Thank you very much for the mod![Shi-Ra] wrote:
Hello Entozer, there are mods for your notechart ^w^
Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
HardInside :3Mostly these patterns are good, but there are uncomfortable moments:
00:08:248 (8248|6) - I can't understand placing here two notes in a row, there's no any identical sounds, so I suggest you to move this note to 5th column here, it'll be good transition for your next going pattern and wouldn't ruin it
! This is good. Changed.
00:21:317 - why there's no even single note? here goes suitable sound for it according to the song, so you can add one more note to 3rd column here and 00:21:466 - add here one more chord coz it's correct ending of this part, check that
Thank you. Added.
00:34:089 (34089|4) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it's more comfortable to catch it in such position and also you can make more hand-balanced pattern with it
I'm... having second thoughts. ;_; changed for now.
00:41:292 (41292|1) - hm...this note feels unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for triplet, it'll not ruin your pattern here if you delete it but it'll be more comfortable to play
That note is for the 'claps'. Added hitsound.
00:58:891 - how about > this < or > this < pattern here? I think you should make this pattern more symmetrical to accent it before next going break it's suitable with your previous patterns too
Changed to first suggestion.
01:17:159 - I think one note here is not enough to accent this part so I recommend you to add one additional note to 5th column here to accent chord ending correctly
Added! Thanks. Changed hitsound to soft finish too.
01:35:797 - you can add one more note here according to the music and perform triplet here with notes in 2nd>3rd>4th columns or same
I missed that note. Thank you. Added
01:55:178 (115178|5) - I suggest you to move this note to 4th column according to you bass kick sound column here, it'll be more correctly
Changed. Thank you. I also changed 01:57:555 (117555|4) -
02:24:733 - there's correct ending of this part, to accent it you can add one more chord here with notes in 1st and 5th column, it'll be comfortable to play after your previous LN pattern
Added!, but on 02:24:881 -
03:14:188 - the final pattern here is uncomfortable a little, I recommend you to re-arrange it in this way according to your previous chord triplets
Hm... changed. I agree the final pattern is a bit bad and yours is better, but I think there's still something missing.
03:50:426 - missed sound again, there goes one more back beat sound and I think you should accent it with one note or better add chord here with notes in 2nd and 4th columns to end this part correctly
!! Added. Thank you.
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InsaneInside :3Hmmm, I see that it's new diff, coz I didn't saw it in your mapset previously, let's check it:
00:01:268 (1268|0,1565|0,1862|0) - I suggest you to use Drum Whistle HS here, it'll be more suitable with the song coz claps are sounds awkward with hi-hat x.x
Changed. I was hoping it was fine
From 00:22:505 to 00:31:416 - I see your intention here to follow rhythm with double notes in 0 and 6th columns but I recommend you to change beat columns more often (every tact I think), it'll be more exciting for player
Hmm... I will change soon, but not now. I am still thinking about it.
00:34:906 (34906|5,35055|5) - move two these notes to 4th column, it would not ruin your trills here but it'll make them more different according to different sounds in it, it's well-suitable with your pattern here too, check that
! Changed, but I think there's still something missing.
00:39:956 (39956|5,40104|5) - same suggestion and reason as above, make your patterns more different like in other parts of your chart
Sorry, no change here >< I will think about it.
00:53:470 (53470|3) - position of this note is uncomfortable a little before next going stream here, maybe you move it to 5th column and perform correct stair stream here? it'll be more comfortable transition I think
Hm.. I'm not sure what you meant by correct stair stream, but I followed your suggestion. Changed.
01:39:510 (99510|1) - this note is unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for it, I suggest you to delete it, this part will be better without such triplet, check that
Sorry, no change >< There are 3 drum notes here. I missed it in hard diff. I'm going to add it in hard.
01:39:436 (99436|2) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, you can move this note to 1st column to fill empty place correctly and finish your pattern here in this way
From 01:49:386 to 01:58:743 - like in the beginning part, I think you need to switch beat columns more often, at least every two tacts here, it'll make nice effect of balanced beat between hands
Will change soon~
02:31:862 and 02:32:010 - feels like there are two missed sounds before your LN pattern here, I recommend you to fill them with in this way
Added! Thanks.
