Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Normal:
00:08:346 (5,1) - make this? - http://puu.sh/2ab0H Shifted somewhat to that
00:14:846 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2ab8a Slightly changed a slider shape
00:48:846 (5,6) - down by few grids http://puu.sh/2ab3Y ok

Hard:
HPAROD all +1 I increased HP Drain
00:15:846 (4) - 396:184 for better flow? ok
00:22:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/2abbK http://puu.sh/2abc7 ^
00:36:846 (3) - ^ 340:124 ^
00:53:846 (1,2) - hide note on spinner end is not a good style for hard Do you mean slider? I moved all 3
00:57:846 (1,2) - ^
01:49:846 (1,2) - ^
01:12:721 (1) - this not doesn't follow anything, consider to remove Follows vocals, I think I'm keeping it
02:23:846 - +note? Nothing really there to be honest, I think it's best to end before that

Insane:
00:21:346 (7,8) - 2 grid up, sorry for nazi Not sure why 2 grids up though, it's already aligned with (6)
00:53:846 (1) - This DS change feels strange, but not a big deal didn't want it to be too close



That's all. Good Luck!

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ

-APXH wrote:

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ

We don't speak Korean!

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Origin:
OD+1
00:09:346 (6,1) - this little overlap looks awkward
00:17:846 (1) - oh.... try something like - http://puu.sh/2abpZ
00:41:096 (4,1) - avoid this awkward overlaps - http://puu.sh/2abry

That's all. Good Luck!

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6). ok
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/ Haha no problem, I'll make it more curvy


[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable. I'll try what I can do, within the constraints of distance snap

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there. ok
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad. My intention at the start was a high spacing insane >.< it is really such a let-off?




Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

Thanks for mod, I really appreciate it

-APXH wrote:

Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - Posted elsewhere ought to think prefer it stacked
00:39:346 (3) - 00:38:846 (2) Adjust the slider with interval no change
00:56:846 (6) - Posted elsewhere ought to think like it stacked too
01:01:346 (7) - Distance check Shifted
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Patterns do not look so good I think it's fine
02:01:846 (4) - Posted elsewhere ought to think Oh whoops, didn't realise. Changed

[Hard]
CS -1 I'm fine with the current CS

none

[Insane]
Think much difference between Anna and hard with insane ... In my opinion, not really, it's really pretty much just the spacing and the other difficulty adjusters

none

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck

• slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.

1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting.
   
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2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion.
   
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4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff.
8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting.
    
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11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    
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21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)


Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.

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HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/

• slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.

1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting. moved it slightly
   
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2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion. not a blanket
   
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4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff. I kinda like it, but I'll change it to 0.75x
8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting. I find at starting a little weird though
    
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11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    
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21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

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BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example

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53846,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
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69846,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
69971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
73721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
73971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
77721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
77971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
81721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
81971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
85846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
101846,-100,4,1,3,80,0,0
101971,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
102721,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
109596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
113596,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
115596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
119846,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
119971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
123721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
123971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
127721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
127971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
131721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
131971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
135846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

[HitObjects]
360,336,37846,2,0,P|456:296|440:192,1,225.000008583069
368,104,38596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,38846,2,0,P|208:152|152:136,1,112.500004291535
264,136,39346,2,0,P|240:189|192:221,1,112.500004291535
88,240,39846,2,0,P|80:320|200:360,1,225.000008583069
198,360,40596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,360,41096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,41346,2,0,P|376:328|392:288,1,112.500004291535
456,200,41846,6,0,B|464:88|464:88|400:88|368:40,1,225.000008583069
256,32,42596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,42846,2,0,P|104:72|88:128,1,112.500004291535
144,32,43346,2,0,P|148:88|181:136,1,112.500004291535
256,216,43846,2,0,B|208:312|208:312|144:360|104:304,1,225.000008583069
105,306,44596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,306,45096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,45346,2,0,P|32:224|0:272,1,112.500004291535
432,352,69846,6,0,P|384:312|400:208,1,168.750006437302
394,214,70346,2,0,L|424:104,1,112.500004291535
336,40,70846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,71096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,71346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,71846,6,0,P|32:256|48:304,1,112.500004291535
128,376,72346,2,0,P|160:320|144:272,1,112.500004291535
260,276,72846,2,0,P|247:319|279:375,1,112.500004291535
368,304,73346,2,0,B|432:240|416:160|480:112,1,225.000008583069
479,112,74346,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74846,2,0,P|196:30|155:43,1,112.500004291535
256,64,75346,2,0,P|192:88|176:128,1,112.500004291535

