1. Song folder - MAXSTEP - PYL Younique Album Vol1.mp3 - bitrate 130kbps. This is rare lol yea. it is rankable :3 ( Rule: no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps ) so do not need to change. just said
2. KIAI TIME setting - 02:31:238~02:38:095 - I think that this kiai time do not match a little. because 02:31:238~ 02:38:095~ Rhythm is almost same. and It is lacking in emphasis.so I thought that do not need to put ikiai time here.
3. KIAI TIME - Inconsistency in Kiai Times from AIBat; only Hard diff is different. You should unify it all, if all these are your diff. and It matches in all diff.
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:381, ends on 01:01:238 ⇒ Starts on 00:48:381, ends on 01:00:381
4. Song folder - normal-sliderslide.wav - This is a slider of silence. Do you want to use this? Currently, this has not been used for the map.
   If you want to use this, It is necessary to change the hitsound sampleset from N to N:C1. http://puu.sh/2uG1A
   or If you do not use this, Please remove it because it becomes unnecessary files.

1. Difficulty settings is too low for Normal. This is almost setting of Easy. so i recommend HD+2, OD+ 1, AR+1~2
   
   General setting for Normal from wiki

   ・HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
   ・Circle Size: 3 or 4
   ・Approach Rate: 5 or below
   ・Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
   General setting for Easy from wiki

   ・HP Drain: 4 or less
   ・Circle Size: 3 or 4
   ・Approach Rate: 4 or less
   ・Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
   and please refer to other map.
   Setting that I often use;
   if not have Easy diff. HD3 OD3 AR4~5 ( AR is determined by BPM and setting the slider velocity )
   if have Easy. HD 3~4 OD 3~4 AR 4~5
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add clap
3. 00:29:523 (3) - add clap instead to whistle to end of the slider. It will match than the whistle
4. 00:34:666 - Green lines with no meaning. so it is better to remove it. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. with ↓
   ・01:32:952
5. 00:40:666 (4) - Suggestion of the design; Ctrl+H form. http://puu.sh/2uGO8 ( 00:38:095 (1,2,3,4) - make each different flow )
6. 00:44:952 (1,2,1) - Why DS here is different from the others? Reason to change was not found to me
   and 00:46:666 (1) - Slightly strange form. and I feel whistle of the slider is a little noisy. >.< and add finish instead to whistle to end of the slider is better. and remove NC here & 00:48:809 (2) - add NC is better. http://puu.sh/2uHfD my suggest code is here ↓
   
   SPOILER

   428,272,44952,6,0,L|484:328,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,272,45809,2,0,L|240:328,2,65,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,164,46666,2,0,B|324:16|324:16|256:96|256:96|188:16|188:16|144:168,1,520,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   200,284,48809,5,0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:08:952 (1,3,5) - add finish to start of the slider.
8. 01:27:809 (1) - add finish instead to whistle
9. 01:29:523~01:32:952 - insert Break Time for between long.
10. 02:00:380 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and 02:00:380 (1,2) - unsnapped slider end. They are not placed on the line. 02:00:380 (1) - end 02:00:595. and 02:00:809 (2) - end 02:01:023.
11. 02:09:809 (5) - add clap
12. 02:14:095 (1) - I cannot recommend that you use the plural repeat for the minimum degree of difficulty. and I think that simple rhythm is enough. because you end kiai time from here. for ex: http://puu.sh/2uI4Q
13. 02:17:523 (1,2) - ^ for ex; http://puu.sh/2uIdp
14. 02:19:238 (3) - add NC ( same pattern as 02:15:809 (1) -
15. 02:20:095 (5,1) - DS is too far. ( 2.00x ) sudden DS change leads to confusion in constant rhythm for Normal diff.
16. 02:20:952 (1,2) - same as 02:17:523 (1,2)
17. 02:22:666 (3) - add NC ( same pattern as 02:15:809 (1) -
18. 02:24:380 (1,2) - same as 02:17:523 (1,2)
19. 03:03:595 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat and end ). They are not placed on the line. so repeat 03:03:702. end 03:03:809.
20. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
21. 03:12:380 (1) - add clap to end of the slider.
22. 03:14:952 (5) - add clap to start of the slider
23. 03:20:095 (3) - add clap to start of the slider and remove clap to end of the slider
24. 03:22:666 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
25. 03:26:952 (2) - remove clap to end of the slider
26. 03:28:666 (4) - ^
27. 03:31:666 (4) - add clap to end of the slider
28. 03:32:952 (1) - add finish
    
    about rhythm: There is almost no problem. but 03:08:952~03:22:666 - I feel the rhythm of this time is difficult as compared with other parts.
    for ex: 03:13:880 (2,3,4,5,6) - long 1/2 rhythm. It is not a problem, but you tried this for the first time.
    03:17:523 (3,4,5) - triple circles ( 1/2 rhythm ). ^
    If you want to use these, I recommend that you do not use it only in the latter half and think about balance and use it .

1. Difficulty settings is too low for Hard. i recommend HD +1, and CS +1. Rhythm is almost simple. so I think CS3 is too easy.
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add finish
3. 00:14:095 (1) - Slider too long. This is a bit boring for the hard diff I suggest that you increase the rhythm as before.
4. 00:29:523 (1) - add clap to end of the slider
5. 00:30:809 (1) - slider start 00:31:238. and 00:30:809 - add note here. it is fit a vocal most~
6. 00:48:381 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
7. 00:58:452 (4,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2uKrj i thought note only one does not have much sense.
8. 01:02:095 (1) - add finish. (same as Normal diff.) and with 01:03:595 (4,1) - add finish to end of the slider
9. 01:08:523 (7) - add clap
10. 01:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and with 01:10:666 (4) -
11. 01:09:809 (2) - add clap
12. 01:09:809 (2,3) - DS is too close. Reason to do it was not found to me. because It only uses just here.
13. 01:12:166 (6) - add NC and 01:12:381 (1) - remove NC.
14. 01:32:952 (1) - only attention. maybe this is no problem. but Please remember the rules ↓
    
    Rule

    Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
15. 01:41:095 (4) - I suggest that you put it by a flow same as these. these too overlap so it is hard to see a little.
16. 01:41:309 (x) - you should add note here for the vocal. 01:39:809 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - You match these with vocal. so I feel very strange rhythm that does not have a vocal here.
17. 01:45:381 (2) - add repeat. for the constant rhythm.
18. 02:00:381 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
19. 02:20:202 (4) - It does not match rhythm. change to 02:20:309.
20. 02:20:523 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/2uNwZ I think this is enough
21. 02:21:809 (2) - add clap
22. 02:23:523 (5) - ^
23. 02:23:738 (x) - 02:23:952 (x) - add note. It matches vocal very much. and There is much simple rhythm for Hard diff.
24. 02:24:381 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: spinner start 02:24:488. and add note to 02:24:381. for the finish sound here.
25. 02:28:238 (1) - This spinner does not match rhythm. The beginning of spinner should make 02:27:809. so 02:24:381 (1) - end change to 02:27:381. and 02:27:809 (1) - start change to 02:27:809 is better.
26. 02:43:238 (1) - add finish
27. 03:00:381 (1) - Ctrl+H form is better imo. http://puu.sh/2uNPx
28. 03:02:095 (4) - add NC. ( same as 03:00:381 (1) -
29. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. for kiai start
30. 03:16:666 (2) - add clap
31. 03:18:381 (5) - ^
32. 03:20:952 (4) - add NC?
33. 03:22:666 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
34. 03:23:523 (3) - Slider too long. This is a bit boring for the hard diff
35. 03:29:523 (1) - ^
36. 03:33:166 (1) - add finish
    
    about rhythm: I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard diff. I think you can increase the 1/2 rhythm more.
    i think it is better to increase the rhythm for ex↓
    ・00:23:738 - for the vocal
    ・00:24:166 - ^
    ・00:27:166 - ^
    ・00:27:595 - ^
    ・00:29:309 - 00:27:809 (1,2,3) - for emphasize these vocal
    ・00:48:381~01:00:381 1st kiai time. I thought it was too simple rhythm as compared to the other. This is the kiai time, so I think that the rhythm be increased.
    ・01:15:809~01:20:952 - i recommend that you increase( change ) the rhythm than before. vocal start here, so I feel to be a bit boring in the same rhythm as before.
    ・02:17:523~02:24:166 - hmm..too simple rhythm..
    ・03:08:952~03:36:381 - reason same as 1st kiai part. and It has a lot of simple rhythm than normal.
    
    about design: you have a lot of stack. and It has many of the same pattern. Stack is to be placed in the same position. so That motion is limited it. I recommend that you use the various patterns more for the next time~

1. OD+1 ( Slightly simple rhythm for Insane. ☆4.76 This is the setting of most hard. )
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add clap
3. 00:08:738 (x) - add note. ( 00:08:095 (4,5,6,7,8) - These sounds have a consistency.
4. 00:08:952 (6) - add NC. ( Slightly long colors. These are not a stream. so It is recommended that you do not too long. )
5. 00:12:380 (7) - ^
6. 00:16:238 (5) - only attention. but I can not recommend to hide the note completely under the slider. Please remember the rules ↓
   
   Rule

   Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
7. 00:17:523 (1) - I feel this slider speed is too slow.. If you want to use, I think that 0.75x is enough.
8. 00:30:809 (1) - same as Hard diff.
9. 00:40:666 (8,9,1) - I suggest that you do not stack. and suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/2uOHy ( 00:38:952 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - i think a bit crowded. I suggest that you use more widely the map.
10. 00:43:238 (7) - add NC. and 00:44:095 (9) - add NC. for slider speed change. and a set has better appearance of these
11. 00:48:380 (3) - add finish to start of the slider.
12. 00:48:381~01:00:381 - hmm.. too simple rhythm for Insane. rhythm similar to hard.. =.=;
13. 00:51:595 (8) - add NC.
14. 01:02:095 (1) - add finish. same as Normal. and 01:03:809 (6) - 01:05:523 (11) - 01:08:952 (6) - 01:10:666 (11) - 01:12:380 (16) -
15. 01:02:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Placed too simple. stack is not intended to be used frequently. Please try the various patterns.
16. 01:03:595 (5) - add NC and 01:05:309 (10) - add NC and 01:07:023 (15) - add NC and 01:07:238 (1) - remove NC and 01:08:738 (4) - add NC and 01:10:452 (9) - add NC and 01:12:166 (14) - add NC.
17. 01:19:238 (1,2,3) - It is better if you put in the same spacing them. http://puu.sh/2uPah
18. 01:22:238 (7) - I think this slider speed change would not have much sense. I think it's unnecessary.
19. 01:32:952 (1) - same as Hard.
20. 01:44:952 (1) - add finish
21. 02:00:380 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
22. 02:06:809 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - This does not match rhythm. You are using rhythm to follow the vocal in other. but It does not follow it almost here. so i suggest rhythm: http://puu.sh/2uPpz
23. 02:12:380 (1) - same as 00:16:238 (5)
24. 02:30:381 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out.
25. 02:43:238 (1) - add finish
26. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider.
27. 03:08:952~03:22:666 - same comment as 00:48:381~01:00:381.
    
