Hello. So generally when I want to M4M, I mod the map first to make sure I'll be able to provide feedback. Since I did it already, I might as well post it. Don't feel obliged at all and just consider this a Normal mod from #modreqs. Hopefully this is helpful enough that next time you'll be asking me for M4M
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01:10:422 (4) – This is mostly me being bad at reading, but the stack under the slider tail isn't very fun. You could try different placements like at 320, 236, but maybe just unstacking them and going with a half overlap by putting 4 at 425, 22 would help?
01:30:922 (1) – Since 01:29:588 (1) – and 01:31:922 (1) – start with streams, I kind of like this combo to also start with a triple. I know that kind of interferes with the vocals/drum you're going for, but just wanted to throw that more consistent rhythm out there.
02:07:255 (2,3) – This feels a little awkward to me rhythmically. Consider doing
http://puu.sh/kVsOA/54bb752bb0.jpg . If you do then 02:08:088 (6) – feels a little slow and so maybe increase the SV here slightly to .85.
02:30:422 (4,5) – This spacing is a little awkward. Try making it bigger.
03:13:588 (1) – Pretty subjective, but I think a SV of .65 fits a little better. It also makes the increase at 03:24:255 (1) – more noticeable
03:20:922 (3) – The high pitch of the piano here makes me want the distance into this to be higher. I know it kinda messes up the design your going for, but there's something around this part of the song that I want to change the DS briefly. I kind of liked putting it under the tail of 03:19:422 (3) – and then making 3,4,5 linear like:
http://puu.sh/kVrZc/317ef03c0c.jpg03:32:255 (1) – Try making the distance into this a little bigger to reflect the higher pitch. Next comment very related.
03:32:255 (1) – So whatever strings these are, there are two notes that the slider represents. I'll call this an iamb. I kind of want to express both notes of each iamb, but I don't want to quite make these two circles, so think about changing the combo at 03:33:588 (1) – from 4 sliders to 8 circles with each iamb only having a DS of like ~0.5x and each iamb being separated by a jump, like:
http://puu.sh/kVswB/c4c9805f95.jpg (done obviously by convert slider to stream. You may have to rework the distance of the jumps though if you go with this).
03:38:922 (1,2,3) – I think the spacing here is just a little too big. Anything that reduces the DS can work obviously, but for example, try doing ctrl + J on 1 and moving it to 214, 226 and then setting up 3 a little different, like:
http://puu.sh/kVraK/2be510447b.jpg04:17:588 (1) – This kiai feels a little more intense than everything else in the song. So similar to how you slow down the SV in slow parts, it would have been cool to see the SV go to like 1.1 or 1.15 for this kiai.
04:28:755 (3,4) - the distance here feels like it should be bigger, maybe blanket 4 in 04:28:255 (1) - ?
04:32:171 (8,1) – These hitsounds don't sound right, I'd prefer you not to use drum
04:33:422 (7,1) – The slider shape of 1 leads to a really unnatural flow between these. Redo anything around this so that you make a better flow here.
Good map overall with good spacing and design. Good luck!