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我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】
Good Luck
2014/09/08 editon:
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】
Good Luck
2014/09/08 editon:
just some opinion
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Suggestion:
My Opinion:
[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。
Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。
My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。
没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。
作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。
希望我这点话能有所帮助……
Suggestion:
My Opinion:
[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。
Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。
My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。
没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。
作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。
希望我这点话能有所帮助……
Topic Starter
这也要水Rush_FTK wrote:
我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】
Good Luck
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std你说我敢不敢hhhhhhhhMarirose wrote:
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难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了osu file format v13
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真·for fun
还收GD吗
Topic Starter
队(?Minakami Yuki wrote:
还收GD吗
Topic Starter
Rush_FTK wrote:
我这个人不怎么喜欢水贴的。
所以一般水贴先占坑然后补mod骗kds。
后来看了看作者。
水一次好了。
【完】
Good Luck
2014/09/08 editon:just some opinionWarning
Suggestion:
My Opinion:
[General]
Warning
- 只允许最高难度有特别的名称，除非一套都是自定义名称。 唔...
- 没看错的话有闪光SB但是没有闪光警告。 fixed
Suggestion:
- 关注一下名称标签，例：Alex li→Alex_li否则系统会认为是两个。好只是一般都不会打_吧
- 我相信20th不应作为一个标签使用。啥
My Opinion:
- 即使是简单难度，CZ太大也会使滑条很难捏，可以适当放小一点。
- 做的图保证你能pass，比如Extra中00:05:247 (1,2,3,4)。hao我std 22w rank你真以为我能pass
- 自造节奏慎用 例如Extra中00:28:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这个连打我认为不是特别合适。其实有音
没有什么动力摸图，而且怕摸坏了，实在抱歉。
作图很辛苦，所以在Upload前想清楚，自己是不是要做下去，还是只是一时发热。如果是一时发热的话我怎么会upload嘛hhhh(你怎么可能会继续做下去hhh
希望我这点话能有所帮助……
Topic Starter
wocaohoshisorakiseki wrote:
做完了：点此展开难度不高，就11星而已，跟那些几十星的相比兼职叒暴了osu file format v13
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Tags:20th Alex Li Euphoria Hakurei Yoru spring Marirose
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452,170,53362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,260,53444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,91,53526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,342,53608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,17,53690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,329,53772,5,0,0:0:0:0:
191,31,53935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,260,54263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,91,54427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,342,54755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,17,54919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,321,55247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
442,57,55411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,125,55575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,259,55739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,196,56067,2,0,P|48:193|23:151,1,85
412,333,56394,5,0,0:0:0:0:
106,113,56558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,220,56722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,43,56886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,112,57050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,33,57214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,168,57378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,92,57542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,304,57706,5,0,0:0:0:0:
371,78,57870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,178,58034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,212,58198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,299,58362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,88,58526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,361,58690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,37,58853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,168,60657,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,320,63935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,84,64919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,144,69427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,224,70165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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172,344,70657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,188,79263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,308,79509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,268,79673,2,0,L|432:300,1,42.5
212,80,79837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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313,245,82624,6,0,P|349:269|365:313,1,85
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256,112,83608,2,0,P|247:69|267:27,1,85
203,249,83935,2,0,P|179:285|135:301,1,85
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256,304,87706,2,0,L|256:368,1,42.5
468,44,87870,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,120,91312,2,0,P|364:164|376:212,2,85,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,172,92296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,36,95575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,228,95903,2,0,L|400:264,1,42.5
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148,160,96231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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36,144,96886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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24,352,99017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,108,99837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,100001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,104,100165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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197,234,100411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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278,123,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,100657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,232,100985,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,164,101149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,101476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,336,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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40,328,102132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,262,102296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,121,102378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,318,102460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,65,102542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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219,33,102706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,336,106394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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444,248,107050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,72,107542,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,107788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,112,110821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,336,111394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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92,88,112788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,132,112870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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476,304,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,32,113526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,113608,2,0,L|200:312,1,42.5
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28,88,113853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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真·for fun
das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
Topic Starter
咦 ZZHZZHBOY wrote:
das那个kiai不要全程1/4 shapi
Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close.
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here.
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -
[spring's standard]
请开DS拖一遍note。
00:01:313 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
00:08:853 (3,2) - 不要这样叠
00:11:804 (1) - 1/1
00:24:263 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - DS保持一致
00:30:165 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - standard搞3/4单点？让新手怎么活
00:41:312 (2,1) - 别贴到一起
00:48:526 (1,2) - 还是DS问题
00:53:772 (1,1,1) - Dont spam NC
00:55:247 (2,3,1) - 节奏有点乱
01:10:821 (1,2,3) - 滑条变速必须NC
01:18:690 (1) - standard不要搞这样的滑条。
[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC
[Europhia's Another]
00:13:935 (4,5) - 跳有些大？
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 正三角形多好
01:46:231 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - blanket
美丽！~
还可以提升很多，Good Luck！ :3
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close.
