1. 02:08:396 - I'm having a really hard time determining which instrument these LNs are supposed to follow. I've repeated the part at least a dozen times now, and I'm still coming up with nothing. I'm probably missing something completely obvious, but in the case I'm not, keep in mind that players shouldn't be playing detective just to figure out your patterns and which notes correspond to which instruments.

1. 00:11:961 - Missing a note here.
2. 00:11:961 and 00:14:337 should have symmetrical patterns.
3. 00:16:713 - The patterns here look pretty loaded on each hand. Might look and play better if it was spread out to both hands.
4. 00:29:040 - Missing an LN here.
5. 00:41:664 - Are the 1/4 gaps between LNs there on purpose? Just looks... bad IMO.
6. 00:48:495 - Overmapped...? Some of these notes don't even have hitsounds. I can kinda hear the instrument behind these notes, but is it really necessary to layer stairs and percussion notes?

QQQK wrote:

[Hard]

1. 02:08:396 - I'm having a really hard time determining which instrument these LNs are supposed to follow. I've repeated the part at least a dozen times now, and I'm still coming up with nothing. I'm probably missing something completely obvious, but in the case I'm not, keep in mind that players shouldn't be playing detective just to figure out your patterns and which notes correspond to which instruments.

I can hear what it follows pretty well though. I'll have to see more feedback about this I guess.

[Extra]

1. 00:11:961 - Missing a note here. Added
2. 00:11:961 and 00:14:337 should have symmetrical patterns. Done~ Hopefully that's what you mean.
3. 00:16:713 - The patterns here look pretty loaded on each hand. Might look and play better if it was spread out to both hands.
4. 00:29:040 - Missing an LN here.
5. 00:41:664 - Are the 1/4 gaps between LNs there on purpose? Just looks... bad IMO. I was faithfully following the instrument.
6. 00:48:495 - Overmapped...? Some of these notes don't even have hitsounds. I can kinda hear the instrument behind these notes, but is it really necessary to layer stairs and percussion notes?

Also, I don't find [Shi-Ra]'s Fuman difficulty "easy" at all. It's at least a Normal. That is, in order to properly play it, the player should be pretty familiar with the finger-note coordination, as well as some basic patterns - skills I would not expect from a newcomer in osu!mania. I suggest you either scale this difficulty up, or add a new Beginner difficulty.
Added a Beginner.

lZenxl wrote:

No kd I think you should have a consistent naming system

EZ | NM | HD | MX | SHD
or
Easy | Normal | Hard | Insane | Extra

GL o/

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

ZXCV wrote:

Hey. Just a few more things. No kds.

According to the general ranking criteria for metadata:

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

No need to put "Vocaloid" as the source. Put it in tags instead.

Also, all the sites I've seen list the composer as "Famirock-P".

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[General]
- The HP and OD of Shi-Ra's diffs are very low, while your Beginner diff has a higher HP and OD than them. You'd better change either side to make all diffs seem reasonable XD I will change Beginner's OD/HP xD Thank you.

- Put off the useless greenlines in Shi-Ra's Easy and Normal diffs that are after their mapped time. Removed~

- Move preview time to 01:00:079 would be better, since Beginner diff isn't mapped so faraway. Changed~

[Extra]
00:45:005 and 00:45:079 - The sound you're following also exists here, add notes?
The synths...? But I cannot hear anything... I'm not sure what you mean >< I did not add anything yet.

01:00:079 ~ 01:00:673 - The hitsound is too loud imo, it totally robs the place of song itself. Put down a bit would be better.
Lowered to 33%, same for the next instance of this.

01:47:381 - 01:47:456 - 01:47:530 - Add notes like this?

SPOILER

Same as above...
01:48:421 - Add note><

02:36:837 - Add note, missing the sound
Added! Thank you.

04:09:584 ~ 04:11:812 - Put down hitsound volume, the song is very weak here and the soft hitsound is quite strange. This suggestion applys to all diffs.
Lowered to 30%

[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note
!! Thank you. Added.

[Hard]
02:36:614 ~ 02:36:837 - Add a stair here?
! Added, Thanks.

02:45:970 - Add a note would be better, or also add at 02:46:045.
I added both. Thanks!

[Beginner]
00:34:832 - Add a note and let the LN start from 00:35:129 to fit the sound.
Ohh... This is amazing >< thank you.

01:19:535 - Add note(s) as finish, it's not proper to end your chart at 01:17:159 imo. Also you may also add a note at 01:19:386.
I added them. Thank you!

Roxas wrote:

Before ljq will recheck (if he will), you should change the artist with "FamirockP" since it's wrote like this :v

Entozer wrote:

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note
!! Thank you. Added.

ljqandylee wrote:

This one actually didn't fix?

Reikosaka wrote:

the right answer is " ファミロックＰ" romanized "famirockP"

Roxas wrote:

From this site (thanks to lolcubes) the artist name is ファミロックP (add it in Artist and add FamiRockP in romanised artist) and the title is 鬼彼女 (Oni Kanojo romanised), add them in every diff \o\

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