Marcin wrote:

[General]
Remove *.osb file
You are aiming for approval yeah?, Don't you think about asking some Taiko mappers to get taiko diff?
[Insane]
GREAT , GREAT HIT SOUNDS ( I mean usage of them )
And great jumpy map but:
00:36:411 (5,6,7) - ~opinion - strange spacing
00:39:554 (3,4) - Spacing
00:47:839 (1,2,3,4) - ~~suggestion - https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21125662/compi ... _00385.jpg
01:04:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A bit bigger triangles ? (hard to read )
01:08:411 (1,2,3) - maybe just in a row, not jump ? (unreadable for me)
Everything else is great, I hope you get this approved

CDFA wrote:

ALLRIGHT LET'S GO

Diff:
JUMPS YOUR JUMPS. It's ok but like holy hell you can make an approval map without all of the jumps
00:36:696 (7) - This plays unbelievably awkwardly
01:30:696 (3) - Center this on the y-axis
03:03:125 (1) - Have this fade out to silence

Desu.

haha5957 wrote:

offset : 573
simple modding :3

_nara_ wrote:

[Insane]

Overall Diff. -2? OAO"
bcs it is tooo haard @@
except if you rlly" want to make it "insane" for sure ouo
(+1 for the HP Drain if you want to make it more hard 8D)

and is this song from an Anime?
if yes write it on "source" box
and add TV Size maybe? o.o

hichman wrote:

Requested mod :3

Let's see~

[General]

Overall Difficulty -1
HP Drain Rate +1
Decrease volume - maybe to 60-70%

[Muteki]

01:12:287 end this slider at 01:13:430
02:38:001 ^ at 02:40:287

Naah, I don't see any disadvantages, perfect xD
I love it, good luck :3

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there

-mp3 quality < 128 kbps, please reencode it to 128 kbps

01:44:287 (5) - center it? as it is it's a bit hard to see cause of the hitburst of 01:43:287 (1)
02:08:287 (10) - add NC?
02:08:572 (1) - remove NC?
02:32:858 (10,11) - ctrl+r?

nice map =w=

wingman_dw wrote:

Title
"Muteki no Soldier"
(無敵のSoldier)
Source
"Owari no Hoshi no Love Song"
(終わりの惑星のLove Song)
Tags
maeda jun yanagi nagi flaming-june

OR
Source:
Tag:owari no hoshi no love song maeda jun yanagi nagi flaming-june
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43003

http://flaming-june.com/001/lovesong2/

Break Time can be snapped.
04:41:715 http://puu.sh/AEdW

Nice map and song

-Gamu- wrote:

hi >w<

★Requests from Twitter★

AIBat wrote:

●Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 01:22:548 (snap to 01:22:573)
●Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:01:31:548 (snap to 01:31:573)
●Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:01:31:977 (snap to 01:32:001)
●04:25:430 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.

[Muteki]
●Kiai Time #1: 00:55:073 ⇒ 00:55:144
●Lead-in 2000 ⇒ 3000 changed?
●00:01:287 (6) - Add a new combo.
●00:01:715 (1) - Remove a new combo.
●00:03:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change the placement of the circle.
●00:10:572 (5) - Add a new combo.
●00:17:287 (4) - ^
●00:18:572 (1) - spacing 1.10x?
●00:34:001 (3) - http://puu.sh/AEL0 ?
●00:36:287 (4) - Add a new combo?
●00:39:715 (4) - Move (x:120 y:132)
●00:39:858 (5) - ^ (x:184 y:196)
●00:45:430 (8) - In the same way as this http://puu.sh/AEL0
●01:31:573 (5) - Add a new combo. Because the change in the speed of the slider.
●01:40:144 (4) - http://puu.sh/AEPg
●02:06:001 (6) - Add a new combo!!!
●04:12:858 (5) - In the same way as this http://puu.sh/AEL0
●04:41:287 (5) - Add finish?

