Tsusuko wrote:

[Millhiore's Easy]

1. Seems fine to me. I like the shapes. Thanks

[Millhiore's Hard]

1. 01:12:336 - 01:12:865 (7,8,9) I liked the whole spacing thing you had going on for a minute there, but suddenly 01:12:865 (9) is a lot farther away from the other circles? I don't really understand it and would suggest placing that note closer to the others. It follows the same spacing increase, but... yeah, you're right, it's a bit silly. I'll tone it down.
   Gonna take a minute to praise sliders, btw <3 <3

xChippy wrote:

Hi from my queue :3

Normal
00:00:865 (2) - end to x:168 y:112
00:02:277 (4) - end to x:344 y:272 looks better imo :3
^Completely redid that part so everything should be symmetrical now, thanks!

ChivaCookie wrote:

Yeah... I said tomorrow. But here's the rest of my mod :3

Normal

1. 00:00:160 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is a bit wrong. For Normal and easy diff's a consistent spacing is important. - It's consistent 1.6x (which I fixed like, just a while ago. Maybe the version you had was outdated?)
2. 00:09:689 (4) - nazi, but change one grip to the left. It looks better and the effect is more fashionable. - Sure
3. 00:52:748 - I would ad a quiet note here. It sounds better. - Hmm, I like the pause I have atm, so no change.
4. Actually you should look at the spacing of this diff. It changes a lot. That's not good for a Normal diff. - I'm fairly sure the spacing only changes between parts of the song (the slow part, thebuildup and the chorus), which I think is fine.

Insane

1. 00:10:395 - That tick sounds awkward. Think about making it quieter with inheriting section. - Huh, good point. Done.
2. 00:24:159 (1,2,1,2) - Think about using simple circles instead. The notes are not bound. And the seperate piano-notes give the song the lost feeling it has. imo - Hmm, I'll think about it, but no changes for now.
3. 00:26:277 (2,3) - make the blanket better. doesn't look to good. - Looks good enough to me though Maybe?
4. 00:29:630 - There are more than 1 note here. Consider changing it to this: - It's so fast it doesn't really feel right to map it either way, so keeping as it is.
5. 00:35:983 (1,2,3) - Consider making those louder. The snair is very important here. And also very magnificant. Turn up the volume. At least on the accents. - Hmm, I'll turn it up a bit, but too much and the finishes drowns the music imo.
6. 01:26:056 - maybe you should change the spinner and add something here. Would sound good i think. - Hmm, I kind of like this long spinnder Millhi did the other approach in his diffs, but I think I'll stay with this here~

Good luck with your map ^__^ Hard one is okay imo, except hitsounds.

xChippy wrote:

Millhiore's Easy
00:22:748 (3) - move to x:172 y:127 after this move 00:24:159 (4) - to x:269 y:72 Not exactly what you said, but I tweaked the section a bit, thanks!
Rest seems fine to me :3 yay~
Millhiore's Hard
All seems fine to me :3 Good to hear!

• I like the whole mapset. I couldn't really find anything but hitsound related things.

1. Some of your whistles in this map sound kinda random, mostly in the chorus. Like for example: 01:06:159 (2) or 01:17:453 (3). I don't think they fit there... Dunno, I suck at hitsounding /orz\
2. 00:23:807 - Add a circle?
3. 01:00:865 (2) - Clap at end of slider?
4. 01:02:983 (2) - Why soft sampleset on this? I think you wanted to make normal, because of the snare... (just like you did at your hard Diff)
5. 01:07:924 (1) - Remove Finish? or add at the end? would fit better imo
6. 01:10:748 (1) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider?
7. 01:11:806 (2) - Add clap at end of slider
8. 01:15:689 (1) - Add clap at end of slider
9. 01:16:395 (2) - NC should be here imo
10. 01:17:806 (4) - Add Finish?
11. 01:19:218 (1) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider?
12. 01:21:336 (4) - Add Clap
13. 01:22:042 (1) - Normal Sampleset at end of slider?
14. 01:23:453 (3) - ^
15. 01:24:512 (1) - Whistle at end of slider?
    Sorry, mostly hitsound suggestions, map looks good to me

