[ Raphael ] wrote:

안녕하세요 >w<

[General]

• 오프셋을 5257로 하는게 더 나은 것 같아요~ㅎㅎ
  그리드 레벨을 4로 설정하시고 매핑하심이? (View → Grid level → 4)
  
  [Easy]
  
  • 00:05:257 (1) - 왜 이 슬라이더에는 휘슬을 안넣으셨나요?
    00:05:256 (1,2,3,4) - 슬라이더 모양을 하나로 통일하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:23:167 (3) - 00:19:585 (1) - 과 모양이 같게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:28:540 (2,3) - 블랭킷 시켜주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요!
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:48:242 (1) - 머리에 피니시 같은 힛사 넣어주시면 더 나을 것 같아요!
    00:55:406 (1) - ^
    00:57:197 (1) - 뉴콤보를 딱히 안하셔도 될 것 같아요
    01:07:495 (3,4) - 거리가 너무 머네요.
    01:12:421 (4,5) - 겹치는 것 보단 다르게 배치하는게 더 좋을 것 같아요!
    01:18:465 (3) - (236,110) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 01:17:794 (2) - 와 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
    01:20:037 (1,2,3,4) - 약간 어색한 것 같은데 아래 리듬은 어떠신가요?
    

    SPOILER

    이건 너무 어렵나 ;w;
    
    [Normal]
    
    • 00:14:216 (4) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요
      00:16:902 (3,4) - 아래와 비슷한 형식의 배치는 어떠신가요?
      

      SPOILER

      

      00:25:858 (4,5) - (136,343) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
      00:29:887 (6) - 뉴콤보 설정하심이?
      00:32:574 (10,1) - 거리가 너무 먼 것 같아요
      00:41:529 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..;w;
      00:47:350 (2,1) - 거리가 너무 머네요
      00:57:649 (4,5) - (170,128) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:03:469 (2,3,4) - 아래와 비슷하게 배치해주시면 플레이 할 때 더 나을 것 같아요.
      

      SPOILER

      

      01:05:261 (5) - 01:05:037 - 로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:05:932 (1) - 이걸 지워주시고 01:06:156 (2) - 를 01:05:932 - 여기서 시작하게 하시는 건 어떠신가요?
      이렇게요.
      01:09:738 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..ㅇㅁㅇ;
      01:21:380 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요
      
      [Hard]
      
      • 00:16:901 (2,3) - 좀 더 낫게 블랭킷 시켜주세요
        00:26:304 (9) - (156,302) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:30:334 (1) - 00:30:111 - 여기서 시작하는게 더 노래에 맞는 것 같아요
        00:38:170 (3,4) - 블랭킷 시켜주심이??
        00:43:991 (8,9) - (176,305) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:47:349 (1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
        00:50:483 (1) - (418,193) 좌표로 이동시켜주시고, 00:51:155 (2,3,4) - 이 세개는 (410,317) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
        00:55:409 (1,3,5,7) - 모양을 통일시키는게 더 나을 것 같아요
        00:58:991 (1) - 01:00:783 - 에서 끝나게 해주세요
        01:08:618 (5) - (344,211) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        01:17:349 (2,3,4) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요
        01:21:827 (5,6) - 아래와 같은 배치는 어떠신가요?
        

        SPOILER

        

        01:23:619 - 서클 추가해주세요
        01:25:857 (4,5) - 하나의 슬라이더로 길게 만드시는 건 어떤가요?
        01:26:304 (5,6) - 01:26:752 (6) - 을 지우고 01:26:304 (5) - 를 01:26:752 - 에서 끝나게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
        이것처럼요! ㅎㅎ
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:07:947 (7,8,9) - 디스턴스에 맞게 배치해주세요. (9)가 약간 안맞는 것 같은데..
          00:14:216 (5) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주세요
          00:26:081 (8,9,10) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요!
          00:31:678 (9) - (371,191) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:33:693 (5) - (79,244) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:34:813 (3,4,6) - 사이 간격이 같게 배치해주세요.
          00:43:768 (4,5,6) - 너무 가깝네요
          00:50:037 (2,3,4,5,1) - 아래 리듬을 사용해보시는건 어떤가요?
          

          SPOILER

          

          00:54:290 - 서클 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요!
          00:56:977 (1,1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
          01:04:701 (4) - 지워주세요
          01:08:619 (2) - (343,306) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          01:09:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 거리가 뒤죽박죽이네요 ;w;
          01:17:798 (1,2) - 이런 배치는 너무 헷갈리지 않을까요? 더 멀리 배치 시켜주세요
          01:19:141 (4,5) - 이것도 더 멀리 배치하셔도 될 듯..ㅎㅎ
          01:22:947 (3,4,5,6) - 통째로 01:22:835 - 로 이동시켜주세요
          01:25:298 (4,5) - 거리가 먼 듯 싶어요 ;w;
          01:25:410 (5) - 01:25:634 - 에서 끝나는 슬라이더로 만들어주세요.
          
