Hobbes2 wrote:

Super sorry about this being so late

Mod from queue ~

[ez]

00:04:835 (1) - Consider reshaping so this doesnt overlapno problem
01:26:450 (4) - NC fixed


[norm]

00:23:468 (2) - Move this to 00:23:282 and reposition accordingly. After that, move 00:24:214 (3) - to 00:24:027, and lengthen it so it ends where it did before.fixed


otherwise very solid normal.

[hard]

00:49:369 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit tough for a hard, hm? Could be fine, might be worth considering.I don't think it's so hard..
01:10:611 (2,3) - if you angle these up a bit more it flows much betterI'll consider it.
01:15:829 (3,4,4) - stack? looks much better

Also good difficulty

[Insane]

00:51:791 (3,2) I'd move this so its directly on top of 00:52:723 (2) I don't feel like to..
00:52:350 (4,4,5,6) - stack these 4 properly, looks a bit off as it is now fixed

Also good difficulty.


Ugh, dinky mod. You don't need to kds if you don't think I helped :<

Sorry for small mod but I hope what I do have helped. Good luck!

MrSergio wrote:

General

• See if you can convert your .png BGs into .jpg, since they are 7MB by themselves right now. fixed
  
  You should check this with some qualified QAT/BN, but imo the "Short Ver." of your title should be between brackets : Duca - 1/5 (Short Ver.)
  I suggest this because that part isn't part of the original title, right?fixed
  

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Insane Jijou

• 00:32:040 (2,5) - Be careful, these sliders completely overlap one on each other. I would suggest to move the second one a bit to let the player see it in time.fixed
  Same for 00:20:114 (2,5)fixed
  
  00:33:717 (2,3,4) - So far you created more polished patterns compared to this one imo.fixed Just a suggestion
  
  00:40:611 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is also a bit confusing:
  firstly, the jump between 00:40:984 (2,3) - is uncalled at all seeing the spacing between 1 and 2;
  secondly, 00:41:543 (4) - I would sughgest to convert this into circles, because you skip a really important beat at 00:41:729 - fixed
  
  00:49:369 (4) - why not stacking this circle on top of 00:49:555 (1) - ? It looks like the same rhythm as 00:48:065 (1,2) - imo fixed
  
  00:48:065 (1,2) - Ctrl + G to keep the circular flow between 00:49:555 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  
  01:07:444 (1,2,1) - having so many NCs close to each other is strange, seeing you don't use them so much in general.
  Imo you could even remove the NC from 01:07:816 (1) - since it adds nothing particular (you also don't have SV changes on those 3 sliders, so there is no need for a NC imo) fixed
  
  01:08:934 (1,4) - This is a bit counter-flow-wise seeing that 1 is the opposite direction of 4. Still fine tho, I would have kept the circular flow here too.
  On a second thought, leave those sliders as they are and do a Ctrl + G on 01:10:425 (1) - maybe, to resemble your other patterns there's enough time interval and two stacked circles, so i think it's okay
  
  01:21:978 (5,1) - Is there any way to increase spacing here? Seems a bit too clustered ccompared to the rest (suggestion: place 1 at 299;274) fixed
  
  01:26:450 (8,1) - First time seeing such a big 1/4 jump. You used them before but they were a lot shorter than this one.
  Maybe a Ctrl + G on 01:26:822 (1,2) - ?fixed
  

I would reduce OD to something like 7.5 since the diff itself isn't really hard and your Hard diff has OD6, so the difference is a bit too much imo.
Really good flow overall.

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Hard Jijou

• 00:17:506 (3,4) - Just a really personal suggestion: convert them into a 1/2 repeat slider if you find it coolfixed
  
  00:21:791 (2,4) - having both of them in the same direction makes it feel "forced" , since you were creating a nice circular flow with 00:21:232 (1,2) -
  See if you can fix them in some way (I would just do a Ctrl + G on 00:22:350 (4) - but see yourself what you like) mine felt better in my opinion.
  
  00:31:667 (1) - Finish on head maybe?fixed
  00:41:916 (1) - samefixed
  (maybe you have to add them on the Insane diff too. I didn't check, sorry)fixed
  

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Normal Jijou

• 00:18:624 (2,3) - I feel like the finsh on 2 is too much, while you should add your custom whistle on 3fixed
  

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Easy Jijou

• 00:18:624 (3) - same as for the Normal diff: remove finish from head, add whistle on repeatfixed
  
  01:02:972 (1) - finish should be on the head of this slider, not the tail imofixed
  
  01:11:543 (4) - missing clap?fixed
  
  01:14:897 (1) - remove finish from tailfixed
  

1. The map is structured quite well, great looking patterns that play not bad at all, although there are stuff that I personally don't find fitting -
2. 00:20:114 (2,5) - This full overlap is just confusing, as the previous patterns had a circle on the head, you used a slider here, it's unexpected and unnecessary as the music doesn't really support that one really well.
3. 00:32:040 (2,5) - ^
4. 00:27:195 (1) - Feels kinda out of place, not as elegant as the other sliders such as 00:36:139 (1) - 00:24:214 (1) - in a way that goes well with the previous moment too.
5. 01:01:667 (2,1) - I'd say it's pretty awful to stack those, the halt with the music is great, but if you are going to slow down the slider that much it's misleading, as I thought it'd gain a speed boost or at the very least be in the same speed as the previous slider, just like 01:28:313 (1,2,3) -. If you want it to work with the current velocity, I'd move 01:01:853 (1) - to around x356 y304 as it slows down the movement from the jump and plays really well.
6. 01:07:816 (1,2,3) - If you create so much emphasis on it, you could increase the SV a bit (1.2x) and even increase the spacing a little more, as the hitsounds overdo it compared to how it actually plays.
7. 01:21:605 (3,4) - You're not overlapping 01:20:673 (5) - but you do overlap 01:20:860 (1) - which comes afterwards? egh.. It looks a bit ugly anyway
8. 01:26:450 (8,1) - I'd say spacing is a bit big for such diff?
9. 01:34:649 (3,3) - Those are not symmetrical on the grid as the first slider overlaps with 01:35:021 (1,2) - while the second does not.

Avishay wrote:

Hey, sorry for the long wait, life happens.

[Insane]

1. The map is structured quite well, great looking patterns that play not bad at all, although there are stuff that I personally don't find fitting -
2. 00:20:114 (2,5) - This full overlap is just confusing, as the previous patterns had a circle on the head, you used a slider here, it's unexpected and unnecessary as the music doesn't really support that one really well.fixed some, but I'll use this pattern.
3. 00:32:040 (2,5) - ^^
4. 00:27:195 (1) - Feels kinda out of place, not as elegant as the other sliders such as 00:36:139 (1) - 00:24:214 (1) - in a way that goes well with the previous moment too.fixed
5. 01:01:667 (2,1) - I'd say it's pretty awful to stack those, the halt with the music is great, but if you are going to slow down the slider that much it's misleading, as I thought it'd gain a speed boost or at the very least be in the same speed as the previous slider, just like 01:28:313 (1,2,3) -. If you want it to work with the current velocity, I'd move 01:01:853 (1) - to around x356 y304 as it slows down the movement from the jump and plays really well.fixed
6. 01:07:816 (1,2,3) - If you create so much emphasis on it, you could increase the SV a bit (1.2x) and even increase the spacing a little more, as the hitsounds overdo it compared to how it actually plays.fixed
7. 01:21:605 (3,4) - You're not overlapping 01:20:673 (5) - but you do overlap 01:20:860 (1) - which comes afterwards? egh.. It looks a bit ugly anyway fixed
8. 01:26:450 (8,1) - I'd say spacing is a bit big for such diff?fixed
9. 01:34:649 (3,3) - Those are not symmetrical on the grid as the first slider overlaps with 01:35:021 (1,2) - while the second does not.???

Glz.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 245,158,193
Combo2 : 245,200,137
Combo3 : 115,181,247
Combo4 : 135,228,151

1. 00:12:661 (3,1) - Please move these a bit away from each other, they touch a little bit which makes it seem strange.
2. 00:13:406 (3) - Also move this so it's symmetrical.
3. 01:10:984 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked, looks strange ingame.
4. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.
5. 01:40:239 (1,2) - These sounds are long sounds, maybe put slow sliders instead of just circles?

1. 00:02:226 (2,3) - BLANKETTTTTTT :3
2. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.

1. nothing here.

1. 01:38:748 (1,2) - Switch NC locations for set consistency?

Priti wrote:

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Artist: Get someone else to confirm it, I'm not 100% sureI'll ask to BN about it.
Title: [1/5] ショート ver.fixed
Romanisation: [1/5] Short ver.fixed

Also, are you sure about current colors? they don't go well with each other.. try this;fixed

[Colours]
Combo1 : 245,158,193
Combo2 : 245,200,137
Combo3 : 115,181,247
Combo4 : 135,228,151

Insane

1. 00:12:661 (3,1) - Please move these a bit away from each other, they touch a little bit which makes it seem strange.fixed
2. 00:13:406 (3) - Also move this so it's symmetrical. fixed
3. 01:10:984 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked, looks strange ingame.fixed
4. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds. fixed
5. 01:40:239 (1,2) - These sounds are long sounds, maybe put slow sliders instead of just circles?it's last part of the song, so I want to make an impact on each beat by circles.

Hard

1. 00:02:226 (2,3) - BLANKETTTTTTT :3I didn't have intention but fixed
2. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.fixed, and Normal and Easy 2

Normal

1. nothing here.

Easy

1. 01:38:748 (1,2) - Switch NC locations for set consistency?fixed

Short mod because the map is super solid and there isn't much to say about it.

thanks for super super fast mod!

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