jaehn215 wrote:

M4M~~

Normal

HP Drain -1 ok
00:52:846 (3) - move x:232 y:192 not changing
00:53:846 (1) - move x:304 y:248^
00:58:846 (1) - remove New Combo ok
01:10:846 (3) - change slider.. not changing
02:14:346 (1) - move 02:14:096 ok fixed

Hard

HP Drain -1 ok
00:43:846 (6) - add New Combo.. ok
01:34:846 (1) - remove New Combo not changing
01:58:846 (3) - ^ ^

Insane

OD -1 keeping
00:19:846 (1) - move x:392 y:72 no change
00:21:096 (6) - move x:240 y:72 ok
00:21:346 (7,8) - move x:392 y:72^
00:40:346 (6) - add New Combo not changing
00:40:846 (1) - remove New Combo ^
01:44:846 (3) - stack (x:120 y:155) ok

GL

0gre wrote:

sorry to be sudden!

Is it possible to make a taiko map for this? or needed?

neonat wrote:

0gre wrote:

sorry to be sudden!

Is it possible to make a taiko map for this? or needed?

I'm not sure, I would need to make a second taiko difficulty, or find one.

0gre wrote:

I dont get it clearly but if necessary,
I can make any difficulties and more than one.

0gre wrote:

done! only ONI at the moment

please check

http://puu.sh/1ZYLN

0gre wrote:

I mainly pick the sound of bit

sometimes put red or blue whether how the vocal goes


I checked few people say fine but I am also not sure..

However would you like to add taiko diffs in your map?
then there may have some modifications to correct.

neonat wrote:

0gre wrote:

I mainly pick the sound of bit

sometimes put red or blue whether how the vocal goes


I checked few people say fine but I am also not sure..

However would you like to add taiko diffs in your map?
then there may have some modifications to correct.

I think it should be fine, since I have the majority of standard difficulties. Go ahead and make changes.

arkemaky wrote:

Hello I came from your modqueue!

Normal
Unsnapped? and Easy, Normal need space to 1.0

Hard
00:09:346 (2) - go to X:160 Y:272 last sliderpoint go to X:88 Y:248
00:11:846 (3,4) - scange to one long slider
00:17:846 (5) - to long one slider
Ar:7
OD:8

insane
Ar:8
OD:9
Drain:5

Sorry, I can't mod well.

Mintice wrote:

The song is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!
Can I make Easy?

neonat wrote:

Mintice wrote:

The song is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!
Can I make Easy?

But my normal difficulty is easy-ish
It's quite jam packed with difficulties as well too >.<

Mintice wrote:

Then how about a normal?

neonat wrote:

Mintice wrote:

Then how about a normal?

Maybe the next SeeU song I map. I'm satisfied with the difficulties on this song

scanter wrote:

[General]
If you're not use storyboarding, removal letterbox during breaks

[Normal]
00:12:346 (5) - Move x:332, y:232 ok
00:12:846 (6) - Move x:236, y:212 ok
00:13:346 (7) - Move x:128, y:236 moved to x:140 y:260 instead
00:16:846 (1) - NC Delete ok
00:17:846 (3) - NC ^
00:18:846 (1) - NC Delete ^
00:19:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle added at the end
00:27:846 (4,5) - ^ no change, this part is softer than 00:59:846 (4,5,6,7)
00:32:346 (4) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's first and add whistle on slider's end. ok
00:35:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle ^
00:37:846 (1) - Clear hit-finish no change
00:43:846 (2,3,4) - Add on hit-whistle ^
00:51:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle added on (3)
00:59:846 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ok
01:07:346 (3) - Add on hit-whistle at slider's end ^
01:08:346 (4) - Add on hit-whistle added in the middle
01:20:346 (5) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's end ok, it disappeared anyway lol
01:26:346 (2) - Clear hit-finish no change
01:41:346 (6) - Move x:352, y:136 ok
01:47:846 (3,4) - Add on hit-whistle added on start of (3)
01:55:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle slider's first ok
01:56:846 (4) - ^ ^
01:58:346 (2) - Clear hit-whistle no change


