - Rotate it until it's angle pattern would be similar to 01:19:319 (1,2,3)
01:23:605 (6,1) - Blanket
01:33:108 (2) - Fix shape until its similar to 01:32:735 (1) or just copy 01:32:735 (1) then paste and flip it
01:33:853 (4) - This slider's shape should be similar to the other previous sliders like 01:32:735 (1)

Ky's Hard
Nothing wrong except some of the other blankets are slightly imperfect just like 01:07:394 (1,2) and 01:08:884 (1,3)

Normal
00:04:785 (1) - This slider's shape should be similar to 00:03:294 (3) you can fix this by just copying 00:03:294 (3) and pasting it then flipping it
00:21:182 (2,3) - Fix blanket by fixing the slider's shape
00:22:673 (4,5) - ^^^
00:22:673 (4,6) - Try not to let them overlap
00:50:996 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern is slightly uneven try fixing this by moving 00:51:741 (3) and 00:52:114 (4) until the pattern looks perfectly even
00:56:959 (1,2) - DS of this is not the same as the others fix it by using the same DS that you used for other objects
01:13:915 (6,1) - Fix blanket by fixing the shape of 01:14:847 (1)
01:19:692 (3,1) - Maybe blanket these
01:20:810 (2,3) - Slightly imperfect blanket, try fixing it
01:27:890 (1,2) - These would look better if you blanket them

GL in mapping :)
CodeS
Hey!

From my Q.

Light Insane:

Use Small grid

00:02:549 (3) - I'm sure you can improve the look of this with a blanket http://i.imgur.com/3f3hy12.png
00:05:344 (2) - The sounds you're using as emphasis here is the same as 00:03:108 (4) - , but SOMEHOW, the spacing of 00:05:344 (2) - is more than double of the first example. this is just the slow part of the song, try to be a bit more consistent at least in the first seconds of the song, especially with the contrast you have when 00:06:276 (1) - is really, REALLY nearby.

00:07:580 (1) - In my opinion, this NC shouldn't be here, first of all is a red tick, and ALSO, the part when the music truly speeds up is 00:07:766 (2) - , it makes more sense to the NC to be here 00:07:766 (2) -
00:11:493 (6) - You put a NC here 00:12:611 (1) - , going by this and consistency, shouldn't 00:11:493 (6) - have a NC as well?
00:17:083 (1) - This feels cheap comparing this to what you did on 00:14:474 (2,3,4,5) -, especially because it comes from hitting 00:16:338 (11) - , it feels... underwhelming , maybe try to do some 1/2 sliders instead?
00:24:350 (2) - The feedback for this note is REALLY low, because the sound you're using as base is being overwhelm by much stronger beats happening in this part. just compare it to 00:24:164 (1) - and 00:24:536 (3) - . now, what I'm trying to say? that this note could work more as an slider end for this reason, maybe make 00:24:164 (1) - a 1/2 slider, same with 00:25:282 (5) - , actually, they could also work with 00:24:164 (1) - being a triple because of the cymbal you're ignoring 00:24:257 - .
00:24:164 (1,2) - This def should be a slider
00:31:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So, why are you increasing the DS between jumps here if in a very similar part like 00:27:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - you kept it very constant, also, there's nothing happening in the song to make this go "Let's go higher!" when the voice is constant and there's really nothing happening in the background, and actually it makes less sense when comparing this next pattern on 00:33:481 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - when you used a more normal DS and pattern in a very similar part.

00:34:599 - Why the slowdown?
00:37:114 (6) - This is overmapped, there's nothing here, and while yes, the voice you could say, but there's no vibration here for a note
00:57:145 (2,5) - Just... no, this really awkward starting the Kiai, because of what you're using as beats for the note and the sliders, with the starting point being a note when the hold on happens, and the slider on a red tick, try this: http://i.imgur.com/n5VHZto.png
00:59:940 (1,2) - Same suggestion here, the Slider should be first based on what beat is strong, and then a Jumpy note after, not the other way around, the Slider on the red tick feels off.
01:11:866 (1,2) - Same here, swap them, first Slider because is when the voice holds on and then the note, remember, this is not preference, but what feels more natural to play.
01:21:555 (3) - CTR G
01:39:443 (2,3,4) - Stack this, your stacking leniency is high enough.


Good diff! just try to pay more attention to red sliders, and see if they're truly on a strong hold on beat.

Insane:

00:25:654 - This should be an slider.
00:25:889 - I don't get the idea of having such a small SV, when from here 00:34:226 (3) - to 00:34:226 (3) - the voice is literally the same volume / pitch / constant etc etc, yeah, there area variations, but you're making the player experiment different speeds on places where there's not much happening, the jumps should be enough to put emphasis on rhythm sections
00:33:108 (1) - This shouldn't be this, why? because you're making the player have a lot of action and movement all over this section, but this big reverse just works in an underwhelming way, maybe try making it some 1/2 sliders instead?

00:35:903 (4) - This shouldn't be this much of a jump, it can still be a jump, but make it less than 00:36:089 (5) - because the "Stronger voice" starts on 00:36:089 (5) - , and doesn't make sense if this stronger part has a smaller DS than 00:35:717 (3,4) - when there's nothing much happening
00:40:002 (2,3,4,5) - blanket this better, use small grid

00:52:487 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1) - This is really, REALLY, overdone, I mean, 00:51:741 (4,5) - these sliders are sitting on the same sound and they're not as separated, in my opinion, make an "increasing DS on every note" like you did on 00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , that way it won't feel as overdone and of course, still keeping the intensity, also, it will make this 00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - feel more intense, not "Oh big jumps... oh look more big jumps... " but instead "oh things are getting jumpier... oh god big jumps!"
01:13:356 (1) - CTR G this



Good diff!

Sorry if a timecopypaste doesn't fit!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

DJ Fish wrote:

Dank's Light Insane
Converting this into an insane collab, he gave me permission to edit his diff
00:07:766 (2,3) - Looks kinda awkward. Maybe try making a little blanket with them Fixed
00:08:512 (4,5) - Similar problem ^^^ Fixed
00:09:816 (2) - Move this to the left side to keep the Clockwise flow like the one at 00:07:766 (2,3,4,5,6) Fixed
00:15:220 (6) - NC Fixed
00:16:338 (8) - Move two grids to the left so it would look more symmetrical and also fix the distance of 00:16:151 (7) - until its distance with 00:16:338 (8) and 00:15:220 (6) is equal Fixed
00:21:182 (3,4) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:21:741 (4,5) - ^^ Fixed
00:30:126 (3) - Make this a little bit more curvier so it would look better with its stack with 00:30:685 (5) Fixed
00:58:449 (1,2,3,4) - Make these all curvier 00:58:449 (1) - Fixed
01:05:903 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
01:06:276 (2,3,4) - Make these all curvier 01:06:276 (2) - Fixed
01:20:437 (4) - Rotate it until it's angle pattern would be similar to 01:19:319 (1,2,3) Fixed
01:23:605 (6,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:33:108 (2) - Fix shape until its similar to 01:32:735 (1) or just copy 01:32:735 (1) then paste and flip it Fixed
01:33:853 (4) - This slider's shape should be similar to the other previous sliders like 01:32:735 (1) Fixed


Ky's Hard
Nothing wrong except some of the other blankets are slightly imperfect just like 01:07:394 (1,2) and 01:08:884 (1,3)

Normal
00:04:785 (1) - This slider's shape should be similar to 00:03:294 (3) you can fix this by just copying 00:03:294 (3) and pasting it then flipping it Fixed
00:21:182 (2,3) - Fix blanket by fixing the slider's shape - Fixed
00:22:673 (4,5) - ^^^ Fixed
00:22:673 (4,6) - Try not to let them overlap Fixed
00:50:996 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern is slightly uneven try fixing this by moving 00:51:741 (3) and 00:52:114 (4) until the pattern looks perfectly even Fixed
00:56:959 (1,2) - DS of this is not the same as the others fix it by using the same DS that you used for other objects Fixed
01:13:915 (6,1) - Fix blanket by fixing the shape of 01:14:847 (1) Fixed
01:19:692 (3,1) - Maybe blanket these Fixed
01:20:810 (2,3) - Slightly imperfect blanket, try fixing itFixed
01:27:890 (1,2) - These would look better if you blanket them

GL in mapping :) Thanks! and Thank you for mod!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
mod

Katyusha wrote:

Hey!

From my Q.

Light Insane:

Use Small grid

00:02:549 (3) - I'm sure you can improve the look of this with a blanket http://i.imgur.com/3f3hy12.png It looks the same to me

00:05:344 (2) - The sounds you're using as emphasis here is the same as 00:03:108 (4) - , but SOMEHOW, the spacing of 00:05:344 (2) - is more than double of the first example. this is just the slow part of the song, try to be a bit more consistent at least in the first seconds of the song, especially with the contrast you have when 00:06:276 (1) - is really, REALLY nearby. Fixed

00:07:580 (1) - In my opinion, this NC shouldn't be here, first of all is a red tick, and ALSO, the part when the music truly speeds up is 00:07:766 (2) - , it makes more sense to the NC to be here 00:07:766 (2) - Fixed

00:11:493 (6) - You put a NC here 00:12:611 (1) - , going by this and consistency, shouldn't 00:11:493 (6) - have a NC as well? Fixed

00:17:083 (1) - This feels cheap comparing this to what you did on 00:14:474 (2,3,4,5) -, especially because it comes from hitting 00:16:338 (11) - , it feels... underwhelming , maybe try to do some 1/2 sliders instead? Fixed

00:24:350 (2) - The feedback for this note is REALLY low, because the sound you're using as base is being overwhelm by much stronger beats happening in this part. just compare it to 00:24:164 (1) - and 00:24:536 (3) - . now, what I'm trying to say? that this note could work more as an slider end for this reason, maybe make 00:24:164 (1) - a 1/2 slider, same with 00:25:282 (5) - , actually, they could also work with 00:24:164 (1) - being a triple because of the cymbal you're ignoring 00:24:257 - . I just changed it into streams

00:24:164 (1,2) - This def should be a slider Fixed

00:31:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So, why are you increasing the DS between jumps here if in a very similar part like 00:27:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - you kept it very constant, also, there's nothing happening in the song to make this go "Let's go higher!" when the voice is constant and there's really nothing happening in the background, and actually it makes less sense when comparing this next pattern on 00:33:481 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - when you used a more normal DS and pattern in a very similar part. OK Fixed the DS

00:34:599 - Why the slowdown? Fixed

00:37:114 (6) - This is overmapped, there's nothing here, and while yes, the voice you could say, but there's no vibration here for a note Fixed

00:57:145 (2,5) - Just... no, this really awkward starting the Kiai, because of what you're using as beats for the note and the sliders, with the starting point being a note when the hold on happens, and the slider on a red tick, try this: http://i.imgur.com/n5VHZto.png Fixed

00:59:940 (1,2) - Same suggestion here, the Slider should be first based on what beat is strong, and then a Jumpy note after, not the other way around, the Slider on the red tick feels off. Fixed

01:11:866 (1,2) - Same here, swap them, first Slider because is when the voice holds on and then the note, remember, this is not preference, but what feels more natural to play. Fixed

01:21:555 (3) - CTR G Fixed

01:39:443 (2,3,4) - Stack this, your stacking leniency is high enough. Fixed


Good diff! just try to pay more attention to red sliders, and see if they're truly on a strong hold on beat.

Insane:

00:25:654 - This should be an slider. I think this is a slider...?

