Alright here I go with the re-check.
I wish I don't cry cause of my poor re-checks xD
[I wish you don't cry]
I wish I don't cry cause of my poor re-checks xD
[I wish you don't cry]
- 00:10:570 (2) - Why not add a whistle onto the head of this slider for consistency?
- 00:41:428 (1) - While the piano's sound isn't too high or anything, I believe that this note deserves the same or more distance than 00:38:685 (1,1) - these did as the piano's pitches are both the same, but this circle has a strong vocal on top of that to support a higher distance.
- 01:24:627 (3,4) - This is a build-up section, yet these are having the highest distance among all the notes, when they are not in the pinnacle of the build-up. It just feels really weird to have a screen-jump on a relatively weaker notes, so I would instead swap (2) and (3)'s place to instead reflect on the snares, and not to create an extreme dash. Even the first kiai didn't include this kinds of dash if I remember correctly lol
- 03:55:485 (1) - While the rhythm's cool and all, I believe the strong vocal's stress on 'End' on the repeat of this slider is too good to be left with just a repeat - I believe it could be a single circle with distance increment to emphasize more on this.
- 05:29:427 (1) - Seems like you didn't place any Normal addition finish here as the song's fading out, but the clockwork's sound is clearly heard in the background, and since you've been adding normal finishes onto all of those sounds, I don't see why you should go off consistency here. I would recommend you to add a finish with Normal addition.