[Hard]
00:11:346 (2) - Move x:460, y:48 no change
00:15:346 (3) - Move x:504, y:88 moved to x:508 y:84
00:26:846 (2) - Move x:479, y:242 moved to x:480 y:248
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance x1.2? fixed somewhat
00:56:846 (4) - Move x:193, y:248 ok
02:06:346 (1,2) - How about fit verticality like this? 02:02:346 (1,2) I made both horizontal
02:23:346 (3) - Change hit-whistle sound. k..

[Insane]
00:10:846 (1) - NC delete? k
00:31:846 (5) - NC not changing
00:38:346 (2) - Delete whistle sound. k
00:37:846 (1) - Maybe add on here. nah it's fine as it is I guess
00:42:846 (1) - NC delete? ^
00:45:846 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:346 (2) - ^ ?
01:13:096 (6,7) - Move x:240, y:320 ok
01:17:346 (8) - Add hit-whistle sound. ^
01:26:846 (3) - How about makes same curvy 01:27:596 (5) ? cloned it
01:29:846 (3) - Add hit-whistle sound on slider's first and 01:30:346 ok
01:39:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move x:260, y:156 oooooo ok
01:50:346 (2,3) - Move x:161, y:216 no change

scanter wrote:

[Origin]
00:13:846 (1,2) - Ctrl + H No thanks
00:18:846 (2,3) - Move x:308, y:180 Done
00:23:846 (1) - Move x:192, y:152 Done
00:29:846 (1) - Ctrl + G? Yes
00:31:846 (1) - Move x:320, y:228 Done
00:33:846 (1) - looks a little stack on 00:34:846 (2,3) How about more gentle curve? example is this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607695 Done
00:58:346 (2) - Move x:184, y:192? Yes
01:04:346 (2) - Add Normal sampleset sound. Done
01:07:846 (5) - NC Thanks
01:34:846 (3,4) - Ctrl + H , J this looking more better. Done
01:37:096 (2) - Makes more curvy. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607698 and Add on hit-whistle Done
01:41:596 (8) - Move 2 grids down. looks better. Actually, then it wouldn't match to where the other slider is. SO completely changed the location
01:41:846 (1) - Move 1 grid up. same as.

lkx_Shore wrote:

hi

Too distorted slider is bad.
plz add 2/4clap/whistle in your map

[Normal]
00:09:846 (1) - add whistle in slider head ok
00:13:846 (1) - ^ ^
00:17:846 (1) - ^ no change
00:31:346 (3) - add whistle in slider tail ok
00:32:346 (4) - add whistle in slider head,remove tail whistle ^
00:39:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:45:846 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:346 (5) - use same spacing(0.7x) Spacing changed
02:01:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head added on 02:03:346 (6)
02:05:846 (4) - add whistle no change
02:13:846 (5) - ^ ok

[Hard]
od-1
hp+1
00:15:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:35:846 (1,2,3) - add whistle in slider head ok
00:37:346 (4) -remove whistle no change
00:41:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:43:846 (1) - add whistle ok
00:45:846 (1) - add finish no change
00:49:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:51:846 (8) - newcombo ok
01:04:346 (5) - add whistle no change
01:04:846 (6) - remove whistle ^
01:07:846 (4,5) - add whistle in slider head ok
01:43:846 (6) - add whistle in slider head no change

[Insane]
hp+2
OD-2
00:09:846 (5) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:22:846 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:846 (1) - add whistle ^
00:24:346 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:26:596 (3) - add whistle in slider tail ^
00:27:346 (5) - add whistle added on 00:27:846 instead
00:28:846 (3) - add wshstle in slider tail changed
00:30:846 (3) - add whistle no change
00:31:846 (5,6) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:43:846 (1,2) - ^ changed
00:45:846 (1) - add finish no change
01:03:846 (5) - add whistle ^
01:04:096 (6) - add whistle in slider Exhumation ^