00:25:889 - I don't get the idea of having such a small SV, when from here 00:34:226 (3) - to 00:34:226 (3) - the voice is literally the same volume / pitch / constant etc etc, yeah, there area variations, but you're making the player experiment different speeds on places where there's not much happening, the jumps should be enough to put emphasis on rhythm sections I agree, Fixed the problem

00:33:108 (1) - This shouldn't be this, why? because you're making the player have a lot of action and movement all over this section, but this big reverse just works in an underwhelming way, maybe try making it some 1/2 sliders instead? Thanks Fixed! But I feel jumps are better than 1/2 sliders because of the respective difficulty

00:35:903 (4) - This shouldn't be this much of a jump, it can still be a jump, but make it less than 00:36:089 (5) - because the "Stronger voice" starts on 00:36:089 (5) - , and doesn't make sense if this stronger part has a smaller DS than 00:35:717 (3,4) - when there's nothing much happening
Fixed!
00:40:002 (2,3,4,5) - blanket this better, use small grid Fixed

00:52:487 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1) - This is really, REALLY, overdone, I mean, 00:51:741 (4,5) - these sliders are sitting on the same sound and they're not as separated, in my opinion, make an "increasing DS on every note" like you did on 00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , that way it won't feel as overdone and of course, still keeping the intensity, also, it will make this 00:53:977 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - feel more intense, not "Oh big jumps... oh look more big jumps... " but instead "oh things are getting jumpier... oh god big jumps!" Ok Fixed, gradually increased DS starting from a lower one

01:13:356 (1) - CTR G this Done



Good diff! Thank you!

Sorry if a timecopypaste doesn't fit!

Thank you for mod!
Shunao
Hi!
NM from my Queue~



  • [General]
  1. No hitsounds?

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:04:785 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket
  2. 00:06:276 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing, the spacing it's x1.60 WTF
  3. 00:15:220 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket
  4. 00:19:692 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing
  5. 00:21:182 (3) - The slider is not bad but not correctly fixed, do something like this:
  6. 00:29:008 (1) - The small squares inside the slider are not at all consistent, fix that:
  7. 00:45:406 (1) - The slider is not correct you need to remove one small square on the end of the slider because it's no good:
  8. 00:48:015 (3,5) - Imperfect blanket
  9. 00:58:449 (5,4) - 01:01:431 (3,4) - This is the same vocals but not the same pattern, me I prefer the blanket, you choose but I need to see a same pattern.
  10. 01:10:375 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
  11. 01:29:754 (1,2) - ^
  12. 01:37:953 (4) - Why this slider is curved and not the others ? 01:35:717 (1,3)

  • [Normal]
  1. Check Distance Snap
  2. Almost all that I am going to tell you I used Beat Snap Divisor at 1/4 so you need to put this.
  3. 00:07:766 (1) - This slider end should be here 00:08:139
  4. 00:40:934 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket
  5. 00:42:052 (2,3) - Fix this blanket
  6. 01:19:692 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket
  7. 01:26:772 (1) - The slider is not correctly fixed, like in the Easy diff go to see the picture.
  8. 01:27:890 (2,3) - Fix a blanket
  9. 01:33:294 - Add a note, here 01:33:481 (7) - Replace by a slider renverse, the renverse should be here 01:33:667 - Here 01:34:226 (8) Remove the slider renverse and add a slider here 01:34:785 until 01:35:158

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:31:244 (4) - Me I would put this note before, on the blue tick and I would have directly handed an other one later to make a good consistency.
  2. 00:44:847 (4) - Ctrl+G ?

    Nice diff, omg the flows are nice!

That's all for me!
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue~



  • [General]
  1. No hitsounds?
Gonna add them eventually, but im still kinda new to mapping so it might be a while


  • [Easy]
  1. 00:04:785 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket Fixed
  2. 00:06:276 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing, the spacing it's x1.60 WTF oops, Fixed
  3. 00:15:220 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket Fixed
  4. 00:19:692 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
  5. 00:21:182 (3) - The slider is not bad but not correctly fixed, do something like this: Fixed
  6. 00:29:008 (1) - The small squares inside the slider are not at all consistent, fix that: Fixed
  7. 00:45:406 (1) - The slider is not correct you need to remove one small square on the end of the slider because it's no good: Fixed
  8. 00:48:015 (3,5) - Imperfect blanket oops, Fixed
  9. 00:58:449 (5,4) - 01:01:431 (3,4) - This is the same vocals but not the same pattern, me I prefer the blanket, you choose but I need to see a same pattern. Fixed
  10. 01:10:375 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket Fixed
  11. 01:29:754 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  12. 01:37:953 (4) - Why this slider is curved and not the others ? 01:35:717 (1,3) Fixed

  • [Normal]
  1. Check Distance Snap
  2. Almost all that I am going to tell you I used Beat Snap Divisor at 1/4 so you need to put this.
  3. 00:07:766 (1) - This slider end should be here 00:08:139 Fixed
  4. 00:40:934 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket Fixed
  5. 00:42:052 (2,3) - Fix this blanket Fixed
  6. 01:19:692 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket This blanket looks fine to me
  7. 01:26:772 (1) - The slider is not correctly fixed, like in the Easy diff go to see the picture. Also Fixed
  8. 01:27:890 (2,3) - Fix a blanket Fixed
  9. 01:33:294 - Add a note, here 01:33:481 (7) - Replace by a slider renverse, the renverse should be here 01:33:667 - Here 01:34:226 (8) Remove the slider renverse and add a slider here 01:34:785 until 01:35:158 Also Fixed



That's all for me!
GOOD LUCK!
Thanks for mod!
Mir
From my queue!~

I generalize in parts to keep the mod short and not too grueling for me or you.

Collab Insane

Insane

  1. Blanket check your whole map between collaborators, in the first twenty seconds I’ve already counted like ten bad blankets. I won’t mention any more in the interest of a shorter less cluttered mod.
  2. 00:16:338 (3) – Same as Insane, ends on a downbeat that is pretty strong considering there’s the piano and the bass changes.
  3. NC check your map too. I don’t really get what you’re trying to imply through the current ones. Usually a NC would start on a downbeat, but that doesn’t happen here often.
  4. 00:31:244 (6) – As said above, ends on downbeat.
  5. 00:55:095 (1,2) – Could probably be spaced more because powerful notes.
  6. 01:39:816 (1,2) - ^

Insane

Insane

  1. 00:31:244 (3) – Ends on a pretty strong note, maybe have something active on this downbeat?
  2. 00:43:356 (1,2) – Blanket?
  3. 00:46:338 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:31:244 (3,1) – Overlap ;-;
  5. 01:32:736 (4) – NC?
  6. 01:33:108 (1,2,1,2) – What are these jumps emphasizing? Guitar? Cuz it’s pretty weak in the background.

This song is nice but the maps just need a bit of polishing.

Good luck!~
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!~

I generalize in parts to keep the mod short and not too grueling for me or you. Thanks :D

Collab Insane

Insane

  1. Blanket check your whole map between collaborators, in the first twenty seconds I’ve already counted like ten bad blankets. I won’t mention any more in the interest of a shorter less cluttered mod. Will do. Thanks!
  2. 00:16:338 (3) – Same as Insane, ends on a downbeat that is pretty strong considering there’s the piano and the bass changes.
  3. NC check your map too. I don’t really get what you’re trying to imply through the current ones. Usually a NC would start on a downbeat, but that doesn’t happen here often. OK
  4. 00:31:244 (6) – As said above, ends on downbeat.
  5. 00:55:095 (1,2) – Could probably be spaced more because powerful notes.
  6. 01:39:816 (1,2) - ^

    FIXED ALL

Insane

Insane

  1. 00:31:244 (3) – Ends on a pretty strong note, maybe have something active on this downbeat?
  2. 00:43:356 (1,2) – Blanket?
  3. 00:46:338 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:31:244 (3,1) – Overlap ;-;
  5. 01:32:736 (4) – NC?
  6. 01:33:108 (1,2,1,2) – What are these jumps emphasizing? Guitar? Cuz it’s pretty weak in the background.

    FIXED ALL

This song is nice but the maps just need a bit of polishing. Thank you so much! And thanks for mod!

Good luck!~
Mun
Hi, here to hitsound!

NOTE: PLEASE check your offset. Playtesting it, it felt extremely off despite its rather low OD. I play low BPM a lot, but I was hitting notes unusually and consistently early.

downloads
http://puu.sh/rSsWf/1fc4adf088.osz contains a hitsounding diff using your Insane difficulty as a base. To copy these, use p/4390738
http://puu.sh/rSsvL/7fb42875d7.rar contains all of the hitsounding files used for this.

I'm not entirely confident in my work this time around, so please tell me how I did!

Ray - Kimi to Ita Sora (SkyFlame) {hitsounds diff}
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55561
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
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[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Ita Sora
TitleUnicode:君といた空
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:SkyFlame
Version:hitsounds diff
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:aokana ao no kanata four rhythm ending beyond the sky into the firmament kyle y clarity dank meme
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The map was fun to play and to hitsound, thank you and good luck!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Mun wrote:

Hi, here to hitsound!

NOTE: PLEASE check your offset. Playtesting it, it felt extremely off despite its rather low OD. I play low BPM a lot, but I was hitting notes unusually and consistently early. Checked offset, it was a little off. Fixed!

downloads
http://puu.sh/rSsWf/1fc4adf088.osz contains a hitsounding diff using your Insane difficulty as a base. To copy these, use p/4390738
http://puu.sh/rSsvL/7fb42875d7.rar contains all of the hitsounding files used for this.

I'm not entirely confident in my work this time around, so please tell me how I did! It's good! Much better than what I could have done :p

Ray - Kimi to Ita Sora (SkyFlame) {hitsounds diff}
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TitleUnicode:君といた空
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128,200,93853,6,0,P|176:168|215:173,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,313,94226,2,0,L|384:224,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,132,94599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,223,94785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,313,94971,5,4,0:0:0:0:
294,133,95158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,313,95344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,223,95530,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,133,95717,2,0,B|152:128|112:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,77,96089,5,4,0:0:0:0:
85,77,96276,2,0,P|138:51|177:49,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,104,96648,1,4,0:0:0:0:
287,104,96835,2,0,P|234:130|195:132,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,154,97207,6,0,P|90:206|110:250,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,207,97580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,155,97766,1,4,0:0:0:0:
276,279,97953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,87,98139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,311,98325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,115,98512,1,4,0:0:0:0:
108,251,98698,5,8,0:0:0:0:
340,159,98884,1,4,0:0:0:0:
340,159,98977,1,4,0:0:0:0:
340,159,99071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
124,159,99257,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,283,99443,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,283,99536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,283,99630,1,4,0:0:0:0:
252,59,99816,5,4,0:0:0:0:
164,327,100002,1,8,0:0:0:0:

The map was fun to play and to hitsound, thank you and good luck! Thanks a lot!
-Liddell
quick random mod from #modreq

SPOILER
insane

00:03:839 (3) - try tweaking slider for better blanket


00:05:330 (2) - i might have an ocd xd but this circle is not between sliders 2 and 3. quick fix~

00:17:814 (3) - if you will follow the vocal part, try ending the slider at blue tick 00:18:094 since it flows better imo

00:55:267 (2) - a finish hitsound sounds good here. it's a subjective thing though. i always put a finish hitsound on the last note of a jump part :)

00:56:944 (1) - hey i think the clap on every 2 white ticks should start here since it's the kiai part. again it's subjective :)

01:02:907 - ayy mate the hitsounding from here to the end feels too random. if you try listening to it, random claps appear out of nowhere. try putting claps just once every 2 white ticks and give it a try. it's an old hitsounding trick but it may give you an idea. here's a map i made where i just spam claps on every 2 white ticks and I think it gives off a pretty cool vibe ( SHAMELESS PLUG https://osu.ppy.sh/s/514649&#41; )

01:07:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you try to listen to my hitsounding on the map i linked, i put claps on jumps to increase the intensity of that part. try it on this part :)

01:15:205 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ayy you did it here and it sounds good :)

01:18:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try continuing it here :)

your mapping flow is good :) sorry i can't mod the other diffs since i'm not a fan of modding boring difficulties lul

hope to see this one ranked :)
William K
Hi, from my queue.

