Hello Entozer, there are mods for your notechart ^w^
Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Hard
Insane
Extra
General
Awwwesome chart! Wanna see more mania charts like that \o/
Good luck :3/
Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Hard
Inside :3
Mostly these patterns are good, but there are uncomfortable moments:
00:08:248 (8248|6) - I can't understand placing here two notes in a row, there's no any identical sounds, so I suggest you to move this note to 5th column here, it'll be good transition for your next going pattern and wouldn't ruin it
00:21:317 - why there's no even single note? here goes suitable sound for it according to the song, so you can add one more note to 3rd column here and 00:21:466 - add here one more chord coz it's correct ending of this part, check that
00:34:089 (34089|4) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it's more comfortable to catch it in such position and also you can make more hand-balanced pattern with it
00:41:292 (41292|1) - hm...this note feels unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for triplet, it'll not ruin your pattern here if you delete it but it'll be more comfortable to play
00:58:891 - how about > this < or > this < pattern here? I think you should make this pattern more symmetrical to accent it before next going break it's suitable with your previous patterns too
01:17:159 - I think one note here is not enough to accent this part so I recommend you to add one additional note to 5th column here to accent chord ending correctly
01:35:797 - you can add one more note here according to the music and perform triplet here with notes in 2nd>3rd>4th columns or same
01:55:178 (115178|5) - I suggest you to move this note to 4th column according to you bass kick sound column here, it'll be more correctly
02:24:733 - there's correct ending of this part, to accent it you can add one more chord here with notes in 1st and 5th column, it'll be comfortable to play after your previous LN pattern
03:14:188 - the final pattern here is uncomfortable a little, I recommend you to re-arrange it in this way according to your previous chord triplets
03:50:426 - missed sound again, there goes one more back beat sound and I think you should accent it with one note or better add chord here with notes in 2nd and 4th columns to end this part correctly
00:08:248 (8248|6) - I can't understand placing here two notes in a row, there's no any identical sounds, so I suggest you to move this note to 5th column here, it'll be good transition for your next going pattern and wouldn't ruin it
00:21:317 - why there's no even single note? here goes suitable sound for it according to the song, so you can add one more note to 3rd column here and 00:21:466 - add here one more chord coz it's correct ending of this part, check that
00:34:089 (34089|4) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it's more comfortable to catch it in such position and also you can make more hand-balanced pattern with it
00:41:292 (41292|1) - hm...this note feels unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for triplet, it'll not ruin your pattern here if you delete it but it'll be more comfortable to play
00:58:891 - how about > this < or > this < pattern here? I think you should make this pattern more symmetrical to accent it before next going break it's suitable with your previous patterns too
01:17:159 - I think one note here is not enough to accent this part so I recommend you to add one additional note to 5th column here to accent chord ending correctly
01:35:797 - you can add one more note here according to the music and perform triplet here with notes in 2nd>3rd>4th columns or same
01:55:178 (115178|5) - I suggest you to move this note to 4th column according to you bass kick sound column here, it'll be more correctly
02:24:733 - there's correct ending of this part, to accent it you can add one more chord here with notes in 1st and 5th column, it'll be comfortable to play after your previous LN pattern
03:14:188 - the final pattern here is uncomfortable a little, I recommend you to re-arrange it in this way according to your previous chord triplets
03:50:426 - missed sound again, there goes one more back beat sound and I think you should accent it with one note or better add chord here with notes in 2nd and 4th columns to end this part correctly
Insane
Inside :3
Hmmm, I see that it's new diff, coz I didn't saw it in your mapset previously, let's check it:
00:01:268 (1268|0,1565|0,1862|0) - I suggest you to use Drum Whistle HS here, it'll be more suitable with the song coz claps are sounds awkward with hi-hat x.x
From 00:22:505 to 00:31:416 - I see your intention here to follow rhythm with double notes in 0 and 6th columns but I recommend you to change beat columns more often (every tact I think), it'll be more exciting for player
