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Aeonian Sonder

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)


Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~
I fixed everything but the whitsle part. I kinda sounds bland under my ears, and I don't know what else to put besides the whistle :?
Aeonian Sonder

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane


ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck
Removed unnessisary 1/4 notes
Aeonian Sonder

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck
I fixed it and...Why doesn't everyone think I know Korean!?!?
Aeonian Sonder

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.
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.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.
I have resnapped some/most of the points. I will continue to resnap everything along the way.
Aeonian Sonder
Did you get my updated beatmap link yet? More importantly, did you update my difficulty?
Topic Starter
neonat
Heatkai & apxh: i will update and fix when i return home on the 28 . Im still out of the country. Sorry about that.
Topic Starter
neonat
Updated your difficulty -APXH
Topic Starter
neonat

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/
  • slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.
  1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting. moved it slightly
  2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
  3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion. not a blanket
  4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
  5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
  6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
  7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff. I kinda like it, but I'll change it to 0.75x
  8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
  9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
  10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting. I find at starting a little weird though
  11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
  12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
  13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
  14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
  15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
  16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
  17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
  18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
  19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
  20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
  21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
  22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
  23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
  24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
  25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
  26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
  27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
  28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
  29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
  30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
  31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
  32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
  33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.
Thanks for the mod~
BounceBabe
Hi, Recheck

Normal

00:24:846 (4) - Not stacked well
01:09:846 (1,2) - Spacing
02:00:846 (3) - 2 reserves might confuse players, i advise to use only one

Hard

00:06:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is different than on the next ones
00:09:846 (3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent

Insane and Orgin

Insane

Try to make such a rythm as I did. A mix between vocal and BG music, the way you did it is just 1/1

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example
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You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck
Onozu
Such a cute map
Aeonian Sonder

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example
osu file format v12

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You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck
なにそれ? ° ω °

Anyways, I'm continuing to fix all the timing points, because apperently, the resnap feature DOES NOT WORK. I'll quite busy with other maps, like GrayKaiser82 's Sexy Free and Single beatmap, and school. I will continue to fix the timing points. Don't worry/
Hard
Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal


[General Stuff]

  1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that.
  2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does.
  3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video.
Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

  • 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
    00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
    00:22:596 - ^
    00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ?
    00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
    00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe)
    00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ?
    00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846
    00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion)
    00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too)
    00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful.
    00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting.
    01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe?
    01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy.
    01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
    02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players.
    02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152
Woah. It's over? Nice map :)

Hard


[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

  1. HP - 1
  2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish
That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

  • 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
    00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596
    00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms*
    00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
    00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
    00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
    00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
    01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry.
    01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
    01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too.
    01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
    01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
    01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
    01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty.
    01:47:346 - ^
    02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
    02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
    02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe...


I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'
Topic Starter
neonat

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal


[General Stuff]

  1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that. I think it should still be find, this difficulty is not demanding and spread out
  2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does. sounds fine on my side
  3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video. If they want to see the ending they can look at the other difficulties xD :p
Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

  • 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
    00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
    00:22:596 - ^
    00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ? Probably. Changed.
    00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
    00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe) Designed changed anyway with the shifting of (2)
    00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ? Don't think so
    00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846 no thanks :X
    00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion) changed
    00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too) neonat likes straight too though, slides don't have to love me
    00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful. these sliders don't multiply like them though, I thinkI'll keep them this way
    00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting. changed
    01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe? if I remember right, this part is always like that
    01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy. not really (to me)
    01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
    02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players. was one of the many reasons why this is Normal
    02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152
Woah. It's over? Nice map :)

Hard


[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

  1. HP - 1
  2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish
That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

  • 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
    00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596 I feel my way is more fitting
    00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms* Not this time, but you may like a vocaloid song I have made already but is unsubmitted, with all the curves in the world
    00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
    00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
    00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
    00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
    01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry. I know what you mean, but I like it this way so HD can be *ahem* more tricky for 1st time try
    01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
    01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too. Cute :X ....what can I say?
    01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
    01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
    01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
    01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty. I wouldn't have my door
    01:47:346 - ^
    02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
    02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
    02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe... Changed


I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'
You can now find the english lyrics in the Creator's words.
The video is creepy because, well, it is a scary song.

