1. Normal (2.81 stars, 354 notes)
2. Together (4.69 stars, 713 notes)
3. Xinely's Easy (1.79 stars, 281 notes)

1. Xinely's Easy: Xinely
2. Normal: Hinsvar
3. Together (Hard): Hinsvar & Xinely (collab)

meiikyuu wrote:

gl on this :3

meiikyuu wrote:

gl on this :3

- t e n n y a - wrote:

good luck qaqa

mintong89 wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

good luck qaqa

Good luck again both of you

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[Xinely's Easy]

1. 00:30:527 (4)- : 1 grid up okay XD
2. 00:37:262 (4)- : copy slider on 00:35:425 (2)- here would be nice fix
3. 01:35:425 (3)- : copy previous slider would be great fix
4. 02:27:160 (1)- : I would prefer move this nc to 02:25:629 (4)- fix
5. 03:39:711 (5)- : move them like this? the flow is good
   SPOILER

   
   fix
6. 04:06:344 - : how about move the break to 04:08:486-fix
7. 05:30:527 (1,2)- : triplet on easy? i change it

[Together]

1. 00:58:078 (3)- : make the distance same as previous circle? hinsvar part
2. 01:57:466 (1)- : remove whistle on slider head, change it to clap fix
3. 03:15:680 (2)- : clap here fix
4. [03:26:242 (2,3)- : suggestion, add clap on 2's slider head and tail and add clap on 3's slider head i follow this
5. 05:14:303 (1)- : add clap here, to hear the rhythm at 05:11:548 (2)- okay

Good luck again both of you tengkiu tennya :3

Sekai-nyan wrote:

o.o why the title and artist is wrong?

it's different from this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39108

o.o

cirno- wrote:

General
Timing is good. Are you sure you only want 2 combo colors? That's okay I guess Two should be fine.

Normal
Pretty easy for a regular normal. AR5 maybe? AR5's gonna make this feel a bit too fast. I do think this diff's a bit too easy though, so I should make the OD 4, I suppose...
04:30:833 (1) - NC perhaps? Nope. Should be fine.

Together seems good to me. (:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]

1. No custom sound? fine ==; Any suggestions?
   Tags: remove "collaboration" maybe, since people generally type "collab" than "collaboration" The current state is fine, IMO.
2. OMG TELL ME WHO IS ARTIST THAT DRAW THE BG WW oh you

[Normal]

1. 00:39:099 (2)- : move this to x260 y152? it'll make the circle in the center of previous slider The spacing becomes a bit broken, and I can't see any noticeable changes here, so...
2. 05:36:650 (1)- : copy slider 3 on 05:37:874 and of course rotate them~ Done; also played with (3)'s position.

[Together]

1. 00:58:078 (3)- : make the distance same as previous circle? How do you notice things like this... Anyway, done.
2. 01:57:466 (1)- : remove whistle on slider head, change it to clap
3. 03:15:680 (2)- : clap here
4. [03:26:242 (2,3)- : suggestion, add clap on 2's slider head and tail and add clap on 3's slider head
5. 05:14:303 (1)- : add clap here, to hear the rhythm at 05:11:548 (2)-

B2IN wrote:

[General]
i recommend you to use slidertick as clap. Uh... I'll think on this.
i think that need more finish sounds. I actually disagree with this, since the song is really calm to the point that using finishes won't do. I'll think of getting a finish hitsound that fits with the song, though.

[Normal]
00:21:344 (2,3,4) - um...it's not good. Hmm... Well, guess I'll play with (2).
01:08:486 (1) - add finish on the slider's end. Done.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start. ^
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start. ^ (icwudt)
02:50:119 (5) - move to x312 y352. and re-space next note. I don't see any noticeable changes, and I think the thing I have now is okay...
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start. Done.
04:47:670 (1) - add finish on the slider's start. ^
05:06:650 (1) - add finish on the slider's end. ^
05:42:466 (2) - more than have a smooth moving. 05:41:548 (1) - x296 y88, 05:42:466 (2) - x496 y192, 05:42:772 (3) - x444 y272. ^
[Together]
00:15:833 (1) - up 2 grid right 1grid. x216 y112. and re-space next notes. Done.
01:47:364 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is hard to read. Remapped this part.
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start. Okay.
05:06:037 (3) - add finish on the slider's end. ^

-Bakari- wrote:

hey o3o/ :D/

- M i K u - doesn't have any ranked maps, so there's no need to keep - M i K u - in tags. >.</ Hmm... I still want to keep them, though, just because it's her old username. Because more informations are better \:D/
fix unsnapped notes in [Normal] Uh, they're spinners placed 1/16 beats after the previous note, so no.

and rank it ♥ YES, SIR o7

of course this is NOT a mod post (:

1. At both Together and Easy, make the last spinner ends at 05:46:140 ?
   
2. On Together diff, I noticed that 04:28:384 (2) and 04:32:976 (4) were placed in order to follow the heartbeat sound.. How about adding note on 04:30:833 and 04:35:731 ? Or is it were planned?