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:789 - There're two points, Timing and Inherited points at the same time. Due to the Ranking Criteria, If you made the two of them at the same place... Inherited Points is only for changing the Slider Velocity. So instead of the Slider Velocity, you musn't change the Hitsound Volume. You may change the Timing point's Hitsound sound at 00:01:789 - to 40% sound like the Inherited point.
  2. 00:01:804 - This one is an unecessary inherited point, same effect with 00:01:789 -
  3. 00:03:094 (1,2) - How about swapping NCs here? Since 00:03:280 (2) - is a downbeat.
  4. 00:05:330 (2) - This is a pretty calm sound, if you're following vocals here how about making the spacing from number 1-2 smaller than 2-3 instead of making 2-3 bigger? 00:05:516 - The beginning of slider 3 has a higher sound compared to the ones before. Oh, and you may make them have the same spacing for consistency with the one you did before.
  5. 00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet.
  6. 00:06:820 (2,3) - Actually this sounded pretty the same as 00:06:261 (1) - but if you're going for variations it's okay :3
  7. 00:08:870 (1) - I think NC here isn't necessary, seems not special
  8. 00:09:615 (1,1,1) - same ^
  9. 00:07:193 (3,3) - Just a personal suggestion, how about making those match with 00:07:752 (1,2) - and make a better aesthetics with a fixed-triangle?
  10. 00:12:597 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Seems randomized, how about polishing it?
  11. 00:24:802 (1,2) - You may swap the NCs here since it feels like the drum started at 00:24:895 (2) - , and there's nothing special at 00:24:802 (1) - too :3 It feels more fitting too imo.
  12. 00:38:218 (1,2) - Same here
  13. 00:44:274 (3) - Maybe it would be nicer to keep consistency with 00:41:292 (7) - since they sound repeating themselves.
  14. 00:44:646 (4) - There's no finish sound here, replace it with clap instead?
  15. 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think jumps here has a very big spacing compared to the kiai time at 00:58:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - (even if it has something to do with the SV changes.) The kiai time is way much more intense than the one you did at second 48. I suggest to make the spacing 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lower, since it's a pretty calm part.

Note from me : I suggest for not putting the SV changes at random places or like the one you did at "00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet." And map according to the music would map this better :3 You must take a look at the intensity of the parts, but it's okay if you made some exceptions.

That's all from me, Good luck :3
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

-Liddell wrote:

quick random mod from #modreq

SPOILER
insane

00:03:839 (3) - try tweaking slider for better blanket Fixed thanks!


00:05:330 (2) - i might have an ocd xd but this circle is not between sliders 2 and 3. quick fix~ Fixed

00:17:814 (3) - if you will follow the vocal part, try ending the slider at blue tick 00:18:094 since it flows better imo I feel that this slider shouldn't end on a blue tick

00:55:267 (2) - a finish hitsound sounds good here. it's a subjective thing though. i always put a finish hitsound on the last note of a jump part :) I agree!

00:56:944 (1) - hey i think the clap on every 2 white ticks should start here since it's the kiai part. again it's subjective :) Fixed

01:02:907 - ayy mate the hitsounding from here to the end feels too random. if you try listening to it, random claps appear out of nowhere. try putting claps just once every 2 white ticks and give it a try. it's an old hitsounding trick but it may give you an idea. here's a map i made where i just spam claps on every 2 white ticks and I think it gives off a pretty cool vibe ( SHAMELESS PLUG https://osu.ppy.sh/s/514649&#41; ) Fixed

01:07:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you try to listen to my hitsounding on the map i linked, i put claps on jumps to increase the intensity of that part. try it on this part :) Fixed

01:15:205 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ayy you did it here and it sounds good :) Thanks!!

01:18:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try continuing it here :) Fixed

your mapping flow is good :) sorry i can't mod the other diffs since i'm not a fan of modding boring difficulties lul It's ok dw

hope to see this one ranked :) Thanks so much!
THANKS FOR MOD!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

William K wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:789 - There're two points, Timing and Inherited points at the same time. Due to the Ranking Criteria, If you made the two of them at the same place... Inherited Points is only for changing the Slider Velocity. So instead of the Slider Velocity, you musn't change the Hitsound Volume. You may change the Timing point's Hitsound sound at 00:01:789 - to 40% sound like the Inherited point. OK, lowered the Timing point's hitsound to 40% like the Inherited point.
  2. 00:01:804 - This one is an unecessary inherited point, same effect with 00:01:789 - Fixed
  3. 00:03:094 (1,2) - How about swapping NCs here? Since 00:03:280 (2) - is a downbeat. Fixed
  4. 00:05:330 (2) - This is a pretty calm sound, if you're following vocals here how about making the spacing from number 1-2 smaller than 2-3 instead of making 2-3 bigger? Fixed the spacing so it's even.
  5. 00:05:516 - The beginning of slider 3 has a higher sound compared to the ones before. Oh, and you may make them have the same spacing for consistency with the one you did before. ^
  6. 00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet. OK, Fixed
  7. 00:06:820 (2,3) - Actually this sounded pretty the same as 00:06:261 (1) - but if you're going for variations it's okay :3 Yup going for variations :D
  8. 00:08:870 (1) - I think NC here isn't necessary, seems not special I think putting NC here would be harder to read, since the pattern would get pretty messy imo. Also I've seen people leave it like this before.
  9. 00:09:615 (1,1,1) - same ^ ^
  10. 00:07:193 (3,3) - Just a personal suggestion, how about making those match with 00:07:752 (1,2) - and make a better aesthetics with a fixed-triangle? Aesthetics-wise I think it looks fine to me
  11. 00:12:597 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Seems randomized, how about polishing it? Polished it a bit, but im trying to get that clockwise flow
  12. 00:24:802 (1,2) - You may swap the NCs here since it feels like the drum started at 00:24:895 (2) - , and there's nothing special at 00:24:802 (1) - too :3 It feels more fitting too imo. Fixed
  13. 00:38:218 (1,2) - Same here Fixed
  14. 00:44:274 (3) - Maybe it would be nicer to keep consistency with 00:41:292 (7) - since they sound repeating themselves. Fixed
  15. 00:44:646 (4) - There's no finish sound here, replace it with clap instead? Fixed
  16. 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think jumps here has a very big spacing compared to the kiai time at 00:58:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - (even if it has something to do with the SV changes.) The kiai time is way much more intense than the one you did at second 48. I suggest to make the spacing 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lower, since it's a pretty calm part. Fixed

Note from me : I suggest for not putting the SV changes at random places or like the one you did at "00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet." And map according to the music would map this better :3 You must take a look at the intensity of the parts, but it's okay if you made some exceptions. Will do, thanks a lot!

That's all from me, Good luck :3
THANKS FOR MOD!
siiickx
Random mod from a random noob.

Just some minor mods. Couldn't really find anything major to point out.

collab insane

00:47:255 (3) - I'd curve this slider a bit more toward 4 just for the sake of aesthetics. Not really noticeable though lol.

00:49:864 (4,5,6,7) - Might I suggest switching 5 with 7 to make a cross motion just to spice it up a bit?

01:23:031 (3,4,5,6) - Here as well, switching 4 and 6. You can do one or both of these, or none. You and your collab's call.


insane

00:58:062 (2,3,4) - I think you can space these a little bit more to match the rest of the chorus.

01:37:193 (1) - Could space this a bit more as well. Maybe 1.9? Just to gradually increase the spacing as the music gets more intense.
If you get worried about 3 when moving 1, I don't think it would hurt to move everything along with 1, if you don't want to mess up the spacing.


That's really all I could find lol. Great job. IMO both of these diffs are well mapped. Can't wait to see it ranked. Good luck.
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

siiickx wrote:

Random mod from a random noob.

Just some minor mods. Couldn't really find anything major to point out.

collab insane

00:47:255 (3) - I'd curve this slider a bit more toward 4 just for the sake of aesthetics. Not really noticeable though lol. Ok, Fixed!

00:49:864 (4,5,6,7) - Might I suggest switching 5 with 7 to make a cross motion just to spice it up a bit? I'm gonna keep this pattern

01:23:031 (3,4,5,6) - Here as well, switching 4 and 6. You can do one or both of these, or none. You and your collab's call. Ok, changed!


insane

00:58:062 (2,3,4) - I think you can space these a little bit more to match the rest of the chorus. I think the spacing is fine here.

01:37:193 (1) - Could space this a bit more as well. Maybe 1.9? Just to gradually increase the spacing as the music gets more intense.
If you get worried about 3 when moving 1, I don't think it would hurt to move everything along with 1, if you don't want to mess up the spacing. Ok, fixed spacing according to the increasing intensity of the song.


That's really all I could find lol. Great job. IMO both of these diffs are well mapped. Can't wait to see it ranked. Good luck. Thank you so much!

THANKS FOR MOD!
depzdai
#modreqs. Checking Easy, Normal, Hard diffs.

[Easy]- AiMOD check. Never forget to snap the DS in Easy and Normal diffs. Fix all of these, please: - 00:52:472 (3,4) - Fix the blanket by adjusting the slider 00:53:218 (4) like: https://puu.sh/rVaBM/446a6fd521.png
- 01:08:125 - Why not make it a finish sound?
- 01:08:497 (4,1) - Though the music wants us to put a considerable stress here, this visual pattern continues to have players work with the flow instead of a flow drop. Consider curving the slider 01:08:870 (1) like in the image to increase the clarity of the song's stress (also move 01:09:988 (2) to x:128 y:312 to keep the DS): https://puu.sh/rVb5t/6c8c4d633c.png
- 01:12:597 - Here should have a whistle.
- 01:38:684 (5) - New combo?

[Normal]- AiMOD check. Like what I say above: - 00:17:441 - Is it necessary to have a whistle here?
- 00:20:795 (3) - You should make this slider straight. It looks really awkward and lonely in the screen when I play this diff.
- 00:25:640 - Make a finish sound.
- 00:26:013 (1,2) - Gotta do a blanket.
- 00:27:131 (3,4,5) - 00:30:112 (4,5,6) - 00:33:094 (3,4,5) - Unify the hitsounding style in these three similar patterns, otherwise the map will be inconsistent in terms of hitsounding.
- 01:08:125 (5,1) - Like above. You should make a flow drop when there is an essential stress in the song: https://puu.sh/rVdjc/67064601bc.png
- 01:26:758 (1) - This sliderwave isn't symmetric. Go to t/208596 to see how to make a good wave.

[KY's Hard]- 00:18:000 - It has vocal. Why didn't you map it?
- 00:25:640 - You should have a finish sound here to notify that the song has moved to the next medley and a more dynamic rhythm. Actually it sounded awkward as the finish sound wasn't appeared until 00:28:621.
- 00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:28:621 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:31:603 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Unify the hitsounding style in these three similar patterns, otherwise the map will be inconsistent in terms of hitsounding. At the very least, you can make 00:28:621 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) hitsounded different from 2 others although I don't promote it.
- 00:39:056 - Sampleset soft sound at the end of the slider 00:38:963 (5).
- 00:47:628 - Make this clickable since there is an important progressive tone in every vocal note (00:46:882 - 00:47:255 - 00:47:628 - ). Or I may advise a timing section which is suitable with that tone imo.
Advice
https://puu.sh/rVUvB/5308ad865d.png
- 00:48:000 (1) - Dat slider shape. Sliderkink may suit here: https://puu.sh/rVVoC/f934b9ce2c.png
- 00:55:640 (1) - Mute the slider tail/Inherited timing point 5% sound.
- 01:04:398 (1) - Resnap the slider.
- 01:08:497 (3) - Mute the slider tail/Inherited timing point 5% sound. And the clap isn unnecessary and inapt in the map.
- 01:24:149 (2) - The guitar sound is being pushed up here. More clickable 1/2-beat notes are much better than a 2-beat slider which is covering almost all the guitar sound.
GL~
Affirmation
Q

[General]
at first time, Easy and Normal have almost same rhythm, I think.

[Normal]
00:20:050 (1,2,3) - why this is suddenly 1/2 patterns?
01:40:174 - add a beat,

[Hard]
00:11:479 (3,4) - make 1/2 sliders for cinsistency
00:38:963 (5) - ctrl G for flow
totally, I could see bad overlap like00:43:342 (1,2) - 00:46:323 (1,2,3) - .

Good luck
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

depzdai wrote:

#modreqs. Checking Easy, Normal, Hard diffs.

