Hi~
random mod~ EDIT: m4m
[Hitsounds]
some of the current hitfinish (e.g. 00:26:865 - ) are not so fit. maybe you can try using drum finish. (select note, press ctrl+r, then select finish)
00:49:701 - 00:51:492 - 00:53:283 - 00:55:074 - 00:56:865 - 00:58:656 - it's a good idea to add claps at these place because there're drum hits.
00:57:761 - remove clap?
[Insane]
I suggest AR 8.3300:21:940 (8,9) - I suggest you reverse them, to make the rhythm more dynamic, and emphasize the drum hit.
00:21:044 (4,5,6,7) - the diagonal jump is a bit too forced to me. make smaller?
00:25:858 (7,8) - maybe change rhythm; same reason. (I won't repeat, if you take the advice please do same thing to 00:36:268 (7,8) - , etc.)
00:29:337 - add note?
00:32:910 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent.
00:49:253 (2) - I'm almost convinced that it's better to place it at 00:49:477 -
00:52:835 (2,3) - 00:56:417 (2,3) - same as above. I suggest to change rhythm.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - it hears bad because of overmapping. maybe you should consider using 40% volume Normal sample.
[Hard]
00:16:790 (2) - strange whistle. it's better use it consistently or just remove it.
00:21:268 (1,2,3) - please make it symmetrical, like: (don't forget to adjust notes after them :3)
00:26:417 (4,1,2) - the overlap is not so good to me. maybe you can try: (yes, please also adjust notes after :3)
00:30:223 (5) - adjust:
00:41:641 (3) - same
00:48:358 (1) - 00:55:522 (1) - shorten to 3/4
00:55:522 - to 00:59:104 - why 100%? 60% is enough.
01:12:761 (9) - move to x:420 y:272 to make better flow.
01:27:313 (1) - the volume is horrible. maybe use 30% and 5% at the end.
[Normal]
00:30:447 (1) - try this:
368,332,30447,6,0,B|356:284|396:244|396:244|408:216|408:176|400:132,1,200
00:47:014 (1) - remove? too close to the spinner
00:48:805 (2) - not on the beat. maybe remove.
00:56:417 (2,4) - change to 60% maybe
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - maybe use 50%, to fit the vocal volume.
01:06:268 (1) - this:
01:13:432 (1) - still use 70% volume. shorten to 01:14:775 - to fit the drum.
01:15:671 (1,2,3) - 50% volume
01:20:596 (1,2) - curve less.
01:27:313 (1) - maybe use 30% and 5% at the end.
[Easy]
00:05:372 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is boring. at least make some symmetry and change in the shape. you can refer to osuplayer111's Easy diffs.
00:27:873 - change to S default
00:29:552 - add an S default section until 00:29:999 -
00:31:343 - use same trick as 00:29:552 - .
00:39:850 (2) - add clap
00:42:089 - same trick :3
00:43:880 - ^
00:44:775 (1) - add clap
00:48:514 - change to 30% maybe, I can't hear the notes.
00:52:387 - you can't use 5% all the way, 30% should be good. change 00:52:835 - to S default, 00:53:283 - S:C1, 00:53:731 - S default. and 00:54:178 - to S:C1.
00:54:626 - delete this section, and 00:55:074 - this.
00:55:634 - change to S default, then 00:57:313 - S:C1, 00:57:425 - S default
01:01:343 - delete this section. 60% is enough.
01:15:671 - same as above. 01:13:432 (1) - add clap
01:27:313 (1) - 5% at the end
That's as far as I can help. Please contact with me whenever you have question. Good luck with the map!