Hi M4M from my queue, sorry about the delay, my schedule changed a lot recently ^^
[Dreams]
[Dreams]
- 00:19:290 - the change in the vocals could be highlighted, matter of choice though
- 00:23:428 (3,4) - the part where the slider start of (4) overlaps with (3)'s body looks ugly, even in game, could be centered better, while keeping the blanket
- 00:27:566 (1,2) - the storyboard thing in those sliders is not centered correctly, I'm a complete newb at sb's, but it's clearly noticeable
- 00:35:842 (5) - NC
- 00:41:359 (7) - ^
- 00:49:635 (1) - ok nevermind the last point, I think the whole storyboard might be incorrectly cenetered
- 01:19:462 (3) - ctrl+j?
- 01:33:342 - I don't think this note is necessary, there's no main beat here
- 01:33:428 (7) - if you changed the above reposition this note
- 01:49:635 (1) - a bit too sudden, since the players comes pretty slow from the last stream, imo you should never have an increase in SV larger than 0.5 speed
- 02:13:773 (3,4) - like at the beginning, the overlap looks ugly
- 02:19:290 (4,5,6) - this change of rhythm is really confusing, either make all these 3 notes a NC, or use a slider to represent them
- 02:55:842 (1) - same as before as well
- In general flow could be a little bit better in some patterns, but besides that I loved the map ^^
- This style of background is so overused ahah (it's not bad though)
- 01:48:255 (2) - make this a triple so that it doesn't confuse players when getting into 01:48:945 (1) - which has more reverses
- 01:54:980 (7) - slider fits a lot better in the end of the stream, starting at 01:55:324 -
- 01:59:980 (1) - slight SV decrease?
- 01:13:083 (1) - remove NC, I know the song kind of asks for it, but try to keep the pattern for NC's throughout the diff
- 01:15:152 (1) - even if you don't use the above point, you should remove this one, only start NC's in ticks like 01:17:221 (1) -
- 01:15:842 (1) - also remove from here
- 01:21:186 (4,2) - ugly and confusing overlap, also be careful with the spacing in this pattern
- 01:26:531 (4,5,6,7) - this change of rhythm in a hard is not advised, though not illegal you should use sliders instead
- You should check if the spacing change in the last chorus is rankable or not, some spacings seem a little overkill, just to be sure
- 00:16:359 (2,3,4) - should have the same spacing
- 01:39:635 - a note or slider should be mapped here
- Like in the hard diff, but more so on this one, I'm not sure if the spacing increase in the second chorus is rankable, I think you need to keep spacing consistent on a normal diff, and it did change a lot in that part