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yanaginagi - Muteki no Soldier [Osu|Taiko]

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BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
Mythol

kosiga

LaceWingfield

thanks~
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
...I hope I'm not too late.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>Unbeatable
  1. 02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...I found these anti-jump stacks pretty unexpected, especially after all those jumps. Maybe make some jumps here too, by moving 02:06:001 (1,3,5,7) to (x,32)? (x here means it's still the same value; you just need to make sure the y axis is 32).
  2. 02:08:001 (8) - Make this a 1/4 slider that repeats twice (begin at the current position, end at 02:08:215)? It fits with the music very well. If you do this, I suggest to make sure the end of the slider is located at (304,192) and make sure 02:08:286 (1)'s beginning is stacked below that.
>S.S
  1. ...A 1.2x speed-up on the kiai times for a 210 BPM song with 2.00 SV? Isn't that a bit... ridiculous?
  2. 00:08:572 (3,4) - Ctrl+R? I know you're making a square pattern here, but... don't know, I think it'll play better with this.
  3. 03:07:715 (1) - Don't really think this jump is necessary. Stacking it below 03:07:573 (7) should do.
  4. 04:44:180 - This section is supposed to be slow, right? Using 0.5x BPM won't hurt.
Eh... yeah, just that. Don't know what should I rant again here.

Good luck on the way 8-)
kyuten
171 posts
Joined August 2008
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[S.S]
-Beatmap-
00:11:144 (4,5) - This kind of overlap is a little hard to read for a 210BPM song with AR9 imo..
00:15:715 (4) - ^
00:15:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and the distance here makes it a bad plow :(
00:17:858 (3) - overlap
00:40:715 (9,10) - ctrl+R..? this flows better imo..
01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this ww?
SPOILER
01:05:857 (3,4,5,6) - make this a beautiful shape ww
02:01:144 (6) - a jump here 0 0? i prefer normal distance._.
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is better imo ww
SPOILER
02:12:144 (1,2,3,4) - the distance bewteen 2 and 4 is nearer than 2 and 3...when I played this part I missed 3 and aim to catch 4
03:27:929 (6) - delete this note 0 0?
04:22:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - use 1/4 here?


[Unbeatable]
-Timing-
03:10:000 - useless green line

others are all fine for me ww


[Overall]
Nice song and map ww
Actually when I played S.S its usually "ee what i missed (°Д°)?? where is next note (°Д°)??" and only got pass with 86acc..
And Unbeatable I think this is more beatable ww I can catch every note and get 94acc ww
Maybe this is too hard for me Tv T...

Good luck ~
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
Hinsvar

kyuten

thanks!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?


[S.S]
●SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047 →　2.0
●00:04:287 (4) - change to 1/8 slider?
●01:38:572 (1) - add clap
●02:19:429 (6,7,8,1) - not stack better imo
●04:13:572 (6) - change to 1/8 slider? and stack on 04:14:001 (1) -


good luck :3
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

alacat wrote:

Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?




good luck :3

ありがとうございます~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

尼玛刚刷了一百多pp就给我这种图这不是打击我么, 什么心态 <-- ignore this line (off-topic, only for myself o.o)

Unbeatable

  1. 00:16:715 (2) - here looks better x:436 y:220
  2. 00:25:429 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x:144 y:144 to make blanket look better
  3. 00:33:144 (6,3) - it's not stacked perfectly
  4. 00:36:287 (1,2,3,4) - this gives a better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358720
  5. 01:03:715 (9,1) - slider blanket like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358721
    141,191,63715,2,0,B|68:192|28:268|60:332,2,180,4|0|4
  6. 02:54:215 (2,3) - why 1/4..? missing note at 02:54:144 ?
  7. 02:58:001 (5) - better here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358724
  8. 03:18:287 (3) - move to x:152 y:188
  9. 04:39:572 (4) - better blanket..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358728
  10. 04:42:572 - drag break here..? gives a pause break effect
  11. 05:06:252 - add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358730 ._.
S.S

  1. 00:15:858 (5,6,7) - imo ctrl+r plays better here o.o
  2. 00:23:144 (1) - I think this shape goes with music better orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358697
  3. 01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo,,, back and forth jump at 210 bpm, it's so hard,,,,, and also, 01:04:001 (7) - stacks there ;__; maybe you can do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358701
  4. 01:04:715 (3) - ctrl+r plays better here o.o
  5. 01:44:287 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358703 looks better...
  6. 02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358704 how about this._.
  7. 02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - stack somewhere else...?
  8. 03:42:001 (1,2) - you can do slider blanket better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358708 
    92,268,222001,6,0,B|132:208|104:120|24:104,1,200.000000596047,4|8
  9. 04:22:715 (2,3,4,5) - stream here
that's all

Good luck~
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
why you ignore kosiga's

kosiga wrote:

from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.
i still see it

[S.S]


[Unbeatable]


sorry but mapset is clean imo, please don't give kd /me runs
Ryu_old
Ryu_old
[UB]
01:08:429 - 01:08:715 - slider 1 repeat
01:48:572 - 01:48:715 - slider
01:48:858 - 01:49:144 - slider 1 repeat
01:49:429 - 01:49:715 - slider
01:50:287 - 01:50:572 - slider 1 repeat
01:50:715 - remove
01:51:001 - ^

[S.S]
So Sexy

Good luck moemoe >w</
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oh hey


[Unbeatable]
02:53:644 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:54:572 (4) - Add clap at start slider
04:28:144 (3) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi)
04:49:974 (7) - New combo?
05:03:269 (1) - Why whistle? It shouldn't have a whistle at last spinner


[S.S.]
01:49:001 (1) - Not stack correctly with previous note
02:04:001 (2) - Move down a bit so it's not overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - An anti-jump after jump pattern will confuse the players, I guess
03:04:001 (4) - This note is touch the HP Bar
03:06:001 (5) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
04:11:429 (4) - I don't like if this place at same place as 04:11:429 (4).... Try to make something better?