Thanks for the mod, and it's ok to have humour in your mod, I know my mods are bland orz
~~~~
[-Google-]
Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod :P

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
    SPOILER
    - [Hard] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Insane] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Normal] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Origin] :
    Combo5 : 255,170,43
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
  3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D:
    SPOILER
    01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
    01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
    01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
    01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
    01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
    01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
    01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
    01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
    01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
    01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
    01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
    01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
    01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
    01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
    01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
    01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
    01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
    01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
    01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
    01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
    01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
    01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
    01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
    01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
    01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
    01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
    01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
    01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
    01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
    01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
    01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
    01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
    01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
    01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
    01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
    01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
    02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
    02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
    02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
    02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
    02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
    02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
    02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
    02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
    02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
    02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
    02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
    02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
    02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
    02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
    02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
    02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
    02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
    02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
    02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
    02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
    02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
    02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
    02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
    02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
    02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
    02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
    02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
    02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
    02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
    02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
    02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
    02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
    02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
    02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
    02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
    02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
    02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
    02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
    02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
    02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
  4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:
Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]
  • Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
    Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
    00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion :D
    01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o?
    00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
    00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D:
    Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O

    Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3
[Hard]
  • Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring :x
    00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
    00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D:
    00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up

    01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 -
    02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ?
    02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D:
Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]
Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346.
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once.

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.
Topic Starter
neonat

[-Google-] wrote:

Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod :P

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
    SPOILER
    - [Hard] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Insane] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Normal] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Origin] :
    Combo5 : 255,170,43
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
  3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D: Fixed what I could find
    SPOILER
    01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
    01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
    01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
    01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
    01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
    01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
    01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
    01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
    01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
    01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
    01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
    01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
    01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
    01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
    01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
    01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
    01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
    01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
    01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
    01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
    01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
    01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
    01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
    01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
    01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
    01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
    01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
    01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
    01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
    01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
    01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
    01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
    01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
    01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
    01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
    01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
    02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
    02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
    02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
    02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
    02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
    02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
    02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
    02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
    02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
    02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
    02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
    02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
    02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
    02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
    02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
    02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
    02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
    02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
    02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
    02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
    02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
    02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
    02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
    02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
    02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
    02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
    02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
    02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
    02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
    02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
    02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
    02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
    02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
    02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
    02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
    02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
    02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
    02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
    02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
    02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
  4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:
Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]
  • Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
    Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
    00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion :D Changed somewhat
    01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o? Keeping
    00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
    00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D: k
    Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O seems constant to me though, I had to change the divisor to keep up with the change in sv

    Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3
[Hard]
  • Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring :x
    00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
    00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D: sure
    00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up it's k

    01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 - changed
    02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ? no change
    02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D: important! for the last piece of music as well as for the video
Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD
Thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
neonat

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]
Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G Reason for not repeating too many is because it is the simplest difficulty
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346. Trying to break it into phrases, so there is an unusually large gap
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once. Added one circle

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle. I do not really think these 2 would fit more that what it is now, sorry
Thanks for your input, and I'll make changes where I see should be changed.
Reat
Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.
Topic Starter
neonat

Reat wrote:

Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.
Yea I do still update this map. Will change when I get back home. Thanks
Aeonian Sonder
Hi modders all alike.

I'm currently busy with my life, but tomorrow, I'll update my beatmap again.
Aeonian Sonder

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]


[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.
The thing is, there is no sound @ 02:23:846 , so it makes no sense to make a slider until there
Also, saying to have a slider @ 02:23:596 , then saying to remove the circle at the same timing spot is kinda redundant, don't'tchya think?
Losertic
호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?


Normal

  1. Check Distance.
    00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
  2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
  3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time.
  4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin
  5. 01:30:346 - create a circle
[/notice]

Hard

  1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
  2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
  3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
  4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

  1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap
  2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443)
  3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Kinomi
Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner :o
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
Topic Starter
neonat

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?


Normal

  1. Check Distance.
    00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
  2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
  3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time. sure
  4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin end of spinner would be too close to next beat
  5. 01:30:346 - create a circle
[/notice]

Hard

  1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
  2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
  3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
  4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

  1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap k
  2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443) decided not to overlap this earlier when I made this
  3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Thanks for the mod, appreciate it!

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner :o
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes changed shape

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272 ok



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
Thanks for your mod too!
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!
Topic Starter
neonat

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!
I repositioned quite a bit of Normal and Hard, changed some flow in Insane. Origin you may IRC -APXH if you want I guess

Thanks for passing-by here
GIDZ
Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better :D
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard :D

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play.
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Topic Starter
neonat

gideon5504 wrote:

Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better :D
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard :D

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play. Found another little adjustment here
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Made 3 changes :X But thanks for modding! ;D
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!
Aeonian Sonder

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?



Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Fixed all. Made sliders ends or starts have the same point.
Aeonian Sonder

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late


Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
Both Fixed
Aeonian Sonder

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

If 'ya don't like the song, then don't mod it...
Topic Starter
neonat

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!
Sorry no change for Insane or Hard :x We'll see if there would be changes for Origin >.< Thanks for looking though~
pieguyn
hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) -
why not mapped till the end 0.0

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) -
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) -

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~)
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm?
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle?
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@

[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 -
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
Topic Starter
neonat

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) - there is no whistle on slider body though
why not mapped till the end 0.0 I wonder why myself orz

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) - They are different parts of the same verse
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural That's a possibility, but I think I prefer a repeat
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) - ok

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg I could try it
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~ I could try this too
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~) not changing this one
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently trying 50%
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm? not adding
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle? not adding
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@ :|


sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
Thanks for another mod from you for another one of my song!
Aeonian Sonder
Hey neonat,
could you send me a picture of that file that you currently have for the song?
Aeonian Sonder

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)



[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here K
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 - Well, there's a bell that goes on, so I'm gonna have to change the hitsounds up a bit
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable 20%
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
The second mod you gave me kinda changes the hitsounds I combined. I'll get to the hitsounds sooner or later
eniyan
hi , from my queue :)

[Normal]
  1. 00:53:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - display them neatly...
[Hard]
  1. i feel that there was too much clockwise rotation.
  1. 01:04:346 (5) - i feel strange.
[Insane]
  1. i feel that there are too many sliders of the straight line in x-axis, the y-axis.
  1. 00:29:846 (1) - it was different form so far when i hitted it in this timing. it is hard to play it very much when it was changed suddenly
  1. 01:45:846 (1) - do it parallel to x-axis
[Origin]
  1. kiai Time:
    01:09:846~01:09:971
    01:13:846~01:13:971
    01:17:846~01:17:971
    01:21:846~01:21:971
    01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?
  1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.
  1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.
  1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
neonat
Next update will be on Sunday. Changes in guest diff and hitsounds.
Aeonian Sonder

EnixYuki wrote:

hi , from my queue :)


[Origin]
  1. kiai Time:
    01:09:846~01:09:971
    01:13:846~01:13:971
    01:17:846~01:17:971
    01:21:846~01:21:971
    01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?
もちろん
  1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.
  1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

  1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^
'K Thank you.
Awaken
strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Origin]
00:07:846 (4) - try ctrl+g
00:10:846 (2,3) - You must remember circles can't overlay sliders when you want a blanket
00:18:846 (2,3) - seems not a good blanket
01:19:596 (3) - try ctrl+g
01:32:846 (5,6,7,8) - this can be fitter http://puu.sh/4q91M.jpg
01:35:846 (1) - try ctrl+g

Just that..the arrangement of this diff is a little boring.. :(
As the most difficult diff,I think you can try to make more complex rhythm and more interesting arrangement :D
But it's still good :)


[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)?
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle?
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not. ;)
01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider.
02:22:846 (10) - NC

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~ :)
Topic Starter
neonat

Awaken wrote:

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request



[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)? It was either this or having it at the same height as the previous slider, I guess the former might seem nicer when 7 and 8 appears
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle? made it more triangle-ish I guess, not even though
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not. ;) yes, didn't intend it to be straight anyway
01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3 I get what you mean, but I want to distant them from each other for the new verse
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider. adjusted other positions too
02:22:846 (10) - NC ok

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~ :)
Thanks for the mod! Woo ZHSteven :3
AruOtta
From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern :
00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ?
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ?
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ?

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ?
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this :
Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?

[Origin]
More histounds ?
00:10:846 (2,3) - Blanket ? Or something else ?
00:40:096 (2,3) - Too short jump
