[General]
In normal, you have artist unicode 日笠 陽孁E which is ......... you know
I'm not sure if you have special meaning. But I think using consistent combo colors would be better.
[E]
00:05:807 (1,2,3,1) - I'm sorry but can you eliminate the sliderslide sound? Really sounds ridiculous for me. And also some of the following sliders have loud sliderslide sound which I think is not suitable for this song at all.
00:30:512 (4) - try something like http://puu.sh/2V0fb.jpg
00:37:571 (1) - Try something like http://puu.sh/2V0gQ.jpg btw 00:34:042 (3) is a good shape but looks strange when following with 00:32:277 (2)
00:50:983 (3) - Try something like http://puu.sh/2V0td.jpg
The hitsound btw, is really too loud and noisy for this song.
I suggest you remap the hitsound. Using the soft one.
[N]
01:06:336 (5) - rotate about 14 degree clockwise
[H]
There are too many things that I think you need to change....
00:10:748 (2) - try x=264 y=144 or x=328 y=324
00:11:454 (3) - ugly shape, if you can not make a beautiful shape. why not use a spinner
00:14:630 (2) - try x=172 y=320
00:16:042 (4,5,6) - enlarge spacing
00:17:101 (1,2,3) - ugly when these three combined together
00:28:571 (8) - why not http://puu.sh/2V1NS.jpg
00:34:042 (1,2,3) - same with before.
Not going to point out more. I think when you map you should consider the map as a whole(including the directions, the shapes, more importantly, the flow). Not putting sliders and circles together and make it a map.
t/86329 < I think this is a good tutorial for you to read.
I rearrange a little bit for you here. It is just an example and I didn't take the arrangement very seriously. But I think its flow is better than yours.
[I]
00:50:895 (x) - hmm I dk but maybe add a note?
01:03:512 (2,3) - I think these two exchange their positions would be better
In normal, you have artist unicode 日笠 陽孁E which is ......... you know
I'm not sure if you have special meaning. But I think using consistent combo colors would be better.
[E]
00:05:807 (1,2,3,1) - I'm sorry but can you eliminate the sliderslide sound? Really sounds ridiculous for me. And also some of the following sliders have loud sliderslide sound which I think is not suitable for this song at all.
00:30:512 (4) - try something like http://puu.sh/2V0fb.jpg
00:37:571 (1) - Try something like http://puu.sh/2V0gQ.jpg btw 00:34:042 (3) is a good shape but looks strange when following with 00:32:277 (2)
00:50:983 (3) - Try something like http://puu.sh/2V0td.jpg
The hitsound btw, is really too loud and noisy for this song.
I suggest you remap the hitsound. Using the soft one.
[N]
01:06:336 (5) - rotate about 14 degree clockwise
[H]
There are too many things that I think you need to change....
00:10:748 (2) - try x=264 y=144 or x=328 y=324
00:11:454 (3) - ugly shape, if you can not make a beautiful shape. why not use a spinner
00:14:630 (2) - try x=172 y=320
00:16:042 (4,5,6) - enlarge spacing
00:17:101 (1,2,3) - ugly when these three combined together
00:28:571 (8) - why not http://puu.sh/2V1NS.jpg
00:34:042 (1,2,3) - same with before.
Not going to point out more. I think when you map you should consider the map as a whole(including the directions, the shapes, more importantly, the flow). Not putting sliders and circles together and make it a map.
t/86329 < I think this is a good tutorial for you to read.
I rearrange a little bit for you here. It is just an example and I didn't take the arrangement very seriously. But I think its flow is better than yours.
[I]
00:50:895 (x) - hmm I dk but maybe add a note?
01:03:512 (2,3) - I think these two exchange their positions would be better