    The same comment as hard about the design.

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ AlpacaCokelat

from m4m queue~ ( sorry, for the delay

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song folder - MAXSTEP - PYL Younique Album Vol1.mp3 - bitrate 130kbps. This is rare lol yea. it is rankable :3 ( Rule: no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps ) so do not need to change. just said
2. KIAI TIME setting - 02:31:238~02:38:095 - I think that this kiai time do not match a little. because 02:31:238~ 02:38:095~ Rhythm is almost same. and It is lacking in emphasis.so I thought that do not need to put ikiai time here. ok. added flash instead
3. KIAI TIME - Inconsistency in Kiai Times from AIBat; only Hard diff is different. You should unify it all, if all these are your diff. and It matches in all diff.
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:381, ends on 01:01:238 ⇒ Starts on 00:48:381, ends on 01:00:381
4. Song folder - normal-sliderslide.wav - This is a slider of silence. Do you want to use this? Currently, this has not been used for the map.
   If you want to use this, It is necessary to change the hitsound sampleset from N to N:C1. http://puu.sh/2uG1A
   or If you do not use this, Please remove it because it becomes unnecessary files. my terrible mistake, forgot to enable custom override >.<

[Normal]

1. Difficulty settings is too low for Normal. This is almost setting of Easy. so i recommend HD+2, OD+ 1, AR+1~2
   
   General setting for Normal from wiki

   ・HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
   ・Circle Size: 3 or 4
   ・Approach Rate: 5 or below
   ・Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
   General setting for Easy from wiki

   ・HP Drain: 4 or less
   ・Circle Size: 3 or 4
   ・Approach Rate: 4 or less
   ・Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
   and please refer to other map.
   Setting that I often use;
   if not have Easy diff. HD3 OD3 AR4~5 ( AR is determined by BPM and setting the slider velocity ) i'll use this
   if have Easy. HD 3~4 OD 3~4 AR 4~5
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add clap
3. 00:29:523 (3) - add clap instead to whistle to end of the slider. It will match than the whistle
4. 00:34:666 - Green lines with no meaning. so it is better to remove it. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. with ↓
   ・01:32:952
5. 00:40:666 (4) - Suggestion of the design; Ctrl+H form. http://puu.sh/2uGO8 ( 00:38:095 (1,2,3,4) - make each different flow )
6. 00:44:952 (1,2,1) - Why DS here is different from the others? Reason to change was not found to me
   and 00:46:666 (1) - Slightly strange form. and I feel whistle of the slider is a little noisy. >.< and add finish instead to whistle to end of the slider is better. and remove NC here & 00:48:809 (2) - add NC is better. http://puu.sh/2uHfD my suggest code is here ↓
   
   SPOILER

   428,272,44952,6,0,L|484:328,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,272,45809,2,0,L|240:328,2,65,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,164,46666,2,0,B|324:16|324:16|256:96|256:96|188:16|188:16|144:168,1,520,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   200,284,48809,5,0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:08:952 (1,3,5) - add finish to start of the slider.
8. 01:27:809 (1) - add finish instead to whistle
9. 01:29:523~01:32:952 - insert Break Time for between long.
10. 02:00:380 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and 02:00:380 (1,2) - unsnapped slider end. They are not placed on the line. 02:00:380 (1) - end 02:00:595. and 02:00:809 (2) - end 02:01:023.
11. 02:09:809 (5) - add clap
12. 02:14:095 (1) - I cannot recommend that you use the plural repeat for the minimum degree of difficulty. and I think that simple rhythm is enough. because you end kiai time from here. for ex: http://puu.sh/2uI4Q
13. 02:17:523 (1,2) - ^ for ex; http://puu.sh/2uIdp
14. 02:19:238 (3) - add NC ( same pattern as 02:15:809 (1) -
15. 02:20:095 (5,1) - DS is too far. ( 2.00x ) sudden DS change leads to confusion in constant rhythm for Normal diff.
16. 02:20:952 (1,2) - same as 02:17:523 (1,2)
17. 02:22:666 (3) - add NC ( same pattern as 02:15:809 (1) -
18. 02:24:380 (1,2) - same as 02:17:523 (1,2)
19. 03:03:595 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat and end ). They are not placed on the line. so repeat 03:03:702. end 03:03:809.
20. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
21. 03:12:380 (1) - add clap to end of the slider.
22. 03:14:952 (5) - add clap to start of the slider
23. 03:20:095 (3) - add clap to start of the slider and remove clap to end of the slider
24. 03:22:666 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
25. 03:26:952 (2) - remove clap to end of the slider
26. 03:28:666 (4) - ^
27. 03:31:666 (4) - add clap to end of the slider
28. 03:32:952 (1) - add finish
    
    about rhythm: There is almost no problem. but 03:08:952~03:22:666 - I feel the rhythm of this time is difficult as compared with other parts.
    for ex: 03:13:880 (2,3,4,5,6) - long 1/2 rhythm. It is not a problem, but you tried this for the first time.
    03:17:523 (3,4,5) - triple circles ( 1/2 rhythm ). ^
    If you want to use these, I recommend that you do not use it only in the latter half and think about balance and use it .
    i just realizedi changed it into more consistent pattern

[Hard]

1. Difficulty settings is too low for Hard. i recommend HD +1, and CS +1. Rhythm is almost simple. so I think CS3 is too easy. i will reconsider about CS, since it needs more works
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add finish
3. 00:14:095 (1) - Slider too long. This is a bit boring for the hard diff I suggest that you increase the rhythm as before.
4. 00:29:523 (1) - add clap to end of the slider
5. 00:30:809 (1) - slider start 00:31:238. and 00:30:809 - add note here. it is fit a vocal most~
6. 00:48:381 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
7. 00:58:452 (4,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2uKrj i thought note only one does not have much sense.
8. 01:02:095 (1) - add finish. (same as Normal diff.) and with 01:03:595 (4,1) - add finish to end of the slider
9. 01:08:523 (7) - add clap
10. 01:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and with 01:10:666 (4) -
11. 01:09:809 (2) - add clap
12. 01:09:809 (2,3) - DS is too close. Reason to do it was not found to me. because It only uses just here. intentional, for good shapes
13. 01:12:166 (6) - add NC and 01:12:381 (1) - remove NC.
14. 01:32:952 (1) - only attention. maybe this is no problem. but Please remember the rules ↓
    
    Rule

    Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
    i want to follow the music, and AiMod doesn't point this. But if more modder point this out i will change it
15. 01:41:095 (4) - I suggest that you put it by a flow same as these. these too overlap so it is hard to see a little.
16. 01:41:309 (x) - you should add note here for the vocal. 01:39:809 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - You match these with vocal. so I feel very strange rhythm that does not have a vocal here.
17. 01:45:381 (2) - add repeat. for the constant rhythm.
18. 02:00:381 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
19. 02:20:202 (4) - It does not match rhythm. change to 02:20:309.
20. 02:20:523 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/2uNwZ I think this is enough
21. 02:21:809 (2) - add clap
22. 02:23:523 (5) - ^
23. 02:23:738 (x) - 02:23:952 (x) - add note. It matches vocal very much. and There is much simple rhythm for Hard diff.
24. 02:24:381 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: spinner start 02:24:488. and add note to 02:24:381. for the finish sound here.
25. 02:28:238 (1) - This spinner does not match rhythm. The beginning of spinner should make 02:27:809. so 02:24:381 (1) - end change to 02:27:381. and 02:27:809 (1) - start change to 02:27:809 is better.
26. 02:43:238 (1) - add finish
27. 03:00:381 (1) - Ctrl+H form is better imo. http://puu.sh/2uNPx
28. 03:02:095 (4) - add NC. ( same as 03:00:381 (1) -
29. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. for kiai start
30. 03:16:666 (2) - add clap
31. 03:18:381 (5) - ^
32. 03:20:952 (4) - add NC?
33. 03:22:666 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
34. 03:23:523 (3) - Slider too long. This is a bit boring for the hard diff
35. 03:29:523 (1) - ^
36. 03:33:166 (1) - add finish
    
    about rhythm: I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard diff. I think you can increase the 1/2 rhythm more.
    i think it is better to increase the rhythm for ex↓
    ・00:23:738 - for the vocal
    ・00:24:166 - ^
    ・00:27:166 - ^
    ・00:27:595 - ^
    ・00:29:309 - 00:27:809 (1,2,3) - for emphasize these vocal
    ・00:48:381~01:00:381 1st kiai time. I thought it was too simple rhythm as compared to the other. This is the kiai time, so I think that the rhythm be increased.
    ・01:15:809~01:20:952 - i recommend that you increase( change ) the rhythm than before. vocal start here, so I feel to be a bit boring in the same rhythm as before.
    ・02:17:523~02:24:166 - hmm..too simple rhythm..
    ・03:08:952~03:36:381 - reason same as 1st kiai part. and It has a lot of simple rhythm than normal.
    
    about design: you have a lot of stack. and It has many of the same pattern. Stack is to be placed in the same position. so That motion is limited it. I recommend that you use the various patterns more for the next time~

[MAX]

1. OD+1 ( Slightly simple rhythm for Insane. ☆4.76 This is the setting of most hard. )
2. 00:03:809 (1) - add clap
3. 00:08:738 (x) - add note. ( 00:08:095 (4,5,6,7,8) - These sounds have a consistency.
4. 00:08:952 (6) - add NC. ( Slightly long colors. These are not a stream. so It is recommended that you do not too long. )
5. 00:12:380 (7) - ^
6. 00:16:238 (5) - only attention. but I can not recommend to hide the note completely under the slider. Please remember the rules ↓
   