00:34:906 (34906|5,35055|5) - move two these notes to 4th column, it would not ruin your trills here but it'll make them more different according to different sounds in it, it's well-suitable with your pattern here too, check that
00:39:956 (39956|5,40104|5) - same suggestion and reason as above, make your patterns more different like in other parts of your chart
00:53:470 (53470|3) - position of this note is uncomfortable a little before next going stream here, maybe you move it to 5th column and perform correct stair stream here? it'll be more comfortable transition I think
01:39:510 (99510|1) - this note is unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for it, I suggest you to delete it, this part will be better without such triplet, check that
01:39:436 (99436|2) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, you can move this note to 1st column to fill empty place correctly and finish your pattern here in this way
From 01:49:386 to 01:58:743 - like in the beginning part, I think you need to switch beat columns more often, at least every two tacts here, it'll make nice effect of balanced beat between hands
02:31:862 and 02:32:010 - feels like there are two missed sounds before your LN pattern here, I recommend you to fill them with in this way
02:44:114 (164114|5) - this triplet note looks like shield note here, it's uncomfortable, I suggest you to move it to 3rd column or even 2nd column, it'll be easier to catch it there
03:42:555 (222555|3,222703|3) - I think you should move these notes to 2nd column and make here hand-balanced pattern coz now most notes a concentrated on right hand and it's really uncomfortable, check that
00:01:268 (1268|0,1565|0,1862|0) - I suggest you to use Drum Whistle HS here, it'll be more suitable with the song coz claps are sounds awkward with hi-hat x.x
From 00:22:505 to 00:31:416 - I see your intention here to follow rhythm with double notes in 0 and 6th columns but I recommend you to change beat columns more often (every tact I think), it'll be more exciting for player
00:34:906 (34906|5,35055|5) - move two these notes to 4th column, it would not ruin your trills here but it'll make them more different according to different sounds in it, it's well-suitable with your pattern here too, check that
00:39:956 (39956|5,40104|5) - same suggestion and reason as above, make your patterns more different like in other parts of your chart
00:53:470 (53470|3) - position of this note is uncomfortable a little before next going stream here, maybe you move it to 5th column and perform correct stair stream here? it'll be more comfortable transition I think
01:39:510 (99510|1) - this note is unnecessary here coz there's no suitable sound for it, I suggest you to delete it, this part will be better without such triplet, check that
01:39:436 (99436|2) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, you can move this note to 1st column to fill empty place correctly and finish your pattern here in this way
From 01:49:386 to 01:58:743 - like in the beginning part, I think you need to switch beat columns more often, at least every two tacts here, it'll make nice effect of balanced beat between hands
02:31:862 and 02:32:010 - feels like there are two missed sounds before your LN pattern here, I recommend you to fill them with in this way
02:44:114 (164114|5) - this triplet note looks like shield note here, it's uncomfortable, I suggest you to move it to 3rd column or even 2nd column, it'll be easier to catch it there
03:42:555 (222555|3,222703|3) - I think you should move these notes to 2nd column and make here hand-balanced pattern coz now most notes a concentrated on right hand and it's really uncomfortable, check that
Extra
Inside :3
And finally this diff. I can say that it's well-mapped and hard enough without any overmapping (it's surprise for me for last time).I've found only some issues here:
00:28:743 (28743|6) - I see your intention here to follow the beat but I recommend you to move this note to 5th column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note according to your previous and next going pattern, it wouldn't ruin it but makes this part better
00:37:802 (37802|4,38099|3) - these notes goes like shield notes and it's uncomfortable to catch them after previous LNs so I suggest you to move these notes to 5th and 4th columns accordingly to make more balanced and comfortable to play pattern here
00:55:327 - this chord stream is uncomfortable coz of last three note chords, they are stuck in each other, I think you should re-arrange this pattern like that or same, it'll be more comfortable transition with saving note count, check it
01:29:188 (89188|6) - I think you need to add one more note here to 1st column and move this note to 5th column to make strong finish for this pattern, one note is not enough to accent such place in Extra diff