good luck ><

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ Mod from our q~

Awesome song, i love so much <33If i not helped you don't give me kds :<
Nice map, i didn't see anything wrong <3

Muteki

SPOILER

add finish ↓

00:01:287
00:03:573
00:08:144
00:14:001
00:16:287
00:18:573
00:23:144
00:27:573
00:32:287
00:34:573
00:36:858
00:43:715
00:44:715
00:46:144
00:52:858
00:57:430
00:59:573
01:02:001
01:04:287
01:06:573
01:08:715
01:22:573
01:27:144
01:34:001
01:36:287
01:38:573
01:40:858
01:47:715
01:48:715
01:50:001
01:56:858
01:59:144
02:03:573
02:08:287
02:15:144
02:26:573
02:28:858
02:31:144
02:33:430
02:35:715
03:00:858
03:14:573
03:16:858
03:19:144
03:28:287
03:35:144
03:44:287
03:46:573
03:54:430
03:55:715
04:02:573
04:04:858
04:09:287
04:11:715
04:14:001
04:18:430
04:20:858
04:27:715
04:32:287
04:39:144
04:47:418 - add whistle
04:55:089 - ^
04:57:816 - ^
05:03:270 - add finish

Good luck~~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alrighty let's get started . Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.

[General]
i highly suggest that you change the mp3's bitrate to 128 to reduce the filesize for this mapset.
the offset is correct, but it's at the wrong spot. it should be at 287 because that's where the guitar starts, but then again i think that's also wrong because it sounds a bit too early. it should range between 265-280. when i modded this map, i'm using an offset of 266. i'm not sure if this is 100% correct
The preview time should be at 54573. that's where the chorus is about to start.

[Muteki]
00:02:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make (2,4,6) curved sliders so that it'd flow smoother during gameplay.
00:05:408 (3) - move this under (2) and make it a curved slider to blanket the previous note.
00:27:694 (6) - why does the spacing decrease for this? I felt uncomfortable when reached this because the spacing suddenly decreases. follow the DS for this which is 1.60. i'd feel comfortable if you do so.
00:41:266 (3,4) - space out these notes a bit more to challenge players. it should be like this.
00:51:837 (7) - *nazi* go 1 grid down so that it'd stack on (2).
01:03:694 (4) - either move (9) or (4) somewhere else. with a BPM this high, the hitburst is still covering repeat slider and that's an unrankable issue here.
01:08:408 (5,6,7) - align this to (1,2,3). it'll flow a lot smoother and the shape would look even nicer during gameplay.
01:23:694 (5) - move this to x:84 y:256. it'll make a nice anti jump between these 2 notes. the DS should be evened out at 1.40 or close to that.
01:44:123 (4,5) - replace this for a 1/2 slider facing up. it'll continue the pattern from (1-4).
01:54:551 (4) - space this out to form a diamond. i don't like the overlap on (2) at all. it makes it look bad during gameplay.
01:59:980 (7) - for a smoother flow, make this slider look like (9).
02:15:694 (5) - face this going SW or southwest. if you don't know what i'm saying, look at a compass and that's where you should face your slider.
02:36:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see that it's a trapezoid, but this confuses me. it starts to a triangle to a trapezoid and that confuses me easily. do something like this and tell me what you think.
02:37:980 (1) - add a finish on the spinner. it'll act as the cymbals in the song.
03:13:551 (7) - align this to (5) so that it'd form a zig-zag pattern.
03:32:837 (5) - make this a NC. the lyrics change from here.
04:00:123 (3,4) - the finish should be at (4). not at (3). you can clearly hear the cymbals on (4).
04:04:123 (4) - keep the DS consistent. this throw me off or surprised me because the DS suddenly decreases. follow the DS for the combo which is 2.00. it'll be less confusing and it'll flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
04:04:837 (1,2) - make these sliders symmetrical. it'll look nicer during gameplay.
04:11:123 (3,4) - hmm make these curved sliders to flow smoother from (1,2).
04:36:408 (5,2) - if you want, space out these notes. the overlap make it look bad during gameplay.
05:03:441 - add a spinner to follow the long pause and end it at 05:06:339 to follow the piano in the song.
hmm there are several minor flaws, like the slight overlaps, but it's nothing big.

