Hello~ NM as requested in my queue~
[General]
- Unrankable issues
- My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
- Small suggestions/nazi
[General]
- Widescreen support is still on for me ><
- Unnecessary green line at 00:01:580 - , the red line is enough to do the work.
- Looks fine other that that.
- 00:04:246 (1) - Technically this note should have a jump, but it should be fine.
- 00:38:913 (1,2,3,4) - You would want them to be bit more cleaner, (2), (3) and (4) should be bit more farther away from (1) to avoid that tiny bit of overlap.
- 01:05:496 - You may want to add a circle here to keep the consistency in rhythm from 00:54:579 (4,5,1) - and 00:59:913 (6,7,1) - .
- 01:10:913 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really sure if you want to keep this rhythm, it feels weird to play if 01:11:913 - this downbeat isn't clickable. Also there could have been a jump at 01:11:913 - this downbeat as it is obviously more stronger to emphasize as a jump than 01:11:746 - this red tick. You could go for a simple but intuitive rhythm like this :
- 01:20:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could have mapped the rest of the 1/4 rhythm that you were following, as it follows the same instrument like you did with (1) to (5), and it can be more playable as players will be able to expect the stream to be mapped out as a whole.
- 02:13:413 (1) - This is way too much of nazi, sorry :/ The tail of this slider isn't completely stacked under (2) and (5).
- 02:25:496 - Same point like 01:05:496 - .
- 02:52:246 (5) - This circle doesn't really follow the shape that you were following on this stream, it kind of looks messy :/. The green line is making the circle's distance be lower than others, so it should be moved to the next tick (blue tick) to avoid this.
- 03:02:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The jump pattern can be bit more intuitive to play if the second combo was rotated bit towards clockwise, to give a tornado like effect.
- 04:32:163 - Circle should be added here for the consistency of rhythm.
- 04:44:246 - Somehow I really loved this section, it really plays out nice IMO
- 05:00:913 - IMO a circle should be added here since the spinner gives a different emphasize (I think? Tell me if I am wrong)
- 05:00:913 (1) - This spinner could have a fade-out effect (gradually reducing of hitsound volume), as the song is fading out from this point.
- Overall a good map, little bit of improvement on rhythm can really make this map even more intuitive to play