That's all I got, sorry
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[S.S]
개인적으로 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 노래네요. 기타와 어울리리라 생각했는데 쩝...
01:47:287 (3) - 이 노트가 특별히 점프가 아닌 이유가 있나요?
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - 굳이 안티 점프라 여겨질 멜로디도 없고 노트가 겹쳐있기까지하다보니 되려 넓은 스트림으로 여겨질까 걱정되네요. 좌우 지그재그로 내려오는 패턴이 어떨까요? 이전 슬라이더들과도 어울리리라 생각해요.
02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같은 이유입니다. 다른 패턴을 추천드려요.
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - 으아아 파트의 클라이막스다보니 거의 확실하게 스트림으로 여겨지게 되네요. 위 두 패턴은 몰라도 이건 정말 알아낼 방도가 없었어요.
04:44:520 (1) - 개인적으로 이 이후로 Soft Whistle을 너무 남용하신게 아닌가 싶네요. 노래의 에필로그나 다름없으니 잔잔한 여운을 남기는게 좋으리라 생각합니다. 예를 들어 일정한 리등으로 넣으며 볼륨을 조금 줄이는것도 좋은 방법이구요.

[Unbeatable]
위 모딩과 같이 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 난이도네요.
00:23:715 (3) - 슬라이더 모양이 흐름에 굉장히 어긋나네요. U가 되도록 고쳐보세요.
00:30:144 (8) - 좀 더 내리셔서 다음 슬라이더로의 움직임이 수월하게 해주세요.
01:29:001 (5) - 이거 1/3으로 고쳐주세요.
01:59:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 노래와 무관한 점프네요. 물론 그런 점프가 이전에 아예 없다고 (두 난이도 포함) 할순 없겠지만 이건 특히 어긋나게 느껴지네요. 이전 같은 슬라이더 + 노트 점프가 더 어울리리라 생각합니다 굳이 점프가 필요하다면.
02:06:001 (3) - 패턴이 3노트로 이루어지면 안되고 4노트로 이루어져야겠네요. 보컬이 패턴의 시작점이 되게 패턴과 히트사운드를 고쳐주세요.
02:36:144 (3,4) - 갑자기 여기서부터 정상 스페이싱이 되니 헷갈리네요. 점프로 고쳐주세요.
02:54:144 (2) - 이 노트를 지워주세요. 이유는 다음 슬라이더를 위함입니다.
02:54:286 (3) - 위를 하신 후, 이 슬라이더를 이전에 있는 파란색 선으로 옮겨주세요.
03:32:144 (3) - 박수 추가
03:34:715 (4,5) - 이것들 1/3입니다. 고칠 필요는 없습니다 어차피 플레이어가 못느낄수도 있으니.
03:45:001 (1,2,3,4) - 이전 노트로부터 이어지기 편하게 왼쪽으로 조금 옮겨주세요.
04:44:519 (2) - 이 이후부터 박수는 안어울린다고 생각합니다 (솔직한 심정으로 말하자면 피아노 공연에서 축하용 폭죽 터트리는 듯한 기분). Soft Whistle이 더 어울릴꺼에요.



화이팅!
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige

[Unbeatable]


OD : -1

00:21:858 (6) - : NC

00:34:001 (3,1) - : 조금 겹치네요... 조금 넓혀 주세요.

00:42:287 (4) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:28:572 (3,4,5) - : 연타 길이 조금 좁혀주세요.

02:11:715 (7) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 NC

02:35:858 (1) - : 슬라이더하고 겹치는 건 조금 그렇습니다. 옆으로 해주세요.

02:53:644 (1,2) - : 박자가 조금 안맞는 것 같습니다. 1/4로 해보세요,

03:47:644 (2,3) - : 연타로 해주세요. 햇갈립니다.

04:06:144 (8) - : NC


[S.S]


02:04:858 (1,2,3,4) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.


잘 만드셧습니다 ㅇㅅㅇ..
플레이도 잘하시고 매핑도 잘하시는 당신은 욕심쟁이 ㅇㅅㅇ...

늅모딩 봐주셔서 감사합니다 ㅎ..

그리고 이 스레드에 S.S = Star Stream이라고 넣어주세요.
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
Hi,there
just some suggestions

Unbeatable
00:05:429 (3) - like this
SPOILER
01:04:572 (2,3) - change place mutually
01:13:429 - add 2 green line to a little kia,like thisi
SPOILER
01:28:429 (2) - move to 24.212

S.S
none

that's all I can find,hope it's useful.GL>_>
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
0.0
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
[unbeatable]
00:05:429 (3) - copy of the 00:04:858 (1) - h and j
00:36:858 (5) - stack on the 00:36:715 (4) -
00:38:715 (1) - soft sound default, slider head only
00:39:001 (2) - ^
00:41:001 (1,3) - ^
00:43:287 (1,2) - ^
00:47:858 (1,3) - ^
00:50:144 (1,2) - ^
00:52:429 (1,3) - ^
01:42:715 (1,2) - ^
01:45:001 (1,3) - ^
01:47:286 (1,2) - ^
01:51:858 (1,2) - ^
01:54:144 (1,3) - ^
01:56:429 (1,3) - ^
03:48:429 (1,3) - ^
03:50:715 (1,2) - ^
03:53:001 (1,3) - ^
03:57:572 (1,2) - ^
03:59:858 (1,3) - ^
04:02:144 (1,2) - ^
00:42:287 (4) - stack on the 00:41:715 (2) -
00:42:858 (7) - ^
00:43:715 (3) - new combo
00:44:001 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:858 (2,4,6) - new combo,'cause 00:55:144 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same
01:29:001 (5) - one more slider arrow?
01:50:287 (3) - x:456 y:208
01:59:572 (3,5,7) - new combo?
02:53:620 (1) - change notes,slider is weird rythm.
02:53:620 (1) - not whistle
04:22:001 (1) - remove sound finish
04:28:572 (6) - stack on the 04:28:144 (3) -
04:46:906 (1,4) - remove whistle,04:47:588 - add here whistle
04:57:815 (1) - remove whistle