1. タイミングセットアップを開いて赤線のところのAudioを開いてCustom1 から defaultに変更して下さい
2. 00:37:846 - ここの音がNormalに戻る緑線についてなのですが　この場所だと少し早く叩いたりするとSoftの音が出てしまうことがあるので
   00:37:814 - ここに引いて下さい
3. 02:15:846 - ^と同じく02:15:814 - ここへ移動して下さい

1. 00:10:596 (2) - k
2. 00:18:596 (2) - ^
3. 02:15:846 - 鬼と同じく速度0.90
4. 02:18:346 - 2連消してここからk k d

1. 00:10:596 (2) - k
2. 00:21:846 (3) - D
3. 01:57:346 (1) - ここはfinishいらないかな
4. 02:15:846 - 変速するなら0.90ぐらいでいいと思います 0.75は見えづらいです

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
via in game chat :3

[General]

1. タイミングセットアップを開いて赤線のところのAudioを開いてCustom1 から defaultに変更して下さい ✔
2. 00:37:846 - ここの音がNormalに戻る緑線についてなのですが　この場所だと少し早く叩いたりするとSoftの音が出てしまうことがあるので
   00:37:814 - ここに引いて下さい ✔　なるほどw
3. 02:15:846 - ^と同じく02:15:814 - ここへ移動して下さい ✔

[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:596 (2) - k ✔
2. 00:18:596 (2) - ^ ✔
3. 02:15:846 - 鬼と同じく速度0.90 ✔
4. 02:18:346 - 2連消してここからk k d ✖ Vocal 沿いなので、急に変えるのは；

[0gre's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:10:596 (2) - k ✔
2. 00:21:846 (3) - D ✖ 少し音が弱い気がします
3. 01:57:346 (1) - ここはfinishいらないかな ✔
4. 02:15:846 - 変速するなら0.90ぐらいでいいと思います 0.75は見えづらいです✔ これは助かります！

nice map~
good luck!

1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable
2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
2. OD -2? seems hard for Normal
   - 00:57:346 (6) - add note here? feels empty
   - 01:05:346 (4) -

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
2. OD -1?
   
   - 00:16:846 ~ 00:21:596 - why no whistles here?
   - 01:07:846 (4) - NC and add finish on start
   - 01:33:846 (1) - whistle on end
   - 01:48:346 (7) - NC ( 01:55:846 (1) - or delete NC here )

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
2. OD -2
   
   - 00:28:846 (3) - this slider's repeat arrow was hidden imo
   - 00:31:846 (5) - whistle on start?
   - 00:42:346 (5) - whistle here ( for consistence )
   - 00:43:846 (1,2) - delete whistle on end and adding it start ( ^ )
   - 00:49:846 (5) - delete whsitle 00:50:346 (7) - add here
   - 00:52:846 (1) - ^ on end it hears weired
   - 01:02:846 (2,3) - stack perfectly?
   - 01:29:846 (3) - why suddenly increase DS? it feels weired when i'm playing here
   - 01:41:846 (1) - Use custom 3 hit normal on start
   - 01:45:846 (1) - ^ and use SV 1.5 plz ( or using SV 0.5 01:41:846 (1) - here )
   - 01:52:096 (7) - another repeat arrow issue ~
   - 02:21:846 (6) - NC?
   - 02:22:846 (10,11) - delete whistle on slider body , hears better

1. 00:05:846 - plz delete inherited point since already has timing point here and set volume to 30% is bette than current
   
   - 00:10:846 (2,3,4,5) - how about making better blanket? -nazi
   - 00:18:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^
   - 00:57:596 - mute this part is better ( using volume 5% )
   - 01:22:096 (1,2,5,6) - mute these notes plz
   - 01:32:846 (5) - hmm maybe NC here?
   - 01:40:846 (5) - ^
   - 01:45:846 (1) - using custom 3 hitnormal is nice on start
   - 002:04:846 (3,5) - i'm recommend to add NC here ( SV changing )
   - 02:17:846 (8) - NC
   - 02:21:846 (8) - ^
   - 01:57:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much overmapped points here try other pattern plz