Light Usagi wrote:

edit: kyah new page
hi there~ hi ~
just a quick look.. so no kd maybe.. •_•)a

1. At both Together and Easy, make the last spinner ends at 05:46:140 ? klo di easy spin cpat gtu kesusahan jadi gk ganti di easy tp makasih sarannya, fix at together diff :3
   
2. On Together diff, I noticed that 04:28:384 (2) and 04:32:976 (4) were placed in order to follow the heartbeat sound.. How about adding note on 04:30:833 and 04:35:731 ? Or is it were planned? hmmm.. i think now is okay o3o

Also, it's not really important, but maybe you want to use this.. (probably need to redo everything..)


actually I want to hitsound nazi for Ely-san's parts and diff but probably I'll get killed by both Hinsvar and Ely-san o3o
goodluck thanks o3o
make this ranked
for the sake of your eternal love

Zazalng wrote:

Hi Xinely I'm Newbie to Mod but i will try it hi too :3

My Idea is wrong so Sorry i'm newbie to mod map

Color Rule
Pink : It's alright do or do not it's fine
Black : Please Fix it (by My idea other i don't know)
Blue : Recommend

[Xinely's Easy]
00:58:691 - One Note to be great ^^ umm but maybe hard to easy (if normal diff i will follow this suggest :3
01:13:384 - One Note too i just follow the music in there ><, sorry not changed
but thanks for modding :3

1. Song Setup - Tags - These are all really necessary? It seems to have many things which are unnecessary than current rankedmap >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39108
   for ex: 「- m i k u -」 「-_m_i_k_u-」 「-miku-」 「miku」 This is the name before her. When you use these by a search, it is enough only in 「miku」. However, it is enough only in 「-_m_i_k_u-」 or 「-miku-」 when you do not use it for it.

1. 00:14:915 (1,2) - Replace the rhythm of 1 and 2. ( Rhythm it like here 00:10:017 (1,2) - ) Because here is the point to emphasize 00:15:221. and Circle after the slider is a little difficult to play for Easy diff. 　but i think it is possible to use this map it is so slow. haha xD
2. 00:26:548 (3) - nazi. It is slightly far for next note. x360,y100 is better.
3. 00:34:507 (1,2) - Overlapping arrangement is not suitable for Easy. I recommend that you put it simple and easy to understand it~
4. 00:35:425 (2,3) - DS is too far. This sudden change unsuitable for beginners. I suggest it in conjunction with the above here: http://puu.sh/1xJno
   
   SPOILER

   72,164,35425,2,0,P|108:120|172:160,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   256,224,36650,1,0,0:0:0
   344,300,37262,2,0,P|403:325|439:281,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   268,120,39099,1,2,0:0:0

5. 01:04:507 (1) - This does not match a vocal a little. Because the vocal of that opening is finished immediately. so i suggest add one slider and spinner start 01:05:425. like this : http://puu.sh/1xJuZ
6. 01:12:160 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 01:17:670 (5) -
7. 01:18:588 (1,2) - DS a little close. so use DS 0.90x is better~
8. 01:25:017 (3) - Over the little screen. plz do not make this as much as possible. Especially Easy,Normal
9. 01:26:242 (4) - When it uses slider art, it will make it look beautiful to put in the center. I suggest it in conjunction with the above here: http://puu.sh/1xJET This is not best. You can try it in various ways and Please follow to after note by yourself
   
   SPOILER

   4,96,83793,5,0,0:0:0
   120,108,84405,1,2,0:0:0
   212,36,85017,2,0,P|267:19|303:99,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   236,164,86242,2,0,P|204:128|172:168|172:216|204:264|256:280|256:280|296:260|344:224|336:160|300:132|276:168,1,390,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:09:405 (3,4) - same reason as 00:34:507 (1,2). It is necessary to separate these, and to put it.
11. 02:14:303 (3) - 02:14:609 - I want to put the sound here. It matches a vocal very well. so 02:14:303 - add circle. and 02:14:609~02:15:221 - add slider is better imo.
12. 02:25:629 (1) - remove NC and 02:26:548 (2) - add NC.
13. 02:56:548 (1,2) - same reason as 00:34:507 (1,2) and This is a pattern to cause confusion in particular. If did not notice that this is a kick slider, this pattern leads to a mistake in the timing. so This is the pattern that you should change by all means for Easy diff.
14. 03:01:446 (1) - It was a pattern unlike 01:04:507 (1), but thought that I did not fit >< try like this? http://puu.sh/1xK0D ( it is follow the drum )
15. 03:09:099 (5,6) - same reson as 00:34:507 (1,2)
16. 03:20:119 (5) - It is hidden in 03:18:282 (3) hitburst. http://puu.sh/1xK4X yea. It is not all and may be to be the tolerance level. but this is easy, it is better to not overlapping.
17. 04:01:752 (3,1) - This spinner start does not match a little, too >.> try like this: http://puu.sh/1xKcF
18. 04:03:282 (1) - I think the end of a vocal and the sound to be 04:05:884. so i suggest spinner end 04:05:884.
19. 04:06:191~ break time - break time start move to 04:08:486. ( same Normal,Hard diff. The breaktime opening is very good )
20. 04:27:160 (1) - Why you do not put in the center o.o? and I recommend symmetry form to make look beautiful. http://puu.sh/1xKl7
    