[S.S]
00:14:572 (3) - ctl + r?
00:15:572 (3) - 2 grid down
00:17:858 (3) - move somewhere.in slider body is hard >_>
00:27:001 (2) - x:116 y: 44 is better imo
00:28:001 (2) - stack on the 00:27:572 (6) -
00:30:715 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:001 (1) - ^
00:38:715 (1,2) - same "unbeatable" diff mod.
00:41:001 (1,2) - ^
00:43:287 (1,2) - ^
00:47:858 (1,2) - ^
00:50:144 (1,2) - ^
00:52:287 (1,2) - ^
01:42:715 (1,2) - ^
01:45:001 (1,3) - ^
01:47:287 (3) - ^ slider head and end only.
01:51:858 (1,3) - ^
01:54:144 (1,2) - ^
01:56:429 (1,3) - ^
03:48:429 (1,2) - ^
03:50:715 (1,2) - ^
03:53:001 (4) - ^
03:57:572 (5) - ^
03:59:858 (2) - ^
04:02:144 (1,3) - ^

01:12:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:276 y:222 because near 01:12:715 (4,1) - in play mode.
01:52:287 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:429 (2) - new combo
01:54:572 (1,2) - ^
02:07:858 (6,7,8,9,10) - x:267 y:359 .because in play mode near.
04:03:144 (3) - copy and ctl + h and j of the 04:02:572 (1) -

that's all!!!
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
val0108

x847606653

thanks 'w'
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
Hi BinJip~
all suggestions.
my modding isn't Perfection. No kudosu pls :(

[General]
StackLeniency is different from another difficulty. Is this rankable?

[Unbeatable]
00:00:287 (1) - remove clap to start slider
00:01:715 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/16gO7
00:02:572 (1) - same as 00:00:287 (1) -
00:04:858 (1) - ^
00:19:144 (3,4) - I prefer to not stack here http://puu.sh/16gPH
00:29:429 (4) - add new combo
00:52:429 (1,2,3) - like the Triangle http://puu.sh/16gQQ
00:54:287 (3) - remove finish
01:01:715 (4) - x:288 y:40
01:13:358 - don't need Inherited Point
01:32:001 (2) - x:256 y:184
03:55:715 (6) - x:28 y:280
04:40:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - compose → Create Polygon Circles http://puu.sh/16gXT

fight ></
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
Hello binjip
from my mod queue
try for mod
[S.S]
02:35:715~02:40:287 - use overlap? use Rotation or other
02:40:287 (5) - new combo
[Unbeatable]
00:01:715 (2,3,4,5,6) - more careful.
02:54:215 (4) - start in blue?
03:32:287 (1) - ?? in here seem so bad

that all

:o mod app is so hard for me
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Hi! Mod Requested on my Queue :3

[General:]

- Timing Points: You have an Incocnsistency between both difficulties on the second Uninherited Timing Point (Red Line), by 1ms. Because on Unbeatable the Red Line is Placed on Offset: 284.179 and in S.S is placed on Offset: 284.180. You have to fix that, to keep the consistency

[Unbeatable:]

• 00:04:144 (7): This Note flow bad where is it, also is very overlapped by Hitbursts that is not a good idea for a fluent map. Maybe a little jump can work better here, so try to move this Note to x:400 y:120
• 00:14:572 (3,4): A Stack here is not very benefit to the map, the previous section is really fast and this Stack can be sudden in some point, also it looks a bit random. Try to unstack this, please
• 00:15:001 (1): A Clap on the end of this Slider, fit properly with the Instrumental
• 00:16:715 (2): Since it is a beatmap aiming for the approval, is better if you risk more with the Rhythm. In this case I suggest you to break a bit the Symetry reducing this Slider by 1/2 and then add a Note on 00:17:001
• 00:38:715 (1): The Whistle on the Beginning of this Slider doesn't sound very fitting, I think that is better if you Remove it from here
• 00:55:144 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2): This Combo Spam is unnecesary to me, the music doesn't need that. To be sincere, I think that any New Combo fit fine here, so remove all the New Combos to make this pattern (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
• 00:57:572 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2): (^)
• 01:03:715 (9): (Nazi)- Move this Note to x:140 y:192 to occupate this on the same position as (5) in 01:02:858
• 01:09:715 (4): I can hear the Cymbals on the music here, in this case is better if you Replace the Clap to a Finish on the Slider beginning
• 01:25:287 (2,3): This pattern don't fit with the music at all, especially with the long vocal that appear here. For a better Rhythm the Slider (3) should start on 01:25:287 and finish on 01:25:572. Then add the Note on 01:25:715. Something like that:
SPOILER
• 01:37:287 (5): A Clap sound preety fine with the music and with your previous Notes
• 01:51:144 (7,8,9): Hmm... I don't know if 3 Stacked Notes flow fine here. This make an unnecesary stop that the music doesn't need it, so would be better if at least unstack one of this Notes
• 01:51:858 (1,2): To keep consistency with these kind of sections (where the music sound like that), is better if you change these Sliders to 4 Notes instead, you can make a border to previous (9) with your next (1,2).
• 01:56:429 (1,2,3): Increase the spacing between these Notes (at least to 1.50x), flow better and also is consistent with your other sections where the music sound like that.
• 01:59:144 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2): Again this Combo Spam, it is a consistent increase on the Spacing, so you don't need to remark anything with combos, believe me.
• 02:11:572 (6): A Whistle here sounds very fitting with the music, really. Make a good sense, try it :P
• 02:15:144 (4): The kiai end here, so the change in the music is imminent. It's a good idea add a New Combo here to remark this change
• 02:16:858 (7): Both Clap and Finish sound really noisy on this Note, I think that the whistle sound work better here.
• 02:22:572 (4): You are missing a Clap here, appear on the music too.
• 02:26:001 (1,2,3,4): I personally don't like this kind of patterns, in general they don't flow fine on standard difficulties (I said that because plays good on CTB difficulties), in this case is better if you keep the spacing between the Notes and move (2) where it is (3) and (3) where it is (2). An Screenshoot to illustrate you :P
SPOILER

