All Fixed except spinner on music endTrust wrote:
Hi, from m4m~ Lets see here.
Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended, very questionable
Black: Suggestion
[General]
There's an an incorrect tag in gaten's insane. Make sure to change it from "Biryori" to "Biyori".
Preview time is appears to be unsnapped (that or it's just in 1/16). Snap it to 01:02:686.
[gaten's Insane]
00:08:507 (6) - Move this closer to 00:08:955 (1). Would make it easier to read that there is only 1/4 between them.
00:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use bigger spacing increases here, it would be more exciting to play. Kind of like 00:38:955 (4,5,6,7,8) but increasing instead of decreasing.
00:33:022 (3) - Fix so that distance is the same between.
00:56:417 (2) - This slider doesn't start with anything in the music. It would be better to shorten it to 1/2 and start it on 00:56:641 instead
01:11:417 (6) - Turn off grid snap and stack perfectly on the tail of 01:11:641 (1).
01:15:671 (2,3) - There's actually a triplet in the music I think you should map since the drum hit on 01:15:783 is pretty loud. Feels better than a jump here imo.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - Like Flower mentioned, this is over-mapped because there are no sounds in the music on 01:16:678 and 01:16:902. Either of these rhythms fit better:Example01:18:805 (1) - Move the end sliderpoint one grid left (x:248 y:156) to perfectly blanket with 01:18:358 (4). You can move 01:18:581 (5) a bit left as well so it isn't so cluttered. Should look like this: 01:25:970 (7) - NC to fit your pattern
or
01:26:193 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:761 - No spinner? Every other diff has one, and it would be nice to stay consistent.
Best of luck with this~
It's actually pretty well done if this is your first map. Just make sure your volume changes make sense and it'll be much better!
thank you