    SPOILER

    236,108,267160,6,0,P|200:24|132:72|112:132|128:204|180:244|256:288|256:288|332:244|384:204|400:132|380:72|312:24|276:108,1,715,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

21. 04:32:058 (1,2,3) - Since you use the slider in the previous note, so It is not strange to use it in the same way here. http://puu.sh/1xKom ( Reverse ver. Ctrl+G ) I prefer this
22. 04:36:956 (1) - same reason as 01:18:588 (1)
23. 04:52:874 (3) - 04:51:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 1/2 of these rhythms is too long. so I suggest that reduce rhythm here, http://puu.sh/1xKtw
24. 05:17:364 (2,3) - DS too close. it is better to use DS0.9x here
25. 05:27:160 (2,3) - ^
26. 05:32:670 (3,4,5) - does not match rhythm >< do not have a vocal here、so It is better to match with a white line. for ex: http://puu.sh/1xKDg
27. 05:41:854 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/1xKF7
28. 05:44:915 (1) - It is better to match this with a vocal. so start 05:45:221 is better.
    
    very long mod ;v; sorry, again...orz
    But you can make it very neatly than before

1. first, There are many stack of this map. I think that these be a little should reduce it for normal. >_< In particular, note after the slider.
   for ex;
   ・00:10:323 (2,3) - 00:13:078 (5,6) - 00:17:670 (3,4) - 00:21:344 (2,3) -
   ・00:16:752 (2,3) - 00:20:119 (1,2) -
   
   The timing of these stacks are different. I think that you should not use the stack varying in a timing in a short period.
   In particular, 00:16:752 (2,3,4) - 00:20:119 (1,2,3) - I cannot recommend the usage of such a stack for normal.
2. 00:27:772 (3) - remove note. instead 00:28:997(x) add note and add whistle. This can follow with pianos well than now
3. 00:46:446 (3) - i think the slider of this position seems to worsen a flow >< so i suggest: http://puu.sh/1ylON and with 00:47:976 (4) - I thought that this did not need to put it. because 00:47:670 - the vocaｌrhythm temporarily stopped here. ( this can also follow DS )
   
   SPOILER

   160,68,45221,5,2,0:0:0
   352,68,45833,1,8,0:0:0
   332,260,46446,2,0,P|256:284|256:284|180:260,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. The sound here is not outstanding in comparison with 01:04:507 (6) - . so I thoght it is not match a little when you put it with a double whistle.
5. 01:32:670 (2) - add whistle. You can follow the treble vocal here. and 01:32:976 (3) - If you change it, remove whistle to start of the slider.
6. 01:46:484 (1) - spinner is too short for normal. The beginning of spinner is only to increase the difficulty, I think it is difficult in the corresponding in normal. and 01:48:282 (1,2) - It gives difficulty more to put note after a short spinner.
   so i suggest : 01:48:282 (1,2) - remove two note. and 01:46:484 (1) - spinner start 01:46:599~end 01:48:895. or If you do not want to do this, http://puu.sh/1ymp0 You should try to at least this
7. 01:48:282 (1,2) - it is covered in hitburst of the spinner, so Ctrl+G is better.
8. 02:24:405 (3,4) - why use 1.4x DS o.o? try like this? http://puu.sh/1ymxk
   

   112,132,144405,2,0,P|185:128|247:190,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 03:02:058 (6) - same reason as 01:04:813 (1)
10. 03:21:956 (1) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/1ymHY curve slider seems to fit this flow o.o?
11. 03:44:035 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). I thought that it was not necessary to use the spinner here ==
12. 03:46:446 (2) - remove finish. The same as the first kiaitime, part quiet here too. I thought that finish did not match a little
13. 04:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). and same reason spinner end with Easydiff 04:03:282 (1). i suggest: http://puu.sh/1ymWP
14. 05:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1).
15. 05:45:833 (2) - add whitle to repeat of the slider. and remove whistle to end of the slider. I think this is more able to follow the vocal~

1. 00:54:711 (4,5,1) - The form that collapsed. try like this: http://puu.sh/1ynGW
   
   SPOILER

   412,212,54711,1,2,0:0:0
   408,236,54864,1,0,0:0:0
   400,260,55017,6,0,P|324:304|292:216,2,200,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 01:03:742 (4) - i think slightly excessive rhythm. 01:03:895 - I feel that only a sound here is enough. or http://puu.sh/1ynOL I thought that such a rhythm matched it here.
3. 01:04:507 (2) - add whistle. sam as Normaldiff. and 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. reson same as Normal diff.
4. 02:58:691 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yooq It matches a vocal well imo
5. 03:26:242 (2,3) - Suggestion of form and the flow: http://puu.sh/1yoyk