• 02:51:715 (3): Now, I'm not really confident about the rankability of this kind of Sliders (the rules are very stricts nowaday), but I'm not really sure I should investigate
• 02:53:620 (1,2,3): You should make something with this Notes, they are not easy to read because they are snapped on 1/3 but the spacing is too similar comparing with 1/2 patterns, I don't know, adjust the spacing, change the combo colours to a new one, etc.
• 03:34:787 (x): A Note sounds fine here
• 04:12:858 (5,6): To follow the sequence as your previous patterns out of the Kiai, is better if you unstack (6) from the end of this Slider.
• 04:23:144 (T): This kiai should finish here (like S.S diff) because the kiai becomes very long and also if you finish here this kiai will be consistent with your previous one.
• 04:55:599 (4,5): Works better with the Vocal if you delete (4), then the Slider should start here instead. Then, this Slider have to finish on 04:56:110
• 05:00:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7): It is a very slow section this one, so long jumps doesn't fit here, try to use spacing less to 3.00x for a better flow as I said before
• 05:03:355 (Spin): A Whistle (default) on the end of this Spinner works perfectly with the bells on the music. You should try it :3

[S.S:]

• 00:04:287 (4): Just to be confident, but is it necesary this 1/8? It doesn't appear anything on the music, also I can't listen anything on 1/4 (on 25% obviously), so would be better if you avoid that
• 00:52:287 (1): You can move this Slider (and also the next (2) to keep the symetry) some grids left to avoid the overlap with the next one, it doesn't look very well in my opinion
• 01:30:287 (7): The Clap on this Note sounds preety loud, especially comparing with the clap on (1). Would be better if you reduce the volume on this Note
• 01:31:858 (x): In general you follow the Vocal, so here is a good place to add a Note
• 01:43:572 (3,1): A jump just for symetry... I don't know if it is a good idea, the music doesn't need that, especially because on sections where the music sounds like here, you don't have huge jumps. If I were you I'd rearrange this pattern a bit, but it is your decision
• 01:46:858 (2,3): Wait, here you should increase the Spacing between these Sliders, it flows much better and it is more consistent with the rest of the map. I thought something like move (3) to x:240 y:84
• 01:48:287 (3,4,1): A jump and then a Stop to as a relative same part of the song, this doesn't work at all. It's better if you move (4) out of here increasing the Spacing between (4,1)
• 02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5): This antijump plays bad, is totally stright and plays bad because you don't have another antijump like this one. At least if you want to add an antijump, try to do a shape more 'fluent'
• 02:16:287 (1,2,3,4): (^)
• 03:14:429 (x): I find more fluent if you start with the section here, adding a Note. When you play the map, this doesn't sound a 'sudden' start of the new section
• 03:39:572 (1,2,3,4,5): I'm not really partidary of this kind of overlaps but meh.. :P. Well, I also think that the rhythm can be better
• 03:58:858 (5,6,7,8): The jump between (5,6) and (7,8) look forced to make a nicer pattern but the flow is not correct at all. Try to exchange the position between (6,7), you mantain a little jump and the flow is better imo
• 04:13:572 (6): Again, is necesary this 1/8? :P
• 04:18:858 (2): This Slider can be named as hidden Slider, it is preety unpredictable under to the other Slider (5), try to do something with that please
• 04:22:572 (1): This Note stacked with the rest of the stream, can cause a bad readability because players will think that this is part of the stream. Try to unstack it

Well, That's it. Sorry for the delay :(
Good Luck with your map ;)
Prid13
1 post
Joined September 2010
Prid13
I love Ra's Hard Beatmap, it's honestly one of the best and most flowing beatmaps I've ever played. I am actually not a good osu! player when it comes to Insane difficulties which often have super fast notes, but this one, despite its speed, kept me flowing, and I beat it on second or third try, and did I feel awesome! I can't believe this hasn't been approved yet :O
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
[General]

Tag 에 Ra-s 추가? 나중에 할것으로 보아 이것은 무시...

[Easy]

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00:57:429 (1) - 대칭으로 해보시는건 어떤가요. last point of slider move to (232,356)
00:59:715 (1) - ^
01:08:287 (2) - Ctrl + G 하시고 노트 간격 조절해보시는게 어떤가요. 저게 더 동선이 자연스럽네요.
01:36:287 (2,3) - 반복 슬라이더 대신 조금 더 긴 슬라이더를 사용해 보시는게 어떤가요. 이지치곤 어려운것 같아요. like this
02:01:429 (1) - 아까 것과 같이..
02:03:715 (1) - ^
02:12:287 (2) - 이것도 01:08:287 (2) - 이것과 같이
02:33:429 (1) - 이건 이렇게 두는게 나을것같아요.
36,184,153429,6,0,B|36:100|104:100|104:100|108:168|176:180,1,240.000001788141,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
03:10:858 - 브레이크를 삭제하시는게 어떠십니까. 여기 브레이크를 두면 초보 유저들은 쉬는타임이라고 혼동할 뿐아니라, 드레인은 충분하여서 여기에 브레이크는 그다지 필요는 없어보입니다.
03:12:287 (1,1,1) - 음... 이 노트들을 겹쳐두면 초보 유저들이 박자를 혼동하기 쉽습니다. 모양을 따로 잡아보시는게 어떤가요?
04:07:143 (1) - 이것도 00:57:429 (1) - 이것과 같이
04:09:429 (1) - ^
04:18:002 (2) - same as 01:08:287 (2) -
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전체적으로 슬라이더만 예쁘면 좋을 것 같아요.

[Normal]

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02:24:287 (1) - 이걸 이렇게 두는게 더 나을 것 같아요.
328,52,144287,6,0,B|328:144|184:144|184:52,3,220.000001192094,4|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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[Unbeatable]

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언스냅은.... 알아서 체크해주세요 ㅠㅠ

[Star Stream]

02:07:858 (6,7,8,9,10) - 스페이싱 중앙으로 하시는게 어떤가요



어휴... 곡도 길고 맵도 좋고 미치겟네요.
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my mod queue
3 time get you required,I modder last months,and I see you get new diff
so remoded
[General]
ok
[easy]
00:30:001 (3) - remove finish
00:52:858 (1,2,1) - this 3 is so nealy,not good for look
00:57:144 (4) - remove finish
00:59:429 (4,1) - ^ ,add finish at 1 start,remove finish 4 ,1 end
01:00:858 (2) - remove finish
01:36:287 (2,3) - not covered report
02:33:429 (1) - make a groove in end for next 2 start
02:34:572 (2) - ^
04:02:002 (2,3,1) - too nealy
04:19:716 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
fine, but use less long copy
00:42:001 (2) - a little out of Screen
00:51:144 (2) - ctrl+g you change direction too fast, not do it in easily diff
01:22:572 (1) - <_< out of screen
03:12:287 (1,2,3) - little hard for nuws player
04:00:859 (2) - ^
04:44:519 (1,2) - too fast get note after spinner
04:49:633 (1) - <_< out of screen,slider circle is cover HP ,(it is fly
05:00:542 (1,2,3) - a little jump

that all good luck
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: #3
4,845 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
[Unbeatable]
'muteki'를 영작하면 unbeatable보단 invincible이 어울림. 난이도 이름 바꾸는 거 한 번 고려해봐
00:08:001 (4) - 이거 함 해바, 기타 리프에 맞춰봤어
389,94,8001,1,0,0:0:0
467,207,8144,2,0,B|395:290,1,105.000000298023
00:09:429 (1) - 00:10:429 (4)처럼 부드러운 슬라이더 쓰는게 더 나아보여
00:11:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 기타에 더 맞게 함 바꿔봐
SPOILER
00:27:715 (7) - 00:27:858 (1) 시작부분으로 옮겨봐 (옮기면 뉴콤보)
00:29:144 (2,3,1,2,3) - 이런 점프 모양을 다각형으로 맞춰주면 보기에도 좋고 플레이하기에도 좋아
160,196,29144,1,8,0:0:0
239,373,29287,1,0,0:0:0
416,294,29429,1,0,0:0:0
336,116,29572,1,0,0:0:0
178,13,29715,1,8,0:0:0
00:30:715 (2,3,4,5) - 얘네도 그냥 놓는것보단 사다리꼴이나 평행사변형으로 맞추는 게 더 보기에 좋지
256,320,30715,1,0,0:0:0
357,81,30858,1,0,0:0:0
256,64,31001,2,0,B|212:32|148:40,1,105.000000298023
357,303,31287,1,0,0:0:0
00:35:429 (3,4,5,6) - 이렇게 한 번 맞춰봐
SPOILER
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 정확하게 마름모로 맞춰주면 좋아. 뒤에 2번 슬라이더도 그 뒤에 나오는 8번 슬라이더랑 대칭으로 설정해주고.
188,60,47858,5,2,0:0:0
114,269,48001,1,2,0:0:0
92,140,48144,1,2,0:0:0
210,189,48287,1,4,0:0:0
231,318,48429,6,0,B|261:354|325:352,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
433,291,48715,2,0,B|462:251|444:192,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:51:572 (5) - (312, 156)으로
00:52:429 (1,2,3,1) - 이런것도 하나하나 모양 맞춰주면 좋아. 이거 함 해바
132,116,52429,5,0,0:0:0
380,116,52572,1,0,0:0:0
256,40,52715,1,2,0:0:0
380,116,52858,6,0,B|436:152|436:152|476:224|432:300,1,210.000000596047,4|
00:54:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 6을 없애고 4,5를 한 칸씩 뒤로 민 다음에 원래 4번 슬라이더가 시작하던 자리(00:54:429)에 4번 슬라이더 시작하는 위치랑 같은 곳에 노트를 둬봐
01:05:715 (3) - 얘를 바로 전 노트 위치로 옮겨야 삼각형패턴 규칙이 맞아
01:24:501 (8) - 없애
01:28:572 (3,4,5) - 여기 박자가 1/6이야
SPOILER
01:47:286 (1,3) - y좌표를 192로 맞추고
01:48:286 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 이렇게 한 번 바꿔봐
128,192,108287,2,0,B|124:132|168:88,1,105.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,192,108572,1,8,0:0:0
385,192,108715,6,8,B|431:75|303:24,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,109144,1,0,0:0:0
256,128,109287,1,8,0:0:0
205,25,109429,2,8,B|80:75|127:192,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,109858,1,8,0:0:0
01:50:715 (4) - 스페이싱
02:02:715 (5,7) - (456,232)로 옮겨봐
02:10:572 (1) - (365,82)로 옮겨봐
02:11:001 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 이렇게 한 번 해봐. 1번 슬라이더 위치를 살짝 옮기다 보니 지금 있는 패턴으로 모양 내기가 좀 어렵더라고
164,141,131001,1,0,0:3:0
59,152,131144,1,0,0:3:0
38,254,131286,1,0,0:3:0
129,306,131429,1,0,0:3:0
206,237,131572,1,0,0:3:0
306,237,131715,5,0,0:3:0
383,306,131858,1,0,0:3:0
474,254,132001,1,0,0:3:0
453,152,132143,1,0,0:3:0
348,141,132286,1,0,0:3:0
02:12:858 (3) - 얘 그냥 02:13:144까지 늘려
02:18:858 (7) - (148,276)으로 옮겨
02:36:287 (4) - 얠 없애고
02:36:429 (5,6) - 얘네를 왼쪽으로 한 칸씩 옮기면서 위치도 지우기 전 4번 노트 있던곳으로 옮겨
02:36:858 - 여기에 이제 (112,92)에 노트 추가
02:53:644 (1,2,3) - 얘네 이렇게 해봐
SPOILER
03:28:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 규칙성도 있고 음악에도 맞게 하기 위해 이렇게 한 번 바꿔봐
168,200,208287,6,0,B|296:200,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,200,208572,1,8,0:0:0
112,88,208715,2,0,B|236:88,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,88,209000,1,0,0:0:0
32,236,209144,2,0,B|136:236,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,236,209429,1,8,0:0:0
404,328,209572,2,0,B|272:328,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,328,209858,1,0,0:0:0
472,192,210001,2,0,B|364:192,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,192,210287,2,0,B|141:192|140:192,1,105.000000298023
80,60,210572,6,0,B|184:60,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,60,210858,1,0,0:0:0
260,192,211001,2,0,B|396:192,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,211287,1,8,0:0:0
256,40,211429,2,0,B|256:176,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,250,211715,1,0,0:0:0
364,112,211858,2,0,B|364:248,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,322,212144,1,0,0:0:0
03:34:572 (1,2) - 여기도 박자가 1/6이니까 이렇게 한 번 해봐
256,112,214572,6,0,B|256:244,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
218,305,214858,2,0,B|160:344,3,70.0000001986823
03:44:429 (2,5) - (48,196)으로 이동
03:53:287 (3) - (360,168)로 이동
04:12:144 (2) - 얘 그냥 3번 슬라이더 시작점 위에 놓는 게 더 나아보여
04:12:715 (4) - 얘도 1번 슬라이더 시작점 위에 놓는 게 더 나아보이고
04:14:858 (5) - (54,143)으로 이동
04:15:572 (8) - (458,143)으로 이동
04:36:287 (1,2,3,4,1) - 이렇게 한 번 바꿔봐
248,104,276287,5,0,0:0:0
340,56,276430,1,8,0:0:0
440,88,276573,1,0,0:0:0
391,183,276715,1,0,0:0:0
349,279,276858,5,4,0:0:0
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
irc mod dayo

SPOILER
23:59 BinJip: easy normal modding site!
23:59 Quilt: doreno?
23:59 *BinJip is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/181576 yanaginagi - Muteki no Soldier [Easy]]
00:00 Quilt: iikedo
00:00 Quilt: shiteki dekinakutemo okoranaide ne
00:00 BinJip: un w
00:02 Quilt: easy
00:02 BinJip: easy heta dakara ooito omou
00:03 Quilt: 01:30:715 (2) -
00:03 Quilt: reverse ikkai herasu
00:04 BinJip: un
00:05 Quilt: 01:36:287 (2,3) - kokomo
00:05 Quilt: reverse itteiga ii
00:06 BinJip: ittei?
00:06 Quilt: certain
00:06 Quilt: �ｼ�
00:06 Quilt: kana
00:07 BinJip: aa
00:07 Quilt: 01:51:715 (2) - delete nore
00:08 Quilt: 01:52:001 (2) - 01:51:715 (2) - move here
00:08 Quilt: and reverse ikkai
00:08 Quilt: a]
00:08 Quilt: suggestion ne
00:08 Quilt: !
00:09 Quilt: 01:54:001 (2) - koremo 01:51:715 (2) - kokoto onaji kanjini
00:10 BinJip: un
00:11 Quilt: 02:00:572 (3) -
00:11 Quilt: delete
00:11 Quilt: 02:01:144 (3) -
00:11 Quilt: kore
00:11 Quilt: 02:00:858 (3) - kokoni idou
00:11 Quilt: 02:02:857 (3) - delete
00:12 Quilt: 02:03:429 (3) - move to ]02:03:144 (3) -
00:12 BinJip: ok
00:13 Quilt: 02:05:715 (3) - delete
00:13 Quilt: 02:04:858 (2) -
00:13 Quilt: kore wo
00:13 Quilt: 02:05:429 - kokomade nobasu
00:14 Quilt: 02:14:572 (2) -
00:14 Quilt: kore kottinohouga better
00:14 Quilt: 02:14:858 (2) -
00:14 Quilt: 02:18:858 (3) - delete
00:15 Quilt: 02:26:287 (4) - delete
00:15 Quilt: edit no bag uzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
00:15 BinJip: wwww
00:15 BinJip: slider nagai
00:18 Quilt: 03:15:715 (2) -
00:18 Quilt: http://puu.sh/1fMwG
00:18 Quilt: konnna kanjini
00:18 Quilt: slider naga sugi w
00:21 BinJip: ok
00:22 Quilt: 03:55:144 (3) - ikkai reverse?
00:23 Quilt: 04:06:287 (3) - delete
00:23 Quilt: 04:06:859 (3) - move to 04:06:572 -
00:23 Quilt: 04:08:572 (3,4) - koremo onaji kanjini
00:24 Quilt: 04:33:716 (3) - delete
00:26 Quilt: 04:55:429 (2) - 04:55:429 (2) - 1/2 late
00:26 Quilt: 04:55:769 (2) - delete
00:26 Quilt: 04:57:474 (2) - delete
00:26 Quilt: easy owari
00:27 BinJip: otu
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●Blue line is unnecessary .
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768

