sorry, i just got back, tired of waiting i think you wont check it again, and so here i am....
hope you dont mind this last stuff 00:19:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
since i change the rest of it...
got it, thanks for the check...Kurokami wrote:
Let's see if we can rank this finally (though I can only rebubble this).
[Platter]
00:19:910 (5) - Definitely no go on Platter. This kind of slider requires a very good timing to SS it and Platter is still just for introducing harder patterns. Sure, its looks easy for us, but try to look at it with newbies eye. Make this slider shorter please.
SURE things if its acceptable after i shorten it, then i will do it ^^
01:12:462 (2,3) - WTF! There is nothing which needs to be followed with HDash here. Just a weak vocal. Remove the HDash. And by the way, the double HDash pattern is too hard on this level.
01:13:496 (5,6) - ^ Same here.
what did i follow? its actually the LOUD cymbal and melody not the vocal... the slider is just to emphasize the long vocal...
but i do AGREE that double Hdash is a bit hard , it require good timing of full left right dash control... i change it into 1 Hdash for each, its still following the music's cymbal.
[Rain]
00:19:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would like to point this out as well but I know you won't change it. q.q Something like: http://puu.sh/hJdrf/2831d08998.png would be better but meh.
well... then just let me keep it XD i really enjoy this pattern and satisfy on what i mapped here, also there... my friend enjoy it as well...
in Rain, i change the pattern around here 00:40:807 - to make the Hdash easier.
01:12:669 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well, we already discussed this but I don't like the flow here. The rhythm is hard to follow already so better to make the pattern better and easier to handle. Something like ( ) could work here. Or alternative try this: http://puu.sh/hJdl9/d442b411cd.png.
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as for this , i can agree for much more simple pattern... hope it looks perfect now
Just call me back if you think you checked everything here.
hope you dont mind this last stuff 00:19:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
since i change the rest of it...