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REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya - Little Star [OsuMania|Osu]

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liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月13日 at 13:43:50

Artist: REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya
Title: Little Star
Source: beatmania IIDX
Tags: 20th tricoro J-CORE Bruce Simple_Star victorica_db Spring Minakami Yuki mtbbsben
BPM: 183
Filesize: 4510kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bruce's Hyper - 4Key (2.78 stars, 904 notes)
  2. Extra (5.35 stars, 646 notes)
  3. Hyper (2.85 stars, 264 notes)
  4. Insane (3.9 stars, 341 notes)
  5. Normal (1.77 stars, 153 notes)
  6. Spring's Another (4.86 stars, 527 notes)
  7. victorica's HD - 4Key (3 stars, 934 notes)
  8. victorica's MX - 4Key (3.79 stars, 1315 notes)
  9. victorica's NM - 4Key (1.64 stars, 365 notes)
  10. Yuki's Extra (6.33 stars, 718 notes)
Download: REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya - Little Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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我一拳打爆小星星
old version:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjkSmgX
Minakami Yuki's Version
Last edited by liaoxingyao , edited 124 times in total.
Alplaza
42 posts
Joined December 2012
Alplaza
Ew finally done the mods . Too lazy to type the problems
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Little Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 37052
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Little Star
TitleUnicode:Little Star
Artist:REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya
Creator:liaoxingyao
Version:Another
Source:Beatmania IIDX
Tags:20th tricoro
BeatmapID:486597
BeatmapSetID:206326

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.1
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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GGFFQQ55
121 posts
Joined March 2013
GGFFQQ55
应邀来摸，渣摸勿喷（another）

general

爷爷，这诗人玩的

HP+1？

其他没啥

音效

不懂我就不乱讲了www

节奏

00:02:624 (1,2) - 这里柑橘空的很厉害

00:11:476 这里漏了一串鼓点

01:00:329 (1) - 从这里开始这段可以试试跟背景鼓点？感觉比这样有意思不少

01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的后面加个三连应该不错

01:44:919 (1,2,3) - 这里也可以跟鼓点吧

01:48:853 (1) - 滑条尾落在这里柑橘有点不爽0.0

排列

00:05:247 (1) - 诶多，类似这样的半圆滑条我有点强迫症。。。中间那个点最好移到中间orz其他类似的我就不书了

00:09:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 开头就这么大间距大丈夫？以及四分之一滑条的速度可以稍低点吧爷爷，这太吓人了

00:11:149 (1) - 柑橘没必要下转盘

00:20:165 (2,3,4) - 跳的有点难看

00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连打这么下有点蛋疼。。。加点四分之一滑条啊往返之类的好些吧应该

00:35:083 (3) - 可以摆开一点

00:41:149 (4,1,2) - 这里的衔接有点断掉的柑橘

00:44:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里间距好大啊爷爷

00:50:493 (1,2,3,4) - 水平的短滑条很难读啊。。。

00:55:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里单点过后连打可以放远点吧，后面也是

01:05:575 (1) - 好难看TAT

01:48:034 (2,1,2,3) - 这里完全可以跳大一点吧。。

01:54:755 (1) - 还是觉得转盘很奇怪。。。

conclusion

连打间距略大

短滑条速度略快

简直人玩
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

应邀来摸，渣摸勿喷（another）

general

爷爷，这诗人玩的

HP+1？ HP7别人都说没人性..没办法

其他没啥

音效

不懂我就不乱讲了www

节奏

00:02:624 (1,2) - 这里柑橘空的很厉害 你书得队 我会Fix
00:11:476 这里漏了一串鼓点 这里是转盘部分...意义不明

01:00:329 (1) - 从这里开始这段可以试试跟背景鼓点？感觉比这样有意思不少 没鼓点啊...

01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的后面加个三连应该不错 wpcap

01:44:919 (1,2,3) - 这里也可以跟鼓点吧 唔...

01:48:853 (1) - 滑条尾落在这里柑橘有点不爽0.0

排列

00:05:247 (1) - 诶多，类似这样的半圆滑条我有点强迫症。。。中间那个点最好移到中间orz其他类似的我就不书了 我试着摆好点...

