General
- See if you can convert your .png BGs into .jpg, since they are 7MB by themselves right now.
You should check this with some qualified QAT/BN, but imo the "Short Ver." of your title should be between brackets : Duca - 1/5 (Short Ver.)
I suggest this because that part isn't part of the original title, right?
Insane Jijou
- 00:32:040 (2,5) - Be careful, these sliders completely overlap one on each other. I would suggest to move the second one a bit to let the player see it in time.
Same for 00:20:114 (2,5)
00:33:717 (2,3,4) - So far you created more polished patterns compared to this one imo. Just a suggestion
00:40:611 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is also a bit confusing:
firstly, the jump between 00:40:984 (2,3) - is uncalled at all seeing the spacing between 1 and 2;
secondly, 00:41:543 (4) - I would sughgest to convert this into circles, because you skip a really important beat at 00:41:729 -
00:49:369 (4) - why not stacking this circle on top of 00:49:555 (1) - ? It looks like the same rhythm as 00:48:065 (1,2) - imo
00:48:065 (1,2) - Ctrl + G to keep the circular flow between 00:49:555 (1,2,3,4) - ?
01:07:444 (1,2,1) - having so many NCs close to each other is strange, seeing you don't use them so much in general.
Imo you could even remove the NC from 01:07:816 (1) - since it adds nothing particular (you also don't have SV changes on those 3 sliders, so there is no need for a NC imo)
01:08:934 (1,4) - This is a bit counter-flow-wise seeing that 1 is the opposite direction of 4. Still fine tho, I would have kept the circular flow here too.
On a second thought, leave those sliders as they are and do a Ctrl + G on 01:10:425 (1) - maybe, to resemble your other patterns
01:21:978 (5,1) - Is there any way to increase spacing here? Seems a bit too clustered ccompared to the rest (suggestion: place 1 at 299;274)
01:26:450 (8,1) - First time seeing such a big 1/4 jump. You used them before but they were a lot shorter than this one.
Maybe a Ctrl + G on 01:26:822 (1,2) - ?
Really good flow overall.
Hard Jijou
- 00:17:506 (3,4) - Just a really personal suggestion: convert them into a 1/2 repeat slider if you find it cool
00:21:791 (2,4) - having both of them in the same direction makes it feel "forced" , since you were creating a nice circular flow with 00:21:232 (1,2) -
See if you can fix them in some way (I would just do a Ctrl + G on 00:22:350 (4) - but see yourself what you like)
00:31:667 (1) - Finish on head maybe?
00:41:916 (1) - same
(maybe you have to add them on the Insane diff too. I didn't check, sorry)
Normal Jijou
- 00:18:624 (2,3) - I feel like the finsh on 2 is too much, while you should add your custom whistle on 3
Easy Jijou
- 00:18:624 (3) - same as for the Normal diff: remove finish from head, add whistle on repeat
01:02:972 (1) - finish should be on the head of this slider, not the tail imo
01:11:543 (4) - missing clap?
01:14:897 (1) - remove finish from tail