   Rule

   Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
   this is insane diff, so i'd like to keep it
7. 00:17:523 (1) - I feel this slider speed is too slow.. If you want to use, I think that 0.75x is enough.
8. 00:30:809 (1) - same as Hard diff.
9. 00:40:666 (8,9,1) - I suggest that you do not stack. and suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/2uOHy ( 00:38:952 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - i think a bit crowded. I suggest that you use more widely the map.
10. 00:43:238 (7) - add NC. and 00:44:095 (9) - add NC. for slider speed change. and a set has better appearance of these
11. 00:48:380 (3) - add finish to start of the slider.
12. 00:48:381~01:00:381 - hmm.. too simple rhythm for Insane. rhythm similar to hard.. =.=;
13. 00:51:595 (8) - add NC.
14. 01:02:095 (1) - add finish. same as Normal. and 01:03:809 (6) - 01:05:523 (11) - 01:08:952 (6) - 01:10:666 (11) - 01:12:380 (16) -
15. 01:02:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Placed too simple. stack is not intended to be used frequently. Please try the various patterns.
16. 01:03:595 (5) - add NC and 01:05:309 (10) - add NC and 01:07:023 (15) - add NC and 01:07:238 (1) - remove NC and 01:08:738 (4) - add NC and 01:10:452 (9) - add NC and 01:12:166 (14) - add NC.
17. 01:19:238 (1,2,3) - It is better if you put in the same spacing them. http://puu.sh/2uPah
18. 01:22:238 (7) - I think this slider speed change would not have much sense. I think it's unnecessary.
19. 01:32:952 (1) - same as Hard.
20. 01:44:952 (1) - add finish
21. 02:00:380 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
22. 02:06:809 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - This does not match rhythm. You are using rhythm to follow the vocal in other. but It does not follow it almost here. so i suggest rhythm: http://puu.sh/2uPpz intentional, i'd like to keep them
23. 02:12:380 (1) - same as 00:16:238 (5)
24. 02:30:381 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out.
25. 02:43:238 (1) - add finish
26. 03:08:952 (1) - add finish to start of the slider.
27. 03:08:952~03:22:666 - same comment as 00:48:381~01:00:381.
    
    The same comment as hard about the design.

Your first map is very good. ( I was poor more =~= )
Please refer also another map for rhythm. overall the current setting is too simpler than the difficulty of the actual.
I hope you to be a good mapper.

Good luck~

DingGGu wrote:

Hello~ I'm DingGGu from M4M Request!

[General]

1. You must use NC regularly.

[Normal]

1. 02:00:380 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 02:00:809 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
3. 03:03:595 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
4. 03:03:595 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Hard]

1. This Diff was so difficult.
2. distance was so close.
3. 00:17:095 (2) - Move down
4. 01:41:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - You have to Use Ctrl+Shift+D this is new to me o.o
5. 02:20:202 (4) - You must move to redline

[MAX]

1. 00:08:952 (6) - NC
2. 00:12:380 (1) - NC
3. 00:51:595 (1) - NC
4. 01:03:595 (5) - NC
5. 01:05:309 (1) - NC
6. 01:07:023 (6) - Remove NC
   then 01:07:238 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:08:523 (1) - NC
8. 01:11:309 (1) - NC

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

NORMAL

00:36:381 (1,2,3) - ugly rythm, repair it. will reconsider
01:14:095 (1,2,3,4) - change those single hitcircles into slider? http://picturepush.com/public/12625409 no
01:20:523 - add a single hit circle IF YOU WANT
01:32:952 (1) - longer this slider or make it sloweeeeeer no
01:34:666 (2) - delete this hit circle
if you dont do ^
01:34:666 (2) - take one step back form its current timing. doesn't match the song imo
01:34:666 (2) - delete this hit circle the rhythm will be missing
http://picturepush.com/public/12625415
01:39:809 (1,2,3) - bad rythm for nrmal diff. just make it like this boo http://picturepush.com/public/12625417 <- will change but not following your suggestion
02:00:381 (1,2) - too monoton or what else this maybe work http://picturepush.com/public/12625424 <- i'm using simple pattern for this, but your suggestion is good. will reconsider
02:03:809 (1,2) - ^
02:07:238 (1,2) - loooggooool ^
02:10:666 (1,2) - logol ^
you can repair or ignore.
02:41:523 (1,2) - bad bad baaaad!!!
http://picturepush.com/public/12625435
03:00:166 (2) - no. delete that hitcircle i'd like to keep it
03:01:880 (3) - ^
03:20:952 (1,2,3) - not too shabby, but change that into a reverse slider
03:21:809 (1,2,3) - ^ http://picturepush.com/public/12625442
03:24:166 (2) - delete. no

HARD

00:15:595 (5) - sounds not good. Repair it or do something else. seems fine to me
00:49:881 (2) - no. no
00:51:595 (4) - do you like too make this always? plz no. it match the rhythm, and you're the first one who point this out. I will change it if more people say so
01:08:523 (7,8) - make a little space between.
01:17:309 (3) - up to you. delete or not
01:19:023 (6) - ^
01:21:809 (2) - its better to delete this and longer the slider before. doesn't match the rhythm imo
01:20:952 (1) - make this longer once, and make a little space between those hit circles before. http://picturepush.com/public/12625450
01:24:381 (5) - longer this slider. and delete the hitcirlce after.
01:27:595 (3,4,5) - change those into a reverse slider. http://picturepush.com/public/12625453
01:34:559 (2,3) - no no nooooooo! sounds weird. it fits the song
02:10:452 (1) - not too weird but still.plz repair or ignore
02:20:523 (1) - ^ or make it a little shorter from before
02:33:238 (2,3) - bw this, there's a little space, fill it with a hit circle. ignore or repair
02:36:166 (2) - no. move this to 02:35:952
03:00:166 (3) - noooo no o
03:01:881 (3) - ^bhvyude
03:10:452 (2) - noo
03:12:166 (4) - no
03:19:023 (1) - too short, make a bit long. i followed the vocalline
03:25:238 (4,5,6) - why sounds weird. repair. seems fine

MAX

00:38:309 (1,2) - weirdos. repair nope
00:41:309 (11,12) - weirdos. fit the song
00:48:166 (1,2) - monotonese. ^
01:02:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - you can make a jump between this OMG its INSANE! prefer anti-jump
01:08:738 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:32:952 (1) - plz are you addicted? make it became a reverse slider, this one is JUST too long. to impersonate the buzzing sound
02:04:880 (3) - give some break between, and shorten this slider. nope
02:11:738 (4) - ^
02:42:381 (5,6,7,8) - jauhkan dirinyaaaa~~ dari sang mantaaaan~~~ waht
03:00:166 (10) - wut wit this. delete!
03:01:881 (10) - ^
03:17:095 (3) - delete and the sounds its better. the rhythm will be too simple
03:18:595 (7) - shorten this omg it make this part just tooooo beeep see no reason to do that

Yo all done. good luck and lend me your laptop tomorrow.

360,160,158095,6,0,B|304:128|304:128|281:142|224:132,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,158952,2,0,B|130:210|130:210|136:184|115:147,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Cobra wrote:

Hi!

Normal
00:46:666 (3) - you could try and make it perfectly symmetrical, like this: http://puu.sh/2vDnv i'm not sure if i fixed it well or not. If you want, could you please send the codes?
00:55:238 (1) - [Nazi] move 2 units left if you want it to line up perfect with the red slider.
00:55:238 (1) - this slider is odd looking, for good looking curves just use 3 slider points. this one has 5
01:07:238 (4) - i dont think the length of this slider sounds good, landing on the white tick at 01:08:095 sounds better, so sort of mess around with this but it fits the song
02:33:809 (4) - [Nazi] x:32 y:188
02:34:666 (1) - same situation as 01:07:238 will reconsider then
02:36:380 (2) - ^ ^

Hard
00:07:238 (1,2,3) - try to spread these out evenly so (2) does not touch (3).
00:08:952 (5,6,7) - ^ for 5 and 6
00:51:809 (1,2) - these sliders dont feel right, i think they should be the same length as the previous/next ones
01:38:095 (3,4) - [Nazi] these dont line up perfectly
01:41:309 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, use Ctrl+Shift+D for this kinda stuff
02:08:095 (3) - hmm.. either make this prettier, or just use a different kind of slider i've seen a ranked map with this slider, i think it's fine
02:34:666 (1) - try not to overuse these kind of sliders ok. will reconsider
03:29:523 (1) - asdfkkl;kjjh try to make this prettier/symmetrical. start it out even (not sideways) and then when it looks nice, rotate it, if that makes sense

PEPSI MAX
02:01:238 (3) - make it like this, symmetry, or else (2) looks funny and uneven: http://puu.sh/2vEiy
02:23:738 (6) - make a better blanket
03:08:952 (1,4) - ugly sliders, try this: http://puu.sh/2vEmP (and then rotate it however you want) changed it, but not following your suggestion
Nice work with this diff, I like

In general, when you try to do symmetry, you need a different method. Make sure all your points are lined up by having the slider in the middle of the map, and flipping it around. mess around with the length until it looks perfectly symmetrical. that's all.

Nice map, good luck!

merchat7 wrote:

May overlap with above mod

[Normal]

01:32:952 (1,2) - The repeat doesn't really follow the song, i suggest extending the repeating slider http://puu.sh/2w2MD. Sound better to me. If you don't have ideas for placement http://puu.sh/2w2Pm
01:37:238 (3,3) - Add claps
01:40:452 (2) - Clap at end, both suggestion should be done as you put claps here 01:42:380 (3,3) -
02:34:666 (1,2) - Sliders look better to me if the middle slider point is move a couple grid to the right.
02:38:952 (2) - Not too fond of this shape, play around with the shape a bit? http://puu.sh/2w3fe If you want to use;

360,160,158095,6,0,B|304:128|304:128|281:142|224:132,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,158952,2,0,B|130:210|130:210|136:184|115:147,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:03:595 (1) - Rotate 90 degree anti clockwise/point it to (2), I feel would improve flow. Naturally, adjust placement so that this slider doesn't overlap with 03:02:095 (5) -
03:04:238 (2,3,4) - Also please do whistle like here 01:14:523 (2,3,4) - or vice versa (keep consistency).

Good, the missing claps and 01:32:952 (1,2) I highly recommend fixing. The others are just polishing.

[Hard]

-1 hp so it different from Insane (MAX)?

00:07:452 (2,6) - Althrough minor, I recommend fixing the spacing by turning grid snap off.It's noticeable since right now, one pattern is overlapping ,one pattern isn't. E.g. 00:07:238 (1,2) - not overlapping 00:07:452 (2,3) - overlapping.
01:14:523 (1,2,3) - You map all the diffs right? if you keep whistle here in Normal, I recommend to do whistle here too. And if you did whistle here, do whistle at 03:04:238 (1,2,3) -
01:27:595 (3) - Try to point it a bit more to the next note would help with flow imo.
02:32:952 (1,3) - Prefer if you do 1/6 slider here too. it's already in max diff
03:27:809 (2) - Not too fond of this anti jump I think keeping distant snap and having jump on 03:29:309 (3) - play nicer. If you find jump too big, then try snapping this note to 0.9x/0.8x/0.7x etc. I feel increasing spacing a bit here would be better.
*A couple things bother me, but as these suggestions are based of my preference and style, I'll list them in italics. Consider them if you wish.

