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- "dnb" is not necessary in tags because its already in the title x: also maybe add "2nd" as another way to find "second season", and as ascendance said "セレクター" is part of the source in japanese, you could add it in tags too
- Do not forget disable the Enable countdown
- Maybe combocolours with pink could seems better than with green, i mean feels unrelated to the background
- 00:11:256 - imo the patterns of this section are repetitive, sometimes be repetitive its fine, but here is really noticeable when you play it
- 00:20:856 (1) - i think would be better finish this slider in 1/2
- 00:21:542 (1) - hm, this whistle feels weird, would be better without hitsound here, another option is add whistle in 00:21:885 (2) - , then feels better
- 01:25:313 (1,2,3,4) - the hyper to (3) feels weird, humm, maybe with 01:25:313 (1,3) - ctrl+g? is an interesting pattern too and fit better with the song
- 01:39:027 (1,1) - hm the movement feels a bit weird, specially in 01:39:027 (1) - because is like i need use dash to catch the tail or not!? ;A; probaly would be better with more curve in 01:39:027 (1) - , then the players could notice the difference between these sliders, so they will use dash only in 01:39:370 (1) -
- 01:40:913 (1,1) - 01:52:399 (2,1) - 02:16:999 (6,7) - 04:43:313 (1,1) - you could add a hyper here (ok, in my hyper criteria there are like 5000 options more but these are important to me)
- 01:45:199 (1,2,3,4) - maybe is an error? o.o following what you used to add hyper, clearly 01:45:542 (3) - is a good option, but you even can walk that aaaa try with 01:45:542 (3,4) - ctrl+g... and maybe 01:45:885 (1,2) - ctrl+h (?
- 01:47:770 (1,2,3,4,5) -
just is a question, you did this before or after see my version?oh wait! is not onlya question, you could add a hyper to 01:47:770 (1) - too aaaaa - 01:56:342 (4,5,6) - i think the hyper feels better to (5) than to (6) following the voice, or the instrument
- 02:02:856 (3,4) - maybe only dash? this one feels weird too, if you want to keep a dash here could be to 02:03:199 - i guess :3
- 02:06:456 (1,2) - c'mon this is in kiai )': you can add a hard 1/4 hyper here :3
- 02:23:427 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe there is a lot of time in the same position x.x try with 02:24:456 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h
- 02:30:285 (1,2) - just for the aesthetic, maybe these sliders a bit more horizontal, like this
- 02:35:084 (4,1) - maybe more distance in this hyper? i expected the same as the previous when i tested it :/
- 02:44:170 (5,6,7) - dash here would be nice, is almost walkable c.c try with (6) some grids to the right
- 02:48:285 (2,3,4) - would be a hard to catch, please (3) some grids to the right x.x
- Do you really think 01:55:485 (1) - 03:08:170 (1) - 04:57:885 (1) - are necessary to finish in 1/4? huh i understand those sounds but seems unnecessary, i cant understand how they can change the flow or something o.o
- 03:09:542 - missing whistle i guess, oh and 03:20:513 - here(?
- 03:25:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yeah i like it, buuut still a bit repetitive, maybe with a hyper to 03:27:370 (1) - ? following the voice of course
- usually i dont like suggest big changes but 04:19:485 - 01:17:085 - these sections are so different c.c one of them is hyper in every object and the next has no hypers, that could fit maybe if the first section has not and the second has in every object (to add difficulty progressively between kiais) but in this order just dont fit imo ):
- 04:41:427 (1,1) - same as the first kiai
- 04:50:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
- 05:05:256 (3,4) - ^
Good luck