02:44:114 (164114|5) - this triplet note looks like shield note here, it's uncomfortable, I suggest you to move it to 3rd column or even 2nd column, it'll be easier to catch it there
Sorry, no change. Your idea is fine but it does not have the same effect as before.
03:42:555 (222555|3,222703|3) - I think you should move these notes to 2nd column and make here hand-balanced pattern coz now most notes a concentrated on right hand and it's really uncomfortable, check that
Sorry, no change >< If I changed this, I would have to change the one in the first part too because It's only a copy-pasted mirror of it.
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ExtraInside :3And finally this diff. I can say that it's well-mapped and hard enough without any overmapping (it's surprise for me for last time).I've found only some issues here:
00:28:743 (28743|6) - I see your intention here to follow the beat but I recommend you to move this note to 5th column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note according to your previous and next going pattern, it wouldn't ruin it but makes this part better
I guess it is odd because it's the only that does a double tap. Changed! Thank you.
00:37:802 (37802|4,38099|3) - these notes goes like shield notes and it's uncomfortable to catch them after previous LNs so I suggest you to move these notes to 5th and 4th columns accordingly to make more balanced and comfortable to play pattern here
Sorry, no change >< I think it is fine right now. I might change if there are more opinions in this particular note, but I changed the note at 00:35:277 - (I thought you were pertaining to it at first )
00:55:327 - this chord stream is uncomfortable coz of last three note chords, they are stuck in each other, I think you should re-arrange this pattern like that or same, it'll be more comfortable transition with saving note count, check it
A very standard stream : x But it is a good suggestion. I will not change it for now though. If someone pointed it out again, then I can use your pattern. Thank you.
01:29:188 (89188|6) - I think you need to add one more note here to 1st column and move this note to 5th column to make strong finish for this pattern, one note is not enough to accent such place in Extra diff
Added! Thanks.
01:39:733 (99733|3) - this LN should ends here 01:40:178 - according to the sound, please, check that and finish it correctly
!! This is good. Changed. Thank you.
02:46:119 (166119|4) - move this note to 5th column, there's same sounds like for next going chord so I suggest you to make same note placement, it'll be comfortable to play with your previous and next going patterns too
Good suggestion. Thank you.
02:48:198 - I think there's no need in such hammering coz there are two different sounds, so I recommend you to use at least trill here, it'll be more suitable with the sounds which are goes there
;_; you are right, there are two different sounds. Changed against my will ;_;
03:46:416 (226416|6) - uncomfortable position for this note coz of LN pattern, I suggest you to move it to another column, to 1st column for example, it'll be more comfortable to catch it according to the beat
Changed! Thank you.
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GeneralInside :3Kiai: why there's no kiai sections even for choruses? They can be really useful there. According to Ranking Criteria you should have them, but in some new charts including your I didn't see any kiai section o.o I think you need kiai sections especially for good HSed chart coz they are makes your map better with accenting some parts in it. I suggest you to use next sections:
1st: from 01:00:673 to 01:17:159 - first chorus
2nd: from 02:08:396 to 02:24:584 - second chorus
3rd: from 03:33:941 to 03:50:277 - last chorus
4th (optionally): from 04:02:456 to 04:09:584 - ending section
I guess I can follow these because I am doing something different in this map. I will add later (or soon)
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Mapset: according to Ranking Criteria you need at least one more NM diff in your mapset or EZ+NM - it'll be better. If you don't mind I can help you with that and make EZ+NM hitsounded charts.
That would be really nice! To be honest I am already running out of ideas for EZ/NM. I feel like it would be boring or bad if I make it. You can make it short if you want and end it at 02:25:030 - like in val's easier diff in his map (the inspiration for this)
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There's no problems with hitsounding in all mapset, all HSs are correct! It's awesome!
:) Thank you very much!
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SV changes: there's a problem with reading patterns from 03:14:931 to 03:33:941 - many players can't read that and I think it'll be main problem in this chart. I suggest you to increase SV here by 0.2-0.4 it'll be more comfortable to read streams especially for Insane and Extra diffs.
I will change it soon. I will wait for another person to point it out though >< Thank you.
Awwwesome chart! Wanna see more mania charts like that \o/
Good luck :3/