01:22:846 (4) - Maybe move this slider in the center ?

Good Luck *u*
Koiyuki
From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009.
Still have a long way to rank.

[Origin]
Nothing to say.
Symmetry of the map is prefect, also weird.

[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) -

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.
Aeonian Sonder
I'll get to the mods soon, most likely tomorrow.
tetsutaro
Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
:idea: Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
:idea: <Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
:idea: Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity.
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo.
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect.
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Muzukashii slightly more than Ninja wa Saikou
:idea: I would have go for a very sparse kat solo before the piano comes. But you have your freedom to choose how your map goes as long as it fits the music.
00:41:596 (2) and 00:49:596 (2) - I see how the drums are dealt with 00:40:346 (1,1,2,1), but for this there is nothing here so remove. Mixing different tracks can throw some off.
01:29:846 (1,2,3) and 01:37:846 (1,2,3) - It is a heavy bell here, triple 16ths is unfitting and unnatural given the pace of the song. Single large don at 01:29:846/01:37:846 please.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Oni like Kaze ga Fuiteiru (not the abomination by A****)
:idea: Because the percussion depth is basically exhausted with a Muzukashii-level, it is *OK* to add your own percussion to it. Kinda like what Mori no Kuma-san had, you know? (notice the struggle at "OK")
:idea: 00:43:846 (2,1,2,3,1,1) and similar - Not happy with even 16ths clusters in this contexts unless hanging. But hey(ry.

Also because M4M so no tip jar.
Topic Starter
neonat

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern : ok
00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ? I know it's hidden underneath, but I think being stationary makes more sense in the music
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ? moved (3) a little
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time will consider
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ? simpler tune

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap I made it look nicer
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ? I think having it stationary fits the song too
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles I think it's still fine though
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this : moved it differently
Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?



Good Luck *u*

mtbbsben wrote:

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009. Would tweak some of the positions and shapes, that might make it seem that way, but other than that, I don't think there is any other reason why it would seem 2009ish
Still have a long way to rank.


[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
keeping current positions
01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - following the piano

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it changed to 2 circles

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

tetsutaro wrote:

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
:idea: Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
:idea: <Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
:idea: Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity. ok
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo. ok, changed rhythm
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect. I know what you mean, but I think this is more suited for the long run!
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596. ok I give in



Also because M4M so no tip jar.
Thanks for all the mods~!!!
0gre_old

tetsutaro wrote:

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
:idea: Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
:idea: <Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
:idea: Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Muzukashii slightly more than Ninja wa Saikou
:idea: I would have go for a very sparse kat solo before the piano comes. But you have your freedom to choose how your map goes as long as it fits the music.
00:41:596 (2) and 00:49:596 (2) - I see how the drums are dealt with 00:40:346 (1,1,2,1), but for this there is nothing here so remove. Mixing different tracks can throw some off.
01:29:846 (1,2,3) and 01:37:846 (1,2,3) - It is a heavy bell here, triple 16ths is unfitting and unnatural given the pace of the song. Single large don at 01:29:846/01:37:846 please.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Oni like Kaze ga Fuiteiru (not the abomination by A****)
:idea: Because the percussion depth is basically exhausted with a Muzukashii-level, it is *OK* to add your own percussion to it. Kinda like what Mori no Kuma-san had, you know? (notice the struggle at "OK")
:idea: 00:43:846 (2,1,2,3,1,1) and similar - Not happy with even 16ths clusters in this contexts unless hanging. But hey(ry.

Also because M4M so no tip jar.
http://puu.sh/4zoPs.zip
certainly didnt attach with difficulties
but done wid mods thx :)
Aeonian Sonder

Awaken wrote:

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Origin]
00:07:846 (4) - try ctrl+g OK
00:10:846 (2,3) - You must remember circles can't overlay sliders when you want a blanket I'll be thinking about what to do instead
00:18:846 (2,3) - seems not a good blanket Same as above
01:19:596 (3) - try ctrl+g OK
01:32:846 (5,6,7,8) - this can be fitter http://puu.sh/4q91M.jpg OK
01:35:846 (1) - try ctrl+g OK

Just that..the arrangement of this diff is a little boring.. :(
As the most difficult diff,I think you can try to make more complex rhythm and more interesting arrangement :D
But it's still good :)

GL~ :)
I've been thinking of remapping it, but it'll take quite a while.
Aeonian Sonder

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

Origin]
More histounds ? I'll do something about the hitsounds
00:10:846 (2,3) - Blanket ? Or something else ? I'mm thinking about what to do instead during the weakend
00:40:096 (2,3) - Too short jump OK
01:22:846 (4) - Maybe move this slider in the center ? It matches the location of the last combo slider of the previous combos

Good Luck *u*
I really need to remap this...Wish me luck!
Aeonian Sonder

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009.
Still have a long way to rank.

[Origin]
Nothing to say.
Symmetry of the map is prefect, also weird. -_-;; I'll remap it...This was made when I was still a beginner at mapping.


Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.
Yeah, I've been thinking about remapping it, the only problem is WHEN. I have school, extra-curricular activities, I take piano, blah blah blah.
Topic Starter
neonat
so do I put this as WIP then?
Aeonian Sonder
Wow, I made this map dead, haven't I?
Topic Starter
neonat

-APXH wrote:

Wow, I made this map dead, haven't I?
Lol, if you want to remake your difficulty, go ahead, the mapset can wait.
Evening
o/ Mod by Req

@neonat | You might want to include epilepsy warning in the description, the video flashes quite a bit

[Oni]

Please reset all combo before looking through this mod, this is because of wrong formatting when I copy over the code of the notes

00:16:846 (37,39) - Swap | I see no strong beat or significance that this kat should be on 1, I recommend you to put it on 2 to continue the kat rhythm on the white lines
00:27:596 (82,83) - Modify | The kat rhythm seems to cut off here, I recommend you to end it at a white line since there is no strong rhythm at the start of the music
00:28:096 (85,86,88,89,90,91,93,94) - Invert ( d>k , k>d ) | Map to the vocals, since your kats does not since to emphasize on anything in the music
01:30:096 (386,387) - k,k > d,d | Seems like there's too many kats cluttered together here, emphasis on this point is unneeded, I recommend this to reduce it
01:38:096 (426,427) - k,k > d,d | Same here
01:51:346 (483) - d > k | Too less kats here for this section, I recommend to add this kat to keep the flow going
02:19:096 + d | Add this don to make the transition from triplets to singles a little smoother

[Muzu]

01:08:346 (180,181) - Swap | The high-pitched vocal falls on 180

No other problems
0gre_old

lZenxl wrote:

o/ Mod by Req

@neonat | You might want to include epilepsy warning in the description, the video flashes quite a bit

[Oni]

Please reset all combo before looking through this mod, this is because of wrong formatting when I copy over the code of the notes

00:16:846 (37,39) - Swap | I see no strong beat or significance that this kat should be on 1, I recommend you to put it on 2 to continue the kat rhythm on the white lines
00:27:596 (82,83) - Modify | The kat rhythm seems to cut off here, I recommend you to end it at a white line since there is no strong rhythm at the start of the music
00:28:096 (85,86,88,89,90,91,93,94) - Invert ( d>k , k>d ) | Map to the vocals, since your kats does not since to emphasize on anything in the music
01:30:096 (386,387) - k,k > d,d | Seems like there's too many kats cluttered together here, emphasis on this point is unneeded, I recommend this to reduce it
01:38:096 (426,427) - k,k > d,d | Same here
01:51:346 (483) - d > k | Too less kats here for this section, I recommend to add this kat to keep the flow going
02:19:096 + d | Add this don to make the transition from triplets to singles a little smoother

[Muzu]

01:08:346 (180,181) - Swap | The high-pitched vocal falls on 180

No other problems
I could not able to find witch notes talking about, because in my map shows with new combos as (1 , 2 , 1 , 1 , etc)
and I made this map long ago
so just fixed up from beginning.

http://puu.sh/5OtK4.zip

thank you mod btw 8-)
Topic Starter
neonat
Thanks and updated~
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[0gre's Muzu]
00:48:846 - add d? it sounds really empty

[0gre's Oni]
nothing

well, it's been pretty extensively modded, I can't find much, it's quite good already
good luck for rank~
karterfreak
[Ogre's Muzukashii]

01:09:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow, this is a huge highlight XD. Anyways, There's no breaks at all in here. While it isn't necessary, perhaps you can put some breaks in this section and leave the second kiai to be the no break one? You'd have more progressing difficulty that way to match the song a bit better imo. I suggest removing the following notes to do this. 01:10:096 (2) - 01:12:096 (3) - 01:14:096 (3) - 01:16:096 (3) - 01:18:096 (3) - 01:20:096 (3) - 01:22:096 (3) - 01:24:096 (3) -

[Ogre's Oni]

00:41:346 - Add a don here.

00:43:596 (134,135) - Consider changing this to be k d, especially if you add the don above.

00:44:346 (136) - Change to k if you apply the above mod, otherwise leave this be.

00:57:846 (185,186) - Change 185 to a don and remove 186. the kd dk here doesn't really match how you were mapping previous sections, but i feel d dk would.
Jerry
This song gives me nightmares


Here's the mod that you requested for~ :3


  • [0gre's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:29:596 (1) - delete this so it's same with what you did at 00:59:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) ?

  2. 01:57:846 (1) - Delete this and then add a don at 01:57:846 ? Total silence fits this part much better than having a spinner's "donkatdonkatdonkat" sound going over this part

  3. 02:18:721 (1) - I don't see this pattern anywhere else in the map, so I suggest deleting it.


  • [0gre's Oni]
  1. 00:20:346 (50,51) - change to d k to match the vocals