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here.
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -
[spring's standard]
请开DS拖一遍note。
00:01:313 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
00:08:853 (3,2) - 不要这样叠
00:11:804 (1) - 1/1
00:24:263 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - DS保持一致
00:30:165 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - standard搞3/4单点？让新手怎么活
00:41:312 (2,1) - 别贴到一起
00:48:526 (1,2) - 还是DS问题
00:53:772 (1,1,1) - Dont spam NC
00:55:247 (2,3,1) - 节奏有点乱
01:10:821 (1,2,3) - 滑条变速必须NC
01:18:690 (1) - standard不要搞这样的滑条。
[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC
[Europhia's Another]
00:13:935 (4,5) - 跳有些大？
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 正三角形多好
01:46:231 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - blanket
美丽！~
还可以提升很多，Good Luck！ :3
Topic Starter
没回复的地方就是fix了Regraz wrote:
Hi!
Just some suggestions.
[Beginner]
-0.5 AR
00:17:050 (1) - 这种形状的东西搞一两个还可以 噢（
00:34:099 (2,3) - Use a reverse slider
00:35:083 (3,1) - Too close. 咦
00:38:034 (1,2,1,2) - Use blankets here. 先放着
00:43:935 (2) - Hidden slider, unrankable.
00:49:837 (2,3,1) - 3距离其他两个note的距离差得很明显吧，希望作图时认真一些。
01:20:001 (2) - Beginner别搞多次折返，新人只会一次折返。
01:35:411 (3) - same as 00:49:837 (2,3,1) -玛德我英语不好
[Hyper]
00:03:935 (1) - whistle不好听
00:43:935 (1,2,1,2) - 这个遮挡很不好
01:22:788 - blanket做好
01:50:001 (1) - 去掉NC
未完待续
[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，4K连个HD都没有
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！
[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) -
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适
[Euphoria's Another]
00:02:624 (1,2) - 我个人听起来这两个滑条下长了，要么就是音效没搞好（我要是想这么弄的话一般都会把结尾搞成静音可以试试
00:07:870 (1,2) - 同上
00:35:247 (1,2) - DS注意
01:14:263 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:755 (4,5,6) - DS
总之直线型的滑条太多，感觉flow辣美观度辣差了点
[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！
先骗一kds
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，4K连个HD都没有
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！
[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) -
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适
[Euphoria's Another]
00:02:624 (1,2) - 我个人听起来这两个滑条下长了，要么就是音效没搞好（我要是想这么弄的话一般都会把结尾搞成静音可以试试
00:07:870 (1,2) - 同上
00:35:247 (1,2) - DS注意
01:14:263 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:755 (4,5,6) - DS
总之直线型的滑条太多，感觉flow辣美观度辣差了点
[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！
先骗一kds
Topic Starter
没回复就是fix了lsahi wrote:
[General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so 4K连个HD都没有 还没开坑呢爷爷
还有，别因为拉克丝的那张就把所有难度搞成连打图啊，，，就没有一个人跟vocal的么！
[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊
00:35:411 (1,2,1,2) - 这四个在这个难度的话出现感觉有点不太合适 先放着
01:10:657 (4,1) - 最好把前面的四分滑条改成两个note会比较顺
01:29:181 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同样出现在这个难度不合适
[Extra]
00:08:526 (3) - 肥肠别扭！
00:32:788 (1) - DS no
01:30:493 (1) - 180连打接滑条还有大跳是给人玩的吗！唔
总体来说没什么大问题，但是为啥是连打图！因为我只会做连打图
先骗一kds
Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了
[Yuki]
应该是所有中基础最好的 做的最好的了 提些小建议
00:04:263 (2) - 建议缩短为1/2 强做梗的话并不是很好
00:05:247 (1,2,3,4) - slider尾部shift+E
00:10:493 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:13:116 (1,2) - ^, 而且这里已经是音乐沉下去的地方 音效最好干净一些
00:14:427 (1) - ^
00:15:739 (1,2) - ^ 这种就不提了先
00:16:558 (2,3,4,1) - 这里的spacing很不舒服啊 我个人感觉是做跳会更有感觉
00:41:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的叠滑条有些影响kiai应有的movement 可以将这些略微错开
01:14:263 - 这里应该是加note的, 为了和01:11:640 - 这里的节奏统一
01:14:755 (1,2,3) - 挺影响感觉的.. 头finish的话不如尝试下3/4 节奏
01:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
01:37:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:53:361 (8,1) - 很容易误读的
00:21:968 (5,6,7,8,1) - 老m式
[Axtra]
00:11:804 - 这里前面做的很棒
00:30:165 - 00:35:083 - nice
kiai太枯燥了 除了连打还是连打 也就是偶尔出现了几个1/4滑条也是不够的 建议还是kiai重新考虑下节奏
00:20:985 (1,1,1) - 依我看的话这个变速程度还不够适合曲子
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种梗很有失一张图的感觉
01:31:640 (1,1,1) - 这个加速用的不太适合 可以减慢些速度
01:49:345 (1,1) - 容易误读成1/4
01:54:099 (1,1) - 这样的收尾还不够 建议尝试下你之前用的那种变速
[Yoru]
还是我之前说的 spacing问题 感觉还是注意的不够
00:11:804 - 00:20:985 - 这一段排列还是节奏挺明显的不够 我建议这里把滑条速度降低一些 再重新考虑下 不要把整张图全做的一样难. 而是该难的地方难 该简单一些的地方简单一些
01:13:444 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 如果是forfun的话随便 如果是以rank向的心态做的这图 这里必须要改的
=.=感觉forfun的比例大点 就说说基本吧
[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...
