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2. gaten's Insane (5 stars, 240 notes)
3. Hard (4.77 stars, 171 notes)
4. Normal (3.17 stars, 109 notes)

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• 오프셋을 5257로 하는게 더 나은 것 같아요~ㅎㅎ
  그리드 레벨을 4로 설정하시고 매핑하심이? (View → Grid level → 4)
  
  [Easy]
  
  • 00:05:257 (1) - 왜 이 슬라이더에는 휘슬을 안넣으셨나요?
    00:05:256 (1,2,3,4) - 슬라이더 모양을 하나로 통일하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:23:167 (3) - 00:19:585 (1) - 과 모양이 같게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:28:540 (2,3) - 블랭킷 시켜주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요!
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:48:242 (1) - 머리에 피니시 같은 힛사 넣어주시면 더 나을 것 같아요!
    00:55:406 (1) - ^
    00:57:197 (1) - 뉴콤보를 딱히 안하셔도 될 것 같아요
    01:07:495 (3,4) - 거리가 너무 머네요.
    01:12:421 (4,5) - 겹치는 것 보단 다르게 배치하는게 더 좋을 것 같아요!
    01:18:465 (3) - (236,110) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 01:17:794 (2) - 와 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
    01:20:037 (1,2,3,4) - 약간 어색한 것 같은데 아래 리듬은 어떠신가요?
    

    SPOILER

    이건 너무 어렵나 ;w;
    
    [Normal]
    
    • 00:14:216 (4) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요
      00:16:902 (3,4) - 아래와 비슷한 형식의 배치는 어떠신가요?
      

      SPOILER

      

      00:25:858 (4,5) - (136,343) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
      00:29:887 (6) - 뉴콤보 설정하심이?
      00:32:574 (10,1) - 거리가 너무 먼 것 같아요
      00:41:529 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..;w;
      00:47:350 (2,1) - 거리가 너무 머네요
      00:57:649 (4,5) - (170,128) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:03:469 (2,3,4) - 아래와 비슷하게 배치해주시면 플레이 할 때 더 나을 것 같아요.
      

      SPOILER

      

      01:05:261 (5) - 01:05:037 - 로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:05:932 (1) - 이걸 지워주시고 01:06:156 (2) - 를 01:05:932 - 여기서 시작하게 하시는 건 어떠신가요?
      이렇게요.
      01:09:738 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..ㅇㅁㅇ;
      01:21:380 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요
      
      [Hard]
      
      • 00:16:901 (2,3) - 좀 더 낫게 블랭킷 시켜주세요
        00:26:304 (9) - (156,302) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:30:334 (1) - 00:30:111 - 여기서 시작하는게 더 노래에 맞는 것 같아요
        00:38:170 (3,4) - 블랭킷 시켜주심이??
        00:43:991 (8,9) - (176,305) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:47:349 (1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
        00:50:483 (1) - (418,193) 좌표로 이동시켜주시고, 00:51:155 (2,3,4) - 이 세개는 (410,317) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
        00:55:409 (1,3,5,7) - 모양을 통일시키는게 더 나을 것 같아요
        00:58:991 (1) - 01:00:783 - 에서 끝나게 해주세요
        01:08:618 (5) - (344,211) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        01:17:349 (2,3,4) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요
        01:21:827 (5,6) - 아래와 같은 배치는 어떠신가요?
        

        SPOILER

        

        01:23:619 - 서클 추가해주세요
        01:25:857 (4,5) - 하나의 슬라이더로 길게 만드시는 건 어떤가요?
        01:26:304 (5,6) - 01:26:752 (6) - 을 지우고 01:26:304 (5) - 를 01:26:752 - 에서 끝나게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
        이것처럼요! ㅎㅎ
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:07:947 (7,8,9) - 디스턴스에 맞게 배치해주세요. (9)가 약간 안맞는 것 같은데..
          00:14:216 (5) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주세요
          00:26:081 (8,9,10) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요!
          00:31:678 (9) - (371,191) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:33:693 (5) - (79,244) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:34:813 (3,4,6) - 사이 간격이 같게 배치해주세요.
          00:43:768 (4,5,6) - 너무 가깝네요
          00:50:037 (2,3,4,5,1) - 아래 리듬을 사용해보시는건 어떤가요?
          

          SPOILER

          

          00:54:290 - 서클 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요!
          00:56:977 (1,1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
          01:04:701 (4) - 지워주세요
          01:08:619 (2) - (343,306) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          01:09:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 거리가 뒤죽박죽이네요 ;w;
          01:17:798 (1,2) - 이런 배치는 너무 헷갈리지 않을까요? 더 멀리 배치 시켜주세요
          01:19:141 (4,5) - 이것도 더 멀리 배치하셔도 될 듯..ㅎㅎ
          01:22:947 (3,4,5,6) - 통째로 01:22:835 - 로 이동시켜주세요
          01:25:298 (4,5) - 거리가 먼 듯 싶어요 ;w;
          01:25:410 (5) - 01:25:634 - 에서 끝나는 슬라이더로 만들어주세요.
          
