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Miggl
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Joined July 2011
Miggl
MOD

since you asked me to, I finally begun to mod it:

Map In General
Timing


Offset a little later( ~5.846<- thats what I got after 25% slowmotion )
BPM: exactly 120 (since it is an computer generated song, its pretty simple to find it out)
Slider Velocity: see in diff section (its only mentioned if i would change something)


For you:
To get a little fine tuning, just play the beginning and you see:
it feels like the slider ends too early

just use 25% to prove it

Note: if you change offset in [Origin] an Error occurs :(

-----------
Inheriting section Problem:

some velocity changes in inheriting sections are MUCH TOO HARD ---> so test and change it a little


Difficulty: Normal
Most changes are to make it look better or better to read - just suggestions


00:10:856 (1) - looks a little bad just set it a little more away:




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00:16:856 (4) - ctrl+h it:




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00:17:856 (5) - open this thing like that:




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00:22:856 (2) - a little hidden
00:26:856 (3) - ^
00:30:856 (2) - ^

00:31:356 (3,4) - make it look better by smooth ( i mean both ends should be on the same line)

00:33:856 (1,2,3) - funny spacing here, also you could change the look haha

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00:42:606 (2) - after this point it gets much more confusing and harder than before, try following if u wanna keep it confusing hard :



and replace 00:44:856 (5,6)


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or, what would be not too hard and fit to the rest:





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00:54:856 (1) - place it a little more left to keep it in the cursor movement with the slider

00:56:356 (4) - change to a 1/2 reverse slider

01:01:856 (7) - chango to slider and NC to match the voice acting and the truly combo-change
if you do this, you should remove NC here: 01:02:856 (8)

01:04:356 (9) - 1/2 reverse-slider again

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01:05:856 (1,2,3) - spacing fix, 2 a little hidden, 2->3 higher spacing



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01:15:356 (4,5) - little more distance

01:34:356 (1) - NC

01:40:856 (5,6) - little hidden by 300's xD

01:44:856 (1) - TOTALLY hidden by the points (place it somewhere else)

That's it

After this diff, check ur other diffs at the same points for the same things.

After you made some changes, i will mod the other diffs ( I dont have much time at the moment).
Last edited by Miggl , edited 1 time in total.
neonat
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neonat

Momochikun wrote:

Hi.. from mod queue :)

General

U don't like hitsound, huh ? XD
Reduce volume of sliderslide or make it no sound.

Easy
(i think it's normal ?)
Spacing.. please make the 2 spacing note different range from 4 spacing note. It'll make beginner confused
00:16:830 (4) - This jump looks strange to me
00:10:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe u can make some hit rthym ?
01:55:839 (3) - ^


Normal
00:57:834 (1) - Remove spinner, it doesn't fit to the song
01:12:710 (1) - Move this to 01:12:585
01:33:837 (1) - Add whistle to the head then remove whistle from the tail of the slider
01:35:837 (5) - Add whistle to the head then remove whistle from the tail of the slider
01:49:838 (1) - Strange jump here.. --
02:22:841 (1,2) - Remove this, the song has over. It's over mapped i think


Insane and Origin
Fine i think.. since Five stars diff is free from distance snap

Good Luck!~ :)
I changed some hitsounds. Thanks for mod.
Gero
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Joined March 2012
Gero
YO! M4M Mod

[General]

(*) your audio is low recommend finding one better than this to 192 kbps
(*) your BG is unranked the right measures are 1024x768

[Normal]

(*) 00:07:830 (4,5,1) - Here you could make a very nice triangle:
SPOILER
(*) 00:09:830 (2) - This slider is being covered by this circle 00:08:330 (5) - recommend moving the slider to another site
(*) 00:16:830 (4) - NC here
(*) 00:21:831 (1) - HEY HEY HEY RESPECT THE DISTANCE PLEASE D:!!
(*) 00:22:831 (2,3) - ^
(*) 00:26:831 (3) - ^
(*) 00:24:831 (4) - Remove NC and Add NC Here 00:25:831 (1)
(*) 00:29:830 (1) - DISTANCE SNAP PLEASE CHECK THIS
(*) 00:40:830 (5) - Many here reverse could confuse new players, I recommend you do the following:

(*) 00:47:830 (4) - NC here
(*) 00:50:830 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is very messy I suggest making these forms:

Here The Code:
262,238,50830,6,0,P|289:171|256:112,1,140
176,56,51830,2,0,P|149:123|182:182,1,140
168,280,52830,2,0,P|191:342|191:342|272:352,1,140
344,296,53830,2,0,P|424:312|480:208,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
(*) 00:57:830 (1) - Distance Please :<
(*) 00:58:830 (1) - ^
(*) 01:10:830 (3) -BAD BAD BAD FOR NORMAL reverse confuse many new players.

[Hard]

(*) AR + 1
(*) 00:08:830 (1) - Note no Distance snap, check this please
(*) 00:33:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these patterns are very uncomfortable to play you should make other patterns here
(*) 00:35:830 (6) - NC
(*) 00:43:330 (1) - NC
(*) 00:50:830 (4) - ^
(*) Good Diff :)

Good Lucky!
neonat
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Gero wrote:

YO! M4M Mod

[General]

(*) your audio is low recommend finding one better than this to 192 kbps I'll see what I can find
(*) your BG is unranked the right measures are 1024x768 Changed

[Normal]

(*) 00:07:830 (4,5,1) - Here you could make a very nice triangle: ok
SPOILER
(*) 00:09:830 (2) - This slider is being covered by this circle 00:08:330 (5) - recommend moving the slider to another site shifted
(*) 00:16:830 (4) - NC here ok
(*) 00:21:831 (1) - HEY HEY HEY RESPECT THE DISTANCE PLEASE D:!! adjusted
(*) 00:22:831 (2,3) - ^ ^
(*) 00:26:831 (3) - ^ ^
(*) 00:24:831 (4) - Remove NC and Add NC Here 00:25:831 (1) ok
(*) 00:29:830 (1) - DISTANCE SNAP PLEASE CHECK THIS adjusted
(*) 00:40:830 (5) - Many here reverse could confuse new players, I recommend you do the following: ok

(*) 00:47:830 (4) - NC here not changing
(*) 00:50:830 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is very messy I suggest making these forms: changed shape

Here The Code:
262,238,50830,6,0,P|289:171|256:112,1,140
176,56,51830,2,0,P|149:123|182:182,1,140
168,280,52830,2,0,P|191:342|191:342|272:352,1,140
344,296,53830,2,0,P|424:312|480:208,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
(*) 00:57:830 (1) - Distance Please :< adjusted
(*) 00:58:830 (1) - ^ no change
(*) 01:10:830 (3) -BAD BAD BAD FOR NORMAL reverse confuse many new players. ok

[Hard]

(*) AR + 1 ok
(*) 00:08:830 (1) - Note no Distance snap, check this please checked
(*) 00:33:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these patterns are very uncomfortable to play you should make other patterns here I tried shifting them a bit
(*) 00:35:830 (6) - NC ok
(*) 00:43:330 (1) - NC not changing
(*) 00:50:830 (4) - ^ don't think I will change this either
(*) Good Diff :)

Good Lucky!

Thanks for mod!
Aeonian Sonder
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Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

Natsu wrote:

General:

SPOILER
:!: Bpm is 120

:!: Background hide and seek.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. resize plz

:!: Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 7,132,224
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 242,224,6
Combo5 : 255,170,43
Combo6 : 245,22,28

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 234,38,57
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 105,124,119
Combo5 : 255,170,43
Combo6 : 237,220,5

- [Origin] :
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 105,124,119
Combo5 : 255,170,43
Combo6 : 210,20,11

:!: Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Hard] : 5830
- [Insane] : 5830
- [Normal] : 5830
- [Origin] : 37832

:!: Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:09:835, ends on 01:25:837
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:59:820, ends on 02:15:840

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:09:816, ends on 01:25:836
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:59:714, ends on 02:15:840

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:09:835, ends on 01:25:837
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:59:839, ends on 02:15:840

- [Origin] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:09:835, ends on 01:09:960
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:835, ends on 01:13:960
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:17:836, ends on 01:17:961
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:21:836, ends on 01:21:961
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:59:839, ends on 02:03:714
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:03:839, ends on 02:07:715
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:07:840, ends on 02:11:715
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:11:840, ends on 02:15:840

Normal:

SPOILER
00:05:830 finish
00:07:830 (4,5,1,2) - make this part more clean
00:14:830 this is your easy diff this part is really confuse and hard for new player think about other pattern plz
00:26:831 remove this circe or make the previows slider more short
00:58:334 add circle
01:25:836 finish
01:44:838 move this to other place 300 hit of spinner overlap it is a unrankable issue
01:53:839 whistle in the head of slider

Need alot of work since

Hard:

SPOILER
01:29:368 (2) unsnaped circle
00:05:830 finish in the head of slider
00:25:831 whistle in the head
00:33:832 ^
01:05:835 ^
02:14:840 (8,9) - look bad move 9 to other place
02:23:341 finish in the tail

Insane:

SPOILER
01:33:337 unsnaped slider tail
00:05:830 add finish
00:25:831 whistle in the head
00:33:832 ^
i stop here since u got alot of work there
I get that kiai times are inconsistent for neocat's difficulties, but isn't a guest's difficulty usually different from the maker's?
Miggl
64 posts
Joined July 2011
Miggl
Hey, Hey, Hey! EDITED

As i said, I will mod the other diffs too :3

@ APXH, im not too sure, but i think its in the rules that all "kiai times" must be the same D:
General
----------
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AS I SAID BEFORE:
( you didnt change it :( )
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CHANGE THE OFFSET (~5.846)
why?
the PERFECT offset is IMPORTANT!

you think its not that bad?
- q.q. I PLEASE YOU TO TRY IT - TRY IT OUT

Hard(see edit)
Setup:

Drain Rate: 6

Timing

slider velocity 1,50
why?
some parts are more filled with sliders, ad following many circles,
by changing it, but leaving the distance spacin out, the differense wont be so high like, for example here: 00:14:850 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)

Also your slider won't look that ugly ;D

Inherited sections

Instead of using 0,75 , use 0,85
why i would do this?
because the part you slowed down, is slowed down by lesser action(clicking, moving cursor) already hard enough

well, thats it for overall :D

else chronological suggestions:

I will edit this post for "else suggestions" and the insane, origin diff-Mod and tell you then in-game or per skype :3

kay, edit here:

00:12:596 (4) - this slider is very surprising unexpected. remove it and set a circle at its end point (in time-line)
well because you could missunderstand smth here a screen how i mean it:



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00:23:846 (3) - i know you wanted it like that (to slow it down) but add a reverse here!!!
why?
ur other slider are the same and it is confusing if this one isnt. Also it fits better to the music

the slowmotion u want u already have with the break after 00:24:846 (4) - which you should replace then ;D

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2 suggestions here:
00:32:596 (5) - add a slider here and end it at the following circle ( so u need to remove 00:32:846 (5) - )
or
just add a circle at 00:32:596 (5) which is placed at the same point as the other, so that u need to click twice on the same dot.
just try out a few variations here^^
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00:45:346 (10) - you could mirror (ctrl+g) it (some flow haha)

next:
00:55:846 (2) - add here a slider and use another combo-look
or
01:03:846 (4) - remove the slider here and make a circle out of it

01:13:846 (1,2,3) - more space/distance between those 3
01:17:846 (1,2) - more space between those 2
01:21:846 (1,2) - ^
why?
well, its slow enough, because you dont need to do much. to use the same "distance-snap-spacing" as with faster parts is a fault.

