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[Luxord]

Joined August 2011

[Luxord] 2013-03-07T10:54:53+00:00

Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6).
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/

[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable.

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there.
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)

Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-07T11:45:51+00:00

KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6). ok
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/ Haha no problem, I'll make it more curvy

[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable. I'll try what I can do, within the constraints of distance snap

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there. ok
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad. My intention at the start was a high spacing insane >.< it is really such a let-off?

Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

Thanks for mod, I really appreciate it

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-07T14:51:37+00:00

Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-07T15:28:03+00:00

-APXH wrote:
Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?

Yes I updated your difficulty
You can see it yourself.

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-03-09T14:05:02+00:00

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-10T06:30:11+00:00

I'm probably going to reduce the drastic difference in speed, but as for rhythm and all, in all honesty, I'll try, but it might not turn out much different.
Normal & Hard was also fixed.

Last edited by neonat 2013-03-11T14:41:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-03-10T15:38:06+00:00

From my Queue

Let's go!

[Normal]

Well, the spacing (DS) seems oscilate between 0.7 and 0.8 on this diff -- that's: select one of these values and use it from the start to the end.

These mods are for DS = 0.7x. If you plan use DS = 0.8x just ignore all the (x: y:) movings (:

00:06:846 (3) - Move it to x:336 y:48 for alignment with prior notes
00:07:846 (4) - ^ to x:196 y:164, same reason
00:08:346 (5) - ^ to x:100 y:164, same reason
00:08:846 (6) - ^ to x:148 y:248 for perfect triangle
00:10:846 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to make a perfect pentagon here, and keep the stack at (6,7) ^^

00:13:846 (1) - move the 1st dot to x:180 y:296, move the 2nd dot to x:244 y:296, move the 3rd dot to x:297 y:247 -- for a perfect blanket here (:

00:14:846 (2) - move the 1st dot to x:380 y:304, the 2nd dot to x:452 y:304, and the 3rd dot to x:496 y:256 -- for another perfect blanket

00:19:846 (3) - move to x:228 y:28 for spacing
00:20:846 (4) - ^ to x:360 y:196, for spacing with prior and next sliders
00:21:846 (1) - ^ to x:224 y:300 -- it seems better here
00:22:846 (2) - ^ to x:92 y:264 -- same reason
00:23:846 (3) - ^ to x:96 y:108 -- same reason
00:24:846 (4) - ^ to x:240 y:52 -- adjusting spacing

00:25:846 (1) - move to x:436 y:64, move the 3rd dot to x:460 y:160

00:27:346 (3) - move to x:368 y:272
00:28:846 (6) - move to x:120 y:204 to align with 00:27:346 (3)
00:29:346 (7) - move to x:128 y:108

00:30:846 (2,3) - make a perfect blanket here

00:39:846 (4) - move just the 3rd dot to x:280 y:152 -- better flow and keeping the path
00:40:846 (5) - move to x:368 y:120 and the 2nd dot to x:488 y:40 -- same reason

00:42:846 (1,2) - try make sliders stay like below:

SPOILER

Making this. move 00:44:846 (3) to x:52 y:232 and move 00:45:346 (4) to x:52 y:136.

well, going to next ^^

[Hard]

00:21:846 (1) - Move it 1 grid down to align with prior's
00:27:846 (3,4) - select these two and move together to x:300 y:332
00:28:846 (5) - move to x:48 y:328, the 2nd dot to x:20 y:2388 and the 3rd dot to x:20 y:224

00:35:846 (1,2) - select these two sliders and move them 7 grids up (: for keeping spacing and path

01:25:846 (1) - move 1 grid up (:
01:26:346 (2) - ^

01:26:846 (1,2,3,4) - select and move all together by 2 grids left

01:38:596 (1) - move to x:104 y:280
01:38:846 (2) - move it 2 grid left, then move 2nd grid to x:200 y:336 and the 3rd dot to x:236 y:328
01:39:346 (3) - move it 1 grid down
02:17:346 (5) - ^
02:20:346 (2) - move to x:264 y:168 for perfect triangle with (3,1)
02:20:846 (3) - move to x:136 y:168 and then move the 2nd dot to x:104 y:236 -- to keep spacing, path and make a perfect parallelogram with (3,1,2)

well, next diff (:

[Insane]

00:56:846 (4,5,6) - Make here a more spaced one (: with (4) at x:256 y:208, (5) at x:288 y:156 and (6) at x:228 y:156

01:28:846 (1,2,3) - try to align and make spacing consistent

01:35:846 (6,7,8) - move these together 2 grid left.

[Origin]

*nothing to say here (:

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HOW AWESOME IS THIS SONG

The Churchbelll hitsound is simply PERFECT *.* I Loved it ^.^ it reminded me another map I finally got S at harder diff. The map is Coldplay - Viva la Vida which uses Churchbells too ^^

and... this song (and the anime behind) is Korean? It sound me as were Japanese, but still awesome (: yeah, I noticed the SB Korean lyrics

Hmm... after my mod and more a one or two, I think it's time to call a MAT/BAT to review it -- and possibly get it Bubbled ♥

Att.

neonat

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neonat 2013-03-11T02:54:11+00:00

I will move some to those positions, but I'm not really going for total symmetry and all.
Thanks for the mod

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-03-11T13:36:51+00:00

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - Posted elsewhere ought to think
00:39:346 (3) - 00:38:846 (2) Adjust the slider with interval
00:56:846 (6) - Posted elsewhere ought to think
01:01:346 (7) - Distance check
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Patterns do not look so good
02:01:846 (4) - Posted elsewhere ought to think

[Hard]
CS -1

none

[Insane]
Think much difference between Anna and hard with insane ...

none

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.

Good Luck

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-11T14:33:11+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - Posted elsewhere ought to think prefer it stacked
00:39:346 (3) - 00:38:846 (2) Adjust the slider with interval no change
00:56:846 (6) - Posted elsewhere ought to think like it stacked too
01:01:346 (7) - Distance check Shifted
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Patterns do not look so good I think it's fine
02:01:846 (4) - Posted elsewhere ought to think Oh whoops, didn't realise. Changed

[Hard]
CS -1 I'm fine with the current CS

none

[Insane]
Think much difference between Anna and hard with insane ... In my opinion, not really, it's really pretty much just the spacing and the other difficulty adjusters

none

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.

Good Luck

Thanks for the mod. 감사

neonat

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neonat 2013-03-14T13:29:32+00:00

Notice: I am out of my country, got internet but no osu! Game. Out from 12-28 march. It got extended. Just to notify no updates can be made till then thanks for understanding.

HeatKai

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2,801 posts

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HeatKai 2013-03-16T08:52:29+00:00

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/

slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.

00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting.
SPOILER
00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion.
SPOILER
00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
00:17:846 (1) - ^
00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff.
00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting.
SPOILER
00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
00:43:846 (2) - ^
00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
SPOILER
00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
00:48:846 (5) - ^
00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.

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.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-16T19:19:39+00:00

KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hello from my Queue.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)

Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

I fixed everything but the whitsle part. I kinda sounds bland under my ears, and I don't know what else to put besides the whistle

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-16T19:23:58+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck

Removed unnessisary 1/4 notes

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-16T19:29:28+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.

Good Luck

I fixed it and...Why doesn't everyone think I know Korean!?!?