          첫 맵이신가요?? 잘만드셨네요!! ㅎㅎ
          연습 조금만 더하시면 훌륭한 맵이 나올듯....ㄷㄷ
          
          + 별 받으세요 얍얍 ★

[ Raphael ] wrote:

안녕하세요 >w<

[General]

• 오프셋을 5257로 하는게 더 나은 것 같아요~ㅎㅎ
  그리드 레벨을 4로 설정하시고 매핑하심이? (View → Grid level → 4)
  
  [Easy]
  
  • 00:05:257 (1) - 왜 이 슬라이더에는 휘슬을 안넣으셨나요?
    00:05:256 (1,2,3,4) - 슬라이더 모양을 하나로 통일하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:23:167 (3) - 00:19:585 (1) - 과 모양이 같게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
    00:28:540 (2,3) - 블랭킷 시켜주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요!
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:48:242 (1) - 머리에 피니시 같은 힛사 넣어주시면 더 나을 것 같아요!
    00:55:406 (1) - ^
    00:57:197 (1) - 뉴콤보를 딱히 안하셔도 될 것 같아요
    01:07:495 (3,4) - 거리가 너무 머네요.
    01:12:421 (4,5) - 겹치는 것 보단 다르게 배치하는게 더 좋을 것 같아요!
    01:18:465 (3) - (236,110) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 01:17:794 (2) - 와 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
    01:20:037 (1,2,3,4) - 약간 어색한 것 같은데 아래 리듬은 어떠신가요?
    

    SPOILER

    이건 너무 어렵나 ;w;
    
    [Normal]
    
    • 00:14:216 (4) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주시는게 더 나을 것 같아요
      00:16:902 (3,4) - 아래와 비슷한 형식의 배치는 어떠신가요?
      

      SPOILER

      

      00:25:858 (4,5) - (136,343) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요. 제대로 안겹쳐졌네요
      00:29:887 (6) - 뉴콤보 설정하심이?
      00:32:574 (10,1) - 거리가 너무 먼 것 같아요
      00:41:529 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..;w;
      00:47:350 (2,1) - 거리가 너무 머네요
      00:57:649 (4,5) - (170,128) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:03:469 (2,3,4) - 아래와 비슷하게 배치해주시면 플레이 할 때 더 나을 것 같아요.
      

      SPOILER

      

      01:05:261 (5) - 01:05:037 - 로 이동시켜주세요.
      01:05:932 (1) - 이걸 지워주시고 01:06:156 (2) - 를 01:05:932 - 여기서 시작하게 하시는 건 어떠신가요?
      이렇게요.
      01:09:738 (2,3) - 다른 배치를 생각해보심이..ㅇㅁㅇ;
      01:21:380 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요
      
      [Hard]
      
      • 00:16:901 (2,3) - 좀 더 낫게 블랭킷 시켜주세요
        00:26:304 (9) - (156,302) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:30:334 (1) - 00:30:111 - 여기서 시작하는게 더 노래에 맞는 것 같아요
        00:38:170 (3,4) - 블랭킷 시켜주심이??
        00:43:991 (8,9) - (176,305) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        00:47:349 (1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
        00:50:483 (1) - (418,193) 좌표로 이동시켜주시고, 00:51:155 (2,3,4) - 이 세개는 (410,317) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요.
        00:55:409 (1,3,5,7) - 모양을 통일시키는게 더 나을 것 같아요
        00:58:991 (1) - 01:00:783 - 에서 끝나게 해주세요
        01:08:618 (5) - (344,211) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
        01:17:349 (2,3,4) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요
        01:21:827 (5,6) - 아래와 같은 배치는 어떠신가요?
        

        SPOILER

        

        01:23:619 - 서클 추가해주세요
        01:25:857 (4,5) - 하나의 슬라이더로 길게 만드시는 건 어떤가요?
        01:26:304 (5,6) - 01:26:752 (6) - 을 지우고 01:26:304 (5) - 를 01:26:752 - 에서 끝나게 하시는 건 어떤가요?
        이것처럼요! ㅎㅎ
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:07:947 (7,8,9) - 디스턴스에 맞게 배치해주세요. (9)가 약간 안맞는 것 같은데..
          00:14:216 (5) - 00:13:320 (3) - 과 같은 모양으로 해주세요
          00:26:081 (8,9,10) - 더 넓게 배치하셔도 될 것 같아요!
          00:31:678 (9) - (371,191) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:33:693 (5) - (79,244) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          00:34:813 (3,4,6) - 사이 간격이 같게 배치해주세요.
          00:43:768 (4,5,6) - 너무 가깝네요
          00:50:037 (2,3,4,5,1) - 아래 리듬을 사용해보시는건 어떤가요?
          