还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧
[Euphoria]
跟你说过啦 就不摸了
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了
[Yuki]
应该是所有中基础最好的 做的最好的了 提些小建议
00:04:263 (2) - 建议缩短为1/2 强做梗的话并不是很好
00:05:247 (1,2,3,4) - slider尾部shift+E
00:10:493 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:13:116 (1,2) - ^, 而且这里已经是音乐沉下去的地方 音效最好干净一些
00:14:427 (1) - ^
00:15:739 (1,2) - ^ 这种就不提了先
00:16:558 (2,3,4,1) - 这里的spacing很不舒服啊 我个人感觉是做跳会更有感觉
00:41:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的叠滑条有些影响kiai应有的movement 可以将这些略微错开
01:14:263 - 这里应该是加note的, 为了和01:11:640 - 这里的节奏统一
01:14:755 (1,2,3) - 挺影响感觉的.. 头finish的话不如尝试下3/4 节奏
01:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
01:37:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:53:361 (8,1) - 很容易误读的
00:21:968 (5,6,7,8,1) - 老m式
[Axtra]
00:11:804 - 这里前面做的很棒
00:30:165 - 00:35:083 - nice
kiai太枯燥了 除了连打还是连打 也就是偶尔出现了几个1/4滑条也是不够的 建议还是kiai重新考虑下节奏
00:20:985 (1,1,1) - 依我看的话这个变速程度还不够适合曲子
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种梗很有失一张图的感觉
01:31:640 (1,1,1) - 这个加速用的不太适合 可以减慢些速度
01:49:345 (1,1) - 容易误读成1/4
01:54:099 (1,1) - 这样的收尾还不够 建议尝试下你之前用的那种变速
[Yoru]
还是我之前说的 spacing问题 感觉还是注意的不够
00:11:804 - 00:20:985 - 这一段排列还是节奏挺明显的不够 我建议这里把滑条速度降低一些 再重新考虑下 不要把整张图全做的一样难. 而是该难的地方难 该简单一些的地方简单一些
01:13:444 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
01:16:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 如果是forfun的话随便 如果是以rank向的心态做的这图 这里必须要改的
=.=感觉forfun的比例大点 就说说基本吧
[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...
还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧
[Euphoria]
跟你说过啦 就不摸了
Topic Starter
没回复就是fix了MSVISUALSTUDIO wrote:
Hey
既然是for fun的话 我就直接看高难度了
[Extra]
最需要说的地方跟红白的一样 是spacing问题
00:02:296 (4,1) - 比如这里就太小了,00:01:640 (2,3,4) - 就以这三个间距看的话 后面的(4,1) 间距应该至少保持一样 或者干脆做成跳
00:03:280 (3,4) - 还有这种 以及很多这种类似的问题 ...