SPOILER

00:35:523 (3,5) - I would do jumps on these. E.g. something like this placement http://puu.sh/2w3RO. There's a clear accent in music on the white tick so it feel weird to play all the notes to the same distant snap to me.
00:37:666 (7) - I prefer this stack since it let you play with the cursor a bit and for me, this help me feel the song more. Your choice through.
00:38:952 (3,5) - Same as 00:35:523
00:41:095 (7) - Stack if you did for previous suggestion.
00:42:381 (3,5) - Same as 00:35:523, something like this if you are clueless for ideas http://puu.sh/2w3Yk
00:49:881 (2) - I prefer that you don't stack this, instead place it a way so that there is a jump to the slider, e.g. here http://puu.sh/2w40a. This give emphasis to the white tick (where music is accented) and as you can see by spacing, give less emphasis to the red tick. I feel this fit better to song. If you feel (2) is too close to (1) and the jump to (3) is too big, simply move it more up. For me, either way feel better than how it is now.
00:51:595 (4) - ^
00:55:023 (3,4,1) - I would definitely do jump to the stream here, for me, the notes feel too close together. I can't help but get an uncomfortable feeling so I prefer if you move it more up, or more to the right, which ever way you find easier to fix the pattern you have here.
00:56:738 (2) - Same as 00:49:881
01:02:952 (3,6) - Really prefer slider (1/2, or whatever length you think is best/repeating slider) here, while I see you're following the drums, since guitar is pretty prominent here, I think slider should be done to represent it and you are still following the drums by doing this
01:06:380 (3) - ^
01:09:809 (2,5) - ^
01:13:238 (3) - ^
01:16:666 (2,5,8) - ^, if you truly do not prefer to do this, then I really prefer if you do some jumps here to reduce the empty feel (I feel like I need to hold or click something, but if there is a jump, I have to focus on getting that jump).
01:35:952 (6,7,1) - Prefer slightly higher spacing to ease the spacing change from the jump on 01:35:523 (5) -
03:10:452 (2,4) - etc., same as Same as 00:49:881
03:15:595 (3,4,1) - same as 00:55:023

Map looks fine to me, but I prefer a different mapping approach to some parts (read italics). Your preference style is awesome ;w; i will try hard to interprete the song next time. Thank you

[Max]

To refrain from disrespecting the mapping style, I'll just be a bit more general. How I feel about this diff is similar to Hard. I feel some parts need jumps/sliders to fill in the gaps. I'll just give some quick examples. 02:02:095 (4,5,6) - This part seems like an awesome part to put jumps, but no jumps Or here, like I mention in Hard, 03:15:595 (4,5,1) - after a jump, I prefer if you increase the spacing a bit of the following notes to help make the transition more gradual. 4.85x > 1.0x feel really sudden and flow breaking to me. Just a few points, but I hope you get the idea. Glad you point them out. I will try to imply what you're trying to say

Insane is really not my sort of map, but I notice this is your first beatmap. Pretty awesome job. Remember that this is my opinion.

Star, map is quite nice for a new mapper.

1. Non-sense stack leniency 0.5 ... please make them consistent to 0.7

1. 00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the shape more smooth?
2. 00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
3. 00:17:523 (1) - reduce the volumn to 30% at begining, and increase to 60% gruaduately?
4. 00:38:095 - the blank here is weird a bit since here's a drum so i'd like to add a note here with NC
5. 00:43:238 (1,2) - avoid overlap here by making them curved a bit? like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:523 (1,2,3,4) - change the order here like this for better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:02:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - tbh triplets on white tick are heard odd a bit. i may choose the beats around here like this:
   
8. 02:05:523 (4,5,6) - ^
9. 02:42:381 (5,6,7,8) - move to 220:200?

1. Circle Size 4 suggested
2. 00:46:666 (5,6,7) - try to avoid overlap ?
3. 01:12:381 (2) - a 3/4 repeat here may be better~
   
4. 01:24:381 (5) - i suppose 1/2 beats is better ( like two 1/2 sliders )
5. 02:07:238 (1,2) - avoid overlap
6. 02:15:809 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:23:738 (7) - ^
8. 02:32:952 (1,2,3,4) - suggest three 1/3 repeats and then a 2/3 like this
   
9. 02:39:809 (1,2) - 1/3 repeat + note
   
10. 02:40:666 (3,4) - ^
11. 03:22:666 (1,2,3) - overlap

1. 00:09:809 (3) - make it symmetrical?
2. 00:34:666 (1,2,3) - tbh.. this kinda overlap usually makes your map not neat...

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Non-sense stack leniency 0.5 ... please make them consistent to 0.7

[MAX]

1. 00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the shape more smooth?
2. 00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
3. 00:17:523 (1) - reduce the volumn to 30% at begining, and increase to 60% gruaduately?
4. 00:38:095 - the blank here is weird a bit since here's a drum so i'd like to add a note here with NC
5. 00:43:238 (1,2) - avoid overlap here by making them curved a bit? like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:523 (1,2,3,4) - change the order here like this for better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:02:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - tbh triplets on white tick are heard odd a bit. i may choose the beats around here like this:
   
8. 02:05:523 (4,5,6) - ^
9. 02:42:381 (5,6,7,8) - move to 220:200?

[Hard]

1. Circle Size 4 suggested
2. 00:46:666 (5,6,7) - try to avoid overlap ?
3. 01:12:381 (2) - a 3/4 repeat here may be better~
   
4. 01:24:381 (5) - i suppose 1/2 beats is better ( like two 1/2 sliders )
5. 02:07:238 (1,2) - avoid overlap
6. 02:15:809 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:23:738 (7) - ^
8. 02:32:952 (1,2,3,4) - suggest three 1/3 repeats and then a 2/3 like this
   
9. 02:39:809 (1,2) - 1/3 repeat + note
   
10. 02:40:666 (3,4) - ^
11. 03:22:666 (1,2,3) - overlap

[Normal]

1. 00:09:809 (3) - make it symmetrical?
2. 00:34:666 (1,2,3) - tbh.. this kinda overlap usually makes your map not neat... can't do anything with distance snap on :<

that's all. Generally your map is potential.. i can't say it's completely ready for bubble currently but i would like to give you a chance for that. Try to look for some more detailed mods - at least three, and then call me back for recheck.

1. 00:07:238 (1) - Finish
2. 00:08:952 (1) - ^
3. 00:10:666 (1) - finish on start slider
4. 00:12:381 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:095 (1) - finish
6. 01:22:666 (1) - finish
7. 01:46:238 (3) - overlap on 01:44:095 (3)

1. 00:29:523 (1) - whistle
2. 00:30:809 (1) - start on 00:31:238 and add note here
3. 00:38:738 (2) - (232,156)
4. 01:34:559 (2,3) - stacking is little hard for Hard Player..xD
5. 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - ^ or NC
6. 02:24:381 (1) - finish

1. 01:32:952 (1) - 27th red point (256,164),33th red point(304,164),34th red point(312,176),35th red point (320,164)...and pull another red point like constantly~
2. 02:02:095 (4) - NC
3. 02:10:666 (1) - perfectly overlap on 02:10:023 (14)
4. 02:39:809 (5) - NC?
5. 03:26:952 (3) - perfectly overlap on 03:25:881 (4)

[Pisces] wrote:

m4m~
[General]
i recommend change Hitsound Normal to Hitsound Soft and change normal-sliderslide.wav to soft-sliderslide.wav
01:46:881 ~ 01:59:952 - add note more~ ok will consider

[Normal]

1. 00:07:238 (1) - Finish
2. 00:08:952 (1) - ^
3. 00:10:666 (1) - finish on start slider
4. 00:12:381 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:095 (1) - finish
6. 01:22:666 (1) - finish
7. 01:46:238 (3) - overlap on 01:44:095 (3)

[Hard]
AR-1 i think it's more better~?

1. 00:29:523 (1) - whistle
2. 00:30:809 (1) - start on 00:31:238 and add note here
3. 00:38:738 (2) - (232,156)
4. 01:34:559 (2,3) - stacking is little hard for Hard Player..xD will reconsider then
5. 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - ^ or NC choose to unstack instead
6. 02:24:381 (1) - finish

[MAX]

1. 01:32:952 (1) - 27th red point (256,164),33th red point(304,164),34th red point(312,176),35th red point (320,164)...and pull another red point like constantly~
2. 02:02:095 (4) - NC
3. 02:10:666 (1) - perfectly overlap on 02:10:023 (14)
4. 02:39:809 (5) - NC?
5. 03:26:952 (3) - perfectly overlap on 03:25:881 (4)

sorry i'm so busy because of school~:(
GL~`

AzerFrost wrote:

Hai~ m4m ^w^

MAX

1. 00:09:809 (4,5) - This part should be 3 notes and snapped 1/3, not 4 and stacked 1/4. Maybe a reverse slider would do.
2. 00:16:880 (6) - Snap 1/3 (snap here 00:16:809 )
3. 00:47:523 (9,1) - I wouldn't stack that. i'd like to stack
4. 01:02:095 (1) to 01:13:238 (5) - Loads of space not used for anything here, I would recommend making 01:02:095 (1) 01:03:809 (2) 01:05:523 (2) 01:08:952 (3) 01:10:666 (3) 01:12:380 (3) Reverse sliders snapped 1/4 lasting for whole gap , like this instead of
5. 01:26:845 (2) - Out of place, remove. i want to keep that
6. 01:39:166 (10) - Snap here 01:39:273
7. 02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Singer is really offbeat here while your notes aren't, I recommend using spinners instead and timing it properly.will consider
8. 02:41:952 (4,5) - Unstack intentional
9. 03:12:381 (1,2) - VERY far apart for this difficulty

I can't stand this song anymore, I'm not going to mod other difficulties, sorry.

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, M4M ^^

[Normal]

02:15:809 (3,4) - Why not like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/710756
- 02:15:809 (3) - x:360 y:208
- 02:16:238 (4) - x:256 y:288
03:26:952 (2,3) - Try to make them like 2 is a blanket for 3, there a many possibilities, so I let you move or rotate ^^

[Hard]
01:15:809 (1,2) - I find this kind of jumps too hard for a Hard, but it's only an opinion.