          SPOILER

          

          00:54:290 - 서클 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요!
          00:56:977 (1,1) - 딱히 뉴콤보가 없어도 될 것 같아요
          01:04:701 (4) - 지워주세요
          01:08:619 (2) - (343,306) 좌표로 이동시켜주세요
          01:09:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 거리가 뒤죽박죽이네요 ;w;
          01:17:798 (1,2) - 이런 배치는 너무 헷갈리지 않을까요? 더 멀리 배치 시켜주세요
          01:19:141 (4,5) - 이것도 더 멀리 배치하셔도 될 듯..ㅎㅎ
          01:22:947 (3,4,5,6) - 통째로 01:22:835 - 로 이동시켜주세요
          01:25:298 (4,5) - 거리가 먼 듯 싶어요 ;w;
          01:25:410 (5) - 01:25:634 - 에서 끝나는 슬라이더로 만들어주세요.
          
          첫 맵이신가요?? 잘만드셨네요!! ㅎㅎ
          연습 조금만 더하시면 훌륭한 맵이 나올듯....ㄷㄷ
          
          + 별 받으세요 얍얍 ★

deejaydray wrote:

m4m from my queue ~

KIAI time is not snapped = Modifications done! ^ ^

EASY:

Change the slider tick rate from 2 to 1 (it is recommended for Easy) = modification
I recommend you to use the same Grid Level for all difficulties (4) = I am pleased to do so ^^
01:17:794 (2,3) - this is too hard for Easy = I do not know... But has been modified ~

NORMAL:

00:05:258 (1) - this object is not snapped (you should delete it and re-create it in the same place) = Okay
00:30:331 (2) - this shape is a bit ugly = Okay
00:53:615 (7) - NC here = Okay

GL ! ^^

1. uncheck widescreen sup
2. uncheck letter box
3. Title 「なないろびより (TV Size)」
4. change sampleset S→S:C1
   
   SPOILER

   
5. add http://puu.sh/6rp61.wav

1. 00:05:258 (1)
2. 00:06:152 (3)
3. 00:07:048 (5)

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Pandiar wrote:

hi ~ from my Q

[General]

1. uncheck widescreen sup
2. uncheck letter box
3. Title 「なないろびより (TV Size)」
4. change sampleset S→S:C1
   
   SPOILER

   
5. add http://puu.sh/6rp61.wav

i think offset is wrong
i recommend to get mp3 and offset setting from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224
(don't forget resnapped)


[Insane]
hitsound

i think it needs more hit sound
it is hear it if you listen to music with care
for example

1. 00:05:258 (1)
2. 00:06:152 (3)
3. 00:07:048 (5)

00:05:223 (1) - add finish
00:19:585 (1) - ^
00:33:913 (1) - ^
00:48:242 (1) - add finish and volume 45~55 is better imo
00:55:406 (1) - add finish
00:58:988 (1) - ^
01:02:570 (1) - ^
01:16:898 (1) - ^
01:24:062 (1) - ^
01:26:749 (3) - ^

the other
00:19:552 (1,2) - for better flow

SPOILER

00:21:120 (6) - remove NC
00:21:792 (1) - NC
00:23:582 (2) - it may too close? move (1) about x52 y104
00:26:492 (10) - remove
00:33:656 (5) - ^
00:42:613 (1) - remove NC
00:42:836 (2) - NC
00:50:001~ 00:53:359 - i think this is better

SPOILER

01:04:777 (4) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:17:986 - add note
01:22:463 (2) - how about this?

SPOILER

[Hard]
hitsound
same as Insane

the other
sry skip


[Normal and Easy]
i found Distance error in both diff
you should use Distance snap

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spacing rate can be changed by pressing the alt

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Easy:0.8~1.0 Normal:1.0~1.2 is better imo


good luck !

Losertic wrote:

태그에 のんのんびより 이거 지우는게 어떠신가요..? 소스에 이미 있으니까....

Nanairo Biyori... 이거는 잘 모르겠네요. 영어or자국어가 Source에 이미 존재하면 나머지 언어라도 태그는 지워야 하나...

m1223961117 wrote:

From my qusue~

General

Wow...Big problem, should fix

Offset is not 5373, 5248 is better
All line -125

※Notice: After fix offset, look down to fix your map!!

Insane
00:33:009 - very loud drum hit, change this place??
00:33:456 - 3 hits
00:33:680 - voice start here, add circle
00:38:606 - voice here, circle??
00:39:053 - ^
00:44:427 - ^
01:13:083 - ^

Hard
00:26:292 (9) - no hiding better
00:48:233 (1) - slider end on the blue line
00:50:695 (2) - voice here, a1/2 slider and 00:50:919 - no object better
00:48:233 (1,2) - change 3/4 reverse slider better
00:50:024 - ^
00:52:486 - ^
00:55:397 (1) - ^
00:56:516 - voice here

Easy
No problem, Just fix offset.