1. 00:32:517 (6) - do not match clap here, 00:32:364 (5) - Here you put. ( Clap does not match the blue line basically) and When you put note in succession, http://puu.sh/1ynmb is much better than now imo.
2. 00:38:486 (1) - add clap to start of the slider
3. 00:38:486 (1,2,1) - During this time, the rhythm of a little empty. It is recommended that you increase the rhythm. so for ex: http://puu.sh/1ynsw (This rhythm follow the drum) 00:39:099 (x) - Should be placed here to follow the piano at least.
4. 00:43:078 (6) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider. and 00:44:609 (7) - add clap here
5. 00:47:058 (3) - add clap instead to whistle. and 00:47:517 (5) - remove clap
6. 00:47:670 (6) - add whistle to end of the slider. this follow the piano
7. 01:10:935 (5) - add whistle instead to clap.
8. 01:18:588 (1) - add clap to 2nd repeat of the slider. and remove clap to end of the slider
9. 01:19:813 (3,4) - DS is too close. 01:19:201 (2,3,4) - here use the same DS is better.
10. 01:21:956 (5) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider. Because do not have a sound there, it is not fit a little ==
11. 01:54:099 (2) - add NC. It looks good pattern
12. 01:54:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Will look better by aligning the DS these. http://puu.sh/1yobH
    
    SPOILER

    56,292,114099,5,0,0:0:0
    92,292,114252,1,0,0:0:0
    128,292,114405,1,8,0:0:0
    224,200,114711,1,0,0:0:0
    188,200,114864,1,0,0:0:0
    152,200,115017,1,8,0:0:0
    56,108,115323,1,0,0:0:0
    92,108,115476,1,0,0:0:0
    128,108,115629,1,8,0:0:0

13. 02:29:303 (5) - add whistle instead to clap. and 02:29:609 (6) - add clap instead to whistle.
14. 02:34:201 (5) - ^
15. 02:39:405 (5,6,7) - looks a little bad use the same DS here.
16. 03:07:874 (2,3) - Sudden anti-jump. I think this is a little does not match. I recommend that you use normal distance here. and 03:07:874 (2) - add clap and 03:08:180 (3) - remove clap here.
17. 03:08:486 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
18. 03:13:691 (7) - remove clap to 1st repeat of the slider, and add clap to 2nd repeat of the slider.
19. 03:15:680 (2) - remove clap
20. 03:59:609 (6,1) - During this time, a little empty. Because a vocal still follows there, so i suggest 03:59:609 (6) - change to slider, start 03:59:609~end03:59:915.
21. 04:03:588 (1) - spinner end 04:05:884. same reason as Easy diff.
22. 04:30:833 (x) - add note here. same as rhythm here 04:28:078 (1,2) - 04:32:976 (4) - .
23. 04:35:731(x) - ^
24. 04:43:384 (5) - I think that 1/4 rhythm does not match this quiet part. so 04:43:384~04:43:691 This slider is enough.
25. 05:06:037 (3,1) - DS too close here. may mistake this distance for 1/4 rhythm.
    
    Xinely> It is necessary for you to use DS well a little more. It will also improve the looks and flow and Use a jump only where it is really necessary :>

Zazalng wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:507 - Add one note Hmm... Okay, I'll add it.

kosiga wrote:

[General]

1. Song Setup - Tags - These are all really necessary? It seems to have many things which are unnecessary than current rankedmap >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39108 They're here for the sake of information completeness. I think they're still necessary, so I'll keep them for now.
   for ex: 「- m i k u -」 「-_m_i_k_u-」 「-miku-」 「miku」 This is the name before her. When you use these by a search, it is enough only in 「miku」. However, it is enough only in 「-_m_i_k_u-」 or 「-miku-」 when you do not use it for it. Hmm, idk... I'll keep this too for now, I guess.

[Normal]

1. first, There are many stack of this map. I think that these be a little should reduce it for normal. >_< In particular, note after the slider.
   for ex;
   ・00:10:323 (2,3) - 00:13:078 (5,6) - 00:17:670 (3,4) - 00:21:344 (2,3) -
   ・00:16:752 (2,3) - 00:20:119 (1,2) -
   