That's all I found, sorry for this lame mod, compared to your mod

But good luck, you've done a very good job ^^

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:

Normal:
00:20:952 (1,2) - let's try something like http://puu.sh/2Dp8Q.jpg
120,140,20952,6,0,B|120:176|120:176|104:232|152:264,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,21809,2,0,B|276:224|276:224|292:168|244:136,1,130
00:24:380 (1,2) - oh great, now we have variety this is good
00:22:666 (3,3) - tbh I suggest to change this too or just add little angle, lying long straight slider never looks good
00:44:095 (6) - http://puu.sh/2Dpr1.jpg this better interact with 00:42:381 (3) -
00:55:238 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Dpuy.jpg the previous shape fits the song more but thank you for your suggestion :>
01:20:952 (1) - ok, i already mention this gonna keep this one for pattern
02:00:381 (1,2) - just an idea, make this some way wavy http://puu.sh/2DpFB.jpg
02:03:809 (1,2) - same here and on following 2 spots
02:26:952 (3,4) - watch spacing here
02:39:809 (3,4,5,6) - rotate them by ~12 http://puu.sh/2DpRO.jpg
02:41:523 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2DpYc.jpg
129,256,161523,6,0,B|198:273|198:273|255:260,1,130
381,264,162381,2,0,B|316:245|316:245|255:260,1,130
03:04:238 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2Dq2g.jpg
03:14:952 (3) - move this to 240:188
03:31:666 (4) - http://puu.sh/2Dq6e.jpg

Hard:
Setting too low for hard AR+1 OD+1
00:16:238 (6,7) - to stack such things properly turn off grid-snap http://puu.sh/2DqhM.jpg
00:49:666 (2) - http://puu.sh/2DqmW.jpg sounds and plays better
01:19:237 (7) - end not snapped ctrl+x ctrl+v to fix
01:42:809 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too hard for hard xD will consider
02:08:095 (3) - try to improve this slider
02:20:952 (2,5) - nope, this out of style since 2010
03:30:381 (3) - http://puu.sh/2Dqyh.jpg
in general you use too many stacks here, yes you definitely can use them but not so often

MAX:
00:25:666 (4,1) - feels like this can be on better spots, maybe something like http://puu.sh/2DqGD.jpg idk intentional. but i will change it into another position
00:40:881 (9) - some grids right
00:43:023 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/2DqID.jpg
00:58:666 (8) - 200:204
01:02:095 (1,2,3) - why not to avoid stacks here http://puu.sh/2DqLq.jpg
01:03:809 (2,3,4) - same
01:05:523 (2,3,4) - same
01:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - curve this?
01:12:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - or wave i like them straight, but i will change if more people say so
02:04:880 (3) - 456:172
02:12:380 (1) - hiding behind sliderbody is not recommended trick
03:08:952 (1) - fix shape of this
03:10:666 (4) - ^
03:26:095 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2DqUp.jpg
108,260,206095,6,0,P|136:300|164:312,1,80
264,224,206523,2,0,P|256:268|232:300,1,80
not bad

Well for the first map this was fine, keep getting mods. Good Luck!

1. 00:10:666 (1,2,1,2) - Center (2) looks better
2. Others fine

1. 00:48:381 (1) - These are really exotic...
2. 00:51:809 (1) - A bit ugly, just use simple 3-point sliders and you'll be fine
3. 02:08:095 (3) - The bracket is pretty bad, I'm not pretty good at this either but try
   

   150,149,128095,2,0,B|258:228|258:228|265:280|281:320|318:321|353:318|375:289,1,300

4. 03:04:238 (1,2,3) - Use the Create Polygon Circles feature for better triangle

1. 00:44:095 (1,2) - The speedups doesn't make much sense to me, maybe just use 1.0x?
2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - Over stack latency, looks pretty bad. Try unstacking or adding stack latency.
3. 01:03:595 (1,2,3,4) - Try flipping vertically?
4. 01:08:738 (5) - Maybe place the NC here for consistency through the stream.
5. 01:14:523 (3,4,5) - This triangle seems a bit off, try the Create Polygon Circles feature?
6. 01:24:166 (4) - Try stacking with 01:23:523 (1) - , flows better (counter-clockwise circling) and the jump feel pretty good to me
7. 01:28:238 (1,2,3) - Use the polygon feature for better triangle
8. 01:34:880 (2) - NC this and 01:34:666 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:36:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm pretty sure these should be 1/3s
10. 02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Probably should be 1/6s
11. 02:36:595 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^

Cirno wrote:

Seems you are soon to get a bubble o.o can i get more amen for this

[Normal]

1. 00:10:666 (1,2,1,2) - Center (2) looks better
2. Others fine

[Hard]

1. 00:48:381 (1) - These are really exotic... indeed
2. 00:51:809 (1) - A bit ugly, just use simple 3-point sliders and you'll be fine
3. 02:08:095 (3) - The bracket is pretty bad, I'm not pretty good at this either but try
   

   150,149,128095,2,0,B|258:228|258:228|265:280|281:320|318:321|353:318|375:289,1,300

4. 03:04:238 (1,2,3) - Use the Create Polygon Circles feature for better triangle

[MAX]

1. 00:44:095 (1,2) - The speedups doesn't make much sense to me, maybe just use 1.0x?
2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - Over stack latency, looks pretty bad. Try unstacking or adding stack latency.
3. 01:03:595 (1,2,3,4) - Try flipping vertically?
4. 01:08:738 (5) - Maybe place the NC here for consistency through the stream.
5. 01:14:523 (3,4,5) - This triangle seems a bit off, try the Create Polygon Circles feature?
6. 01:24:166 (4) - Try stacking with 01:23:523 (1) - , flows better (counter-clockwise circling) and the jump feel pretty good to me
7. 01:28:238 (1,2,3) - Use the polygon feature for better triangle
8. 01:34:880 (2) - NC this and 01:34:666 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:36:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm pretty sure these should be 1/3s intentional, i'd like to keep it
10. 02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Probably should be 1/6s at first i thought about that too, but i tried to avoid maniacal fast-paced speed, but you're the second modder who points this out after AzerFrost, so fixed
11. 02:36:595 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^

Mostly good for a first map, good luck getting it ranked~

vipto wrote:

AHOY!

General:
Offset is 636 it seems off to me

[MAX]

Drain +1

00:07:881 - You need a cirlce here will reconsider
00:17:523 (1) - http://puu.sh/2HrWR.jpg Looks way better i'd like to keep that, it match the theme
00:22:881 (6) - Move right a very small bit, so it doesnt touch 00:23:523 (7) - (Very slightly) just a bit
00:29:523 (1) - Try something like this to make your map looking better http://puu.sh/2HrZK.jpg i'd also like to keep that
01:32:952 (1) - You placed one point wrong :C
02:03:595 (14) - Almost impossible to read, especially with standard or any other skin that has 300's visible.
02:02:416 (6,9,12) - remove, these are unrankable. ?
02:09:273 (9,12) - Same.
02:20:952 (1,2) - Blanket?
02:22:666 (5,6,7) - Same as above. (Blanket) i think it's already blanket
02:24:381 (8) - Again, blanket? ^
02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - has to be a 1/3 stream. unrankable this way. it seems a bit off with 1/3, i also feel uncomfortable with 1/6 i hate fast-paced streams like that actuallyso i will change if more modders say so
02:36:595 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Same ^
02:41:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try something like that
Fits the song pretty good
03:28:131 (8) - remove. i'd like to keep that. it match the lyrics

[Hard]

Check all your circles that you have stacked to a sliders end. many of the arent stacked properly. Restack them.

00:17:095 (7) - Space this away from 6's end? i prefer to stack
00:35:523 (3) - This spacing is weird. fix it. i want to make a jump from (2) to (3)
00:38:952 (3) - Sapcing ^
01:16:666 (2) - This jump is too big
01:18:381 (5) - This one too
01:42:380 (9) - Stack with 4. as it is right now, its stackin is incorrect.
02:24:381 (8) - x:293 y:222 i'd like to keep that for better flow
03:23:523 (3) - http://puu.sh/2HsBa.jpg Try that? (note that it ends on a white tick now.)

The Easy looks fine to me, besides the fact that i am not a big help with Easy diffs...

Good luck!

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

Normal

some missed claps

00:21:809 (2) -
02:01:238 (3) -
02:04:666 (3) -
02:08:095 (3) -
02:11:523 (3) -
02:25:238 (2) -
03:20:095 (3) -

00:46:666 (3) - touching hp bar

Hard

some missed claps

00:13:238 (6) -
00:14:952 (4) -
00:48:381 (1) -
00:50:095 (3) -
01:18:381 (5) -
01:25:238 (7) -
01:26:095 (1) -
01:40:666 (3) -
01:42:380 (9) -
02:13:238 (4) -
02:23:523 (6) -
03:16:666 (2) -
03:25:238 (4) -
03:30:381 (3) -

00:43:238 (5) - slider arrow is hidden little bit i think it's fine, it's still visible
01:26:095 (1) - ^^

[notice]Insane

some missed claps

00:57:809 (6) -
00:40:666 (8) -
01:09:809 (11) -
01:11:523 (9) -
01:13:238 (9) -
02:02:952 (10) -
02:06:166 (6) -
02:11:523 (3) -
02:13:238 (4) -
02:16:666 (6) -
02:23:523 (6) -
03:08:952 (1) -
03:10:666 (4) -
03:18:381 (6) -
03:32:095 (6) -

00:38:309 (1) - delete NC, don't need this
01:08:845 (2) - how about delete this? fits better with song imo will reconsider
01:13:880 (1) - delete NC 01:14:095 (2) - add NC ( for consistence )
01:35:523 (2) - touching HP bar?
02:05:523 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this rhythm is better http://puu.sh/2M0Bg.jpg

Good luck~

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hard
00:43:238 (5) - slider arrow is hidden little bit i think it's fine, it's still visible
01:26:095 (1) - ^^

HelloSCV wrote:

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hard
00:43:238 (5) - slider arrow is hidden little bit i think it's fine, it's still visible
01:26:095 (1) - ^^

you should fix these check here : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

SPOILER

gyuwife wrote:

Good luck

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

MAX :

00:44:095 - 00:44:738 - it's just me but for this part I prefer follow electro sound
00:58:023 (7) - blanket on 5 like this ? http://puu.sh/2NjB4.jpg
02:00:380 (1,2,3) - blanket 1 and 2 on 3 like this ? http://puu.sh/2NjLE.jpg
02:20:952 (1,2) - adjust blanket ?
02:23:738 (7) - blanket on 5 ? http://puu.sh/2Nk3I.jpg

Hard :

00:51:809 (1) - use new shape slider to make it better will reconsider, i kinda like the current shape
00:53:523 (2) - ^ ^
01:26:095 (1) - arrow is kinda hidden
02:23:738 (7) - adjust blanket
03:30:381 (3) - use new shape slider to make it better, and blanket i think it has already blanket this slider 03:29:523 (1) - but i will reconsider about the shape

Normal :

01:08:952 (1,3) - lil overlap

that all ~
Good luck

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]

My Edits:
01:00:595 - Add a slider from here until 01:01:666, with a NC. nope, it starts too sudden after the spinner

SPOILER

[spoilerbox]

[/spoilerbox]
01:02:095 (1) - Move to {x:272 y:96}. the current pattern seems fine to me, but i will reconsider
01:32:952 (1) - Make it like this gonna keep the current pattern

SPOILER

[MAX]

My Edits:
Remove the Stream here 02:34:881 - To 02:35:952 -
Add 1/4 Stream 02:34:881 - To 02:35:952 -
Remove the stream here 02:36:595 - to 02:37:881 -
Add 1/4 Stream 02:36:595 - to 02:37:881 -

i'm using the streams to follow the vocal, since it's more dominant than the accompanying music. I'm trying to find a way to replace the streams with something else because it's too hardcore for me :< so i will reconsider your suggestion

Behonkiss wrote:

From my M4M queue

General:

Claps and whistle volume seem really low.