01:49:846 (1) - remove one reverse and add a circle for it
01:55:846 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - pretty boring because you used that so often. its a fast combo, but if its always the same combo its boring.

01:59:846 (1,2) - little mroe spacing
02:03:846 (1,2) - ^
02:07:846 (1,2) - ^
02:11:846 (1,2) - ^
02:15:846 (1,2) - ^
02:19:346 (3,1,2) - ^
02:22:596 (5) - add a circle here and replace following

Insane
Inherited sections
00:53:846 (1) - you go from 1,5 to 0,5 this difference makes it so** xD you can use 0,75 or use more spacing between circles

01:42:846 (1,2,3) - and following: ^


01:01:846 (1) - the song stays slow but you make 1,5 again - confusing unexpected surprising

you can use 1.00 here and use 1.5 at 01:09:846 (1)
01:49:846 (1) -^


else:
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01:17:221 (7) - remove it
01:24:971 (6) - ^ (and replace)
less confusing, more flow and fun and sounds better
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01:36:346 (7,8) - put those at the end of slider

01:38:846 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is cool :3

02:05:846 (6) - END of slider (just use a tiny grid level)

02:07:221 (6) - remove

02:09:846 (6) - end of slider

next:
02:14:971 (5) - remove
or
02:15:471 (9,11) - remove 11 or rather both
02:18:596 (8,9) - little less spacing
02:18:846 (9,10) - little more spacing
02:22:846 (1,2) - remove and set a slider instead like that:


and remove the NC ( i forgot in the screen)
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Origin
00:34:856 (2,3) - looks not as cool because of the stacking circle (2) (see play-mode)

00:54:856 (2,3,4) - confusing - rather like that:
remove 00:54:981 (3)
or
remove 2 and 3, move slider to (2) (in timeline) and reverse

01:11:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - having spacing between 3and4 , 7and8 (as you do here:01:11:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -) is much more fun and not too boring.

01:57:856 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - confusing if you dont use the same spacing all the time. correct it.

02:17:856 (1) - Nc since its in another rythm-part, also theres a little break between
02:21:856 (8) - ^

02:23:356 (14) - NC to make it better to read
Last edited by Miggl , edited 10 times in total.
Hellzero
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Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Normal
00:09:830 (2,1) - well, if i understood you use 0.7x distance snap (DS) without grid snap. But here 1.0x DS if you can't explain it then make 0.7x
00:14:830 (2) - not nice overlap. Make it more smoothly
00:50:830 (1,2,3,4) - will make more smoothly
Well you see if you will use more smooth sliders it make map more pretty. Try use it
01:00:330 (4) - snap it circle between (3) and (5)
01:02:830 (1,2) - again not nice overlap
01:05:830 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part... DS very varied. 1.0x then 0.8x then 0.7x for normal diff it's bad
01:15:330 (4,5) - this overlap maybe confuse beginner players so fix it plz
And now time for NC's mod (New Combo)
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks
For example:
00:09:830 - NC
00:13:830 - NC
00:17:830 - NC
ect
How you see this more fit for music, vocal and gameplay
Hard
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks
00:43:830 - more better add here circle with NC

Insane
00:38:830 (3,4) - snap their
neonat
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Hellzero wrote:

Normal
00:09:830 (2,1) - well, if i understood you use 0.7x distance snap (DS) without grid snap. But here 1.0x DS if you can't explain it then make 0.7x If I remember correctly, I shifted this so that the circle can be seen more clearly
00:14:830 (2) - not nice overlap. Make it more smoothly ok
00:50:830 (1,2,3,4) - will make more smoothly shifted
Well you see if you will use more smooth sliders it make map more pretty. Try use it
01:00:330 (4) - snap it circle between (3) and (5) was probably adjusting offset
01:02:830 (1,2) - again not nice overlap ok
01:05:830 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part... DS very varied. 1.0x then 0.8x then 0.7x for normal diff it's bad Changed slightly
01:15:330 (4,5) - this overlap maybe confuse beginner players so fix it plz shifted
And now time for NC's mod (New Combo)
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks
For example:
00:09:830 - NC
00:13:830 - NC
00:17:830 - NC
ect
How you see this more fit for music, vocal and gameplay changed some
Hard
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks
00:43:830 - more better add here circle with NC ok with using a circle


Insane
00:38:830 (3,4) - snap their Was in the midst of editing it so I do not see this anymore
Thanks for mod.
jyu
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Joined August 2012
jyu
M4M
A friendly reminder that i'm still an inexperienced modder, mostly all my mods are suggestion =w=


General

1. I think the hitsounds volume is too loud. Preferrably 80%-90%


Normal

00:39:846 (4) - add cymbal sound at the end of this slider (optional)


Hard

00:31:346 (3) - and this 00:31:846 (4) - are one beat away. Separate them a bit
00:40:346 (5) - add cymbal sound
01:12:721 (1,2) - stack them (optional)


Insane

00:38:846 (3,4) - make them neat
01:23:346 (5,6) - ^
01:35:846 (6,7,8) - ^
02:05:346 (5,6) - ^
02:09:346 (5,6) - ^
02:18:596 (8,9) - make them a bit closer
my suggestion


Origin

Can't find any =w=
neonat
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neonat

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

M4M
A friendly reminder that i'm still an inexperienced modder, mostly all my mods are suggestion =w=


General

1. I think the hitsounds volume is too loud. Preferrably 80%-90% reduced to 80%


Normal

00:39:846 (4) - add cymbal sound at the end of this slider (optional) I'll pass on this I guess


Hard

00:31:346 (3) - and this 00:31:846 (4) - are one beat away. Separate them a bit ok
00:40:346 (5) - add cymbal sound ok
01:12:721 (1,2) - stack them (optional) ok


Insane

00:38:846 (3,4) - make them neat fixed
01:23:346 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:35:846 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
02:05:346 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:09:346 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:18:596 (8,9) - make them a bit closer moved closer, but not that close
my suggestion


Origin

Can't find any =w=
Thanks for mod!
MineC24
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Joined May 2010
MineC24
M4M~~

Normal
HP Drain -1
00:52:846 (3) - move x:232 y:192
00:53:846 (1) - move x:304 y:248
00:58:846 (1) - remove New Combo
01:10:846 (3) - change slider..
02:14:346 (1) - move 02:14:096

Hard
HP Drain -1
00:43:846 (6) - add New Combo..
01:34:846 (1) - remove New Combo
01:58:846 (3) - ^

Insane
OD -1
00:19:846 (1) - move x:392 y:72
00:21:096 (6) - move x:240 y:72
00:21:346 (7,8) - move x:392 y:72
00:40:346 (6) - add New Combo
00:40:846 (1) - remove New Combo
01:44:846 (3) - stack (x:120 y:155)

Origin
HP Drain -1

whistle sound so awkward....

note sound volume up please..

GL :)
neonat
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jaehn215 wrote:

M4M~~

Normal
HP Drain -1 ok
00:52:846 (3) - move x:232 y:192 not changing
00:53:846 (1) - move x:304 y:248^
00:58:846 (1) - remove New Combo ok
01:10:846 (3) - change slider.. not changing
02:14:346 (1) - move 02:14:096 ok fixed

Hard
HP Drain -1 ok
00:43:846 (6) - add New Combo.. ok
01:34:846 (1) - remove New Combo not changing
01:58:846 (3) - ^ ^

Insane
OD -1 keeping
00:19:846 (1) - move x:392 y:72 no change
00:21:096 (6) - move x:240 y:72 ok
00:21:346 (7,8) - move x:392 y:72^
00:40:346 (6) - add New Combo not changing
00:40:846 (1) - remove New Combo ^
01:44:846 (3) - stack (x:120 y:155) ok



GL :)
Thanks for mod
0gre_old
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Joined January 2013
0gre_old
sorry to be sudden!

Is it possible to make a taiko map for this? or needed?
neonat
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0gre wrote:

sorry to be sudden!

Is it possible to make a taiko map for this? or needed?
I'm not sure, I would need to make a second taiko difficulty, or find one.
0gre_old
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0gre_old

neonat wrote:

0gre wrote:

sorry to be sudden!

Is it possible to make a taiko map for this? or needed?
I'm not sure, I would need to make a second taiko difficulty, or find one.

I dont get it clearly but if necessary,
I can make any difficulties and more than one.
neonat
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0gre wrote:

I dont get it clearly but if necessary,
I can make any difficulties and more than one.
Okay, just give me a sample next time and I'll see if I want the taiko difficulties.
0gre_old
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Joined January 2013
0gre_old
done! only ONI at the moment

please check :?

http://puu.sh/1ZYLN
neonat
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0gre wrote:

done! only ONI at the moment

please check :?

http://puu.sh/1ZYLN
Rhythm seems relevant. In my opinion, I like it haha, I would play it. I haven't been playing taiko that much, I only started recently, so I wouldn't really know whether it's good, when to change the beat (red/blue).
0gre_old
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Joined January 2013
0gre_old
I mainly pick the sound of bit

sometimes put red or blue whether how the vocal goes


I checked few people say fine but I am also not sure..

However would you like to add taiko diffs in your map?
then there may have some modifications to correct.
neonat
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0gre wrote:

I mainly pick the sound of bit

sometimes put red or blue whether how the vocal goes


I checked few people say fine but I am also not sure..

However would you like to add taiko diffs in your map?
then there may have some modifications to correct.
I think it should be fine, since I have the majority of standard difficulties. Go ahead and make changes.
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old

neonat wrote:

0gre wrote:

I mainly pick the sound of bit

sometimes put red or blue whether how the vocal goes


I checked few people say fine but I am also not sure..

However would you like to add taiko diffs in your map?
then there may have some modifications to correct.
I think it should be fine, since I have the majority of standard difficulties. Go ahead and make changes.

thanks!!!!
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old
sorry for double thread

taiko diffs finished
http://puu.sh/20vQX

please check :)

Taiko Oni
Taiko Muzukashii
arkemaky
28 posts
Joined December 2011
arkemaky
Hello I came from your modqueue!

Normal
Unsnapped? and Easy, Normal need space to 1.0

Hard
00:09:346 (2) - go to X:160 Y:272 last sliderpoint go to X:88 Y:248
00:11:846 (3,4) - scange to one long slider
00:17:846 (5) - to long one slider
Ar:7
OD:8

insane
Ar:8
OD:9
Drain:5

Sorry, I can't mod well.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

arkemaky wrote:

Hello I came from your modqueue!