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable ok
2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )

[Normal]

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
2. OD -2? seems hard for Normal reduced by 1
   - 00:57:346 (6) - add note here? feels empty 00:56:846 added a note
   - 01:05:346 (4) - leaving it empty

[Hard]

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff reduced volume
2. OD -1? leaving it the same
   
   - 00:16:846 ~ 00:21:596 - why no whistles here? added some whistles
   - 01:07:846 (4) - NC and add finish on start sure
   - 01:33:846 (1) - whistle on end prefer it without
   - 01:48:346 (7) - NC ( 01:55:846 (1) - or delete NC here ) deleted NC

[Insane]

1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff reduced volume
2. OD -2 -1
   
   - 00:28:846 (3) - this slider's repeat arrow was hidden imo changed position
   - 00:31:846 (5) - whistle on start? no whistle
   - 00:42:346 (5) - whistle here ( for consistence ) ok
   - 00:43:846 (1,2) - delete whistle on end and adding it start ( ^ ) ^
   - 00:49:846 (5) - delete whsitle 00:50:346 (7) - add here ^
   - 00:52:846 (1) - ^ on end it hears weired ^
   - 01:02:846 (2,3) - stack perfectly? Can't really tell whether it's stacked or not but we'll see, moved it around
   - 01:29:846 (3) - why suddenly increase DS? it feels weired when i'm playing here I think I changed it.
   - 01:41:846 (1) - Use custom 3 hit normal on start
   - 01:45:846 (1) - ^ and use SV 1.5 plz ( or using SV 0.5 01:41:846 (1) - here ) changed to 0.5
   - 01:52:096 (7) - another repeat arrow issue ~ k
   - 02:21:846 (6) - NC? one whole combination
   - 02:22:846 (10,11) - delete whistle on slider body , hears better ok

Thanks for mod! Glad you took my request xD

Soooooooo scarely ;_; i can't concentrate on my mod orz
oh and bell hitsound is awesome, great choice haha Good luck for rank! :X

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable Then it would sound just plain weird
2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )

[Origin]

1. 00:05:846 - plz delete inherited point since already has timing point here and set volume to 30% is bette than current Done
   
   - 00:10:846 (2,3,4,5) - how about making better blanket? -nazi I made it look better
   - 00:18:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^
   - 00:57:596 - mute this part is better ( using volume 5% ) We also have softhitnormal for a silent hit
   - 01:22:096 (1,2,5,6) - mute these notes plz Done
   - 01:32:846 (5) - hmm maybe NC here? I don't see why
   - 01:40:846 (5) - ^
   - 01:45:846 (1) - using custom 3 hitnormal is nice on start What?
   - 002:04:846 (3,5) - i'm recommend to add NC here ( SV changing ) No
   - 02:17:846 (8) - NC Done
   - 02:21:846 (8) - ^
   - 01:57:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much overmapped points here try other pattern plz Done

Soooooooo scarely ;_; i can't concentrate on my mod orz
oh and bell hitsound is awesome, great choice haha Good luck for rank!

• • Set the same preview time in each difficulty.
  • Video offset: -450

• • I don't like how this diff flows, try to make the spacing a bit smoother. (for example here 00:09:846 (1,2) move (2) at x:204 y:172)
  • 01:01:846 (1) - Delete this circle. Start a slider here and end it at 01:02:346.
  • 01:04:846 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:49:846 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff. Start a spinner at 01:49:846 and end it at 01:51:846.