[Easy]
●00:23:144 - hmm . I want finish sound here><
●00:22:858 (1,2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●00:27:429 (3) - add finish on the slider's end
●00:30:001 (3) - ^ same as slider's head.
●00:34:001 (3) - add clap at the head instead of finish
●00:34:001 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:36:858 (2) - add finish and add new combo as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:44:572 (2) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? the flow is good imo
●00:45:429 (3) - remove finish on the slider's head
●00:46:001 (4) - add finish
●00:46:001 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●00:56:287 (2,3) - itis hard to take a little for easy. try to make one slider ?
●00:56:572 - add clap
●00:58:572 (2,3) - same as here.00:56:287 (2,3) -
●00:58:858 - add clap
●01:02:001 (1) - add finish on slider's head
●01:07:144 - remove finish on the slider's reverse.it follows nothing.
●01:11:144 (1) - add finish on slider's head and remove new combo.
●01:30:715 (2) - miss map ? o.o
●01:33:429 (3) - add finish on the slider's reverse.try 60% volume
●01:36:287 (2,3) - Ctrl+H?
●01:38:572 (1) - try to change spinner's end at here.01:40:858 - and add finish
●01:56:858 (1,2,3) - gradually add volume about finish sound
●02:00:858 (3) - add clap instead of finish? it needs clap sound imo
●02:03:144 (3) - same as here
●02:03:715 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.like this your pattern at here.02:01:429 -
●02:15:144 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:26:572 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.like this your pattern at here.02:17:429 (1) -
●02:58:572 (1) - add clap on the slider's end
●03:12:287 (1,1,1) - not stack better .maybe confusing many beginners ;_;
●03:32:573 (1,2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●03:46:573 (2,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●04:08:858 (3) - remove finish
●04:09:430 (1) - add finish on slider's head
●04:19:715 (1,2) - hmm , try to make this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/466936
●04:34:002 (4) - add whistle instead of clap
●04:34:573 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●04:44:179 - -10% volume from here
●04:56:451 (2,1,2,3) - 1 grid down ? put a center.

if you don't like finish sound , sry :o

Hope you fine this helpful :oops:
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
http://puu.sh/1h52E
아직 휘슬 못박음.
컴퓨터 꺼야해서 다 못하고 끔 ㅠㅠ
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
이지만 할래여,,

Easy:

-- 클랩을, 노래 속의 클랩 위치가 아니라 원하는 곳에 넣으셨나봅니다. 뭐, 좋아요..

00:25:715 (1) - 좀더 대칭시키기
01:30:429 (1) - 01:30:287로 데려와 보세요. 거리 조절도 하시고.. 음악상 여기가 나을거 같아서요
02:26:001 (3) - (160,240)? 겹치는것 보다는 나을것 같아서요..
03:58:002 (3) - 갑자기 1.0 스페이싱 된게 이상한거 같기도 합니다
04:34:002 (4,1) - 휘슬이 어색한듯요
04:48:610 (3) - 1칸 왼쪽, 아래
04:49:633 (1) - 1칸 위로

ㅇㅅㅇ :D
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak


Unrankable, problem, plausible problem. Yay good stuff.

Okay so apparently the song is 5:09 but you want all diffs? I'll give some overview, since I can't pass some and the rest are well-made.

[General]
My only suggestion is to cut the song to somewhere about 2-3 minutes, since otherwise it will tire and bore players (proven that I quit Easy halfway).
Also remove lead ins where you have the 15s break at the beginning.

[Easy]
Reduce stacking; Easy players are not that good with stacking. At least remove the stacking of something like 02:14:572 (2,1).

[Normal]
Don't use that many spinners; double spinners are somewhat hard for Normal players.

[Ra's Hard]
Should be no problem as far as I notice.

[Invincible, S.S]
I can't pass them :(

Meh one of the laziest mods I've done, but there is either a common mistake in each diff with not so much of the rest or there is too few mistakes so I can't notice. Good luck!
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!

from Crimmi & Bass' Resqueue

Easy

01:08:287 (2) - Place Finish on the slider tail.
01:09:429 (3) - I don't think this Finish fits here.
01:24:287 (3,1) - Can you make it like this?
01:30:429 (1,2) - Can you make it like this?
01:35:429 (1) - I rather see that slider in this position:
01:50:572 (1) - Remove clap.
02:03:715 (1) - Remove Finish & Clap from slider tail and put the Finish to the slider head.
02:04:858 (2) - ^
02:10:572 (1) - ^
02:12:287 (2,3) - Remove Clap from (2), Add Finish to (2)'s slider tail and remove Finish from (3).
03:10:287 - I don't think this [img=http://puu.sh/1icoX]break[/img] is necessary.
03:45:429 (1) - Remove New Combo.
03:47:144 (1) - ^
03:56:287 (1) - ^

Normal

Nothing~

Invincible

Is 2.10 a bit too high of a SV for a high BPM?

AR -1

05:01:224 (2,3,4,5) - This is just a suggestion:

SPOILER
[img=http://puu.sh/1iknZ][/img]

Ra's Hard

02:27:572 (6,7) - Suggestion:

S.S.

Nothing~
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
^I want to keep a distance...
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Request from my Queue~

[General]
  1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
  2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
  3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.
[Easy]
  1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
  2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
  3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
  4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
  5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
  6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
  7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
  8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
  9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
  10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
  11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
  12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
  13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
  14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
  15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
  16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
  17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
  18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
  19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
  20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
  21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
  22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
  23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
  24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
  25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
  26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
  27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
  28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
  29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
  30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
  31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
  32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
  33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
  34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
  35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
  36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
  37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
  38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
  39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
  40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
  41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
  42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
  43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
  44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
  45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3
[Normal]
  1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
  2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
  3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
  4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
  5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
  6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
  7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
  8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
  9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
  10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
  11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
  12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
  14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
  15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-
  16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
  17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
  18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
  19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
  20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
  21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
  22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
  23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
  24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
  25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
  26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
  27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
  28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
  29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
  30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
  31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
  32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
  33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
  34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
  35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
  36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
  37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.
[Invincible]
  1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
  2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
  3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
  4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
  5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
  6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end
[Ra's Hard]
  1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
  2. 01:28:572 - ^
  3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
  4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
  5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
  6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
  7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
  8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
  9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
  10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
  11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
  12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047
  13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
  14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
  15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
  16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
  17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!
I'm a bit tired now, so I don't mod S.S D: takes me 3 hours to mod this..
Anyway good luck
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

