Normal
00:14:117 (1) - kk it's better if you avoid the overlap here!
00:23:529 (1,2,3) - Flow is bad here. Can you do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157023
00:32:941 (1,2,3) - This is a terrible case of overlap... But.. It looks good. So it's np ^^ I'm noticing that now.
01:08:235 (3) - This weird form! Make something better if possible! It corrupts the perfect flow this map has.
Hard
OD+1
Start of this 00:02:647 (5) -... In the end of the previous slider!
00:04:632 (1) - It's better if you delete this.
01:15:000 (8) - This is impossible to read, for an hd player.
01:19:705 (8) - ^. I suggest to move it out.
Hope I helped. ^^
00:14:117 (1) - kk it's better if you avoid the overlap here!
00:23:529 (1,2,3) - Flow is bad here. Can you do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157023
00:32:941 (1,2,3) - This is a terrible case of overlap... But.. It looks good. So it's np ^^ I'm noticing that now.
01:08:235 (3) - This weird form! Make something better if possible! It corrupts the perfect flow this map has.
Hard
OD+1
Start of this 00:02:647 (5) -... In the end of the previous slider!
00:04:632 (1) - It's better if you delete this.
01:15:000 (8) - This is impossible to read, for an hd player.
01:19:705 (8) - ^. I suggest to move it out.
Hope I helped. ^^