• • Normal: AR 3 and OD 3 || Hard: AR 7 and OD 7. This is bad, the jump is too big here, reduce Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit.
  • 00:53:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
  • 00:57:096 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:57:346 (x) - ^
  • 00:57:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
  • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:05:346 (x) - ^
  • 01:26:846 (1) - Remove new combo.
  • 01:34:846 (1) - ^
  • 01:45:096 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:45:346 (x) - ^
  • 01:53:096 (x) - ^
  • 01:53:346 (x) - ^

• • 00:56:846 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:57:596 (6) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:05:346 (x) - ^
  • 01:33:346 (3) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • There are a lot of unsnapped green timing section in this diff, please fix them. (use AIBat to see which one you have to fix)
  • Why you used a different Kiai here? You should keep it consistent.
  • 02:17:596 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 02:19:596 (x) - ^
  • 02:21:596 (x) - ^

• • 01:24:846 (6,7,8,9) - k k k k
  • 02:14:846 (6,7,8,9) - ^
  • 02:22:846 (x) - Add d
  • 02:23:096 (x) - ^
  • 02:23:346 (x) - Add k
  • 02:23:596 (x) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Set the same preview time in each difficulty. Done
  • Video offset: -450 Done

Normal

• • I don't like how this diff flows, try to make the spacing a bit smoother. (for example here 00:09:846 (1,2) move (2) at x:204 y:172) I tried shifting around
  • 01:01:846 (1) - Delete this circle. Start a slider here and end it at 01:02:346. added a slider
  • 01:04:846 (x) - Add a circle. I want to keep it empty
  • 01:49:846 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff. Start a spinner at 01:49:846 and end it at 01:51:846. added the spinner

Hard

• • Normal: AR 3 and OD 3 || Hard: AR 7 and OD 7. This is bad, the jump is too big here, reduce Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit. I reduced AR -1 and OD -2
  • 00:53:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part. ok
  • 00:57:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
  • 00:57:346 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:57:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part. ^
  • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
  • 01:05:346 (x) - ^ ^
  • 01:26:846 (1) - Remove new combo. I think I prefer it this way
  • 01:34:846 (1) - ^ ^
  • 01:45:096 (x) - Add a circle. ok (for the rest as well)
  • 01:45:346 (x) - ^
  • 01:53:096 (x) - ^
  • 01:53:346 (x) - ^

Insane

• • 00:56:846 (x) - Add a circle. ok
  • 00:57:596 (6) - Delete this circle. ^
  • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
  • 01:05:346 (x) - ^ ^
  • 01:33:346 (3) - Try this pattern: I changed to something of that sort, instead of straight slider
  
  SPOILER

  

0gre's Taiko Muzukashii & Oni

• • 01:24:846 (6,7,8,9) - k k k k ✔
  • 02:14:846 (6,7,8,9) - ^ ✔
  • 02:22:846 (x) - Add d ✔
  • 02:23:096 (x) - ^ ✔
  • 02:23:346 (x) - Add k ✔
  • 02:23:596 (x) - ^ ✔

xxheroxx wrote:

Origin

• • There are a lot of unsnapped green timing section in this diff, please fix them. (use AIBat to see which one you have to fix)
  • Why you used a different Kiai here? You should keep it consistent.
  • 02:17:596 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 02:19:596 (x) - ^
  • 02:21:596 (x) - ^

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Normal:
00:08:346 (5,1) - make this? - http://puu.sh/2ab0H Shifted somewhat to that
00:14:846 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2ab8a Slightly changed a slider shape
00:48:846 (5,6) - down by few grids http://puu.sh/2ab3Y ok

Hard:
HPAROD all +1 I increased HP Drain
00:15:846 (4) - 396:184 for better flow? ok
00:22:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/2abbK http://puu.sh/2abc7 ^
00:36:846 (3) - ^ 340:124 ^
00:53:846 (1,2) - hide note on spinner end is not a good style for hard Do you mean slider? I moved all 3
00:57:846 (1,2) - ^
01:49:846 (1,2) - ^
01:12:721 (1) - this not doesn't follow anything, consider to remove Follows vocals, I think I'm keeping it
02:23:846 - +note? Nothing really there to be honest, I think it's best to end before that

Insane:
00:21:346 (7,8) - 2 grid up, sorry for nazi Not sure why 2 grids up though, it's already aligned with (6)
00:53:846 (1) - This DS change feels strange, but not a big deal didn't want it to be too close



That's all. Good Luck!

