General
- I think that koli was right about Combo Colour suggestions, CC 2, 3 and 4 are not related with the current BG.
- Countdown and letterbox please. (lazyness?)
We cry "OPEN"
- 00:15:370 (1,2) - only to make this more aesthetic, I'll give you two options, Ctrl+G or move 00:15:542 (2) - to x:144
- 00:16:742 (1,2) - there isn't a strong sound or something similar that deserve hyper dash, it would be better if you move the hyperdash between 00:16:913 (2,3) -.
- 00:20:856 (1,1) - Ok, I was reading previous mods and I see that you like such 1/4 pattern. Sounds good to be honest, but next part could be improved a bit, for example: what do you think about 00:21:885 (2) - on x:112? and then 00:22:227 (1) - press Ctrl+H, it's basically the same movement but to the opposite, looks better imo.
- 00:32:513 (1) - add more curve, it will be a nice prelude to the next hyperdash, furthermore, I feel that you can reduce a bit the distance of such hyperdash, only a bit to become more confortable, around 8.44x might looks nicer, something similar as 00:43:485 (1,1) -
- 00:46:228 (2,1) - Why reduce the distance of your pattern? to be consistant, I detect that you were adding distances around 2.50x every 8 fruits ( 00:44:856 (2,1) - 00:48:113 (8,1) - 00:48:970 (2,1) - 00:50:685 (4,1) - etc ) so increase the distance a bit?
- 01:03:370 (1) - I will be very happy if you decided to change this slider cause the return on 01:04:056 - looks pretty nice, but I can't say the same on 01:04:742 -, looks awkward.
- 01:11:599 (1) - it's time to back to the right imo, 01:08:856 (1,1,1,1) - looks overloaded leftward
- from 01:17:085 - to 01:22:570 - this part is very confusing and logical at the same time, I'll explain why, with 01:17:085 (1,2,3) - it looks like you were increasing the distance on each object gradually, and from 01:21:199 - you decrease the distance but not gradually at this section, if I was right please the distance between 01:21:199 (1,2) - should be around 2.70x, in the other hand it comes the confusing part, because at first impression looks like you miss a hyperdash between 01:17:427 (2,3) - and 01:21:199 (1,2) -. Don't you?
- 01:39:370 (1,1) - why 1/4? you decided to make an 1/2 pattern in the previous measure to good effect ( 01:33:885 (2,1) - ).
- 01:37:142 (1) - remove, make it horizontally or copy 01:37:485 (3) - and paste, looks much better at x:168
- 01:40:056 (3,4,1) - transition here is too straigh, I hope that you will change 01:39:370 (1) - and rearrange 01:39:713 (1,2,3,4,1) -.
- 01:41:599 (2) - is it really necessary? looks much better if you remove such note and add 1 more reverse to 01:41:256 (1) -, only to make this more aesthetic, also 01:40:913 (1,1) - they are too close and looks ugly :'( this is more my taste but I really like confortable and beautiful patterns, I strongly recommend you to add the following advices:
1.- 01:40:913 (1) - press Ctrl+H and move to the previous position ( x:192 ) or tilt this slider to the right. (both are the same)
2.- 01:41:256 (1) - same as above but the opposite, press ctrl+H or tilt to the left, and move to x:136. - 01:59:427 (1) - you were following instrumental and suddenly you changed into voice, it doesn't sound nicer, but it's true that voice is more prominent here, so if you were following voice you should do the same with next patterns to be consistant, the following advices will be based on structure, I'll leave jumps and movements to you:
1.- 01:59:942 (2,3) - would be better if you change both notes into 1 slider to follow voice better.
2.- 02:00:456 (5,6) - remenber that I'm talking about structure, so press Ctrl+G because I feel that slider should be first, also you can make a good mirrored pattern with my previous advice ^. - 02:05:942 (4) - I have two reasons to move this slider to x:144, the first one is about consistency with 02:04:913 (1,2) -, the second one is 'cause I'd prefer a smoother transition from a restful rhythm to a stronger rhythm, so I think that increasing the distance gradually in order at 02:05:942 (4,5,1) - will be more confortable for players.
- 03:29:770 (5,6) - distance is too long and hard to catch imo (well this is the main idea of rain and overdoses), anyways... looks much better if you move 03:29:770 (5) - to x:208 and 03:29:942 (6) - to x:304, I'm keeping the main idea of your pattern, I only want to make this part more clean.
- 04:03:027 (1,1) - I'm sure that this could be improved, the current movement is too straight, it makes this part a bit bored.
- 04:39:542 (1,2) - you forgot the hyperdash, right? take a look at 01:37:142 (1,2) - as a reference, also I gave you an advice on this part, will be better if you keep consistency, for example 04:39:542 (1) - tilt to the left.
- 04:41:770 (1,1) - first and third kiai are equal with some exception, but literally the same, so I recommend you to apply the same advice as I gave you on 01:39:370 -
- 05:19:484 (7,8) - same as 03:29:770 (5,6) - reduce the distance into 1.00x
Timing points
- Unuseful green lines: 01:35:256 - 01:35:599 - 01:39:370 - 01:39:713 - 01:46:570 - 01:46:913 - (to be honest I feel that you forgot to change samplesets).
- 03:57:627 - same here, if I'm not wrong, should be Custom2 here, if not remove, 03:57:542 - is enough.
Hope to help you! kudosu if it deserve!