Hello~
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[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe the bg is streched= = I think......Not so beautiful.
And you can have a reference of tag in ranked version: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224 by -Umi-
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .
From
[Notion]
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe the bg is streched= = I think......Not so beautiful.
And you can have a reference of tag in ranked version: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224 by -Umi-
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
[Easy]
General
Good map.
Placement
00:41:641 (1) - Blanket
Hitsound
00:41:641 (1) - Finish? Hmm..not so fit here imo.
General
Good map.
Placement
00:41:641 (1) - Blanket
Hitsound
00:41:641 (1) - Finish? Hmm..not so fit here imo.
[Normal]
General
Some sliders can be made shaped better, e.g., make the arc of sliders unified.
Anyway, good map.
Beats
00:56:865 (3,4) - Maybe start the sliders on the stress of the vocal like this?
Placement
00:28:656 (4,5) - Blanket better.
00:34:477 (2,3) - I don't know if it is a blanket. But if it is, a better shape is needed.
Hitsound
00:41:641 (2) - Finish here is not so fit I think.
General
Some sliders can be made shaped better, e.g., make the arc of sliders unified.
Anyway, good map.
Beats
00:56:865 (3,4) - Maybe start the sliders on the stress of the vocal like this?
Placement
00:28:656 (4,5) - Blanket better.
00:34:477 (2,3) - I don't know if it is a blanket. But if it is, a better shape is needed.
Hitsound
00:41:641 (2) - Finish here is not so fit I think.
[Hard]
General
Good map. But if more blanket is used the map will be better.
Placement
00:14:328 (1,2) - Blanket is still to be improved.
00:17:910 (1,2) - ^
00:26:417 (4,1) - Quite a big jump.. Seriously here is not a important place to fix. Just smaller distance is better and no change is ok.
00:57:537 (4,6) - Parallel? Seems better.
General
Good map. But if more blanket is used the map will be better.
Placement
00:14:328 (1,2) - Blanket is still to be improved.
00:17:910 (1,2) - ^
00:26:417 (4,1) - Quite a big jump.. Seriously here is not a important place to fix. Just smaller distance is better and no change is ok.
00:57:537 (4,6) - Parallel? Seems better.
[gaten's Insane]
General
Good sense of beat~ But still something to do for a better placement.
Placement
00:08:955 (1,2) - The flow is not on the direction and the jump is bigger than I think. Maybe you can smaller the distance.
00:18:581 (4,5) - The flow can be smoother if you bend the stream 56789... in another direction(up to right but not right to up)00:21:716 (7,8) - A jump with a counter flow may not so easy to play, quite a sharp turn. But not so easy to change the pattern here.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Looks not pretty I think. And flow is also a sharp turn. Maybe you can make the slider slide to right and change the place of the following note 4,5.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Here the slider is like folded and the cursor may have to pause here to catch the slider 3. I think just let 3 move a little right is a good choice.
01:21:940 (5,1) - Also matter of flow and distance. Really hard to catch the slider 1.
General
Good sense of beat~ But still something to do for a better placement.
Placement
00:08:955 (1,2) - The flow is not on the direction and the jump is bigger than I think. Maybe you can smaller the distance.
00:18:581 (4,5) - The flow can be smoother if you bend the stream 56789... in another direction(up to right but not right to up)00:21:716 (7,8) - A jump with a counter flow may not so easy to play, quite a sharp turn. But not so easy to change the pattern here.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Looks not pretty I think. And flow is also a sharp turn. Maybe you can make the slider slide to right and change the place of the following note 4,5.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Here the slider is like folded and the cursor may have to pause here to catch the slider 3. I think just let 3 move a little right is a good choice.
01:21:940 (5,1) - Also matter of flow and distance. Really hard to catch the slider 1.
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .