i really sorry, but i lost the Izect Ztenz's mod reply, i don't know how, i really sorry
i fixed some things in the Normal diff and fixed that point in the hard diff but maked Ctrl - H for follow better the flow
thx a lot for the mods!
i fixed some things in the Normal diff and fixed that point in the hard diff but maked Ctrl - H for follow better the flow
no reply or reply in green = fix~sheela901 wrote:
Hello CSLM!
[General][SB]
- You seem to use a negative offset for the timing, which we don't suggest you do that. Since all the difficulties have nothing in the intro, it's best you start on the first object of the map. Because Milan's difficulty started early compared to the others, the offset will then be on 00:09:635 (or 9635).
- The BG filesize is quite big for the beatmap. I would compress the image and get at least 640 KB. Just go for this image file. I don't really see the difference with the current and the one I compressed.
Loved the SB! I've something that could optimize the filesize for the SB, and opinions on stuffs.There's things that's been a little bothering me. This may or not be subjective.
- You can compress PNG files into smaller files and get transparent results (still in its original state). When I compressed your sprites, you could save 172 KB. Might not be lots, but could save some KBs. Here's a ZIP file containing the new files: http://puu.sh/kjGoK/6329a30fdb.zip
[Normal]
- For the background on each difficulty, there seem to have lots of numbers for the fade event, but they could be reduce I think. Fade-ins and fade-outs like 00:44:117 could be under a loop event. The fades have a similar opacity, but the values feel random to me, unless they're intended. In my opinion, it's best if you stick on a same value so it doesn't look random, but that's your choice. If you need help with looping, try this thread and go to the looping scetion, or I can help you (if I remember it well...). i know how work with the code and the looping :3
- 02:44:117 - The background disappears INSTANTELY and I don't like that. You might want replace the lines no, i like it because bring up the player instantly in where the calm down it's:
SPOILERinto something simple that would fade out quick, like:F,0,162738,163845,1,0.9943513
F,0,163845,164096,0.9943513,0.9996132
F,0,164096,164117,0.9996132,0
F,0,164117,165475,0,0.02943587SPOILERF,0,162738,164117,1
F,0,164117,164204,1,0- Lyrics that stops moving on a point like "Seize the fear..." on 00:17:911 and "Don't look back" on 02:07:911 are really to weird see; I fell all "tangling" in my body. Honestly, I don't like when they stop like that. I expected that they'll still move until the end of the. I would really want to see some motion going on for these lyrics. no because the point it's stop the lyrics when the vocals stop.
[Hard]
- 00:43:773 (4) - I don't know why but it looked like a 1/2 rhythm. The overlap is ugly to be honest. Also another thing is, it would be best if a hitcircle or a slider starts on 00:44:117 . That object will then emphasize the strong beat.
- 00:49:635 (1,2,1,2) - Woooh! You do want to tone down with the spacing. It's pretty big for Normal. If I was you I'd stick with the same distance.
- 01:03:428 (1,2) - Because 01:04:290 (2) is next to the head of 01:03:428 (1) -, the flow is not quite good. The first slider goes down, but the following slider goes also down, but gets out of the line. Perhaps the pattern in the image below will solve the problem the idea it's what both slider go down. Rised up the pattern for avoid getting out of the line but not used that pattern:
- 02:45:497 (2) - Since this object is on the beginning of a kiai time, a new combo would likely be added.
[Dreams]
- 00:39:290 (2,3) - The distance went suddenly low after the previous patterns, and it plays really weird. You might want to put some more.
- 02:23:773 (1) - Maybe delete this note? You did this before 00:33:428 which could be for consistency, and having two beats of recovery is better for Hard in my opinion, as you have more time to get back to place. I also typed something in Dreams about the hitcircle, so you can check later or now (I don't want to copy and paste honestly. I want to have variety in the sentences).
- 02:25:842 (5) - Sounds pretty weird to me. It skips the main beat on 02:26:186 and I wouldn't do that. Clickable objects are better on emphasizing the strong beats. So for this beat, you have the opportunity to start a slider or a hitcircle, but my option would be having a circle on 02:25:842 and start a 1/1 slider on 02:26:186 . added to 02:24:807 (2) - a reverse, added a circle in 02:25:841 - and leaved that 2/1 slider. I want leave it for emphatize the sound of 02:26:186 -
- 02:28:255 (4,1) - Something similar like 00:39:290 (2,3) : the distance is low, but you have starting from 02:24:117 until 02:28:945 objects that have a bigger and (almost) constant spacing. The other reason is that it doesn't play well.
- 02:45:497 until 02:55:842 - The spacing is larger than on the two previous kiai sections and 02:56:531 until the end of the kiai. This looks really weird, because normally the end or the section that contains "raver" beats (maybe not the right choice of word, but I mean something that has more sound) gets something tense. But what you did in this section is the opposite. I however recommend you go with a spacing of 1.0x ~ 1.1x. It would keep a similar way you did for the second kiai section. no, this part for being a bigger climax than the kiai of before it's better imo rise up the SV (i did the same in the Normal diff :p )
I think this is it. If you have any questions you want to ask, don't hesitate!
- 00:19:290 (4) - How about you add a new combo on this hitcircle? It feels useful after you have an alteration in the rhythm: the 3/2 gap starting from 00:18:773 .
- 00:33:428 (1) - Remove this hitcircle perhaps? In my view, after completing the spinner, I get that little intensity when I go to that note, and I get a little off when I go to 00:33:773 (2) . This may be also due to the obejcts before the spinner. It's pretty much subjective.
- 00:35:152 (4) - Sounds weird, but I don't know why honestly. I think it's because the downbeat doesn't have the same sound as 00:34:462 that makes it weird to hear. true, but it's better than take it off the HS or change it, if i do something like that will be unconsistent with the next ones, so i'll leave it how it is now
Okay, onto another point. If you did rhythms like 00:37:566 (7,8) - 00:39:980 (3,4,5) in the following, then why not for 00:35:152 (4) ? I think it sounds better that way (reason maybe on my previous point of this) and it could keep consistency through the rhythms. Something like a circle and a 1/2 slider is fine to me.- 00:37:221 (7,8) - Bring the distance to 1.0x, I felt uncomfortable to play this.
- 00:48:255 (3,4) - In my opinion it would sound nice if you only stick with drums. Which means that those repeat sliders should only be a simple 1/1 slider. It would concentrate the drums better and emphasize the drums better if the section 00:44:117 to 00:52:393 is mostly following that instrument. not imo, the pitch it's too strong for ignore it
- 00:55:669 (3,4) - Might want to lower the distance there. The beat on (4) is less strong than the one on 00:56:186 . Lowering the distance will also let 00:56:186 (5) be more emphasized. For placement, what you can do is flip 00:56:014 (4,5,6) horizontal (Ctrl + H) and move them wherever you feel like it. i had a battle with this pattern, but i win xD fix~
- 01:05:842 (7) - I think the flow will get better if you switch the head and tail (Ctrl + G). There's jumps in the kicksliders pattern, so if you put the head close to its previous object while there was jumps, it makes the jumps stops, and it makes an uncomfortable movement for that pattern.
- 02:18:945 (3) - There's nothing in the music that makes the hitcircle could hit on something. It's pointless so you should delete it. On the other hand, you can add a repeat on 02:18:428 (2) if you want to hit the vocal on 02:18:773 .
Good luck on your map!
thx a lot for the mods!