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Wakeshima Kanon - World's End, Girl's Rondo(Asterisk DnB Rem
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01:57:713 (4) - Did you miss placing a whistle here?
02:10:399 (1) - pls move to x:112 for hyper
02:11:085 (3) - pls move to x:480 for hyper
02:39:028 (3) - x:288? Although it has little effect on play-ability, I think it looks nicer in retrospect to the previous stream
03:28:057 (4) - Did you miss placing a whistle on the last section of this slider?
05:17:770 (4) - I personally feel the finish at the start of the slider doesn't fit at all
05:23:256 (2) - This would play nicer if it was ctrl+g!
Awesome map, can't find much wrong D:
Have a star
02:10:399 (1) - pls move to x:112 for hyper
02:11:085 (3) - pls move to x:480 for hyper
02:39:028 (3) - x:288? Although it has little effect on play-ability, I think it looks nicer in retrospect to the previous stream
03:28:057 (4) - Did you miss placing a whistle on the last section of this slider?
05:17:770 (4) - I personally feel the finish at the start of the slider doesn't fit at all
05:23:256 (2) - This would play nicer if it was ctrl+g!
Awesome map, can't find much wrong D:
Have a star
Topic Starter
Fixed all, thank you!
m4m
- "dnb" is not necessary in tags because its already in the title x: also maybe add "2nd" as another way to find "second season", and as ascendance said "セレクター" is part of the source in japanese, you could add it in tags too
- Do not forget disable the Enable countdown
- Maybe combocolours with pink could seems better than with green, i mean feels unrelated to the background
- 00:11:256 - imo the patterns of this section are repetitive, sometimes be repetitive its fine, but here is really noticeable when you play it
- 00:20:856 (1) - i think would be better finish this slider in 1/2
- 00:21:542 (1) - hm, this whistle feels weird, would be better without hitsound here, another option is add whistle in 00:21:885 (2) - , then feels better
- 01:25:313 (1,2,3,4) - the hyper to (3) feels weird, humm, maybe with 01:25:313 (1,3) - ctrl+g? is an interesting pattern too and fit better with the song
- 01:39:027 (1,1) - hm the movement feels a bit weird, specially in 01:39:027 (1) - because is like i need use dash to catch the tail or not!? ;A; probaly would be better with more curve in 01:39:027 (1) - , then the players could notice the difference between these sliders, so they will use dash only in 01:39:370 (1) -
- 01:40:913 (1,1) - 01:52:399 (2,1) - 02:16:999 (6,7) - 04:43:313 (1,1) - you could add a hyper here (ok, in my hyper criteria there are like 5000 options more but these are important to me)
- 01:45:199 (1,2,3,4) - maybe is an error? o.o following what you used to add hyper, clearly 01:45:542 (3) - is a good option, but you even can walk that aaaa try with 01:45:542 (3,4) - ctrl+g... and maybe 01:45:885 (1,2) - ctrl+h (?
- 01:47:770 (1,2,3,4,5) -
just is a question, you did this before or after see my version?oh wait! is not onlya question, you could add a hyper to 01:47:770 (1) - too aaaaa - 01:56:342 (4,5,6) - i think the hyper feels better to (5) than to (6) following the voice, or the instrument
- 02:02:856 (3,4) - maybe only dash? this one feels weird too, if you want to keep a dash here could be to 02:03:199 - i guess :3
- 02:06:456 (1,2) - c'mon this is in kiai )': you can add a hard 1/4 hyper here :3
- 02:23:427 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe there is a lot of time in the same position x.x try with 02:24:456 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h
- 02:30:285 (1,2) - just for the aesthetic, maybe these sliders a bit more horizontal, like this
- 02:35:084 (4,1) - maybe more distance in this hyper? i expected the same as the previous when i tested it :/
- 02:44:170 (5,6,7) - dash here would be nice, is almost walkable c.c try with (6) some grids to the right
- 02:48:285 (2,3,4) - would be a hard to catch, please (3) some grids to the right x.x
- Do you really think 01:55:485 (1) - 03:08:170 (1) - 04:57:885 (1) - are necessary to finish in 1/4? huh i understand those sounds but seems unnecessary, i cant understand how they can change the flow or something o.o
- 03:09:542 - missing whistle i guess, oh and 03:20:513 - here(?
- 03:25:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yeah i like it, buuut still a bit repetitive, maybe with a hyper to 03:27:370 (1) - ? following the voice of course
- usually i dont like suggest big changes but 04:19:485 - 01:17:085 - these sections are so different c.c one of them is hyper in every object and the next has no hypers, that could fit maybe if the first section has not and the second has in every object (to add difficulty progressively between kiais) but in this order just dont fit imo ):
- 04:41:427 (1,1) - same as the first kiai
- 04:50:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
- 05:05:256 (3,4) - ^
Good luck
Topic Starter
00:11:256 - Intentional repetitive one here, sometimes repetitive shape makes good sense imo. I like it.