Good luck

Jemmmmy wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.
Hit sound: you can try add "clap" on No.2 and No.4 white line.

insane

some suggestion
1. blanket,, you have the concept of blanket and you should develop it .and use blanket more often.
example: 00:09:850 (3,4) -
2. slider. don't don't don't use weird shape slider, sometimes simple is best.
example of bad slider:00:28:208 (5) - 00:30:447 (8) - 00:38:283 (4) - 00:48:358 (1) -
3.rhythm. mainly fine, some point that should notice
from 00:05:372 - to 00:18:805 - you use pretty much same rhythm in those 4 bars, i think same rhythm in 2 bars is fine,but 4? not good
00:22:499 (2,3,4,5) - i can hear there is sound on 2,3,5, but not 4, player will feel uncomfortable when hit a note when there is no sound on the back ground.
00:30:447 - avoid using long slider in insane diff. quiet break the 'tension' you can try this
00:44:552 - there's vocal here , add a note here to make the beat more continuous
00:51:044 (4) - no sound here too

it's good to see that you don't have any overlapping notes.
however, i'm sorry, the quality of your map isn't enough for rank.
but nice job of the first map. you should always consider how to place to make the map look neat

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Of a hard fix.
Please do not do the hard modding.

Lust wrote:

hello from my queue

1. An already ranked version has (TV Ver) instead of (TV Size)
2. Your bg is size 1228x767, find one that is size 1366x768 or resize it ok
3. put a green line and lower the volume to 5% at the spinners in the end

ok

[Easy]

1. 00:17:910 (7,8) - Blanket is off. Use the approach circle to fix no
2. 00:19:701 (1) - Not many newer players are going to expect a second repeat no
3. 00:44:775 (1,1) - Because of the low AR the slider appears halfway through the spinner, making it confusing, I suggest you delete the spinner and map it out ok
4. 00:59:104 (1,1) - ^ ok
5. 01:01:343 (1) - Remove NC

ok
[Normal]

1. 00:28:656 (4,5) - have (4) blanket (5) nicely ok
2. 00:41:193 (1,2) - have (2) blanket (1) ok
3. 00:42:537 (3,4) - habe (3) blanket (4) ok
4. 00:43:432 (4,5,6) - Linear flow like this is awkward and hard to play, I suggest curving the pattern ok
5. 01:06:268 (1,3) - These shapes seem kind of random, perhaps its best to just use simple three point sliders?

ok
[Hard]

1. 00:09:850 (3,4) - Lessen (3)'s curve so that it blankets (4) nicely
2. 00:52:387 (6) - This seems random

This hard seems too easy, its al 1/1 or 1/2!

= Hard that you did not use the latest version..

gl

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Good

[Easy]
AR:+1
You can try add claps to slidertick, making the slidertick sounds clap when in the sampleset
00:08:955 (5) - NC, don't let combo more than (5)
00:12:537 (1) - For hitsounds like this, select the slider head or slider tail to put whistle, do not put whistle for the whole slider
00:19:701 (1) - Try changing to 2 sliders for more flow
00:23:283 (3) - ^ and also this needs NC
00:28:208 - Clap
00:29:104 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:30:447 (4) - NC
00:31:790 - Need to put some claps, try to check all the notes
00:32:238 (5) - Reversing more than once might be a little hard
00:34:029 (1) - Finish hitsound
00:57:313 (2) - Inconsistency DS

Others are fine, just need to fix some hitsounds, adding some whistles and claps

[Normal]
00:05:820 (2) - For the notes like here, I prefer to use clap
00:06:716 - ^ here too
00:06:268 (3,4,5) - Slider whistle doesn't sound nice, put whistles on the head or the tail of slider manually
00:30:447 (7) - NC here
00:31:790 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:835 - Add note here to make it same with 01:04:253 (3) -
01:22:164 - ^

[Hard]
All looks good and flowy, needs some hitsounds to make it perfect!
00:38:507 (3) - If possible don't overlap this slider with 00:37:611 (1) -
00:43:208 (5) - Don't overlap with 00:41:641 (3) -
01:04:477 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:06:044 (2) - This stack doesn't look good cuz both slider heads are stacked together, hiding the numbers
01:07:387 (5) - Prevent bad overlap with 01:06:044 (2) -
01:12:313 (8) - Might slider break here, consider other pattern than 2 reverses
01:16:567 (3) - Remove this, copy 01:17:014 (1) - and paste there with Ctrl+J (make a diamond / square shape)

[Insane]
Not modding since it's uncompleted

Hope that helps