01:39:733 (99733|3) - this LN should ends here 01:40:178 - according to the sound, please, check that and finish it correctly
02:46:119 (166119|4) - move this note to 5th column, there's same sounds like for next going chord so I suggest you to make same note placement, it'll be comfortable to play with your previous and next going patterns too
02:48:198 - I think there's no need in such hammering coz there are two different sounds, so I recommend you to use at least trill here, it'll be more suitable with the sounds which are goes there
03:46:416 (226416|6) - uncomfortable position for this note coz of LN pattern, I suggest you to move it to another column, to 1st column for example, it'll be more comfortable to catch it according to the beat
00:28:743 (28743|6) - I see your intention here to follow the beat but I recommend you to move this note to 5th column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note according to your previous and next going pattern, it wouldn't ruin it but makes this part better
00:37:802 (37802|4,38099|3) - these notes goes like shield notes and it's uncomfortable to catch them after previous LNs so I suggest you to move these notes to 5th and 4th columns accordingly to make more balanced and comfortable to play pattern here
00:55:327 - this chord stream is uncomfortable coz of last three note chords, they are stuck in each other, I think you should re-arrange this pattern like that or same, it'll be more comfortable transition with saving note count, check it
01:29:188 (89188|6) - I think you need to add one more note here to 1st column and move this note to 5th column to make strong finish for this pattern, one note is not enough to accent such place in Extra diff
01:39:733 (99733|3) - this LN should ends here 01:40:178 - according to the sound, please, check that and finish it correctly
02:46:119 (166119|4) - move this note to 5th column, there's same sounds like for next going chord so I suggest you to make same note placement, it'll be comfortable to play with your previous and next going patterns too
02:48:198 - I think there's no need in such hammering coz there are two different sounds, so I recommend you to use at least trill here, it'll be more suitable with the sounds which are goes there
03:46:416 (226416|6) - uncomfortable position for this note coz of LN pattern, I suggest you to move it to another column, to 1st column for example, it'll be more comfortable to catch it according to the beat
General
Inside :3
Kiai: why there's no kiai sections even for choruses? They can be really useful there. According to Ranking Criteria you should have them, but in some new charts including your I didn't see any kiai section o.o I think you need kiai sections especially for good HSed chart coz they are makes your map better with accenting some parts in it. I suggest you to use next sections:
1st: from 01:00:673 to 01:17:159 - first chorus
2nd: from 02:08:396 to 02:24:584 - second chorus
3rd: from 03:33:941 to 03:50:277 - last chorus
4th (optionally): from 04:02:456 to 04:09:584 - ending section
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Mapset: according to Ranking Criteria you need at least one more NM diff in your mapset or EZ+NM - it'll be better. If you don't mind I can help you with that and make EZ+NM hitsounded charts.
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There's no problems with hitsounding in all mapset, all HSs are correct! It's awesome!
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SV changes: there's a problem with reading patterns from 03:14:931 to 03:33:941 - many players can't read that and I think it'll be main problem in this chart. I suggest you to increase SV here by 0.2-0.4 it'll be more comfortable to read streams especially for Insane and Extra diffs.
1st: from 01:00:673 to 01:17:159 - first chorus
2nd: from 02:08:396 to 02:24:584 - second chorus
3rd: from 03:33:941 to 03:50:277 - last chorus
4th (optionally): from 04:02:456 to 04:09:584 - ending section
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Mapset: according to Ranking Criteria you need at least one more NM diff in your mapset or EZ+NM - it'll be better. If you don't mind I can help you with that and make EZ+NM hitsounded charts.
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There's no problems with hitsounding in all mapset, all HSs are correct! It's awesome!
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SV changes: there's a problem with reading patterns from 03:14:931 to 03:33:941 - many players can't read that and I think it'll be main problem in this chart. I suggest you to increase SV here by 0.2-0.4 it'll be more comfortable to read streams especially for Insane and Extra diffs.
Awwwesome chart! Wanna see more mania charts like that \o/
Good luck :3/