Lapis Aoki wrote:

Heard that this map is gonna get bubbled soon, so quick check~ owo (I'm also modding this cause I like SeeU~ >w<)
[Normal]
00:43:317 (2) -Move to x:200 y:244 and change it shape like this better:

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^ It follows the rhythm perfectly changed whole section
00:48:846 (5) -Move to x:340 y:344 ^
01:01:846 (1) -Change shape: used a different shape

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01:41:846 -Better remove spinner here, it doesn't fit the timing. I do not think it is wrong though, it's just a spinner over 1 line of the vocals
01:49:846 -^ ^
02:00:346 (2) -Move to x:360 y:164 It will be better for normal players. no change

GL and star ~ ! >w<

1. 00:53:846 (174) - finisher? 00:45:846 (141) - ここでシンバルを拾わずにfinisherを置かないなら、曲の流れが変わる 00:53:846 に置いてあげると綺麗だと思います。
   01:41:846 (376) - same as above.
2. 01:41:096 (373) - change to d? 1番と比べてパターンが詰まってる事自体は問題無いのですが、kat の音が少しうるさく感じたので一度ピッチを落としてあげた方がプレイする上では良かったです。
3. 01:56:846 - add a k here. バスドラムに合わせた空白だと思いますが、1番サビ前は叩かせっぱなしでしたし、同じようにこちらも何か置いて勢いを付けた方が良いと感じました。
4. 01:59:846 ~ パターンが多いためどれが良いとは言えませんが、finisherの使い方にもう少し統一性を持たせた方が良いと感じました。1番のサビがうまくまとまってた反面、こちらは意図的にしても少しバランスが悪いように思えます。
5. 02:15:846 - => 02:16:346 - move x0.9 line here. 移動というより緑線を追加して、元々あった緑線はSVx1.0に変えてあげてください。わかりやすい速度変化とはいえ、ちょっと変な感じです。

1. 00:52:596 (127) - del? その直後にある kkk 自体必要ないような気もしましたが、Oniとの差別化のためなら問題無いと思います。が、Muzukashii的にはもう少し休憩が欲しいです。
2. 00:53:846 (132) - finisher? same reason as Oni.
   01:41:846 (293) - ^
3. 01:01:596 (157) - del? これと言った音も無いですし、01:01:846 - を孤立させてあげた方が良い気がします。
4. 02:15:846 - この速度変化もOniと同じように次のノーツにずらしてあげてください。
5. 02:18:721 (75) - del? Oniにも同じような2連符がありますが、Muzukashiiなのでこっちは消してあげても良いと思います。

TKS wrote:

[ 0gre's Oni]

1. 00:53:846 (174) - finisher? 00:45:846 (141) - ここでシンバルを拾わずにfinisherを置かないなら、曲の流れが変わる 00:53:846 に置いてあげると綺麗だと思います。
   01:41:846 (376) - same as above.
2. 01:41:096 (373) - change to d? 1番と比べてパターンが詰まってる事自体は問題無いのですが、kat の音が少しうるさく感じたので一度ピッチを落としてあげた方がプレイする上では良かったです。変更
3. 01:56:846 - add a k here. バスドラムに合わせた空白だと思いますが、1番サビ前は叩かせっぱなしでしたし、同じようにこちらも何か置いて勢いを付けた方が良いと感じました。はい
4. 01:59:846 ~ パターンが多いためどれが良いとは言えませんが、finisherの使い方にもう少し統一性を持たせた方が良いと感じました。1番のサビがうまくまとまってた反面、こちらは意図的にしても少しバランスが悪いように思えます。と言われましても、何回も作りすぎてるため、もうアイデアが...
5. 02:15:846 - => 02:16:346 - move x0.9 line here. 移動というより緑線を追加して、元々あった緑線はSVx1.0に変えてあげてください。わかりやすい速度変化とはいえ、ちょっと変な感じです。了解

[ 0gre's Muzukashii]

