hi :>
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE
[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.
* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.
* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.
* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.
* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226
* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint.
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[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.
* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.
* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.
* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.
* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.
* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?
* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good!
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[MAX]
-Setting-
-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz.
* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:
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The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements!
Good luck! :3
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE
[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.
* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.
* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.
* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.
* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226
* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint.
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[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.
* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.
* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.
* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.
* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.
* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?
* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good!
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[MAX]
-Setting-
-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz.
* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:
list
You can choose some of them to fix. * 02:01:238 (3) -
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
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The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements!
Good luck! :3