[Easy]- AiMOD check. Never forget to snap the DS in Easy and Normal diffs. Fix all of these, please: Fixed thanks!- 00:52:472 (3,4) - Fix the blanket by adjusting the slider 00:53:218 (4) like: https://puu.sh/rVaBM/446a6fd521.png Fixed
- 01:08:125 - Why not make it a finish sound? I think it will keep the beat consistent w/o a finish sound, plus i feel like it would be overused here.
- 01:08:497 (4,1) - Though the music wants us to put a considerable stress here, this visual pattern continues to have players work with the flow instead of a flow drop. Consider curving the slider 01:08:870 (1) like in the image to increase the clarity of the song's stress (also move 01:09:988 (2) to x:128 y:312 to keep the DS): https://puu.sh/rVb5t/6c8c4d633c.png Ok, Fixed!
- 01:12:597 - Here should have a whistle. Fixed
- 01:38:684 (5) - New combo? Fixed!

[Normal]- AiMOD check. Like what I say above: Thanks, Fixed!
- 00:17:441 - Is it necessary to have a whistle here? Nope, Fixed!
- 00:20:795 (3) - You should make this slider straight. It looks really awkward and lonely in the screen when I play this diff. Fixed
- 00:25:640 - Make a finish sound. Added
- 00:26:013 (1,2) - Gotta do a blanket. Fixed
- 00:27:131 (3,4,5) - 00:30:112 (4,5,6) - 00:33:094 (3,4,5) - Unify the hitsounding style in these three similar patterns, otherwise the map will be inconsistent in terms of hitsounding. Fixed
- 01:08:125 (5,1) - Like above. You should make a flow drop when there is an essential stress in the song: https://puu.sh/rVdjc/67064601bc.png Fixed!
- 01:26:758 (1) - This sliderwave isn't symmetric. Go to t/208596 to see how to make a good wave. I believe this is identical to the top right photo, only my sliderwave is flipped over the y-axis. The thing i fixed was that in the forum was that it said to have the slidertick be positioned in the center of the ϟ in order to maintain perfect symmetry.


GL~
THANKS FOR MOD!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]
at first time, Easy and Normal have almost same rhythm, I think. Changed up the rhythm

[Normal]
00:20:050 (1,2,3) - why this is suddenly 1/2 patterns? Fixed
01:40:174 - add a beat, Added

Good luck Thanks!

THANKS FOR MOD!
SolariS
Hello, from my Q

Normal, Ky's Hard, Insane
Normal

01:34:584 (4) - Slider shape should match 01:33:839 (3)
01:40:174 (4) - I dont think this circle is needed

Ky's Hard

00:03:280 (2) - NC
00:04:771 (2) - NC
00:06:261 (3) - NC
00:16:696 (1) - Should end on red tick
00:17:628 (3,1) - Add a circle in between
00:55:640 (1) - Overlapped, ending on white tick sounds better
01:08:497 (3) - Same for here, red tick
01:33:466 (3) - ^
01:35:702 (1) - ^
Changing those sliders will show differentiation compared to other sections for example:
01:16:696 (3,4,5)
01:20:050 (3,4)

Insane

00:12:969 (7) - NC
01:08:684 (8,9,1) - Merge into one combo
01:10:174 (7) - Unstack
01:10:361 (8) - NC
01:11:292 (1) - NC (to make 01:10:361 (8,9,1,2,3) into same combo)
01:18:746 (1) - NC

I like this song, good luck! :)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

SolariS wrote:

Hello, from my Q

Normal, Ky's Hard, Insane
Normal

01:34:584 (4) - Slider shape should match 01:33:839 (3) Fixed
01:40:174 (4) - I dont think this circle is needed OK

Insane

00:12:969 (7) - NC Fixed
01:08:684 (8,9,1) - Merge into one combo Not sure what you mean here, but i would like to keep it.
01:10:174 (7) - Unstack Fixed
01:10:361 (8) - NC Fixed
01:11:292 (1) - NC (to make 01:10:361 (8,9,1,2,3) into same combo) Fixed
01:18:746 (1) - NC Fixed

I like this song, good luck! :)
Thanks a lot!
THANKS FOR MOD!
-Latias-
From my Q

Insane
-One thing, you already have an insane thats 4*+. You should probably call this diff Extra or something of that sort as it is 5.14* and the *'s needed to be an extra is 5.10*

00:04:771(1,1) you can blanket these two
00:07:193(3) line up with 00:04:771
00:27:876(2,3) why this distance ? no reason in the music for this distance
00:29:553(4) line up with 00:28:062(3)
00:34:957(2,3) imo, sounds better without 2 and moving 3 to 2's tick

Also, with the timing you should lower if its not in kiai time as it should not be as loud as kiai time. Timing section 01:20:518

Hope this mod helps ! :D
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

-Latias- wrote:

From my Q

Insane
-One thing, you already have an insane thats 4*+. You should probably call this diff Extra or something of that sort as it is 5.14* and the *'s needed to be an extra is 5.10* I think the ranking criteria says that extra is 5.25*+. Also the other insane is kinda like a "Light Insane" but i think "Collab Insane" is fine for the diff name. I guess for Insane i'll have to think of a custom diff name.

00:04:771(1,1) you can blanket these two I want to keep the clockwise flow here
00:07:193(3) line up with 00:04:771 Fixed
00:27:876(2,3) why this distance ? no reason in the music for this distance Fixed
00:29:553(4) line up with 00:28:062(3) Fixed
00:34:957(2,3) imo, sounds better without 2 and moving 3 to 2's tick I feel that the 2 should be here, to me it plays better

Also, with the timing you should lower if its not in kiai time as it should not be as loud as kiai time. Timing section 01:20:518 Fixed
Hope this mod helps ! :D It did! Thanks a lot!
THANKS FOR MOD!
I Am Kawaii
From #modreqs

Collab Insane
00:04:398 (7) - I don't understand why there is a slider here ? >.<
00:18:000 (4) - You could put this circle away, it doesn't seem right imo
00:17:441 (3) - You could also change this for a better flow (just a suggestion)
00:20:050 (1,2) - Maybe you can change this, it seems a bit boring >w<
00:30:671 (3) - maybe put this closer to 00:30:485 (2) - because the difference seems too high, the song didn't go faster or slower

As general tip, sometimes the jumps seem to go really high with no reason (for example: 01:14:460 (1,2) - )
Maybe you could change this >.<

Bye~ nice map btw! Hope it'll get ranked~ :3
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

I Am Kawaii wrote:

From #modreqs

Collab Insane
00:04:398 (7) - I don't understand why there is a slider here ? >.< Fixed
00:18:000 (4) - You could put this circle away, it doesn't seem right imo Fixed
00:17:441 (3) - You could also change this for a better flow (just a suggestion) Fixed
00:20:050 (1,2) - Maybe you can change this, it seems a bit boring >w< Fixed
00:30:671 (3) - maybe put this closer to 00:30:485 (2) - because the difference seems too high, the song didn't go faster or slower Fixed

As general tip, sometimes the jumps seem to go really high with no reason (for example: 01:14:460 (1,2) - )
Maybe you could change this >.< I think it might be fine. I feel that the gradually increased spacing helps to reflect tine increasing intensity of the song.

Bye~ nice map btw! Hope it'll get ranked~ :3 Thank you!
THANKS FOR MOD!
Venix
From queue~

[Easy]
  1. What are you think about stacking 00:02:907 (2,2) - these two circles? Not a big deal, but will do fine blanket composition with 00:04:771 (1) - this slider.
  2. 00:07:752 (1,2) - This flow can be a bit harsh for beginners, because transition here is very sharp and uncomfortable. I prefer try something like this. http://puu.sh/v06Pp/199eaa6b92.jpg
  3. 00:14:087 (1,2,3) - Why did you used bigger spacing? It's a bit nonsense, because you haven't used it on rest of the map.
  4. 00:27:131 (3,4) - This flow is uncomfortable I think. Transition is very sharp and slider doesn't follow flow maked by previous composition. Mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7670295
  5. 00:41:292 (3,4) - Again, very sharp angle, but here you should just make angle between objects higher.
  6. Again, flow problem. 00:49:864 (4,5) - Here you've very uncomfortable flow. I know you are aiming here for best aesthetics, but you should keep good flow then I prefer rotate 00:50:236 (5) - this slider like this. http://puu.sh/v079u/7493e7d619.jpg
  7. 00:58:435 (3,1) - This stack can make reading problem, because gap between end of first slider and start of second slider is just 2/1. It will be better if you unstack it or just stack, but with start of first slider instead of end.
  8. 01:01:044 (2,3) - Small antiflow here. You can avoid it by moving 01:01:417 (3) - this slider a bit to right and then rotate it a bit to left like ~5°.
  9. 01:10:361 (3,4) - Here you should move 01:11:479 (4) - this circle a bit to down to obtain perfect blanket.
  10. 01:21:913 (2,3) - Too sharp angle here, it can be uncomfortable for beginner level players. Mby try it? http://puu.sh/v07xB/a5665720b0.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:149 (3) - What are you think about Ctrl+G on this slider? Not a big deal, but flow will be more comfortable if you do this.
  2. 00:26:013 (1,2) - You should move 00:26:385 (2) - this slider a bit to up to obtain perfect blanket and better aesthetics. The same 01:20:795 (2,3) - here, but here you should move slider a bit to down.
  3. 01:18:559 (2,3,1) - This flow is a bit harsh, because 01:20:050 (1) - this slider doesn't continue transition maked by 01:18:559 (2,3) - these notes. Mby try something like this? http://puu.sh/v07PK/81a0d1dcfb.jpg
    01:38:684 (1,2,3) - Don't you think it will looks better when you do triangle like this? http://puu.sh/v07Vs/336a299d7b.jpg
I'll continue mod, but now is time for me then I'll do it a bit later xD
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Venix wrote:

From queue~

[Easy]
  1. What are you think about stacking 00:02:907 (2,2) - these two circles? Not a big deal, but will do fine blanket composition with 00:04:771 (1) - this slider. Ok, fixed
  2. 00:07:752 (1,2) - This flow can be a bit harsh for beginners, because transition here is very sharp and uncomfortable. I prefer try something like this. http://puu.sh/v06Pp/199eaa6b92.jpg Yup fixed
  3. 00:14:087 (1,2,3) - Why did you used bigger spacing? It's a bit nonsense, because you haven't used it on rest of the map. Didn't see that, fixed
  4. 00:27:131 (3,4) - This flow is uncomfortable I think. Transition is very sharp and slider doesn't follow flow maked by previous composition. Mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7670295 Good idea thanks!
  5. 00:41:292 (3,4) - Again, very sharp angle, but here you should just make angle between objects higher. Fixed
  6. Again, flow problem. 00:49:864 (4,5) - Here you've very uncomfortable flow. I know you are aiming here for best aesthetics, but you should keep good flow then I prefer rotate 00:50:236 (5) - this slider like this. http://puu.sh/v079u/7493e7d619.jpg Thanks fixed!
  7. 00:58:435 (3,1) - This stack can make reading problem, because gap between end of first slider and start of second slider is just 2/1. It will be better if you unstack it or just stack, but with start of first slider instead of end. Ok fixed
  8. 01:01:044 (2,3) - Small antiflow here. You can avoid it by moving 01:01:417 (3) - this slider a bit to right and then rotate it a bit to left like ~5°. Didn't really notice much of this after some changes but i did move it a little
  9. 01:10:361 (3,4) - Here you should move 01:11:479 (4) - this circle a bit to down to obtain perfect blanket. Fixed
  10. 01:21:913 (2,3) - Too sharp angle here, it can be uncomfortable for beginner level players. Mby try it? http://puu.sh/v07xB/a5665720b0.jpg Sure fixed!
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:149 (3) - What are you think about Ctrl+G on this slider? Not a big deal, but flow will be more comfortable if you do this. Much better, fixed!
  2. 00:26:013 (1,2) - You should move 00:26:385 (2) - this slider a bit to up to obtain perfect blanket and better aesthetics. The same 01:20:795 (2,3) - here, but here you should move slider a bit to down. Fixed
  3. 01:18:559 (2,3,1) - This flow is a bit harsh, because 01:20:050 (1) - this slider doesn't continue transition maked by 01:18:559 (2,3) - these notes. Mby try something like this? http://puu.sh/v07PK/81a0d1dcfb.jpg I agree, but i changed it a little differently
    01:38:684 (1,2,3) - Don't you think it will looks better when you do triangle like this? http://puu.sh/v07Vs/336a299d7b.jpg Yup Fixed!
I'll continue mod, but now is time for me then I'll do it a bit later xD Looking forward to it :D
Thank you for the mod!!
yoshee4232
NM from my Queueue

collab insane
  1. 00:15:205 (1,2) - I don't really think there should be an overlap here, especially since this is like the only time you ever overlap like this in the map
  2. 00:26:385 (2,3) - blanket
  3. 00:28:249 (1,1) - ^
  4. 00:30:485 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:01:044 (5,1) - blanket a little better, move it back or increase the curve
  6. 01:01:230 (6) - personally I would move this down slightly, the angle feels a little to sharp compared to the rest of the map
  7. 01:04:025 (6,1) - better blanket plz
  8. 01:13:342 (1,3) - you could probably blanket these two
  9. 01:22:286 (1,2) - I think these should be structured more like this http://puu.sh/v7CjI.jpg