Normal
Unsnapped? and Easy, Normal need space to 1.0

Hard
00:09:346 (2) - go to X:160 Y:272 last sliderpoint go to X:88 Y:248
00:11:846 (3,4) - scange to one long slider
00:17:846 (5) - to long one slider
Ar:7
OD:8

insane
Ar:8
OD:9
Drain:5

Sorry, I can't mod well.
I made a change in Hard, as well as changed some of the difficulty settings in Hard and Insane. Thanks for mod.
Mintice
78 posts
Joined September 2012
Mintice
The song is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!
Can I make Easy?
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

Mintice wrote:

The song is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!
Can I make Easy?
But my normal difficulty is easy-ish :(
It's quite jam packed with difficulties as well too >.<
Mintice
78 posts
Joined September 2012
Mintice

neonat wrote:

Mintice wrote:

The song is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!
Can I make Easy?
But my normal difficulty is easy-ish :(
It's quite jam packed with difficulties as well too >.<
Then how about a normal?
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

Mintice wrote:

Then how about a normal?

Maybe the next SeeU song I map. I'm satisfied with the difficulties on this song :x
Mintice
78 posts
Joined September 2012
Mintice

neonat wrote:

Mintice wrote:

Then how about a normal?

Maybe the next SeeU song I map. I'm satisfied with the difficulties on this song :x
Okay. Thanks for your reply.
scanter
2,390 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
[General]
If you're not use storyboarding, removal letterbox during breaks

[Normal]
00:12:346 (5) - Move x:332, y:232
00:12:846 (6) - Move x:236, y:212
00:13:346 (7) - Move x:128, y:236
00:16:846 (1) - NC Delete
00:17:846 (3) - NC
00:18:846 (1) - NC Delete
00:19:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle
00:27:846 (4,5) - ^
00:32:346 (4) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's first and add whistle on slider's end.
00:35:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle
00:37:846 (1) - Clear hit-finish
00:43:846 (2,3,4) - Add on hit-whistle
00:51:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle
00:59:846 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:07:346 (3) - Add on hit-whistle at slider's end
01:08:346 (4) - Add on hit-whistle
01:20:346 (5) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's end
01:26:346 (2) - Clear hit-finish
01:41:346 (6) - Move x:352, y:136
01:47:846 (3,4) - Add on hit-whistle
01:55:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle slider's first
01:56:846 (4) - ^
01:58:346 (2) - Clear hit-whistle


[Hard]
00:11:346 (2) - Move x:460, y:48
00:15:346 (3) - Move x:504, y:88
00:26:846 (2) - Move x:479, y:242
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance x1.2?
00:56:846 (4) - Move x:193, y:248
02:06:346 (1,2) - How about fit verticality like this? 02:02:346 (1,2)
02:23:346 (3) - Change hit-whistle sound.

[Insane]
00:10:846 (1) - NC delete?
00:31:846 (5) - NC
00:38:346 (2) - Delete whistle sound.
00:37:846 (1) - Maybe add on here.
00:42:846 (1) - NC delete?
00:45:846 (1) - ^
00:46:346 (2) - ^
01:13:096 (6,7) - Move x:240, y:320
01:17:346 (8) - Add hit-whistle sound.
01:26:846 (3) - How about makes same curvy 01:27:596 (5) ?
01:29:846 (3) - Add hit-whistle sound on slider's first and 01:30:346
01:39:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move x:260, y:156
01:50:346 (2,3) - Move x:161, y:216

[Origin]
00:13:846 (1,2) - Ctrl + H
00:18:846 (2,3) - Move x:308, y:180
00:23:846 (1) - Move x:192, y:152
00:29:846 (1) - Ctrl + G?
00:31:846 (1) - Move x:320, y:228
00:33:846 (1) - looks a little stack on 00:34:846 (2,3) How about more gentle curve? example is this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607695
00:58:346 (2) - Move x:184, y:192?
01:04:346 (2) - Add Normal sampleset sound.
01:07:846 (5) - NC
01:34:846 (3,4) - Ctrl + H , J this looking more better.
01:37:096 (2) - Makes more curvy. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607698 and Add on hit-whistle
01:41:596 (8) - Move 2 grids down. looks better.
01:41:846 (1) - Move 1 grid up. same as.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

scanter wrote:

[General]
If you're not use storyboarding, removal letterbox during breaks

[Normal]
00:12:346 (5) - Move x:332, y:232 ok
00:12:846 (6) - Move x:236, y:212 ok
00:13:346 (7) - Move x:128, y:236 moved to x:140 y:260 instead
00:16:846 (1) - NC Delete ok
00:17:846 (3) - NC ^
00:18:846 (1) - NC Delete ^
00:19:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle added at the end
00:27:846 (4,5) - ^ no change, this part is softer than 00:59:846 (4,5,6,7)
00:32:346 (4) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's first and add whistle on slider's end. ok
00:35:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle ^
00:37:846 (1) - Clear hit-finish no change
00:43:846 (2,3,4) - Add on hit-whistle ^
00:51:846 (2,3) - Add on hit-whistle added on (3)
00:59:846 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ok
01:07:346 (3) - Add on hit-whistle at slider's end ^
01:08:346 (4) - Add on hit-whistle added in the middle
01:20:346 (5) - Clear hit-whistle at slider's end ok, it disappeared anyway lol
01:26:346 (2) - Clear hit-finish no change
01:41:346 (6) - Move x:352, y:136 ok
01:47:846 (3,4) - Add on hit-whistle added on start of (3)
01:55:846 (3) - Add on hit-whistle slider's first ok
01:56:846 (4) - ^ ^
01:58:346 (2) - Clear hit-whistle no change


[Hard]
00:11:346 (2) - Move x:460, y:48 no change
00:15:346 (3) - Move x:504, y:88 moved to x:508 y:84
00:26:846 (2) - Move x:479, y:242 moved to x:480 y:248
00:33:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance x1.2? fixed somewhat
00:56:846 (4) - Move x:193, y:248 ok
02:06:346 (1,2) - How about fit verticality like this? 02:02:346 (1,2) I made both horizontal
02:23:346 (3) - Change hit-whistle sound. k..

[Insane]
00:10:846 (1) - NC delete? k
00:31:846 (5) - NC not changing
00:38:346 (2) - Delete whistle sound. k
00:37:846 (1) - Maybe add on here. nah it's fine as it is I guess
00:42:846 (1) - NC delete? ^
00:45:846 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:346 (2) - ^ ? :o
01:13:096 (6,7) - Move x:240, y:320 ok
01:17:346 (8) - Add hit-whistle sound. ^
01:26:846 (3) - How about makes same curvy 01:27:596 (5) ? cloned it
01:29:846 (3) - Add hit-whistle sound on slider's first and 01:30:346 ok
01:39:846 (1,2,3,4) - Move x:260, y:156 oooooo ok
01:50:346 (2,3) - Move x:161, y:216 no change
Thanks for mod!
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old
about taiko diffs~


fixed slider velocity from 2.00 to 1.60
please update :)

http://puu.sh/21lgw
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
hi

Too distorted slider is bad.
plz add 2/4clap/whistle in your map

[Normal]
00:09:846 (1) - add whistle in slider head
00:13:846 (1) - ^
00:17:846 (1) - ^
00:31:346 (3) - add whistle in slider tail
00:32:346 (4) - add whistle in slider head,remove tail whistle
00:39:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head
00:45:846 (1) - ^
01:00:346 (5) - use same spacing(0.7x
02:01:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head
02:05:846 (4) - add whistle
02:13:846 (5) - ^

[Hard]
od-1
hp+1
00:15:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head
00:35:846 (1,2,3) - add whistle in slider head
00:37:346 (4) -remove whistle
00:41:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head
00:43:846 (1) - add whistle
00:45:846 (1) - add finish
00:49:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head
00:51:846 (8) - newcombo
01:04:346 (5) - add whistle
01:04:846 (6) - remove whistle
01:07:846 (4,5) - add whistle in slider head
01:43:846 (6) - add whistle in slider head

[Insane]
hp+2
OD-2
00:09:846 (5) - add whistle in slider head
00:22:846 (4,5) - ^
00:23:846 (1) - add whistle
00:24:346 (3) - add whistle in slider head
00:26:596 (3) - add whistle in slider tail
00:27:346 (5) - add whistle
00:28:846 (3) - add wshstle in slider tail
00:30:846 (3) - add whistle
00:31:846 (5,6) - add whistle in slider head
00:43:846 (1,2) - ^
00:45:846 (1) - add finish
01:03:846 (5) - add whistle
01:04:096 (6) - add whistle in slider Exhumation
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

scanter wrote:

[Origin]
00:13:846 (1,2) - Ctrl + H No thanks
00:18:846 (2,3) - Move x:308, y:180 Done
00:23:846 (1) - Move x:192, y:152 Done
00:29:846 (1) - Ctrl + G? Yes
00:31:846 (1) - Move x:320, y:228 Done
00:33:846 (1) - looks a little stack on 00:34:846 (2,3) How about more gentle curve? example is this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607695 Done
00:58:346 (2) - Move x:184, y:192? Yes
01:04:346 (2) - Add Normal sampleset sound. Done
01:07:846 (5) - NC Thanks
01:34:846 (3,4) - Ctrl + H , J this looking more better. Done
01:37:096 (2) - Makes more curvy. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/607698 and Add on hit-whistle Done
01:41:596 (8) - Move 2 grids down. looks better. Actually, then it wouldn't match to where the other slider is. SO completely changed the location
01:41:846 (1) - Move 1 grid up. same as.