还有就是一组梗内部的确是需要有联系的 但是梗与梗之间也是需要联系的
比如可以清楚看到00:14:099 (2,3) - 这是一组 00:14:755 (1,2) - 这是一组 00:15:411 (1,2,3,4) - 这是一组, 一组的内部都有联系. 但是这三组之间关联度不足 尤其是spacing方面. 只是拿这个当例子, 其实整张图很多地方都缺乏这种, 自己体会下加油看看吧
[quote="liaoxingyao"][quote="lsahi"][General]
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so ←好吧osu的8K我根本就看不懂要按哪个键惹
[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明 ←这个也是DS的问题
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊 ←啊嘞？
8K骂娘人玩？7+1还差不多吧，小x的8K Diff本身就是从2DX转来的 so ←好吧osu的8K我根本就看不懂要按哪个键惹
[Hyper]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - 意义不明 ←这个也是DS的问题
00:16:886 (3) - 开DS吧 开了啊 ←啊嘞？
莱克星
Topic Starter
歇歇~~11111Regraz wrote:
莱克星
来来来骗下一半的分
[Yoru's Extra]
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 这段处理的不太理想，整个flow看起来十分僵硬，建议借鉴下三月精hard里面的梗
00:16:231 (4,5,6) - 有点不对劲，overmap？
00:32:132 (4) - NC
00:32:214 (1) - 删NC
还有上面那两个为啥突然变这种音效了我很在意！
00:34:591 (1,2,3) - 我非常喜欢这个梗！不过不是触卡的话尽量还是别做这种了，这梗还是有点超前
00:35:247 (1,2,3) - 起止位置不太对
00:37:952 (5) - 理解不能
00:56:640 (4,4,4,4) - 这些大转角都给我NC啊！
01:23:526 (4) - 还有这个也是、
总之后面还有连打段挺多
还有个缺点，连打段overmap很严重
不过我挺喜欢有乳的二连
[Axtra]
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段处理的不太好
00:59:099 (1) - 转盘后面接note间隔时间太短！大忌
还有，大转角连打没有NC的情况也是有的
最后，神图预感
[Yuki's Extra]
00:04:263 (2) - 这个滑条最好短一点，然后紧接一个四分拍滑条，删掉后面的滑条，听起来更顺
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 哇！好可怕！
总之同样神！
[Touchscreen]
没触屏摸个激激
[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
[Yoru's Extra]
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 这段处理的不太理想，整个flow看起来十分僵硬，建议借鉴下三月精hard里面的梗
00:16:231 (4,5,6) - 有点不对劲，overmap？
00:32:132 (4) - NC
00:32:214 (1) - 删NC
还有上面那两个为啥突然变这种音效了我很在意！
00:34:591 (1,2,3) - 我非常喜欢这个梗！不过不是触卡的话尽量还是别做这种了，这梗还是有点超前
00:35:247 (1,2,3) - 起止位置不太对
00:37:952 (5) - 理解不能
00:56:640 (4,4,4,4) - 这些大转角都给我NC啊！
01:23:526 (4) - 还有这个也是、
总之后面还有连打段挺多
还有个缺点，连打段overmap很严重
不过我挺喜欢有乳的二连
[Axtra]
00:43:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段处理的不太好
00:59:099 (1) - 转盘后面接note间隔时间太短！大忌
还有，大转角连打没有NC的情况也是有的
最后，神图预感
[Yuki's Extra]
00:04:263 (2) - 这个滑条最好短一点，然后紧接一个四分拍滑条，删掉后面的滑条，听起来更顺
00:11:476 (2,3,4,5) - 哇！好可怕！
总之同样神！
[Touchscreen]
没触屏摸个激激
[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
Topic Starter
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上lsahi wrote:
[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX
DON'T COPY
DON'T COPY
rabk2333新钱语getliaoxingyao wrote:
好啊 只是2DX的曲子不能rabk了 真是背上lsahi wrote:
[The End]
神图摸什么摸！（你要是想rank我就射♂你个星星）
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
Topic Starter
什么两个 你只能拿一个hhh(lsahi wrote:
rabk2333新钱语get
说好骗两个的KDS呢OAO
Topic Starter
The map isn't for rank so i don't delete lolhutunohito wrote:
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX
DON'T COPY
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experiencehutunohito wrote:
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX
DON'T COPY
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think
the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.Marirose wrote:
unrank map,so i decide copy original patterns for the best play experiencehutunohito wrote:
o!m mapsets is copy from IIDX
DON'T COPY
just add a mania diff
umm,NP,i think
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
Topic Starter
OK,diff name changed.hutunohito wrote:
the problem of copying is:people think the maps(copied) is made by you.
So coping cause misunderstanding that you can map such a good IIDX map
if you want copy,delete your name from diff name please
Kawawa
hello.
i think mania mod about..
Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add
and fianl..
just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add
XD good luck
i think mania mod about..
Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add
and fianl..
just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
01:21:640 - 2add
01:21:968 - 2add
01:22:296 - 2add
XD good luck
Topic Starter
This is your kudosu wwwwKawaEE wrote:
hello.
i think mania mod about..
Marirose's 8K Hyepr
00:13:362 - 1add
00:13:444 - delete fixed
00:18:608 - 1add
00:18:690 - delete
00:59:017 - Leftshift key long note change(~01:00:165)
01:33:116 - 2add
and fianl..
just i think,
00:36:886 ~ 00:37:885 and 01:21:476 ~ 01:22:460 this part. so loose..
so, i suggest u, some note add..
for example
00:37:050 - 2add
00:37:378 - 2add
00:37:706 - 2add
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XD good luck
Topic Starter
one year later
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