00:09:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 开头就这么大间距大丈夫？以及四分之一滑条的速度可以稍低点吧爷爷，这太吓人了 好吧...

00:11:149 (1) - 柑橘没必要下转盘 Fixed

00:20:165 (2,3,4) - 跳的有点难看 Fixed

00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连打这么下有点蛋疼。。。加点四分之一滑条啊往返之类的好些吧应该 ....

00:35:083 (3) - 可以摆开一点 Fixed

00:41:149 (4,1,2) - 这里的衔接有点断掉的柑橘 Fixed

00:44:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里间距好大啊爷爷 别吐槽啦>~<

00:50:493 (1,2,3,4) - 水平的短滑条很难读啊。。。四暗刻

00:55:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里单点过后连打可以放远点吧，后面也是 人性点（X

01:05:575 (1) - 好难看TAT 放过我不会画滑条...Fixed 但还是不太好看

01:48:034 (2,1,2,3) - 这里完全可以跳大一点吧。。Fixed

01:54:755 (1) - 还是觉得转盘很奇怪。。。 不会摆了...

conclusion

连打间距略大

短滑条速度略快

简直人玩 爷爷本来就不是人玩的
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
房
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

房
顶
[GB]Rush_FTK
217 posts
Joined July 2013
[GB]Rush_FTK
我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)

2014/09/08 editon:

just some opinion
Warning
Suggestion:
My Opinion:

[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。


Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。

My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。

没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。

作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。

希望我这点话能有所帮助……
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Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
看来Axtra是这个图做的最不错的diff
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Rush_FTK wrote:

我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)
这也要水
Marirose
1,121 posts
Joined September 2012
Marirose
沙皮性药敢不敢rank >:(
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Marirose wrote:

沙皮性药敢不敢rank >:(
std你说我敢不敢hhhhhhhh
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
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难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了

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还收GD吗
liaoxingyao
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Minakami Yuki wrote:

还收GD吗
队(?
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Rush_FTK wrote:

我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)

2014/09/08 editon:

just some opinion
Warning
Suggestion:
My Opinion:

[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。 唔...
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。 fixed

Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。好 只是一般都不会打_吧
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。啥
My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。hao 我std 22w rank你真以为我能pass
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。其实有音

没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。

作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。如果是一时发热的话我怎么会upload嘛hhhh(你怎么可能会继续做下去hhh

希望我这点话能有所帮助……
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hoshisorakiseki wrote:

做完了：
点此展开
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408,280,87214,2,0,L|368:240,1,42.5
368,192,87378,2,0,L|432:192,1,42.5
256,80,87542,2,0,L|256:16,1,42.5
256,304,87706,2,0,L|256:368,1,42.5
468,44,87870,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,340,88034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,112,88198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,272,88362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,180,88526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,204,88690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,248,88853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,136,89017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,32,89181,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,352,89345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,32,89509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,352,89673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,32,89837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,352,90001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,90165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,90329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,72,90493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,292,90821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,90985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,64,91149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,120,91312,2,0,P|364:164|376:212,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,196,91968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,172,92296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,92624,6,0,P|120:328|84:348,1,85
144,200,92952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,252,93116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,136,93280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,324,93362,2,0,L|476:364,1,42.5
364,200,93608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,112,93772,2,0,P|408:68|448:52,1,85
172,340,94099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,94263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,94427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,94591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,94755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,328,94919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,156,95083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,95247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,240,95411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,36,95575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,60,95739,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,95903,2,0,L|400:264,1,42.5
56,232,96067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,96231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,332,96394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,148,96558,2,0,P|440:88|420:52,1,85
36,144,96886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,348,97050,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,97132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,36,97214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,97296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,36,97378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,88,97460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,97542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,97624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,97706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,97788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,97870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,97952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,98034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,192,98116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,98198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,98280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,98362,5,0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,98526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,32,98853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,352,99017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,32,99345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,352,99509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,99837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,100001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,104,100165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,260,100329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,234,100411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,149,100493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,123,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,100657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,316,100821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,232,100985,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,164,101149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,101476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,60,101640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,336,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,68,101968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,328,102132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,262,102296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,121,102378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,318,102460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,65,102542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,350,102624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,33,102706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,350,102788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,33,102870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,318,102952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,65,103034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,262,103116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,121,103198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,191,103280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,192,103362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103608,12,0,104919,0:0:0:0:
436,328,105247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,105411,2,0,L|108:336,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,105739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,105821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,116,106067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,244,106149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,260,106231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,106312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,106394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,52,106558,2,0,P|192:56|232:72,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,107050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,107214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,344,107378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,72,107542,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,107788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,108034,2,0,P|100:328|72:304,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,108444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,108690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,272,108853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,340,109017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,109099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,109345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,336,109509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,329,109837,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,109919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,106,110001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,54,110083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,192,110165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,196,110329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,110493,2,0,P|308:224|292:260,1,85
148,112,110821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,108,110985,2,0,P|28:80|28:32,1,85
448,100,111312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,336,111394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,292,111476,2,0,P|408:272|432:232,1,85
360,212,111804,2,0,P|368:160|356:132,1,85
292,180,112132,2,0,P|256:144|212:144,1,85
232,216,112460,2,0,P|188:240|164:288,1,85
92,88,112788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,132,112870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,356,112952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,113116,2,0,L|316:104,1,42.5
96,352,113280,2,0,L|56:308,1,42.5
308,48,113444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,113526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,113608,2,0,L|200:312,1,42.5
64,152,113772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,88,113853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,113935,2,0,L|428:236,1,42.5
72,260,114099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,114345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,32,114591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114755,12,0,115411,0:0:0:0:
难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了

真·for fun
wocao
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

ZZHBOY wrote:

das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
咦 ZZH
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close.
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here.
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -

[spring's standard]
请开DS拖一遍note。
00:01:313 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
00:08:853 (3,2) - 不要这样叠
00:11:804 (1) - 1/1
00:24:263 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - DS保持一致
00:30:165 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - standard搞3/4单点？让新手怎么活
00:41:312 (2,1) - 别贴到一起
00:48:526 (1,2) - 还是DS问题
00:53:772 (1,1,1) - Dont spam NC
00:55:247 (2,3,1) - 节奏有点乱
01:10:821 (1,2,3) - 滑条变速必须NC
01:18:690 (1) - standard不要搞这样的滑条。

[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC

[Europhia's Another]
00:13:935 (4,5) - 跳有些大？
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 正三角形多好
01:46:231 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - blanket

美丽！~
还可以提升很多，Good Luck！ :3
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liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Regraz wrote:

Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以 噢（
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close. 咦
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here. 先放着
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -
玛德我英语不好

[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC

未完待续
没回复的地方就是fix了
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，4K连个HD都没有
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) -
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适

[Euphoria's Another]
00:02:624 (1,2) - 我个人听起来这两个滑条下长了，要么就是音效没搞好（我要是想这么弄的话一般都会把结尾搞成静音可以试试
00:07:870 (1,2) - 同上
00:35:247 (1,2) - DS注意
01:14:263 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:755 (4,5,6) - DS
总之直线型的滑条太多，感觉flow辣美观度辣差了点

[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！

先骗一kds
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so 4K连个HD都没有 还没开坑呢爷爷
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适 先放着
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适

[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS no
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！唔
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！因为我只会做连打图
先骗一kds
没回复就是fix了
MSVISUALSTUDIO
10 posts
Joined February 2012
MSVISUALSTUDIO
Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了

[Yuki]
应该是所有中基础最好的 做的最好的了 提些小建议

00:04:263 (2) - 建议缩短为1/2 强做梗的话并不是很好
00:05:247 (1,2,3,4) - slider尾部shift+E
00:10:493 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:13:116 (1,2) - ^, 而且这里已经是音乐沉下去的地方 音效最好干净一些
00:14:427 (1) - ^
00:15:739 (1,2) - ^ 这种就不提了先
00:16:558 (2,3,4,1) - 这里的spacing很不舒服啊 我个人感觉是做跳会更有感觉
00:41:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的叠滑条有些影响kiai应有的movement 可以将这些略微错开
01:14:263 - 这里应该是加note的, 为了和01:11:640 - 这里的节奏统一
01:14:755 (1,2,3) - 挺影响感觉的.. 头finish的话不如尝试下3/4 节奏
01:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
01:37:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:53:361 (8,1) - 很容易误读的
00:21:968 (5,6,7,8,1) - 老m式