Normal:

00:38:095 (1) - Move forward half a beat. prefer the current one

01:34:881 (2) - Consider changing this to a circle, with another one stacked on top half a beat after. nope, slider make the rhythm flow better

01:37:238 (3) - Move this to the right a little so it's directly under the 2 circle.

Hard:

00:51:809 (1) - Having the end point where it is at 00:52:452 sounds weird. Try getting rid of the repear and extend the end to 00:52:666.

03:12:381 (1) - Similar problem here. Get rid of the repeat and end it at 03:13:238. fix them in my own way

MAX seems fine, but keep in mind that I don't know much about Insane-type diffs.

1. 00:17:523 (1) - try to add whistle to slider body?
2. 00:34:238 - add a note here for consistent beat?
3. 00:38:952 (5) - bad shape... try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:26:095 (1,2,3) - heard weird a bit... try this beat & placement?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:55:238 (1) - Adjust the shape to avoid out of screen and make it more smooth? also 00:56:952 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:238 (5) - change to a 3/4 reverse? heard better~
   
3. 01:20:952 (1) - suggest two 1/2 sliders but not a 3/4 reverse due to vocal
   

1. 01:07:238 (4) - how about to split it into two sliders like this:
   
2. 01:29:960 - perhaps the break is unnecessary
3. 02:34:666 (1,2) - compared with current beat, i may choose 2/1 + note like this
   

Kiiwa wrote:

maxstep :3

[MAX]

1. 00:09:809 - Add clap.
2. 00:13:238 (6) - Add clap.
3. 00:16:666 - Add clap.
4. 00:17:523 - Better if you have whistle here too.
5. 00:32:095 (2) - Add clap.
6. 00:33:809 (2) - Add clap.
7. 00:44:095 - Add clap.
8. 00:58:881 (1) - Add finish.
9. 01:39:273 (10) - Move 1/4 later.fix with my own way
10. 01:44:738 (1) - Start this at 01:44:952 - and add a note at 01:44:738 -
11. 03:05:523 (1) - Add a clap.
12. 03:08:952 - Add finish.
13. 03:22:666 - Add finish.

good luck~

Scorpiour wrote:

Recheck~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[MAX]

1. 00:17:523 (1) - try to add whistle to slider body?
2. 00:34:238 - add a note here for consistent beat?
3. 00:38:952 (5) - bad shape... try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:26:095 (1,2,3) - heard weird a bit... try this beat & placement?
   
   SPOILER

   i use another placement, this one is too difficult imo

well... the placement is still.. .mess a bit.... (considering) if you would point out which one is still a mess i will fix it ;w;

[Hard]

1. 00:55:238 (1) - Adjust the shape to avoid out of screen and make it more smooth? also 00:56:952 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:238 (5) - change to a 3/4 reverse? heard better~
   
3. 01:20:952 (1) - suggest two 1/2 sliders but not a 3/4 reverse due to vocal
   

[Normal]

1. 01:07:238 (4) - how about to split it into two sliders like this:
   
2. 01:29:960 - perhaps the break is unnecessary that's a long gap, so i prefer break
3. 02:34:666 (1,2) - compared with current beat, i may choose 2/1 + note like this
   

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.
Advertisement: New season (6) available!

[General]
<Tags> "Album" don't really do much good here. Remove.
<Tags> "Younique" already in artist. Remove.
<Tags> No commas please. Spaces are the separators for the searching algorithm. If you put commas in it will be taken as part of a tag and stuff might go bonkers.
<Combo Color> Grey and white blends too much into the background image. will reconsider
Whenever possible, reshape sliders with sharp turns so that the sharp turn(s) is/are on a tick. Enhances playability, especially in lower diffs.

[Normal]
One of the better quality Easy/Normal without sticking crudely to some stock uniform rhythm, and actually following the music's rhythm
00:51:809 (1,2,3,4) - Could fix symmetry. Try moving (2), (3)
01:30:595 - Too short of a break. Try adding lone circles at the vocal's "STEP" fix with my own way
01:36:380 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could fix symmetry.
02:33:809 (4) - Suddenly crooked slider? to make the flow slightly better
<Combo Color> 03:00:166 (2,3) - Just over them guy's silver/grey pants, approach circle almost obscured.

[Hard]
Too many circles under sliders. Separate whenever possible.

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my queue >_</

[MAX]

1. 00:09:809 (4) - this 1/6 repeat suddenly for me..i know it's fit with the music.but it's hard to catch with the next 2 note. maybe 00:10:238 (5,6) - don't stack ?
2. 00:16:809 (6,7) - ^same as above
3. 00:17:523 (1) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766044 more pertty imo~ the current one fits the song more, i think
4. 00:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - i feel this 4 can be far snap..maybe do some jumpy is good~ intentional, i want to keep it like that, but i will reconsider
5. 00:38:095 (1) - the new partten start. try place x256/y80 :3?
6. 00:39:595 (6,7) - i don't like how you stack this...why don't keep snap 1.0x with (5)?
7. 00:42:273 (4) - this can be dele. no vocal here..i think you just want to stream it ._." i want the follow the instrument
8. 00:44:095 (3) - nooooo this..keep 1/4(1/2) slider or nc it! nc
9. 00:50:095 (7) - nc here? i prefer long combo in this diff
10. 00:53:523 (3) - ^ ^
11. 00:56:952 (5) - ^ ^
12. 00:58:023 (3,4) - dele (4) and let(3)start 00:58:238 - more fit you do in 00:48:381 - to00:56:952 - part. this one is intentional, to accent the part before the spinner
13. 01:08:095 (3,4) - no stack? will reconsider
14. 01:14:095 (1) - dele nc and nc in 01:14:523 (2) - ,(cuz you make the partten 01:13:880 (10,1) - and 01:14:523 (2,3,4) - together)
15. 01:17:523 (6) - nc
16. 01:20:952 (5) - nc
17. 01:22:238 (1) - too sudden -__ -" i want to don't why?
18. 01:25:238 (3) - just repeat once and note? i'd like to keep it
19. 01:38:095 (9) - nc
20. 02:02:095 (4) - nc
21. 02:05:523 (4) - nc
22. 02:05:738 (2,3) - twitch this more fit the vocal imo
23. (02:05:523 (1) - to 02:07:238 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766061 ?)
24. 02:07:238 (9) - miss nc? intentional
25. 02:11:416 (2) - dele this..
26. 02:23:738 (7) - same 00:58:023 (3,4) - .
27. 02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ,02:36:595 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - hmm.i have nothing to say- _- but you are too crazy i also think about that x.x but i can't find any other replacement except spinner
28. 02:40:666 (5) - miss nc
29. 03:10:666 (4) - 03:14:095 (3) - 03:17:523 (5) - 03:20:952 (4) - 03:27:595 (4) - 03:31:238 (5) - miss nc here.
    
30. you should keep nc every 1~2 long white line.but no limit it..NC can notice people in some new partten/changed.my combo pattern maybe vary, ex: i don't nc 03:10:666 (4) - because it's still a part of these 03:08:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in some pattern i nc every 2 big white tick, but in other pattern i nc every 3 big white tick

[Hard]

1. hmm no big problem in this diff i think.
   just need to consistent your newcombo length.(i won't comment more like nc proplem~)
   
2. 00:39:809 (5) - no...you should keep 1/2(1/4)slider, or NC it o_o
   (i perfer you do same like 00:43:238 (5) - ) will reconsider, though i prefer the current one
3. 00:51:381 - add a note?
4. 01:41:523 (5) - nc...
5. 02:17:309 (6) - maybe stack with next (1)'s head better

[Normal]

1. lazy to mod Normal diff sorry_(:3」∠)_

GL!

happy623 wrote:

testplay request
Younique Unit - MAXSTEP [MAX]

1PC~

(sorry for playing bad XD those streams I hit 100 is mine bad, not the map problem

nice diff I suppose, good luck

no kd

1. personally i don't like the quality of the mp3 ;_;

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove the clap it fits not really well
2. 00:20:095 (3) - add clap for consistency with (1)
3. 00:50:095 (3,4) - the flow between this sliders is very bad why don't you try to make something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:666 (1) - add a finish
5. 01:19:238 (1,2) - try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:21:809 (2,3) - try to don't stack cicles in the easier diff of the mapset
7. 01:25:238 (2,3) - same^
8. 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - why don't you try to make a star here like:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:20:952 (1) - i think to sliders like this one you can give a softer form like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:238 (1) - add a clap
3. 00:35:309 (2,3) - the flow is not the best here, why don't you try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:095 (1,2,3) - since this pattern is like this ^ one make the same here too
5. 00:58:881 (1) - finish
6. 01:19:023 (6) - new combo here

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove clap
2. 00:13:881 (11) - i think the new combo is better here

Lally wrote:

Hi req from : Lally's Modding Queue (๑╹ω╹๑) ~

o3o = comments/suggestions
o3o = normal things

[General]

1. personally i don't like the quality of the mp3 ;_;

[Normal]

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove the clap it fits not really well
2. 00:20:095 (3) - add clap for consistency with (1)
3. 00:50:095 (3,4) - the flow between this sliders is very bad why don't you try to make something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:666 (1) - add a finish
5. 01:19:238 (1,2) - try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:21:809 (2,3) - try to don't stack cicles in the easier diff of the mapset
7. 01:25:238 (2,3) - same^
8. 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - why don't you try to make a star here like:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:20:952 (1) - i think to sliders like this one you can give a softer form like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:238 (1) - add a clap
3. 00:35:309 (2,3) - the flow is not the best here, why don't you try something like: this one is intentional jumps, but i will reconsider
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:095 (1,2,3) - since this pattern is like this ^ one make the same here too ^
5. 00:58:881 (1) - finish
6. 01:19:023 (6) - new combo here

[MAX]

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove clap
2. 00:13:881 (11) - i think the new combo is better here

good luck o3o/

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello, my dear.