I guess that's it. GL

iMercurial wrote:

First at all... an approval map, BinJip?

Also.. This.





dafuq men?

• Maybe OD +1 for consistency with AR 9 /o/
  Low quality of the BG, but it doesn't matter I think.

• 00:13:858 (6) Unnecessary Jump or Weird spacing, this fits better http://puu.sh/BRMa
  00:25:858 (2) Weird spacing between (1) and (3), please Fix it.
  04:25:430 (1) New Combo bug... please Use a NC Here to fix it.

1. 00:00:287 (1) - I guess, change the clap sound in beginning with finish sound more better since in bg music, the cymbal sounder is more fit with finish instead the clap
2. 00:04:287 (1) - remove finish sound? the sound seems too loud in here and not fit with the clap sound imo.
3. 00:08:858 (1) - ^
4. 00:16:715 (2) - in here too, the finish sound not fit with clap sound ><
5. 00:25:215 (5,6) - stack this properly? a bit annoying with this untidy stacking
6. 00:27:573 (5) - here again, I guess the finish sound should put in (6) instead in here. beside that, (6) is end of vocal
7. 00:29:858 (7) - add finish in slider's end? fit with cymbal sounder
8. 00:31:430 (6,7) - in my eyes, these slider isn't really tidy imo, want to try this more curve? -> picture
   

   172,312,31430,2,0,B|208:352|296:352|340:312,1,180.000000596047,8|0
   340,72,31858,2,0,B|304:32|216:32|172:72,1,180.000000596047,8|0

9. 00:35:001 (2) - don't you think the slider in the end is weird to hear? I know you want to make same rhythm with (1) together, but the result is weird imo
10. 00:36:858 (5) - add finish sound for cymbal sounder too?
11. 00:41:430 (4) - ^
12. 00:43:715 (3) - ^but in the beginning
13. 00:48:287 (4) - ^ just add
14. 00:50:430 (2) - ^in the end
15. 01:10:287 (3) - why not add finish? i think the sound similar with 01:09:144 (2) -
16. 01:11:715 (3) - remove finish sound in the end ;_; the sound isn't not good because you already add in begin
17. 01:30:430 (2) - add clap sound? seems the sound fit with vocal and a bit drum sound in bg music
18. 01:30:715 (3) - add finish sound in beginning too?
19. 01:54:572 (4) - add finish sound again~
20. 02:05:572 (4,5) - stack this properly ok? ;_;
21. 02:06:001 (1) - add finish again~
22. 02:17:430 (1) - ^ in beginning for cymbal sounder
23. 02:24:287 (5) - ^
24. 02:51:715 (3) - ^
25. 02:52:715 (4) - more curve like this? -> picture
    

    196,116,172715,2,0,B|156:52|64:68|16:104|16:180|16:240|72:300|152:292|200:248,1,450.000001490117,8|12

26. 02:53:929 (2) - add finish in the end for cymbal sounder again?
27. 03:00:573 (5) - add clap sound in here?
28. 04:22:001 (1) - I think end this spinner at 04:23:073 was good to hear too

Yasora wrote:

Muteki

1. 00:00:287 (1) - I guess, change the clap sound in beginning with finish sound more better since in bg music, the cymbal sounder is more fit with finish instead the clap
2. 00:04:287 (1) - remove finish sound? the sound seems too loud in here and not fit with the clap sound imo.
3. 00:08:858 (1) - ^
4. 00:16:715 (2) - in here too, the finish sound not fit with clap sound ><
5. 00:25:215 (5,6) - stack this properly? a bit annoying with this untidy stacking
6. 00:27:573 (5) - here again, I guess the finish sound should put in (6) instead in here. beside that, (6) is end of vocal
7. 00:29:858 (7) - add finish in slider's end? fit with cymbal sounder
8. 00:31:430 (6,7) - in my eyes, these slider isn't really tidy imo, want to try this more curve? -> picture
   