          첫 맵이신가요?? 잘만드셨네요!! ㅎㅎ
          연습 조금만 더하시면 훌륭한 맵이 나올듯....ㄷㄷ
          
          + 별 받으세요 얍얍 ★

deejaydray wrote:

m4m from my queue ~

KIAI time is not snapped = Modifications done! ^ ^

EASY:

Change the slider tick rate from 2 to 1 (it is recommended for Easy) = modification
I recommend you to use the same Grid Level for all difficulties (4) = I am pleased to do so ^^
01:17:794 (2,3) - this is too hard for Easy = I do not know... But has been modified ~

NORMAL:

00:05:258 (1) - this object is not snapped (you should delete it and re-create it in the same place) = Okay
00:30:331 (2) - this shape is a bit ugly = Okay
00:53:615 (7) - NC here = Okay

GL ! ^^

1. uncheck widescreen sup
2. uncheck letter box
3. Title 「なないろびより (TV Size)」
4. change sampleset S→S:C1
   
   SPOILER

   
5. add http://puu.sh/6rp61.wav

1. 00:05:258 (1)
2. 00:06:152 (3)
3. 00:07:048 (5)

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Pandiar wrote:

hi ~ from my Q

[General]

1. uncheck widescreen sup
2. uncheck letter box
3. Title 「なないろびより (TV Size)」
4. change sampleset S→S:C1
   
   SPOILER

   
5. add http://puu.sh/6rp61.wav

i think offset is wrong
i recommend to get mp3 and offset setting from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224
(don't forget resnapped)


[Insane]
hitsound

i think it needs more hit sound
it is hear it if you listen to music with care
for example

1. 00:05:258 (1)
2. 00:06:152 (3)
3. 00:07:048 (5)

00:05:223 (1) - add finish
00:19:585 (1) - ^
00:33:913 (1) - ^
00:48:242 (1) - add finish and volume 45~55 is better imo
00:55:406 (1) - add finish
00:58:988 (1) - ^
01:02:570 (1) - ^
01:16:898 (1) - ^
01:24:062 (1) - ^
01:26:749 (3) - ^

the other
00:19:552 (1,2) - for better flow

SPOILER

00:21:120 (6) - remove NC
00:21:792 (1) - NC
00:23:582 (2) - it may too close? move (1) about x52 y104
00:26:492 (10) - remove
00:33:656 (5) - ^
00:42:613 (1) - remove NC
00:42:836 (2) - NC
00:50:001~ 00:53:359 - i think this is better

SPOILER

01:04:777 (4) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:17:986 - add note
01:22:463 (2) - how about this?

SPOILER

[Hard]
hitsound
same as Insane

the other
sry skip


[Normal and Easy]
i found Distance error in both diff
you should use Distance snap

SPOILER

spacing rate can be changed by pressing the alt

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Easy:0.8~1.0 Normal:1.0~1.2 is better imo


good luck !

Losertic wrote:

태그에 のんのんびより 이거 지우는게 어떠신가요..? 소스에 이미 있으니까....

Nanairo Biyori... 이거는 잘 모르겠네요. 영어or자국어가 Source에 이미 존재하면 나머지 언어라도 태그는 지워야 하나...

m1223961117 wrote:

From my qusue~

General

Wow...Big problem, should fix

Offset is not 5373, 5248 is better
All line -125

※Notice: After fix offset, look down to fix your map!!

Insane
00:33:009 - very loud drum hit, change this place??
00:33:456 - 3 hits
00:33:680 - voice start here, add circle
00:38:606 - voice here, circle??
00:39:053 - ^
00:44:427 - ^
01:13:083 - ^

Hard
00:26:292 (9) - no hiding better
00:48:233 (1) - slider end on the blue line
00:50:695 (2) - voice here, a1/2 slider and 00:50:919 - no object better
00:48:233 (1,2) - change 3/4 reverse slider better
00:50:024 - ^
00:52:486 - ^
00:55:397 (1) - ^
00:56:516 - voice here

Easy
No problem, Just fix offset.


Good luck

Jemmmmy wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.
Hit sound: you can try add "clap" on No.2 and No.4 white line.

insane

some suggestion
1. blanket,, you have the concept of blanket and you should develop it .and use blanket more often.
example: 00:09:850 (3,4) -
2. slider. don't don't don't use weird shape slider, sometimes simple is best.
example of bad slider:00:28:208 (5) - 00:30:447 (8) - 00:38:283 (4) - 00:48:358 (1) -
3.rhythm. mainly fine, some point that should notice
from 00:05:372 - to 00:18:805 - you use pretty much same rhythm in those 4 bars, i think same rhythm in 2 bars is fine,but 4? not good
00:22:499 (2,3,4,5) - i can hear there is sound on 2,3,5, but not 4, player will feel uncomfortable when hit a note when there is no sound on the back ground.
00:30:447 - avoid using long slider in insane diff. quiet break the 'tension' you can try this
00:44:552 - there's vocal here , add a note here to make the beat more continuous
00:51:044 (4) - no sound here too

it's good to see that you don't have any overlapping notes.
however, i'm sorry, the quality of your map isn't enough for rank.
but nice job of the first map. you should always consider how to place to make the map look neat

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Of a hard fix.
Please do not do the hard modding.