00:20:856 (1) - Actually this one is connected with the next object, so I'd like to keep as 1/4. 1/2 has too much gap, and 1/8 or 1/16 stack don't make good shape
01:40:913 (1,1) - 01:52:399 (2,1) - 02:16:999 (6,7) - 04:43:313 (1,1) - Just a small dash is enough for me, but anyways thanks for the notice wwww
01:45:199 (1,2,3,4) - lol that was intentional, I'd like to add dash movements on 01:45:199 (1,3) - only. It gives more odd style from the regular.
01:47:770 (1) - Hyperdash here seems too much exaggerated imo, I don't want to add double-chained 1/4 Hyperdashes in this map
02:02:856 (3,4) - This suggestion makes really really big changes lol, overall flows were ruined so I needed to change everything in this kiai wow
02:06:456 (1,2) - hmm, I don't think it's possible area to add it...
02:35:084 (4,1) - Symmetric design as 02:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - , and the intensity of the song goes lower and lower.
02:44:170 (5,6,7) - Even it's walkable most of people will use dash to be safe will you move without dash there during the full combo? Based with common sense.
01:55:485 (1) - 03:08:170 (1) - 04:57:885 (1) - Sure why not?
04:41:427 (1,1) - , 04:50:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above
Rest were fixed, thank you!
00:20:856 (1) - Actually this one is connected with the next object, so I'd like to keep as 1/4. 1/2 has too much gap, and 1/8 or 1/16 stack don't make good shape
01:40:913 (1,1) - 01:52:399 (2,1) - 02:16:999 (6,7) - 04:43:313 (1,1) - Just a small dash is enough for me, but anyways thanks for the notice wwww
01:45:199 (1,2,3,4) - lol that was intentional, I'd like to add dash movements on 01:45:199 (1,3) - only. It gives more odd style from the regular.
01:47:770 (1) - Hyperdash here seems too much exaggerated imo, I don't want to add double-chained 1/4 Hyperdashes in this map
02:02:856 (3,4) - This suggestion makes really really big changes lol, overall flows were ruined so I needed to change everything in this kiai wow
02:06:456 (1,2) - hmm, I don't think it's possible area to add it...
02:35:084 (4,1) - Symmetric design as 02:35:942 (1,2,3,4) - , and the intensity of the song goes lower and lower.
02:44:170 (5,6,7) - Even it's walkable most of people will use dash to be safe
will you move without dash there during the full combo? Based with common sense.01:55:485 (1) - 03:08:170 (1) - 04:57:885 (1) - Sure why not?
04:41:427 (1,1) - , 04:50:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above
Rest were fixed, thank you!
General
- I think that koli was right about Combo Colour suggestions, CC 2, 3 and 4 are not related with the current BG.
- Countdown and letterbox please. (lazyness?)
We cry "OPEN"
- 00:15:370 (1,2) - only to make this more aesthetic, I'll give you two options, Ctrl+G or move 00:15:542 (2) - to x:144
- 00:16:742 (1,2) - there isn't a strong sound or something similar that deserve hyper dash, it would be better if you move the hyperdash between 00:16:913 (2,3) -.
- 00:20:856 (1,1) - Ok, I was reading previous mods and I see that you like such 1/4 pattern. Sounds good to be honest, but next part could be improved a bit, for example: what do you think about 00:21:885 (2) - on x:112? and then 00:22:227 (1) - press Ctrl+H, it's basically the same movement but to the opposite, looks better imo.
- 00:32:513 (1) - add more curve, it will be a nice prelude to the next hyperdash, furthermore, I feel that you can reduce a bit the distance of such hyperdash, only a bit to become more confortable, around 8.44x might looks nicer, something similar as 00:43:485 (1,1) -
- 00:46:228 (2,1) - Why reduce the distance of your pattern? to be consistant, I detect that you were adding distances around 2.50x every 8 fruits ( 00:44:856 (2,1) - 00:48:113 (8,1) - 00:48:970 (2,1) - 00:50:685 (4,1) - etc ) so increase the distance a bit?
- 01:03:370 (1) - I will be very happy if you decided to change this slider cause the return on 01:04:056 - looks pretty nice, but I can't say the same on 01:04:742 -, looks awkward.
- 01:11:599 (1) - it's time to back to the right imo, 01:08:856 (1,1,1,1) - looks overloaded leftward
- from 01:17:085 - to 01:22:570 - this part is very confusing and logical at the same time, I'll explain why, with 01:17:085 (1,2,3) - it looks like you were increasing the distance on each object gradually, and from 01:21:199 - you decrease the distance but not gradually at this section, if I was right please the distance between 01:21:199 (1,2) - should be around 2.70x, in the other hand it comes the confusing part, because at first impression looks like you miss a hyperdash between 01:17:427 (2,3) - and 01:21:199 (1,2) -. Don't you?
- 01:39:370 (1,1) - why 1/4? you decided to make an 1/2 pattern in the previous measure to good effect ( 01:33:885 (2,1) - ).
- 01:37:142 (1) - remove, make it horizontally or copy 01:37:485 (3) - and paste, looks much better at x:168
- 01:40:056 (3,4,1) - transition here is too straigh, I hope that you will change 01:39:370 (1) - and rearrange 01:39:713 (1,2,3,4,1) -.