  2. 00:56:096 (179) - Remove this? A little break here would allow 00:55:846 (178) to stand out and have more "impact" since a very heavy drumbeat can be heard there in the music

  3. 01:04:096 - ^ same for this as well, remove?
  4. 01:08:096 - ^ same, remove? And also, add a finish at 01:07:846 since the beat here in the music sound much more heavier

  5. 02:23:596 - this part has a very low and heavy beat, change to don and also add a finish?

That's all from me!
Good luck~
0gre_old

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[0gre's Muzu]
00:48:846 - add d? it sounds really empty

[0gre's Oni]
nothing

well, it's been pretty extensively modded, I can't find much, it's quite good already
good luck for rank~

Tasha wrote:

[Ogre's Muzukashii]

01:09:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow, this is a huge highlight XD. Anyways, There's no breaks at all in here. While it isn't necessary, perhaps you can put some breaks in this section and leave the second kiai to be the no break one? You'd have more progressing difficulty that way to match the song a bit better imo. I suggest removing the following notes to do this. 01:10:096 (2) - 01:12:096 (3) - 01:14:096 (3) - 01:16:096 (3) - 01:18:096 (3) - 01:20:096 (3) - 01:22:096 (3) - 01:24:096 (3) -

[Ogre's Oni]

00:41:346 - Add a don here.

00:43:596 (134,135) - Consider changing this to be k d, especially if you add the don above.

00:44:346 (136) - Change to k if you apply the above mod, otherwise leave this be.

00:57:846 (185,186) - Change 185 to a don and remove 186. the kd dk here doesn't really match how you were mapping previous sections, but i feel d dk would.

Jerry wrote:

This song gives me nightmares


Here's the mod that you requested for~ :3


  • [0gre's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:29:596 (1) - delete this so it's same with what you did at 00:59:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) ?

  2. 01:57:846 (1) - Delete this and then add a don at 01:57:846 ? Total silence fits this part much better than having a spinner's "donkatdonkatdonkat" sound going over this part

  3. 02:18:721 (1) - I don't see this pattern anywhere else in the map, so I suggest deleting it.


  • [0gre's Oni]
  1. 00:20:346 (50,51) - change to d k to match the vocals

  2. 00:56:096 (179) - Remove this? A little break here would allow 00:55:846 (178) to stand out and have more "impact" since a very heavy drumbeat can be heard there in the music

  3. 01:04:096 - ^ same for this as well, remove?
  4. 01:08:096 - ^ same, remove? And also, add a finish at 01:07:846 since the beat here in the music sound much more heavier

  5. 02:23:596 - this part has a very low and heavy beat, change to don and also add a finish?

That's all from me!
Good luck~
there were lots of points on Muzu so I remade it cuz it was made pretty long ago
Istill think that (526,527,528,529) are constant and no finish at the end.
Latest Oni (changed) and remade Muzu
and thank you for took a look on my diffs

http://puu.sh/5Z9MV.zip
Topic Starter
neonat
Updated I think...
Puzzle fox
Really creepy map. I only play CTB and hard difficulty didn't seem really hard to me. I'll try it on other diffs later too. Nice one anyway. Hope this song gets ranked someday ;)
Topic Starter
neonat

Puzzle fox wrote:

Really creepy map. I only play CTB and hard difficulty didn't seem really hard to me. I'll try it on other diffs later too. Nice one anyway. Hope this song gets ranked someday ;)
Yes, the hard is pretty simple ^^, it's 4.5 star rating also anyway haha, but I'm just going up the scale NHI so this is the 'Hard' of the mapset.
And Thanks :)
Mystima
Hi, from my modding queue

Normal: All good

Hard: 01:08:346 (2,3) - add a finish on the first hit of slider:(2) and on the first and last hit of slider:(3)
It sounds better, more impact (Imo)

Insane: 00:45:096 (4) - change the whistle from the last hit in the slider to the middle hit
sounds better (Imo)
00:52:346 (4) - add a whistle here
00:57:096 (5) - remove whistle here and 01:05:096 (8) - here and 01:39:596 (7) - here
Topic Starter
neonat

Mystima wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

Normal: All good

Hard: 01:08:346 (2,3) - add a finish on the first hit of slider:(2) and on the first and last hit of slider:(3)
It sounds better, more impact (Imo) no change in Hard

Insane: 00:45:096 (4) - change the whistle from the last hit in the slider to the middle hit
sounds better (Imo) removed it completely
00:52:346 (4) - add a whistle here not adding because I think the clap is good enough
00:57:096 (5) - remove whistle here and 01:05:096 (8) - here and 01:39:596 (7) - here only removed the last suggestion
Thanks for taking a look at my map
mingmichael
mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Muzukashii]

General
change your diff's name from 0gre's Muzu to be 0gre's Muzukashii. the diff name should be complete

Notes Structure
☞ i saw that you mostly followed the vocal sounds. i have some suggestions about vocal sounds there and you can see at the Notes box

☞ some confused pattern which are found. you can see the Notes box to see the suggestions

☞ well basicly all patterns here are nice~ okay

Notes
• change 00:20:346 - ; 00:20:846 - ; 00:21:346 - to be o o o. i changed them to follow the vocal sounds there. 00:20:346 - have a same pitch sound (vocal) like 00:19:846 - and you used kat at 00:19:846 - . so, to keep the consistency of the same vocal sounds, i change 00:20:346 - to be kat. and at 00:20:846 - , the sound becomes quite deeper there and becomes high again at 00:21:346 -

• change 00:24:096 - to be don. this note is still don like 00:23:846 - bcause there's not any sounds too there, so just follow the previous note with a same note

• change 00:32:096 - to be don too. the reason is same like above ^

move 00:40:596 - to 00:40:846 - . well i know why you put it at 00:40:596 - because you wanted follow the drum hit at there right? well it's nice but please consider again. you used "x x x x x x" suddenly at that part, and you can see at the next notes too. basicly you used a single note, or 3notes or 5notes there. of course when you gave a 2notes and 4notes like that, the players will be quite confused about it.

• change 00:41:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sound which is still high like 00:41:346 -

move 00:48:596 - to 00:48:846 -

• change 00:49:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^

move 01:32:096 - to 01:30:846 -

• change 01:59:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ and then kat at 01:59:596 - is to emphasize the big don at 01:59:846 - which is for the new part of the song


====================


[ Oni]

General
☞ well~


Notes
• change 00:19:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sounds like 00:19:346 - before it changes to another pitch sound a t00:19:846 -

• change 00:42:596 - and 00:42:846 - to be o o, to follow the vocal sounds again and also make a better pattern too with o o o o o o o

• change 01:09:096 - to be don. basicly the reason is same like above too btw ^


====================


okay that's all from me
btw for the first time i thought that this map couldn't have Oni diff because the song is low and calm. but okay, in my opinion it's alright with oni on this map :)

kay goodluck then o/
0gre_old

mingmichael wrote:

mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Muzukashii]

General
change your diff's name from 0gre's Muzu to be 0gre's Muzukashii. the diff name should be complete
@ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/79116 has Muzu and I have ranked with Muzu as well.

Notes Structure
☞ i saw that you mostly followed the vocal sounds. i have some suggestions about vocal sounds there and you can see at the Notes box

☞ some confused pattern which are found. you can see the Notes box to see the suggestions ok!

☞ well basicly all patterns here are nice~ okay

Notes
• change 00:20:346 - ; 00:20:846 - ; 00:21:346 - to be o o o. i changed them to follow the vocal sounds there. 00:20:346 - have a same pitch sound (vocal) like 00:19:846 - and you used kat at 00:19:846 - . so, to keep the consistency of the same vocal sounds, i change 00:20:346 - to be kat. and at 00:20:846 - , the sound becomes quite deeper there and becomes high again at 00:21:346 - understood

• change 00:24:096 - to be don. this note is still don like 00:23:846 - bcause there's not any sounds too there, so just follow the previous note with a same note means k  k k k k d (k) smt like this ? quite not sure

• change 00:32:096 - to be don too. the reason is same like above ^

move 00:40:596 - to 00:40:846 - . well i know why you put it at 00:40:596 - because you wanted follow the drum hit at there right? well it's nice but please consider again. you used "x x x x x x" suddenly at that part, and you can see at the next notes too. basicly you used a single note, or 3notes or 5notes there. of course when you gave a 2notes and 4notes like that, the players will be quite confused about it.
@ 00:37:846 at this point i added a change compare to beginnin part so i increased a note by includin drums and 00:42:346 this long thingy is just because i thought there is no place i can cut.
I just didnt like to use d d k k d , k k d , d d k , all the time, wanted clear the difference.

Btw I have arranged it to support those points

• change 00:41:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sound which is still high like 00:41:346 - ok!

move 00:48:596 - to 00:48:846 -

• change 00:49:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ ye!

move 01:32:096 - to 01:30:846 -

• change 01:59:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ and then kat at 01:59:596 - is to emphasize the big don at 01:59:846 - which is for the new part of the song with a long time of my funny experience, I found that d d k d D is also work as d d k k D which is a bit outmoded


====================


[ Oni]

General
☞ well~ hehe

Notes Structure
☞ kay~! lolol

Notes
• change 00:19:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sounds like 00:19:346 - before it changes to another pitch sound a t00:19:846 -

• change 00:42:596 - and 00:42:846 - to be o o, to follow the vocal sounds again and also make a better pattern too with o o o o o o o

• change 01:09:096 - to be don. basicly the reason is same like above too btw ^


====================


okay that's all from me
btw for the first time i thought that this map couldn't have Oni diff because the song is low and calm. but okay, in my opinion it's alright with oni on this map :)
Any song could have ONI diff :3
kay goodluck then o/

I wasn sure of namin is unrankable cuz this OSU always change their ranking strategy.
Ill wait if bat gonna say anythin about it !

ty ;D

http://puu.sh/6cENo.zip
Topic Starter
neonat
updated
DenoisoGoiso
\:D/ Random Lucky!!!! taiko mod~

teara tell me to mod that then i want to mod >:3

[General]
  1. >:3

[Muzukashii]
  1. Any feedback/greetings and General

    • this muzu like a futsuu :/ but can you chane the diff name to "0gre's Muzukashii"? also average taiko player don't know what is that.
  1. Kats Suggestion

    • 01:00:346 (148,149) - add kat these. that was high piano instrumental, and empty here. so consider kat these.
      01:08:846 (170) - is this kat fit anything? maybe add kat at (171)? this is more stylish at d d k k. and the note will fit the vocal perfectly also the pattern music not really readable.
      01:41:346 (266) - add kat to this object. this object pitch/vocal is really high here, and empty here.
  1. Delete/Add Suggestion

    • Low priority ;w;
  1. Other Suggestion

    • 00:27:846 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - this pattern was not really pitching notes :/ maybe try kat to 1/1 beatsnap? in case i mean the pitch note... is not really readable and i see at 1/2 beatsnap rhythm then add kat to 1/2 beatsnap (i mean red tick) not good, nothing to fits (61,65) is not higher. you should fit these vocal.