Lust wrote:

hello from my queue

1. An already ranked version has (TV Ver) instead of (TV Size)
2. Your bg is size 1228x767, find one that is size 1366x768 or resize it ok
3. put a green line and lower the volume to 5% at the spinners in the end

ok

[Easy]

1. 00:17:910 (7,8) - Blanket is off. Use the approach circle to fix no
2. 00:19:701 (1) - Not many newer players are going to expect a second repeat no
3. 00:44:775 (1,1) - Because of the low AR the slider appears halfway through the spinner, making it confusing, I suggest you delete the spinner and map it out ok
4. 00:59:104 (1,1) - ^ ok
5. 01:01:343 (1) - Remove NC

ok
[Normal]

1. 00:28:656 (4,5) - have (4) blanket (5) nicely ok
2. 00:41:193 (1,2) - have (2) blanket (1) ok
3. 00:42:537 (3,4) - habe (3) blanket (4) ok
4. 00:43:432 (4,5,6) - Linear flow like this is awkward and hard to play, I suggest curving the pattern ok
5. 01:06:268 (1,3) - These shapes seem kind of random, perhaps its best to just use simple three point sliders?

ok
[Hard]

1. 00:09:850 (3,4) - Lessen (3)'s curve so that it blankets (4) nicely
2. 00:52:387 (6) - This seems random

This hard seems too easy, its al 1/1 or 1/2!

= Hard that you did not use the latest version..

gl

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Good

[Easy]
AR:+1
You can try add claps to slidertick, making the slidertick sounds clap when in the sampleset
00:08:955 (5) - NC, don't let combo more than (5)
00:12:537 (1) - For hitsounds like this, select the slider head or slider tail to put whistle, do not put whistle for the whole slider
00:19:701 (1) - Try changing to 2 sliders for more flow
00:23:283 (3) - ^ and also this needs NC
00:28:208 - Clap
00:29:104 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:30:447 (4) - NC
00:31:790 - Need to put some claps, try to check all the notes
00:32:238 (5) - Reversing more than once might be a little hard
00:34:029 (1) - Finish hitsound
00:57:313 (2) - Inconsistency DS

Others are fine, just need to fix some hitsounds, adding some whistles and claps

[Normal]
00:05:820 (2) - For the notes like here, I prefer to use clap
00:06:716 - ^ here too
00:06:268 (3,4,5) - Slider whistle doesn't sound nice, put whistles on the head or the tail of slider manually
00:30:447 (7) - NC here
00:31:790 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:835 - Add note here to make it same with 01:04:253 (3) -
01:22:164 - ^

[Hard]
All looks good and flowy, needs some hitsounds to make it perfect!
00:38:507 (3) - If possible don't overlap this slider with 00:37:611 (1) -
00:43:208 (5) - Don't overlap with 00:41:641 (3) -
01:04:477 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:06:044 (2) - This stack doesn't look good cuz both slider heads are stacked together, hiding the numbers
01:07:387 (5) - Prevent bad overlap with 01:06:044 (2) -
01:12:313 (8) - Might slider break here, consider other pattern than 2 reverses
01:16:567 (3) - Remove this, copy 01:17:014 (1) - and paste there with Ctrl+J (make a diamond / square shape)

[Insane]
Not modding since it's uncompleted

Hope that helps

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

Artist:nano.RIPE
add Tag Non non Biryori

sorry but both your mod and your map is out of my standard..I'll give you some general advice
1.about hitsound:I suggest using "24clap"(regard the long white line as 1st line,add clap on 2nd and 4th line.),it matches the beat very much
2.about New Combo:your combo set is quite in a mess.usually we add NC on the long white line(we also call it "downbeat").I personally suggest 1 NC per downbeat in H/I. 1 NC per 2 downbeat in E/N
3.about arrangement:avoid overlaps,it will look better and neater.
4.some tips in Easy:00:23:283 (3) - a slider with 3 repeats will make newbies puzzled 01:13:432 (1,1) - a quick note after spinner is usually banned
well..the other things to improve your map is to play more and check more.
That's all

[gaten's Insane]
OOPS:

Fix it~ // Fixed
00:16:007 (8) - 288x296 // Fixed
00:55:074 (6,1) - blanket // i think it also good
not too many that can I mod in this diff. Nearly perfect

Rey-volution wrote:

Hai o/
from M4M

[General]
make preview points at 01:01:343 -

[Easy]
00:14:328 (3) - remove whistle
00:19:701 (1) - add finish at begin?
00:30:447 (1) - I can't hear the clap ><
00:37:164 (4) - 120x92
00:37:611 (1) - 64x184
00:39:850 (2) - 120 x92
00:40:298 (3) - remove whistle and add clap in backslider (make it same like before)
00:40:298 (3) - add finish at the end
00:41:641 (1) - that slider shape isn't good I think, what about try to make better slider?
00:48:358 (1) - This slider had 4 dots

SPOILER

i think that shape is not good >< maybe you can make only 3 dots like this

SPOILER

01:11:193 (3) - add clap?