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-16T19:30:27+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
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01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
02:03:725 - snap to 02:03:721
02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
02:07:726 - snap to 02:07:721
02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
02:11:726 - snap to 02:11:721
02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.

I have resnapped some/most of the points. I will continue to resnap everything along the way.

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-03-19T03:32:57+00:00

Did you get my updated beatmap link yet? More importantly, did you update my difficulty?

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-21T14:05:31+00:00

Heatkai & apxh: i will update and fix when i return home on the 28 . Im still out of the country. Sorry about that.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-28T11:05:30+00:00

Updated your difficulty -APXH

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-03-29T10:10:18+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/
slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.
00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting. moved it slightly
SPOILER
00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion. not a blanket
SPOILER
00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
00:17:846 (1) - ^
00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff. I kinda like it, but I'll change it to 0.75x
00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting. I find at starting a little weird though
SPOILER
00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
00:43:846 (2) - ^
00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
SPOILER
00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
00:48:846 (5) - ^
00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.

Thanks for the mod~

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-03-29T12:55:13+00:00

Hi, Recheck

Normal

00:24:846 (4) - Not stacked well
01:09:846 (1,2) - Spacing
02:00:846 (3) - 2 reserves might confuse players, i advise to use only one

Hard

00:06:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is different than on the next ones
00:09:846 (3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent

Insane and Orgin

Insane

Try to make such a rythm as I did. A mix between vocal and BG music, the way you did it is just 1/1

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: [SeeU] Hide and Seek.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5830
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hide and Seek
TitleUnicode:Hide and Seek
Artist:Ho-Ong-I
ArtistUnicode:Ho-Ong-I
Creator:neonat
Version:BB
Source:
Tags:korean vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:72943

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hide.And.Seek..jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,45796,69096
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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13846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
53846,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
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101971,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
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115596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
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123971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
127721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
127971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
131721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
131971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
135846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

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198,360,40596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,360,41096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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105,306,44596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,306,45096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,64,75346,2,0,P|192:88|176:128,1,112.500004291535

You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck

Onozu

71 posts

Joined August 2011

Onozu 2013-03-29T18:40:40+00:00

Such a cute map

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-04-17T00:37:57+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: [SeeU] Hide and Seek.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5830
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hide and Seek
TitleUnicode:Hide and Seek
Artist:Ho-Ong-I
ArtistUnicode:Ho-Ong-I
Creator:neonat
Version:BB
Source:
Tags:korean vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:72943

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hide.And.Seek..jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,45796,69096
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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13846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
53846,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
61721,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
69846,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
69971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
73721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
73971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
77721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
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81721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
81971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
85846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
101846,-100,4,1,3,80,0,0
101971,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
102721,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
109596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
113596,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
115596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
119846,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
119971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
123721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
123971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
127721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
127971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
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131971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
135846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

[HitObjects]
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368,104,38596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,38846,2,0,P|208:152|152:136,1,112.500004291535
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88,240,39846,2,0,P|80:320|200:360,1,225.000008583069
198,360,40596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,360,41096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,41346,2,0,P|376:328|392:288,1,112.500004291535
456,200,41846,6,0,B|464:88|464:88|400:88|368:40,1,225.000008583069
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256,64,75346,2,0,P|192:88|176:128,1,112.500004291535

You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck

なにそれ? ° ω °

Anyways, I'm continuing to fix all the timing points, because apperently, the resnap feature DOES NOT WORK. I'll quite busy with other maps, like GrayKaiser82 's Sexy Free and Single beatmap, and school. I will continue to fix the timing points. Don't worry/

Hard

696 posts

Joined February 2013

Hard 2013-05-06T02:32:40+00:00

Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue

Normal

[General Stuff]

Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that.
The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does.
Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video.

Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
00:22:596 - ^
00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ?
00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe)
00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ?
00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846
00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion)
00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too)
00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful.
00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting.
01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe?
01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy.
01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players.
02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152

Woah. It's over? Nice map

Hard

[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

HP - 1
No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish

That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596
00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms*
00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry.
01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too.
01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty.
01:47:346 - ^
02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe...

I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-05-06T06:07:52+00:00

ChivaCookie wrote:
Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue

Normal

[General Stuff]

Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that. I think it should still be find, this difficulty is not demanding and spread out
The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does. sounds fine on my side
Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video. If they want to see the ending they can look at the other difficulties xD :p
Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
00:22:596 - ^
00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ? Probably. Changed.
00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe) Designed changed anyway with the shifting of (2)
00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ? Don't think so
00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846 no thanks :X
00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion) changed
00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too) neonat likes straight too though, slides don't have to love me
00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful. these sliders don't multiply like them though, I thinkI'll keep them this way
00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting. changed
01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe? if I remember right, this part is always like that
01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy. not really (to me)
01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players. was one of the many reasons why this is Normal
02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152
Woah. It's over? Nice map

Hard

[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

HP - 1
No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish
That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596 I feel my way is more fitting
00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms* Not this time, but you may like a vocaloid song I have made already but is unsubmitted, with all the curves in the world
00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry. I know what you mean, but I like it this way so HD can be *ahem* more tricky for 1st time try
01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too. Cute :X ....what can I say?
01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty. I wouldn't have my door
01:47:346 - ^
02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe... Changed

I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'

You can now find the english lyrics in the Creator's words.
The video is creepy because, well, it is a scary song.