- 01:41:599 (2) - is it really necessary? looks much better if you remove such note and add 1 more reverse to 01:41:256 (1) -, only to make this more aesthetic, also 01:40:913 (1,1) - they are too close and looks ugly :'( this is more my taste but I really like confortable and beautiful patterns, I strongly recommend you to add the following advices:
1.- 01:40:913 (1) - press Ctrl+H and move to the previous position ( x:192 ) or tilt this slider to the right. (both are the same)
2.- 01:41:256 (1) - same as above but the opposite, press ctrl+H or tilt to the left, and move to x:136. - 01:59:427 (1) - you were following instrumental and suddenly you changed into voice, it doesn't sound nicer, but it's true that voice is more prominent here, so if you were following voice you should do the same with next patterns to be consistant, the following advices will be based on structure, I'll leave jumps and movements to you:
1.- 01:59:942 (2,3) - would be better if you change both notes into 1 slider to follow voice better.
2.- 02:00:456 (5,6) - remenber that I'm talking about structure, so press Ctrl+G because I feel that slider should be first, also you can make a good mirrored pattern with my previous advice ^. - 02:05:942 (4) - I have two reasons to move this slider to x:144, the first one is about consistency with 02:04:913 (1,2) -, the second one is 'cause I'd prefer a smoother transition from a restful rhythm to a stronger rhythm, so I think that increasing the distance gradually in order at 02:05:942 (4,5,1) - will be more confortable for players.
- 03:29:770 (5,6) - distance is too long and hard to catch imo (well this is the main idea of rain and overdoses), anyways... looks much better if you move 03:29:770 (5) - to x:208 and 03:29:942 (6) - to x:304, I'm keeping the main idea of your pattern, I only want to make this part more clean.
- 04:03:027 (1,1) - I'm sure that this could be improved, the current movement is too straight, it makes this part a bit bored.
- 04:39:542 (1,2) - you forgot the hyperdash, right? take a look at 01:37:142 (1,2) - as a reference, also I gave you an advice on this part, will be better if you keep consistency, for example 04:39:542 (1) - tilt to the left.
- 04:41:770 (1,1) - first and third kiai are equal with some exception, but literally the same, so I recommend you to apply the same advice as I gave you on 01:39:370 -
- 05:19:484 (7,8) - same as 03:29:770 (5,6) - reduce the distance into 1.00x
Timing points
- Unuseful green lines: 01:35:256 - 01:35:599 - 01:39:370 - 01:39:713 - 01:46:570 - 01:46:913 - (to be honest I feel that you forgot to change samplesets).
- 03:57:627 - same here, if I'm not wrong, should be Custom2 here, if not remove, 03:57:542 - is enough.
Hope to help you! kudosu if it deserve!
Topic Starter
00:16:742 (1) - This one is on the very beginning of new measure bar(actually with the pattern style changes), and still I think it makes sense as the HDash with minimum distances.
01:03:370 (1) - I don't think this one is awkward
01:11:599 (1) - Ctrl + H'ed this 01:16:399 (1) - one to make the overall balance of left side and right side instead of your suggestion.
01:17:085 - to 01:22:570 - Blame the HDash system nowadays, it's impossible to make a strict distance rule due to the timing jump issues for this part:(:(:(:( I've tried to do with total 3 other shapes but those aren't make sense in distances and designs ofc.
01:39:370 (1) - This is for giving an accent.
01:40:056 (3,4,1) - Nothing is wrong for me. This one has straight left movement, the HDash distance logic doesn't fit with here.
01:41:599 (2) - I don't think this one is ugly though and also I wanted to add a small distance between 01:41:542 - 01:41:599 - .
01:59:427 (1) - Nope, this part follows the vocal and instruments together. If you had some testplays you'll know the HDash flows placed on every vocal sounds, and any other small jumps are following the instruments. There's no rule to follow something only one element of music, since you guys already tried to add hitsounds for instruments or some kinda additional sounds to rearrange the music yourself :/ Hitsounds are the part of the music I think.
02:05:942 (4) - The vocal pitches are way pretty high for here, and this is deserved to get longer HDash. And this map is for approved, difficulty setting can be free. I don't think this one is uncomfortable for players and even if it's uncomfortable then I can say it could be a challenge-able pattern though. Some 'uncomfortable' patterns are also important to make players' skill better imo.
03:29:770 (5,6) - Here is the jump with 4 spaces, and it's gonna be pretty easy as pie for Overdose players. Well actually the anti-flow jump after 1/4 HDash could be harsh, but I think the timing window is pretty generous as OD7 100 point in std :3
04:41:770 (1,1) - and 05:19:484 (7,8) - Same as above things.
Thank you very much, this was a good overhaul for me!
01:03:370 (1) - I don't think this one is awkward
01:11:599 (1) - Ctrl + H'ed this 01:16:399 (1) - one to make the overall balance of left side and right side instead of your suggestion.
01:17:085 - to 01:22:570 - Blame the HDash system nowadays, it's impossible to make a strict distance rule due to the timing jump issues for this part
:(:(:(:( I've tried to do with total 3 other shapes but those aren't make sense in distances and designs ofc.01:39:370 (1) - This is for giving an accent.
01:40:056 (3,4,1) - Nothing is wrong for me. This one has straight left movement, the HDash distance logic doesn't fit with here.