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ

-APXH wrote:

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ

We don't speak Korean!

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Origin:
OD+1
00:09:346 (6,1) - this little overlap looks awkward
00:17:846 (1) - oh.... try something like - http://puu.sh/2abpZ
00:41:096 (4,1) - avoid this awkward overlaps - http://puu.sh/2abry

That's all. Good Luck!

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6). ok
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/ Haha no problem, I'll make it more curvy


[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable. I'll try what I can do, within the constraints of distance snap

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there. ok
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad. My intention at the start was a high spacing insane >.< it is really such a let-off?




Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

Thanks for mod, I really appreciate it

-APXH wrote:

Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?

• slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.

1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting.
   
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2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion.
   
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4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff.
8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting.
    
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11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    
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21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)


Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.

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HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/

• slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.

1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting. moved it slightly
   
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2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion. not a blanket
   
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4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff. I kinda like it, but I'll change it to 0.75x
8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting. I find at starting a little weird though
    
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11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    
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21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

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BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example

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224,32,71096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,71346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,71846,6,0,P|32:256|48:304,1,112.500004291535
128,376,72346,2,0,P|160:320|144:272,1,112.500004291535
260,276,72846,2,0,P|247:319|279:375,1,112.500004291535
368,304,73346,2,0,B|432:240|416:160|480:112,1,225.000008583069
479,112,74346,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74846,2,0,P|196:30|155:43,1,112.500004291535
256,64,75346,2,0,P|192:88|176:128,1,112.500004291535

You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck

1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that.
2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does.
3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video.

• 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
  00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
  00:22:596 - ^
  00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ?
  00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
  00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe)
  00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ?
  00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846
  00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion)
  00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too)
  00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful.
  00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting.
  01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe?
  01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy.
  01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
  02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players.
  02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152

1. HP - 1
2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish

• 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
  00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596
  00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms*
  00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
  00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
  00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
  00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
  01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry.
  01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
  01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too.
  01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
  01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
  01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
  01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty.
  01:47:346 - ^
  02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
  02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
  02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe...

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal

[General Stuff]

1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that. I think it should still be find, this difficulty is not demanding and spread out
2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does. sounds fine on my side
3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video. If they want to see the ending they can look at the other difficulties xD :p

Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

• 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
  00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
  00:22:596 - ^
  00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ? Probably. Changed.
  00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
  00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe) Designed changed anyway with the shifting of (2)
  00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ? Don't think so
  00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846 no thanks :X
  00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion) changed
  00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too) neonat likes straight too though, slides don't have to love me
  00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful. these sliders don't multiply like them though, I thinkI'll keep them this way
  00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting. changed
  01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe? if I remember right, this part is always like that
  01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy. not really (to me)
  01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
  02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players. was one of the many reasons why this is Normal
  02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152

Woah. It's over? Nice map

Hard

[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

1. HP - 1
2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish

That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

• 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
  00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596 I feel my way is more fitting
  00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms* Not this time, but you may like a vocaloid song I have made already but is unsubmitted, with all the curves in the world
  00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
  00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
  00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
  00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
  01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry. I know what you mean, but I like it this way so HD can be *ahem* more tricky for 1st time try
  01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
  01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too. Cute :X ....what can I say?
  01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
  01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
  01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
  01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty. I wouldn't have my door
  01:47:346 - ^
  02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
  02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
  02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe... Changed

I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   - [Hard] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Insane] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Normal] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Origin] :
   Combo5 : 255,170,43
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D:
   
