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REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya - Little Star [OsuMania|Osu]

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Alplaza
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Joined December 2012
Alplaza
Ew finally done the mods . Too lazy to type the problems
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Little Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 37052
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Little Star
TitleUnicode:Little Star
Artist:REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE Feat. Ayumi Nomiya
Creator:liaoxingyao
Version:Another
Source:Beatmania IIDX
Tags:20th tricoro
BeatmapID:486597
BeatmapSetID:206326

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.1
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

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GGFFQQ55
121 posts
Joined March 2013
GGFFQQ55
应邀来摸，渣摸勿喷（another）

general

爷爷，这诗人玩的

HP+1？

其他没啥

音效

不懂我就不乱讲了www

节奏

00:02:624 (1,2) - 这里柑橘空的很厉害

00:11:476 这里漏了一串鼓点

01:00:329 (1) - 从这里开始这段可以试试跟背景鼓点？感觉比这样有意思不少

01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的后面加个三连应该不错

01:44:919 (1,2,3) - 这里也可以跟鼓点吧

01:48:853 (1) - 滑条尾落在这里柑橘有点不爽0.0

排列

00:05:247 (1) - 诶多，类似这样的半圆滑条我有点强迫症。。。中间那个点最好移到中间orz其他类似的我就不书了

00:09:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 开头就这么大间距大丈夫？以及四分之一滑条的速度可以稍低点吧爷爷，这太吓人了

00:11:149 (1) - 柑橘没必要下转盘

00:20:165 (2,3,4) - 跳的有点难看

00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连打这么下有点蛋疼。。。加点四分之一滑条啊往返之类的好些吧应该

00:35:083 (3) - 可以摆开一点

00:41:149 (4,1,2) - 这里的衔接有点断掉的柑橘

00:44:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里间距好大啊爷爷

00:50:493 (1,2,3,4) - 水平的短滑条很难读啊。。。

00:55:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里单点过后连打可以放远点吧，后面也是

01:05:575 (1) - 好难看TAT

01:48:034 (2,1,2,3) - 这里完全可以跳大一点吧。。

01:54:755 (1) - 还是觉得转盘很奇怪。。。

conclusion

连打间距略大

短滑条速度略快

简直人玩
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

应邀来摸，渣摸勿喷（another）

general

爷爷，这诗人玩的

HP+1？ HP7别人都说没人性..没办法

其他没啥

音效

不懂我就不乱讲了www

节奏

00:02:624 (1,2) - 这里柑橘空的很厉害 你书得队 我会Fix
00:11:476 这里漏了一串鼓点 这里是转盘部分...意义不明

01:00:329 (1) - 从这里开始这段可以试试跟背景鼓点？感觉比这样有意思不少 没鼓点啊...

01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的后面加个三连应该不错 wpcap

01:44:919 (1,2,3) - 这里也可以跟鼓点吧 唔...

01:48:853 (1) - 滑条尾落在这里柑橘有点不爽0.0

排列

00:05:247 (1) - 诶多，类似这样的半圆滑条我有点强迫症。。。中间那个点最好移到中间orz其他类似的我就不书了 我试着摆好点...

00:09:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 开头就这么大间距大丈夫？以及四分之一滑条的速度可以稍低点吧爷爷，这太吓人了 好吧...

00:11:149 (1) - 柑橘没必要下转盘 Fixed

00:20:165 (2,3,4) - 跳的有点难看 Fixed

00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连打这么下有点蛋疼。。。加点四分之一滑条啊往返之类的好些吧应该 ....

00:35:083 (3) - 可以摆开一点 Fixed

00:41:149 (4,1,2) - 这里的衔接有点断掉的柑橘 Fixed

00:44:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里间距好大啊爷爷 别吐槽啦>~<

00:50:493 (1,2,3,4) - 水平的短滑条很难读啊。。。四暗刻

00:55:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里单点过后连打可以放远点吧，后面也是 人性点（X

01:05:575 (1) - 好难看TAT 放过我不会画滑条...Fixed 但还是不太好看

01:48:034 (2,1,2,3) - 这里完全可以跳大一点吧。。Fixed

01:54:755 (1) - 还是觉得转盘很奇怪。。。 不会摆了...

conclusion

连打间距略大

短滑条速度略快

简直人玩 爷爷本来就不是人玩的
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
房
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

房
顶
[GB]Rush_FTK
217 posts
Joined July 2013
[GB]Rush_FTK
我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)

2014/09/08 editon:

just some opinion
Warning
Suggestion:
My Opinion:

[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。


Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。

My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。

没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。

作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。

希望我这点话能有所帮助……
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Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
看来Axtra是这个图做的最不错的diff
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Rush_FTK wrote:

我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)
这也要水
Marirose
1,121 posts
Joined September 2012
Marirose
沙皮性药敢不敢rank >:(
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Marirose wrote:

沙皮性药敢不敢rank >:(
std你说我敢不敢hhhhhhhh
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
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难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了

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还收GD吗
liaoxingyao
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Minakami Yuki wrote:

还收GD吗
队(?
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Rush_FTK wrote:

我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】

Good Luck ;)

2014/09/08 editon:

just some opinion
Warning
Suggestion:
My Opinion:

[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。 唔...
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。 fixed

Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。好 只是一般都不会打_吧
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。啥
My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。hao 我std 22w rank你真以为我能pass
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。其实有音

没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。

作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。如果是一时发热的话我怎么会upload嘛hhhh(你怎么可能会继续做下去hhh

希望我这点话能有所帮助……
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hoshisorakiseki wrote:

做完了：
点此展开
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332,352,90001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,90165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,90329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,72,90493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,292,90821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,90985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,64,91149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,120,91312,2,0,P|364:164|376:212,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,196,91968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,172,92296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,92624,6,0,P|120:328|84:348,1,85
144,200,92952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,252,93116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,136,93280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,324,93362,2,0,L|476:364,1,42.5
364,200,93608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,112,93772,2,0,P|408:68|448:52,1,85
172,340,94099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,94263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,94427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,94591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,94755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,328,94919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,156,95083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,95247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,240,95411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,36,95575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,60,95739,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,95903,2,0,L|400:264,1,42.5
56,232,96067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,96231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,332,96394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,148,96558,2,0,P|440:88|420:52,1,85
36,144,96886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,348,97050,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,97132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,36,97214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,97296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,36,97378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,88,97460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,97542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,97624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,97706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,97788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,97870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,97952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,98034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,192,98116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,98198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,98280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,98362,5,0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,98526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,32,98853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,352,99017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,32,99345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,352,99509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,99837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,100001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,104,100165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,260,100329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,234,100411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,149,100493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,123,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,100657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,316,100821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,232,100985,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,164,101149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,101476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,60,101640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,336,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,68,101968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,328,102132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,262,102296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,121,102378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,318,102460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,65,102542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,350,102624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,33,102706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,350,102788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,33,102870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,318,102952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,65,103034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,262,103116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,121,103198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,191,103280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,192,103362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103608,12,0,104919,0:0:0:0:
436,328,105247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,105411,2,0,L|108:336,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,105739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,105821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,116,106067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,244,106149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,260,106231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,106312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,106394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,52,106558,2,0,P|192:56|232:72,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,107050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,107214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,344,107378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,72,107542,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,107788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,108034,2,0,P|100:328|72:304,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,108444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,108690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,272,108853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,340,109017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,109099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,109345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,336,109509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,329,109837,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,109919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,106,110001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,54,110083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,192,110165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,196,110329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,110493,2,0,P|308:224|292:260,1,85
148,112,110821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,108,110985,2,0,P|28:80|28:32,1,85
448,100,111312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,336,111394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,292,111476,2,0,P|408:272|432:232,1,85
360,212,111804,2,0,P|368:160|356:132,1,85
292,180,112132,2,0,P|256:144|212:144,1,85
232,216,112460,2,0,P|188:240|164:288,1,85
92,88,112788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,132,112870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,356,112952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,304,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,113116,2,0,L|316:104,1,42.5
96,352,113280,2,0,L|56:308,1,42.5
308,48,113444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,113526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,113608,2,0,L|200:312,1,42.5
64,152,113772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,88,113853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,113935,2,0,L|428:236,1,42.5
72,260,114099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,114345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,32,114591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114755,12,0,115411,0:0:0:0:
难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了

真·for fun
wocao
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

ZZHBOY wrote:

das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
咦 ZZH
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close.
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here.
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -

[spring's standard]
请开DS拖一遍note。
00:01:313 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
00:08:853 (3,2) - 不要这样叠
00:11:804 (1) - 1/1
00:24:263 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - DS保持一致
00:30:165 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - standard搞3/4单点？让新手怎么活
00:41:312 (2,1) - 别贴到一起
00:48:526 (1,2) - 还是DS问题
00:53:772 (1,1,1) - Dont spam NC
00:55:247 (2,3,1) - 节奏有点乱
01:10:821 (1,2,3) - 滑条变速必须NC
01:18:690 (1) - standard不要搞这样的滑条。

[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC

[Europhia's Another]
00:13:935 (4,5) - 跳有些大？
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 正三角形多好
01:46:231 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - blanket

美丽！~
还可以提升很多，Good Luck！ :3
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liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Regraz wrote:

Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以 噢（
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close. 咦
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here. 先放着
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -
玛德我英语不好

[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC

未完待续
没回复的地方就是fix了
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，4K连个HD都没有
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) -
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适

[Euphoria's Another]
00:02:624 (1,2) - 我个人听起来这两个滑条下长了，要么就是音效没搞好（我要是想这么弄的话一般都会把结尾搞成静音可以试试
00:07:870 (1,2) - 同上
00:35:247 (1,2) - DS注意
01:14:263 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:755 (4,5,6) - DS
总之直线型的滑条太多，感觉flow辣美观度辣差了点

[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！

先骗一kds
liaoxingyao
864 posts
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Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so 4K连个HD都没有 还没开坑呢爷爷
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适 先放着
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适

