General- Change Artist Unicode to
유니크 유닛 probably according to
this but the hangul wasn't in the youtube vid title so uhh... xD
and "Younique Unit" is supposed to be "
YOUNIQUE UNIT"
- I'm getting
offset around
365-367.
It'd be cool to double-check with someoneNormal01:08:952 (1) - Delete Finish on tail, it's a really subtle beat here imo; If you really wanted a Finish around this part, I see it on (2) better
01:10:666 (3,5) - ^
01:15:809 (1) - Finish on head
01:22:666 (1) - ^, im hearing lots of cymbals
01:34:880 (2) - i don't really hear this following anything & also since you seem to be following the flow of the vocals more, a single note on the white tick would work fine~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84697401:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - if possible, it'd be neat to center this whole pattern =v=
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846982 (you'll have to adjust the notes before and after ofc)
02:27:809 (1) - Clap
02:32:095 (2,3) - you could angle these downwards so the pattern isn't so "clustered"
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846988 Here's the code if you like:
SPOILER32,188,152095,2,0,L|164:242,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,366,152952,2,0,L|24:316,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,153809,2,0,B|100:141|100:141|148:133,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head (or maybe soft finish) would sound cool
03:22:666 (1,3) - not really feeling the 90 degree angles here...a bit strong-looking after all the curved sliders
Hard00:39:809 (5) - Rhythm's a bit awkward, try
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84727700:56:738 (2) - this antijump may cause confusion since there was a 1/4 pattern in the last combo; I'd just stack it on the head of (3)
01:35:095 (4,5,6) - try to equalize this spacing since it's in the same combo & i don't see a reason not to
01:46:666 (5) - this break seems a bit sudden and leaves a gap in the vocals. I can understand leaving this in Normal but I'd suggest you map this out
02:38:095 (1,2,3,4) - Space these out like you did the first time at 02:31:238 (1,2,3,4) -
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head? bgm sounds strong here
03:05:523 (1) - Clap
03:26:095 (1,2) - The reverses emphasize the wrong beat imo, An option is to delete the reverses and fill in the gaps with a more sensible rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847322 something like that
MAX00:09:809 (1,2,3) - linear pattern is a bit ugly, space them out like this or something
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847333 gives a bit more challenge too
00:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a better equilateral triangle than this
00:38:523 (4) - try something like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847346 better cursor flow to (5) imo, take advantage of good blankets i guess =v=
00:52:666 (2) - Clap on head
00:54:381 (5) - Clap
00:59:523 (5) - Clap
00:59:738 (6) - the gap after this felt a bit funny while playing, I'd make a slider from here to the next red tick to follow the held-out vocals
01:44:952 (1) - like i mentioned in Hard, I'd try mapping this out since it's a harder diff
02:18:381 (2) - Clap on head
02:20:095 (4) - ^
03:32:095 (2) - Clap
03:32:952 (1) - Finish
I can see lots of potential jumps and more complicated rhythm patterns. Since it's a lower bpm song, there's lots of room to spread out your notes if possible
Nice job anyways
I saw great improvements
More mods on MAX would be cool
i wouldn't mind rechecking if it's ready