The Sky With You
  1. 00:21:168 (1,2) - fix blanket
  2. 00:23:218 (2,4) - ^
  3. 00:28:621 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:45:951 (2,3,4,1) - space these a bit more, it feels a bit low compared to the rest of this section
  5. 00:51:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you should break up this section with at least a few sliders, maybe put some in here 00:55:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
  6. 01:13:901 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - break this up with some sliders too, and this kinda feels like the random "we need farm jumps" type of section, because the intensity of the song doesn't really go up that much
  7. 01:27:131 (2,3) - make these sliders identical
  8. 01:29:367 (7) - make the curve a bit wider on this to make the blanket more obvious
  9. 01:35:702 (5,1,2) - blanket these better
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

cooldude4232 wrote:

NM from my Queueue

collab insane
  1. 00:15:205 (1,2) - I don't really think there should be an overlap here, especially since this is like the only time you ever overlap like this in the map Fixed
  2. 00:26:385 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
  3. 00:28:249 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:30:485 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
  5. 01:01:044 (5,1) - blanket a little better, move it back or increase the curve Fixed
  6. 01:01:230 (6) - personally I would move this down slightly, the angle feels a little to sharp compared to the rest of the map Fixed
  7. 01:04:025 (6,1) - better blanket plz Fixed
  8. 01:13:342 (1,3) - you could probably blanket these two I think this one is fine
  9. 01:22:286 (1,2) - I think these should be structured more like this http://puu.sh/v7CjI.jpg Changed Differently

The Sky With You
  1. 00:21:168 (1,2) - fix blanket I changed it to where it doesn't need to blanket
  2. 00:23:218 (2,4) - ^ Same as above
  3. 00:28:621 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:45:951 (2,3,4,1) - space these a bit more, it feels a bit low compared to the rest of this section Fixed
  5. 00:51:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you should break up this section with at least a few sliders, Fixed

    maybe put some in here 00:55:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) I don't think that sliders would fit here
  6. 01:13:901 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - break this up with some sliders too, and this kinda feels like the random "we need farm jumps" type of section, because the intensity of the song doesn't really go up that much In my opinion, I think that the intensity of the song increases here, but I do agree with you on the fact that the jumps are excessive
  7. 01:27:131 (2,3) - make these sliders identical Fixed
  8. 01:29:367 (7) - make the curve a bit wider on this to make the blanket more obvious Fixed
  9. 01:35:702 (5,1,2) - blanket these better Fixed
Thanks for mod!!
Neptunee
oi owo
modding cause i love the series and songs and map as well
Limitless

You are doing great dear owo
00:14:833 - put this note at the slider end of 00:16:137 -
00:18:000 - same here with the slider it's on
00:20:795 - place this on the slider head
00:24:149 - maybe instead of stacking you put it in the form of a 2 note stream leading into the slider? owo
00:26:385 - move this slider down so it's not overlapping the slider before
00:28:249 - move this slider over to 00:29:180 - for the stack
01:09:615 - maybe putting the note here on the slider from before where it curves at
01:09:802 - put the note here on the sliderend of the next slider

that's all from me owo

GL love :3c
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Neptunee wrote:

oi owo
modding cause i love the series and songs and map as well
Limitless

You are doing great dear owo
00:14:833 - put this note at the slider end of 00:16:137 Fixed
00:18:000 - same here with the slider it's on Fixed
00:20:795 - place this on the slider head Fixed
00:24:149 - maybe instead of stacking you put it in the form of a 2 note stream leading into the slider? owo Ok, this part i just completely remapped lol
00:26:385 - move this slider down so it's not overlapping the slider before Fixed
00:28:249 - move this slider over to 00:29:180 - for the stack Fixed
01:09:615 - maybe putting the note here on the slider from before where it curves at I think it's fine here because it is still blanketed by the curve in the beginning of the slider.
01:09:802 - put the note here on the sliderend of the next slider I want the direction of these jumps to continue in a counterclockwise, rather than have them jump randomly in different directions.

that's all from me owo

GL love :3c
Thank you for the mod and for all of your support!
_DT3
Hey o/
From the SR of my queue~
If the suggestions don't seem like a lot, keep in mind that I'm modding for 15 mins per diff ^^

[General]
  1. Apparently there are some files unused (and I'm not sure myself what exactly they and the folder are there for :o), so please check if you need the following files and delete them if they aren't:

    drum\drum-hitclap.wav
    drum\drum-hitclap1.wav
    drum\drum-hitfinish.wav
    drum\drum-hitwhistle.wav
    drum\drum hitfinish\drum-hitfinish.wav
  2. In your Easy and Normal, a spinner (00:10:733 (1) - ) has extremely low spinner recovery time (1 beat). According to the RC Guidelines for each difficulty, Easies should have 4 beat spinner recovery time and Normals 2 beats. Please fix this as beginners may have a hard time recovering from the spinner with such short time
[Limitless]
  1. 00:04:771 (1,2,3) - I see that you have stacked these two objects 00:05:330 (2,3) - but you stacked those objects here 00:01:789 (1,2,3) - . Both parts sound extremely similar next to the different lyrics so you should either stack both rhythm or leave both rhythms unstacked for consistency
  2. 00:08:870 (1,1,1) - Hmm, why do you NC here so often? The NCs don't really highlight something in the song and seem to be there for the sake of aesthetics as it seems right now (I could be wrong though), the NCs rhythmically speaking (as you did in the part before too) should be here 00:09:243 (3) - and 00:10:733 (3) - . Keep in mind you would need to remove all the previous NCs mentioned and this one too 00:11:013 (1) - .
  3. 00:14:646 (4,1) - Maybe you weren't going for a blanket, but given the position of the slider and the fact that it's curved looks like it should be a blanket and it feels pretty upsetting that it isn't one :c
  4. 00:25:640 (1) - You were following the vocals before, but why skip the vocal here with the slider? The transition should be similar to the transition here since both parts sound pretty similar 00:13:715 (3,1) -
  5. 00:26:758 (5,6) - This jump is extremely big looking at the other jumps in this part (and the emphasis is way too much for the calmer note imo), so please reduce it in some way
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:06:261 (3,1) - I don't agree with the fact that the 1/2 and 1/1 spacing look the same, the 1/1 should be a bit bigger imo to differentiate between the two snappings
  2. 00:10:733 (1) - I'm not sure why you decided to use a 3/4 slider here, for one it skips the 1/4 sounds within the slider if you listen closely, and second, the stream would be more intuitive to catch with a 1/2 slider and a 1/4 circle directly afterwards
  3. 00:35:143 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Looking at the jumps before, I feel like these jumps should either be bigger or the previous jumps smaller because the highlighted objects feel more intense that the previous part but the spacing of the hitcircles remains the same if not even smaller
  4. 01:02:721 (6,1) - Why is spacing here so small suddenly? It doesn't emphasize the sound on the downbeat enough like you did here 00:59:739 (6,1) - imo
  5. 01:10:361 (1,2) - This shouldn't me mapped with different rhythm as 01:01:417 (1,2,3,4) - imo, one focuses more on the vocals with two 1/1 sliders but the other one maps jumps instead of the slider. Both should be focused on the same rhythm though since they sound extremely similar, so pleace fix this inconsistency
  6. 01:12:503 (4) - Idk about you but this note seems overmapped and added for the sake of having a triplet although the music doesn't support a triplet here (also doesn't seem intentional but rather random). Please remove this note
  7. 01:12:410 (3,4,1,4) - Need more distance to the previous objects imo, the vocals here are pretty strong imo
Seems like a nice set, but could use some more mods first if you want to get it ranked
If you have any questions or would like a longer mod when I'm free, feel free to PM me
GL!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

_DT3 wrote:

Hey o/
From the SR of my queue~
If the suggestions don't seem like a lot, keep in mind that I'm modding for 15 mins per diff ^^

[General]
  1. Apparently there are some files unused (and I'm not sure myself what exactly they and the folder are there for :o), so please check if you need the following files and delete them if they aren't:

    drum\drum-hitclap.wav
    drum\drum-hitclap1.wav
    drum\drum-hitfinish.wav
    drum\drum-hitwhistle.wav
    drum\drum hitfinish\drum-hitfinish.wav "Ok I didn't need these files, so I deleted them.
  2. In your Easy and Normal, a spinner (00:10:733 (1) - ) has extremely low spinner recovery time (1 beat). According to the RC Guidelines for each difficulty, Easies should have 4 beat spinner recovery time and Normals 2 beats. Please fix this as beginners may have a hard time recovering from the spinner with such short time Ok fixed by deleting spinners and adding stuff.
[Limitless]
  1. 00:04:771 (1,2,3) - I see that you have stacked these two objects 00:05:330 (2,3) - but you stacked those objects here 00:01:789 (1,2,3) - . Both parts sound extremely similar next to the different lyrics so you should either stack both rhythm or leave both rhythms unstacked for consistency Sure

  2. 00:08:870 (1,1,1) - Hmm, why do you NC here so often? The NCs don't really highlight something in the song and seem to be there for the sake of aesthetics as it seems right now (I could be wrong though), the NCs rhythmically speaking (as you did in the part before too) should be here 00:09:243 (3) - and 00:10:733 (3) - . Keep in mind you would need to remove all the previous NCs mentioned and this one too 00:11:013 (1) - . Yea I was using the NC as aesthetics but this makes sense.

  3. 00:14:646 (4,1) - Maybe you weren't going for a blanket, but given the position of the slider and the fact that it's curved looks like it should be a blanket and it feels pretty upsetting that it isn't one :c Blanketed

  4. 00:25:640 (1) - You were following the vocals before, but why skip the vocal here with the slider? The transition should be similar to the transition here since both parts sound pretty similar 00:13:715 (3,1) - Ok fixed

  5. 00:26:758 (5,6) - This jump is extremely big looking at the other jumps in this part (and the emphasis is way too much for the calmer note imo), so please reduce it in some way Sure


[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:06:261 (3,1) - I don't agree with the fact that the 1/2 and 1/1 spacing look the same, the 1/1 should be a bit bigger imo to differentiate between the two snappings Slightly remapped this part to made sure that the spacing difference was noticeable

  2. 00:10:733 (1) - I'm not sure why you decided to use a 3/4 slider here, for one it skips the 1/4 sounds within the slider if you listen closely, and second, the stream would be more intuitive to catch with a 1/2 slider and a 1/4 circle directly afterwards Changed this up a bit

  3. 00:35:143 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Looking at the jumps before, I feel like these jumps should either be bigger or the previous jumps smaller because the highlighted objects feel more intense that the previous part but the spacing of the hitcircles remains the same if not even smaller Ok, I increased the spacing on the highlighted jumps

  4. 01:02:721 (6,1) - Why is spacing here so small suddenly? It doesn't emphasize the sound on the downbeat enough like you did here 00:59:739 (6,1) - imo Ok i fixed that

  5. 01:10:361 (1,2) - This shouldn't me mapped with different rhythm as 01:01:417 (1,2,3,4) - imo, one focuses more on the vocals with two 1/1 sliders but the other one maps jumps instead of the slider. Both should be focused on the same rhythm though since they sound extremely similar, so pleace fix this inconsistency Yup I realized that too

  6. 01:12:503 (4) - Idk about you but this note seems overmapped and added for the sake of having a triplet although the music doesn't support a triplet here (also doesn't seem intentional but rather random). Please remove this note OK

  7. 01:12:410 (3,4,1,4) - Need more distance to the previous objects imo, the vocals here are pretty strong imo Not really sure what you meant by needing more distance, but since you said the vocals here are strong, then I'm assuming you meant increase the distance between the objects so that's what I did.
Seems like a nice set, but could use some more mods first if you want to get it ranked
If you have any questions or would like a longer mod when I'm free, feel free to PM me
GL! Thanks a lot!


Thanks for mod!
Baeguetteman
Mod
  • Normal
  1. 00:23:404 (2,3) - This can flow better.
  2. 01:31:230 (2,3) - This can flow better. (use Distance Snap 1,3x)


    Normal
  3. Maybe add a Spinner from 00:55:454 to 00:56:572


    Ky's Hard
  4. 01:25:267 (1,2,3,1) - Remap this part. Playing against the flow with overlapping sliders is awful!
  5. 01:38:125 (5,6) - I would use a circle with a 1/4 beat.
    https://gyazo.com/d9b9294593e2042f54fc8e28a7b3ea74


    Limitless
    Very nice mapped mate!
  6. 01:20:795 (1,2) - This can flow better! The slider after the stream is mapped against the flow... fix that.
  7. 01:34:957 (1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap 1,0x from (1) to (2,3) just like you did it at 01:36:448 (5,6,7)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

SST SnowTiger wrote:

Mod
  • Normal
  1. 00:23:404 (2,3) - This can flow better.
  2. 01:31:230 (2,3) - This can flow better. (use Distance Snap 1,3x)

    Replaying to both mods above, I don't know how to make the patterns flow any better; also I want to keep the aesthetics of both patterns.


    Normal
  3. Maybe add a Spinner from 00:55:454 to 00:56:572

    I did used to have a spinner here, but then I decided not to add it for sake of keeping the difficulty as it is.


    Ky's Hard

    *Ky gave me permission to edit his diff so here we go*


  4. 01:25:267 (1,2,3,1) - Remap this part. Playing against the flow with overlapping sliders is awful! I think this part is fine, I feel that the sliders playing against the flow is a good representation of the change in the vocals of the song.
  5. 01:38:125 (5,6) - I would use a circle with a 1/4 beat. I don't think the slider here would work either, but I changed it differently
    https://gyazo.com/d9b9294593e2042f54fc8e28a7b3ea74



    Limitless
    Very nice mapped mate! Thank you! :D
  6. 01:20:795 (1,2) - This can flow better! The slider after the stream is mapped against the flow... fix that. Fixed!
  7. 01:34:957 (1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap 1,0x from (1) to (2,3) just like you did it at 01:36:448 (5,6,7) Ok, fixed!
Thanks for mod!
Dewott
[Limitless]
00:26:572 (4,5,6,1) - This jump here is a little too long and short. Make both of them equal. As well, move the slider up, including the other jumps after the slider.
00:39:429 (1,2,3) - Equal spacing.
01:08:870 (1) - Weird slider. Make it symmetrical
01:09:802 (4,5) - make them more visible, move away from the other notes to prevent stacking. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8262373
01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a proper star
01:12:410 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this looks a little awkward to me. Try to make all the notes equally spaced so it makes a hexagon. You can try something else here, but that's what I recommend.
01:16:323 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Long, short, long, long. The 2nd line jump is a little too short. Make it longer.
01:34:957 (4,5,6) - Stack it fully.
01:36:448 (5,6,7) - Same here
That's it. ;) GL of getting it ranked.
-Crem
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Creminite wrote:

[Limitless]

00:26:572 (4,5,6,1) - This jump here is a little too long and short. Make both of them equal. As well, move the slider up, including the other jumps after the slider. Sorry, I think this is fine as it is, playability wise the jump is not too big or too small, also I dont want to move the slider to risk giving up aesthetics here.

00:39:429 (1,2,3) - Equal spacing. Ok, I think it's equal spacing. But I also dont want to sacrifice the emphasis of the vocals.

01:08:870 (1) - Weird slider. Make it symmetrical I'm using that slider as blanket for 01:09:615 (3) -

01:09:802 (4,5) - make them more visible, move away from the other notes to prevent stacking. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8262373 I don't really like the way that pattern plays. I feel the closer spacing would be better to play.

01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a proper star Right here I'm prioritizing flow/playability over aesthetics.

01:12:410 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this looks a little awkward to me. Try to make all the notes equally spaced so it makes a hexagon. You can try something else here, but that's what I recommend. This part looks ok to me, but ill change some of the locations of the jumps.

01:16:323 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Long, short, long, long. The 2nd line jump is a little too short. Make it longer. Good idea! But I think ill shorten the length of the other jumps so it will gradually increase into those bigger jumps.

01:34:957 (4,5,6) - Stack it fully. I think this part is fine; It should also be easier to read for players

01:36:448 (5,6,7) - Same here Same as above^

That's it. ;) GL of getting it ranked.
-Crem Thanks for your support and mod! Sorry If it doesn't seem like I did anything, but I definitely thought about your mods. :D
Sidetail
just few things before getting BNs

[general]
please convert current image to jpg (~50% decrease in image size) to save space and you`re not taking advantage of transparency anyway

soft-hitclap has very short noise in the beginning before main sound starts and muted portion in the end was bit long. Here is fixed one https://puu.sh/wf42o/472bc726ef.wav (if you do not want audio boosted one below)

here is boosted audio edited version: https://puu.sh/wf4W5/2ac8ff869c.wav

[limitless]
- delete greenline: 00:52:100 since its same setting as previous point
- please make clap a bit more louder (after kiai)
- 01:24:149 (2,3) - switch clap (current seems really messed up)

[collab insane]
00:48:000 (1) - sliderend - clap? there is clap in music
01:23:777 (1) - sliderend - clap, suddenly missing while other objects have it

[Ky`s hard]
00:24:149 (1) - from song, its really this https://puu.sh/wf4tw/ace4becb25.jpg
01:04:398 (1) - unsnapped sliderend and also add clap at sliderend
01:05:889 (1,2,3) - honestly this rhythm is weird
01:07:379 (1) - ^
01:13:342 (1,2) - i think you`re just wayy over using your blue ticks everywhere, try slider#1 on red. It sounds a lot better...
(rhythm is bit weird... but ok)

[normal]
00:21:168 (2,3) - slider#3 is missing whistle while 00:18:187 (3,4) - each do have one.
01:30:485 (3) - ctrl+g for easier flow without breaking any distance

recheck the hitsounds please, anyways, easy is good, good luck !
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Sidetail wrote:

just few things before getting BNs

[general]
please convert current image to jpg (~50% decrease in image size) to save space and you`re not taking advantage of transparency anyway Ok

soft-hitclap has very short noise in the beginning before main sound starts and muted portion in the end was bit long. Here is fixed one https://puu.sh/wf42o/472bc726ef.wav (if you do not want audio boosted one below)

here is boosted audio edited version: https://puu.sh/wf4W5/2ac8ff869c.wav Thanks a lot!

[limitless]
- delete greenline: 00:52:100 since its same setting as previous point Ok
- please make clap a bit more louder (after kiai) Sure
- 01:24:149 (2,3) - switch clap (current seems really messed up) Fixed

[collab insane]
00:48:000 (1) - sliderend - clap? there is clap in music Ok
01:23:777 (1) - sliderend - clap, suddenly missing while other objects have it ^

[Ky`s hard] Ky gave me permission to edit his diff
00:24:149 (1) - from song, its really this https://puu.sh/wf4tw/ace4becb25.jpg Fixed
01:04:398 (1) - unsnapped sliderend and also add clap at sliderend Didn't see that, thanks!
01:05:889 (1,2,3) - honestly this rhythm is weird Fixed
01:07:379 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:13:342 (1,2) - i think you`re just wayy over using your blue ticks everywhere, try slider#1 on red. It sounds a lot better...
(rhythm is bit weird... but ok) Fixed

[normal]
00:21:168 (2,3) - slider#3 is missing whistle while 00:18:187 (3,4) - each do have one. Sure
01:30:485 (3) - ctrl+g for easier flow without breaking any distance Yea

recheck the hitsounds please, anyways, easy is good, good luck ! Thank you so much for mod!
Stack
I am no bn but I can give you a mod as I feel that I can still address some things

Limitless

00:03:839 (2,1) - You have so much space so why would you let these overlap

00:07:566 (4,1) - You spaced this like your other 1/1 timing gap at 00:07:193 (3,4) - so it doesn't instinctively play as a 1/2. Shorten the distance or something

00:36:075 (1,2,3,4) - I know it's a strong sound but this flowbreak is like the complete other way, from clockwise to counter-clockwise. If you are sure about this then np but it feels too unnatural

00:36:261 (2,5) - I know you want to stack 00:37:193 (5,6) - but move 00:38:125 (6) - maybe a bit so you can stack it at both sides

00:39:988 (2) - Why is this a slider, you have a vocal on the head and then a stronger vocal+instrumentals on the tail

00:40:920 (1) - this super strong sound on the tail tilts me badly, maybe something like 3/4 slider and then a circle would be better

00:45:951 (2,4) - I hate to be that guy but the stack is off

00:47:628 (3,2) - again stacking off but this time by alot more

00:50:050 (3,1) - spacing emphasis please, you spaced this just like 00:49:864 (2,3) - which had a really weak sound on the 3

00:56:944 (1,4) - also not properly stacked

01:01:976 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't think you mapped the song, it feels like a 1/2 metronome
It's not beacause there is a sound of some description on every 1/2 that you can actually just place jumps

01:06:261 (3,3) - stack again

01:14:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - does this part of the song feel more intense than the kiai, beacause you mapped it that way
The song even calms down at 01:17:815 (1) - but you keep increasing the spacing

01:32:721 (1) - would up the spacing instead of lowering it as the sound is really loud and important

There are probably more stacks I missed so check those
Gl with the map :)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

gottagof4ast wrote:

I am no bn but I can give you a mod as I feel that I can still address some things

Limitless

00:03:839 (2,1) - You have so much space so why would you let these overlap Fixed

00:07:566 (4,1) - You spaced this like your other 1/1 timing gap at 00:07:193 (3,4) - so it doesn't instinctively play as a 1/2. Shorten the distance or something Fixed

00:36:075 (1,2,3,4) - I know it's a strong sound but this flowbreak is like the complete other way, from clockwise to counter-clockwise. If you are sure about this then np but it feels too unnatural Fixed

00:36:261 (2,5) - I know you want to stack 00:37:193 (5,6) - but move 00:38:125 (6) - maybe a bit so you can stack it at both sides The previous mod changed the location of 00:37:193 (5) - , but hopefully it still works out.

00:39:988 (2) - Why is this a slider, you have a vocal on the head and then a stronger vocal+instrumentals on the tail Fixed

00:40:920 (1) - this super strong sound on the tail tilts me badly, maybe something like 3/4 slider and then a circle would be better Sure

00:45:951 (2,4) - I hate to be that guy but the stack is off I'm pretty sure this is fine, i tried it again just to be sure.

00:47:628 (3,2) - again stacking off but this time by a lot more Fixed

00:50:050 (3,1) - spacing emphasis please, you spaced this just like 00:49:864 (2,3) - which had a really weak sound on the 3 Fixed

00:56:944 (1,4) - also not properly stacked I'm pretty sure this is fine.

01:01:976 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't think you mapped the song, it feels like a 1/2 metronome
It's not beacause there is a sound of some description on every 1/2 that you can actually just place jumps I feel like there are some parts where 1/2 jumps can justify the song, but I do think i overdid this part so i added sliders.