[General]

02:31:238 (1) - is not needed Kiai i think it has the emphasis, so i added only a kiai burst

[Normal]

00:07:666 (2,3) - on 1 grid down, 00:09:381 (2) - on 3 grid up and on 2 grid left, 00:09:809 (3) - on 3 grid up and on 3 grid left. done
00:18:381 (1,2,3) - on 2 grid up
01:27:809 (1,2,3,4) - its play better http://puu.sh/34yrr.jpg
01:39:809 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I advise to center .... 01:40:452 (2) - the end of the slider to raise a little like this http://puu.sh/34yAx.jpg .
01:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yBd.jpg
01:44:523 (1,2,3,4) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yDZ.jpg (and 01:46:666 (4) - on 1 grid up, he is a little lower than the 3 )

[Hard]

01:27:381 (2,3) - spacing
01:40:666 (3) - finish slider here 01:40:913 and 01:41:095 (x) - add cirle
03:33:166 (1) - move here 03:33:809 (1) - finish here 03:36:381 ----- 03:33:166 (6) - add slider (start 03:33:166 - finish 03:33:381 ) 03:33:595 (1) - add circle
00:58:666 (1) - remove note. start here spinner. i'd like to keep it

[MAX]

00:58:666 (8) - start here spinner

I wish you luck. map and song is very good

bye my dear

384059043 wrote:

hi :>
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE

[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.

* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.

* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.

* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.

* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226

* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint. will consider

---------


[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.

* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.

* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.

* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.

* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.

* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?

* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good! thank you :>

---------


[MAX]
-Setting-

-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz. intentional, to emphasis the loud noise at 00:25:238 -

* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:

list

* 02:01:238 (3) - fixed this one, i think
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

You can choose some of them to fix.

---------


The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements!

Good luck! :3

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY

neonat wrote:

MAX

00:40:988 - add a note i want to keep the current pattern
00:51:166 - ^
00:58:666 (1) - shift this to start at 01:00:381 and end at 01:01:881 and map more from 00:58:666 to 01:00:166 - something like this:

01:42:916 - add a note nope, to follow the vocal
02:07:452 - ^ intentional
02:23:738 (7) - slider end at 02:23:952 and repeat till 02:24:166
03:30:595 - add a note

Hika wrote:

OMG DID YOU REALLY MAP THIS
automatic rank plz

Nicola12 wrote:

So this is my first mod.

MAX

00:09:809 (1,2,3) - Why are those three notes differently spaced? It looks kinda wierd in my Opinion and doesn't make any sense. idk, i use distance snap and this is what i got because i use 1/3 in this one
00:25:238 (2,3) - I don't think the jump there is necessary.
01:13:880 (10,11) - ^
02:28:666 (1,2,3,4) - It feels kinda wrong to me that those don't have the same slider velocity as those at 02:32:952 (5,6,7,8) even if they're the same i don't think so, the previous one follow the music, and the second one follow the vocal
02:34:666 (1) - It would be a nice effect if you made this slider be slower because it would fit the music - just a suggestion though.you are genius

Zweib wrote:

Hi~ from my M4M queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Some patterns may differ from my understanding for "good-looking" but the way you arrange the objects and sound effect is really careful lol.
   Failed to give any valuable advice.orz
   Star~

Normal

1. 00:37:238 (3) - move to(288,376)
2. 01:08:095 (5) - this arc may need further fixing

Hard

1. 01:42:809 (6,7,2,4) - positions of (6)(7)(2)(4) are not regular

intentional

Max

1. 00:29:523 (1) - um...I think it's hard to form a good shape for long slider. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   intentional, the shape kinda resemble the Younique Unit logo, but i may reconsider about this
2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - remove NC of (1) and add NC to (3)?

Good luck~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Helloo ~
You requested via forums ~


[Normal]
00:22:238 (3) - Blanket (1) ?

00:26:095 (3) - ^
00:31:666 (2) - Move one grid right.
00:32:523 (3) - Two grids up.
00:33:380 (4) - Three grids left.
00:43:238 (4) - Stack properly. i think i already did
00:57:381 (2) - New combo.
01:44:523 (1) - Move to x:284 y:240 and move (2) to x:164 y:120. It should form a triangle.

02:23:523 (3) - Line with (1) nope, i don't want the formations to be too linear
03:27:809 (3) - x:212 y:220
03:28:666 (4) - Move this about 2 grids down if you did the above.


[Hard]
- What happened to distance snap? You should still keep your spacing consistent,
- Approach rate -2 It's currently too high. the rhythm itself isn't really hard, the position also, so i prefer higher AR, since less than AR 7 make it hard to read because the circles appears slowly
00:35:309 (2) - Place at x:300 y:220 intentional jump
00:35:523 (3) - Copy (1) and ctrl + J and ctrl + G and move to x:212 y:264
It should look something like this ~

00:38:095 (1,2,3) - Do the same as above. i will reconsider, but nice suggestion :3
01:24:381 (5) - New combo.
02:16:666 (5) - Blanket the slider end of (4)

02:17:523 (1,2,3) - What about something like this?

02:20:523 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:952 (6) - New Combo.


[MAX]
- Approach Rate -1 will consider, since AR 8 make it no fun
00:09:809 (1) - Remove this combo to match 00:08:095 (4) or place a new combo on 00:08:095 (4) this one is intentional, because it change to following the electronic music, i think
00:16:809 (1) - Place where 00:14:952 (5) was.
00:26:095 (1) - Remove new combo or place a new combo on 00:22:666 (5)
00:44:095 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:47:523 (9) - One grid left.
00:48:166 (10,11,1) - Place where (7) was placed.
02:07:452 - Add a circle.
02:12:380 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:35:523 (1) - ^ no, because the slider velocity change
03:24:381 (1) - ^


Good luck with your map ~

HabiHolic wrote:

From My queue~

[Normal]

00:08:952 (1) - Remove Finish ok
00:10:666 (1) - ^ ok
00:12:381 (1) - ^ ok
00:20:952 (1) - Finish ok
00:24:381 (1) - Clap no, doesn't fit
01:15:809 (1) - Remove Nc no, it's downbeat
02:32:095 (2,3) - Hmm Try This? i don't want to make it too linear



02:36:381 (3) - Ctrl + G? ok

[Hard]
00:08:952 (5) - NC? ok
01:39:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - nononono!! Photo Check fix with my own style, the distance is quite far with that



Ok
No Pick Good Map~
For Ranked go go~!

• 
  00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly
  00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
  00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider?
  00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
  00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical?
  00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here?
  00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe?
  00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it
  00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto
  01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away
  01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat?
  01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles
  01:43:023 (4) - ditto
  01:44:738 (4) - ditto
  02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue
  02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat
  03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these
  03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times!
  03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg)
  00:08:095 (1) - NC
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:14:952 (5) - ^
  00:45:809 (4) - ^
  00:46:666 (7) - ^
  00:49:666 (3) - ^
  00:53:523 (4) - ^
  00:56:523 (3) - ^
  01:25:238 (3) - ^
  01:27:595 (5) - ^
  01:28:238 (1) - no NC
  02:02:738 (5) - NC
  02:03:166 (8) - ^
  02:06:381 (6) - ^
  02:07:238 (11) - ^
  02:07:666 (1) - no NC
  02:08:845 (6) - NC
  02:09:166 (8) - ^
  02:09:595 (11) - ^
  02:13:238 (4) - ^
  02:15:380 (3) - ^
  02:22:238 (3) - ^
  02:29:523 (3) - ^
  02:32:952 (5) - ^
  03:17:095 (3) - ^
  03:20:952 (4) - ^
  03:24:381 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
  03:31:238 (6) - NC

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Normal]

00:12:381 (1) - In the opposite way it ruin the symmetry, so no

03:02:095 (5) - Opposite way. If so, move 03:03:595 (1,2,3,4) on the right ok fix a bit

[Hard]

00:50:095 (3) - Line with 00:48:381 (1) fixed

[MAX]

00:10:238 (2) - Distance it already is

01:28:238 (1) - Stack with 01:26:952 (4) fix

Good Luck and Star!

Bites wrote:

MAX


u pro monster

• 
  00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly fix
  00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ fix
  00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
  00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider? fix
  00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
  00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical? ok change the shape, but keep the SV change to emphasize the scream
  00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here? ok i will think about it
  00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe? fix
  00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it fix
  00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto fix
  01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away fix
  01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat? hmm i'll reconsider. i'm trying to improvise the beat actually. if more people point this out i will change it
  01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles fix
  01:43:023 (4) - ditto fix
  01:44:738 (4) - ditto fix
  02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue intentional
  02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat fix
  03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these fix
  03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times! fix
  03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg) fix
  00:08:095 (1) - NC
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:14:952 (5) - ^
  00:45:809 (4) - ^
  00:46:666 (7) - ^
  00:49:666 (3) - ^
  00:53:523 (4) - ^
  00:56:523 (3) - ^
  01:25:238 (3) - ^
  01:27:595 (5) - ^
  01:28:238 (1) - no NC
  02:02:738 (5) - NC
  02:03:166 (8) - ^
  02:06:381 (6) - ^
  02:07:238 (11) - ^
  02:07:666 (1) - no NC
  02:08:845 (6) - NC
  02:09:166 (8) - ^
  02:09:595 (11) - ^
  02:13:238 (4) - ^
  02:15:380 (3) - ^
  02:22:238 (3) - ^
  02:29:523 (3) - ^
  02:32:952 (5) - ^
  03:17:095 (3) - ^
  03:20:952 (4) - ^
  03:24:381 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
  03:31:238 (6) - NC
  
  for the NC i only follow some because it ruin my consistency (mostly i nc every two downbeat in this diff) and to warn the player that some rhythm change from 1/4 to 1/3

Cobra wrote:

This needs to be ranked ;D
I'll race you muahahah

CDFA wrote:

HANZ UP IN DE EERR

Insane:
00:14:952 (5) - Add clap on beginning of slider fix
00:17:523 (1) - HRRNNGGHH AHH THIS SLOWDOWN lool
00:46:238 (3) - This note is placed weirdly fix
00:48:380 (1) - This slider looks weird like this o-o. It's not really parallel nor does it seem to be part of a notable pattern fix
00:50:095 (5) - ^ Like I see the M shape but like the distance is too far for me to really note it as such ok will reconsider
01:34:880 (1) - Remove claps nuuu i want to keep that clap pattern
01:44:095 (3) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835089 fix
02:01:238 (3) - Not symmetrical. Make sure that when you CTRL + H it, the points are equal as if no movement is done. i'm not really good at sliders, but i will try to fix >w<
02:14:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's with the random difficulty jump? It was all streamy before and now it's like one of my "insanes" owo. i don't even realize it lol. but yeah, now i realize it was weird that the previous part was streamy then the next part is not. ok i will try to fix this
02:34:666 (1) - EEEEP! loool
03:08:952 (1) - Lower the first sliderpoint and the endpoint fix
03:10:666 (4) - ^ fix

Hard:
00:26:095 (3) - Lower the second sliderpoint fix
00:39:809 (5) - This might just be better as a curve will consider
01:02:095 (1,2,3) - Put this on the Y axis fix
01:07:238 (5) - Lower the first sliderpoint

Easy:
It's ok uguu

unyuu.