      00:44:346 (104,105,106,107) - okay, this pattern not really fit mini drum/piano anything. i suggested to you make kd dk to really fit music. in the image case, i mean move the (105) to red tick. that's really more stylish with the pattern and fit the piano. i don't understand anything about this. but i will give you the image:
      01:31:096 (234) - this, you should move this to white tick. the (232,233) is ugly pattern i see. when 5 patterns emphasize to 2 pattern, these music is not readable for notes. also the better pattern is 5 patterns emphasize to 3 patterns is more good and fit the music.
      02:03:596 (328) - move it to 256,192 (:3]__)
      02:07:596 (342) - ^ (:3]__)
      02:11:596 (356) - ^ (:3]__)

[Oni]
  1. Any feedback/greetings and General

    • This is muzu!!??
  1. Kats Suggestion

    • omg ;w; low priority
  1. Delete/Add Suggestion

    • 00:40:596 (121) - delete this object? too emphasize at this, at least before pattern stream (i mean (116,117,118) pattern) return to 3 1/1 object is like an overmapped. so consider delete it.
  1. Other Suggestion

    • 00:21:846 (53,54,55,56,57) - does this pattern is fit music? so pls add kat. this pattern was not readable. consider add kat these so music is not wrong with objects.
      00:29:846 (81,82,83,84,85) - ^ same as above
      00:37:721 - maybe place this greenline to big white tick? no description available

i won't mod other parts again when modding oni
Good luck~ consider get TAIKO ICON FIRST! wwww
Teara
Was almost done with the mod when the power failed, and I lost it.

It consisted mostly of hit-sounds suggestions for the start of the collab (which IMO is very lacking) so I suggest you guys revisit it and make some improvements to it, so that it can match the hit-sound usage at the end of the collab =p

Also had some patterns suggestions on normal and hard, grab me ingame when you get time and we can do those in a IRC mod.
Topic Starter
neonat

Teara wrote:

Was almost done with the mod when the power failed, and I lost it.

It consisted mostly of hit-sounds suggestions for the start of the collab (which IMO is very lacking) so I suggest you guys revisit it and make some improvements to it, so that it can match the hit-sound usage at the end of the collab =p

Also had some patterns suggestions on normal and hard, grab me ingame when you get time and we can do those in a IRC mod.
Ok will do. Will try to get on and find you this weekend.
DenoisoGoiso
fak u teara

doesn't this map get taiko icon? or standard icon?
Teara
IRC Mod
17:45 Teara: o/
17:45 Teara: busy with a IRC mod =p almost done
18:32 neonat: was eating late dinner heh
18:32 Teara: np, I just finished =)
18:32 Teara: with my other mod
18:32 neonat: i see
18:32 Teara: Ok, lets do this
18:34 Teara: Ok, on hard
18:34 Teara: this is just my opinion, so you can totally ignore the following
18:34 Teara: 00:46:846 (3,4,5) -
18:34 Teara: this feels very oldstyle mapping
18:34 Teara: 00:51:846 (1,2,3) -
18:34 Teara: this is cool thou
18:35 Teara: but thats minor
18:36 neonat: hmmm
18:36 Teara: anyway, some hitsounds suggestions
18:37 Teara: its your mapping style, I'm just pointing out what I dislike =p
18:37 Teara: 00:55:346 (1,3) -
18:37 Teara: whisltes here
18:37 Teara: 00:56:846 (4,5) - and remove whisltes here
18:38 neonat: what do u think of this then http://puu.sh/6g5Pv.jpg
18:38 Teara: thats already a lot better =)
18:39 neonat: 00:52:846 (3) - has both clap and whistle
18:39 neonat: should i remove one?
18:40 neonat: the end of slider
18:40 Teara: but as for the whistle suggestions, rather then focusing on the vocals (which can cause whistle spam) focus on the drums rather
18:40 Teara: yea, you can remove the whislte on the slider end
18:41 Teara: but anyway, do you understand what I mean with about focusing on the drums rather?
18:41 neonat: add whistle on 00:55:346 (1,3) -
18:41 neonat: removed on (4,5)
18:42 Teara: cool, and on 00:59:346 (1) - add whislte
18:42 Teara: 00:59:846 (2) - remove whislte from start, but keep end
18:42 neonat: yeh
18:42 neonat: to keep it similar
18:42 neonat: to previous patterns of hitsounds
18:42 Teara: yes
18:42 Teara: :)
18:42 Teara: great
18:42 Teara: fix that solong then
18:42 neonat: added on 01:03:346 (3) -
18:43 neonat: removed on (6,7)
18:43 neonat: any thoughts on
18:43 neonat: the finish on start of 01:07:846 (1) -
18:43 neonat: ?
18:43 Teara: claps and finishes are mostly placed right, only whistles that bothered me
18:43 Teara: no, that finish focus a lot on the vocal, which is good
18:44 Teara: since it gets very high pitched
18:44 Teara: =)
18:44 neonat: 01:25:846 - onwards, want me to continue the claps?
18:45 Teara: claps or whisltes work, but not both
18:45 neonat: and only use the whistles for the softer part like 00:56:252 - ?
18:45 Teara: you can choose which is nicer for you
18:46 Teara: thats a good idea
18:46 Teara: since claps are a bit louder and whistles are softer
18:46 neonat: 01:33:846 (1) - start of slider, finish?
18:47 Teara: accually, it might be a good idea to start transitioning into claps from there on out
18:47 Teara: its to soft for a finish imo
18:47 Teara: but the key for hitsounds is consistency
18:48 Teara: randomly placed hitsounds or selective hitsounding sounds bad most of the time
18:49 neonat: i see
18:49 Teara: in rare cases its sounds great thou
18:52 neonat: 01:55:846 (4) - finish?
18:52 Teara: yes
18:52 Teara: hehehe, the end where the boy smiles is creepy -.-
18:53 neonat: new combo too?
18:53 neonat: haha
18:53 neonat: yeh
18:53 neonat: lol
18:53 Teara: yup, NC too
18:54 neonat: 02:14:846 (4) - curved it cuz thats cooler lol
18:54 Teara: :)
18:55 neonat: dang lol BSS stuck at 11.0% that accursed number
18:55 Teara: like IRC modding with you =p you can think for yourself!
18:56 Teara: most people I have to point out every hitsound suggestion =p
18:56 neonat: shld i restart osu?
18:56 neonat: ah
18:56 Teara: give it a while
18:56 neonat: mmm yeh i just had to redo the upload
18:56 Teara: great
18:57 neonat: now just waiting for it to be complete
18:57 neonat: yeh i plan to map creepy vocaloid songs lols
18:57 Teara: :3
18:57 neonat: updated~
18:58 Teara: you can do the same for normal
18:58 Teara: (hitsounds)
18:58 Teara: whislte's or claps on the drums
18:58 neonat: shall check it out
18:59 neonat: claps is after the start when the drums kick in i guess
18:59 Teara: ye
19:01 Teara: yea, hard looks good now
19:05 neonat: 01:04:846 - on normal
19:05 neonat: shld i stick with it following the vocals
19:05 neonat: or fill this gap
19:05 Teara: its fine
19:06 Teara: gives time to rest fingers
19:06 Teara: you dont have any big breaks anywhere, and places like this helps rest a bit
19:06 Teara: on a hard or insane, sure, but normal and easy nah
19:07 neonat: 01:26:346 (2) - changed to clap instead of finish
19:07 Teara: sure
19:09 Teara: and yes, you can apply hitsound suggestions to insane too.
Topic Starter
neonat
Updated mainly hitsounds.
Teara
Alright.

That should be good enough now :)

Evening
noice
Kagami Yuki
Hi~ taiko mods from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. I like this song \:D/
  2. Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii".
  3. I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part".
  4. whole diffs looks cool √
Let's take some minor changes.Then it's ready for Taiko-BATs' checking.

[Ogre's Oni]
  1. 00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here :P
  2. 00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
  3. 01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 -
  4. 01:43:346 (369) - k here?
  5. 01:51:346 (401) - ^
  6. 01:58:346 (427) - ^
  7. 02:02:346 (445) - ^
  8. 02:06:346 (466) - ^
[Ogre's Muzu]
  1. 00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better.
  2. 00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 -
  3. 01:06:346 (164) - k here?
  4. 01:09:346 (171) - ^
  5. 01:41:346 (266) - ^
  6. 01:56:346 (304) - ^
All above are my suggestions. It's up to you:3
Good luck for ranking~~
0gre_old

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

Hi~ taiko mods from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. I like this song \:D/
  2. Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii". oh not again!! alright then !! LOL!!!
  3. I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part".
  4. whole diffs looks cool √ ty ( :; ´^;ิ益;^ิ;.)
Let's take some minor changes.Then it's ready for Taiko-BATs' checking.

[Ogre's Oni]
  1. 00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here :P cuz u know this bit is like sounding goin low
  2. 00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
  3. 01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 - i know but i don like to see kkk combo just right next to d-combos
  4. 01:43:346 (369) - k here? kk
  5. 01:51:346 (401) - ^
  6. 01:58:346 (427) - ^
  7. 02:02:346 (445) - ^
  8. 02:06:346 (466) - ^
[Ogre's Muzu]
  1. 00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better. k
  2. 00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 - oh yeah
  3. 01:06:346 (164) - k here? all fixed to follow the above thing
  4. 01:09:346 (171) - ^
  5. 01:41:346 (266) - ^
  6. 01:56:346 (304) - ^
All above are my suggestions. It's up to you:3
Good luck for ranking~~
actually It is already checked by MAT long time ago does it not count ? lol
ty mod ;D

http://puu.sh/6heVO.zip
Topic Starter
neonat
updated!
karterfreak
Huh, I could have swore I modded this before. Rechecking! :oops:

[0gre's Muzukashii]

00:10:596 (14,15,16,17,18) - Instead of kd dkd here, try kddk d. This will emphasize the 1/1 notes better that start at 18.

00:52:596 - Could add a don here.

01:00:346 (146) - See if you like this as a kat. I think it sounds a bit better here.

01:30:346 (230,231) - I suggest moving these to start at 01:30:596 instead. You could also remove 01:31:596 (234) to keep consistency with previous patterns, but it isn't required here.

01:40:596 - Add a don here if you added one to 00:52:596.

02:12:971 (353) - I suggest removing this as it doesn't really fit with any of the previous mapping.

[0gre's Oni]

HP5 -> HP6
OD5 -> OD6

00:22:596 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - Instead of dk d kkdkd here, why not try kd k dkdkd? the dkdkd at the end fits the last 5 notes much better imo, and the kd k leads into dkdkd well.

00:30:596 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Same as above.

00:42:221 (128,129,130) - I think you could get away with deleting 128 and 130 while still keeping the same relative difficulty here without having to overmap any. Try it and see what you think.

01:30:346 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - Instead of ddd d kkk k d d k here, give ddd k dkd k d k d a shot, especially if you apply the first two mods that I suggested for your Oni.

01:43:346 (367,368,369) - Just a suggestion but try kkd here. it gives you that dkdkd pattern that I suggested in the first two mods, which fits really well with that 5 note piano part.

01:51:346 (399,400,401) - Same suggestion as above.

Overall not a whole lot wrong with the taiko difficulties for the map. Call me back for a recheck when you've looked at this mod.
0gre_old

Tasha wrote:

Huh, I could have swore I modded this before. Rechecking! :oops:

[0gre's Muzukashii]

00:10:596 (14,15,16,17,18) - Instead of kd dkd here, try kddk d. This will emphasize the 1/1 notes better that start at 18.

00:52:596 - Could add a don here.

01:00:346 (146) - See if you like this as a kat. I think it sounds a bit better here.