01:06:261 (3,3) - stack again OK, looks like i have to lower stack leniency.

01:14:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - does this part of the song feel more intense than the kiai, beacause you mapped it that way
The song even calms down at 01:17:815 (1) - but you keep increasing the spacing I do feel like there's empty rhythm here, so I decided that since its still in the kiai time to add an interesting part. There are plenty of other songs that do this too, such as Ni-Sokkususu - Blade Dance or Hagumi Nishizawa - My Hero! Up to you!, both of which were inspirations in mapping this part. But at 01:17:815 (1) - , you're right about this part so I decided to decrease spacing on this section.

01:32:721 (1) - would up the spacing instead of lowering it as the sound is really loud and important Fixed

There are probably more stacks I missed so check those Should be good to go now.

Gl with the map :) Thanks!
Thanks for the mod!
- Sophia
Easy diff
00:13:715 - add nc 00:14:087 - remove nc
00:37:566 - add nc 00:37:938 - remove nc
01:23:777 - add nc 01:26:758 nc and 01:26:758 - add nc here

Nice map,good luck to ranked! :)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Thanks!
paydayzcool
Hi there, random NM because I found this near my map on pending list. :D

Easy
00:04:771 (1,2) - To blanket this perfectly, Move the timeline cursor to an appropriate spot and follow the circular curve of 2 so that it looks like this: https://puu.sh/wPoky/15118ee82c.png
00:27:131 (3,4,5) - I reckon you should make note configuration so that the 2nd and 4th beats either have circles on them or have sliderends on them. Notice how 5's end here is on an important downbeat which imo should be clickable.
00:45:392 (1) - I reckon the 3rd point of this slider should be positioned on (x:163,y:286) for a smoother curve.
00:53:963 (1,2) - For readability purposes I suggest reversing the 1 and moving 2 to 00:55:454 and turning it into a circle.
01:13:342 (3,1) - Unfortunately newer players will get tripped up by this overlap, so I recommend moving the 1.
01:15:951 (2) - I'm getting weirded out by this slider because its end is on a downbeat. I reckon this can be better represented by moving the start of 2 to 01:16:323 and putting a circle on 01:15:951.
01:25:267 (3) - Just saying, why are you using 4-point bezier curves when you can just use 3 for a cleaner curve?

Normal
00:22:659 (1,2) - As before I reckon you should use the technique I mentioned before in the easy diff to smoothen your blankets.
00:53:963 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders could be a bit too fast for newer players, but I reckon you should clarify this with someone else.
01:14:833 (1) - You might want to remake this slider as the curve is a bit off.

Hard
00:41:665 (4,1) - I reckon these two sliders should be spaced further apart. If I was playing this with HD mod I would have hit 1 too early.
00:44:833 (4,1) - ^
Good diff!

Collab Insane
00:33:094 (1) - I suggest remaking this slider as the curve is not perfect (it's not your usual 3-point slider).
00:41:665 (4,5) - Put these two notes a bit further apart to tell players that this note is further away on the timeline and should he hit later.
00:44:646 (4,5) - ^
00:49:305 (1,2) - Make these sliders parallel.

Limitless diff looks as good as it is.
I hope I was helpful with my suggestions. Good luck with the mapset!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there, random NM because I found this near my map on pending list. :D Wow thanks a lot!! :D

Easy
00:04:771 (1,2) - To blanket this perfectly, Move the timeline cursor to an appropriate spot and follow the circular curve of 2 so that it looks like this: https://puu.sh/wPoky/15118ee82c.png Sure
00:27:131 (3,4,5) - I reckon you should make note configuration so that the 2nd and 4th beats either have circles on them or have sliderends on them. Notice how 5's end here is on an important downbeat which imo should be clickable. Fixed
00:45:392 (1) - I reckon the 3rd point of this slider should be positioned on (x:163,y:286) for a smoother curve. Fixed a little bit differently
00:53:963 (1,2) - For readability purposes I suggest reversing the 1 and moving 2 to 00:55:454 and turning it into a circle. I want to keep the distance snap here, also I want to keep 00:55:081 (2) - because i like how it synchronizes with the music
01:13:342 (3,1) - Unfortunately newer players will get tripped up by this overlap, so I recommend moving the 1. Fixed
01:15:951 (2) - I'm getting weirded out by this slider because its end is on a downbeat. I reckon this can be better represented by moving the start of 2 to 01:16:323 and putting a circle on 01:15:951. I agree with the weird slider, but I changed this part a little differently
01:25:267 (3) - Just saying, why are you using 4-point bezier curves when you can just use 3 for a cleaner curve? Fixed

Normal
00:22:659 (1,2) - As before I reckon you should use the technique I mentioned before in the easy diff to smoothen your blankets. Fixed, thanks for the tip!
00:53:963 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders could be a bit too fast for newer players, but I reckon you should clarify this with someone else. This part I feel is fine, I tried using doubles instead but that doesn't really make it feel like a normal. Also it shouldn't be too fast for them because the spacing between the sliders during the music leaves enough time for players to aim them; also the SV and length of the slider shouldn't be as fast either because the sliders are short enough to abuse slider leniency.
01:14:833 (1) - You might want to remake this slider as the curve is a bit off. It looks good to me, tried to remake it to look better, but still looks the same imo

Hard
00:41:665 (4,1) - I reckon these two sliders should be spaced further apart. If I was playing this with HD mod I would have hit 1 too early. Fixed
00:44:833 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
Good diff!

Collab Insane
00:33:094 (1) - I suggest remaking this slider as the curve is not perfect (it's not your usual 3-point slider). I think it's fine, not everything has to be usual.
00:41:665 (4,5) - Put these two notes a bit further apart to tell players that this note is further away on the timeline and should he hit later. This is ok, I measured the distance between the sliderend of 00:41:292 (3) - to 00:41:665 (4) - and made sure that the spacing stayed the same between 00:41:665 (4,5) - (because it makes the same sounds here)
00:44:646 (4,5) - ^ This part was just a copy and paste of the previous patterns except rotated so the distance spacing should be the same hehe
00:49:305 (1,2) - Make these sliders parallel.
Fixed

Limitless diff looks as good as it is. I'm glad it meets your standards :D
I hope I was helpful with my suggestions. Good luck with the mapset!
Thank you for mod!
ItashaS13
o/ M4M

  • Limitless

    00:03:094 - Should add a circle, there's vocals on this beat + makes more sense with 00:02:348 (2) -
    00:08:870 (4,1) - make a blanket? lol
    00:09:615 (2,3,4) - why increasing spacing here if the beats don't change in intensity, they sound the same so the map shouldn't change
    same on 00:09:988 (4,5) - and 00:10:361 (5,6) - why does the spacing changes so much? song keeps the same so the map should, or at least, not a big change like this, doesn't make sense
    00:10:733 (1,2) - isnt spacing here too much? I think this is misleading, like.. it doesnt looks like these are 1/4 00:10:733 (1,2) - move them closer to previous sliderend so it looks like 1/4
    00:11:292 (4) - consider reducing it's spacing since the beat isnt strong
    why both streams 00:11:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:12:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - have the same spacing, since the 2d one has that synth sound (idk how it's called but you know what it is) imo this stream 00:11:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - should have less spacing
    also this 00:13:156 (6,7,1) - shoulndt be stacked (same reason as the spacing of the streams)
    beats on 00:13:342 (1,2,3) - have that synth sound Im talking about, so why do they have less spacing than 00:11:106 (3,4) - this sound it's building up from 00:12:410 (2) - so the spacing should be more since it starts
    00:14:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - spacing here it's TOO much, this is a new section on the song which is really slow/calm/quiet, after this 00:13:342 (1,2,3) - but look, spacing on 00:13:342 (1,2,3) - is less than 00:14:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    00:15:205 (1,2,3) - why is spacing soo different? again, beats are not chaning/keeps being the same but spacing says other thing
    00:17:069 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - again here I think the spacing it's too much considering how the song is
    00:17:069 (2,3,4,1,2) - why not make a star? like.. this pattern looks kinda awkward, also take care of the spacing, every objets has different spacing eachother but the song doesn't change, all beats sound the same, even with the vocals on it doesn't feel like it's changing anything
    00:18:000 (3,2) - overlap really really awkward, you haven't even used other overlaps this looks out of.. nowhere, looks really bad
    00:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - once again you should make a perfect star, pattern now looks awkward/messy
    00:20:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rearrange this into smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675977 also should reduce it's spacing
    00:21:727 (2,3) - is this jump necessary? I don't think so, why is such jump there? nothing get emphasized, vocals doesnt really change it's intensity so.. this jump it's worthless
    00:22:286 (3,1) - you can just move the 3 closer to the previous slider and add MORE spacing between 00:22:286 (3,1) - since there's that piano sound on 00:22:659 (1) - which could be more emphasized
    00:24:522 (5,6,1,2) - really bad choice to end a stream in a blue tick, remove 00:24:522 (5) - and put the slider there, then add new circle on 00:24:708 (6) - to make a triplet, also NC shoukd be on 00:24:895 (2) - since the change is on this beat
    00:26:199 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is really.. bad tbh, intensity of the song keeps calm, and the spacing doesn't reflect that, it even changes when the song doesn't, but there's a new snare sound on 00:26:012 (1,5) - and so on... so if you gonna change spacing, these snare sound SHOULD have the larger spacing, since they're strong right? but in this case... the jump is on 00:26:758 (5,6) - there's nothing emphasized so this jump should be deleted, even if you have these new snares you should keep using the same spacing since the song doesn't really change it's intensity
    00:26:944 (6,1) - and the spacing here it's too short, there's that piano sound that could be emphasizedm but it's not, since spacing its really short
    00:29:180 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks kinda messy imo
    00:29:926 (6,1) - spacing should be nerfed, this is better since you have a jump here to emhpasize this piano sound but it's still too much, 00:29:180 (2,1) - make blanket maybe?
    00:31:230 (4,5) - why is there a big jump? what are you trying to emphasize? I can't hear any change in music or strong sound to make such jump
    00:31:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels overspaced again imo
    00:34:211 (4,3,1) - try to rearrange them to make something that looks good?
    00:34:957 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I like how you managed to add more spacing in every object, still kinda overspaced, should nerf it
    00:40:361 (1,2) - I think these have too much spacing, you can make something better imo
    00:45:951 (2,3) - why not using a triplet just like before? the triplet plays and fit better imo
    00:48:000 - song here increases it's intensity but spacing is... 00:48:559 (2,3) - 00:48:746 (3,1) - shorter, why?
    00:49:864 (2,3) - 2 circles here isn't the best choice I think a slider would fit a lot better
    00:50:982 (1,2) - opposite to that ^, this could be better with circles, 00:50:982 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - something like some zigzags with bigger jumps on beats with the snare (claps?)
    00:51:168 (4,5) - look at the spacing, do you think it really fits the song? considering the rest of the map til this point?
    00:52:659 (2) - bad rythm choice ending a slider on a white thick. and important white tick
    00:53:031 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - tbh this jumps doesn't make sense to me. because it doesn't feel like they're there for a reason, 00:52:100 (8) - 00:53:590 (6) - 00:53:963 (1) - 00:54:522 (1) - jumps on these SHOULD be the largest jumps because they have strongear beats. also, the song is building up here, so jumps on 00:53:031 (3,4,5,6,7) - should have less spacing than 00:53:963 (1,2,3) - and these should have less spacing than 00:54:522 (1,2,3) - right now they just look really random and messy, and emphasize is not clear at all, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676104 I recommend rearranging the whole thing like this 00:53:218 (3,4,5,6) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676119 , 00:53:963 (1,2,3) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676124 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867615 or something that works better for you, your choice
    00:55:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - after the previous jumps.. this is out of place, spacing on them should be really short because, song is building up again here before the kiai time right? so if you play this with short spacing you know the next section will have more spacing than the rest of the map, but doing big jumps again kinda kills the previous build up and everything
    00:56:012 (3,1,2,1) - what is this overlap :<
    01:03:094 (2,3,4,1) - nerf jumps, there's a change in the music on the 1
    01:04:771 - should add a circle here and start the slider just after that because vocals starts there (01:04:957 - )
    01:03:653 (1) - remove nc?
    01:01:976 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should nerf all these jumps
    01:04:398 (1,2) - stack preoperly?
    01:05:330 (2,3,4,1,2) - hmm why are these jumps shorter than ( 01:01:976 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )?? doesn't make sense
    01:07:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - and why is the spacing sooo short here? song builds up to a climax which is... here, THIS. so the spacing here should be MORE than the rest
    01:09:429 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern doesn't make any sense to me, since you never used such overlaps, so this just breaks the structure/consistency of the whole map and everything you have done untill now, ok, variety is good, but this looks really out of place
    01:10:920 (2,3,4) - spacing ? what happened? sometimes you have long jumps, sometimes you have short jumps.. everything looks like too random imo, 00:56:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:08:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - both of these should be mapped the same way (not copy paste..) I mean, spacing and playability of both parts should be equally, but right now it's soooo different. doesn't make any sense, kills consistency and all
    01:18:187 (1,1) - maybe move them a bit up? since they have stronger beats than 01:17:815 (1,1) - yet spacing it's the same
    01:19:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this first part of the stream should have less spacing than the other, just listen to the song xD I think that makes more sense, also the stream looks like you did it by hand? could looke really better like this maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676189 ( http://prntscr.com/fzvoon http://prntscr.com/fzvot6 )
    01:21:727 (4,5) - 01:23:218 (4,5) - 01:23:777 (1,2) - 01:24:522 (4,5) - these should play equally the same in terms of spacing since the rythm it's the same and you know.. you know what I mean
    01:25:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps here should have equal spacing, the voice keeps the same intensity so the map should
    01:26:758 (1,2,3) - flow here it's kinda awkward, wide angles, and you never used this kind of flow in the whole map
    for the rest nefore this point 01:35:702 (1) - check spacing and be clear with it, remember that you should keep consistency, from 01:20:795 - to 01:34:957 - the spacing it's random.. nothing's clear so take care of it
Collab insane