1. 00:52:596 (127) - del? その直後にある kkk 自体必要ないような気もしましたが、Oniとの差別化のためなら問題無いと思います。が、Muzukashii的にはもう少し休憩が欲しいです。難易度関係でｋｋｋを外しました
2. 00:53:846 (132) - finisher? same reason as Oni.
   01:41:846 (293) - ^
3. 01:01:596 (157) - del? これと言った音も無いですし、01:01:846 - を孤立させてあげた方が良い気がします。どかしました
4. 02:15:846 - この速度変化もOniと同じように次のノーツにずらしてあげてください。ずらしました
5. 02:18:721 (75) - del? Oniにも同じような2連符がありますが、Muzukashiiなのでこっちは消してあげても良いと思います。

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright lets see

[General]
preview time should be at 00:05:846, its at 00:05:830 atm which is slightly early Ok will change this

[Normal]
00:36:846 (4) - is the whistle on slider body intentional? Was because both ends had whistle, I guess I could remove it since it's not really needed
00:51:846 (2) - this would look better if you took 00:50:846 (1) and flipped it by 180 degrees so the curve looks the same shifted other positions there too
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try perfectly center this on the y-axis makes sense to make them equal x or y axis
02:21:846 (3) - whistle on start not really going to highlight this note with whistle, didn't do so in other difficulties too

[Hard]
00:32:596 - add a note here? keeps consistency with 00:24:596 (4) ok
00:37:846 (1) - add a finish here? only added to Normal because of the object density and how it would be less noisy
01:41:846 (1) - use a 3-point slider, right now it kinda looks meh ok

[Insane]
00:23:846 (1) - probably forgot a whistle it was a gradual lead up in hitsounds to the verse but yeh it does make it seem better with one more whistle
01:34:846 (3,4,5) - the flow here feels a bit broken, since you stop to hit the stack and then jump really far to reach the next slider. try position 01:35:096 (4) at x:192 y:32 shifted both in a way where they overlap 01:34:846 (3) - equally and the downward motion is kept
01:42:846 (1) - NC is not really needed, since the same sv is being followed ok
01:57:346 (4) - make this into a slider thats a vertical flip of 01:56:346 (2), gives a nice lead into 01:57:846 (1) clarified this
02:01:846 (6) - try stacking this under 02:01:346 (5), makes more sense with how you comboed the section I must have left that out somehow

[Insane Collab]
00:10:846 (2,3) - move it a bit up to avoid the partial overlap with 00:09:846 (1) changed and ended up shifting 00:11:346 (4,5) too
00:53:846 (1) - move the end point a bit left to get a better blanket on 00:54:846 (2,3) fixed
01:11:846 (1) - pretty sure volume settings like this are questionable in rankability, i'd suggest to use 25% instead to be safe (apply to all 15% sections) changed
01:23:341 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:23:346 fixed
01:57:846 - i would actually remove this break here, especially because the next section comes really fast, and the pause can be considered a transition verse instead of a break in music section ok
02:12:846 (3,4,5,6) - rearrange the order makes this section play better imo: ok

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recommend you fix the stuff in blue, and then let me know

Hinsvar wrote:

This is quite a wait (with +125 priority even lol)

Congrats!

HeatKai wrote:

Congrats Neonat! At last you manage to get it ranked! /claps

Cloudchaser wrote:

First SeeU song ranked! congratz

UnderminE wrote:

trap

oh-

DJNightmare wrote:

Finally, Congrats on your first ranked beatmap neonat :3

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Congrats man! Been a long time since I wanted this ranked! Awesome!

[ Aily ] wrote:

wwwwww finally ranked

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

WHOOOOOOOP CONGRATZ!!!! :'D

mingmichael wrote:

wohoo congrats

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

I remember this song...
gratz

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Gratz~

[Seraphin] wrote:

nice

kirigherkins wrote:

+1 for new national anthem.

Sieg wrote:

Congrats (: