thx!Zero__wind wrote:
M4M from my queue
General
change your bg pics into .jpg format, it will make your file size a lot more smaller
I think the volume of your soft-hitwhistle.wav is currently too low which makes it hardly noticeable in the map, please turn its volume up a bit
hitsound suggestions work for other diffs as well
00:17:693 - 00:31:388 - and similar points in the later part, I don't think you need to turn down their volume so much, they are currently too soft to be heard. 20% lower than the main parts can be better
Easy Jijou
AR3 recommended, as the song is not a really slow one
00:17:506 (2) - a soft finish may sound nice at its end all will be fixed..these days I'm so tired because of university festival.
00:31:667 (1) - soft finish on head to emphasize the downbeat
00:41:916 (3) - ^
00:51:046 (1) - ^
01:02:972 (1) - ^
01:14:897 (1) - ^
01:25:332 (3) - ^
01:28:313 (1) - ^
01:07:444 (3,4,5,1) - this doesn't flow really good imo. maybe try something like thisfixed
Normal Jijou
use AR5 for this diff if you changed the AR for Easy to 3
00:59:990 (1,2) - this pattern feels a bit weird imo although it's following the distance snap, maybe remove the reverse of 1 and add a circle at 01:00:363 - at its left, and adjust the following notes accordingly?fixed
01:02:599 (1) - this NC may be unnecessary, considering you didn't have that NC in Hard diff, maybe remove it?fixed
01:11:170 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm seems a bit too hard, I suggest to remove 01:13:220 (4) - as there's no drum beatfixed
01:40:984 (1,1) - I think these NC are not necessary, better remove them. same for Hard and Insane difffixed all
Hard Jijou
00:43:593 (1,2) - I think moving the NC to 2 may make this gap more readable, just like how 00:40:239 (4,1) - looksfixed
00:46:201 (3) - it feels really odd to suddenly stack the circle at a slider's end as you'ev never placed them like this before. I think it'd be better to simplly unstack 00:45:642 (2,3) - and use equal distance between 00:45:642 (2,3,4,1) - fixed
01:03:903 (3,1) - better stack them properlyfixed
01:09:680 (3,4) - I think the stack kinda breaks the flow, maybe move it out?fixed
01:07:816 (1) - I suggest to remove NC for consistencyfixed
Insane Jijou
00:36:139 (1,2) - they seem too close to each other, maybe move 2 down a little (00:36:139 (1,4) - are not so close)fixed
00:59:617 (5,3) - not really important, but you may want to stack themfixed
01:10:984 (3,4) - I don't really like to place objects so close in kiais, I think it will feel better to use some bigger spacings and spread the notes out in the kiai
generally plays finechanged shape
that's all for me
remember, you generally need to add tons of finish sounds for all of your diffs, check carefully!
good luck
thx!Remilia_CO wrote:
Remilia_CO wrote:
Hi! from my queueInsane
- 00:18:624 (2) - NC for SV changingfixed
- 00:33:158 (1) - feels squeezed too tight by these two 00:33:717 (2,3) fixed
- 00:36:139 (1) - same^
- Most of your first half of the map are on the right side, why don't put some patterns to the left?lol really I'll fix it.
- 01:00:363 (3) - too close to the following stream compare with the DS to the previous note, looks odd.according to a sound.
Good diffHard
- 00:03:344 (1) - this position feels a bit odd, maybe move to 123,202?well
- 00:35:208 (2) - too close with 00:35:767 (4) - , may be move abit upwardfixed
- 00:40:611 (1,2) - how about making the 1 tail at the same place with 00:41:543 (3) 's tail?I don't like that flow in hard diff..
- 00:51:978 - Make a note here? the vocal is really clear.well
- 01:28:313 (1,3) - move to 374,201?I couldn't find why.
Normal
- 00:14:711 (2,3) - Hmmm this might be too hard for Normalfixed
- 00:13:779 (1,4) - why don't make these two symmetry?fixed
- 00:34:649 (1,2) - Didn't feel any necessity for using long sliders here.I'm now considering it.
No big problemsEASY
- 00:17:506 (2) - Eventhought it follows the DS, the flow makes it feels closer than reality, which might I'll consider it.
mislead new players. I suggest to move red point to 311,152 and move the slider tail to 283,212 to make a different
direction flow with 00:18:624 (3)- 01:23:841 (1) - why don't make the slider head overlap with this' 01:20:860 (1) ?I have no intention to..
- 00:04:462 (4) - use this in Easy might cause you some problems.01:32:413 (4) - samesome other ranked easy diffs have this kind of pattern
Good luck XD
ahh..I'm too tired..