[Normal]
Actually I confuse because this diff have too many variation of hitsound volume ._.
00:07:164 (4) - slider is too flat >< suggestion: make it consistent with another slider (same shape)
00:31:790 (2) - can you reduce the volume to 30%?
00:34:029 (1) - add finish
This is only my opinion: I think 01:02:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is better than 01:06:268 (1,2,3,4,5) - but I don't know how to make it better
01:19:701 (6) - remove clap in beginning
01:23:283 (6) - ^
01:27:313 (1) - adjust the volume to 5% in the end of spinner

[Hard]
00:25:074 (5) - NC?
00:32:686 (4) - clap?
if you add clap at 00:35:373 (5) - , I suggest to ad clap at 00:32:686 (4) - too
and also add clap in the end of 00:38:507 (3) -
00:56:865 (3) - add Finish in the end
01:04:477 (5) - remove all whistle
01:05:149 (7) - add whistle add beginning
01:05:820 (1) - change to clap
01:06:044 (2) - whistle only at beginning, delete the rest
01:06:940 (4) - remove whistle at the end
01:08:731 (7) - make same like 01:06:044 (2) -
01:09:402 (1) - change to clap
01:09:626 (2) - add finish in the end
01:10:074 (3) - remove whistle add the beginning
01:10:746 (4,5) - remove whistle
01:12:313 (8) - add whistle at begin and remove clap
01:12:761 (9) - change to whistle
after spinner until the end, why you didn't add whistle like reff part 1? ><
and, you can add clap at every 3/4 of white tick

[gaten's Insane]
OOPS:

Fix it~
00:16:007 (8) - 288x296
00:55:074 (6,1) - blanket
not too many that can I mod in this diff. Nearly perfect

The important thing is, please make hitsound more consistent
I hope this can help you

zengdaen wrote:

m4m

nano.RIPE , not Nano …………lol ,

[insane]

00:12:424 (10,1) - too far , i click 00:12:537 (1) - in 00:12:649 - , maybe you wish it's same 00:33:581 (5,6,7,8,1) -

00:59:104 (1) - add a note and clap , spinner here 00:59:216 -

good map ~

[hard]

too many whistle …… i suggest you delete some , and i suggest you add whistle in white line , add finish in long white line , your need to add more finish in rhythm

layout good

[normal & easy]

ahh …… your whistle and clap …… i can't comprehend …… but layout ok

easy & normal should follow the time-distance equality rule , -0.05~+0.05 , i think you should fix your easy ↓↓↓

00:26:865 (1) - 00:29:104 (3) -

normal‘s 01:07:835 (3) - 01:26:641 (5) - , too difficult in normal , maybe one slider better than two note

good luck ~

zengdaen wrote:

[insane]

00:12:424 (10,1) - too far , i click 00:12:537 (1) - in 00:12:649 - , maybe you wish it's same 00:33:581 (5,6,7,8,1) - // fixed

00:59:104 (1) - add a note and clap , spinner here 00:59:216 - // fixed

good map ~

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ gaten's Insane ]

00:34:925 (3) - 무언가 조금 치기 힘든 모양이네요 .. // Fixed

http://puu.sh/6yEUF.jpg 이런 모양으로 하시면 조금 더 좋다고봐요 저는 'ㅂ' ..!

00:36:716 (8) - 이것도 .. // 이건 걍 안고칠게여

00:38:507 (3) - 이것도 .. // Fixed

00:40:298 (9) - 이것도 .. // Fixed

00:43:880 (9,10) - 이건 조금 직선으로 펴 주시면 더 좋을듯 싶어요. // Fixed

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ sksmwkd125

[ General ]

음... 무언가 Clap 소리가 어울리지 않는듯 하네요 ..

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/334549 이 카렌님 맵처럼 어울리는 히트사운드로 만들어주시면 더 좋을것 같습니다만.. ( 거의 아래있는 모딩은 clap 를 어울리게 바꾸었을때를 대비해서 한 모딩입니다. 만약 변경하시지 않고 저대로 추가하실 경우에는 .. 매우 안어울릴듯.. )

( 추가로 아니면 제 난이도처럼 쿵 하는 소리를 whistle 로 넣어주시고 짝 하는소리를 찾으셔서 clap 로 넣어주시면 더 좋을듯 싶습니다. ) 쿵~짝~쿵~짝!

