[General:]
The Kiai Time should end on 01:01:176 (or earlier)
[Normal:]
00:06:176 (2) - make a softer curve and fix blanket like this: http://puu.sh/bTQzi.jpg
00:15:588 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/bTQCO.jpg
00:24:411 (2,3) - ^
00:45:588 (4) - ^
00:52:647 (2) - ^ (only the first curve)
01:01:176 (1) - ^
00:07:058 (3) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/bTQBB.jpg
00:21:176 (3,4,5) - Remove those circles and do something like this: http://puu.sh/bTQG7.jpg
[Champion:]
00:03:235 (6) - Fix blaket: http://puu.sh/bTQS8.jpg
00:04:705 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/bTQTu.jpg
00:07:941 (7) - ^
00:13:235 (6) - ^
00:23:529 (3) - ^
01:01:176 (1) - ^
01:02:941 (3) - ^
01:06:764 (2) - ^
00:12:353 (5) - Softer curve (remmember to fix blanket)
00:25:588 (6) - ^
00:26:176 (7) - ^
00:57:353 (3) - ^
01:00:000 (6) - ^
00:15:588 (3,4,5) - Flow is broken here. Please use distance snap! (just a suggestion)
That's all!
Good luck!