   The timing of these stacks are different. I think that you should not use the stack varying in a timing in a short period.
   In particular, 00:16:752 (2,3,4) - 00:20:119 (1,2,3) - I cannot recommend the usage of such a stack for normal. I did stuff around here with the stacks...
2. 00:27:772 (3) - remove note. instead 00:28:997(x) add note and add whistle. This can follow with pianos well than now Done.
3. 00:46:446 (3) - i think the slider of this position seems to worsen a flow >< so i suggest: http://puu.sh/1ylON and with 00:47:976 (4) - I thought that this did not need to put it. because 00:47:670 - the vocaｌrhythm temporarily stopped here. ( this can also follow DS ) I think the thing I have now is pretty nice already, but I'll still consider it for later.
4. 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. The sound here is not outstanding in comparison with 01:04:507 (6) - . so I thoght it is not match a little when you put it with a double whistle. Okay.
5. 01:32:670 (2) - add whistle. You can follow the treble vocal here. and 01:32:976 (3) - If you change it, remove whistle to start of the slider. ^
6. 01:46:484 (1) - spinner is too short for normal. The beginning of spinner is only to increase the difficulty, I think it is difficult in the corresponding in normal. and 01:48:282 (1,2) - It gives difficulty more to put note after a short spinner.
   so i suggest : 01:48:282 (1,2) - remove two note. and 01:46:484 (1) - spinner start 01:46:599~end 01:48:895. or If you do not want to do this, http://puu.sh/1ymp0 You should try to at least this Did something similar with the second choice.
7. 01:48:282 (1,2) - it is covered in hitburst of the spinner, so Ctrl+G is better. Moved their position instead.
8. 02:24:405 (3,4) - why use 1.4x DS o.o? try like this? http://puu.sh/1ymxk Eh wut... Did a different stuff.
9. 03:02:058 (6) - same reason as 01:04:813 (1) Done.
10. 03:21:956 (1) - Suggestion of the form: curve slider seems to fit this flow o.o? Made it curved.
11. 03:44:035 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). I thought that it was not necessary to use the spinner here == oh you. Done.
12. 03:46:446 (2) - remove finish. The same as the first kiaitime, part quiet here too. I thought that finish did not match a little You're right. Fixed.
13. 04:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). and same reason spinner end with Easydiff 04:03:282 (1). i suggest: Done.
14. 05:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). Done.
15. 05:45:833 (2) - add whitle to repeat of the slider. and remove whistle to end of the slider. I think this is more able to follow the vocal~ Done.

[Together]
Hinsvar:

1. 00:54:711 (4,5,1) - The form that collapsed. try like this: Did something similar.
2. 01:03:742 (4) - i think slightly excessive rhythm. 01:03:895 - I feel that only a sound here is enough. or I thought that such a rhythm matched it here. I'm sure enough this is okay already...
3. 01:04:507 (2) - add whistle. sam as Normaldiff. and 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. reson same as Normal diff. Done.
4. 02:58:691 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: It matches a vocal well imo I'm following the instrument here.
5. 03:26:242 (2,3) - Suggestion of form and the flow That's still Xinely's... Oh well.

1. 02:07:558 - 02:37:864 - ...This part sounds weird, seems the voice changed lol

1. I feel your offset is late, try 1130(-10)

1. 01:26:232 (4) - Ctrl+G played better imo
2. 04:08:476 - Extend break to here?
   rhythm are fine, but I think you can improve the arrange of notes to make it looked clear and neat more

1. 00:38:476 (1,2,3) - Why increase spacing between 1 and 2?
2. 01:16:130 (5) - Slider end, this clap is so wrong, clap should at 01:16:436, so leave here empty is more better than add a clap
3. 01:17:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems puts randomly, maybe you can make them in a line or a curve?
4. 01:52:558 (1) - Slider head, no clap
5. 01:55:007 (6) - Hmm, clap...why add it here
6. 01:56:691 (3,5) - ^
7. 01:57:456 (8) - ^, slider head
8. 02:16:436 (4) - Well, there's no clap in background at this point, so maybe you can remove this clap
9. 02:30:823 (8) - The curve after the red node looked bad, and the clap on the end, you know..well, I would not point the clap things any more, I can't say it's wrong, just sounds weird, anyway how to use hitsound is all depend on yourself
10. 04:56:538 (6) - A sudden overlap might be confusing, I'd suggest put it out of 04:56:385 (5), just use the same spacing you used in this combo

Breeze wrote:

Ah, I still remembered my 1st rank was this song

[Xinely's Easy]

1. 01:26:232 (4) - Ctrl+G played better imo fix
2. 04:08:476 - Extend break to here? hmm i make it now same as normal~
   rhythm are fine, but I think you can improve the arrange of notes to make it looked clear and neat more

[Together]

1. 00:38:476 (1,2,3) - Why increase spacing between 1 and 2? fix >_<
2. 01:16:130 (5) - Slider end, this clap is so wrong, clap should at 01:16:436, so leave here empty is more better than add a clap fix
3. 01:17:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems puts randomly, maybe you can make them in a line or a curve? done
4. 01:52:558 (1) - Slider head, no clap fix
5. 01:55:007 (6) - Hmm, clap...why add it here removed clap
6. 01:56:691 (3,5) - ^ ^
7. 01:57:456 (8) - ^, slider head ^
8. 02:30:823 (8) - The curve after the red node looked bad, and the clap on the end, you know..well, I would not point the clap things any more, I can't say it's wrong, just sounds weird, anyway how to use hitsound is all depend on yourself changed

Breeze wrote:

Ah, I still remembered my 1st rank was this song Cool \:D/

[General]

1. 02:07:558 - 02:37:864 - ...This part sounds weird, seems the voice changed lol ikr

[Timing]

1. I feel your offset is late, try 1130(-10) Yep... Offset moved.

[Together]

1. 02:16:436 (4) - Well, there's no clap in background at this point, so maybe you can remove this clap Done.
2. 04:56:538 (6) - A sudden overlap might be confusing, I'd suggest put it out of 04:56:385 (5), just use the same spacing you used in this combo ^

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue, sorry for the delay No problem.

[Normal]
01:04:497 (6,1) - the spacing is a bit wrong, use 1.2x here plz Whoops. Fixed.
04:06:027 - same as Easy Done.
04:49:803 - remove the whistle here? sound kinda odd to me Hmm, idk... This sounds okay for me...