Thanks for the mod, and it's ok to have humour in your mod, I know my mods are bland orz
~~~~

[-Google-]

[-Google-] 2013-05-11T10:08:12+00:00

Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours:
SPOILER
- [Hard] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Insane] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Normal] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Origin] :
Combo5 : 255,170,43
Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D:
SPOILER
01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:

Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]

Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion
01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o?
00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D:
Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O

Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3

[Hard]

Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D:
00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up

01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 -
02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ?
02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D:

Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD

OEvil

299 posts

Joined December 2012

OEvil 2013-05-11T17:30:09+00:00

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]

Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346.
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once.

SPOILER

[Origin]

Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-05-11T19:09:59+00:00

[-Google-] wrote:
Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours:
SPOILER
- [Hard] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Insane] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Normal] :
Combo5 : 255,190,94
- [Origin] :
Combo5 : 255,170,43
Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D: Fixed what I could find
SPOILER
01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:
Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]
Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion Changed somewhat
01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o? Keeping
00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D: k
Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O seems constant to me though, I had to change the divisor to keep up with the change in sv

Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3
[Hard]
Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D: sure
00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up it's k

01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 - changed
02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ? no change
02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D: important! for the last piece of music as well as for the video
Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD

Thanks for the mod~

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-05-11T19:17:14+00:00

OEvil wrote:
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]
Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G Reason for not repeating too many is because it is the simplest difficulty
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346. Trying to break it into phrases, so there is an unusually large gap
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once. Added one circle
SPOILER

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle. I do not really think these 2 would fit more that what it is now, sorry

Thanks for your input, and I'll make changes where I see should be changed.

Reat

204 posts

Joined May 2011

Reat 2013-05-29T11:18:13+00:00

Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek

Do not give kudos to me.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-05-29T14:43:48+00:00

Reat wrote:
Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek

Do not give kudos to me.

Yea I do still update this map. Will change when I get back home. Thanks

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-06-01T02:21:45+00:00

Hi modders all alike.

I'm currently busy with my life, but tomorrow, I'll update my beatmap again.

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-06-08T01:37:42+00:00

OEvil wrote:
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.

The thing is, there is no sound @ 02:23:846 , so it makes no sense to make a slider until there
Also, saying to have a slider @ 02:23:596 , then saying to remove the circle at the same timing spot is kinda redundant, don't'tchya think?

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-06-08T06:01:31+00:00

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Normal

Check Distance.
00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
00:57:346 - create a circle
01:23:846 (4,1) - break time.
01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin
01:30:346 - create a circle

[/notice]

Hard

00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
00:48:596 - create a circle
01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap
01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443)
01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-06-09T17:01:23+00:00

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner

you need a custom soft sliderslide

normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272

Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-06-14T16:23:10+00:00

Losertic wrote:
호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Normal
Check Distance.
00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
00:57:346 - create a circle
01:23:846 (4,1) - break time. sure
01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin end of spinner would be too close to next beat
01:30:346 - create a circle
[/notice]

Hard
00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
00:48:596 - create a circle
01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane
00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap k
01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443) decided not to overlap this earlier when I made this
01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin
00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

Thanks for the mod, appreciate it!

baldrace wrote:
Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner
you need a custom soft sliderslide

normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes changed shape

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272 ok

Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Thanks for your mod too!

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2013-06-21T21:28:00+00:00

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
~~meh, I don't like the song~~
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?

SPOILER

01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.

Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2013-06-22T05:20:42+00:00

Quiz-chan wrote:
Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
~~meh, I don't like the song~~
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
SPOILER
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
SPOILER
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.

Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

I repositioned quite a bit of Normal and Hard, changed some flow in Insane. Origin you may IRC -APXH if you want I guess

Thanks for passing-by here

GIDZ

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GIDZ 2013-06-29T14:27:34+00:00

Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better

~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play.
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!

neonat

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neonat 2013-06-29T18:03:01+00:00

gideon5504 wrote:
Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play. Found another little adjustment here
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!

Made 3 changes :X But thanks for modding! ;D

sheela

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sheela 2013-07-03T01:29:58+00:00

Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-07-04T16:05:55+00:00

Losertic wrote:
호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Origin
00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

Fixed all. Made sliders ends or starts have the same point.

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-07-04T16:11:54+00:00

baldrace wrote:
Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Both Fixed

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-07-04T16:13:04+00:00

Quiz-chan wrote:
Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
~~meh, I don't like the song~~
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
SPOILER
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
SPOILER
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.

Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

If 'ya don't like the song, then don't mod it...

neonat

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neonat 2013-07-05T15:59:21+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!

Sorry no change for Insane or Hard

We'll see if there would be changes for Origin >.< Thanks for looking though~

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2013-07-14T08:47:10+00:00

hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) -
why not mapped till the end 0.0

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) -
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) -

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~)
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm?
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle?
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@

[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 -
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

neonat

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neonat 2013-07-14T09:11:45+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) - there is no whistle on slider body though
why not mapped till the end 0.0 I wonder why myself orz

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) - They are different parts of the same verse
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural That's a possibility, but I think I prefer a repeat
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) - ok

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg I could try it
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~ I could try this too
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~) not changing this one
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently trying 50%
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm? not adding
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle? not adding
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@ :|

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

Thanks for another mod from you for another one of my song!

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-07-14T16:37:05+00:00

Hey neonat,
could you send me a picture of that file that you currently have for the song?

Aeonian Sonder

973 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-07-14T16:43:09+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here K
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 - Well, there's a bell that goes on, so I'm gonna have to change the hitsounds up a bit
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable 20%
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

The second mod you gave me kinda changes the hitsounds I combined. I'll get to the hitsounds sooner or later

eniyan

107 posts

Joined September 2011

eniyan 2013-07-19T05:27:51+00:00

hi , from my queue

[Normal]

00:53:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - display them neatly...
for example...

[Hard]

i feel that there was too much clockwise rotation.

01:04:346 (5) - i feel strange.
When i display it in this way, how about?

[Insane]

i feel that there are too many sliders of the straight line in x-axis, the y-axis.

00:29:846 (1) - it was different form so far when i hitted it in this timing. it is hard to play it very much when it was changed suddenly

01:45:846 (1) - do it parallel to x-axis

[Origin]

kiai Time:
01:09:846~01:09:971
01:13:846~01:13:971
01:17:846~01:17:971
01:21:846~01:21:971
01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?

01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.
SS

01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

01:43:846 (1) - ^

neonat

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neonat 2013-08-02T08:50:28+00:00

Next update will be on Sunday. Changes in guest diff and hitsounds.

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-08-23T01:02:42+00:00

EnixYuki wrote:
hi , from my queue

[Origin]
kiai Time:
01:09:846~01:09:971
01:13:846~01:13:971
01:17:846~01:17:971
01:21:846~01:21:971
01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?
もちろん
01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.ん
SS
01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.
ん
01:43:846 (1) - ^

'K Thank you.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-09-13T13:03:32+00:00

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Origin]
00:07:846 (4) - try ctrl+g
00:10:846 (2,3) - You must remember circles can't overlay sliders when you want a blanket
00:18:846 (2,3) - seems not a good blanket
01:19:596 (3) - try ctrl+g
01:32:846 (5,6,7,8) - this can be fitter http://puu.sh/4q91M.jpg
01:35:846 (1) - try ctrl+g

Just that..the arrangement of this diff is a little boring..

As the most difficult diff,I think you can try to make more complex rhythm and more interesting arrangement

But it's still good

[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)?
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle?
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not.

01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider.
02:22:846 (10) - NC

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-09-13T13:33:39+00:00

Awaken wrote:
strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)? It was either this or having it at the same height as the previous slider, I guess the former might seem nicer when 7 and 8 appears
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle? made it more triangle-ish I guess, not even though
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not. yes, didn't intend it to be straight anyway
01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3 I get what you mean, but I want to distant them from each other for the new verse
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider. adjusted other positions too
02:22:846 (10) - NC ok

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~

Thanks for the mod! Woo ZHSteven :3

AruOtta

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Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2013-09-14T08:00:20+00:00

From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern :

SPOILER

00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ?
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ?
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ?

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ?
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this :

SPOILER

Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?

[Origin]
More histounds ?
00:10:846 (2,3) - Blanket ? Or something else ?
00:40:096 (2,3) - Too short jump
01:22:846 (4) - Maybe move this slider in the center ?

Good Luck *u*

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-14T09:05:31+00:00

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009.
Still have a long way to rank.

[Origin]
Nothing to say.
Symmetry of the map is prefect, also weird.

[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) -

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

Aeonian Sonder

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Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-09-15T01:35:59+00:00

I'll get to the mods soon, most likely tomorrow.

tetsutaro

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Joined February 2008

tetsutaro 2013-09-15T12:25:43+00:00

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]

Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.

<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye

Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity.
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo.
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect.
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Muzukashii slightly more than Ninja wa Saikou

I would have go for a very sparse kat solo before the piano comes. But you have your freedom to choose how your map goes as long as it fits the music.
00:41:596 (2) and 00:49:596 (2) - I see how the drums are dealt with 00:40:346 (1,1,2,1), but for this there is nothing here so remove. Mixing different tracks can throw some off.
01:29:846 (1,2,3) and 01:37:846 (1,2,3) - It is a heavy bell here, triple 16ths is unfitting and unnatural given the pace of the song. Single large don at 01:29:846/01:37:846 please.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Oni like Kaze ga Fuiteiru (not the abomination by A****)

Because the percussion depth is basically exhausted with a Muzukashii-level, it is *OK* to add your own percussion to it. Kinda like what Mori no Kuma-san had, you know? (notice the struggle at "OK")

00:43:846 (2,1,2,3,1,1) and similar - Not happy with even 16ths clusters in this contexts unless hanging. But hey(ry.

Also because M4M so no tip jar.

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2013-09-15T12:43:40+00:00

Kenterz9 wrote:
From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern : ok
SPOILER
00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ? I know it's hidden underneath, but I think being stationary makes more sense in the music
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ? moved (3) a little
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time will consider
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ? simpler tune

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap I made it look nicer
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ? I think having it stationary fits the song too
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles I think it's still fine though
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this : moved it differently
SPOILER
Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?

Good Luck *u*

mtbbsben wrote:
From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009. Would tweak some of the positions and shapes, that might make it seem that way, but other than that, I don't think there is any other reason why it would seem 2009ish
Still have a long way to rank.

[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
keeping current positions
01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - following the piano

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it changed to 2 circles