[Axtra]

00:11:804 - 这里前面做的很棒
00:30:165 - 00:35:083 - nice
kiai太枯燥了 除了连打还是连打 也就是偶尔出现了几个1/4滑条也是不够的 建议还是kiai重新考虑下节奏

00:20:985 (1,1,1) - 依我看的话这个变速程度还不够适合曲子
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种梗很有失一张图的感觉
01:31:640 (1,1,1) - 这个加速用的不太适合 可以减慢些速度
01:49:345 (1,1) - 容易误读成1/4
01:54:099 (1,1) - 这样的收尾还不够 建议尝试下你之前用的那种变速

[Yoru]
还是我之前说的 spacing问题 感觉还是注意的不够

00:11:804 - 00:20:985 - 这一段排列还是节奏挺明显的不够 我建议这里把滑条速度降低一些 再重新考虑下 不要把整张图全做的一样难. 而是该难的地方难 该简单一些的地方简单一些

01:13:444 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 如果是forfun的话随便 如果是以rank向的心态做的这图 这里必须要改的

=.=感觉forfun的比例大点 就说说基本吧

[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...

还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧

[Euphoria]
跟你说过啦 就不摸了
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

MSVISUALSTUDIO wrote:

Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了


[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...

还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧
没回复就是fix了
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
[quote="liaoxingyao"][quote="lsahi"][General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so ←好吧osu的8K我根本就看不懂要按哪个键惹

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明 ←这个也是DS的问题
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊 ←啊嘞？
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
莱克星
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Regraz wrote:

莱克星
歇歇~~11111
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
来来来骗下一半的分
[Yoru's Extra]
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 这段处理的不太理想，整个flow看起来十分僵硬，建议借鉴下三月精hard里面的梗
00:16:231 (4,5,6) - 有点不对劲，overmap？
00:32:132 (4) - NC
00:32:214 (1) - 删NC
还有上面那两个为啥突然变这种音效了我很在意！
00:34:591 (1,2,3) - 我非常喜欢这个梗！不过不是触卡的话尽量还是别做这种了，这梗还是有点超前
00:35:247 (1,2,3) - 起止位置不太对
00:37:952 (5) - 理解不能
00:56:640 (4,4,4,4) - 这些大转角都给我NC啊！
01:23:526 (4) - 还有这个也是、
总之后面还有连打段挺多
还有个缺点，连打段overmap很严重
不过我挺喜欢有乳的二连

[Axtra]
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段处理的不太好
00:59:099 (1) - 转盘后面接note间隔时间太短！大忌
还有，大转角连打没有NC的情况也是有的
最后，神图预感

[Yuki's Extra]
00:04:263 (2) - 这个滑条最好短一点，然后紧接一个四分拍滑条，删掉后面的滑条，听起来更顺
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 哇！好可怕！
总之同样神！

[Touchscreen]
没触屏摸个激激

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上
shionelove
1,521 posts
Joined September 2010
shionelove
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira

liaoxingyao wrote:

lsahi wrote:

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上
rabk2333新钱语get
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

rabk2333新钱语get
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
什么两个 你只能拿一个hhh(
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
The map isn't for rank so i don't delete lol
Marirose
1,121 posts
Joined September 2012
Marirose

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experience
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think ;)
shionelove
1,521 posts
Joined September 2010
shionelove

Marirose wrote:

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experience
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think ;)
the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

hutunohito wrote:

the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
OK,diff name changed.
Kawawa
Kawawa
hello.

i think mania mod about..

Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add

and fianl..

just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add

XD good luck
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

KawaEE wrote:

hello.

i think mania mod about..

Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete fixed
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add

and fianl..

just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add

XD good luck
This is your kudosu wwww
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao
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