   SPOILER

   01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
   01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
   01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
   01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
   01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
   01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
   01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
   01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
   01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
   01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
   01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
   01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
   01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
   01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
   01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
   01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
   01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
   01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
   01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
   01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
   01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
   01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
   01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
   01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
   01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
   01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
   01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
   01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
   01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
   01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
   01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
   01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
   01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
   01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
   01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
   01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
   02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
   02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
   02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
   02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
   02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
   02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
   02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
   02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
   02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
   02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
   02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
   02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
   02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
   02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
   02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
   02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
   02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
   02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
   02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
   02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
   02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
   02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
   02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
   02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
   02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
   02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
   02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
   02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
   02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
   02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
   02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
   02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
   02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
   02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
   02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
   02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
   02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
   02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
   02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
   02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:

• Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
  Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
  00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion
  01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o?
  00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
  00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D:
  Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O
  
  Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3

• Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
  00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
  00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D:
  00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up
  
  01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 -
  02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ?
  02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D:

[-Google-] wrote:

Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   - [Hard] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Insane] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Normal] :
   Combo5 : 255,190,94
   - [Origin] :
   Combo5 : 255,170,43
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D: Fixed what I could find
   
   SPOILER

   01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
   01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
   01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
   01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
   01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
   01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
   01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
   01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
   01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
   01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
   01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
   01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
   01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
   01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
   01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
   01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
   01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
   01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
   01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
   01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
   01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
   01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
   01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
   01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
   01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
   01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
   01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
   01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
   01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
   01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
   01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
   01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
   01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
   01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
   01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
   01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
   02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
   02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
   02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
   02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
   02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
   02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
   02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
   02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
   02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
   02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
   02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
   02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
   02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
   02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
   02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
   02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
   02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
   02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
   02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
   02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
   02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
   02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
   02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
   02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
   02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
   02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
   02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
   02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
   02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
   02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
   02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
   02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
   02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
   02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
   02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
   02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
   02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
   02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
   02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
   02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:

Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]

• Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
  Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
  00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion Changed somewhat
  01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o? Keeping
  00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
  00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D: k
  Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O seems constant to me though, I had to change the divisor to keep up with the change in sv
  
  Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3

[Hard]

• Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring
  00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
  00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D: sure
  00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up it's k
  
  01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 - changed
  02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ? no change
  02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D: important! for the last piece of music as well as for the video

Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]

Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G Reason for not repeating too many is because it is the simplest difficulty
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346. Trying to break it into phrases, so there is an unusually large gap
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once. Added one circle

SPOILER

[Origin]

Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle. I do not really think these 2 would fit more that what it is now, sorry

Reat wrote:

Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]


[Origin]

Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.

Normal

1. Check Distance.
   00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time.
4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin
5. 01:30:346 - create a circle

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Normal

1. Check Distance.
   00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time. sure
4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin end of spinner would be too close to next beat
5. 01:30:346 - create a circle

[/notice]

Hard

1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap k
2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443) decided not to overlap this earlier when I made this
3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes changed shape

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272 ok



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?

SPOILER

01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

gideon5504 wrote:

Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play. Found another little adjustment here
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...)

Origin

1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)

yep, the end.

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late


Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?

SPOILER

01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) - there is no whistle on slider body though
why not mapped till the end 0.0 I wonder why myself orz

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) - They are different parts of the same verse
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural That's a possibility, but I think I prefer a repeat
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) - ok

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg I could try it
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~ I could try this too
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~) not changing this one
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently trying 50%
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm? not adding
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle? not adding
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@ :|


sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)



[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here K
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 - Well, there's a bell that goes on, so I'm gonna have to change the hitsounds up a bit
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable 20%
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck

1. 00:53:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - display them neatly...
   
   for example...

   

1. i feel that there was too much clockwise rotation.

1. 01:04:346 (5) - i feel strange.
   
   When i display it in this way, how about?

   

1. i feel that there are too many sliders of the straight line in x-axis, the y-axis.