[ Easy ]

00:06:716 (2) - clap 추가

00:10:298 (2) - clap 추가 처럼 들리는 곳을 집중해서 들으시면서 clap 를 넣어주시면 됩니다.

00:13:880 (2) - clap 추가

00:17:462 (2) - clap 추가

00:41:641 (1) - 슬라이더의 앞쪽에 있는 피니시 제거

00:40:298 (3) - 이 슬라이더의 가장 끝에 피니시 추가

01:06:268 (1) - 중간에 있는 피니시 제거

01:09:402 (1) - 중간에 피니시 추가

01:24:178 (1) - 슬라이더의 맨 앞에 피니시 추가

[ Normal ]

노말도 .. 히트사운드좀 추가해주셧으면 더 좋으실꺼 같습니다.

00:05:820 (2) - clap 추가

00:06:268 (3) - clap 추가

00:07:164 (4) - clap 추가

노말 히트사운드는 아주간단해요 .. 쿵짝쿵짝 처럼 해주시면되요.

휘슬 > 클렙 > 휘슬 > 클렙 순으로 'ㅁ' ..

노말은 꽤 피니시는 잘 들어간것 같네요 'ㅁ' !

00:55:522 (1) - 피니시

00:59:104 (1) - 피니시

01:01:343 (1,2,3) - 음.. 소리가 꽤 큰거같은데요 .. clap 보다는.. 무음이나 휘슬로 해주시는게 더 좋을듯..

01:07:611 (2) - 별로 안좋은 모양인것같네요 .. 다른곳으로 옴겨주세요 .. 노말에서 겹치는건 너무 안좋아요 ..

01:04:253 (3) - 제거

01:07:835 (3) - 제거

01:12:537 (5) - 슬라이더의 앞쪽 부분에 있는 clap 제거

01:15:671 (1,2,3) - 1분 1초와 같음.

01:17:686 (2) - 이것처럼 이렇게 하는것보다는 .. 01:17:686 (2) - 여기서부터 슬라이더의 시작으로 http://puu.sh/6yEzL.jpg 이렇게 해주시면 더 좋으실것 같아요 'ㅂ'~

01:22:387 (4) - 제거하고 그전서클을 위 슬라이더처럼 해주셔도 될듯싶어요.

[ Hard ]

위에서 어느정도 히트사운드는 조금이나마 이해하게 해드린것같으니 .. 하드랑 인센은 자신이 보면서 적용해보시고 .. 모양정도랑 거리정도만 지적해드릴꺠요..

01:01:343 (1,2,3) - 여기 보시면 .. 2.00간격인데 .. 그냥 1.00간격으로 편하게 해주셔도 될듯... 뭔가 어울리지가 않는점프네요 ..

음... 하드 .. 모양과 간격을 좀 많이 생각해서 만들어주시면 더 좋은 맵이 나오실거 같아요 'ㅂ'!!

그보다 하드가 조금많이 박자가 쉬운듯 하네요 .. ( 제맵도 매우 쉽다는소리 많이듣지만.. )

맵은 점프가 많다고 무조건 어려운게아니고 .. 박자도 꽤 중요해요!! 는 참고하시면 좋음.

[ gaten's Insane ]

00:34:925 (3) - 무언가 조금 치기 힘든 모양이네요 ..

http://puu.sh/6yEUF.jpg 이런 모양으로 하시면 조금 더 좋다고봐요 저는 'ㅂ' ..!

00:36:716 (8) - 이것도 ..

00:38:507 (3) - 이것도 ..

00:40:298 (9) - 이것도 ..

00:43:880 (9,10) - 이건 조금 직선으로 펴 주시면 더 좋을듯 싶어요.

[ 개인적인 말 ]

음 ... 일단.. 랭크경험이 있는사람으로서는 .. 조금 그나마 랭크는 힘들것같아요 .. ( 안된다고 하지는 않았어요! )

그래도 이번경험을 쌓아보시면서 실력을 더 쌓고 노력하시면 더 좋은맵들을 많이 내실수있을꺼라 봐요!!

힘내세요!! GL~ ( GL 은 GoodLuck입니다. )

매핑 열심히 하세요~ ㅂㅂ!

SPOILER

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SPOILER

368,332,30447,6,0,B|356:284|396:244|396:244|408:216|408:176|400:132,1,200

SPOILER

[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,96,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 102,179,255

Example

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Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod~

[Hitsounds]
some of the current hitfinish (e.g. 00:26:865 - ) are not so fit. maybe you can try using drum finish. (select note, press ctrl+r, then select finish)
00:49:701 - 00:51:492 - 00:53:283 - 00:55:074 - 00:56:865 - 00:58:656 - it's a good idea to add claps at these place because there're drum hits.
00:57:761 - remove clap?