[Together]
02:11:232 (1,2,3,4,1) - nice rhyme here :3 \o\
02:55:466 (2,3,4,5) - it's not comfortable to play short sliders when they all start at blue timing lines. change them to a circle at 02:55:466 - , then sliders start at 02:55:619 - , 02:55:925 - and 02:56:232 - , and add circle at 02:56:538 - , will be much better to play, even it's a same rhyme Done.
04:55:466 (2,3,4,5) - same as 02:55:466 (2,3,4,5) - ^

map's quality still can be improved(especially the hitsounds in Easy diff), good luck then

1. 00:25:007 (2) This blanket really flows very bad. You used a circle and then a very round slider, is
   a bit awkward to see, especially in a diff. easy. Maybe you could drop a little more this slider and make it less curved
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:844 (4) You're using the red ticks in a diff. easy D: . Could be a bit tricky for beginners about spacing , Try to free up some more this spacing . In conclusion move this slider to x:360 y:160 to make the player feel more comfortable with better spacing and flow
3. 00:28:068 (5) If you do the above . Move this circle to x:256 y:344 to create a better blanket over (4)
4. 00:43:987 (4) You did a straight slider, but most of your sliders are curved hmm ... . It looks much better if you make a curved slider and position yourself well, if you want to leave a picture
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:01:742 (3) This is a clear example of poor flow. Try to create better and make better blankets to flow more fun to diff. Maybe you could do the same slider that down here and change your position. If you do not understand me here I leave a picture
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:04:191 (5) This slider has a bad flow. It would be better if you just do a simple curved slider
7. 01:28:681 (1) Hey! . You did a slider right here above a beautiful heart. In my curved should do to bring a better flow with the previous slider
8. 01:31:742 (6) Really this slider looks bad . Why not do it this way? , is really better
   
   SPOILER

   
   Here the code if you wish :
   
   SPOILER

   224,304,91742,2,0,P|276:228|300:324|300:324|384:296,1,195,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 01:44:599 (3) Move this circle to x:308 y:184 and move 01:45:211 (4) to x:216 y:256 if you wish make a better square
10. 02:09:395 (3,4) Maybe you could move 02:10:313 (4) to x:124 y:240 flows better imo

1. 00:10:925 (3) You used a clap at the beginning of the slider, not bad but I have a better idea. Why
   not put a Finish? . Highlight either that part because there is an increased voice more strongly
2. 00:29:905 (3) The music requires you to put a Finish at the end of the slider because the vowel begins with a force of voice of singer
3. 00:31:436 (1) This sounds really bad in my opinion . Why do not you put a whistle instead of a clap at the end of the slider?
   In my opinion sounds better ><
4. 00:37:252 (4) For consistency with the whistles your changes the whistle at the beginning of the slider and removes of the tail
5. 00:41:538 (2) Remove the clap of the beginning of the slider, in my opinion sounds really bad . Put a whistle in the beginning of the slider , sounds better
6. 00:45:211 (1) Like I said ... Is better put Finish when increased voice, for example here . In conclusion put a Finish in the beginning of the slider because there is an increased magnification power of the voice
7. 01:30:211 (3) Remove the clap of this circle , really is unnecesary because no follow the music or the voice

1. 00:22:864 (4,5,1) Flowing wrong, how you positioned the little stream with the slider . In my opinion it would be better if you do it right, like this one in the picture
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:191 (2) Move this circle to x:408 y:300 because I think they wanted to make a triangle with (1) and (3).
3. 00:49:191 (8) This slider actually flows poorly, putting it below (6) . In my opinion it would be better if the slider will do a CTRL + G and move it to x:180 y:184 . I'll leave a image
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:18:272 (6) Move this circle to x:40 y:204 To make straight the stream Because that's your idea , i guess
5. 01:27:762 (4) Hmm .. Move the secong sliderpoint to x:240 y:280 if you wish make a better blanket
6. 03:26:232 (2) Move this circle to x:284 y:204 to stack it properly with 03:24:395 (5)
7. 04:34:803 (1,2) Hey ! This blanket looks a little ugly , In my opinion you could focus more on slider and circle to the grid
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 04:43:374 (5) Forgot to put a Clap, in the beginning of the slider, for consistency with your patterns claps
9. 05:43:221 (3) Consider eliminate this circle, because it is the music or the voice
10. 05:45:211 (1) This spinner is too short . In my opinion you should extend it to 05:46:742 and delete the circle that is there

I'm too lazy to modding the map and mod better because the song is too long . Overall the map is not bad, but the diff. of Xinely need more help, but everything can be Cheer up! . Good Luck with the rank

XinCrin wrote:

Hi Hinsvar

[Xinely's Easy]