[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS no
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！唔
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！因为我只会做连打图
先骗一kds
没回复就是fix了
MSVISUALSTUDIO
10 posts
Joined February 2012
MSVISUALSTUDIO
Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了

[Yuki]
应该是所有中基础最好的 做的最好的了 提些小建议

00:04:263 (2) - 建议缩短为1/2 强做梗的话并不是很好
00:05:247 (1,2,3,4) - slider尾部shift+E
00:10:493 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:13:116 (1,2) - ^, 而且这里已经是音乐沉下去的地方 音效最好干净一些
00:14:427 (1) - ^
00:15:739 (1,2) - ^ 这种就不提了先
00:16:558 (2,3,4,1) - 这里的spacing很不舒服啊 我个人感觉是做跳会更有感觉
00:41:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的叠滑条有些影响kiai应有的movement 可以将这些略微错开
01:14:263 - 这里应该是加note的, 为了和01:11:640 - 这里的节奏统一
01:14:755 (1,2,3) - 挺影响感觉的.. 头finish的话不如尝试下3/4 节奏
01:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
01:37:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:53:361 (8,1) - 很容易误读的
00:21:968 (5,6,7,8,1) - 老m式

[Axtra]

00:11:804 - 这里前面做的很棒
00:30:165 - 00:35:083 - nice
kiai太枯燥了 除了连打还是连打 也就是偶尔出现了几个1/4滑条也是不够的 建议还是kiai重新考虑下节奏

00:20:985 (1,1,1) - 依我看的话这个变速程度还不够适合曲子
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种梗很有失一张图的感觉
01:31:640 (1,1,1) - 这个加速用的不太适合 可以减慢些速度
01:49:345 (1,1) - 容易误读成1/4
01:54:099 (1,1) - 这样的收尾还不够 建议尝试下你之前用的那种变速

[Yoru]
还是我之前说的 spacing问题 感觉还是注意的不够

00:11:804 - 00:20:985 - 这一段排列还是节奏挺明显的不够 我建议这里把滑条速度降低一些 再重新考虑下 不要把整张图全做的一样难. 而是该难的地方难 该简单一些的地方简单一些

01:13:444 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 如果是forfun的话随便 如果是以rank向的心态做的这图 这里必须要改的

=.=感觉forfun的比例大点 就说说基本吧

[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...

还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧

[Euphoria]
跟你说过啦 就不摸了
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

MSVISUALSTUDIO wrote:

Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了


[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...

还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧
没回复就是fix了
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
[quote="liaoxingyao"][quote="lsahi"][General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so ←好吧osu的8K我根本就看不懂要按哪个键惹

[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明 ←这个也是DS的问题
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊 ←啊嘞？
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
莱克星
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
liaoxingyao

Regraz wrote:

莱克星
歇歇~~11111
Harubi Lira
147 posts
Joined May 2012
Harubi Lira
来来来骗下一半的分
[Yoru's Extra]
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 这段处理的不太理想，整个flow看起来十分僵硬，建议借鉴下三月精hard里面的梗
00:16:231 (4,5,6) - 有点不对劲，overmap？
00:32:132 (4) - NC
00:32:214 (1) - 删NC
还有上面那两个为啥突然变这种音效了我很在意！
00:34:591 (1,2,3) - 我非常喜欢这个梗！不过不是触卡的话尽量还是别做这种了，这梗还是有点超前
00:35:247 (1,2,3) - 起止位置不太对
00:37:952 (5) - 理解不能
00:56:640 (4,4,4,4) - 这些大转角都给我NC啊！
01:23:526 (4) - 还有这个也是、
总之后面还有连打段挺多
还有个缺点，连打段overmap很严重
不过我挺喜欢有乳的二连

[Axtra]
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段处理的不太好
00:59:099 (1) - 转盘后面接note间隔时间太短！大忌
还有，大转角连打没有NC的情况也是有的
最后，神图预感

[Yuki's Extra]
00:04:263 (2) - 这个滑条最好短一点，然后紧接一个四分拍滑条，删掉后面的滑条，听起来更顺
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 哇！好可怕！
总之同样神！

[Touchscreen]
没触屏摸个激激

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上
shionelove
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shionelove
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
Harubi Lira
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Harubi Lira

liaoxingyao wrote:

lsahi wrote:

[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上
rabk2333新钱语get
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao

lsahi wrote:

rabk2333新钱语get
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
什么两个 你只能拿一个hhh(
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
The map isn't for rank so i don't delete lol
Marirose
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Marirose

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experience
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think ;)
shionelove
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shionelove

Marirose wrote:

hutunohito wrote:

o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX

DON'T COPY
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experience
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think ;)
the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao

hutunohito wrote:

the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
OK,diff name changed.
Kawawa
Kawawa
hello.

i think mania mod about..

Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add

and fianl..

just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add

XD good luck
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao

KawaEE wrote:

hello.

i think mania mod about..

Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete fixed
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add

and fianl..

just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add

XD good luck
This is your kudosu wwww
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