   172,312,31430,2,0,B|208:352|296:352|340:312,1,180.000000596047,8|0
   340,72,31858,2,0,B|304:32|216:32|172:72,1,180.000000596047,8|0

9. 00:35:001 (2) - don't you think the slider in the end is weird to hear? I know you want to make same rhythm with (1) together, but the result is weird imo
10. 00:36:858 (5) - add finish sound for cymbal sounder too?
11. 00:41:430 (4) - ^
12. 00:43:715 (3) - ^but in the beginning
13. 00:48:287 (4) - ^ just add
14. 00:50:430 (2) - ^in the end
15. 01:10:287 (3) - why not add finish? i think the sound similar with 01:09:144 (2) -
16. 01:11:715 (3) - remove finish sound in the end ;_; the sound isn't not good because you already add in begin
17. 01:30:430 (2) - add clap sound? seems the sound fit with vocal and a bit drum sound in bg music
18. 01:30:715 (3) - add finish sound in beginning too?
19. 01:54:572 (4) - add finish sound again~
20. 02:05:572 (4,5) - stack this properly ok? ;_;
21. 02:06:001 (1) - add finish again~
22. 02:17:430 (1) - ^ in beginning for cymbal sounder
23. 02:24:287 (5) - ^
24. 02:51:715 (3) - ^
25. 02:52:715 (4) - more curve like this? -> picture
    

    196,116,172715,2,0,B|156:52|64:68|16:104|16:180|16:240|72:300|152:292|200:248,1,450.000001490117,8|12

26. 02:53:929 (2) - add finish in the end for cymbal sounder again?
27. 03:00:573 (5) - add clap sound in here?
28. 04:22:001 (1) - I think end this spinner at 04:23:073 was good to hear too

Good luck :3

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. I don't see any BG from your osz. Missing?

Muteki

1. Patterns are mostly set already, so here's some hitsound mod

01:06:287 - Missing clap
01:47:715 (1) - Keep this with previous combo color. (Remove new combo), then add it here 01:48:001 (2) -
01:51:144 (8) - Clap
02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,1) - nonsense blanket beats, but makes me laughed. orz
02:17:430 - Let's add more finish on this part!
02:19:715 - 1 <- ?
02:20:715 (6) - 2 <- ?
02:22:001 - 3 <- ?
02:25:430 - 4 <- ?
\Done/

02:54:144 (3) - Music had nothing here, so basically the rhythm should be like this

SPOILER

03:30:287 - Clap
03:34:287 - ^
03:37:287 (5) - ^
03:39:573 - Any finish here ?
04:02:573 (1) - Same as 01:47:715
04:08:430 (8) - Divide the combo here. (New combo)
04:13:287 (6) - Clap
04:22:001 (1,1) - New combo for these spinners
04:31:287 - Move this finish to 04:31:001 (6) -
04:34:287 (5) - Finish, like how you do here: 04:27:430 (8) -
04:38:858 - ^
05:02:589 - Whistle

Good luck!

1. OD-1??
2. 00:01:287 (1) - Remove finish?
3. 00:44:287 (2,3) - I think change to a slider with a reserve is better~
4. 00:46:858 (5) - Try this?? http://puu.sh/DMsm
5. 00:53:858 (3,4,5,1) - If you want to make them to be straight~ You should move (5) to [X:260 Y:188] and move (1) to [X:324 Y:252]
6. 02:15:715 (5) - I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/DMxN
7. 02:21:787 (10,11) - How about this beat?
   