1. 00:03:512 (2) - Whistle?
2. 00:09:689 (4) - Whistle?
3. 00:10:042 (1) - Put the volume up for the reversed arrow and reduce to 5% at end of the slider
4. 01:16:395 (3) - Normal Sampleset at end of slider
   All I could find... D:

1. 00:22:748 (9) - NC?
2. 00:30:512 (4) or 00:31:218 (6) - NC?
3. 00:42:865 (1) - Clap at end of slider
4. 00:52:395 (3) - How about a whistle on this slider, cause Piano?
5. 00:53:807 (1) - Clap at end of slider
6. 00:54:865 (2) - ^
7. 01:00:512 (7) - NC?
8. 01:01:571 (1) - Clap at end of slider
9. 01:03:689 (6) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider
10. 01:04:042 (7) - Clap at end of slider
11. 01:04:748 (9) - Change to Auto imo
12. 01:05:101 (1) - Clap at very end of slider
13. 01:07:218 (1) - Clap on reverse arrow and normal sampleset at end
14. 01:09:159 (6) - Clap at end
15. 01:10:042 (1) - Clap at the white tick of this slider (http://puu.sh/34nTT.jpg)
16. 01:11:806 (6) - NC?
17. 01:11:806 (6) - Clap at reverse arrow
18. 01:17:453 (7) - Clap at end of slider
19. 01:17:983 (8) - ^
20. 01:19:571 (2) - ^
21. 01:21:336 (8) - ^
22. 01:22:042 (1) - ^
23. 01:22:571 (2) - ^
24. 01:23:453 (4) - ^
    Good map, aside from some hitsound inconsistency

1. 00:47:277 (6) - NC?
2. 00:52:395 (4) - Add whistle cause Piano?
3. 01:01:218 (4) - Add Clap
4. 01:15:512 - How about a triplet here?
   Really nice diff!

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue

• [Easy]
  Awsome.
  
  [Normal]

1. 00:14:630 (2,3) - might be a little too hard :/ - Removed 2
2. 00:15:865 (1) - that too - Should be easier to hit since it'll be 1/2 from last note.
3. 00:19:571 (2,3) - same as first - Removed 2
4. 00:26:807 (3) - try extending the slider there instead - Following vocals feels better here imo.
5. 00:34:042 (1,2) - again - Removed 2
6. 01:00:865 (3,4) - hmm this I'm thinking about this my be a little to fast for normal players - Chorus is more intense, keeping
7. 00:59:454 - wow that speed is a little to fast for normal crank it down a notch - Idk, I don't think 170bpm 1.5x SV is that fast for normal tbh.

Alumetorz wrote:

Hey there!
From my queue~

[General]

• I like the whole mapset. I couldn't really find anything but hitsound related things.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:512 (2) - Whistle? - Swapped whistle from (1) end to (2).
2. 00:09:689 (4) - Whistle? - Whistle now on (3) head and (4)
3. 00:10:042 (1) - Put the volume up for the reversed arrow and reduce to 5% at end of the slider - Did some stuff
4. 01:16:395 (3) - Normal Sampleset at end of slider - There is one there already?
   All I could find... D:

[Insane]

1. 00:47:277 (6) - NC? - Done, as well as some other NC fixes for consistency.
2. 00:52:395 (4) - Add whistle cause Piano? - Kinda doesn't fit when there's a whistle on (3,5)
3. 01:01:218 (4) - Add Clap - Whoops done.
4. 01:15:512 - How about a triplet here? - Whyyy not, added
   Really nice diff!

Well that's it
Good luck!

biwako wrote:

[Normal]
Title name has bug https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/792367 - Oops, fixed.