Flask wrote:

Request from my Queue~

[General]
  1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
  2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
  3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.
[Easy]
  1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
  2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
  3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
  4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
  5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
  6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
  7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
  8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
  9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
  10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
  11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
  12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
  13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
  14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
  15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
  16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
  17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
  18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
  19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
  20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
  21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
  22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
  23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
  24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
  25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
  26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
  27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
  28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
  29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
  30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
  31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
  32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
  33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
  34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
  35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
  36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
  37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
  38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
  39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
  40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
  41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
  42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
  43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
  44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
  45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3
[Normal]
  1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
  2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
  3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
  4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
  5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
  6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
  7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
  8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
  9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
  10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
  11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
  12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
  14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
  15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-
  16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
  17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
  18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
  19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
  20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
  21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
  22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
  23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
  24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
  25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
  26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
  27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
  28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
  29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
  30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
  31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
  32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
  33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
  34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
  35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
  36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
  37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.
[Invincible]
  1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
  2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
  3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
  4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
  5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
  6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end
[Ra's Hard]
  1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
  2. 01:28:572 - ^
  3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
  4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
  5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
  6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
  7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
  8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
  9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
  10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
  11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
  12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047
  13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
  14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
  15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
  16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
  17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!
I'm a bit tired now, so I don't mod S.S D: takes me 3 hours to mod this..
Anyway good luck

verrrrrrry long

ths~ ;)
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
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Coro
2,394 posts
Joined September 2010
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko DS]
Use alternating colours next time~
Use default hitsounds, remove unnecessary timing points. Taiko hitsound volume try not to go below 60%.
00:01:715 - move to 00:01:858
00:08:572 - d
00:08:715 - d
00:29:572 (65,66,67) - add finish

nice map~
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
In S.S/Ra's Hard diff, the second red line is 284,180, while in the other diffs it's 284,179

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:30:572 (2) - make it a 3/2 reversed slider to follow the vocal may be better (your next spinner is according to the vocal)
01:11:144 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1jyQ2 flows better if you have to use long sliders.
01:22:572 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Suggest you to remap this part, in a common way.
02:04:287 (3,5) - not perfect stacked.
03:40:287 (2) - same as 00:30:572 (2)
04:22:002 (2) - same as 01:11:144 (1,2)
04:40:001 (2,3) - still clap here, so 04:40:858 (4) get better effect.
04:49:633 (1) - make it 2 sliders..? Honeslty why use such long sliders.. (they're not good looking..)
To make better easier diffs (or better maps in general), i suggest you to find more features about the song itself (for example: 00:38:572 (2)/00:40:858 (2) in easy)

[Taiko DS]
01:31:572 - still 0.75x here plz. it changes too sudden now.
02:09:431 (212) - Unsnapped.
02:42:429 - add k?
02:44:715 & 02:44:787 - add d?
02:47:001 - add k?
03:05:429 - too silent. raise some volume here.
fun diff.

[Invincible]
01:59:429 (2,4,6,8) - make the place change a little every time, the effect would be better.
02:02:715 (5,6,7,8) - i think far like this is meaningless...

[Ra's Hard]
00:30:287 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/1jzpY far better i think.
00:34:572 (1,1) - too close, the BPM is high and this is only 1/2
03:40:001 (2,3,1,2) - same as 00:30:287 (2,3)
03:44:287 (1) - same as 00:34:572 (1,1)
04:32:144 (1,2) - switch new combo, also personally i think stack on 4 is better.

[S.S]
00:32:287 (4) - ..better shape plz?
00:33:429 (1) - ^
00:54:144 (1,2,3) - jump is fine but for such parts i think use another shape may be better. you're make the beats gradually stronger, but for such a placement people just hurry to jump back-forth and won't have such a feeling,.
01:28:858 (3) - use 1/6 snap here, the right one should be http://puu.sh/1jzC5
02:39:715 (1) - a larger square jump here?
Star Stream
2,033 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
All fixed except

[Normal]
01:22:572 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Suggest you to remap this part, in a common way. I think it's fine and commone way enough

[S.S]
00:54:144 (1,2,3) - jump is fine but for such parts i think use another shape may be better. you're make the beats gradually stronger, but for such a placement people just hurry to jump back-forth and won't have such a feeling,. But they're pretty enjoyable now imo
02:39:715 (1) - a larger square jump here? Would be too hard imo..

and thanks for moddings

http://puu.sh/1jA5D
http://puu.sh/1jA63
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Invincible]
01:59:429 (2,4,6,8) - make the place change a little every time, the effect would be better. Pattern changes
02:02:715 (5,6,7,8) - i think far like this is meaningless... Change closely
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
http://puu.sh/1jCFx
KDS
502 posts
Joined February 2010
KDS

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko DS]
Use alternating colours next time~
Use default hitsounds, remove unnecessary timing points. Taiko hitsound volume try not to go below 60%. this bug orzzzzz.. fixed
00:01:715 - move to 00:01:858 good suggestion :33 moved
00:08:572 - d IMO 'kkk k k k..' fits better.
00:08:715 - d ^
00:29:572 (65,66,67) - add finish i think it's not so good.. the tension of that point isn't so high, right?

nice map~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko DS]
01:31:572 - still 0.75x here plz. it changes too sudden now. it's already fixed in CQ's modding :33
02:09:431 (212) - Unsnapped. fixed
02:42:429 - add k? hmm.. added some notes
02:44:715 & 02:44:787 - add d? ^
02:47:001 - add k? ^
03:05:429 - too silent. raise some volume here. :3
fun diff.


ok thanks for mod CQ and Rin ><

http://puu.sh/1jDfa
BinJip
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Topic Starter
BinJip
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