Hi, from my queue.
[Insane]
Note from me : I suggest for not putting the SV changes at random places or like the one you did at "00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet." And map according to the music would map this better :3 You must take a look at the intensity of the parts, but it's okay if you made some exceptions.
That's all from me, Good luck :3
[Insane]
- 00:01:789 - There're two points, Timing and Inherited points at the same time. Due to the Ranking Criteria, If you made the two of them at the same place... Inherited Points is only for changing the Slider Velocity. So instead of the Slider Velocity, you musn't change the Hitsound Volume. You may change the Timing point's Hitsound sound at 00:01:789 - to 40% sound like the Inherited point.
- 00:01:804 - This one is an unecessary inherited point, same effect with 00:01:789 -
- 00:03:094 (1,2) - How about swapping NCs here? Since 00:03:280 (2) - is a downbeat.
- 00:05:330 (2) - This is a pretty calm sound, if you're following vocals here how about making the spacing from number 1-2 smaller than 2-3 instead of making 2-3 bigger? 00:05:516 - The beginning of slider 3 has a higher sound compared to the ones before. Oh, and you may make them have the same spacing for consistency with the one you did before.
- 00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet.
- 00:06:820 (2,3) - Actually this sounded pretty the same as 00:06:261 (1) - but if you're going for variations it's okay :3
- 00:08:870 (1) - I think NC here isn't necessary, seems not special
- 00:09:615 (1,1,1) - same ^
- 00:07:193 (3,3) - Just a personal suggestion, how about making those match with 00:07:752 (1,2) - and make a better aesthetics with a fixed-triangle?
- 00:12:597 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Seems randomized, how about polishing it?
- 00:24:802 (1,2) - You may swap the NCs here since it feels like the drum started at 00:24:895 (2) - , and there's nothing special at 00:24:802 (1) - too :3 It feels more fitting too imo.
- 00:38:218 (1,2) - Same here
- 00:44:274 (3) - Maybe it would be nicer to keep consistency with 00:41:292 (7) - since they sound repeating themselves.
- 00:44:646 (4) - There's no finish sound here, replace it with clap instead?
- 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think jumps here has a very big spacing compared to the kiai time at 00:58:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - (even if it has something to do with the SV changes.) The kiai time is way much more intense than the one you did at second 48. I suggest to make the spacing 00:48:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lower, since it's a pretty calm part.
Note from me : I suggest for not putting the SV changes at random places or like the one you did at "00:05:996 - Start the timing point at 00:06:261 - instead? There's no change in sound at 00:05:996 - yet." And map according to the music would map this better :3 You must take a look at the intensity of the parts, but it's okay if you made some exceptions.
That's all from me, Good luck :3