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- You could maybe add the following!: Mari Okada Takuya Satō second season infected
- While it's not unrankable, I think having the Japanese source would be better in this case, which would be: セレクター spread WIXOSS
- If you change the above, please move your current source to the tags!
- Consider changing to HP7 The map seems quite dense and it seems to be aimed towards overdose level, so I think increasing by 1 would be a nice change for the difficulty.
- Seems fine!
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- 00:05:427 (2,1) - It's not a pixel dash or anything, but the distance seems a bit far here. I think reducing the distance a bit could be beneficial.
- 00:16:399 (5,1) - I don't think the sound here warrants a double hyper. Instead of reworking this, I suggest adding a note at 00:16:570 - and making that note create a hyperdash to 00:16:742 (1) - .
- 00:18:113 (1) - Pretty strong bass note here, maybe you could make an hdash to it?
- 00:20:170 (1,1) - I think the 1/8 empty space in between these two makes the sound really choppy. This can be fixed by simply extending 00:20:170 (1) - by one more tick.
- 00:20:856 (1,1,2,1) - Sounds a bit weird timeline wise. I think changing the timeline to this would make the sound follow the music better.
- 00:43:485 (1,1) - the hdash here makes it really easy to miss the repeat slider. My suggestion is to make 00:44:170 (1) - into a curved stream, perhaps like this?
- 00:46:228 (2,1) - pretty important volume increase, maybe create an hdash in between here?
- 01:43:827 (1,1,1) - I think the slider at 01:43:999 (1) - makes the pattern a bit too challenging to play. My suggestion is to make that slider fully horizontal and increase the spacing between it and 01:44:170 (1) - so that the pattern plays smoothly and isn't breaking the flow here.
- 01:47:942 (2,3) - Is there a reason these aren't hyperdashed? They are the same sounds as the others, so it's best not to ruin the consistency you have here.
- 03:25:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You might want to go about slightly reducing the distances here. If the player starts the pattern too early or late, they will easily miss the rest of the pattern, which should be avoided in a pattern like this.
- 03:57:542 (1) - this sound starts on 03:57:370 - . As of right now, it feels too delayed, even though its reinforced by the hitsound.
- 04:46:227 (1) - I think you could try extending this slider over the entire "わかり ね"
- 04:56:856 (2,1) - an hdash here would benefit the strong bass line that's coming up here.
- 05:36:970 (2,1) - Check the distance here quq maybe it's a bit too big!
- 05:40:399 (1,2,3) - I think maybe at the end of the map you can emphasize the 1/4 notes a bit rather than keeping the 1/1 pattern. It's the same as in the standard map, and I think it sounds quite nice
that's all, really nice work here:3