( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[General]
Good
[Easy]
AR:+1
You can try add claps to slidertick, making the slidertick sounds clap when in the sampleset
00:08:955 (5) - NC, don't let combo more than (5)
00:12:537 (1) - For hitsounds like this, select the slider head or slider tail to put whistle, do not put whistle for the whole slider
00:19:701 (1) - Try changing to 2 sliders for more flow
00:23:283 (3) - ^ and also this needs NC
00:28:208 - Clap
00:29:104 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:30:447 (4) - NC
00:31:790 - Need to put some claps, try to check all the notes
00:32:238 (5) - Reversing more than once might be a little hard
00:34:029 (1) - Finish hitsound
00:57:313 (2) - Inconsistency DS
Others are fine, just need to fix some hitsounds, adding some whistles and claps
[Normal]
00:05:820 (2) - For the notes like here, I prefer to use clap
00:06:716 - ^ here too
00:06:268 (3,4,5) - Slider whistle doesn't sound nice, put whistles on the head or the tail of slider manually
00:30:447 (7) - NC here
00:31:790 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:835 - Add note here to make it same with 01:04:253 (3) -
01:22:164 - ^
[Hard]
All looks good and flowy, needs some hitsounds to make it perfect!
00:38:507 (3) - If possible don't overlap this slider with 00:37:611 (1) -
00:43:208 (5) - Don't overlap with 00:41:641 (3) -
01:04:477 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:06:044 (2) - This stack doesn't look good cuz both slider heads are stacked together, hiding the numbers
01:07:387 (5) - Prevent bad overlap with 01:06:044 (2) -
01:12:313 (8) - Might slider break here, consider other pattern than 2 reverses
01:16:567 (3) - Remove this, copy 01:17:014 (1) - and paste there with Ctrl+J (make a diamond / square shape)
[Insane]
Not modding since it's uncompleted
Hope that helps
[General]
Good
[Easy]
AR:+1
You can try add claps to slidertick, making the slidertick sounds clap when in the sampleset
00:08:955 (5) - NC, don't let combo more than (5)
00:12:537 (1) - For hitsounds like this, select the slider head or slider tail to put whistle, do not put whistle for the whole slider
00:19:701 (1) - Try changing to 2 sliders for more flow
00:23:283 (3) - ^ and also this needs NC
00:28:208 - Clap
00:29:104 - ^
00:29:999 - ^
00:30:447 (4) - NC
00:31:790 - Need to put some claps, try to check all the notes
00:32:238 (5) - Reversing more than once might be a little hard
00:34:029 (1) - Finish hitsound
00:57:313 (2) - Inconsistency DS
Others are fine, just need to fix some hitsounds, adding some whistles and claps
[Normal]
00:05:820 (2) - For the notes like here, I prefer to use clap
00:06:716 - ^ here too
00:06:268 (3,4,5) - Slider whistle doesn't sound nice, put whistles on the head or the tail of slider manually
00:30:447 (7) - NC here
00:31:790 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:835 - Add note here to make it same with 01:04:253 (3) -
01:22:164 - ^
[Hard]
All looks good and flowy, needs some hitsounds to make it perfect!
00:38:507 (3) - If possible don't overlap this slider with 00:37:611 (1) -
00:43:208 (5) - Don't overlap with 00:41:641 (3) -
01:04:477 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:06:044 (2) - This stack doesn't look good cuz both slider heads are stacked together, hiding the numbers
01:07:387 (5) - Prevent bad overlap with 01:06:044 (2) -
01:12:313 (8) - Might slider break here, consider other pattern than 2 reverses
01:16:567 (3) - Remove this, copy 01:17:014 (1) - and paste there with Ctrl+J (make a diamond / square shape)
[Insane]
Not modding since it's uncompleted
Hope that helps