01:41:599 (2) - I don't think this one is ugly though
and also I wanted to add a small distance between 01:41:542 - 01:41:599 - .01:59:427 (1) - Nope, this part follows the vocal and instruments together. If you had some testplays you'll know the HDash flows placed on every vocal sounds, and any other small jumps are following the instruments. There's no rule to follow something only one element of music, since you guys already tried to add hitsounds for instruments or some kinda additional sounds to rearrange the music yourself :/ Hitsounds are the part of the music I think.
02:05:942 (4) - The vocal pitches are way pretty high for here, and this is deserved to get longer HDash. And this map is for approved, difficulty setting can be free. I don't think this one is uncomfortable for players and even if it's uncomfortable then I can say it could be a challenge-able pattern though. Some 'uncomfortable' patterns are also important to make players' skill better imo.
03:29:770 (5,6) - Here is the jump with 4 spaces, and it's gonna be pretty easy as pie for Overdose players. Well actually the anti-flow jump after 1/4 HDash could be harsh, but I think the timing window is pretty generous as OD7 100 point in std :3
04:41:770 (1,1) - and 05:19:484 (7,8) - Same as above things.
Thank you very much, this was a good overhaul for me!
hehe
Let's get this show on the road.
Bubble #1~
Bubble #1~
IRC Log with CLSW
2016-05-30 01:41 CLSW: I'm ready
2016-05-30 01:47 Ascendance: kk
2016-05-30 01:47 Ascendance: lets seeeeeeeee
2016-05-30 01:48 Ascendance: wanna change to a more original diffname :^)
2016-05-30 01:49 CLSW: :^)
2016-05-30 01:49 CLSW: let me think some more
2016-05-30 01:49 Ascendance: sure
2016-05-30 01:49 Ascendance: maybe take some lyrics idk
2016-05-30 01:49 CLSW: I wish you don't cry
2016-05-30 01:50 Ascendance: sure
2016-05-30 01:50 Ascendance: 00:20:170 (1,1) - I don't really like the gap in between these, not because they play bad, but because it makes the sound choppy
2016-05-30 01:50 Ascendance: maybe you could just extend it fully for a more complete sound?
2016-05-30 01:56 Ascendance: good morning
2016-05-30 01:57 CLSW: oh
2016-05-30 01:57 CLSW: it's just like tokyo
2016-05-30 01:57 Ascendance: welcome to
2016-05-30 01:57 Ascendance: tokyo
2016-05-30 01:57 Ascendance: WAAAAAAAW
2016-05-30 01:57 CLSW: the wheeeeeeeeeee sounds
2016-05-30 01:57 CLSW: so this is undermapped version
2016-05-30 01:58 Ascendance: idk MAN it sounds weirdddddd buuuuuuut
2016-05-30 01:58 Ascendance: ok
2016-05-30 01:58 Ascendance: if you like it
2016-05-30 01:58 Ascendance: then its k
2016-05-30 01:58 Ascendance: 00:43:485 (1,1) - seems like a really harsh snap due to the angle of 00:44:170 (1) - being so low, maybe you could turn it into a ) shape?
2016-05-30 01:59 CLSW: fixed some more with 00:44:170 (1) -
2016-05-30 02:00 Ascendance: cool cool
2016-05-30 02:00 Ascendance: 00:46:228 (2,1) - are you sure you don't wanna hdash here or at least add a bit of distance for the increased sound?
2016-05-30 02:01 CLSW: yep
2016-05-30 02:01 CLSW: it wasnt'
2016-05-30 02:02 Ascendance: 00:48:970 (2) - maybe make this one a ( shape for a more curved flow out of 00:48:285 (1) - ? Double stacks here seems a bit bland
2016-05-30 02:03 CLSW: oh sure
2016-05-30 02:04 Ascendance: 00:51:713 (2) - same here\:D/
2016-05-30 02:05 CLSW: okay
2016-05-30 02:07 Ascendance: 01:43:827 (1,1) - the double stack flow here seems a bit choppy, maybe making one of the two (or both) more horizontal for a better playing into 01:44:170 (1) - would be beneficial here?
2016-05-30 02:08 CLSW: I would like to give accent on there
2016-05-30 02:08 CLSW: so nope :3
2016-05-30 02:08 Ascendance: okok~
2016-05-30 02:09 Ascendance: 01:52:399 (2) - with the more wide stack here, kinda looks a bit odd, maybe you could consider making a C-shape stream that curves in back to 01:52:742 (1) - ?
2016-05-30 02:10 CLSW: hmm
2016-05-30 02:10 Ascendance: is more just a stylistic thing
2016-05-30 02:12 CLSW: okay done :3
2016-05-30 02:12 Ascendance: :3
2016-05-30 02:12 Ascendance: 02:13:999 (5,6,7) - really reccomend to lowering the distances here a bit between these notes, if the catcher is a bit too late, you'll end up missing the last fruit, so reducing here would help create a bit of safety for the catcher
2016-05-30 02:14 CLSW: hmm
2016-05-30 02:14 Ascendance: No need to reduce that much, but just a few grid would be helpful
2016-05-30 02:15 CLSW: okay done
2016-05-30 02:15 Ascendance: 02:39:028 (3) - no sound here >w> best to just end the stream on 02:38:942 -
2016-05-30 02:18 CLSW: fine fine :3
2016-05-30 02:18 Ascendance: :3
2016-05-30 02:19 Ascendance: 04:31:485 (4,1) - seems REALLY high distance, maybe add a note at 04:31:656 - at x:256 and shorten the gap between each note to alleviate this a bit?