Thanks for the mod. I send the updated version to neocat.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

lkx_Shore wrote:

hi

Too distorted slider is bad.
plz add 2/4clap/whistle in your map

[Normal]
00:09:846 (1) - add whistle in slider head ok
00:13:846 (1) - ^ ^
00:17:846 (1) - ^ no change
00:31:346 (3) - add whistle in slider tail ok
00:32:346 (4) - add whistle in slider head,remove tail whistle ^
00:39:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:45:846 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:346 (5) - use same spacing(0.7x) Spacing changed
02:01:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head added on 02:03:346 (6)
02:05:846 (4) - add whistle no change
02:13:846 (5) - ^ ok

[Hard]
od-1
hp+1
00:15:846 (4) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:35:846 (1,2,3) - add whistle in slider head ok
00:37:346 (4) -remove whistle no change
00:41:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:43:846 (1) - add whistle ok
00:45:846 (1) - add finish no change
00:49:846 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:51:846 (8) - newcombo ok
01:04:346 (5) - add whistle no change
01:04:846 (6) - remove whistle ^
01:07:846 (4,5) - add whistle in slider head ok
01:43:846 (6) - add whistle in slider head no change

[Insane]
hp+2
OD-2
00:09:846 (5) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:22:846 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:846 (1) - add whistle ^
00:24:346 (3) - add whistle in slider head ^
00:26:596 (3) - add whistle in slider tail ^
00:27:346 (5) - add whistle added on 00:27:846 instead
00:28:846 (3) - add wshstle in slider tail changed
00:30:846 (3) - add whistle no change
00:31:846 (5,6) - add whistle in slider head no change
00:43:846 (1,2) - ^ changed
00:45:846 (1) - add finish no change
01:03:846 (5) - add whistle ^
01:04:096 (6) - add whistle in slider Exhumation ^
Thanks for your suggestions
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
hi~
via in game chat :3

[General]
  1. タイミングセットアップを開いて赤線のところのAudioを開いてCustom1 から defaultに変更して下さい
  2. 00:37:846 - ここの音がNormalに戻る緑線についてなのですが　この場所だと少し早く叩いたりするとSoftの音が出てしまうことがあるので
    00:37:814 - ここに引いて下さい
  3. 02:15:846 - ^と同じく02:15:814 - ここへ移動して下さい
[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:10:596 (2) - k
  2. 00:18:596 (2) - ^
  3. 02:15:846 - 鬼と同じく速度0.90
  4. 02:18:346 - 2連消してここからk k d

[0gre's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:10:596 (2) - k
  2. 00:21:846 (3) - D
  3. 01:57:346 (1) - ここはfinishいらないかな
  4. 02:15:846 - 変速するなら0.90ぐらいでいいと思います 0.75は見えづらいです
nice map~ :)
good luck!
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
via in game chat :3

[General]
  1. タイミングセットアップを開いて赤線のところのAudioを開いてCustom1 から defaultに変更して下さい ✔
  2. 00:37:846 - ここの音がNormalに戻る緑線についてなのですが　この場所だと少し早く叩いたりするとSoftの音が出てしまうことがあるので
    00:37:814 - ここに引いて下さい ✔　なるほどw
  3. 02:15:846 - ^と同じく02:15:814 - ここへ移動して下さい ✔
[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:10:596 (2) - k ✔
  2. 00:18:596 (2) - ^ ✔
  3. 02:15:846 - 鬼と同じく速度0.90 ✔
  4. 02:18:346 - 2連消してここからk k d ✖ Vocal 沿いなので、急に変えるのは；

[0gre's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:10:596 (2) - k ✔
  2. 00:21:846 (3) - D ✖ 少し音が弱い気がします
  3. 01:57:346 (1) - ここはfinishいらないかな ✔
  4. 02:15:846 - 変速するなら0.90ぐらいでいいと思います 0.75は見えづらいです✔ これは助かります！
nice map~ :)
good luck!
ほとんど適用させて頂きました！
ありがとうございます　＞＜

http://puu.sh/257zS
Last edited by 0gre_old , edited 1 time in total.
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From my queue

[General]
  1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable
  2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
  2. OD -2? seems hard for Normal
    - 00:57:346 (6) - add note here? feels empty
    - 01:05:346 (4) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
  2. OD -1?

    - 00:16:846 ~ 00:21:596 - why no whistles here?
    - 01:07:846 (4) - NC and add finish on start
    - 01:33:846 (1) - whistle on end
    - 01:48:346 (7) - NC ( 01:55:846 (1) - or delete NC here )
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
  2. OD -2

    - 00:28:846 (3) - this slider's repeat arrow was hidden imo
    - 00:31:846 (5) - whistle on start?
    - 00:42:346 (5) - whistle here ( for consistence )
    - 00:43:846 (1,2) - delete whistle on end and adding it start ( ^ )
    - 00:49:846 (5) - delete whsitle 00:50:346 (7) - add here
    - 00:52:846 (1) - ^ on end it hears weired
    - 01:02:846 (2,3) - stack perfectly?
    - 01:29:846 (3) - why suddenly increase DS? it feels weired when i'm playing here
    - 01:41:846 (1) - Use custom 3 hit normal on start
    - 01:45:846 (1) - ^ and use SV 1.5 plz ( or using SV 0.5 01:41:846 (1) - here )
    - 01:52:096 (7) - another repeat arrow issue ~
    - 02:21:846 (6) - NC?
    - 02:22:846 (10,11) - delete whistle on slider body , hears better

[Origin]
  1. 00:05:846 - plz delete inherited point since already has timing point here and set volume to 30% is bette than current

    - 00:10:846 (2,3,4,5) - how about making better blanket? -nazi
    - 00:18:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^
    - 00:57:596 - mute this part is better ( using volume 5% )
    - 01:22:096 (1,2,5,6) - mute these notes plz
    - 01:32:846 (5) - hmm maybe NC here?
    - 01:40:846 (5) - ^
    - 01:45:846 (1) - using custom 3 hitnormal is nice on start
    - 002:04:846 (3,5) - i'm recommend to add NC here ( SV changing )
    - 02:17:846 (8) - NC
    - 02:21:846 (8) - ^
    - 01:57:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much overmapped points here try other pattern plz
Soooooooo scarely ;_; i can't concentrate on my mod orz
oh and bell hitsound is awesome, great choice haha Good luck for rank!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable ok
  2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff
  2. OD -2? seems hard for Normal reduced by 1
    - 00:57:346 (6) - add note here? feels empty 00:56:846 added a note
    - 01:05:346 (4) - leaving it empty
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff reduced volume
  2. OD -1? leaving it the same

    - 00:16:846 ~ 00:21:596 - why no whistles here? added some whistles
    - 01:07:846 (4) - NC and add finish on start sure
    - 01:33:846 (1) - whistle on end prefer it without
    - 01:48:346 (7) - NC ( 01:55:846 (1) - or delete NC here ) deleted NC
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:846 - same issue with Origin diff reduced volume
  2. OD -2 -1

    - 00:28:846 (3) - this slider's repeat arrow was hidden imo changed position
    - 00:31:846 (5) - whistle on start? no whistle
    - 00:42:346 (5) - whistle here ( for consistence ) ok
    - 00:43:846 (1,2) - delete whistle on end and adding it start ( ^ ) ^
    - 00:49:846 (5) - delete whsitle 00:50:346 (7) - add here ^
    - 00:52:846 (1) - ^ on end it hears weired ^
    - 01:02:846 (2,3) - stack perfectly? Can't really tell whether it's stacked or not but we'll see, moved it around
    - 01:29:846 (3) - why suddenly increase DS? it feels weired when i'm playing here I think I changed it.
    - 01:41:846 (1) - Use custom 3 hit normal on start
    - 01:45:846 (1) - ^ and use SV 1.5 plz ( or using SV 0.5 01:41:846 (1) - here ) changed to 0.5
    - 01:52:096 (7) - another repeat arrow issue ~ k
    - 02:21:846 (6) - NC? one whole combination
    - 02:22:846 (10,11) - delete whistle on slider body , hears better ok

Thanks for mod! Glad you took my request xD

Soooooooo scarely ;_; i can't concentrate on my mod orz
oh and bell hitsound is awesome, great choice haha Good luck for rank! :X
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. you SHOULD delete soft-sliderslide or soft-slidertick ( and normal too ) you may know why , it's unrankable Then it would sound just plain weird
  2. Consider adding Tyuh to tag? ( who made PV )

[Origin]
  1. 00:05:846 - plz delete inherited point since already has timing point here and set volume to 30% is bette than current Done

    - 00:10:846 (2,3,4,5) - how about making better blanket? -nazi I made it look better
    - 00:18:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^
    - 00:57:596 - mute this part is better ( using volume 5% ) We also have softhitnormal for a silent hit
    - 01:22:096 (1,2,5,6) - mute these notes plz Done
    - 01:32:846 (5) - hmm maybe NC here? I don't see why
    - 01:40:846 (5) - ^
    - 01:45:846 (1) - using custom 3 hitnormal is nice on start What?
    - 002:04:846 (3,5) - i'm recommend to add NC here ( SV changing ) No
    - 02:17:846 (8) - NC Done
    - 02:21:846 (8) - ^
    - 01:57:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much overmapped points here try other pattern plz Done
Soooooooo scarely ;_; i can't concentrate on my mod orz
oh and bell hitsound is awesome, great choice haha Good luck for rank!
As much as I like to accept mods, I need reasons for the ones I said "no" to, so that I may change it.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • • Set the same preview time in each difficulty.
    • Video offset: -450

Normal

  • • I don't like how this diff flows, try to make the spacing a bit smoother. (for example here 00:09:846 (1,2) move (2) at x:204 y:172)
    • 01:01:846 (1) - Delete this circle. Start a slider here and end it at 01:02:346.
    • 01:04:846 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 01:49:846 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff. Start a spinner at 01:49:846 and end it at 01:51:846.

Hard

  • • Normal: AR 3 and OD 3 || Hard: AR 7 and OD 7. This is bad, the jump is too big here, reduce Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit.
    • 00:53:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
    • 00:57:096 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 00:57:346 (x) - ^
    • 00:57:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
    • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 01:05:346 (x) - ^
    • 01:26:846 (1) - Remove new combo.
    • 01:34:846 (1) - ^
    • 01:45:096 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 01:45:346 (x) - ^
    • 01:53:096 (x) - ^
    • 01:53:346 (x) - ^

Insane

  • • 00:56:846 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 00:57:596 (6) - Delete this circle.
    • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 01:05:346 (x) - ^
    • 01:33:346 (3) - Try this pattern:
    SPOILER

Origin

  • • There are a lot of unsnapped green timing section in this diff, please fix them. (use AIBat to see which one you have to fix)
    • Why you used a different Kiai here? You should keep it consistent.
    • 02:17:596 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 02:19:596 (x) - ^
    • 02:21:596 (x) - ^

0gre's Taiko Muzukashii & Oni

  • • 01:24:846 (6,7,8,9) - k k k k
    • 02:14:846 (6,7,8,9) - ^
    • 02:22:846 (x) - Add d
    • 02:23:096 (x) - ^
    • 02:23:346 (x) - Add k
    • 02:23:596 (x) - ^
neonat
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Topic Starter
neonat

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • • Set the same preview time in each difficulty. Done
    • Video offset: -450 Done

Normal

  • • I don't like how this diff flows, try to make the spacing a bit smoother. (for example here 00:09:846 (1,2) move (2) at x:204 y:172) I tried shifting around
    • 01:01:846 (1) - Delete this circle. Start a slider here and end it at 01:02:346. added a slider
    • 01:04:846 (x) - Add a circle. I want to keep it empty
    • 01:49:846 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff. Start a spinner at 01:49:846 and end it at 01:51:846. added the spinner

Hard

  • • Normal: AR 3 and OD 3 || Hard: AR 7 and OD 7. This is bad, the jump is too big here, reduce Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit. I reduced AR -1 and OD -2
    • 00:53:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part. ok
    • 00:57:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
    • 00:57:346 (x) - ^ ^
    • 00:57:846 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part. ^
    • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
    • 01:05:346 (x) - ^ ^
    • 01:26:846 (1) - Remove new combo. I think I prefer it this way
    • 01:34:846 (1) - ^ ^
    • 01:45:096 (x) - Add a circle. ok (for the rest as well)
    • 01:45:346 (x) - ^
    • 01:53:096 (x) - ^
    • 01:53:346 (x) - ^