[Insane]
I suggest AR 8.33
00:21:940 (8,9) - I suggest you reverse them, to make the rhythm more dynamic, and emphasize the drum hit.
00:21:044 (4,5,6,7) - the diagonal jump is a bit too forced to me. make smaller?
00:25:858 (7,8) - maybe change rhythm; same reason. (I won't repeat, if you take the advice please do same thing to 00:36:268 (7,8) - , etc.)
00:29:337 - add note?
00:32:910 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent.
00:49:253 (2) - I'm almost convinced that it's better to place it at 00:49:477 -
00:52:835 (2,3) - 00:56:417 (2,3) - same as above. I suggest to change rhythm.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - it hears bad because of overmapping. maybe you should consider using 40% volume Normal sample.

[Hard]
00:16:790 (2) - strange whistle. it's better use it consistently or just remove it.
00:21:268 (1,2,3) - please make it symmetrical, like: (don't forget to adjust notes after them :3)

SPOILER

00:26:417 (4,1,2) - the overlap is not so good to me. maybe you can try: (yes, please also adjust notes after :3)

SPOILER

00:30:223 (5) - adjust:

SPOILER

00:41:641 (3) - same
00:48:358 (1) - 00:55:522 (1) - shorten to 3/4
00:55:522 - to 00:59:104 - why 100%? 60% is enough.
01:12:761 (9) - move to x:420 y:272 to make better flow.
01:27:313 (1) - the volume is horrible. maybe use 30% and 5% at the end.

[Normal]
00:30:447 (1) - try this:

SPOILER

368,332,30447,6,0,B|356:284|396:244|396:244|408:216|408:176|400:132,1,200

00:47:014 (1) - remove? too close to the spinner
00:48:805 (2) - not on the beat. maybe remove.
00:56:417 (2,4) - change to 60% maybe
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - maybe use 50%, to fit the vocal volume.
01:06:268 (1) - this:

SPOILER

01:13:432 (1) - still use 70% volume. shorten to 01:14:775 - to fit the drum.
01:15:671 (1,2,3) - 50% volume
01:20:596 (1,2) - curve less.
01:27:313 (1) - maybe use 30% and 5% at the end.

[Easy]
00:05:372 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is boring. at least make some symmetry and change in the shape. you can refer to osuplayer111's Easy diffs.
00:27:873 - change to S default
00:29:552 - add an S default section until 00:29:999 -
00:31:343 - use same trick as 00:29:552 - .
00:39:850 (2) - add clap
00:42:089 - same trick :3
00:43:880 - ^
00:44:775 (1) - add clap
00:48:514 - change to 30% maybe, I can't hear the notes.
00:52:387 - you can't use 5% all the way, 30% should be good. change 00:52:835 - to S default, 00:53:283 - S:C1, 00:53:731 - S default. and 00:54:178 - to S:C1.
00:54:626 - delete this section, and 00:55:074 - this.
00:55:634 - change to S default, then 00:57:313 - S:C1, 00:57:425 - S default
01:01:343 - delete this section. 60% is enough.
01:15:671 - same as above. 01:13:432 (1) - add clap
01:27:313 (1) - 5% at the end

That's as far as I can help. Please contact with me whenever you have question. Good luck with the map!

Trust wrote:

Hi, from m4m~ Lets see here.

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended, very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

There's an an incorrect tag in gaten's insane. Make sure to change it from "Biryori" to "Biyori".
Preview time is appears to be unsnapped (that or it's just in 1/16). Snap it to 01:02:686.
The file size of your background is 1.51MB which is very large and uses up a lot of space. You try should reduce the size.
The combo colors for Easy are slightly different than the other difficulties if you have a look in the .osu, make sure to apply this code only to Easy so that it's unfied.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,96,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 102,179,255

[Easy]

Unless you're silencing a slidertick or spinner I would avoid reducing vol. below 30% to make sure hit-sounds on objects stay audible. BATs are picky about this.

00:05:372 - Delete the unnecessary green line here. You can use the red line to change the vol. to 100%
00:42:984 (2) - Spacing inconsistency (Next: 1.13x), make sure to stay close to 1.2x
00:48:514 - Please raise the vol. to at least 30%. The objects here are barely audible. The green line here is also unsnapped. Snap it to 00:48:581, or 00:48:358 if you meant to reduce vol. here.
00:52:387 (2) - The volume must be raised here. It is against the ranking criteria to silence slider-heads as players must be able to hear feedback when hitting objects.
01:27:313 (1) - It would be better to start the spinner on 01:27:537 and add a note on 01:27:313 to fit the background instruments. Make sure to move the green line to 01:27:537 if you do.

Good job! This is well done for a first map
[Normal]

00:05:372 - Same as mentioned for Easy.
00:30:447 (1) - Well this slider looks messy. Maybe try something like this or at least change it to something cleaner.

