Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[General]
- The HP and OD of Shi-Ra's diffs are very low, while your Beginner diff has a higher HP and OD than them. You'd better change either side to make all diffs seem reasonable XD
- Put off the useless greenlines in Shi-Ra's Easy and Normal diffs that are after their mapped time.
- Move preview time to 01:00:079 would be better, since Beginner diff isn't mapped so faraway.
[Extra]
00:45:005 and 00:45:079 - The sound you're following also exists here, add notes?
01:00:079 ~ 01:00:673 - The hitsound is too loud imo, it totally robs the place of song itself. Put down a bit would be better.
01:47:381 - 01:47:456 - 01:47:530 - Add notes like this?
01:48:421 - Add note
02:36:837 - Add note, missing the sound
04:09:584 ~ 04:11:812 - Put down hitsound volume, the song is very weak here and the soft hitsound is quite strange. This suggestion applys to all diffs.
[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note
[Hard]
02:36:614 ~ 02:36:837 - Add a stair here?
02:45:970 - Add a note would be better, or also add at 02:46:045.
[Beginner]
00:34:832 - Add a note and let the LN start from 00:35:129 to fit the sound.
01:19:535 - Add note(s) as finish, it's not proper to end your chart at 01:17:159 imo. Also you may also add a note at 01:19:386.