Insane

  • • 00:56:846 (x) - Add a circle. ok
    • 00:57:596 (6) - Delete this circle. ^
    • 01:05:096 (x) - Add a circle. ^
    • 01:05:346 (x) - ^ ^
    • 01:33:346 (3) - Try this pattern: I changed to something of that sort, instead of straight slider
    SPOILER
Thanks for the mod!!
0gre_old
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0gre_old
0gre's Taiko Muzukashii & Oni

  • • 01:24:846 (6,7,8,9) - k k k k ✔
    • 02:14:846 (6,7,8,9) - ^ ✔
    • 02:22:846 (x) - Add d ✔
    • 02:23:096 (x) - ^ ✔
    • 02:23:346 (x) - Add k ✔
    • 02:23:596 (x) - ^ ✔
Thank you for your Mod ~ This was nice idea which i couldnt inspirate

http://puu.sh/28JjC
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

xxheroxx wrote:

Origin

  • • There are a lot of unsnapped green timing section in this diff, please fix them. (use AIBat to see which one you have to fix)
    • Why you used a different Kiai here? You should keep it consistent.
    • 02:17:596 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 02:19:596 (x) - ^
    • 02:21:596 (x) - ^
I want to give time for the player to reach the next note
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Normal:
00:08:346 (5,1) - make this? - http://puu.sh/2ab0H
00:14:846 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2ab8a
00:48:846 (5,6) - down by few grids http://puu.sh/2ab3Y

Hard:
HPAROD all +1
00:15:846 (4) - 396:184 for better flow?
00:22:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/2abbK http://puu.sh/2abc7
00:36:846 (3) - ^ 340:124
00:53:846 (1,2) - hide note on spinner end is not a good style for hard
00:57:846 (1,2) - ^
01:49:846 (1,2) - ^
01:12:721 (1) - this not doesn't follow anything, consider to remove
02:23:846 - +note?

Insane:
00:21:346 (7,8) - 2 grid up, sorry for nazi :o
00:53:846 (1) - This DS change feels strange, but not a big deal

Origin:
OD+1
00:09:346 (6,1) - this little overlap looks awkward
00:17:846 (1) - oh.... try something like - http://puu.sh/2abpZ
00:41:096 (4,1) - avoid this awkward overlaps - http://puu.sh/2abry

That's all. Good Luck!
by4865311
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by4865311
이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ
neonat
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Topic Starter
neonat

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Normal:
00:08:346 (5,1) - make this? - http://puu.sh/2ab0H Shifted somewhat to that
00:14:846 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2ab8a Slightly changed a slider shape
00:48:846 (5,6) - down by few grids http://puu.sh/2ab3Y ok

Hard:
HPAROD all +1 I increased HP Drain
00:15:846 (4) - 396:184 for better flow? ok
00:22:846 (2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/2abbK http://puu.sh/2abc7 ^
00:36:846 (3) - ^ 340:124 ^
00:53:846 (1,2) - hide note on spinner end is not a good style for hard Do you mean slider? I moved all 3
00:57:846 (1,2) - ^
01:49:846 (1,2) - ^
01:12:721 (1) - this not doesn't follow anything, consider to remove Follows vocals, I think I'm keeping it
02:23:846 - +note? Nothing really there to be honest, I think it's best to end before that

Insane:
00:21:346 (7,8) - 2 grid up, sorry for nazi :o Not sure why 2 grids up though, it's already aligned with (6)
00:53:846 (1) - This DS change feels strange, but not a big deal didn't want it to be too close



That's all. Good Luck!
Thanks for the mod!
Aeonian Sonder
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Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ
We don't speak Korean!
neonat
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neonat

-APXH wrote:

by4865311 wrote:

이 호러곡 은근 중독성과 재밌음이 있는듯>.<전 그래서 이호러곡이 좋음ㅎㅎ
We don't speak Korean!
:lol: Aha. It's something about it being a horror song and being nice ^^'
neonat
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Currently now it is this:
SPOILER
Lol.
But I'm not sure if the top portion af the pic might actually be nicer:
SPOILER
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue

General:
Your BG.... quality is really poor, you should find better one.
Tick rate 2 fits better imo.

Origin:
OD+1
00:09:346 (6,1) - this little overlap looks awkward
00:17:846 (1) - oh.... try something like - http://puu.sh/2abpZ
00:41:096 (4,1) - avoid this awkward overlaps - http://puu.sh/2abry

That's all. Good Luck!
Done
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6).
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/


[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable.

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there.
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad.


[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)


Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~
neonat
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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Normal]
01:00:346 (5,6,7) - Fix the spacing there, (7) is far from (6) in comparison with (5) to (6). ok
01:36:846 (4) - Work this curve a bit more. This slider is not looking good to me :/ Haha no problem, I'll make it more curvy


[Hard]
The hard isn't bad at all. Just something I dislike is the those small overlaps of the sliders, personally I like to see the slider border clearly when I play so the suggestion here is to increase a bit the spacing to parts like: 00:08:846 (1,2,3) - so the slider border will be clear and more enjoyable. I'll try what I can do, within the constraints of distance snap

[Insane]
01:46:846 (2,3) - fix those in the same X axis, it looks like you accidentally put the circle note there. ok
Overall I didn't feel very comfortable with this difficulty, I think the spacing is kinda high for that song but it's not bad. My intention at the start was a high spacing insane >.< it is really such a let-off? :?




Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~

Thanks for mod, I really appreciate it :)
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?
neonat
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-APXH wrote:

Did you remember to update my difficulty yet?
Yes I updated your difficulty
You can see it yourself.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck
neonat
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I'm probably going to reduce the drastic difference in speed, but as for rhythm and all, in all honesty, I'll try, but it might not turn out much different.
Normal & Hard was also fixed.
Last edited by neonat , edited 1 time in total.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
From my Queue :D Let's go!


[Normal]

Well, the spacing (DS) seems oscilate between 0.7 and 0.8 on this diff -- that's: select one of these values and use it from the start to the end.

These mods are for DS = 0.7x. If you plan use DS = 0.8x just ignore all the (x: y:) movings (:

00:06:846 (3) - Move it to x:336 y:48 for alignment with prior notes
00:07:846 (4) - ^ to x:196 y:164, same reason
00:08:346 (5) - ^ to x:100 y:164, same reason
00:08:846 (6) - ^ to x:148 y:248 for perfect triangle
00:10:846 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to make a perfect pentagon here, and keep the stack at (6,7) ^^

00:13:846 (1) - move the 1st dot to x:180 y:296, move the 2nd dot to x:244 y:296, move the 3rd dot to x:297 y:247 -- for a perfect blanket here (:

00:14:846 (2) - move the 1st dot to x:380 y:304, the 2nd dot to x:452 y:304, and the 3rd dot to x:496 y:256 -- for another perfect blanket

00:19:846 (3) - move to x:228 y:28 for spacing
00:20:846 (4) - ^ to x:360 y:196, for spacing with prior and next sliders
00:21:846 (1) - ^ to x:224 y:300 -- it seems better here
00:22:846 (2) - ^ to x:92 y:264 -- same reason
00:23:846 (3) - ^ to x:96 y:108 -- same reason
00:24:846 (4) - ^ to x:240 y:52 -- adjusting spacing

00:25:846 (1) - move to x:436 y:64, move the 3rd dot to x:460 y:160

00:27:346 (3) - move to x:368 y:272
00:28:846 (6) - move to x:120 y:204 to align with 00:27:346 (3)
00:29:346 (7) - move to x:128 y:108

00:30:846 (2,3) - make a perfect blanket here

00:39:846 (4) - move just the 3rd dot to x:280 y:152 -- better flow and keeping the path
00:40:846 (5) - move to x:368 y:120 and the 2nd dot to x:488 y:40 -- same reason

00:42:846 (1,2) - try make sliders stay like below:
SPOILER
Making this. move 00:44:846 (3) to x:52 y:232 and move 00:45:346 (4) to x:52 y:136.

well, going to next ^^

[Hard]

00:21:846 (1) - Move it 1 grid down to align with prior's
00:27:846 (3,4) - select these two and move together to x:300 y:332
00:28:846 (5) - move to x:48 y:328, the 2nd dot to x:20 y:2388 and the 3rd dot to x:20 y:224

00:35:846 (1,2) - select these two sliders and move them 7 grids up (: for keeping spacing and path

01:25:846 (1) - move 1 grid up (:
01:26:346 (2) - ^

01:26:846 (1,2,3,4) - select and move all together by 2 grids left

01:38:596 (1) - move to x:104 y:280
01:38:846 (2) - move it 2 grid left, then move 2nd grid to x:200 y:336 and the 3rd dot to x:236 y:328
01:39:346 (3) - move it 1 grid down
02:17:346 (5) - ^
02:20:346 (2) - move to x:264 y:168 for perfect triangle with (3,1)
02:20:846 (3) - move to x:136 y:168 and then move the 2nd dot to x:104 y:236 -- to keep spacing, path and make a perfect parallelogram with (3,1,2)

well, next diff (:

[Insane]

00:56:846 (4,5,6) - Make here a more spaced one (: with (4) at x:256 y:208, (5) at x:288 y:156 and (6) at x:228 y:156

01:28:846 (1,2,3) - try to align and make spacing consistent

01:35:846 (6,7,8) - move these together 2 grid left.

[Origin]

*nothing to say here (:

---------------------------------------------------------------

HOW AWESOME IS THIS SONG :D

The Churchbelll hitsound is simply PERFECT *.* I Loved it ^.^ it reminded me another map I finally got S at harder diff. The map is Coldplay - Viva la Vida which uses Churchbells too ^^

and... this song (and the anime behind) is Korean? It sound me as were Japanese, but still awesome (: yeah, I noticed the SB Korean lyrics :)

Hmm... after my mod and more a one or two, I think it's time to call a MAT/BAT to review it -- and possibly get it Bubbled ♥

Att.
neonat
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Topic Starter
neonat
I will move some to those positions, but I'm not really going for total symmetry and all.
Thanks for the mod
HabiHolic
5,459 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - Posted elsewhere ought to think
00:39:346 (3) - 00:38:846 (2) Adjust the slider with interval
00:56:846 (6) - Posted elsewhere ought to think
01:01:346 (7) - Distance check
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Patterns do not look so good
02:01:846 (4) - Posted elsewhere ought to think

[Hard]
CS -1

none

[Insane]
Think much difference between Anna and hard with insane ...

none

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck
neonat
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neonat

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Normal]
00:13:346 (7) - Posted elsewhere ought to think prefer it stacked
00:39:346 (3) - 00:38:846 (2) Adjust the slider with interval no change
00:56:846 (6) - Posted elsewhere ought to think like it stacked too
01:01:346 (7) - Distance check Shifted
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Patterns do not look so good I think it's fine
02:01:846 (4) - Posted elsewhere ought to think Oh whoops, didn't realise. Changed