2016-05-30 02:20 Ascendance: adding a note there since the noise in between peaks its volume so
2016-05-30 02:21 CLSW: I understand, reduced a bit :3
2016-05-30 02:21 Ascendance: alright
2016-05-30 02:21 Ascendance: It's all I really have, unless there's something you want to go over with me before I bubble
2016-05-30 02:22 CLSW: okay let me update soon
2016-05-30 02:22 CLSW: after some taking a look
2016-05-30 02:22 Ascendance: sure
2016-05-30 02:23 Ascendance: poke me when you're ready
2016-05-30 02:32 CLSW: yo updated
2016-05-30 02:33 Ascendance: no diff name change i assume then?
2016-05-30 02:34 Ascendance: also i forgot to mention, move the preview point back by 1/4 so we can hear the beginning of the lyric
2016-05-30 02:35 CLSW: oh I forgot
2016-05-30 02:35 Ascendance: whee
2016-05-30 02:37 Ascendance: tell me again when ready
2016-05-30 02:39 CLSW: alright updated :3
dood
Might not icon as the map's too hard for me ;-;
Alright lets do this.
[General]
- Looking good
- Note that these are merely my assumptions if I mention something about movement. My skills aren't too good to evaluate an overdose's movement, so bare with me :w
- 01:20:856 (3) - While I do understand the high distance on 01:20:170 (2) - , I don't get this one being on higher distance than the previous note. Besides, the distance here might be a little bit too hard considering the mood of the section, so I would bring down the distance to at least 5.6-7x, keeping the hyper in tact.
- 01:54:113 (1,2) - I believe (2) could be separated into 3 circles, to give more emphasis right before the chorus.
- 04:22:570 (2) - To give equal emphsis like the previous similar part, I would increase the distance on this note by .4x or so.
Throwing in some stars to compensate for this, GL!
Repairing the bubble for a fixed edge dash and changed CS to 4.2
Still bub #1~
Still bub #1~
Topic Starter
Fixed all, thank you very much!
Also I fixed some parts with cleaner myself.
EDIT : AN IMPORTANT FIX : 03:43:827 (1,1) - changed to 1/3 LOOOL 1/4 wasn't correct
and increased AR to 9.4.
Also I fixed some parts with cleaner myself.
EDIT : AN IMPORTANT FIX : 03:43:827 (1,1) - changed to 1/3 LOOOL 1/4 wasn't correct
and increased AR to 9.4.
Alright here I go with the re-check.
I wish I don't cry cause of my poor re-checks xD
[I wish you don't cry]
I wish I don't cry cause of my poor re-checks xD
[I wish you don't cry]
- 00:10:570 (2) - Why not add a whistle onto the head of this slider for consistency?
- 00:41:428 (1) - While the piano's sound isn't too high or anything, I believe that this note deserves the same or more distance than 00:38:685 (1,1) - these did as the piano's pitches are both the same, but this circle has a strong vocal on top of that to support a higher distance.
- 01:24:627 (3,4) - This is a build-up section, yet these are having the highest distance among all the notes, when they are not in the pinnacle of the build-up. It just feels really weird to have a screen-jump on a relatively weaker notes, so I would instead swap (2) and (3)'s place to instead reflect on the snares, and not to create an extreme dash. Even the first kiai didn't include this kinds of dash if I remember correctly lol
- 03:55:485 (1) - While the rhythm's cool and all, I believe the strong vocal's stress on 'End' on the repeat of this slider is too good to be left with just a repeat - I believe it could be a single circle with distance increment to emphasize more on this.
- 05:29:427 (1) - Seems like you didn't place any Normal addition finish here as the song's fading out, but the clockwork's sound is clearly heard in the background, and since you've been adding normal finishes onto all of those sounds, I don't see why you should go off consistency here. I would recommend you to add a finish with Normal addition.
Topic Starter
03:55:485 (1) - added a jump between 03:55:485 (1) - and 03:56:170 (2) - .
So, all fixed \:D/
So, all fixed \:D/
Alrighty lets go.
Hopefully my inexperience in Overdose modding doesn't affect too heavily on the ranking :3
2nd Bubble~
Hopefully my inexperience in Overdose modding doesn't affect too heavily on the ranking :3
2nd Bubble~
Topic Starter
nuked #1 
MBomb
Ok let's do this.
[Diff name I'm too lazy to write down so I instead wrote down a lot more]
00:09:885 (1) - Slightly higher distance to this could be nice to emphasise the chime, as it currently feels like the distance is a bit too small. x:112 could work well.
00:11:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Movement here feels pretty repetitive, might result in the player getting kinda bored. Probably best to change one to be different (preferably the middle one).
01:00:627 (1) - Maybe ctrl+h and x:16 on this? Flow feels kinda odd right now because with previous patterns, movement is expected to go to the left, but instead goes to the right, maybe best to keep it on the left like expected.
01:06:113 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You can keep this if you really think it's good, but I think you could definitely map this section in a lot more of a creative way, the sliders end up just feeling boring.
01:20:170 (2) - A slightly stronger curve on this would be nice due to the HDash strength currently making the slider ticks easy to overdash.
01:36:113 (3) - Jump to this would feel nicer weakened slightly, considering the HDash strength in this direction feels strong when you combine it with the opposite direction HDash too, x:48 works fine.
01:41:256 (1) - A HDash to this would work well for the significant pitch change between this and the previous kickslider.
01:43:999 (1,1) - This would play nicer if you made the first 1 horizontal instead of vertical, and moved the second 1 to x:96, this keeps the current HDash pattern whilst making flow feel slightly better.
01:57:713 (4) - Considering the HDash to the previous note followed by antiflow, maybe best to reduce the jump to this slightly, x:160 could work nicer.
02:01:827 (5) - ^.
02:33:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These streams have really bad flow, even if they are walkable, and they just don't feel nice to play. You can make a lot better streams than this, I know you can. Especially considering the way the HDashes play, they ruin the flow even more, it'd be best to just remake these streams in a more interesting, fun, and better flowing way. I considered bubble popping because of these streams, but honestly I know you'll find a better way to make them play.
03:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - Same with these. The ones after are fine, but these ones just play really badly, and I would recommend changing them to something more suitable for the song.
03:17:599 (1) - Tilt this one slightly more to the left, for flow after the HDash.
03:57:542 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again, you could definitely make this part play a lot more interesting, there's more rhythm going on than just the held notes, so these sliders just feel really boring in comparison to the rest of the map.
04:32:342 (4) - Feels a bit too uncomfortable with the current distance, try x:256 instead to make this jump more comfortable to play, as currently with how strong the antiflow movement is, this feels quite awkward to catch.
04:43:656 (1) - HDash to this could be nice for strong pitch change.
05:00:113 (4) - Reduction slightly for the antiflow movements would be nice, x:160.
05:10:742 (3) - Same as above, the antiflow movements feel slightly too strong, try x:192 instead for the movement after the HDashes to be more comfortable.
05:11:427 (6) - Jump to this is a tad bit too strong in my opinion too, weakening this to x:384 feels a lot nicer (And also keeps consistent with previous dash distances).
05:11:942 (2) - x:272, similar reasons to stated above, distance feels too strong, making this feel like a pixel jump, and then it's also more consistent with previous dash distances.
That should be it. I SSed this map just before I modded it, so pp hype
[Diff name I'm too lazy to write down so I instead wrote down a lot more]
00:09:885 (1) - Slightly higher distance to this could be nice to emphasise the chime, as it currently feels like the distance is a bit too small. x:112 could work well.
00:11:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Movement here feels pretty repetitive, might result in the player getting kinda bored. Probably best to change one to be different (preferably the middle one).
01:00:627 (1) - Maybe ctrl+h and x:16 on this? Flow feels kinda odd right now because with previous patterns, movement is expected to go to the left, but instead goes to the right, maybe best to keep it on the left like expected.
01:06:113 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You can keep this if you really think it's good, but I think you could definitely map this section in a lot more of a creative way, the sliders end up just feeling boring.
01:20:170 (2) - A slightly stronger curve on this would be nice due to the HDash strength currently making the slider ticks easy to overdash.
01:36:113 (3) - Jump to this would feel nicer weakened slightly, considering the HDash strength in this direction feels strong when you combine it with the opposite direction HDash too, x:48 works fine.
01:41:256 (1) - A HDash to this would work well for the significant pitch change between this and the previous kickslider.
01:43:999 (1,1) - This would play nicer if you made the first 1 horizontal instead of vertical, and moved the second 1 to x:96, this keeps the current HDash pattern whilst making flow feel slightly better.
01:57:713 (4) - Considering the HDash to the previous note followed by antiflow, maybe best to reduce the jump to this slightly, x:160 could work nicer.
02:01:827 (5) - ^.
02:33:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These streams have really bad flow, even if they are walkable, and they just don't feel nice to play. You can make a lot better streams than this, I know you can. Especially considering the way the HDashes play, they ruin the flow even more, it'd be best to just remake these streams in a more interesting, fun, and better flowing way. I considered bubble popping because of these streams, but honestly I know you'll find a better way to make them play.
03:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - Same with these. The ones after are fine, but these ones just play really badly, and I would recommend changing them to something more suitable for the song.
03:17:599 (1) - Tilt this one slightly more to the left, for flow after the HDash.
03:57:542 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again, you could definitely make this part play a lot more interesting, there's more rhythm going on than just the held notes, so these sliders just feel really boring in comparison to the rest of the map.
04:32:342 (4) - Feels a bit too uncomfortable with the current distance, try x:256 instead to make this jump more comfortable to play, as currently with how strong the antiflow movement is, this feels quite awkward to catch.
04:43:656 (1) - HDash to this could be nice for strong pitch change.
05:00:113 (4) - Reduction slightly for the antiflow movements would be nice, x:160.