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

tetsutaro wrote:
Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity. ok
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo. ok, changed rhythm
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect. I know what you mean, but I think this is more suited for the long run!
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596. ok I give in

Also because M4M so no tip jar.

Thanks for all the mods~!!!

0gre_old

367 posts

Joined January 2013

0gre_old 2013-09-24T21:41:52+00:00

tetsutaro wrote:
Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Muzukashii slightly more than Ninja wa Saikou
I would have go for a very sparse kat solo before the piano comes. But you have your freedom to choose how your map goes as long as it fits the music.
00:41:596 (2) and 00:49:596 (2) - I see how the drums are dealt with 00:40:346 (1,1,2,1), but for this there is nothing here so remove. Mixing different tracks can throw some off.
01:29:846 (1,2,3) and 01:37:846 (1,2,3) - It is a heavy bell here, triple 16ths is unfitting and unnatural given the pace of the song. Single large don at 01:29:846/01:37:846 please.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Oni like Kaze ga Fuiteiru (not the abomination by A****)
Because the percussion depth is basically exhausted with a Muzukashii-level, it is *OK* to add your own percussion to it. Kinda like what Mori no Kuma-san had, you know? (notice the struggle at "OK")
00:43:846 (2,1,2,3,1,1) and similar - Not happy with even 16ths clusters in this contexts unless hanging. But hey(ry.

Also because M4M so no tip jar.

http://puu.sh/4zoPs.zip
certainly didnt attach with difficulties
but done wid mods thx

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-06T01:39:46+00:00

Awaken wrote:
strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Origin]
00:07:846 (4) - try ctrl+g OK
00:10:846 (2,3) - You must remember circles can't overlay sliders when you want a blanket I'll be thinking about what to do instead
00:18:846 (2,3) - seems not a good blanket Same as above
01:19:596 (3) - try ctrl+g OK
01:32:846 (5,6,7,8) - this can be fitter http://puu.sh/4q91M.jpg OK
01:35:846 (1) - try ctrl+g OK

Just that..the arrangement of this diff is a little boring..
As the most difficult diff,I think you can try to make more complex rhythm and more interesting arrangement
But it's still good

GL~

I've been thinking of remapping it, but it'll take quite a while.

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-06T01:41:38+00:00

Kenterz9 wrote:
From your request ~

Origin]
More histounds ? I'll do something about the hitsounds
00:10:846 (2,3) - Blanket ? Or something else ? I'mm thinking about what to do instead during the weakend
00:40:096 (2,3) - Too short jump OK
01:22:846 (4) - Maybe move this slider in the center ? It matches the location of the last combo slider of the previous combos

Good Luck *u*

I really need to remap this...Wish me luck!

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-06T01:43:15+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009.
Still have a long way to rank.

[Origin]
Nothing to say.
Symmetry of the map is prefect, also weird. -_-;; I'll remap it...This was made when I was still a beginner at mapping.

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

Yeah, I've been thinking about remapping it, the only problem is WHEN. I have school, extra-curricular activities, I take piano, blah blah blah.

neonat

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neonat 2013-10-06T02:46:15+00:00

so do I put this as WIP then?

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-11-09T16:11:01+00:00

Wow, I made this map dead, haven't I?

neonat

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neonat 2013-11-09T19:38:02+00:00

-APXH wrote:
Wow, I made this map dead, haven't I?

Lol, if you want to remake your difficulty, go ahead, the mapset can wait.

Evening

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Evening 2013-12-12T11:01:45+00:00

o/ Mod by Req

@neonat | You might want to include epilepsy warning in the description, the video flashes quite a bit

[Oni]

Please reset all combo before looking through this mod, this is because of wrong formatting when I copy over the code of the notes

00:16:846 (37,39) - Swap | I see no strong beat or significance that this kat should be on 1, I recommend you to put it on 2 to continue the kat rhythm on the white lines
00:27:596 (82,83) - Modify | The kat rhythm seems to cut off here, I recommend you to end it at a white line since there is no strong rhythm at the start of the music
00:28:096 (85,86,88,89,90,91,93,94) - Invert ( d>k , k>d ) | Map to the vocals, since your kats does not since to emphasize on anything in the music
01:30:096 (386,387) - k,k > d,d | Seems like there's too many kats cluttered together here, emphasis on this point is unneeded, I recommend this to reduce it
01:38:096 (426,427) - k,k > d,d | Same here
01:51:346 (483) - d > k | Too less kats here for this section, I recommend to add this kat to keep the flow going
02:19:096 + d | Add this don to make the transition from triplets to singles a little smoother

[Muzu]

01:08:346 (180,181) - Swap | The high-pitched vocal falls on 180

No other problems

0gre_old

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0gre_old 2013-12-16T13:17:19+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
o/ Mod by Req

@neonat | You might want to include epilepsy warning in the description, the video flashes quite a bit

[Oni]

Please reset all combo before looking through this mod, this is because of wrong formatting when I copy over the code of the notes

00:16:846 (37,39) - Swap | I see no strong beat or significance that this kat should be on 1, I recommend you to put it on 2 to continue the kat rhythm on the white lines
00:27:596 (82,83) - Modify | The kat rhythm seems to cut off here, I recommend you to end it at a white line since there is no strong rhythm at the start of the music
00:28:096 (85,86,88,89,90,91,93,94) - Invert ( d>k , k>d ) | Map to the vocals, since your kats does not since to emphasize on anything in the music
01:30:096 (386,387) - k,k > d,d | Seems like there's too many kats cluttered together here, emphasis on this point is unneeded, I recommend this to reduce it
01:38:096 (426,427) - k,k > d,d | Same here
01:51:346 (483) - d > k | Too less kats here for this section, I recommend to add this kat to keep the flow going
02:19:096 + d | Add this don to make the transition from triplets to singles a little smoother

[Muzu]

01:08:346 (180,181) - Swap | The high-pitched vocal falls on 180

No other problems

I could not able to find witch notes talking about, because in my map shows with new combos as (1 , 2 , 1 , 1 , etc)
and I made this map long ago
so just fixed up from beginning.

http://puu.sh/5OtK4.zip

thank you mod btw

neonat

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neonat 2013-12-18T08:47:50+00:00

Thanks and updated~

Coro

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Coro 2013-12-20T13:53:53+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[0gre's Muzu]
00:48:846 - add d? it sounds really empty

[0gre's Oni]
nothing

well, it's been pretty extensively modded, I can't find much, it's quite good already
good luck for rank~

karterfreak

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karterfreak 2013-12-25T14:16:38+00:00

[Ogre's Muzukashii]

01:09:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow, this is a huge highlight XD. Anyways, There's no breaks at all in here. While it isn't necessary, perhaps you can put some breaks in this section and leave the second kiai to be the no break one? You'd have more progressing difficulty that way to match the song a bit better imo. I suggest removing the following notes to do this. 01:10:096 (2) - 01:12:096 (3) - 01:14:096 (3) - 01:16:096 (3) - 01:18:096 (3) - 01:20:096 (3) - 01:22:096 (3) - 01:24:096 (3) -

[Ogre's Oni]

00:41:346 - Add a don here.

00:43:596 (134,135) - Consider changing this to be k d, especially if you add the don above.

00:44:346 (136) - Change to k if you apply the above mod, otherwise leave this be.

00:57:846 (185,186) - Change 185 to a don and remove 186. the kd dk here doesn't really match how you were mapping previous sections, but i feel d dk would.

Jerry

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Jerry 2013-12-25T14:38:27+00:00

This song gives me nightmares

Here's the mod that you requested for~ :3

[0gre's Muzukashii]

00:29:596 (1) - delete this so it's same with what you did at 00:59:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) ?
01:57:846 (1) - Delete this and then add a don at 01:57:846 ? Total silence fits this part much better than having a spinner's "donkatdonkatdonkat" sound going over this part
02:18:721 (1) - I don't see this pattern anywhere else in the map, so I suggest deleting it.

[0gre's Oni]

00:20:346 (50,51) - change to d k to match the vocals
00:56:096 (179) - Remove this? A little break here would allow 00:55:846 (178) to stand out and have more "impact" since a very heavy drumbeat can be heard there in the music
01:04:096 - ^ same for this as well, remove?
01:08:096 - ^ same, remove? And also, add a finish at 01:07:846 since the beat here in the music sound much more heavier
02:23:596 - this part has a very low and heavy beat, change to don and also add a finish?

That's all from me!
Good luck~

0gre_old

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0gre_old 2013-12-26T14:31:18+00:00

CoroQuetz wrote:
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[0gre's Muzu]
00:48:846 - add d? it sounds really empty

[0gre's Oni]
nothing

well, it's been pretty extensively modded, I can't find much, it's quite good already
good luck for rank~

Tasha wrote:
[Ogre's Muzukashii]

01:09:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow, this is a huge highlight XD. Anyways, There's no breaks at all in here. While it isn't necessary, perhaps you can put some breaks in this section and leave the second kiai to be the no break one? You'd have more progressing difficulty that way to match the song a bit better imo. I suggest removing the following notes to do this. 01:10:096 (2) - 01:12:096 (3) - 01:14:096 (3) - 01:16:096 (3) - 01:18:096 (3) - 01:20:096 (3) - 01:22:096 (3) - 01:24:096 (3) -

[Ogre's Oni]

00:41:346 - Add a don here.

00:43:596 (134,135) - Consider changing this to be k d, especially if you add the don above.

00:44:346 (136) - Change to k if you apply the above mod, otherwise leave this be.

00:57:846 (185,186) - Change 185 to a don and remove 186. the kd dk here doesn't really match how you were mapping previous sections, but i feel d dk would.

Jerry wrote:
This song gives me nightmares

Here's the mod that you requested for~ :3

[0gre's Muzukashii]
00:29:596 (1) - delete this so it's same with what you did at 00:59:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) ?

01:57:846 (1) - Delete this and then add a don at 01:57:846 ? Total silence fits this part much better than having a spinner's "donkatdonkatdonkat" sound going over this part

02:18:721 (1) - I don't see this pattern anywhere else in the map, so I suggest deleting it.

[0gre's Oni]
00:20:346 (50,51) - change to d k to match the vocals

00:56:096 (179) - Remove this? A little break here would allow 00:55:846 (178) to stand out and have more "impact" since a very heavy drumbeat can be heard there in the music

01:04:096 - ^ same for this as well, remove?
01:08:096 - ^ same, remove? And also, add a finish at 01:07:846 since the beat here in the music sound much more heavier

02:23:596 - this part has a very low and heavy beat, change to don and also add a finish?

That's all from me!
Good luck~

there were lots of points on Muzu so I remade it cuz it was made pretty long ago
Istill think that (526,527,528,529) are constant and no finish at the end.
Latest Oni (changed) and remade Muzu
and thank you for took a look on my diffs

http://puu.sh/5Z9MV.zip

neonat

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neonat 2013-12-26T15:57:46+00:00

Updated I think...

Puzzle fox

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Puzzle fox 2013-12-29T23:54:20+00:00

Really creepy map. I only play CTB and hard difficulty didn't seem really hard to me. I'll try it on other diffs later too. Nice one anyway. Hope this song gets ranked someday

neonat

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neonat 2013-12-30T00:59:03+00:00

Puzzle fox wrote:
Really creepy map. I only play CTB and hard difficulty didn't seem really hard to me. I'll try it on other diffs later too. Nice one anyway. Hope this song gets ranked someday

Yes, the hard is pretty simple ^^, it's 4.5 star rating also anyway haha, but I'm just going up the scale NHI so this is the 'Hard' of the mapset.
And Thanks

Mystima

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Mystima 2014-01-03T03:37:44+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

Normal: All good

Hard: 01:08:346 (2,3) - add a finish on the first hit of slider:(2) and on the first and last hit of slider:(3)
It sounds better, more impact (Imo)

Insane: 00:45:096 (4) - change the whistle from the last hit in the slider to the middle hit
sounds better (Imo)
00:52:346 (4) - add a whistle here
00:57:096 (5) - remove whistle here and 01:05:096 (8) - here and 01:39:596 (7) - here

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-03T12:13:54+00:00

Mystima wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

Normal: All good

Hard: 01:08:346 (2,3) - add a finish on the first hit of slider:(2) and on the first and last hit of slider:(3)
It sounds better, more impact (Imo) no change in Hard

Insane: 00:45:096 (4) - change the whistle from the last hit in the slider to the middle hit
sounds better (Imo) removed it completely
00:52:346 (4) - add a whistle here not adding because I think the clap is good enough
00:57:096 (5) - remove whistle here and 01:05:096 (8) - here and 01:39:596 (7) - here only removed the last suggestion

Thanks for taking a look at my map

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-01-05T04:32:21+00:00

mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

====================

[

Muzukashii]

General

☞ change your diff's name from 0gre's Muzu to be 0gre's Muzukashii. the diff name should be complete

Notes Structure

☞ i saw that you mostly followed the vocal sounds. i have some suggestions about vocal sounds there and you can see at the Notes box

☞ some confused pattern which are found. you can see the Notes box to see the suggestions

☞ well basicly all patterns here are nice~ okay

Notes

• change 00:20:346 - ; 00:20:846 - ; 00:21:346 - to be o o o. i changed them to follow the vocal sounds there. 00:20:346 - have a same pitch sound (vocal) like 00:19:846 - and you used kat at 00:19:846 - . so, to keep the consistency of the same vocal sounds, i change 00:20:346 - to be kat. and at 00:20:846 - , the sound becomes quite deeper there and becomes high again at 00:21:346 -

• change 00:24:096 - to be don. this note is still don like 00:23:846 - bcause there's not any sounds too there, so just follow the previous note with a same note

• change 00:32:096 - to be don too. the reason is same like above ^

• move 00:40:596 - to 00:40:846 - . well i know why you put it at 00:40:596 - because you wanted follow the drum hit at there right? well it's nice but please consider again. you used "x x x x x x" suddenly at that part, and you can see at the next notes too. basicly you used a single note, or 3notes or 5notes there. of course when you gave a 2notes and 4notes like that, the players will be quite confused about it.

• change 00:41:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sound which is still high like 00:41:346 -

• move 00:48:596 - to 00:48:846 -

• change 00:49:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^

• move 01:32:096 - to 01:30:846 -

• change 01:59:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ and then kat at 01:59:596 - is to emphasize the big don at 01:59:846 - which is for the new part of the song

====================

[

Oni]

General

☞ well~

Notes Structure

☞ kay~!

Notes

• change 00:19:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sounds like 00:19:346 - before it changes to another pitch sound a t00:19:846 -

• change 00:42:596 - and 00:42:846 - to be o o, to follow the vocal sounds again and also make a better pattern too with o o o o o o o

• change 01:09:096 - to be don. basicly the reason is same like above too btw ^

====================

okay that's all from me
btw for the first time i thought that this map couldn't have Oni diff because the song is low and calm. but okay, in my opinion it's alright with oni on this map

kay goodluck then o/

0gre_old

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0gre_old 2014-01-07T13:22:06+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

====================

[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ change your diff's name from 0gre's Muzu to be 0gre's Muzukashii. the diff name should be complete
@ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/79116 has Muzu and I have ranked with Muzu as well.

Notes Structure
☞ i saw that you mostly followed the vocal sounds. i have some suggestions about vocal sounds there and you can see at the Notes box

☞ some confused pattern which are found. you can see the Notes box to see the suggestions ok!

☞ well basicly all patterns here are nice~ okay

Notes
• change 00:20:346 - ; 00:20:846 - ; 00:21:346 - to be o o o. i changed them to follow the vocal sounds there. 00:20:346 - have a same pitch sound (vocal) like 00:19:846 - and you used kat at 00:19:846 - . so, to keep the consistency of the same vocal sounds, i change 00:20:346 - to be kat. and at 00:20:846 - , the sound becomes quite deeper there and becomes high again at 00:21:346 - understood

• change 00:24:096 - to be don. this note is still don like 00:23:846 - bcause there's not any sounds too there, so just follow the previous note with a same note means k 　k k k k d (k) smt like this ? quite not sure

• change 00:32:096 - to be don too. the reason is same like above ^

• move 00:40:596 - to 00:40:846 - . well i know why you put it at 00:40:596 - because you wanted follow the drum hit at there right? well it's nice but please consider again. you used "x x x x x x" suddenly at that part, and you can see at the next notes too. basicly you used a single note, or 3notes or 5notes there. of course when you gave a 2notes and 4notes like that, the players will be quite confused about it.
@ 00:37:846 at this point i added a change compare to beginnin part so i increased a note by includin drums and 00:42:346 this long thingy is just because i thought there is no place i can cut.
I just didnt like to use d d k k d , k k d , d d k , all the time, wanted clear the difference.
Btw I have arranged it to support those points

• change 00:41:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sound which is still high like 00:41:346 - ok!