[Hard]
CS -1 I'm fine with the current CS

none

[Insane]
Think much difference between Anna and hard with insane ... In my opinion, not really, it's really pretty much just the spacing and the other difficulty adjusters

none

[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck
Thanks for the mod. 감사
neonat
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Notice: I am out of my country, got internet but no osu! Game. Out from 12-28 march. It got extended. Just to notify no updates can be made till then thanks for understanding.
HeatKai
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HeatKai
I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/
  • slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.
  1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
  3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
  5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
  6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
  7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff.
  8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
  9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
  10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting.
    SPOILER
  11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
  12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
  13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
  14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
  15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
  16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
  17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
  18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
  19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
  20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    SPOILER
  21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
  22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
  23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
  24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
  25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
  26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
  27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
  28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
  29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
  30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
  31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
  32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
  33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle
[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.
  • Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    00:55:225 - snap to 00:55:221
    00:55:475 - snap to 00:55:471
    00:56:225 - snap to 00:56:221
    00:56:475 - snap to 00:56:471
    00:57:225 - snap to 00:57:221
    00:57:475 - snap to 00:57:471
    00:58:225 - snap to 00:58:221
    00:58:475 - snap to 00:58:471
    00:59:225 - snap to 00:59:221
    00:59:475 - snap to 00:59:471
    01:00:350 - snap to 01:00:346
    01:00:475 - snap to 01:00:471
    01:01:350 - snap to 01:01:346
    01:01:475 - snap to 01:01:471
    01:02:225 - snap to 01:02:221
    01:02:475 - snap to 01:02:471
    01:03:225 - snap to 01:03:221
    01:03:475 - snap to 01:03:471
    01:04:225 - snap to 01:04:221
    01:04:475 - snap to 01:04:471
    01:05:225 - snap to 01:05:221
    01:05:475 - snap to 01:05:471
    01:06:226 - snap to 01:06:221
    01:06:476 - snap to 01:06:471
    01:07:226 - snap to 01:07:221
    01:07:476 - snap to 01:07:471
    01:07:726 - snap to 01:07:721
    01:08:601 - snap to 01:08:596
    01:09:101 - snap to 01:09:096
    01:09:976 - snap to 01:09:971
    01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
    01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
    01:13:841 - snap to 01:13:846
    01:17:841 - snap to 01:17:846
    01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
    01:29:841 - snap to 01:29:846
    01:29:973 - snap to 01:29:971
    01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
    01:33:973 - snap to 01:33:971
    01:37:841 - snap to 01:37:846
    01:37:973 - snap to 01:37:971
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.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue.

[Origin]
00:17:846 (1) - This slider can be made much better. Work it out and make the curves more beautiful to fit the next circles afterwards.
00:31:846 (1) - Fix that beat blanket :<
00:37:846 - Horrible whistle sound doesn't fit this song ._.; Try something else instead of whistle :c(Suggestion)


Overall it's good .-.
Good luck~
I fixed everything but the whitsle part. I kinda sounds bland under my ears, and I don't know what else to put besides the whistle :?
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

You have to choose one spacing for this map and change the whole spacing of the map

Hard

01:34:846 (1) - Remove NC

(note from jericho2442)

Insane

ths map has two main problems, the first is its just all too much spacing, everything is just repeated 1/2 notes on a random jump. the problem about this is it becomes real boring fast. also the econd problem is the slowdown sections. they are really unexpected and do not suit the map or song. i really do advise to do a lot of work on remapping this diff and making it more fun to play, i know you can do it but will take abit of work

Origin

same advise as the Insane diff,it just gets boring real fast, doing the same thig waaay too much, spice it up and dont focus soo much on jumps
also moe advise for this diff is to remove all of the combo spam where its like 1,1,1 ist not needed and plays bad, also 1/4 is over used in areas, its a soft song

yea just som advise atm but if you take it and try to improve using i then the map will become much much better, good luck
Removed unnessisary 1/4 notes
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;




[Origin]

00:49:846 (1,2) - Hat galryeoseo these patterns do not wear well.


Good Luck
I fixed it and...Why doesn't everyone think I know Korean!?!?
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Origin]
See what AiBAT found.
  • Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
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.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.
I have resnapped some/most of the points. I will continue to resnap everything along the way.
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
Did you get my updated beatmap link yet? More importantly, did you update my difficulty?
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat
Heatkai & apxh: i will update and fix when i return home on the 28 . Im still out of the country. Sorry about that.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
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Topic Starter
neonat
Updated your difficulty -APXH
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

HeatKai wrote:

I come from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫
I've watched,try and see how you map on all diffs. I want to say that,I think this need many things to be fix :p so I'm going to mod the diffs first,skipped the general for awhile.
All of the 80% volume part,change it to 60% please. 80 is just too loud.

[Normal]
this diff lack of hitsounds :/
  • slider velocity 1.40 is quite high for the easiest diff.but follows you if you wanted to fix it or not.
  1. 00:05:846 (1,2,3) - maybe do it like this rather then make a straight pattern starting. moved it slightly
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:846 (4) - add whistle
  3. 00:13:846 (1) - if you're trying to make a blanket here,this is not really a good blanket in my honest opinion. not a blanket
    SPOILER
  4. 00:15:846 (3) - add whistle at the starting.
  5. 00:17:846 (1) - ^
  6. 00:19:846 (3,4) - this two sliders,the whistle should start at the starting.
  7. 00:21:846 (1) - starting from this part.i think the slider multiplier to be 0.5x isn't necessary.it's really confusing as the easiest diff. I kinda like it, but I'll change it to 0.75x
  8. 00:22:846 (2,3) - this two sliders,add whistle at starting.
  9. 00:27:846 (4) - add whistle
  10. 00:31:346 (3) - this slider doesn't really looks good if it's like this and change the whistle place from end to starting. I find at starting a little weird though
    SPOILER
  11. 00:35:846 (3) - remove whistle from end of the slider.
  12. 00:36:846 (4) - remove whistle from the slider but add whistle at the starting and ending,if you added the whistle at the slider,there'll be an other noise that coming from the slider.
  13. 00:37:846 (1) - starting from here clap fits more then whistle imo.starting of this slider put finish,end of the slider put clap.
  14. 00:39:346 (3) - starting put clap
  15. 00:39:846 (4) - ending of the slider,change to clap from whistle.
  16. 00:40:846 (5) - add clap at the repeat.
  17. 00:42:846 (1) - add clap at the end.
  18. 00:43:846 (2) - ^
  19. 00:45:346 (4) - change from whistle to clap
  20. 00:45:846 (1) - add finish at the starting,clap at the end.make it as a curve.
    SPOILER
  21. 00:47:346 (3) - from whistle to clap.
  22. 00:47:846 (4) - add clap at the end.
  23. 00:48:846 (5) - ^
  24. 00:50:846 (1,2) - add clap at the end.
  25. 00:52:846 (3) - remove whistle from the slider, add whistle at the starting and add clap at the ending.
  26. 00:56:346 (5) - from finish change to whistle.
  27. 00:57:846 (1) - put whistle at the end of the slider.
  28. 00:59:346 (3) - add whistle
  29. 00:59:846 (4) - remove whistle.
  30. 01:01:846 (1) - add whistle at the end.
  31. 01:02:846 (2) - add whistle at the repeat
  32. 01:04:346 (3) - why random finish here,change it to whistle.
  33. 01:06:846 (2) - add whistle

.....I'll probably continue others irc xD too long or maybe i'll edit it soon.
Thanks for the mod~
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, Recheck

Normal

00:24:846 (4) - Not stacked well
01:09:846 (1,2) - Spacing
02:00:846 (3) - 2 reserves might confuse players, i advise to use only one

Hard

00:06:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is different than on the next ones
00:09:846 (3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent

Insane and Orgin

Insane

Try to make such a rythm as I did. A mix between vocal and BG music, the way you did it is just 1/1

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example
osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 5830
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Hide and Seek
Artist:Ho-Ong-I
ArtistUnicode:Ho-Ong-I
Creator:neonat
Version:BB
Source:
Tags:korean vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:72943

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

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You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck
Onozu
71 posts
Joined August 2011
Onozu
Such a cute map
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck

Origin

The spacing and comboing needs full change, still.

Example
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: [SeeU] Hide and Seek.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5830
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hide and Seek
TitleUnicode:Hide and Seek
Artist:Ho-Ong-I
ArtistUnicode:Ho-Ong-I
Creator:neonat
Version:BB
Source:
Tags:korean vocaloid SeeU -apxh 0gre Tyuh
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:72943

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"Hide.And.Seek..jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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77971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
81721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
81971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
85846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
101846,-100,4,1,3,80,0,0
101971,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
102721,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
109596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
113596,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
115596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
119846,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
119971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
123721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
123971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
127721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
127971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
131721,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,80,0,1
131971,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,1
135846,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,133,155
Combo2 : 138,47,140
Combo3 : 231,22,231
Combo4 : 121,142,137
Combo5 : 255,190,94
Combo6 : 210,20,11

[HitObjects]
360,336,37846,2,0,P|456:296|440:192,1,225.000008583069
368,104,38596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,38846,2,0,P|208:152|152:136,1,112.500004291535
264,136,39346,2,0,P|240:189|192:221,1,112.500004291535
88,240,39846,2,0,P|80:320|200:360,1,225.000008583069
198,360,40596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,360,41096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,41346,2,0,P|376:328|392:288,1,112.500004291535
456,200,41846,6,0,B|464:88|464:88|400:88|368:40,1,225.000008583069
256,32,42596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,42846,2,0,P|104:72|88:128,1,112.500004291535
144,32,43346,2,0,P|148:88|181:136,1,112.500004291535
256,216,43846,2,0,B|208:312|208:312|144:360|104:304,1,225.000008583069
105,306,44596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,306,45096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,45346,2,0,P|32:224|0:272,1,112.500004291535
432,352,69846,6,0,P|384:312|400:208,1,168.750006437302
394,214,70346,2,0,L|424:104,1,112.500004291535
336,40,70846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,71096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,71346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,71846,6,0,P|32:256|48:304,1,112.500004291535
128,376,72346,2,0,P|160:320|144:272,1,112.500004291535
260,276,72846,2,0,P|247:319|279:375,1,112.500004291535
368,304,73346,2,0,B|432:240|416:160|480:112,1,225.000008583069
479,112,74346,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74846,2,0,P|196:30|155:43,1,112.500004291535
256,64,75346,2,0,P|192:88|176:128,1,112.500004291535

You cant leave this like it is, modding won't help much, they would need to mod every single note in Insane and Origin. You have to change this on your own and try to make things better before asking for mods. Not offensive but you seem not to see the spacing mistakes. Try to keep one spacing and not make such weird spacing like on the hardest diff.

Good luck
なにそれ? ° ω °

Anyways, I'm continuing to fix all the timing points, because apperently, the resnap feature DOES NOT WORK. I'll quite busy with other maps, like GrayKaiser82 's Sexy Free and Single beatmap, and school. I will continue to fix the timing points. Don't worry/
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal


[General Stuff]

  1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that.
  2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does.
  3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video.
Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

  • 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
    00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
    00:22:596 - ^
    00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ?
    00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
    00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe)
    00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ?
    00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846
    00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion)
    00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too)
    00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful.
    00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting.
    01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe?
    01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy.
    01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
    02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players.
    02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152
Woah. It's over? Nice map :)

Hard


[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

  1. HP - 1
  2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish
That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

  • 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
    00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596
    00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms*
    00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
    00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
    00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
    00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
    01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry.
    01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
    01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too.
    01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
    01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
    01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
    01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty.
    01:47:346 - ^
    02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
    02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
    02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe...