00:09:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/fz > http://prntscr.com/fzvqru
00:06:261 (1) - 00:03:839 (6) - shouldn't these have the same sv?
00:32:348 (6,8,2) - do somthing with this overlaps x) ugly overlaps
00:36:261 (2,6) - stack?
00:40:361 (1) - move this to make a blanket with 2? like http://prntscr.com/fzvs1g , this way you emphasize the vocals too
00:40:920 (2,3,4) - should move this whole thing closer to the prev slider, jump on 00:40:361 (1,2) - it's too large considering the music
00:42:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe try to make something similar as what I mentioned above? ofc, this in case you agree and change the first thing
00:55:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'd say the same as I did on Limitless diff, jumps on 00:56:199 (1,2,3,4) - just doesn't feel right and look, compare 00:56:199 (1,2,3,4) - with 00:56:572 (3,2,3,4) - and so, which part you think that should have MORE spacing? considering the intensity of the song and everything??
also check and be clear with the spacing in the kiai, it feels random

I also recommend taking care of aesthetics of the map, becuase patterns sometimes looks messy, and.. it doesn't reflect the song which is cute and perfectXD?

heh
Sorry for using osu screenshots and lightshot sometimes, "YoUrE TrYInG tO uPlOaD ScReeNShOTs tOO fAsT"

my map t/596435
ItashaS13
fk I posted twice because my net was the shit last night sorry x|
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/ M4M

  • Limitless

    *So after thinking about it, I've come to the conclusion this diff is just overall bad imo, considering that this was one of my first maps and i had no understanding of mapping at the time. But now, I've learned a lot about mapping and decided that the best replay to this mod is to just remove this difficulty; as remapping it would lower my motivation to map. Thank you again for mod though!
  • Collab insane

    00:09:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/fz > http://prntscr.com/fzvqru Fixed
    00:06:261 (1) - 00:03:839 (6) - shouldn't these have the same sv? Fixed
    00:32:348 (6,8,2) - do something with this overlaps x) ugly overlaps Intentional
    00:36:261 (2,6) - stack? Intentional
    00:40:361 (1) - move this to make a blanket with 2? like http://prntscr.com/fzvs1g , this way you emphasize the vocals too Fixed
    00:40:920 (2,3,4) - should move this whole thing closer to the prev slider, jump on 00:40:361 (1,2) - it's too large considering the music Spacing looks fine to me
    00:42:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe try to make something similar as what I mentioned above? ofc, this in case you agree and change the first thing ^
    00:55:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'd say the same as I did on Limitless diff, jumps on 00:56:199 (1,2,3,4) - just doesn't feel right and look, compare 00:56:199 (1,2,3,4) - with 00:56:572 (3,2,3,4) - and so, which part you think that should have MORE spacing? considering the intensity of the song and everything??
    also check and be clear with the spacing in the kiai, it feels random
    Jumps: For the jumps, I think the look aesthetically fine, and i feel that 00:56:199 should have more spacing considering its at the max point of buildup in the song imo.
    Kiai: For the Kiai section, to be honest a lot of the patterns and rhythm are copy paste and rotate xD so I feel like there should not be any inconsistencies in the kiai regarding the spacing.

    I also recommend taking care of aesthetics of the map, because patterns sometimes looks messy, and.. it doesn't reflect the song which is cute and perfectXD? Will do, I agree love this song <3
my map t/596435

THANK YOU FOR THE MOD!!
ItashaS13
Don't worry hermano take your time!
btw for this *00:26:199 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is really.. bad tbh, intensity of the song keeps calm, and the spacing doesn't reflect that, it even changes when the song doesn't, but there's a new snare sound on 00:26:012 (1,5) - and so on... so if you gonna change spacing, these snare sound SHOULD have the larger spacing, since they're strong right? but in this case... the jump is on 00:26:758 (5,6) - there's nothing emphasized so this jump should be deleted, even if you have these new snares you should keep using the same spacing since the song doesn't really change it's intensity This I Remapped, but I disagree with the fact that the intensity of the songs stays the same because I feel that the volume has slightly increased, and also there are more instruments added.
I meant that, keeps the same FROM 00:26:013 - this point, I didn't meant the rest before xD (exkss dee)
second edit: you DON'T need to kudosu that because I was just clarifying somthing, call a moderator to deny kudosu
Akitoshi
just with quick scan

Normal
  1. 00:07:379 (4) - it's visually close with 00:06:261 (3) -
  2. 00:09:243 (1) - remove nc then add nc on 00:10:733 (3) -
  3. 00:16:696 (1) - this should be 1/1 reverse how you did on 00:14:087 (1) - for consistency :3
  4. 00:20:050 (1) - split to 1/1 slider + circle? vocal rhythms worth with it
  5. 00:29:739 (3) - 1/2 slider here looks kinda sudden, u didnt put anymore until 00:39:429 - i can suggest to make two 1/1 sliders on 00:28:621 - instead like this, you don't need to move your current blue 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8860541
  6. 00:49:491 (3) - nah the sliderhead lands on nothing lol,move this to 00:49:305 - and add circle on 00:49:864 -
  7. 00:53:963 (1,2,3) - abusing 1/2 sliders might annoy players, try this rhythm instead? same goes to 01:38:684 (1,2,3) -
  8. 00:56:944 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:870 (1,2) - 01:11:851 (1,2,3) -
i only check 1diff since i still have other gd reqs, sorry and goodluck~
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Akitoshi wrote:

just with quick scan

Normal
  1. 00:07:379 (4) - it's visually close with 00:06:261 (3) - Fixed
  2. 00:09:243 (1) - remove nc then add nc on 00:10:733 (3) - Fixed
  3. 00:16:696 (1) - this should be 1/1 reverse how you did on 00:14:087 (1) - for consistency :3 Fixed
  4. 00:20:050 (1) - split to 1/1 slider + circle? vocal rhythms worth with it Fixed
  5. 00:29:739 (3) - 1/2 slider here looks kinda sudden, u didnt put anymore until 00:39:429 - i can suggest to make two 1/1 sliders on 00:28:621 - instead like this, you don't need to move your current blue 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8860541 Fixed
  6. 00:49:491 (3) - nah the sliderhead lands on nothing lol,move this to 00:49:305 - and add circle on 00:49:864 - Fixed
  7. 00:53:963 (1,2,3) - abusing 1/2 sliders might annoy players, try this rhythm instead? same goes to 01:38:684 (1,2,3) -
    Fixed
  8. 00:56:944 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:870 (1,2) - 01:11:851 (1,2,3) - ??
i only check 1diff since i still have other gd reqs, sorry and goodluck~ Thanks!!
Thanks for mod!!
Akitoshi

SkyFlame wrote:

Akitoshi wrote:

  1. 00:56:944 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:870 (1,2) - 01:11:851 (1,2,3) - ??
o lolz i wanted to say that they r inconsistent while those parts basically have same rhythms, sorry xd
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Akitoshi wrote:

o lolz i wanted to say that they r inconsistent while those parts basically have same rhythms, sorry xd




hehe no problem, that's what i thought so i changed it thanks!!
Kawashiro
random

[gay's extra]
  1. 00:15:019 (5,1) - isn't it too close? 00:26:945 (6,1) - another similar parts has more big distance.
[collab]
  1. 00:05:516 (3,1) - I can't understand this anti-jump. 00:06:261 (1) - this has pretty strong sound. you can put this by stack, overlap, or jump. anyway this anti-jump is very weird.
  2. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - what happened this nc cycle? 00:11:106 (1) - del nc will better? imo
  3. 00:15:205 (1,2,3) - put jump between 1-2 and put ds 1.0 between 2-3 will better? use same distance using as 00:18:187 (1,2,3,4) - here
GL :)
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Kawashiro wrote:

random

[gay's extra]
  1. 00:15:019 (5,1) - isn't it too close? 00:26:945 (6,1) - another similar parts has more big distance.
[collab]
  1. 00:05:516 (3,1) - I can't understand this anti-jump. 00:06:261 (1) - this has pretty strong sound. you can put this by stack, overlap, or jump. anyway this anti-jump is very weird.
    Fixed
  2. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - what happened this nc cycle? 00:11:106 (1) - del nc will better? imo
    Fixed
  3. 00:15:205 (1,2,3) - put jump between 1-2 and put ds 1.0 between 2-3 will better? use same distance using as 00:18:187 (1,2,3,4) - here
    OK
GL :) thanks!

Thanks for mod!
Akitoshi
@Gayshiro hell ye buffed up a bit, thanks w

upd
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YoWuzUp
from #modreqs
(Just some suggestions)

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Easy
00:44:646 (3,1) - Would like to see these blanketed, I'd just move 3 to the right a bit.
01:18:932 (2,3) - Another pair I'd like to see a blanket on.

Akitoshi's Extra
01:09:988 (4) - Feel like this note is a little high up.
01:24:895 (4) - And possibly this one as well.
Also, I think the light blue combo color color is too close to the color of the water/sky in the background, so it should be changed.

Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that.

And... that's it! That's all I can see anyway. Hope this helped!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:

from #modreqs
(Just some suggestions)

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Easy
00:44:646 (3,1) - Would like to see these blanketed, I'd just move 3 to the right a bit. Decided to just make this a straight slider instead because that way i dont mess up the distance snap
01:18:932 (2,3) - Another pair I'd like to see a blanket on. My intention here wasn't to blanket, also it would mess up distance snap


Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that. I would like to include spinners but i dont hear any sections of the song that require spinners.

And... that's it! That's all I can see anyway. Hope this helped!
Thanks for mod!
Akitoshi

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:

Akitoshi's Extra
01:09:988 (4) - Feel like this note is a little high up. don't worry, it's not offscreen.
01:24:895 (4) - And possibly this one as well. same, btw you can see the area of specific notes/objects in right-top area
Also, I think the light blue combo color color is too close to the color of the water/sky in the background, so it should be changed. idk changed a bit

Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that. there's no long notes that worth for spinners on this song so ye
i also fixed some cringe sliders and stuff, thanks!

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