Shinchaechae wrote:

Uguu my mod is not needed ;__;
Great map, can't wait to see it ranked

popner wrote:

Offset check as request:
offset -14 (367)

Harez wrote:

Easy done
http://puu.sh/3zSTz.rar

Also.. you forgot to fix the Preview Time

Harez wrote:

8) you forgot to add my nickname to Tags

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Harez wrote:

8) you forgot to add my nickname to Tags

triple update for this, thank you for reminding me :'3

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

i love you <3

yurunneram wrote:

Har'EZ

00:38:938 (1) - Do something creative with this slider ne? ^^ Make it pretty~ okay xD

00:51:367 (1) - The rhythm here is slightly wrong. I would put a hitcircle at 00:51:367 and a your slider (without repeat) at 00:51:795. it's because of phrasing IMO it's fine so no changes

01:24:367 (3) - Move to x268 y112 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes) done

03:00:367 (2) - Move to x284 y244 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes) done

Omg this diff has improved by a lot since I last saw it It's really a lot better than the previous version! Great job I found it rather fun~ improved a lot?

Harez wrote:

improved a lot?

jonathanlfj wrote:

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[Har'EZ]
Artist is broken in this diff, please fix it i dunno how it happens, maybe error when i puush the .osu, fixed anyway, and i will upload as .rar file
01:08:509 (4) - put a clap on the start, there is an extra clap here in the music done
01:26:081 (1,2,3) - do a horizontal flip on this combo, makes the flow from 01:24:367 (3) better done
01:36:367 (1,3) - position these two so they dont overlap each other moved around
02:11:724 (1) - a finish on this spinner would sound really nice oh kay
02:24:367 (1,3,1) - missing claps on these objects done
02:31:250 - snap this green line to 02:31:331 :< it's 1/16 snap green line, but okay
03:02:081 (3) - probably want a NC here to differentiate the verses done
03:19:224 (1) - missing clap on endokay
03:32:509 (3) - dont stack this; this is the very end of the map, and since you never did stacks like this before, its gonna freak out newbies since they wont be prepared for a surprise like this. Place it on the y-axis and let 03:31:224 (2) create a blanket around it oh okay

gyuwife wrote:

*summoned*

Har'EZ


... ini apa fixed

00:13:224 (1) - clap at slider's tail no
00:34:652 (1) - finish at slider's head no
00:50:081 (2) - http://puu.sh/3Lb3B.jpg what do you want point?
01:05:509 (1,2,3) - bikin simetris http://puu.sh/3Lb4S.jpg what the...
01:24:367 (3) - clap at slider's tail done
01:35:938 (3) - remove clap? ga cocok sama lagunya nah
01:38:081 (3) - mending dibikin jadi repeated slider trus breaknya mulai dari 01:46:652 i think it's wrong note, but i know what are you mind
02:11:724 (1) - finish already
02:26:938 (3) - clap di slider's head okay
02:27:795 (1) - clap already
02:39:795 (3,4) - this is really hard for beginners, since we don't know when the slider will end i think it's okay, at least it doesn't end at 1/2 or 1/3 snapping
02:41:509 (1) - finish done
03:12:367 (1) - clap at slider's tail done
03:14:081 (2) - ^ ^
03:19:224 (1) - ^ ^
03:31:224 (2,3) - mendingan unstack already

jonathanlfj wrote:

Rechecking as requested

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
good

[Normal]
AR+1 makes the diff easier to read imo
00:27:795 (1) - move this a bit left to get a better blanket around 00:27:367 (4)
00:38:509 (2) - forgot clap on repeat
00:40:652 (1) - ^ on start
00:45:795 (2,3) - reposition these so the "M" slider is perfectly centered for a better effect somehow fixed
01:26:081 (1) - do a smooth curve on this slider, makes the flow onto the next note better
01:46:224 (3,4) - how bout stack these two to get a symmetry effect?
02:11:509 (3) - forgot clap on start
02:36:367 (3) - there is no music to support the long slider with whistle here, how bout take off the whistle and make this a 1/1 repeat slider i want to make it a repitition of (1)
03:05:509 (1) - forgot clap on spinner
03:25:652 (4) - spacing violation
everything else fixed

[Hard]
00:47:081 (6) - why a red node on the straight slider?
00:58:438 (6) - maybe an NC here to indicate start of new verse
01:08:509 (7) - add a clap here sounds very good
01:28:224 (1,2,3) - the spacing change here is a little bit intense for a Hard, use <2.0x spacing on 01:28:652 (2,3)
01:56:081 (1) - make the curve more smooth on this slider
02:32:509 (4) - blanket this properly
02:58:438 - add a note here stacked on 02:58:652 (1), this keeps consistency with all the stacked combos later it's kinda weird for me to start it at 02:58:438 - , so i choose to keep
03:12:367 (1,2,3) - try to perfectly center this, the effect would be much better
everything else fixed

[MAX]
00:13:224 (6) - missing clap
00:16:759 (1) - unsnapped slider repeat and end (should be snapped in 1/8) i think it should be 1/3
00:35:509 (3) - missing clap on start
00:56:724 (4) - feel that the jump is too intense here since there is no change in music that indicates such a large jump, maybe use <2.5x or 2.0x spacing
01:08:509 (4) - add a clap sounds pretty cool
01:29:081 (3) - in contrast to before i was actually looking for a more intense jump on this , try a spacing of 2.0x with the previous circle
01:38:081 (1,3) - feels better if you follow the vocals here and shorten them to the blue line
02:07:224 (6) - NC should be here instead of 02:07:652 (1) (you can use a jump here to indicate start of new verse)
02:40:117 (2) - unsnapped slider, should be at 02:40:081 with 1/6 snap
02:40:974 (2) - ^ at 02:40:938
03:00:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1 grid down to align with 03:00:152 (11)
03:08:938 (1,2,3,4) - perfectly center this looks a lot better imo
03:28:438 (7) - NC here to keep consistent with the NC patters you did in similar sections before
everything else fixed

The mapset is a lot better than when i first modded this (clean remap i suppose?), you should go find BATs now to see if you can push the mapset further
Good luck~

gyuwife wrote:

*summoned*

Normal

03:24:367 (3) - clap at slider's tail fix

MAX

02:22:224 (3,4) - dibikin jump kayak 00:56:509 (3,4) -
02:35:509 (1,2,3,4) - dibikin slider spam kayaknya asik
all fix

TheVileOne wrote:

M4M

General

Har'EZ
Spent more time on this difficulty than I probably should have. There are some minor spacing differences that should be taken care of and there are some patterns that I felt are flawed. There is nothing serious though.

00:03:795 (1) - Add hitsound.
00:34:652 (1,2) - Flawed transition. This part is flawed for two reasons: 00:34:652 (1) - 's curve doesn't point towards the next slider in a favorable way and 00:35:509 (2) - 's curve is strangely elongated. That part is fine, but it could be rotated. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/898415
Slider 2's coordinates: x 28 y 300 | x 116 y 268 | x 220 y 284
00:40:224 (2,3) - Please use curves that start and end roughly on the same level. This pattern looks bad going into the next combo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/898432 Achieved with grid snap off and changing beat snap divisor to 1/2th.
01:07:224 (3) - Looks weird being higher up as compared to 1. Try placing this at a more even level to 1 so that the symmetry doesn't look lopsided.
01:14:081 (1,2,3) - Grid snap off and fix this minor spacing difference.
01:20:509 (2,3) - Grid snap off and reapply distance snap to this. (Looks too close to previous part)
01:32:938 (1,2) - ^ (0.79 -> 0.80)
02:32:938 (3,4,1) - form a straight line with 3,4,1?
02:36:367 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal.
03:14:081 (2) - The blanket is not perfect. Make it better by moving the red point to x 117 y 103
This song is annoying me. I'll finish the mod another day.

TheVileOne wrote:

M4M

Normal
It needs some polish. It's mostly fine.

00:03:795 (1) - Why is this a finish and not a clap?
00:18:367 (1,2,3) - Sort of simplistic. I suggest using this timeline http://puu.sh/3PNgK.jpg i like this, but not the slider
00:25:224 (2) - Missing hitsound.
00:28:652 (2) - ^
00:44:938 (1,2) - Repeat sliders don't fit this part very well. I think it sounds and plays better if you ignore the vocals on the red ticks. http://puu.sh/3PNLS.jpg <- I like this a lot more. prefer the current one
00:46:652 (4) - Bizarre slider shape. it's M-shaped
01:19:867 (2,3) - align better not going to keep it too linear-ish
01:27:367 (2,1) - Too close.
02:00:367 (1) - Start higher than 2? It seems weird when both are on the same level. http://puu.sh/3POeU.jpg
02:34:652 (1,2,3) - Can be improved. Make sure the note is as centered as it can be and both sliders are equal distance from the centered note. Consider adjusting the slider shapes to wrap more closely around the center note. kinda hard to make it with the current one ds, but i tried
03:10:652 (2) - Should be more down and to the right to line up with the previous slider. Try x 45 y 267
03:11:509 (3,1) - Wrap better around the repeat?
03:22:652 (1) - Missing hitsound.
03:28:652 (4) - Try to follow the curve of 3?

This song is annoying me. I'll finish the mod another day.