05:10:742 (3) - Same as above, the antiflow movements feel slightly too strong, try x:192 instead for the movement after the HDashes to be more comfortable.
05:11:427 (6) - Jump to this is a tad bit too strong in my opinion too, weakening this to x:384 feels a lot nicer (And also keeps consistent with previous dash distances).
05:11:942 (2) - x:272, similar reasons to stated above, distance feels too strong, making this feel like a pixel jump, and then it's also more consistent with previous dash distances.
That should be it. I SSed this map just before I modded it, so pp hype
get snipedkoliron wrote:
Oh no
Topic Starter
01:00:627 (1) - Keeping consistency of transition here, 00:57:199 (3,4,1) - .
01:06:113 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) and 03:57:542 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I love slider art, and this goes to respect P A N's std mapset which actually used same gimmick as me. I would like to call them as 'creative', since everyone didn't try with it. Also I would like to make the actual concept for just only a calm parts, vocal and kiai part, and dubstep part. This one is an actual material.
01:43:999 (1,1) - Based with different directions on both us, in my mapping style double tapping with ← and dash key is good to make an accent here. And that's why I put NC on 01:43:999 (1) - , it shows this one is 'different' as the others.
01:57:542 (3) - moved this to x : 32 instead of fixing 01:57:713 (4) - .
02:01:827 (5) - Same, moved 02:01:656 (4) - to x: 32.
02:33:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) and 03:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - They are not intended to be just walking, they are intended to make catchers' movement like → → → →(Dash) ← ← ← ←(Dash) → → → →(Dash) ← ← ← ←(Dash), yea, this one is a key-input based my own special stream style. This gives much better rhythmical feelings with its 1/2 beats, since it's CtB, we cannot really reproduce the streams like std taiko mania style,(if I really need to then neu Platinum style back and forth stream is needed) so after my own experiments this one is my result. It's good to see a new meta of making streams. Welcome!
04:32:342 (4) - I don't want to break the distance consistency of this part, 04:32:170 (3,4) - this one has quite long distance but whatever. This one isn't really an uncomfortable edge dash, it's good challenge-able pattern and introduction of dubstep part enough.
05:10:570 (2,3) - moved to x : 328 and 184 instead.
Rest were fixed, now maybe it's coming?!
01:06:113 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) and 03:57:542 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I love slider art, and this goes to respect P A N's std mapset which actually used same gimmick as me. I would like to call them as 'creative', since everyone didn't try with it. Also I would like to make the actual concept for just only a calm parts, vocal and kiai part, and dubstep part. This one is an actual material.
01:43:999 (1,1) - Based with different directions on both us, in my mapping style double tapping with ← and dash key is good to make an accent here. And that's why I put NC on 01:43:999 (1) - , it shows this one is 'different' as the others.
01:57:542 (3) - moved this to x : 32 instead of fixing 01:57:713 (4) - .
02:01:827 (5) - Same, moved 02:01:656 (4) - to x: 32.
02:33:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) and 03:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - They are not intended to be just walking, they are intended to make catchers' movement like → → → →(Dash) ← ← ← ←(Dash) → → → →(Dash) ← ← ← ←(Dash), yea, this one is a key-input based my own special stream style. This gives much better rhythmical feelings with its 1/2 beats, since it's CtB, we cannot really reproduce the streams like std taiko mania style,(if I really need to then neu Platinum style back and forth stream is needed) so after my own experiments this one is my result. It's good to see a new meta of making streams. Welcome!
04:32:342 (4) - I don't want to break the distance consistency of this part, 04:32:170 (3,4) - this one has quite long distance but whatever. This one isn't really an uncomfortable edge dash, it's good challenge-able pattern and introduction of dubstep part enough.
05:10:570 (2,3) - moved to x : 328 and 184 instead.
Rest were fixed, now maybe it's coming?!
Topic Starter
5AM MADNESS
Ok, checked everything many times and its fine to me :3 i asked mb if he think its fine to flame after his mod, and we agree with clsw that that mod just made few minor changes, so it's time, take my first flame! 
FLAMED
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2016-06-03 17:22 koliron: ok go
2016-06-03 17:22 CLSW: gogogogogogogogogogo
2016-06-03 17:25 koliron: 01:00:285 (4,1) - why not a hyper here? ): i really expected it
2016-06-03 17:25 koliron: that sound is strong enough imo
2016-06-03 17:25 CLSW: yea I know
2016-06-03 17:26 CLSW: hmm wait
2016-06-03 17:27 CLSW: it's really hard to find the ideal position, but wait
2016-06-03 17:30 CLSW: k done
2016-06-03 17:30 CLSW: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5306619
2016-06-03 17:30 koliron: 03:43:827 (1) - the last one is 1/2 :/ i think would be better to just remove it and keep 4 notes, same in 03:46:570 (1) -
2016-06-03 17:31 CLSW: uh, you mean
2016-06-03 17:31 CLSW: until 03:46:913 - is 1/3
2016-06-03 17:32 CLSW: and the next object should be placed on 03:47:085 -
2016-06-03 17:32 CLSW: right?