01:30:346 (230,231) - I suggest moving these to start at 01:30:596 instead. You could also remove 01:31:596 (234) to keep consistency with previous patterns, but it isn't required here.

01:40:596 - Add a don here if you added one to 00:52:596.

02:12:971 (353) - I suggest removing this as it doesn't really fit with any of the previous mapping.

[0gre's Oni]

HP5 -> HP6
OD5 -> OD6

00:22:596 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - Instead of dk d kkdkd here, why not try kd k dkdkd? the dkdkd at the end fits the last 5 notes much better imo, and the kd k leads into dkdkd well.

00:30:596 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Same as above.

00:42:221 (128,129,130) - I think you could get away with deleting 128 and 130 while still keeping the same relative difficulty here without having to overmap any. Try it and see what you think.

01:30:346 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - Instead of ddd d kkk k d d k here, give ddd k dkd k d k d a shot, especially if you apply the first two mods that I suggested for your Oni.

01:43:346 (367,368,369) - Just a suggestion but try kkd here. it gives you that dkdkd pattern that I suggested in the first two mods, which fits really well with that 5 note piano part.

01:51:346 (399,400,401) - Same suggestion as above.

Overall not a whole lot wrong with the taiko difficulties for the map. Call me back for a recheck when you've looked at this mod.
http://puu.sh/6kSYZ.zip
when i took your mods it became how i normally make maps
there is 0gre's Oni and 0gre's Muzukashii
ty for mod ;D
Topic Starter
neonat
Will only be able to return home this Saturday. Will update it then.
Updated!
jonathanlfj
uhh poke me again when you get a bubble, didnt realize this got osu-iconed xD
Topic Starter
neonat

jonathanlfj wrote:

uhh poke me again when you get a bubble, didnt realize this got osu-iconed xD
Will try to do so as soon as I can orz
Reisen Udongein
Topic Starter
neonat

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Lol

그거 별로 안 무서워요
Kaguya Hourain
Time to mod!
I don't mod hitsounds, everyone has their unique sense of rhythm and style.

[General]
BPM/Offset ok.

[Normal]
Increase CS and AR by 1 I think, or call the diff Easy :P
00:52:846 (3) - Move this so that it stacks with 00:50:846 (1).
01:08:346 (4) - Move to x:352 y:268, blankets better.
01:34:346 (2) - Endpoint to x:340 y:176 for perfect blanket.
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems a bit repetitive. Try making them sliders or something.
Pretty good! I love the sampleset change during kiai.

[Hard]
CS + 1
00:13:846 (1,2,3) - NC here is inconsistent with the start of the map while being the same verse.
00:17:846 (5) - NC.
01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistency with previous verse which is exactly the same.
02:03:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The NC here is inconsistent with 01:57:846 (1,2,1,2,1) while being the same verse.
02:07:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This here is even more inconsistent!
Plenty of NC inconsistencies here. It's not such a big deal but this is what makes the difference. Very good patterns!

[Insane]
Settings are good.
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move that a little to the left to center it to the grid.
00:44:846 (3) - Grid Snap!
Other than that, well done!

[Insane Collab]
Settings are good.
HOLY S**T THE TIMING POINTFEST! I LOVE THIS!
Why is kiai not consistent with the rest of the difficulties? (RED)
Judging by the stacking that is done in the map it would be better if you changed the stacking leniency to plain 2.
Nothing. Absolutely nothing in the structure! This is good. Really good.


I like the spread. Making Normal a little harder to actually match the diff name would be good.
Topic Starter
neonat

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Time to mod!
I don't mod hitsounds, everyone has their unique sense of rhythm and style.

[General]
BPM/Offset ok.

[Normal]
Increase CS and AR by 1 I think, or call the diff Easy :P increased AR
00:52:846 (3) - Move this so that it stacks with 00:50:846 (1).
01:08:346 (4) - Move to x:352 y:268, blankets better. slightly doesn't fit to the distance spacing I got, shifted something else
01:34:346 (2) - Endpoint to x:340 y:176 for perfect blanket.
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems a bit repetitive. Try making them sliders or something. making it an one-off pattern
Pretty good! I love the sampleset change during kiai.

[Hard]
CS + 1
00:13:846 (1,2,3) - NC here is inconsistent with the start of the map while being the same verse.
00:17:846 (5) - NC.
01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistency with previous verse which is exactly the same.
02:03:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The NC here is inconsistent with 01:57:846 (1,2,1,2,1) while being the same verse. this one is different because of the music, it is actually not very similar to each other
02:07:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This here is even more inconsistent!
Plenty of NC inconsistencies here. It's not such a big deal but this is what makes the difference. Very good patterns! changed some NC

[Insane]
Settings are good.
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move that a little to the left to center it to the grid. I could I guess
00:44:846 (3) - Grid Snap! placed it elsewhere
Other than that, well done!

[Insane Collab]
Settings are good.
HOLY S**T THE TIMING POINTFEST! I LOVE THIS!
Why is kiai not consistent with the rest of the difficulties? (RED) I did ask in the past about this, I was told it was fine
Judging by the stacking that is done in the map it would be better if you changed the stacking leniency to plain 2.
Nothing. Absolutely nothing in the structure! This is good. Really good.


I like the spread. Making Normal a little harder to actually match the diff name would be good.
Thanks for the mod!
Dainesl
creepy BG ._.

General
Find which vocaloid is used and put it in the tags (is it Hatsune Miku that's being used here or another one?)
Also I don't think Korean would be necessary if this is actually a Korean song instead of Japanese like most Vocaloid songs are. Not sure if this is Korean or not but if it is, remove Korean from tags, since it'll be given Korean when it's ranked :P
Perhaps you could also include the vocaloid version number?
Normal and Hard: CS +1 because these diffs are normally made for CS 3/4 rather than 2/3
:!: Hitsound volume inconsistencies inbetween Taiko Muzu and Oni Muzu, which tbh seems redundant as you have an inherited point at the exact same time you have a timing point, both with different volumes. Is that even rankable? ;; Same deal with the Oni except soft and 70%, which makes it even more redundant unless you want to keep 0.9x SV, but if you do, make sure to fix this
:?: Put the Preview Point at 01:09:846 - because that's where the Kiai begins and that's normally where the Preview Point is placed
:!: Delete all notes past 02:22:846 - because there is NO GODDAMN MUSIC TO MAP TO AFTER THIS ;~; (all diffs!)

Taiko Muzukashii
Kiais seem kinda...empty for a Muzu, considering that the other bits are almost as difficult, doesn't really stand out enough :| Perhaps map some of the background instruments to show the development of the song at these times
On top of that they're EXTREMELY repetitive, which makes the map zzzzz boring.
00:32:596 (74) - Maybe remove this note to accomodate the lack of vocal?
00:40:346 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - Patterns like these don't fit the music well enough, move the 2nd note in these patterns next to the other 4 instead. ;w;
00:45:846 (108,109) - Invert these to show the higher pitch where (108) is instead of (109)
00:53:846 (131) - Perhaps make this a big kat because the vocal is high-pitch atm?
00:55:846 (135,136,137,138,139) - remove (136) and (138), see first suggestion to know why.
01:07:846 (164) - Maybe make this a kat to show the high-pitched cymbal-like sound?
01:10:346 (169) - 01:14:346 (182) - 01:18:346 (195) - 01:22:346 (208) - These don't sound emphasised enough to be finishers imo
01:57:846 (305) - Maybe make this a kat to emphasise the weird high-pitched "mi" sound?
02:13:346 (354) - Maybe make this a kat to show the continually high pitch here?

Taiko Oni
Again, repetitive Kiais make me sad ;; although they are decently dense for an Oni
:!: 00:37:846 - place inherited point here instead of 1/4 beat before here
00:37:846 (116) - Add finisher here to emphasise beginning of new vocal section?
00:42:596 (137,138,139,140) - place (139) between (137) and (138) and make that a ddk pattern, plays better to the music imo
01:28:721 (342) - I can't really hear any instrument being played here, remove perhaps?
01:35:096 (367,368,369,370,371,372) - Maybe simplify these "double triplet" patterns (as I call them) to play a bit better with regards to the music?
01:40:596 (393,394,395) - Maybe make this ddk/kdk instead of dkd to fit the mostly high-low-high fluctuation?
01:57:846 (464) - See suggestion on Muzu of the same time
:!: 02:15:846 - End Kiai Time here instead of 1/4 beat before
Topic Starter
neonat
Have no access to my computer till the weekend, but I will just reply to what I can first. I will remove the Korean tag, and find the vocaloid number when I get back home. The vocaloid used is already in the tags, the vocaloid used is SeeU.

Yea it is kinda creepy xD
Thanks for the mod Dainesl~
Dainesl
Oh, SeeU is a vocaloid? Didn't know -w-
Asagi Mutsuki
Sorry for being extremely late.

[General]
Dat creepy BG. I remembered that I had nightmares after finding out what the song was referring to. (I'm really scared of spooky stuff involving dolls)
What is tyuh for?
Add vocaloid3 in tags since SeeU belongs in it

For Muzu & Oni : Use k d for "ding dong"?

[0gre's Muzukashii]
00:24:596 - I would delete this note as it would emphasize the break at 00:24:846 nicely and it flows better with the kdd before
00:27:846 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - This part is the only part that has 2 consecutive 3-note clusters (in 1/2) which is pretty strange :o , maybe delete 00:28:096 to make it similar like 00:59:346 (143,144,145,146,147) ?
00:44:596 - wouldn't following the drums here be better? move 00:44:846 to 00:44:596
00:52:846 - ^
01:07:846 - add finish/change to kat pls
The repeating patterns actually fits the kiai really well, since the song also repeats itself, emphasizing the pattern even more
01:32:846 - move to 01:32:596 if you did it before
01:40:846 - ^
01:55:846 to 01:57:346 imo it would be better if you follow the vocals that are getting stronger to emphasize it instead continue following the drums, give it a try!
01:57:846 to 01:59:596 - delete all notes for having a pause to emphasize the really creepy last kiai? >w<
02:23:096 - deleting this note makes this part a little better imo

[0gre's Oni]
meh I don't like the Oni as much as the Muzu since imo the Oni is just mostly following the vocals while Muzu provides more variety of stuff >_>
01:57:846 to 01:59:596 - same as Muzu
02:02:596 (484,485,486,487,488,489) - ddk ddk doesn't really fit the rhythm of the song, delete 02:02:596 and 02:03:096 ?
02:06:596 (505,506,507,508,509,510) - ^
02:10:596 (526,527,528,529,530,531) - ^
02:15:846 - move the kiai end here
02:23:096 - same as Muzu

I still suck at modding Oni's >w<
Well, good luck for getting this map ranked after so many stars and so much time :3
Topic Starter
neonat
Shall test out the CS, and as for preview point, I prefer the soft starting, I think it gives a better idea of the song. Added some tags.
0gre_old

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Sorry for being extremely late.

[General]
Dat creepy BG. I remembered that I had nightmares after finding out what the song was referring to. (I'm really scared of spooky stuff involving dolls)
