Sonnyc wrote:

Railgun's Easy:

1. 00:19:296 (3) - Consider reducing the curve rate. This kind of high curves for short sliders feel too much and looks bad in aesthetic. done
2. 00:24:462 (3) - ^ done
3. 00:44:462 (2) - The 1/2 rhythm feels a bit hard for an [Easy] diff. Consider reducing 1/2. done
4. 00:55:462 (4) - Personally a selecting a symmetry while ignoring the beat of 00:55:796 wan't that good. Consider changing the rhythm the way like this: http://puu.sh/aOXNd/56bba0b833.jpg keep

ShiraKai wrote:

[Railgun's Easy]

1. 00:25:129 (1) - remove finish at this slider done
2. 00:34:462 (4) - add drum finish? done
3. 00:41:129 (1) - add finish at start? done
4. 00:44:462 (2,3) - mm... i think this is not match the song... pls try it! change in sonnyc's mod
   
   my suggestion

   
5. 00:55:462 (4) - separate the slider and circle? keep
   
   img

   
6. 00:58:629 (3) - ^ keep
   
   img

   
7. 01:07:796 (1) - add finish on start? done

Minakami Yuki wrote:

done

From my queue of Normal Mod

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

1. Unable widescreen support in all diffs?

done

[Normal]

1. 00:20:962 (4) - I recommend to extend the slider to 00:21:462 - , the beat at 00:21:462 - is very obvious, ignore this beat may cause players hard to read here
   none. This sliders don't follows drums.
2. from 00:25:129 (1) - to 00:34:462 (1) - these normal whistles dont fit here so much imo
   done. Chenged to soft whistle

[Hard]

1. 00:08:796 - add something from here? http://puu.sh/aX4tj/9c98e11a3a.jpg
   put a circle. I feel it's better way.
2. 00:13:962 (7,9) - remove whistle on these two notes, sounds better to me
   done
3. 00:25:129 - same mentioned in Normal
   done
4. 00:34:796 - add a tick sound here?
   done
5. 00:47:296 (5) - stack at 4?
   no. I keep my rule.
6. 01:18:462 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little boring though...
   I'm sad.

[momimann's Insane]

1. 00:24:129 (2) - too close to 1 imo
   done
2. 00:24:962 - add a note stack at 00:25:129 (1) - 's head?
   done
3. 00:40:796 (9,10,11,12) - unreasonable to make 4 notes here, it doesnt fit the music
   done
4. 00:44:462 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2) - just some small change: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1938559
   done
5. 00:51:462 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm sound wierd to me, I recommend to make like
   
   http://puu.sh/aX566/a28902be67.jpg
   done
6. 00:57:629 (2) - ctrl+g and stack 3 at (236,184), then 00:58:296 (4) - ctrl+g, the flow is better to mor]

[Insane]

1. high recommended to change the diff name to distinguish between this diff and momimann's insane
   For some reasons, I keep Insane.
2. 00:25:129 - same mentioned in Normal
   done
3. 00:46:462 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too crazy for me..
   （ ゜ﾄｴｴｴｲ。）
4. 01:09:462 (4,1) - blanket?
   done
   flows are good, but a little crazy jumping for me

good luck!

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Railgun's Easy]

1. 00:34:462 (4) - add a repeat? keep
2. 00:57:462 - forget to add the tick sound? done
3. 01:16:129 - ^ different hitsound here
4. 01:18:796 - ^ ^
5. 01:21:462 - 01:22:129 - 01:25:462 - 01:27:462 - ^ ^

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

1. 00:46:462 (1) - too much hitfinish hs from this part, it's noisy truely. consider to remove some, it'll be better
   done
2. generally good map, a star for u

momimann's Insane

1. 00:44:462 (7) - maybe nc
   No. These notes are really close and easy to read, so NC is unnecessary IMO.
2. 00:46:296 really need a note here
   No. Here isn't any sound that mapper take.
3. fine

Hard

1. 00:33:296 (2) - arrange ds
   done
2. fine

Normal

1. 00:34:462 (1) - remove nc
   done
2. 00:39:629 (1) - ^
   done
3. 01:09:129 (4,5) - fix this blanket
   fixed
4. fine

not bad, hmm, yeah i think this is good now (thou not enough to me

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods, bat may mod this later

good luck

Thank you for MOD!

Hollow Wings wrote:

Railgun's Easy

1. 00:41:129 (1,2) - not recommended these in lowest diff thou, it's still too hard for noobs keep
2. 00:44:462 (2,3) - blanket perfect done
3. 00:59:796 (4,5) - here as well, and maybe set nc on 4 keep
4. why not slider only lol

Loneight wrote:

Hi o/
Request from Hollow Wings

I accept your idea.
I don't accept your idea.