1. 00:29:846 (1) - it was different form so far when i hitted it in this timing. it is hard to play it very much when it was changed suddenly

1. 01:45:846 (1) - do it parallel to x-axis

1. kiai Time:
   01:09:846~01:09:971
   01:13:846~01:13:971
   01:17:846~01:17:971
   01:21:846~01:21:971
   01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?

1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.
   
   SS

   

1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^

EnixYuki wrote:

hi , from my queue


[Origin]

1. kiai Time:
   01:09:846~01:09:971
   01:13:846~01:13:971
   01:17:846~01:17:971
   01:21:846~01:21:971
   01:59:846~02:15:471 you setted this timing on purpose?

もちろん

1. 01:22:846 (4,5,6,7) - i suggest that you should change it in this way.ん
   
   SS

   

1. 01:41:846 (1) - put the y coordinates of initial and terminal point same.

ん

1. 01:43:846 (1) - ^

Awaken wrote:

strange song 0.0
Mod From ZHSteven's request



[Insane]
00:21:346 (7,8) - overlay with 00:19:846 (1)? It was either this or having it at the same height as the previous slider, I guess the former might seem nicer when 7 and 8 appears
01:04:846 (7,8,9) - make a regular triangle? made it more triangle-ish I guess, not even though
01:45:846 (1) - you want to make it straight through?The trajectory of the slider tells me it's not. yes, didn't intend it to be straight anyway
01:49:846 (1) - make a five-pointed star with 01:47:846 (3,4,5,6) may be good :3 I get what you mean, but I want to distant them from each other for the new verse
02:18:596 (8) - delete next note and make a repeat slider. adjusted other positions too
02:22:846 (10) - NC ok

[Hard]
Nice

[Nomal]
Nice

GL~

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

[Normal]
00:20:846 (4) - Try this patern : ok

SPOILER

00:24:846 (4) - Maybe a little bit difficult ? I know it's hidden underneath, but I think being stationary makes more sense in the music
00:57:846 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can do a isosceles triangle ? moved (3) a little
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time will consider
02:23:346 (5) - Why not a slider in the 1/2 ? simpler tune

[Hard]
00:18:846 (6,1) - Distance Snap I made it look nicer
00:24:596 (4,5) - Maybe move them ? I think having it stationary fits the song too
00:54:846 (2,1) - Distance snap not logical with next circles I think it's still fine though
Maybe you can add more hitsounds in the kiai time
01:12:721 (1,2) - Try this : moved it differently

SPOILER

Nothing to say for the rest of the diff. =D

[Insane]
Nothing to say, just maybe you can change some slider for rounded ?



Good Luck *u*

mtbbsben wrote:

From my queueof P4M

[General]
I have to say that the mapping style is too old. It's like the style before 2009. Would tweak some of the positions and shapes, that might make it seem that way, but other than that, I don't think there is any other reason why it would seem 2009ish
Still have a long way to rank.


[Insane]
od7
00:08:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

keeping current positions
01:03:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - following the piano

[Hard]
cs4
00:50:846 (4,5,6,7) -
02:18:721 (2) - fix it changed to 2 circles

[Normal]
It's easy in my opinion.
cs3

Good luck with your map
I think it's also a long way to go, maybe you can refer to some 120bpm maps ranked recently, they will help you.

tetsutaro wrote:

Personal M4M so no intro... wait is this an intro? Dammit!

[General]
Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names, and put in tags instead. I was told this is better.
<Taiko> Move down bg for 50~100 to show better the other eye
Miku in Korean wwwwwwww

[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - May want to unstack for clarity. ok
01:33:846 - Bad combo-ing: Give this point to the red combo. ok, changed rhythm
02:14:096 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and note at original end; or remove 02:16:846 (1) for a I-don't-know-how-to-call-it-but-it-sounds-cool effect. I know what you mean, but I think this is more suited for the long run!
02:23:596 - If you like, unstack 02:23:346 (5) and note at 02:23:596. ok I give in



Also because M4M so no tip jar.