Example

00:38:507 (2) - Make the same shape as 00:37:611 (1) so they fit together better. It's kind of strange how one is curved and the other isn't.
00:42:537 (3) - The curve is slightly different from 00:41:641 (2). It would look better if they were the same.
00:55:522 - Delete this unnecessary green line, vol. is already at 40%.
00:56:417 - Why the huge jump in vol. here? It causes soft-hitnormal to be louder than the clap on 00:56:865 (3) which sounds strange. The clap on 00:57:761 (4) is also way too loud. Try a slow volume increase like this:

Example

01:13:432 (1) - Reduce the vol. of this spinner to 40% or 50% because it's very loud. Also a finish would be better for this one.
01:27:313 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as Easy.
[Hard]

00:05:372 - Same as mentioned for Easy.
00:40:970 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:193 (2) - NC
00:55:522 - Again the massive volume increase doesn't really fit and is extremely sudden. Try slowly increasing the volume just like I suggested for Normal.
00:58:208 (5) - This slider doesn't fit well with the rhythm you've been following. I would use a circle and 1/2 reverse slider instead:

Example

01:01:343 (1,2,3) - Make these whistles? You used whistles here for Normal and it would sound better than using claps.
01:02:686 (1) - Slider end should be properly snapped on 01:02:910
01:10:074 (3,4,5,6) - Try to rearrange like this to improve the flow from (3) to (4)

Example

01:25:970 (7) - NC here is fitting.
01:27:313 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as Easy. Also I think you would want a lower volume for this spinner. 100% is really noisy.
[gaten's Insane]

00:08:507 (6) - Move this closer to 00:08:955 (1). Would make it easier to read that there is only 1/4 between them.
00:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use bigger spacing increases here, it would be more exciting to play. Kind of like 00:38:955 (4,5,6,7,8) but increasing instead of decreasing.
00:33:022 (3) - Fix so that distance is the same between.
00:56:417 (2) - This slider doesn't start with anything in the music. It would be better to shorten it to 1/2 and start it on 00:56:641 instead
01:11:417 (6) - Turn off grid snap and stack perfectly on the tail of 01:11:641 (1).
01:15:671 (2,3) - There's actually a triplet in the music I think you should map since the drum hit on 01:15:783 is pretty loud. Feels better than a jump here imo.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - Like Flower mentioned, this is over-mapped because there are no sounds in the music on 01:16:678 and 01:16:902. Either of these rhythms fit better:

Example

or

01:18:805 (1) - Move the end sliderpoint one grid left (x:248 y:156) to perfectly blanket with 01:18:358 (4). You can move 01:18:581 (5) a bit left as well so it isn't so cluttered. Should look like this:

Example

01:25:970 (7) - NC to fit your pattern
01:26:193 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:761 - No spinner? Every other diff has one, and it would be nice to stay consistent.

Best of luck with this~
It's actually pretty well done if this is your first map. Just make sure your volume changes make sense and it'll be much better!

Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod~


[Insane]
I suggest AR 8.33
00:21:940 (8,9) - I suggest you reverse them, to make the rhythm more dynamic, and emphasize the drum hit. // Fixed
00:21:044 (4,5,6,7) - the diagonal jump is a bit too forced to me. make smaller? // no, thanks
00:25:858 (7,8) - maybe change rhythm; same reason. (I won't repeat, if you take the advice please do same thing to 00:36:268 (7,8) - , etc.)
00:29:337 - add note? // Fixed, and 00:25:746 also added
00:32:910 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent. // no, thanks
00:49:253 (2) - I'm almost convinced that it's better to place it at 00:49:477 - // Fixed
00:52:835 (2,3) - 00:56:417 (2,3) - same as above. I suggest to change rhythm. // Fixed
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - it hears bad because of overmapping. maybe you should consider using 40% volume Normal sample. // Fixed

That's as far as I can help. Please contact with me whenever you have question. Good luck with the map!

Trust wrote:

Hi, from m4m~ Lets see here.

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended, very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

There's an an incorrect tag in gaten's insane. Make sure to change it from "Biryori" to "Biyori".
Preview time is appears to be unsnapped (that or it's just in 1/16). Snap it to 01:02:686.

[gaten's Insane]

00:08:507 (6) - Move this closer to 00:08:955 (1). Would make it easier to read that there is only 1/4 between them.
00:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use bigger spacing increases here, it would be more exciting to play. Kind of like 00:38:955 (4,5,6,7,8) but increasing instead of decreasing.
00:33:022 (3) - Fix so that distance is the same between.
00:56:417 (2) - This slider doesn't start with anything in the music. It would be better to shorten it to 1/2 and start it on 00:56:641 instead
01:11:417 (6) - Turn off grid snap and stack perfectly on the tail of 01:11:641 (1).
01:15:671 (2,3) - There's actually a triplet in the music I think you should map since the drum hit on 01:15:783 is pretty loud. Feels better than a jump here imo.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - Like Flower mentioned, this is over-mapped because there are no sounds in the music on 01:16:678 and 01:16:902. Either of these rhythms fit better:

Example

or

01:18:805 (1) - Move the end sliderpoint one grid left (x:248 y:156) to perfectly blanket with 01:18:358 (4). You can move 01:18:581 (5) a bit left as well so it isn't so cluttered. Should look like this:

Example

01:25:970 (7) - NC to fit your pattern
01:26:193 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:761 - No spinner? Every other diff has one, and it would be nice to stay consistent.