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. add these to tags from smallboat's ranked map
   
   code

   wish across card game battle loli girl project selector j.c.staff

   
   No. This mapset already has enough tags about song...(and I don't like so many tags.)
2. how about try this mp3? quality would be better than current one
   
   nice one!
3. try to add 1000~1500ms to leadin, the first note is too fast to hit it
   okok

[Normal]

1. plz remove your unless blue line (run
   ok
2. 00:28:962 (4) - NC it, a little hard to read the approachcircle because of the color
   ok

a little hard for Normal, anyway, fine to me

[Hard]

1. unless blue line ;w;
   ok!
2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:33:210 - , 00:57:250 -
   fixed
3. 00:24:462 (6) - try to NC because there suddenly has a jump
   ok
4. 00:43:296 (5) - a little hard to read the circles because of the blanket with the same color, try to NC
   ok and deleted 00:43:806 (4)'s NC
5. 01:10:462 (1) - try to change the slider's shape, a little hard to read the slider's direction
   tried.
6. 01:14:462 (1) - add a finish, hear a finish sound from the song at there
   ok

~

[momimann's Insane]

1. 00:06:629 (1) - try to make it start at 00:06:546 - , I feel the soumd which you follow start at 00:06:546 -
   ok
2. 01:12:712 (4,5) - nazi suggest, make stack perfect
   ok
3. 01:18:962 - the distance is too short thus hard to read 01:19:129 (1) - , try to add a note for there?
   done in my way.
   

~

[Insane]

1. unle...ss blue...lin...e (died
   a, aaa, o, ok.
2. 00:16:296 (6) - nazi suggest, let the sliderend stack complete?
   ok
3. 00:23:629 (1) - how about add a clap at sliderhead? hear a drum sound from the song at there
   No. I don't think it good.
4. 00:44:962 (11,12) - feel weird when I play, I think there should have 3-plet to hit instead of 2-plet, try to change
   00:45:046 (12) - the slider to 2 circles
   ok
5. 01:14:462 (5) - add a finish at sliderhead, hear a finish sound from the song at there
   No. Finish doesn't fit music IMO...
6. 01:19:296 (6,1) - NC? just feel there is same as 01:21:962 (1) -
   ok

good job :3

that's all
call me back after you check these

Loneight wrote:

[Railgun's Easy]

1. Useless green line: done
   
   green line

   00:41:129 - done
   00:42:462 - done
   00:45:796 - done
   01:20:962 - done
   01:23:796 - done
   01:28:129 - done
2. 00:58:629 (3) - feel weird about its rhythm or hitsound, try to make the slider ends at 00:59:629 - would be better, after fix this, remember adjusting distance done
3. 01:19:296 (2) - weird for rhythm, how about this rhythm? keep

pretty arrangement

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Project Railgun wrote:

What is ※TVアニメ「selector infected WIXOSS」オープニングテーマ?

Oyatsu wrote:

OK, time to fix this. Please remove (TV Size) from the tittle.
This is mentioned on the official anime website and official singer website.
http://whv-amusic.com/wakeshimakanon/co ... 90000.html

Img

http://selector-wixoss.com/music.html

Img

And like you see, 初回限定版　ＣＤ+ＤＶＤ or ＜初回限定盤＞CD+DVD means <Limited Edition> CD + DVD. And ofc, the tittle doesn't have (TV Size) clearly. So I sugguest you should remove it.

SPOILER

Oyatsu wrote:

So if you followed it. it should still be removed ( )

KSHR wrote:

Sorry for stepping into this discussion, but let me post a conclusion JP BATs agreed.

Oyatsu wrote:

So if you followed it. it should still be removed ( )

This exactly got our point. Since the official site the map owner linked here doesn't show a label with (), there doesn't need to type it in both unicode and romanized title fields. As a reason why 『 』 is not needed, refer to images Oyatsu linked. I mean 『 』 is just used to split up, therefore it should not be considered as a part of this song title.

In short..
Title: killy killy JOKER TV size
Romanized Title: killy killy JOKER TV size


To map owner:
Ask Loneight to repair after fixing this. If he tells you to wait for more than 3 days, poke me in game or forum pm. Good luck!

P.S. set genre :p

CDFA wrote:

This was shown as read for me, but I didn't read it. That's weird.

Insane:
00:54:479 (1) - This might be a bit of an issue
01:15:813 (1) - ^
01:16:313 (2) - ^
All fixed

Hard:
This seems SUPER slider-centric for a hard diff o-o
Slider makes us happy

Easy:
00:59:813 (1,2) - more than one repeat is bad ;w;
00:41:146 (1,2) - ^

nyan nyan!!!

CDFA wrote:

This was shown as read for me, but I didn't read it. That's weird.

Insane:
00:54:479 (1) - This might be a bit of an issue
01:15:813 (1) - ^
01:16:313 (2) - ^

Hard:
This seems SUPER slider-centric for a hard diff o-o

Easy:
00:59:813 (1,2) - more than one repeat is bad ;w;
00:41:146 (1,2) - ^ No change because it fits well for me

nyan nyan!!!

Lach wrote:

idk how to say this but your timing is fucked

Kick is early, snare is late, shit is all over the place