[Insane]
00:23:277 - add whistle here or remove whistle by 00:26:807 - - Swapped whistle on end to head instead. Worked better.
00:35:983 (1,2,3) - bit wierd this spacing,stack 1,2 or other? Mm, I think this is probably fine, so no changes for now

solid map,nothing say at almost

Alumetorz wrote:

[Millhiore's Easy]

1. Some of your whistles in this map sound kinda random, mostly in the chorus. Like for example: 01:06:159 (2) or 01:17:453 (3). I don't think they fit there... Dunno, I suck at hitsounding /orz\ % uhhhhhh I think my hitsounds got mangled somehow?! I probably told CXu to jut use grumd's tool on it, redid almost all the hitsounds now...
2. 00:23:807 - Add a circle? Nah, doesn't match the difficulty level
3. 01:00:865 (2) - Clap at end of slider? %
4. 01:02:983 (2) - Why soft sampleset on this? I think you wanted to make normal, because of the snare... (just like you did at your hard Diff) %
5. 01:07:924 (1) - Remove Finish? or add at the end? would fit better imo %
6. 01:10:748 (1) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider? %
7. 01:11:806 (2) - Add clap at end of slider %
8. 01:15:689 (1) - Add clap at end of slider %
9. 01:16:395 (2) - NC should be here imo I totally agree! Done.
10. 01:17:806 (4) - Add Finish? %
11. 01:19:218 (1) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider? %
12. 01:21:336 (4) - Add Clap %
13. 01:22:042 (1) - Normal Sampleset at end of slider? %
14. 01:23:453 (3) - ^ %
15. 01:24:512 (1) - Whistle at end of slider? %
    Sorry, mostly hitsound suggestions, map looks good to me

[Millhiore's Hard]

1. 00:22:748 (9) - NC? Sure
2. 00:30:512 (4) or 00:31:218 (6) - NC? Not totally sure about this, I'll add it for now and see if people like it
3. 00:42:865 (1) - Clap at end of slider Done
4. 00:52:395 (3) - How about a whistle on this slider, cause Piano? Hey that's kinda cool
5. 00:53:807 (1) - Clap at end of slider Done
6. 00:54:865 (2) - ^ ^
7. 01:00:512 (7) - NC? Added it on 00:59:454 (1) instead
8. 01:01:571 (1) - Clap at end of slider Done
9. 01:03:689 (6) - Normal Sampleset for end of slider Okay, cool
10. 01:04:042 (7) - Clap at end of slider Done
11. 01:04:748 (9) - Change to Auto imo I have no idea what happened there, haha
12. 01:05:101 (1) - Clap at very end of slider Don't agree
13. 01:07:218 (1) - Clap on reverse arrow and normal sampleset at end Okey dokey
14. 01:09:159 (6) - Clap at end Yup
15. 01:10:042 (1) - Clap at the white tick of this slider (http://puu.sh/34nTT.jpg) You can barely hear it but okay??
16. 01:11:806 (6) - NC? Nah
17. 01:11:806 (6) - Clap at reverse arrow Yah
18. 01:17:453 (7) - Clap at end of slider
19. 01:17:983 (8) - ^
20. 01:19:571 (2) - ^
21. 01:21:336 (8) - ^
22. 01:22:042 (1) - ^
23. 01:22:571 (2) - ^
24. 01:23:453 (4) - ^ ^^^^^^^
    Good map, aside from some hitsound inconsistency Thanks! I'm admittedly not the greatest hitsounder, haha.

biwako wrote:

from my queue

[Easy]
<Everything here was hitsound mods, I completely redid the hitsounds on Easy since this post... sorry!>

[Hard]
00:35:983 - 00:36:512 - add finish and reduce volume? Tried something like that
00:54:512 - add clap Yup
00:55:924 - ^ ^
00:56:630 (1) - ^ Sure
01:03:865 - clap or normal sampleset Normal sampleset

solid map,nothing say at almost Thanks!