Best of luck with this~
It's actually pretty well done if this is your first map. Just make sure your volume changes make sense and it'll be much better!

Atrue wrote:

Hello~ Hi!
From



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe the bg is streched= = I think......Not so beautiful. Hmm...I'll think about it.
And you can have a reference of tag in ranked version: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224 by -Umi-
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ star thank you!

[Easy]
General
Good map.
Placement
00:41:641 (1) - Blanket - Fix
Hitsound
00:41:641 (1) - Finish? Hmm..not so fit here imo.- I seem to be decent..

[Normal]
General
Some sliders can be made shaped better, e.g., make the arc of sliders unified.
Anyway, good map.
Beats
00:56:865 (3,4) - Maybe start the sliders on the stress of the vocal like this? - Fix

SPOILER

Placement
00:28:656 (4,5) - Blanket better. - Fix
00:34:477 (2,3) - I don't know if it is a blanket. But if it is, a better shape is needed. - Fix
Hitsound
00:41:641 (2) - Finish here is not so fit I think.- I seem to be decent.

[Hard]
General
Good map. But if more blanket is used the map will be better.
Placement
00:14:328 (1,2) - Blanket is still to be improved. - Fix
00:17:910 (1,2) - ^ - Fix
00:26:417 (4,1) - Quite a big jump.. Seriously here is not a important place to fix. Just smaller distance is better and no change is ok. - I seem to be decent.
00:57:537 (4,6) - Parallel? Seems better. - I seem to be decent.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From

[gaten's Insane]
General
Good sense of beat~ But still something to do for a better placement.
Placement
00:08:955 (1,2) - The flow is not on the direction and the jump is bigger than I think. Maybe you can smaller the distance. // Fixed
00:18:581 (4,5) - The flow can be smoother if you bend the stream 56789... in another direction(up to right but not right to up)

SPOILER

// Fixed
00:21:716 (7,8) - A jump with a counter flow may not so easy to play, quite a sharp turn. But not so easy to change the pattern here. // idk
00:34:477 (2,3) - Looks not pretty I think. And flow is also a sharp turn. Maybe you can make the slider slide to right and change the place of the following note 4,5. // idk
00:34:477 (2,3) - Here the slider is like folded and the cursor may have to pause here to catch the slider 3. I think just let 3 move a little right is a good choice. // idk
01:21:940 (5,1) - Also matter of flow and distance. Really hard to catch the slider 1.

// no, thanks

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

RatedNC17 wrote:

hello~

[Easy]
00:41:641 (1) - make this slider more curvy so that the blanket could look nicer
01:02:686 (1) - move your slider end point to x:352 y:44
01:24:178 (1) - move your slider end point to x:336 y:40

[Normal]
00:41:641 (2) - the finish here to me does not go with the music
00:51:044 (5) - clone this slider then ctrl + H then move it to x:380 y:140
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - how about make these just completely silent or remove the whistles since they seem out of place with the music

[Hard]
00:17:910 (1) - make this curve just about 2 grids to the left
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as the one in Normal
thats about it but your blanket sliders could use a bit more curve to make them look neater

[gaten's Insane]
what no video?
i can't find any problems here but how about adding a spinner at 01:27:649 and end it 01:29:104. and make it silent if you do

Hi!~ from my Queue

Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

Bonch0 wrote:

Hi!~ from my Queue

Easy

00:19:701 (1) - try to make (1) curvy like this:


00:19:701 (1) - copy the new slider like on the picture and replace it with 00:23:283 (1)

00:28:656 (2,3) - make (3) curvy like this:


blank 01:10:746 (2) with the end of this slider 01:08:059 (3)

01:18:805 (3) - klooks kinda ugly, tro to shape it round

Normal

00:14:328 (4) - place it on x148 y300
00:18:805 (5) - place it on x512 y248
01:16:119 (2) - place it on x360 y112
01:16:567 (3) - place it on x452 y152
01:17:014 (1) - rotate it by -12 / it should look like this:


01:22:164 (3) - place it on x396 y288 (to follow the slider!)

Hard

00:23:059 (5) - add a cricle

thats the only thing, good diff

Insane

00:36:716 (8) - please change the position of this slider.kinda like this:


add spinner from 01:27:649 to 01:29:552

nice map and good luck!