You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck

1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that.
2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does.
3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video.

• 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
  00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
  00:22:596 - ^
  00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ?
  00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
  00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe)
  00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ?
  00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846
  00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion)
  00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too)
  00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful.
  00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting.
  01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe?
  01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy.
  01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
  02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players.
  02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152

1. HP - 1
2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish

• 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
  00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596
  00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms*
  00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
  00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
  00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
  00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
  01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry.
  01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
  01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too.
  01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
  01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
  01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
  01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty.
  01:47:346 - ^
  02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
  02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
  02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe...

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal

[General Stuff]

1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that. I think it should still be find, this difficulty is not demanding and spread out
2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does. sounds fine on my side
3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video. If they want to see the ending they can look at the other difficulties xD :p

Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

• 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
  00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
  00:22:596 - ^
  00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ? Probably. Changed.
  00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
  00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe) Designed changed anyway with the shifting of (2)
  00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ? Don't think so
  00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846 no thanks :X
  00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion) changed
  00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too) neonat likes straight too though, slides don't have to love me
  00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful. these sliders don't multiply like them though, I thinkI'll keep them this way
  00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting. changed
  01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe? if I remember right, this part is always like that
  01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy. not really (to me)
  01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
  02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players. was one of the many reasons why this is Normal
  02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152

Woah. It's over? Nice map

Hard

[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

1. HP - 1
2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish

That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

• 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
  00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596 I feel my way is more fitting
  00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms* Not this time, but you may like a vocaloid song I have made already but is unsubmitted, with all the curves in the world
  00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
  00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
  00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
  00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
  01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry. I know what you mean, but I like it this way so HD can be *ahem* more tricky for 1st time try
  01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
  01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too. Cute :X ....what can I say?
  01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
  01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
  01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
  01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty. I wouldn't have my door
  01:47:346 - ^
  02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
  02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
  02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe... Changed

I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   - [Hard] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Insane] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Normal] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Origin] :
   Combo5 : 255,170,43
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D:
   
   SPOILER

   01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
   01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
   01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
   01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
   01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
   01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
   01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
   01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
   01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
   01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
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   01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
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   01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
   01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
   01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
   01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
   01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
   01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
   01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
   02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
   02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
   02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
   02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
   02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
   02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
   02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
   02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
   02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
   02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
   02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
   02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
   02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
   02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
   02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
   02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
   02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
   02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
   02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
   02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
   02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
   02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
   02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
   02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
   02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
   02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
   02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
   02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
   02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
   02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
   02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
   02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
   02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
   02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
   02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
   02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
   02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
   02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
   02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
   02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:

• Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
  Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
  00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion
  01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o?
  00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
  00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D:
  Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O
  
  Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3

• Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
  00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
  00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D:
  00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up
  
  01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 -
  02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ?
  02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D:

[-Google-] wrote:

Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   - [Hard] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Insane] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Normal] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Origin] :
   Combo5 : 255,170,43
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D: Fixed what I could find
   
   SPOILER

   01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
   01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
   01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
   01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
   01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
   01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
   01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
   01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
   01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
   01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
   01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
   01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
   01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
   01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
   01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
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   01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
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   02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
   02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
   02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
   02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
   02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
   02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
   02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
   02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
   02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
   02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
   02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
   02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
   02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
   02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
   02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
   02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
   02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
   02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
   02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
   02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
   02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
   02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
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   02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
   02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
   02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
   02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
   02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
   02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
   02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
   02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
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   02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
   02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
   02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
   02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
   02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
   02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
   02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
   02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:

Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]

• Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
  Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
  00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion Changed somewhat
  01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o? Keeping
  00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
  00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D: k
  Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O seems constant to me though, I had to change the divisor to keep up with the change in sv
  
  Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3

[Hard]

• Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
  00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
  00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D: sure
  00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up it's k
  
  01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 - changed
  02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ? no change
  02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D: important! for the last piece of music as well as for the video

Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]

Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G Reason for not repeating too many is because it is the simplest difficulty
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346. Trying to break it into phrases, so there is an unusually large gap
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once. Added one circle

SPOILER

[Origin]

Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle. I do not really think these 2 would fit more that what it is now, sorry

Reat wrote:

Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]


[Origin]

Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.

Normal

1. Check Distance.
   00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time.
4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin
5. 01:30:346 - create a circle

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Normal

1. Check Distance.
   00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time. sure
4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin end of spinner would be too close to next beat
5. 01:30:346 - create a circle

[/notice]

Hard

1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap k
2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443) decided not to overlap this earlier when I made this
3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes changed shape

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272 ok



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?

SPOILER

01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

gideon5504 wrote:

Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play. Found another little adjustment here
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Origin

1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late


Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?

SPOILER

01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) - there is no whistle on slider body though
why not mapped till the end 0.0 I wonder why myself orz

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) - They are different parts of the same verse
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural That's a possibility, but I think I prefer a repeat
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) - ok

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg I could try it
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~ I could try this too
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~) not changing this one
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently trying 50%
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm? not adding
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle? not adding
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@ :|


sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)



[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here K
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 - Well, there's a bell that goes on, so I'm gonna have to change the hitsounds up a bit
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable 20%
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

1. 00:53:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - display them neatly...
   
   for example...

   

1. i feel that there was too much clockwise rotation.

1. 01:04:346 (5) - i feel strange.
   
   When i display it in this way, how about?

   

1. i feel that there are too many sliders of the straight line in x-axis, the y-axis.

1. 00:29:846 (1) - it was different form so far when i hitted it in this timing. it is hard to play it very much when it was changed suddenly

1. 01:45:846 (1) - do it parallel to x-axis

1. kiai Time:
   01:09:846~01:09:971
   01:13:846~01:13:971
   01:17:846~01:17:971
   01:21:846~01:21:971
   01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?

1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.
   
   SS

   

1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^

EnixYuki wrote:

hi , from my queue


[Origin]

1. kiai Time:
   01:09:846~01:09:971
   01:13:846~01:13:971
   01:17:846~01:17:971
   01:21:846~01:21:971
   01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?

もちろん

1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.ん
   
   SS

   

1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

ん

1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^

Awaken wrote:

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request



[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)? It was either this or having it at the same height as the previous slider, I guess the former might seem nicer when 7 and 8 appears
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle? made it more triangle-ish I guess, not even though
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not. yes, didn't intend it to be straight anyway
01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3 I get what you mean, but I want to distant them from each other for the new verse
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider. adjusted other positions too
02:22:846 (10) - NC ok

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern : ok

SPOILER

00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ? I know it's hidden underneath, but I think being stationary makes more sense in the music
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ? moved (3) a little
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time will consider
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ? simpler tune

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap I made it look nicer
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ? I think having it stationary fits the song too
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles I think it's still fine though
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this : moved it differently

SPOILER

Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?



Good Luck *u*

mtbbsben wrote:

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009. Would tweak some of the positions and shapes, that might make it seem that way, but other than that, I don't think there is any other reason why it would seem 2009ish
Still have a long way to rank.