• move 00:48:596 - to 00:48:846 -

• change 00:49:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ ye!

• move 01:32:096 - to 01:30:846 -

• change 01:59:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ and then kat at 01:59:596 - is to emphasize the big don at 01:59:846 - which is for the new part of the song with a long time of my funny experience, I found that d d k d D is also work as d d k k D which is a bit outmoded

====================

[ Oni]

General
☞ well~ hehe

Notes Structure
☞ kay~! lolol

Notes
• change 00:19:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sounds like 00:19:346 - before it changes to another pitch sound a t00:19:846 -

• change 00:42:596 - and 00:42:846 - to be o o, to follow the vocal sounds again and also make a better pattern too with o o o o o o o

• change 01:09:096 - to be don. basicly the reason is same like above too btw ^

====================

okay that's all from me
btw for the first time i thought that this map couldn't have Oni diff because the song is low and calm. but okay, in my opinion it's alright with oni on this map
Any song could have ONI diff :3
kay goodluck then o/

I wasn sure of namin is unrankable cuz this OSU always change their ranking strategy.
Ill wait if bat gonna say anythin about it !
ty ;D

http://puu.sh/6cENo.zip

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-08T03:43:04+00:00

updated

DenoisoGoiso

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DenoisoGoiso 2014-01-08T10:58:45+00:00

\:D/ Random Lucky!!!! taiko mod~

teara tell me to mod that then i want to mod >:3

[General]

>:3

[Muzukashii]

Any feedback/greetings and General
- this muzu like a futsuu :/ but can you chane the diff name to "0gre's Muzukashii"? also average taiko player don't know what is that.

Kats Suggestion
- 01:00:346 (148,149) - add kat these. that was high piano instrumental, and empty here. so consider kat these.
  01:08:846 (170) - is this kat fit anything? maybe add kat at (171)? this is more stylish at d d k k. and the note will fit the vocal perfectly also the pattern music not really readable.
  01:41:346 (266) - add kat to this object. this object pitch/vocal is really high here, and empty here.

Delete/Add Suggestion
- Low priority ;w;

Other Suggestion
- 00:27:846 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - this pattern was not really pitching notes :/ maybe try kat to 1/1 beatsnap? in case i mean the pitch note... is not really readable and i see at 1/2 beatsnap rhythm then add kat to 1/2 beatsnap (i mean red tick) not good, nothing to fits (61,65) is not higher. you should fit these vocal.
  00:44:346 (104,105,106,107) - okay, this pattern not really fit mini drum/piano anything. i suggested to you make kd dk to really fit music. in the image case, i mean move the (105) to red tick. that's really more stylish with the pattern and fit the piano. i don't understand anything about this. but i will give you the image:
  SPOILER
  01:31:096 (234) - this, you should move this to white tick. the (232,233) is ugly pattern i see. when 5 patterns emphasize to 2 pattern, these music is not readable for notes. also the better pattern is 5 patterns emphasize to 3 patterns is more good and fit the music.
  02:03:596 (328) - move it to 256,192 (:3]__)
  02:07:596 (342) - ^ (:3]__)
  02:11:596 (356) - ^ (:3]__)

[Oni]

Any feedback/greetings and General
- This is muzu!!??

Kats Suggestion
- omg ;w; low priority

Delete/Add Suggestion
- 00:40:596 (121) - delete this object? too emphasize at this, at least before pattern stream (i mean (116,117,118) pattern) return to 3 1/1 object is like an overmapped. so consider delete it.

Other Suggestion
- 00:21:846 (53,54,55,56,57) - does this pattern is fit music? so pls add kat. this pattern was not readable. consider add kat these so music is not wrong with objects.
  00:29:846 (81,82,83,84,85) - ^ same as above
  00:37:721 - maybe place this greenline to big white tick? no description available

i won't mod other parts again when modding oni
Good luck~ consider get TAIKO ICON FIRST! wwww

Teara

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Teara 2014-01-08T21:11:03+00:00

Was almost done with the mod when the power failed, and I lost it.

It consisted mostly of hit-sounds suggestions for the start of the collab (which IMO is very lacking) so I suggest you guys revisit it and make some improvements to it, so that it can match the hit-sound usage at the end of the collab =p

Also had some patterns suggestions on normal and hard, grab me ingame when you get time and we can do those in a IRC mod.

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-09T03:15:52+00:00

Teara wrote:
Was almost done with the mod when the power failed, and I lost it.

It consisted mostly of hit-sounds suggestions for the start of the collab (which IMO is very lacking) so I suggest you guys revisit it and make some improvements to it, so that it can match the hit-sound usage at the end of the collab =p

Also had some patterns suggestions on normal and hard, grab me ingame when you get time and we can do those in a IRC mod.

Ok will do. Will try to get on and find you this weekend.

DenoisoGoiso

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DenoisoGoiso 2014-01-09T09:47:43+00:00

fak u teara

doesn't this map get taiko icon? or standard icon?

Teara

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Teara 2014-01-10T17:14:52+00:00

IRC Mod

17:45 Teara: o/
17:45 Teara: busy with a IRC mod =p almost done
18:32 neonat: was eating late dinner heh
18:32 Teara: np, I just finished =)
18:32 Teara: with my other mod
18:32 neonat: i see
18:32 Teara: Ok, lets do this
18:34 Teara: Ok, on hard
18:34 Teara: this is just my opinion, so you can totally ignore the following
18:34 Teara: 00:46:846 (3,4,5) -
18:34 Teara: this feels very oldstyle mapping
18:34 Teara: 00:51:846 (1,2,3) -
18:34 Teara: this is cool thou
18:35 Teara: but thats minor
18:36 neonat: hmmm
18:36 Teara: anyway, some hitsounds suggestions
18:37 Teara: its your mapping style, I'm just pointing out what I dislike =p
18:37 Teara: 00:55:346 (1,3) -
18:37 Teara: whisltes here
18:37 Teara: 00:56:846 (4,5) - and remove whisltes here
18:38 neonat: what do u think of this then http://puu.sh/6g5Pv.jpg
18:38 Teara: thats already a lot better =)
18:39 neonat: 00:52:846 (3) - has both clap and whistle
18:39 neonat: should i remove one?
18:40 neonat: the end of slider
18:40 Teara: but as for the whistle suggestions, rather then focusing on the vocals (which can cause whistle spam) focus on the drums rather
18:40 Teara: yea, you can remove the whislte on the slider end
18:41 Teara: but anyway, do you understand what I mean with about focusing on the drums rather?
18:41 neonat: add whistle on 00:55:346 (1,3) -
18:41 neonat: removed on (4,5)
18:42 Teara: cool, and on 00:59:346 (1) - add whislte
18:42 Teara: 00:59:846 (2) - remove whislte from start, but keep end
18:42 neonat: yeh
18:42 neonat: to keep it similar
18:42 neonat: to previous patterns of hitsounds
18:42 Teara: yes
18:42 Teara:

18:42 Teara: great
18:42 Teara: fix that solong then
18:42 neonat: added on 01:03:346 (3) -
18:43 neonat: removed on (6,7)
18:43 neonat: any thoughts on
18:43 neonat: the finish on start of 01:07:846 (1) -
18:43 neonat: ?
18:43 Teara: claps and finishes are mostly placed right, only whistles that bothered me
18:43 Teara: no, that finish focus a lot on the vocal, which is good
18:44 Teara: since it gets very high pitched
18:44 Teara: =)
18:44 neonat: 01:25:846 - onwards, want me to continue the claps?
18:45 Teara: claps or whisltes work, but not both
18:45 neonat: and only use the whistles for the softer part like 00:56:252 - ?
18:45 Teara: you can choose which is nicer for you
18:46 Teara: thats a good idea
18:46 Teara: since claps are a bit louder and whistles are softer
18:46 neonat: 01:33:846 (1) - start of slider, finish?
18:47 Teara: accually, it might be a good idea to start transitioning into claps from there on out
18:47 Teara: its to soft for a finish imo
18:47 Teara: but the key for hitsounds is consistency
18:48 Teara: randomly placed hitsounds or selective hitsounding sounds bad most of the time
18:49 neonat: i see
18:49 Teara: in rare cases its sounds great thou
18:52 neonat: 01:55:846 (4) - finish?
18:52 Teara: yes
18:52 Teara: hehehe, the end where the boy smiles is creepy -.-
18:53 neonat: new combo too?
18:53 neonat: haha
18:53 neonat: yeh
18:53 neonat: lol
18:53 Teara: yup, NC too
18:54 neonat: 02:14:846 (4) - curved it cuz thats cooler lol
18:54 Teara:

18:55 neonat: dang lol BSS stuck at 11.0% that accursed number
18:55 Teara: like IRC modding with you =p you can think for yourself!
18:56 Teara: most people I have to point out every hitsound suggestion =p
18:56 neonat: shld i restart osu?
18:56 neonat: ah
18:56 Teara: give it a while
18:56 neonat: mmm yeh i just had to redo the upload
18:56 Teara: great
18:57 neonat: now just waiting for it to be complete
18:57 neonat: yeh i plan to map creepy vocaloid songs lols
18:57 Teara: :3
18:57 neonat: updated~
18:58 Teara: you can do the same for normal
18:58 Teara: (hitsounds)
18:58 Teara: whislte's or claps on the drums
18:58 neonat: shall check it out
18:59 neonat: claps is after the start when the drums kick in i guess
18:59 Teara: ye
19:01 Teara: yea, hard looks good now
19:05 neonat: 01:04:846 - on normal
19:05 neonat: shld i stick with it following the vocals
19:05 neonat: or fill this gap
19:05 Teara: its fine
19:06 Teara: gives time to rest fingers
19:06 Teara: you dont have any big breaks anywhere, and places like this helps rest a bit
19:06 Teara: on a hard or insane, sure, but normal and easy nah
19:07 neonat: 01:26:346 (2) - changed to clap instead of finish
19:07 Teara: sure
19:09 Teara: and yes, you can apply hitsound suggestions to insane too.

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-10T17:51:25+00:00

Updated mainly hitsounds.

Teara

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Teara 2014-01-11T04:26:02+00:00

Alright.

That should be good enough now

Evening

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Evening 2014-01-11T04:31:14+00:00

noice

Kagami Yuki

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Kagami Yuki 2014-01-11T14:12:28+00:00

Hi~ taiko mods from my modding queue.

[General]

I like this song \:D/
Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii".
I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part".
whole diffs looks cool √

Let's take some minor changes.Then it's ready for Taiko-BATs' checking.

[Ogre's Oni]

00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here
00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 -
01:43:346 (369) - k here?
01:51:346 (401) - ^
01:58:346 (427) - ^
02:02:346 (445) - ^
02:06:346 (466) - ^

[Ogre's Muzu]

00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better.
00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 -
01:06:346 (164) - k here?
01:09:346 (171) - ^
01:41:346 (266) - ^
01:56:346 (304) - ^

All above are my suggestions. It's up to you:3
Good luck for ranking~~

0gre_old

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0gre_old 2014-01-11T16:06:33+00:00

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:
Hi~ taiko mods from my modding queue.

[General]
I like this song \:D/
Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii". oh not again!! alright then !! LOL!!!
I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part". ✔
whole diffs looks cool √ ty ( :; ´^;ิ益;^ิ;.)
Let's take some minor changes.Then it's ready for Taiko-BATs' checking.

[Ogre's Oni]
00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here cuz u know this bit is like sounding goin low
00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 - i know but i don like to see kkk combo just right next to d-combos
01:43:346 (369) - k here? kk
01:51:346 (401) - ^
01:58:346 (427) - ^
02:02:346 (445) - ^
02:06:346 (466) - ^
[Ogre's Muzu]
00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better. k
00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 - oh yeah
01:06:346 (164) - k here? all fixed to follow the above thing
01:09:346 (171) - ^
01:41:346 (266) - ^
01:56:346 (304) - ^
All above are my suggestions. It's up to you:3
Good luck for ranking~~

actually It is already checked by MAT long time ago does it not count ? lol
ty mod ;D

http://puu.sh/6heVO.zip

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-11T16:15:17+00:00

updated!

karterfreak

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karterfreak 2014-01-13T01:11:47+00:00

~~Huh, I could have swore I modded this before.~~ Rechecking!

[0gre's Muzukashii]

00:10:596 (14,15,16,17,18) - Instead of kd dkd here, try kddk d. This will emphasize the 1/1 notes better that start at 18.

00:52:596 - Could add a don here.

01:00:346 (146) - See if you like this as a kat. I think it sounds a bit better here.

01:30:346 (230,231) - I suggest moving these to start at 01:30:596 instead. You could also remove 01:31:596 (234) to keep consistency with previous patterns, but it isn't required here.

01:40:596 - Add a don here if you added one to 00:52:596.

02:12:971 (353) - I suggest removing this as it doesn't really fit with any of the previous mapping.

[0gre's Oni]

HP5 -> HP6
OD5 -> OD6

00:22:596 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - Instead of dk d kkdkd here, why not try kd k dkdkd? the dkdkd at the end fits the last 5 notes much better imo, and the kd k leads into dkdkd well.

00:30:596 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Same as above.

00:42:221 (128,129,130) - I think you could get away with deleting 128 and 130 while still keeping the same relative difficulty here without having to overmap any. Try it and see what you think.

01:30:346 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - Instead of ddd d kkk k d d k here, give ddd k dkd k d k d a shot, especially if you apply the first two mods that I suggested for your Oni.

01:43:346 (367,368,369) - Just a suggestion but try kkd here. it gives you that dkdkd pattern that I suggested in the first two mods, which fits really well with that 5 note piano part.

01:51:346 (399,400,401) - Same suggestion as above.

Overall not a whole lot wrong with the taiko difficulties for the map. Call me back for a recheck when you've looked at this mod.

0gre_old

367 posts

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0gre_old 2014-01-14T18:42:05+00:00

Tasha wrote:
~~Huh, I could have swore I modded this before.~~ Rechecking!

[0gre's Muzukashii]

00:10:596 (14,15,16,17,18) - Instead of kd dkd here, try kddk d. This will emphasize the 1/1 notes better that start at 18.

00:52:596 - Could add a don here.

01:00:346 (146) - See if you like this as a kat. I think it sounds a bit better here.

01:30:346 (230,231) - I suggest moving these to start at 01:30:596 instead. You could also remove 01:31:596 (234) to keep consistency with previous patterns, but it isn't required here.

01:40:596 - Add a don here if you added one to 00:52:596.

02:12:971 (353) - I suggest removing this as it doesn't really fit with any of the previous mapping.

[0gre's Oni]

HP5 -> HP6
OD5 -> OD6

00:22:596 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - Instead of dk d kkdkd here, why not try kd k dkdkd? the dkdkd at the end fits the last 5 notes much better imo, and the kd k leads into dkdkd well.

00:30:596 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - Same as above.

00:42:221 (128,129,130) - I think you could get away with deleting 128 and 130 while still keeping the same relative difficulty here without having to overmap any. Try it and see what you think.

01:30:346 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - Instead of ddd d kkk k d d k here, give ddd k dkd k d k d a shot, especially if you apply the first two mods that I suggested for your Oni.

01:43:346 (367,368,369) - Just a suggestion but try kkd here. it gives you that dkdkd pattern that I suggested in the first two mods, which fits really well with that 5 note piano part.

01:51:346 (399,400,401) - Same suggestion as above.

Overall not a whole lot wrong with the taiko difficulties for the map. Call me back for a recheck when you've looked at this mod.

http://puu.sh/6kSYZ.zip
when i took your mods it became how i normally make maps
there is 0gre's Oni and 0gre's Muzukashii
ty for mod ;D

neonat

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neonat 2014-01-15T00:14:16+00:00

~~Will only be able to return home this Saturday. Will update it then.~~
Updated!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-17T03:38:19+00:00

uhh poke me again when you get a bubble, didnt realize this got osu-iconed xD

neonat

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neonat 2014-02-11T11:00:55+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
uhh poke me again when you get a bubble, didnt realize this got osu-iconed xD

Will try to do so as soon as I can orz

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2014-02-11T15:46:36+00:00

neonat

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neonat 2014-02-12T03:53:57+00:00

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Lol

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Kaguya Hourain

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Kaguya Hourain 2014-02-26T09:22:25+00:00

Time to mod!
I don't mod hitsounds, everyone has their unique sense of rhythm and style.

[General]
BPM/Offset ok.

[Normal]
Increase CS and AR by 1 I think, or call the diff Easy

00:52:846 (3) - Move this so that it stacks with 00:50:846 (1).
01:08:346 (4) - Move to x:352 y:268, blankets better.
01:34:346 (2) - Endpoint to x:340 y:176 for perfect blanket.
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems a bit repetitive. Try making them sliders or something.
Pretty good! I love the sampleset change during kiai.

[Hard]
CS + 1
00:13:846 (1,2,3) - NC here is inconsistent with the start of the map while being the same verse.
00:17:846 (5) - NC.
01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistency with previous verse which is exactly the same.
02:03:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The NC here is inconsistent with 01:57:846 (1,2,1,2,1) while being the same verse.
02:07:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This here is even more inconsistent!
Plenty of NC inconsistencies here. It's not such a big deal but this is what makes the difference. Very good patterns!

[Insane]
Settings are good.
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move that a little to the left to center it to the grid.
00:44:846 (3) - Grid Snap!
Other than that, well done!

[Insane Collab]
Settings are good.
HOLY S**T THE TIMING POINTFEST! I LOVE THIS!
Why is kiai not consistent with the rest of the difficulties? (RED)
Judging by the stacking that is done in the map it would be better if you changed the stacking leniency to plain 2.
Nothing. Absolutely nothing in the structure! This is good. Really good.

I like the spread. Making Normal a little harder to actually match the diff name would be good.

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