Mapping

1. 00:25:007 (2) This blanket really flows very bad. You used a circle and then a very round slider, is
   a bit awkward to see, especially in a diff. easy. Maybe you could drop a little more this slider and make it less curved
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:844 (4) You're using the red ticks in a diff. easy D: . Could be a bit tricky for beginners about spacing , Try to free up some more this spacing . In conclusion move this slider to x:360 y:160 to make the player feel more comfortable with better spacing and flow
3. 00:28:068 (5) If you do the above . Move this circle to x:256 y:344 to create a better blanket over (4)
4. 00:43:987 (4) You did a straight slider, but most of your sliders are curved hmm ... . It looks much better if you make a curved slider and position yourself well, if you want to leave a picture
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:01:742 (3) This is a clear example of poor flow. Try to create better and make better blankets to flow more fun to diff. Maybe you could do the same slider that down here and change your position. If you do not understand me here I leave a picture
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:04:191 (5) This slider has a bad flow. It would be better if you just do a simple curved slider
7. 01:28:681 (1) Hey! . You did a slider right here above a beautiful heart. In my curved should do to bring a better flow with the previous slider
8. 01:31:742 (6) Really this slider looks bad . Why not do it this way? , is really better
   
   SPOILER

   
   Here the code if you wish :
   
   SPOILER

   224,304,91742,2,0,P|276:228|300:324|300:324|384:296,1,195,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 01:44:599 (3) Move this circle to x:308 y:184 and move 01:45:211 (4) to x:216 y:256 if you wish make a better square
10. 02:09:395 (3,4) Maybe you could move 02:10:313 (4) to x:124 y:240 flows better imo

fix all

Hitsounds

1. 00:10:925 (3) You used a clap at the beginning of the slider, not bad but I have a better idea. Why
   not put a Finish? . Highlight either that part because there is an increased voice more strongly
2. 00:29:905 (3) The music requires you to put a Finish at the end of the slider because the vowel begins with a force of voice of singer nope
3. 00:31:436 (1) This sounds really bad in my opinion . Why do not you put a whistle instead of a clap at the end of the slider?
   In my opinion sounds better ><
4. 00:37:252 (4) For consistency with the whistles your changes the whistle at the beginning of the slider and removes of the tail
5. 00:41:538 (2) Remove the clap of the beginning of the slider, in my opinion sounds really bad . Put a whistle in the beginning of the slider , sounds better
6. 00:45:211 (1) Like I said ... Is better put Finish when increased voice, for example here . In conclusion put a Finish in the beginning of the slider because there is an increased magnification power of the voice nope
7. 01:30:211 (3) Remove the clap of this circle , really is unnecesary because no follow the music or the voice

fix all except red line
I can't continue . Xinely maybe you need to remap all claps and and whistles most . Mod your diff. then when the diff. becomes better

[Together]

Mapping

1. 00:34:191 (2) Move this circle to x:408 y:300 because I think they wanted to make a triangle with (1) and (3). k
2. 00:49:191 (8) This slider actually flows poorly, putting it below (6) . In my opinion it would be better if the slider will do a CTRL + G and move it to x:180 y:184 . I'll leave a image k
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:18:272 (6) Move this circle to x:40 y:204 To make straight the stream Because that's your idea , i guess oh sorry, i changed the position before i read ur mod lol
4. 01:27:762 (4) Hmm .. Move the secong sliderpoint to x:240 y:280 if you wish make a better blanket will still keep this
5. 03:26:232 (2) Move this circle to x:284 y:204 to stack it properly with 03:24:395 (5) i want keep this ;w;
6. 04:34:803 (1,2) Hey ! This blanket looks a little ugly , In my opinion you could focus more on slider and circle to the grid
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
7. 04:43:374 (5) Forgot to put a Clap, in the beginning of the slider, for consistency with your patterns claps fix
8. 05:43:221 (3) Consider eliminate this circle, because it is the music or the voice changed slider
9. 05:45:211 (1) This spinner is too short . In my opinion you should extend it to 05:46:742 and delete the circle that is there ummm but i want still keep last note.. okay. deleted spin and changed another pattern

I'm too lazy to modding the map and mod better because the song is too long . Overall the map is not bad, but the diff. of Xinely need more help, but everything can be Cheer up! . Good Luck with the rank

XinCrin wrote:

[Together]

Mapping

1. 00:22:864 (4,5,1) Flowing wrong, how you positioned the little stream with the slider . In my opinion it would be better if you do it right, like this one in the picture It's intentional; I can make it straight any time I want, but going all straight every time would be boring, right?

XinCrin wrote:

No kd to me u.u

Wiinter wrote:

[General]
gahh hitsounds ;_; the default ones REALLY don't fit this song. here are some that I think would fit well http://puu.sh/1HLsK. you could also look for some others on the ranked version of this, they used some really good ones. Fine, changed the hitsounds.