[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

keeping current positions
01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - following the piano

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it changed to 2 circles

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

tetsutaro wrote:

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity. ok
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo. ok, changed rhythm
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect. I know what you mean, but I think this is more suited for the long run!
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596. ok I give in



Also because M4M so no tip jar.

tetsutaro wrote:

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Muzukashii slightly more than Ninja wa Saikou
I would have go for a very sparse kat solo before the piano comes. But you have your freedom to choose how your map goes as long as it fits the music.
00:41:596 (2) and 00:49:596 (2) - I see how the drums are dealt with 00:40:346 (1,1,2,1), but for this there is nothing here so remove. Mixing different tracks can throw some off.
01:29:846 (1,2,3) and 01:37:846 (1,2,3) - It is a heavy bell here, triple 16ths is unfitting and unnatural given the pace of the song. Single large don at 01:29:846/01:37:846 please.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Oni like Kaze ga Fuiteiru (not the abomination by A****)
Because the percussion depth is basically exhausted with a Muzukashii-level, it is *OK* to add your own percussion to it. Kinda like what Mori no Kuma-san had, you know? (notice the struggle at "OK")
00:43:846 (2,1,2,3,1,1) and similar - Not happy with even 16ths clusters in this contexts unless hanging. But hey(ry.

Also because M4M so no tip jar.

Awaken wrote:

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request

[Origin]
00:07:846 (4) - try ctrl+g OK
00:10:846 (2,3) - You must remember circles can't overlay sliders when you want a blanket I'll be thinking about what to do instead
00:18:846 (2,3) - seems not a good blanket Same as above
01:19:596 (3) - try ctrl+g OK
01:32:846 (5,6,7,8) - this can be fitter http://puu.sh/4q91M.jpg OK
01:35:846 (1) - try ctrl+g OK

Just that..the arrangement of this diff is a little boring..
As the most difficult diff,I think you can try to make more complex rhythm and more interesting arrangement
But it's still good

GL~

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

Origin]
More histounds ? I'll do something about the hitsounds
00:10:846 (2,3) - Blanket ? Or something else ? I'mm thinking about what to do instead during the weakend
00:40:096 (2,3) - Too short jump OK
01:22:846 (4) - Maybe move this slider in the center ? It matches the location of the last combo slider of the previous combos

Good Luck *u*

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009.
Still have a long way to rank.

[Origin]
Nothing to say.
Symmetry of the map is prefect, also weird. -_-;; I'll remap it...This was made when I was still a beginner at mapping.


Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

-APXH wrote:

Wow, I made this map dead, haven't I?

lZenxl wrote:

o/ Mod by Req

@neonat | You might want to include epilepsy warning in the description, the video flashes quite a bit

[Oni]

Please reset all combo before looking through this mod, this is because of wrong formatting when I copy over the code of the notes

00:16:846 (37,39) - Swap | I see no strong beat or significance that this kat should be on 1, I recommend you to put it on 2 to continue the kat rhythm on the white lines
00:27:596 (82,83) - Modify | The kat rhythm seems to cut off here, I recommend you to end it at a white line since there is no strong rhythm at the start of the music
00:28:096 (85,86,88,89,90,91,93,94) - Invert ( d>k , k>d ) | Map to the vocals, since your kats does not since to emphasize on anything in the music
01:30:096 (386,387) - k,k > d,d | Seems like there's too many kats cluttered together here, emphasis on this point is unneeded, I recommend this to reduce it
01:38:096 (426,427) - k,k > d,d | Same here
01:51:346 (483) - d > k | Too less kats here for this section, I recommend to add this kat to keep the flow going
02:19:096 + d | Add this don to make the transition from triplets to singles a little smoother

[Muzu]

01:08:346 (180,181) - Swap | The high-pitched vocal falls on 180

No other problems

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[0gre's Muzu]
00:48:846 - add d? it sounds really empty

[0gre's Oni]
nothing

well, it's been pretty extensively modded, I can't find much, it's quite good already
good luck for rank~

Tasha wrote:

[Ogre's Muzukashii]

01:09:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow, this is a huge highlight XD. Anyways, There's no breaks at all in here. While it isn't necessary, perhaps you can put some breaks in this section and leave the second kiai to be the no break one? You'd have more progressing difficulty that way to match the song a bit better imo. I suggest removing the following notes to do this. 01:10:096 (2) - 01:12:096 (3) - 01:14:096 (3) - 01:16:096 (3) - 01:18:096 (3) - 01:20:096 (3) - 01:22:096 (3) - 01:24:096 (3) -

[Ogre's Oni]

00:41:346 - Add a don here.