Kitagami wrote:

Millhiore's Easy

1. 01:00:865 (2,2) - Maybe place them in a way they are not touching? Tried something here
2. 01:16:395 (1,1) - They aren't symmetrical. Fixed

Millhiore's Hard

From what I see, in the beginning, you're using the hitsounds to follow the voice, right? Yeah

1. 00:22:042 - Maybe Whistle? Sure
2. 00:29:101 (1) - Maybe whistle here instead of on 00:29:807 (3) - ? It sounds better, imo Added to 1, kept on 3
3. 00:32:277 - Maybe Whistle here? Feels empty Can do
4. 01:17:453 (7,8) - These notes seems too close for the time hap they have between them, even if it's a symmetry pattern. This breaks the flow, imo. Maybe place them in a way that it will still have simmetry but the spacing between them is still 0.9x? I broke spacing a tiny bit to make it look a lot better and more symmetrical (and added a small jump in the process)

It's a short mod since I didn't find much things to talk about. Great mapset!!

I hope it gets ranked soon, so here's a for you~!

Good luck!

Kitagami wrote:

Hi! Thank you for requesting on ShiroiYume and Kitagami's Modding Queue! - Hi~

Alright, let's start. Just a few suggestions because the map already looks good.

Normal

1. 01:01:042 (4) - Since this is a Normal diff, how about deleting this note? This may be a bit fast/hard for this diff, imo. - Most people seem to complain about this, so changed.
2. 01:04:395 (2,1,2,3) - This part would be a bit difficult for newbie players to play,imo. There are many 1/2 notes together. How about doing something like this? - Sure why not.
   
   Example

   
   
   You can even make a blanket with 01:04:395 (2,3) if you want.
   
   

Insane

1. 00:56:630 (1) - How about changing the color of this combo to a dark/gray one? It would make more sense, imo, since the drums start from 00:57:865 (1) - Take a look at the video; the colors change at this point
2. 01:14:806 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - There's something weird about the flow on this part, imo. It's difficult to get an accurate hit on 01:15:512 (1,2,3) and I think it's because 01:15:336 (2,1) are too close. This is just a suggestion, but I increased the spacing between them to 1.1x and moved it to an upper side, rotating 01:15:689 (3) in a way that the spacing between it and the next note would be 1.6x (A mini jump for this part felt better than leaving it with 1.0x or 1.1x). This might have been confusing, so here's an image
   
   Example

   
   

   168,232,75512,5,10,0:0:0:0:
   160,192,75601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   152,152,75689,2,0,P|170:97|218:76,1,100,0|8,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

   
   ^This part is supposed to have a decreasing spacing similar to 01:03:865 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - . I added the note at 01:15:601 (2) - at someone's suggestion, but I dont wanna change this part for now. I'll check for more input on it, and maybe remove the (2) again

It's a short mod since I didn't find much things to talk about. Great mapset!!

I hope it gets ranked soon, so here's a for you~!

Good luck!

1. 00:26:807 (3) - Fix angle to better cushion 00:26:277 (2)
2. 00:34:218 (6,7) - This combo color and this background make this pretty hard to read, I wouldn't stack. I simply wouldn't use that combo color at all. It is very hard to read.
3. 00:37:748 - There should be something here imo.
4. 00:43:748 (4,5) - Same as point #2
5. 01:04:042 (2,2,2,2) - Make the distance consistant, if you look at the top right corner yellow numbers tell you the exact distance between each notes, use that to make this section consistant. The last slider is too close.
6. 01:20:983 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same applies to this.

Azer wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:26:807 (3) - Fix angle to better cushion 00:26:277 (2) - I just moved (3) out a bit.
2. 00:34:218 (6,7) - This combo color and this background make this pretty hard to read, I wouldn't stack. I simply wouldn't use that combo color at all. It is very hard to read. - Eh, I think it fits fairly well with the video tbh, and the first part of every difficulty is fairly easy, so I don't think the combo colors would be a big issue.
3. 00:37:748 - There should be something here imo. - I kinda get what you mean, but i'm following vocals here, and it does fit fine imo.
4. 00:43:748 (4,5) - Same as point #2 - Same as before.
5. 01:04:042 (2,2,2,2) - Make the distance consistant, if you look at the top right corner yellow numbers tell you the exact distance between each notes, use that to make this section consistant. The last slider is too close. - That's impossible considering the pattern I'm using here with decreasing spacing.
6. 01:20:983 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same applies to this. - Intentional increase in spacing.