[Normal]
hitsounds are soo low! increase the volume, please Err, the quietness of the hitsounds fits with the calmness of the song, IMO. I'll wait for more opinions about this.
00:14:905 (7) - place new combo here and remove the one from 00:15:823 (1) Err, I'm following the music, so nope.
00:25:619 (1) - move new combo to 00:24:701 (5) ^
00:34:191 (5) - make the first line straight and place the anchor a bit lower (like this) I think this fits with the atmosphere of the song, so well, nope.
00:37:864 (1) - the way this slider overlaps with 00:36:640 (3) is pretty awful ): make it like this instead ...Me? Overlapping stuff like this? I must be drunk while getting this part done. Changed.
00:42:762 (3,4) - this sounds a little weird.. I'd remove (4) and extend (3), making it finish at 00:43:987 It goes with the instruments well, though...
00:44:599 - it's okay not to place anything here, but if you prefer, add a note :> Nah, nope.
00:46:436 (3) - make it symmetrical? Nope; this one's intentional to make a variety on shapes.
00:50:721 (1) - move this new combo to 00:49:191 (6) Nope; this follows the music.
00:59:293 (1,2,3) - place them like this instead? Nah, I'm okay with what I have now.
01:08:476 (1) - make the first line straight? Nope; same reason as 00:46:436 (3).
01:31:742 (1,3) - make them symmetrical? Done.
01:34:191 (1,2,3) - make it like this? Nah, I don't like having too much blankets around here.
02:09:395 (3,4) - make them like this? ...That looks weird, to be honest. I'll keep my pattern for now.
02:15:517 (4) - place it at x:192 y:160? And then it will overlap 02:16:436 (2)... Nope.
02:19:497 (3) - imo this would look better like this You sure love encircling and blanketing things, huh. Yes, this one looks good; done.
03:12:456 (2) - add a note here? Hmm, fine I guess. Added.
03:21:027 (4) - add new combo here and remove it at 03:21:946 (1) - Following the vocal, so nope.
03:58:374 (4) - place it at x:372 y:140 Yep, confirmed: You like encircling and blanket *runs* Well okay, done.
04:41:844 (1) - add new combo here and remove it at 04:42:762 (1) - Following the music here.
05:24:395 (5) - add new combo? Fine, added.

[Together]
The settings for this diff match more a normal+ than a Hard/Insane, which is what this diff is supposed to be? I'd say +1 OD and +1 HP Drain? This is Hard, and I think Drain 6/CS4/AR7/OD6 already fits for a map of a slow song like this. No change.
01:04:803 (1) - I thiink this note is unnecessary. try removing it and see if you think it sounds better? Err? I think it's completely fine...
01:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - gahh random jumps ;_; Got (2) spaced normally, but kept the 01:38:476 (3,4) jump because it fits with the vocal.
02:11:844 (4) - extend this slider to 02:12:150? sounds way better imo Nope; following the beat at 02:11:997.
05:03:578 (3,4,1) - place them at x:376 y:212 to align it with 05:02:966 (1) Nah, this placing is intentional, so nope.

Wiinter wrote:

Hello! m4m~ (I started modding this yesterday and there was a mod post after it, so sorry if there are things that aren't there anymore)

[Xinely's Easy]
00:10:925 (3,4) - this pattern is kinda meh :< use more curves! example k
00:26:844 (4,5) - I'd remove (5) and add a repeat to (4). sounds better imo k
00:31:436 (1) - unnecessary new combo k
00:37:252 (4) - make it symmetrical to 00:35:415 (2) k
00:38:476 (5) - add a note here? eeeh e____e
00:52:558 (3) - I'd replace this for a 1/1 slider. the blank part after the note is a little odd nope
01:01:742 (3) - add new comboi just follow vocal
01:05:415 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:07:864?weird imo
01:17:660 (5) - extend it to 01:18:272?nope
01:31:742 (6) - gahh looks a little odd ;_; place the first anchor a bit lower. make this in the same shape of this 01:04:191 (6) instead! looks way better k
01:38:170 (1) - this would look better placed here k
02:09:395 (3) - add new combo nope, same as first
02:14:293 (3) - ^ ^
02:26:538 (1) - place this new combo at 02:27:150 (2) instead
02:34:803 (5) - this is really just a suggestion, but use this spacing? nope >_<
02:59:293 (5) - add new combo k
03:12:150 (4) - remove finish in slider's head D: sounds weird k
03:29:293 (7) - add a third anchor to it? =w=
03:34:191 (5) - ctrl + j this? flows better imo k
03:58:681 (5) - add new combo nope, just follow vocal
04:01:742 (1) - ^nope
04:40:925 (4) - ugly overlap with 04:39:701 (3) :< fix
04:43:987 (3) - remove clap k
05:41:844 (3) - ^ k

[Together]
The settings for this diff match more a normal+ than a Hard/Insane, which is what this diff is supposed to be? I'd say +1 OD and +1 HP Drain?
00:32:354 (5,6,7) - random jump :<
01:27:762 (4,5) - make them symmetrical? k
01:54:395 (3) - *nazi* align this with the two previous notes k
02:30:211 (7) - I'm not a big fan of the overlap here. :< make it like this or something like that k
02:30:823 (8) - looks a little.. weird? maybe it's just me, but I think this would look better if you made the "waves" smaller (make the anchors closer) i want keep this
03:25:007 (6) - make this slider straight to keep the patternk
04:43:374 (5) - not really sure, but Ctrl+G it? nice
04:46:742 (1,2) - this slowdown seems a little unnecessary imo. but it's totally up to you if you wanna keep it ^^ ^^
That's all from me :> Good luck with this!