2016-06-03 17:32 koliron: yem
2016-06-03 17:32 koliron: or just remove 03:47:085 -
2016-06-03 17:32 CLSW: alright
2016-06-03 17:32 CLSW: hmm looks like just a removing is better okay
2016-06-03 17:33 koliron: ya xd
2016-06-03 17:33 CLSW: done :3
2016-06-03 17:33 koliron: 04:39:542 (1,2) - why is this walkable ):
2016-06-03 17:34 CLSW: lol added more spacings
2016-06-03 17:37 koliron: 03:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - c.c
2016-06-03 17:37 koliron: cant you make this as untied streams
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: sorry but I love these kind of streams :/
2016-06-03 17:38 koliron: like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5306676
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: the new meta of stream
2016-06-03 17:38 koliron: mh ok xD
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: yea I know
2016-06-03 17:38 koliron: its fine lol is just a minor suggestion
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: but the reason that I didn't is
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: that one will be conflicted with 02:35:256 (1,2,3,4) - :3
2016-06-03 17:38 CLSW: phew, fine
2016-06-03 17:41 koliron: wow your map is so clean is hard to mod )':
2016-06-03 17:41 CLSW: :^)
2016-06-03 17:42 CLSW: imma disaster of CtB modders
2016-06-03 17:42 koliron: 03:23:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this feels weird tbh, if you want to keep that hyper maybe would be better to reduce the dash in 03:24:113 (4,5,6) -
2016-06-03 17:42 CLSW: I agree!
2016-06-03 17:43 CLSW: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5306712 How about this?
2016-06-03 17:43 koliron: sure
2016-06-03 17:43 CLSW: k added like this
2016-06-03 17:45 koliron: 04:46:227 (1,1) -
2016-06-03 17:45 koliron: huh
2016-06-03 17:45 koliron: maybe wouler be better to add more curve here
2016-06-03 17:46 koliron: i dont need to move the ryuuta here
2016-06-03 17:46 koliron: ghehehuehueru
2016-06-03 17:46 CLSW: yea that's what I intended rofl
2016-06-03 17:46 CLSW: STOP RIGHT THERE THIS IS A BREAK
2016-06-03 17:46 CLSW: ayy
2016-06-03 17:47 koliron: ayy
2016-06-03 17:48 CLSW: also you should memo something : I fixed 04:24:627 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - part myself to adjust awkward flow on 04:27:370 (3,1) -
2016-06-03 17:48 CLSW: after the update you should take a look at this :3
2016-06-03 17:48 koliron: ok i will
2016-06-03 17:48 koliron: but first
2016-06-03 17:49 koliron: 02:56:170 (2,3) -
2016-06-03 17:49 koliron: what about a hyper here following the second vocal
2016-06-03 17:49 koliron: thats all
2016-06-03 17:50 CLSW: really hard to find ideal position and this part is what I actually intended to map without HDashes :3
2016-06-03 17:50 CLSW: memo 2 : moved 03:00:970 (3,4) - to x : 176
2016-06-03 17:50 koliron: well its true there are no hypers around here
2016-06-03 17:50 koliron: aaa
2016-06-03 17:51 koliron: 03:00:456 (2,3,4) - wait what
2016-06-03 17:51 koliron: why
2016-06-03 17:51 koliron: 3 obviously need a dash D:
2016-06-03 17:51 CLSW: ah because
2016-06-03 17:51 CLSW: I thought the movement of (2) and (3) doesn't really needed dash
2016-06-03 17:52 CLSW: okay then
2016-06-03 17:52 CLSW: just roll-backed
2016-06-03 17:53 koliron: ok
2016-06-03 17:53 koliron: update :D
2016-06-03 17:53 CLSW: no wait
2016-06-03 17:53 CLSW: I should take a look at HR patterns
2016-06-03 17:53 koliron: lol
2016-06-03 17:54 koliron: ok i will
2016-06-03 18:00 CLSW: okay
2016-06-03 18:00 CLSW: all green
2016-06-03 18:00 koliron: ok with hr looks fine
2016-06-03 18:01 koliron: i just noticed when i played that 00:54:456 (3) - this sounds weird lol
2016-06-03 18:01 CLSW: yep, no edge dashes
2016-06-03 18:01 CLSW: updated!
2016-06-03 18:01 koliron: dont ignore(?
2016-06-03 18:02 CLSW: lol
2016-06-03 18:02 CLSW: uh
2016-06-03 18:02 CLSW: so do I need to make it as 1/2?
2016-06-03 18:02 koliron: yes why not
2016-06-03 18:02 koliron: meanwhile i wil recheck the rest
2016-06-03 18:02 koliron: probably nothing to say
2016-06-03 18:02 koliron: fkjlddksl
2016-06-03 18:03 CLSW: k done updating
2016-06-03 18:04 CLSW: done!
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Tons of thanks to everyone, and this is my come back after 8 months.
Please enjoy!
Please enjoy!
xddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddAscendance wrote:
jk ily ascendance <3
koli <33koliron wrote:
xddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddAscendance wrote:
jk ily ascendance <3
CLSW wrote:
Tons of thanks to everyone, and this is my come back after 8 months.
Please enjoy!
hype Congrats!
Congrats
yay grats babo
klonoa wrote:
now rank P8107
Gratz lol
MBomb
Congrats , now I'm waiting for you activity now