I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello. Why isn't that map already ranked? It's beautiful. Well.. Okay. Enough emotions! LET'S do it!

M4M from my queue



Normal


[General Stuff]

  1. Consider adding a breaktime somewhere. Newer players need breaks to gain strength. Or sth like that. I think it should still be find, this difficulty is not demanding and spread out
  2. The notes are very quiet. Think about making them a bit (just a tiny bit) louder. So the player can actually hear what he does. sounds fine on my side
  3. Think about adding something in the end. The player HAS TO SEE the end of that video. If they want to see the ending they can look at the other difficulties xD :p
Okay. Enough of those general things. Nobody is interested in those anyway. Let's start with the

[Real Deal]

  • 00:15:846 - Maybe change the shape a bit, so that it looks like those two notes later are sth. like an extension.
    00:18:596 - This looks a bit messy
    00:22:596 - ^
    00:23:846 (3) - spacing issue ? Probably. Changed.
    00:26:846 - hidden notes are hard to catch for newer players.
    00:27:346 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is only me. I don't like corners. I would suggest to change those notes into something round. (Like this maybe) Designed changed anyway with the shifting of (2)
    00:30:846 (2) - spacing issue ? Don't think so
    00:32:346 - Think about putting this at the same height as 00:31:846 no thanks :X
    00:34:846 (2,3,4) - Those sliders, looking like coffe beans or children cowering in fear, aren't fashionable. Make something smother. (only my opinion) changed
    00:37:846 - Give that slider a shape. Sliders love shapes. (And Chiva too) neonat likes straight too though, slides don't have to love me
    00:42:846 - Those sliders look like those streptobacillusses. Think about something more beautiful. these sliders don't multiply like them though, I thinkI'll keep them this way
    00:47:846 - Don't put the begin of the slider at the same x as the circle before, since the notes before are arranged roundly. Try to make it more fitting. changed
    01:12:846 - Some shape? Maybe? if I remember right, this part is always like that
    01:14:846 (3,4) - This looks messy. not really (to me)
    01:36:846 (4) - Change the position to: x:280 and y:324
    02:08:846 - Think about changing this repeating sliders. If they are longer than one repeat, it's confusing for new players. was one of the many reasons why this is Normal
    02:13:346 (4) - Change position to x:68 y:152
Woah. It's over? Nice map :)

Hard


[General Stuff]

Aaaaand here we are again with some general things. What I also wanted to say: That video is kinda creepy. Do you have a translation of that song? I'd really like to know what's happening...

  1. HP - 1
  2. No breaktime. People need breaks! Well. I need them. But I am also people'ish
That's it. Nothing more. When I tested your map I found out it is fun, too. I think you'll get a star from me. My last kudosu shall be used to give it to you.

Well. No. Don't interprete wrong. I'll give you some opinions, but that was it with my general stuff.

[Real Deal]

  • 00:05:846 - Try to tell the player that there will be some circles, arranged in a curve. What I want to tell... Some curvy sliders, maybe?
    00:08:846 - Think about changing this into a repeating slider till here 00:09:346 . and put a circle here 00:09:596 I feel my way is more fitting
    00:21:846 - Curves. Curves are BEAUTIFUL. *waves arms* Not this time, but you may like a vocaloid song I have made already but is unsubmitted, with all the curves in the world
    00:23:846 - Change position to x: 128 y: 80
    00:24:596 (4,5) - make this look less messy. Maybe stack it under the slider before.
    00:52:846 - This time, I don't want you to change the shape, but the angle. Make that slider a bit inclined.
    00:59:846 - But this could be curvy again.
    01:04:846 (6,7,8) - This confused me. Maybe change it. It could iritate if there are stacked notes with different ... beats? Do you call it like that? I don't know... I hope you know what I mean. If note don't worry. I know what you mean, but I like it this way so HD can be *ahem* more tricky for 1st time try
    01:05:846 (1) - Spacing issue ? I would recommend you try to make that wonderfully round slider end where those circles are.
    01:07:846 (1,2) - Again those bacteria sliders. I don't hate them in particular. But... Well. I don't like them too. Cute :X ....what can I say?
    01:16:346 (1,2) - Curves? Anyone?
    01:20:346 (1,2) - Try to change this. Corners aren't pretty.
    01:39:346 (3,4,5) - Think about shanging those notes into a triangle. Triangles are fun to play. Something like this
    01:45:846 (1,2,3) - when you don't know any shape, make curves. They are easy, fun, and pretty. I wouldn't have my door
    01:47:346 - ^
    02:01:346 (4) - change position to x: 240 y:44 (I think I'm going full placing-nazi right now. Sorry)
    02:02:346 (1,2) - Damn those corners again.
    02:04:846 - Curve? Round? Maybe... Changed


I won't mod the insane diff. Because I think it's good as it is. You COULD shange some shapes but it isn't nessecary. Just go on like that. Hope your map will be ranked soon.

Oh. And sorry for those lame jokes. It's just that I didn't sleep for 36 hours and I feel kinda strange ...'
You can now find the english lyrics in the Creator's words.
The video is creepy because, well, it is a scary song.