What is tyuh for?
Add vocaloid3 in tags since SeeU belongs in it

For Muzu & Oni : Use k d for "ding dong"?

[0gre's Muzukashii]
00:24:596 - I would delete this note as it would emphasize the break at 00:24:846 nicely and it flows better with the kdd before
00:27:846 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - This part is the only part that has 2 consecutive 3-note clusters (in 1/2) which is pretty strange :o , maybe delete 00:28:096 to make it similar like 00:59:346 (143,144,145,146,147) ?
00:44:596 - wouldn't following the drums here be better? move 00:44:846 to 00:44:596
00:52:846 - ^
01:07:846 - add finish/change to kat pls
The repeating patterns actually fits the kiai really well, since the song also repeats itself, emphasizing the pattern even more
01:32:846 - move to 01:32:596 if you did it before
01:40:846 - ^
01:55:846 to 01:57:346 imo it would be better if you follow the vocals that are getting stronger to emphasize it instead continue following the drums, give it a try!
01:57:846 to 01:59:596 - delete all notes for having a pause to emphasize the really creepy last kiai? >w<
02:23:096 - deleting this note makes this part a little better imo

[0gre's Oni]
meh I don't like the Oni as much as the Muzu since imo the Oni is just mostly following the vocals while Muzu provides more variety of stuff >_>
01:57:846 to 01:59:596 - same as Muzu
02:02:596 (484,485,486,487,488,489) - ddk ddk doesn't really fit the rhythm of the song, delete 02:02:596 and 02:03:096 ?
02:06:596 (505,506,507,508,509,510) - ^
02:10:596 (526,527,528,529,530,531) - ^
02:15:846 - move the kiai end here
02:23:096 - same as Muzu

I still suck at modding Oni's >w<
Well, good luck for getting this map ranked after so many stars and so much time :3

Dainesl wrote:

creepy BG ._.

General
Find which vocaloid is used and put it in the tags (is it Hatsune Miku that's being used here or another one?)
Also I don't think Korean would be necessary if this is actually a Korean song instead of Japanese like most Vocaloid songs are. Not sure if this is Korean or not but if it is, remove Korean from tags, since it'll be given Korean when it's ranked :P
Perhaps you could also include the vocaloid version number?
Normal and Hard: CS +1 because these diffs are normally made for CS 3/4 rather than 2/3
:!: Hitsound volume inconsistencies inbetween Taiko Muzu and Oni Muzu, which tbh seems redundant as you have an inherited point at the exact same time you have a timing point, both with different volumes. Is that even rankable? ;; Same deal with the Oni except soft and 70%, which makes it even more redundant unless you want to keep 0.9x SV, but if you do, make sure to fix this
:?: Put the Preview Point at 01:09:846 - because that's where the Kiai begins and that's normally where the Preview Point is placed
:!: Delete all notes past 02:22:846 - because there is NO GODDAMN MUSIC TO MAP TO AFTER THIS ;~; (all diffs!)

Taiko Muzukashii
Kiais seem kinda...empty for a Muzu, considering that the other bits are almost as difficult, doesn't really stand out enough :| Perhaps map some of the background instruments to show the development of the song at these times
On top of that they're EXTREMELY repetitive, which makes the map zzzzz boring.
00:32:596 (74) - Maybe remove this note to accomodate the lack of vocal?
00:40:346 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - Patterns like these don't fit the music well enough, move the 2nd note in these patterns next to the other 4 instead. ;w;
00:45:846 (108,109) - Invert these to show the higher pitch where (108) is instead of (109)
00:53:846 (131) - Perhaps make this a big kat because the vocal is high-pitch atm?
00:55:846 (135,136,137,138,139) - remove (136) and (138), see first suggestion to know why.
01:07:846 (164) - Maybe make this a kat to show the high-pitched cymbal-like sound?
01:10:346 (169) - 01:14:346 (182) - 01:18:346 (195) - 01:22:346 (208) - These don't sound emphasised enough to be finishers imo
01:57:846 (305) - Maybe make this a kat to emphasise the weird high-pitched "mi" sound?
02:13:346 (354) - Maybe make this a kat to show the continually high pitch here?

Taiko Oni
Again, repetitive Kiais make me sad ;; although they are decently dense for an Oni
:!: 00:37:846 - place inherited point here instead of 1/4 beat before here
00:37:846 (116) - Add finisher here to emphasise beginning of new vocal section?
00:42:596 (137,138,139,140) - place (139) between (137) and (138) and make that a ddk pattern, plays better to the music imo
01:28:721 (342) - I can't really hear any instrument being played here, remove perhaps?
01:35:096 (367,368,369,370,371,372) - Maybe simplify these "double triplet" patterns (as I call them) to play a bit better with regards to the music?
01:40:596 (393,394,395) - Maybe make this ddk/kdk instead of dkd to fit the mostly high-low-high fluctuation?
01:57:846 (464) - See suggestion on Muzu of the same time
:!: 02:15:846 - End Kiai Time here instead of 1/4 beat before
heww.. so far i got stuck in... by lots of different ideas
but I just want to say something to some of the mods that,
"What is a wrong of repeating bunch of notes at where vocal and rhythm is almost exactly same?"
I can understand if the song is full and talking about 1st part and 2nd part of kiai or etc for eg.
but it is strange to have different pattern at same part with same rhythm.


WELL ANYWAY, I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE IT so plz let me have some time :-|

Muzukashii (remade) ~ http://puu.sh/7sSjr.zip
Oni (renew) ~ in process
AKTT_old

neonat wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 8 March 2014 at 2:00:09 AM

Artist: Ho-Ong-I
Title: Hide and Seek
Tags: vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh vocaloid3
BPM: 120
Filesize: 18766kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0gre's Muzukashii (4.49 stars, 382 notes)
  2. 0gre's Oni (4.83 stars, 576 notes)
  3. Hard (4.49 stars, 271 notes)
  4. Insane Collab (4.93 stars, 327 notes)
  5. Insane (4.82 stars, 352 notes)
  6. Normal (2.61 stars, 168 notes)
Download: Ho-Ong-I - Hide and Seek
Download: Ho-Ong-I - Hide and Seek (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
4th song.
Normal - Complete
Hard - Complete
Insane - Complete
Insane Collab - Map done by -APXH and me
Taiko Difficulties - Done by 0gre
Video: http://ho-ong-i.crecrew.net/4565
It is pretty much finalized
Lyrics
English Lyrics:
Ding-Dong Hurry and open the door, I have come
Even if you try to hide, it's no use
Ding-Dong Hurry and open the door, I have come
It's already too late to run
Looking through the window, our eyes met
Two eyes frozen in fear, I want to see up close
Ding-Dong I'm coming in, hurry up and run
Let play tag and have fun
Ding-Dong I've come in, hurry up and hide
Lets play hide-and-seek and have fun
The thumping of your footsteps can be heard
Your ragged breathing can be heard
*Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly*
Head...
(The part above is a korean phrase used when playing hide-and-seek like the song Kagome Kagome is used in the Japanese game)
Knock-Knock I'm in front of your room door
I'm coming in, I won't ask for permission
Knock-Knock I'm inside your room, where are you hiding
The game is almost at end
I looked under the bed in your room
You're not here, next is inside your closet...
Ding-Dong Here you are
Ding-Dong You were here all along
You're it
Ding-Dong I've found you now
You're it
Ding-Dong It looks like I won
You're it
Ding-Dong
Receive your penalties
Ding-Dong The game is at end
There's no one left
Ding-Dong goodbye to everyone
AKTT_old

neonat wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 8 March 2014 at 2:00:09 AM

Artist: Ho-Ong-I
Title: Hide and Seek
Tags: vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh vocaloid3
BPM: 120
Filesize: 18766kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0gre's Muzukashii (4.49 stars, 382 notes)
  2. 0gre's Oni (4.83 stars, 576 notes)
  3. Hard (4.49 stars, 271 notes)
  4. Insane Collab (4.93 stars, 327 notes)
  5. Insane (4.82 stars, 352 notes)
  6. Normal (2.61 stars, 168 notes)
Download: Ho-Ong-I - Hide and Seek
Download: Ho-Ong-I - Hide and Seek (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
4th song.
Normal - Complete
Hard - Complete
Insane - Complete
Insane Collab - Map done by -APXH and me
Taiko Difficulties - Done by 0gre
Video: http://ho-ong-i.crecrew.net/4565
It is pretty much finalized
Lyrics
English Lyrics:
Ding-Dong Hurry and open the door, I have come
Even if you try to hide, it's no use
Ding-Dong Hurry and open the door, I have come
It's already too late to run
Looking through the window, our eyes met
Two eyes frozen in fear, I want to see up close
Ding-Dong I'm coming in, hurry up and run
Let play tag and have fun
Ding-Dong I've come in, hurry up and hide
Lets play hide-and-seek and have fun
The thumping of your footsteps can be heard
Your ragged breathing can be heard
*Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly
I can see your hair
Hide tightly*
Head...
(The part above is a korean phrase used when playing hide-and-seek like the song Kagome Kagome is used in the Japanese game)
Knock-Knock I'm in front of your room door
I'm coming in, I won't ask for permission
Knock-Knock I'm inside your room, where are you hiding
The game is almost at end
I looked under the bed in your room
You're not here, next is inside your closet...
Ding-Dong Here you are
Ding-Dong You were here all along
You're it
Ding-Dong I've found you now
You're it
Ding-Dong It looks like I won
You're it
Ding-Dong
Receive your penalties
Ding-Dong The game is at end
There's no one left
Ding-Dong goodbye to everyone
Topic Starter
neonat
Updated Muzukashii
Asagi Mutsuki

0gre wrote:

heww.. so far i got stuck in... by lots of different ideas
but I just want to say something to some of the mods that,
"What is a wrong of repeating bunch of notes at where vocal and rhythm is almost exactly same?"
I can understand if the song is full and talking about 1st part and 2nd part of kiai or etc for eg.
but it is strange to have different pattern at same part with same rhythm.


WELL ANYWAY, I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE IT so plz let me have some time :-|

Muzukashii (remade) ~ http://puu.sh/7sSjr.zip
Oni (renew) ~ in process
I actually praised you for repeating the patterns ;w; Keep up the good work, repeated patterns can be very nice to play even though it can't be accepted by some people *shrugs*
0gre_old

cdhsausageboy wrote:

0gre wrote:

heww.. so far i got stuck in... by lots of different ideas
but I just want to say something to some of the mods that,
"What is a wrong of repeating bunch of notes at where vocal and rhythm is almost exactly same?"
I can understand if the song is full and talking about 1st part and 2nd part of kiai or etc for eg.
but it is strange to have different pattern at same part with same rhythm.


WELL ANYWAY, I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE IT so plz let me have some time :-|

Muzukashii (remade) ~ http://puu.sh/7sSjr.zip
Oni (renew) ~ in process
I actually praised you for repeating the patterns ;w; Keep up the good work, repeated patterns can be very nice to play even though it can't be accepted by some people *shrugs*
nooo Im not really picking you. I am just saying to some of previous mods those I got who mentioned about it and maybe some mods willing to get :|
btw I am kind renewing Oni, trying to follow this suggestion

" meh I don't like the Oni as much as the Muzu since imo the Oni is just mostly following the vocals while Muzu provides more variety of stuff"
and some of the points that I got from some people .. process up to around 80%
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