RVMathew
thank you for the mod! Hurry up and get ClariS up and running again! lolRVMathew wrote:
Hi there. You requested me for normal mod on my modding queue.
Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow it.
Just before we start: Looking in game it says that the length is 5:10 but on the beatmap page it says 5:00 with 4:53 drain time. This may be an error on my side but if not then you will have to make a full spread. it's a website bug :< the drain time complies with the approval rules
1) Metadata:
Source: I think you should use the Japanese title for the source: サイコパス
If not then move that to the tags as well.
Tags: Add 'ed' and '1' since this is the first ending for the anime. about this... I've copied the metadata from 3 other ranked mapsets and they all have "PSYCHO-PASS" as the source. I'll keep it as PSYCHO-PASS for now unless instructed to change it
2) 00:44:246 You should add a timing point here and put the volume up to 60%. The reason is that now you can hear the beat much more than before and raising the volume up reflects on that.
Other instances where this occurs: 02:04:246 (60% volume) applied both
3) 02:45:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is mapped nicely but I did get caught out because I was not expecting to have those kind of jumps. I do not think you need to change it for now. I changed the jump pattern so it's similar to the other two jumps. SR decreased to 5 though :<
4) 03:56:746 (2) - This is a weird slider shape. Try and make the curve a little bit smoother if possible. ok, hopefully it's better now
5) 04:59:246 (3) - If you look very closely at the pattern 04:58:913 (1,2,3) - the pattern does not look straight. I would shift the note to 107,181. you're right, applied
Final thoughts: This map is very good that there is not much to complain about. Other than the jumps at 2:45 everything was great. Other issues I have mentioned are very small but may make a difference.
Good luck.
P.S regarding my ClariS map I am stuck in a rut so it will be a long time before I work on it again.