Thanks for the mod, and it's ok to have humour in your mod, I know my mods are bland orz
~~~~
[-Google-]
[-Google-]
Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod :P

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
    SPOILER
    - [Hard] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Insane] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Normal] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Origin] :
    Combo5 : 255,170,43
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
  3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D:
    SPOILER
    01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
    01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
    01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
    01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
    01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
    01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
    01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
    01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
    01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
    01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
    01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
    01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
    01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
    01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
    01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
    01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
    01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
    01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
    01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
    01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
    01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
    01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
    01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
    01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
    01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
    01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
    01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
    01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
    01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
    01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
    01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
    01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
    01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
    01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
    01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
    01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
    02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
    02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
    02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
    02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
    02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
    02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
    02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
    02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
    02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
    02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
    02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
    02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
    02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
    02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
    02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
    02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
    02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
    02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
    02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
    02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
    02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
    02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
    02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
    02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
    02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
    02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
    02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
    02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
    02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
    02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
    02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
    02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
    02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
    02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
    02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
    02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
    02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
    02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
    02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
    02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
  4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:
Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]
  • Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
    Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
    00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion :D
    01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o?
    00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
    00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D:
    Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O

    Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3
[Hard]
  • Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring :x
    00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
    00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D:
    00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up

    01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 -
    02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ?
    02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D:
Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD
OEvil
299 posts
Joined December 2012
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]
Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346.
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once.
SPOILER

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

[-Google-] wrote:

Well as a newbie noob mapper I can't come up with too many useful things D:
But I will try my best to mod :P

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours:
    SPOILER
    - [Hard] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Insane] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Normal] :
    Combo5 : 255,190,94
    - [Origin] :
    Combo5 : 255,170,43
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times too……But I doubt whether it counts D:
  3. Unsnapped inherited sections in Origin everywhere D: Fixed what I could find
    SPOILER
    01:10:726 - snap to 01:10:721
    01:11:476 - snap to 01:11:471
    01:25:841 - snap to 01:25:846
    01:33:841 - snap to 01:33:846
    01:42:224 - snap to 01:42:221
    01:44:224 - snap to 01:44:221
    01:44:474 - snap to 01:44:471
    01:45:224 - snap to 01:45:221
    01:45:724 - snap to 01:45:721
    01:46:224 - snap to 01:46:221
    01:46:474 - snap to 01:46:471
    01:47:224 - snap to 01:47:221
    01:47:474 - snap to 01:47:471
    01:48:224 - snap to 01:48:221
    01:48:474 - snap to 01:48:471
    01:49:224 - snap to 01:49:221
    01:49:474 - snap to 01:49:471
    01:50:224 - snap to 01:50:221
    01:50:474 - snap to 01:50:471
    01:51:224 - snap to 01:51:221
    01:51:474 - snap to 01:51:471
    01:52:224 - snap to 01:52:221
    01:52:474 - snap to 01:52:471
    01:53:224 - snap to 01:53:221
    01:53:474 - snap to 01:53:471
    01:54:225 - snap to 01:54:221
    01:54:475 - snap to 01:54:471
    01:55:225 - snap to 01:55:221
    01:55:475 - snap to 01:55:471
    01:55:725 - snap to 01:55:721
    01:55:975 - snap to 01:55:971
    01:56:475 - snap to 01:56:471
    01:56:725 - snap to 01:56:721
    01:57:225 - snap to 01:57:221
    01:57:475 - snap to 01:57:471
    01:57:841 - snap to 01:57:846
    02:01:716 - snap to 02:01:721
    02:01:975 - snap to 02:01:971
    02:02:225 - snap to 02:02:221
    02:02:475 - snap to 02:02:471
    02:02:725 - snap to 02:02:721
    02:02:975 - snap to 02:02:971
    02:03:225 - snap to 02:03:221
    02:03:475 - snap to 02:03:471
    02:04:725 - snap to 02:04:721
    02:05:225 - snap to 02:05:221
    02:05:475 - snap to 02:05:471
    02:05:725 - snap to 02:05:721
    02:05:976 - snap to 02:05:971
    02:06:226 - snap to 02:06:221
    02:06:476 - snap to 02:06:471
    02:06:726 - snap to 02:06:721
    02:06:976 - snap to 02:06:971
    02:07:226 - snap to 02:07:221
    02:07:476 - snap to 02:07:471
    02:08:726 - snap to 02:08:721
    02:09:226 - snap to 02:09:221
    02:09:476 - snap to 02:09:471
    02:09:726 - snap to 02:09:721
    02:09:976 - snap to 02:09:971
    02:10:226 - snap to 02:10:221
    02:10:476 - snap to 02:10:471
    02:10:726 - snap to 02:10:721
    02:10:976 - snap to 02:10:971
    02:11:226 - snap to 02:11:221
    02:11:476 - snap to 02:11:471
    02:13:226 - snap to 02:13:221
    02:13:476 - snap to 02:13:471
    02:13:726 - snap to 02:13:721
    02:13:976 - snap to 02:13:971
    02:14:226 - snap to 02:14:221
    02:14:476 - snap to 02:14:471
    02:14:726 - snap to 02:14:721
    02:14:976 - snap to 02:14:971
    02:15:226 - snap to 02:15:221
    02:15:476 - snap to 02:15:471
  4. Some breaks maybe? especially in Normal and Hard I think D:
Two diffs only since it’s long for me D:
Also I never mapped Insane so I don;t know if what I think should be fixed…
Sorry……

[Normal]
  • Personally I think it‘s a bit harder than I expected(sv speed)……well up to you :3
    Maybe the DS here is a little bit too low……making it looks crowded someplace.
    00:17:846 (1) - make it like 00:09:846 (1) - will be probably better in my opinion :D Changed somewhat
    01:19:596 (4) - 02:01:596 (4) - Only 2 place that appear to be 1/2 beat,consider remove them (and add repeat to 01:18:846 (3) - )to reduce difficulty O.o? Keeping
    00:23:846 (3) - 00:32:346 (4) - Fix the spacing Plz
    00:24:846 (4) - place more neatly D: k
    Actually I think in Normal diff there should be constant spacing :O seems constant to me though, I had to change the divisor to keep up with the change in sv

    Rather than that……Clear flow xD……Great Job :3
[Hard]
  • Consider adding some jumps?D: Since note flow is too many there,kinda boring :x
    00:17:846 (5,6) - feel something strange with this :O
    00:51:846 (1) - spilt up maybe D: sure
    00:52:846 (2) - slider end 1 grid up it's k

    01:29:596 (3) - reduce a repeat move to 01:29:846 - and add a note at 01:29:596 - changed
    02:10:096 (6) - change to a note at 02:10:346 - ? no change
    02:22:846 (1,2,3) - personally I want to remove these three D: important! for the last piece of music as well as for the video
Just these since I'm noob and your map is so nice xD

Well wish it will be rank soon :3
GL xD
Thanks for the mod~
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]
Some Edits:
00:40:846 (5) - Repeat the slider and use Ctrl + G Reason for not repeating too many is because it is the simplest difficulty
00:49:846 (6) - Remove this circle.
00:49:846 - Add a slider from here until 00:50:346. Trying to break it into phrases, so there is an unusually large gap
01:58:846 - Add a slider from here until 01:59:096 and then repeat it once. Added one circle
SPOILER

[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle. I do not really think these 2 would fit more that what it is now, sorry
Thanks for your input, and I'll make changes where I see should be changed.
Reat
204 posts
Joined May 2011
Reat
Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

Reat wrote:

Hi, neonat. still update this map??

Artist : 호옹이
Romanised Artist : Ho-Ong-I

Title : 숨바꼭질
Romanised Title : Hide and Seek


Do not give kudos to me.
Yea I do still update this map. Will change when I get back home. Thanks
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
Hi modders all alike.

I'm currently busy with my life, but tomorrow, I'll update my beatmap again.
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]


[Origin]
Some Edits:
02:23:596 - Add a slider from here until 02:23:846.
02:23:596 (8) - Remove this circle.
The thing is, there is no sound @ 02:23:846 , so it makes no sense to make a slider until there
Also, saying to have a slider @ 02:23:596 , then saying to remove the circle at the same timing spot is kinda redundant, don't'tchya think?
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?


Normal

  1. Check Distance.
    00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
  2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
  3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time.
  4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin
  5. 01:30:346 - create a circle
[/notice]

Hard

  1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
  2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
  3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
  4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

  1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap
  2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443)
  3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Kinomi
1,229 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner :o
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?


Normal

  1. Check Distance.
    00:17:846 (1,2) - Delete '2' slider, reverse '1' slider
  2. 00:57:346 - create a circle
  3. 01:23:846 (4,1) - break time. sure
  4. 01:24:096 ~ 01:25:596 - create a spin end of spinner would be too close to next beat
  5. 01:30:346 - create a circle
[/notice]

Hard

  1. 00:41:846 (3) , 01:01:846 (1) - Roundly slider// if this slider your concept, ignore this sentence
  2. 00:48:596 - create a circle
  3. 01:33:846 (1) ~ 01:34:346 - create a new combo slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800433 like this)
  4. 01:58:846 (1,2) - delete '2' circle, reverse once again (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800436)

Insane

  1. 00:15:846 (1,2) - not overlap k
  2. 01:03:846 (5,6) - overlap. like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800443) decided not to overlap this earlier when I made this
  3. 01:17:596 , 01:21:596 - create a circle

Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Thanks for the mod, appreciate it!

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late

general
no break time and no spinner :o
you need a custom soft sliderslide


normal

I think you should avoid changing sv in normal

00:18:846(2,4) I think these sliders are not pretty ,turn them into better shapes

01:18:846(3,4) avoid this overlap,serious problem

or you can choose other shapes changed shape

insane

01:03:846(5,6) BAD,avoid this overlap

01:27:096(3,4,5) distance

02:08:346(2,4) Meaningless overlap

hard

01:29:596(3,4) BAD

00:54:471(2) move to X296 Y 272 ok



Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
Thanks for your mod too!
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
SPOILER
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
SPOILER
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
SPOILER
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
SPOILER
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!
I repositioned quite a bit of Normal and Hard, changed some flow in Insane. Origin you may IRC -APXH if you want I guess

Thanks for passing-by here
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better :D
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard :D

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play.
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

gideon5504 wrote:

Normal:
~Dun see any problems 0.o

Hard:
~00:37:346 (4) - Add clap?
~00:56:846 (4,5,6) - ^
~01:04:846 (6,7,8) - ^
~01:12:721 (1) - Remove and add a 1/2 beat circle between the sliders instead,game play flows smoother and it sound better :D
~01:25:846 (1) - Add finish?
~01:27:346 (2,3) - Clap
~01:29:346 (2,3) - ^
~01:32:846 (6,7) - ^
~01:33:346 (8,9) - Finish
~01:35:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:37:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:39:346 (3,4) - ^
~01:40:846 (7,8) - ^
~01:42:846 (2,3) - Finish
~01:43:346 (4,5) - Clap
~01:44:846 (7,8,9) - ^
~01:52:846 (3,4,5) - ^
~Nice hard :D

Insane:
~01:50:346 (2,3) - Put these two circles closer to the last slider end for smoother game play. Found another little adjustment here
~Can't find anything else.0.o

Origin:
~For all 5% volume.Please increase the volume to at least 10% for players to hear what they are pressing.
~The diff is fine.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Made 3 changes :X But thanks for modding! ;D
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

Losertic wrote:

호옹이!....

I'm ReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReallyReally NEWBIE(...) :?



Origin

  1. 00:26:596 (2) - create a circle. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800444
  2. 01:02:596 (2) - create a circle
  3. 01:05:846 (1,2,3,4) - overlap (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/800446)


yep, the end.
Fixed all. Made sliders ends or starts have the same point.
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
m4m
sorry I'm late


Origin

01:35:596(4,1) BAD

00:31:971(1)make it like 00:23:846(1)

good luck!
Both Fixed
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi, just passing by... and yeah, giving an overall opinion.

[General]
meh, I don't like the song
Everything fine, so far. Nevertheless, I think some parts in some diffs really need an overhaul. Msg and bug me to point out some parts, if you feel like it.

[Normal]
00:38:846 (2,3) - Quite monotonous. Just one line of two sliders. Could you at least make them vary just a little? Maybe something like this:
SPOILER
01:10:846 (3) - Make the start/end and the reverse not overlap each other.
02:08:846 (2,3) - Newer people can easily recognize (3) as a 3-repeat slider, just like (2) is, but it's not. It can trick them and will result in a mean combo break.

Beatwise, this diff was nearly excellent, but damn, the flow is really, really odd at several parts. If you want me to explain my point a little further, don't hesitate to msg me in-game.

[Hard]
00:33:846 (1) - I think you can "relax" this slider a little. Try not to make the start/end and reverse overlap.
00:35:846 (1,2) - These awkward sliders should be expanded placement-based, too.

This diff is way better than Normal, but I can think, at some parts I know you got more to give. Again, if you need further clarification, msg me.

[Insane]
01:52:596 (8) - What's this? Is this supposed to be a wave? Why not making it a little more beautiful then?
SPOILER
01:56:846 (3,4) - First, move (4) to where (3) starts. Then, select (3) and use Ctrl G on it. Definitely improves the flow, huh?

Oh come on, this isn't your full potential yet! I didn't like the difficulty to 100%, I am sure you can give us more, more and more, ya feel me?

[Origin]

uhm, I prefer doing this over IRC. Because..... I feel like it.


Whatever, I'll wish you the best of luck for this!

If 'ya don't like the song, then don't mod it...
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Hard
00:56:846 (1) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (6) - ^
01:44:846 (7) - ^
01:52:846 (3) - ^

Insane
00:56:846 (4) - Add NC here?
01:04:846 (7) - ^

Origin
00:43:846 (1) - Move to x: 304 y: 352 and 00:44:346 (3) - Move to x: 212 y: 352 or just space them 0.72x so it could be harder.
00:45:096 (6) - Move to x: 296 y: 36 and 00:45:596 (8) - Move to x: 208 y: 40

Good Luck and star!
Sorry no change for Insane or Hard :x We'll see if there would be changes for Origin >.< Thanks for looking though~
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) -
why not mapped till the end 0.0

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) -
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) -

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~)
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm?
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle?
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@

[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 -
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,539 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
neonat

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)

[Normal]
00:23:846 (3) - add whistle on start
01:55:846 (3) - is whistle on slider body intentional, it's missing on 01:56:846 (4) - there is no whistle on slider body though
why not mapped till the end 0.0 I wonder why myself orz

[Hard]
00:38:846 (3) - remove repeat plz, also you did it at 00:47:846 (6) - They are different parts of the same verse
01:49:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural That's a possibility, but I think I prefer a repeat
02:20:846 (3) - same as 01:49:846 (1) - ok

[Insane]
00:21:846 ~ 00:24:346 - add whistles?
00:33:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders seems more natural, also could make a pattern like this http://puu.sh/3CwTl.jpg I could try it
00:52:846 (1) - split into 2 sliders and make jump here would feel good with vocal ~ I could try this too
01:29:846 (3) - split into 2 sliders? or what about this rhythm http://puu.sh/3CwY0.jpg (if you agree, change the other ones too, no need to point out every one ~) not changing this one
02:15:846 - try 40% volume, seems a bit loud currently trying 50%
02:17:846 (7) - add whistle on start to carry rhythm? not adding
02:21:846 (6) - add whistle? not adding
can't mod hitsounds very well cause I'm not sure how you used them @_@ :|


sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
Thanks for another mod from you for another one of my song!
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
Hey neonat,
could you send me a picture of that file that you currently have for the song?
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue :D

[General]
try a silent soft-sliderslide? (if you accept you'll need a silent normal-sliderslide for [Origin] diff)



[Origin]
add a normal sliderslide that's the same as the soft sliderslide plz, currently you can hear some normal sliderslide when using the normal hits 0.0
just wondering why there's no hitsounds besides hitnormal, seems it was on purpose, I think putting some soft whistles would make it feel more comfortable ~
00:37:846 - start normal hits here plz, the song speeds up here K
01:25:846 - same as 00:37:846 - Well, there's a bell that goes on, so I'm gonna have to change the hitsounds up a bit
01:57:846 - isn't 5% "hits" unrankable 20%
02:15:846 - ^

sorry if it's not helpful, I was tired when modding this > < lol
this song sounds so ominous 0.0
nice map and good luck :D
The second mod you gave me kinda changes the hitsounds I combined. I'll get to the hitsounds sooner or later
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