Estellia- wrote:
Hey from M4M queue Sorry I can only mod std
[General]No problems on standard difficulties I think, only very very minor problems and a few weird sliders
- Suggest you add AudioLeadIn since the map starts on 0 offset, may be too fast for players okay
[Normal]- 00:02:353 (3,4) - Personal preference, but I suggest shift 4 more towards the right so lead in is better nope, too plain
- 00:02:353 (3,4) - Blanket fix ? there's no circle that have to be blanketed
- 00:06:176 (2,4) - Suggest shift 4 away to prevent intersection with 2 kay
- 00:15:588 (2,3) - Try to make this more circular as well
- 00:18:823 (1,2) - Intersection is quite ugly here IMO no
- 00:21:176 (3,4,5) - Maybe change to reverse slider? there will be a jump. plus i tried to put some challenge
- 00:32:941 (1) - Make the 2nd half of the body more circular fixed
- 00:32:941 (1,2,3) - Intersection is super ugly nah.. you don't know the art here
- 00:37:647 (1,2) - You can perfect this blanket more
- 00:42:941 (1,2) - ^
- 00:45:588 (4) - Just personal preference, curve this less to flow better with 5 nope
- 01:08:235 (3) - Unfitting slider art IMO listen it better and you will know what i'm supposed
- 01:15:294 (1,2) - Ugly stack no use
- 01:17:647 (4) - Unfitting slider shape i don't mind it
- 01:20:000 (1) - Dunno about the spinner, I think it should end on the white line later there's a *dup* sound here. so i use that as the end
Its an ok Normal, rather good already, just minor problems
[Champion]- 00:01:470 (3,5) - Ugly stack, either shift completely away or stack nicely meh... stack properly make the flow broken
- 00:02:647 (5,6) - Minor blanket fix
- 00:04:632 (1,2) - The rhythm here may be too hard for players to grasp, maybe try triplet or remove the hitcircle okay... cause much people like this note is deleted than deleted :3
- 00:11:764 (4,5,6) - Maybe try having 5 and 6 blanket 4's tail and have 5 and 6 be more circular yes that's what i mean but (6) was supposed to blanket (1)
- 00:13:235 (6,1) - Blanket fix
- 00:15:588 (3,4,5) - The timing here may be hard to get for players, try to not have such big jumps nah... it's indicates the jump on the sound
- 00:23:382 (1) - It appears to me that this note covers nothing in the music, suggest remove well, if you use 25% speed you will hear the piano... but removed
- 00:24:411 (3,4,5,6) - Suggest 5 and 6 to be more circular and blanket 4, and for the tail of 6 to stack better with tail of 3. fixed
- 00:31:470 (3,4) - Shift 4 higher to have blanket instead no.. it's breaking the DS
- 00:35:588 (1,2) - Try blanket no, i think
- 00:44:705 (4,5) - Very very slight blanket issue
- 00:45:588 (5,6) - The intersection feels a bit ugly + weird the sound is increasing so i use mine
- 00:48:823 (3,4,5) - Try a stack on 5's head on 3's tail and blanket 4 better with them fixed
- 00:51:764 (1,2) - Minor blanket fix
- 00:52:647 (2,3) - Awkward intersection nope
- 00:57:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^ nope
- 01:02:941 (3,4) - Minor blanket fix
- 01:04:411 (5) - Go for better symmetry fixed
- 01:05:294 (6,1) - Awkward intersection nope
- 01:05:882 (1,2) - Very very minor blanket fix
- 01:05:882 (1,3) - Stack tail of 1 and head of 3 fixed
- 01:07:647 (3,4,5) - Fix blanket
- 01:15:294 (1,2) - Awkward intersection nope
- 01:20:000 (1) - Same spinner problem as Normal same answer
Sorry if this seems super super nazi, but I'm only trying to help improve your map to be the best
Basically just quite a lot of awkward intersections between sliders, not many problems really, this map is super neat
GL