00:43:596 (134,135) - Consider changing this to be k d, especially if you add the don above.

00:44:346 (136) - Change to k if you apply the above mod, otherwise leave this be.

00:57:846 (185,186) - Change 185 to a don and remove 186. the kd dk here doesn't really match how you were mapping previous sections, but i feel d dk would.

Jerry wrote:

This song gives me nightmares


Here's the mod that you requested for~ :3

• [0gre's Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:596 (1) - delete this so it's same with what you did at 00:59:846 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) ?
   
   
2. 01:57:846 (1) - Delete this and then add a don at 01:57:846 ? Total silence fits this part much better than having a spinner's "donkatdonkatdonkat" sound going over this part
   
   
3. 02:18:721 (1) - I don't see this pattern anywhere else in the map, so I suggest deleting it.

• [0gre's Oni]

1. 00:20:346 (50,51) - change to d k to match the vocals
   
   
2. 00:56:096 (179) - Remove this? A little break here would allow 00:55:846 (178) to stand out and have more "impact" since a very heavy drumbeat can be heard there in the music
   
   
3. 01:04:096 - ^ same for this as well, remove?
   
4. 01:08:096 - ^ same, remove? And also, add a finish at 01:07:846 since the beat here in the music sound much more heavier
   
   
5. 02:23:596 - this part has a very low and heavy beat, change to don and also add a finish?

That's all from me!
Good luck~

Puzzle fox wrote:

Really creepy map. I only play CTB and hard difficulty didn't seem really hard to me. I'll try it on other diffs later too. Nice one anyway. Hope this song gets ranked someday

Mystima wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

Normal: All good

Hard: 01:08:346 (2,3) - add a finish on the first hit of slider:(2) and on the first and last hit of slider:(3)
It sounds better, more impact (Imo) no change in Hard

Insane: 00:45:096 (4) - change the whistle from the last hit in the slider to the middle hit
sounds better (Imo) removed it completely
00:52:346 (4) - add a whistle here not adding because I think the clap is good enough
00:57:096 (5) - remove whistle here and 01:05:096 (8) - here and 01:39:596 (7) - here only removed the last suggestion

mingmichael wrote:

mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ change your diff's name from 0gre's Muzu to be 0gre's Muzukashii. the diff name should be complete
@ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/79116 has Muzu and I have ranked with Muzu as well.

Notes Structure

☞ i saw that you mostly followed the vocal sounds. i have some suggestions about vocal sounds there and you can see at the Notes box

☞ some confused pattern which are found. you can see the Notes box to see the suggestions ok!

☞ well basicly all patterns here are nice~ okay

Notes

• change 00:20:346 - ; 00:20:846 - ; 00:21:346 - to be o o o. i changed them to follow the vocal sounds there. 00:20:346 - have a same pitch sound (vocal) like 00:19:846 - and you used kat at 00:19:846 - . so, to keep the consistency of the same vocal sounds, i change 00:20:346 - to be kat. and at 00:20:846 - , the sound becomes quite deeper there and becomes high again at 00:21:346 - understood

• change 00:24:096 - to be don. this note is still don like 00:23:846 - bcause there's not any sounds too there, so just follow the previous note with a same note means k 　k k k k d (k) smt like this ? quite not sure

• change 00:32:096 - to be don too. the reason is same like above ^

• move 00:40:596 - to 00:40:846 - . well i know why you put it at 00:40:596 - because you wanted follow the drum hit at there right? well it's nice but please consider again. you used "x x x x x x" suddenly at that part, and you can see at the next notes too. basicly you used a single note, or 3notes or 5notes there. of course when you gave a 2notes and 4notes like that, the players will be quite confused about it.
@ 00:37:846 at this point i added a change compare to beginnin part so i increased a note by includin drums and 00:42:346 this long thingy is just because i thought there is no place i can cut.
I just didnt like to use d d k k d , k k d , d d k , all the time, wanted clear the difference.
Btw I have arranged it to support those points

• change 00:41:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sound which is still high like 00:41:346 - ok!

