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00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly
00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider?
00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical?
00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here?
00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe?
00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it
00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto
01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away
01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat?
01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles
01:43:023 (4) - ditto
01:44:738 (4) - ditto
02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue
02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat
03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these
03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times!
03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg)
00:08:095 (1) - NC
00:11:523 (4) - ^
00:11:523 (4) - ^
00:14:952 (5) - ^
00:45:809 (4) - ^
00:46:666 (7) - ^
00:49:666 (3) - ^
00:53:523 (4) - ^
00:56:523 (3) - ^
01:25:238 (3) - ^
01:27:595 (5) - ^
01:28:238 (1) - no NC
02:02:738 (5) - NC
02:03:166 (8) - ^
02:06:381 (6) - ^
02:07:238 (11) - ^
02:07:666 (1) - no NC
02:08:845 (6) - NC
02:09:166 (8) - ^
02:09:595 (11) - ^
02:13:238 (4) - ^
02:15:380 (3) - ^
02:22:238 (3) - ^
02:29:523 (3) - ^
02:32:952 (5) - ^
03:17:095 (3) - ^
03:20:952 (4) - ^
03:24:381 (4) - ^
03:27:595 (4) - ^
03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
03:31:238 (6) - NC