Gaahhh I never watched shingeki but just hearing this badass song makes me want start watching it - It's a pretty good show!

CXu wrote:

- Eh, I think it fits fairly well with the video tbh, and the first part of every difficulty is fairly easy, so I don't think the combo colors would be a big issue.

Azer wrote:

Lots of people don't play with video, lot's of people play with a dimmed background. I seriously recommend changing the color, it makes the sections really hard to read when you don't need to.

Smoothie wrote:

[Millhiore's Hard]
00:08:630 (1) - How about adding a whistle on the slider start and end? It sounds pretty nice imo. Okey
00:23:277 (2) - Add a whistle? ^
00:11:454 (3) - How about this shape? Nah, I used that in the Easy diff. What's wrong with wiggles anyway ;_;
00:38:983 (7) - I think you are missing a whistle on the slider end. Right you are
01:04:748 (9) - Add a NC and remove the NC here: 01:05:101 (1) Good catch!
01:09:159 (6) - Sampleset: Normal on the slider start~ It sounds nice. Oh fine.
01:09:689 (7) - ^ ^

[Millhiore's Easy]
00:24:159 (4) - I don't know about these kind of slider shapes. They are looking a bit odd to me. :c The slider turns around on every 1/4 beat. It's cool!
00:26:983 (2) - How about adding a whistle here for consistency? Okey
00:31:218 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider end? ^
00:32:277 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider start if you added the one i've mentioned above~ ^
00:34:042 (3) - Remove the whistle on the slider start and add a finish on the slider end? ^
01:02:983 (2) - How about this? The slider looks less crumbled this way~ Did something pretty close to that
01:13:218 (1) - That one looks really nice~ Thank you

Frostmourne wrote:

Yo CXu \o/ , from my Modding Queue

General
Pretty nice mapset, just only Combo color 1 that still worrying me as it's quite black. It might distract players during playing with dim mode, maybe make it brighter? - Made it brighter~

Normal
AR5 is too fast imo, AR4 fits better because around 50% is on 85 bpm section which makes the AR a bit overdone - Hmm yeah I guess.
00:19:218 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel this a bit confusing as you are following mainly the vocal but 00:19:571 (2,3) - doesn't follow well much which makes distance between 00:19:924 (3,4) - a bit unintuitive. I suggest you use something like this screenshot to follow it more precisely. - Good point actually. I'll just lazily copy your code
Though you need to add hitsound for your own preference.

SPOILER

208,256,19218,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,19571,2,0,L|376:256,2,37.5
288,168,20277,2,0,L|236:168,1,37.5
124,280,20983,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:28:042 (6) - It suddenly changes to follow piano but around 00:26:277 (2,3,4,5) - are following mainly vocal so I guess these 2 1/4 sliders can help read better - Again, good point xD Fixed~

SPOILER

Nice Normal, I like it

Insane
Nice

I will tell you again about an offset after I can find the most precise one, starred , I will call you back for a recheck

Frostmourne wrote:

Millhiore's Easy
Easy is made by god easy mode. ok.. \:D/

Millhiore's Hard
I find AR7 fitting better with this diff, you have tons of spacing like 00:24:336 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - which look so close to each other and this AR doesn't match it much. All right
00:48:865 (2) - I suggest you do something like this screenshot since I played and found it a bit empty, I want to hit on vocal as in 00:42:865 (1,2) - and 00:45:689 (5,6) - are following. I don't really like that part too much to be honest... fixed kinda like what you did

fixed

00:50:277 (4) - after fixing above, I think you should follow this below screenshot to avoid confusion on what you are following like this Changed this too, but in a slightly different way!

fixed

00:07:394 (4) - unsnapped orz, 1ms unsnap... fixed
01:23:982 (5) - unsnapped ^

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Millhiore's Hard]

1. 01:00:683 (7) - Remove circle or 01:00:507 (6,8) - change a 1/1 slider sound better IMO,follow with vocal. I don't agree - listen at 25% speed, (6) falls on "za" and (7) falls on "n".