• move 00:48:596 - to 00:48:846 -

• change 00:49:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ ye!

• move 01:32:096 - to 01:30:846 -

• change 01:59:596 - to be kat too. the reason is same like above too ^ and then kat at 01:59:596 - is to emphasize the big don at 01:59:846 - which is for the new part of the song with a long time of my funny experience, I found that d d k d D is also work as d d k k D which is a bit outmoded

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[ Oni]

General

☞ well~ hehe

Notes Structure

☞ kay~! lolol

Notes

• change 00:19:596 - to be kat, to keep the vocal sounds like 00:19:346 - before it changes to another pitch sound a t00:19:846 -

• change 00:42:596 - and 00:42:846 - to be o o, to follow the vocal sounds again and also make a better pattern too with o o o o o o o

• change 01:09:096 - to be don. basicly the reason is same like above too btw ^

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okay that's all from me
btw for the first time i thought that this map couldn't have Oni diff because the song is low and calm. but okay, in my opinion it's alright with oni on this map
Any song could have ONI diff :3
kay goodluck then o/

Teara wrote:

Was almost done with the mod when the power failed, and I lost it.

It consisted mostly of hit-sounds suggestions for the start of the collab (which IMO is very lacking) so I suggest you guys revisit it and make some improvements to it, so that it can match the hit-sound usage at the end of the collab =p

Also had some patterns suggestions on normal and hard, grab me ingame when you get time and we can do those in a IRC mod.

1. I like this song \:D/
2. Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii".
3. I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part".
4. whole diffs looks cool √

1. 00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here
2. 00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
3. 01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 -
4. 01:43:346 (369) - k here?
5. 01:51:346 (401) - ^
6. 01:58:346 (427) - ^
7. 02:02:346 (445) - ^
8. 02:06:346 (466) - ^

1. 00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better.
2. 00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 -
3. 01:06:346 (164) - k here?
4. 01:09:346 (171) - ^
5. 01:41:346 (266) - ^
6. 01:56:346 (304) - ^

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

Hi~ taiko mods from my modding queue.

[General]

1. I like this song \:D/
2. Please change your diff name "Ogre's Muzu" to "Ogre's Muzukashii". oh not again!! alright then !! LOL!!!
3. I recommend you use 80% or 85% volume in your "soft part". ✔
4. whole diffs looks cool √ ty ( :; ´^;ิ益;^ิ;.)

Let's take some minor changes.Then it's ready for Taiko-BATs' checking.

[Ogre's Oni]

1. 00:11:596 (18,19) - use d k here? this is a suggestion.You have no must here cuz u know this bit is like sounding goin low
2. 00:36:721 - how about add a d here ?
3. 01:30:221 - add a d here maybe better.because you used ddddd for long-voice before./or use dd dd from 01:29:846 - i know but i don like to see kkk combo just right next to d-combos
4. 01:43:346 (369) - k here? kk
5. 01:51:346 (401) - ^
6. 01:58:346 (427) - ^
7. 02:02:346 (445) - ^
8. 02:06:346 (466) - ^

[Ogre's Muzu]

1. 00:37:346 (84) - k here can be better. k
2. 00:54:346 - how about delete this one here? and the same as 00:58:346 - oh yeah
3. 01:06:346 (164) - k here? all fixed to follow the above thing
4. 01:09:346 (171) - ^
5. 01:41:346 (266) - ^
6. 01:56:346 (304) - ^

All above are my suggestions. It's up to you:3
Good luck for ranking~~