8. 02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - Changing the order is more fun IMO!! http://puu.sh/DMB6
9. 03:03:144 (1) - finish??
10. 03:31:572 (1,2,3,4) - Make anti-jump??
11. 03:34:715 (4,5) - Hmm...I think it's hard to play >_<" because the BPM is very high..
    maybe replace it by 4 circles or a slider with 2 reserve??
12. 03:47:644 (2,3) - ^
13. 03:48:572 (2,3) - Ctrl + R?? more fun~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~
Request from Barry's Modding Queue

<Muteki>

1. OD-1??
2. 00:01:287 (1) - Remove finish?
3. 00:44:287 (2,3) - I think change to a slider with a reserve is better~
4. 00:46:858 (5) - Try this?? http://puu.sh/DMsm
5. 00:53:858 (3,4,5,1) - If you want to make them to be straight~ You should move (5) to [X:260 Y:188] and move (1) to [X:324 Y:252]
6. 02:15:715 (5) - I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/DMxN
7. 02:21:787 (10,11) - How about this beat?
   
8. 02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - Changing the order is more fun IMO!! http://puu.sh/DMB6
9. 03:03:144 (1) - finish??
10. 03:31:572 (1,2,3,4) - Make anti-jump??
11. 03:34:715 (4,5) - Hmm...I think it's hard to play >_<" because the BPM is very high..
    maybe replace it by 4 circles or a slider with 2 reserve?? not hard 'ㅅ'
12. 03:47:644 (2,3) - ^
13. 03:48:572 (2,3) - Ctrl + R?? more fun~

Good luck!! @w@

1. 00:03:001 (2,3) - Fix this blanket by moving the last waypoint of 00:03:001 (2) - 2 grids up
2. 00:16:715 (2) - I suggest you to make a shape like this here,to make a better slider to look and to make too a better blanket with 00:17:144 (3) -
3. 00:19:572 (5) - Please increase the spacing here, since it breaks a bit the flow at this point
4. 00:22:715 (1) - Move the new combo at 00:23:144 (2) - ,since here a new combo would stay better
5. 00:54:287 (1) - Move this combo at 00:54:001 (4) - ,so that it follow the singer's voice
6. 02:00:286 (8) - Place this at x:268 y:196 to make it equidistant with 02:00:001 (7,9) -
7. 02:12:001 (9,10,11) - If you want to do something symmetric to make this entire pattern look better,just copypaste,flip horizontally and use CTRL+R on
8. 02:11:572 (6,7,8) -. Once you have done that,you should have now something like this
9. 03:44:572 (3) - Again,make this equidistant with 03:44:287 (1,2,4) - by moving it at x:168 y:200
10. 04:02:858 (2,3,4,5) - Imho,you should really tweak this square pattern,since it isn't shaped really well. I suggest you to modify this pattern to make it look like this
11. 04:16:287 (4) - New combo here
12. 04:16:858 (1) - If you did ^,move the new combo here on 04:17:429 (5) -
13. 04:29:429 (4,5) - Like in other cases,I suggest you to make this blanket look better
14. 04:53:384 (3,4) - To make this symmetric,you could do just something like this

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi!

[Muteki]

1. 00:03:001 (2,3) - Fix this blanket by moving the last waypoint of 00:03:001 (2) - 2 grids up
2. 00:16:715 (2) - I suggest you to make a shape like this here,to make a better slider to look and to make too a better blanket with 00:17:144 (3) -
3. 00:19:572 (5) - Please increase the spacing here, since it breaks a bit the flow at this point
4. 00:22:715 (1) - Move the new combo at 00:23:144 (2) - ,since here a new combo would stay better
5. 00:54:287 (1) - Move this combo at 00:54:001 (4) - ,so that it follow the singer's voice
6. 02:00:286 (8) - Place this at x:268 y:196 to make it equidistant with 02:00:001 (7,9) -
7. 02:12:001 (9,10,11) - If you want to do something symmetric to make this entire pattern look better,just copypaste,flip horizontally and use CTRL+R on
8. 02:11:572 (6,7,8) -. Once you have done that,you should have now something like this
9. 03:44:572 (3) - Again,make this equidistant with 03:44:287 (1,2,4) - by moving it at x:168 y:200
10. 04:02:858 (2,3,4,5) - Imho,you should really tweak this square pattern,since it isn't shaped really well. I suggest you to modify this pattern to make it look like this
11. 04:16:287 (4) - New combo here
12. 04:16:858 (1) - If you did ^,move the new combo here on 04:17:429 (5) -
13. 04:29:429 (4,5) - Like in other cases,I suggest you to make this blanket look better
14. 04:53:384 (3,4) - To make this symmetric,you could do just something like this

Good work,you just have to do some tweaks with your patterns. Good luck on approving your map ^^

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q :3

Unbeatable

00:08:858(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here better make volume 60% and normal without hitsounds. Sounds better
00:31:429(6,7) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/E24A
00:42:287(4,7) - maybe you can stack it better?
02:17:715(2,3) - stack better
03:18:715(5,6,7,8,9,10) - same on 00:08:858
03:27:858 - ^
04:04:287 - ^
04:31:858 - ^
05:06:167 - i think better end spiner om big white tick with volume 5% and add short double slider after http://puu.sh/E2gF

It's all for me nice map) good luck~~

ykcarrot wrote:

빈집짜응~


[General]
오디오 리드인 3000ms 은 너무 깁니다. 비디오 오프셋이 -1850ms 임을 고려했을때 2250ms 정도가 가장 이상적일 것 같네요.


[Unbeatable]
00:08:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2번부터 클랩이 없던데요, 클랩 다 넣고 볼륨50%로 맞춰보세요. 이거 이후로도 스네어 드럼을 스트림처리 하신 구간이 꽤 있던데 따로 언급 안하겠습니다. 소프트 쓰는거 보다 커스텀클랩 넣고 볼륨 줄이는게 훨씬 힘 있게 들려요.
00:24:429 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보 지우고
00:24:715 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤보 넣으세요. 앞 부분에 00:20:144 (1) 똑같은 패턴이 있습니다.
00:26:858 (7) - 클랩 들어가는 파트가 여기부터니까 다음 노트말고 여기에 뉴콤보 넣는 게 낫겠네요.
00:37:287 (2,3) - 역방향 흐름인데 순방향으로 가는게 낫지 않을까요? 3번부터 00:46:001 (7) 여기까지 좌우반전 들어가면 괜찮을 듯 합니다. 00:45:429 (5) 슬라이더 끝 방향이 현재 왼쪽을 향하고 있는점을 봐서 좌우반전 들어가면 훨씬 나을거 같아요.
01:31:572 (1) - 이렇게 바꿔보시는 건? http://puu.sh/E2H7
01:45:429 (4) - 피니시
02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 슬라이더랑 스페이싱을 봐서라도 좌우반전이 낫습니다.
02:53:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 일렉에 맞추신거죠? 일단 박자 틀렸고 설령 박자 맞다쳐도 처리하기 엄청 곤란해 보입니다. 제가 여러번 테스트 해봤는데 이게 가장 이상적인것 같네요.

스샷

1,2번은 1/3 스냅하세요.

02:56:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 여기도 틀렸습니다. 일렉 박자가 변칙적인데 그냥 아래처럼 단순화 시키세요.

스샷

3,5번은 1/3 스냅하세요.

03:02:001 (1) - 여기 왜 슬라이더틱을 스네어드럼 처리 하셨는지요? 가볍게 '딱' 하는 소리에 맞추신거 같은데 이걸 스네어 처리하는것 보다 기본 틱 소리로 처리하는게 더 어울린다고 봐요.
03:02:572 (3) - 위와 비슷한 이유입니다. 앞에 클랩을 뒤로 옮기세요.
03:03:144 (1) - 끝에 피니시 소리가 너무 약합니다.
03:22:429 (6) - 뒷노트 말고 여기에 뉴콤보
04:00:287 (4) - 피니시
04:04:358 (2) - 여기 스네어 드럼 없습니다. 삭제하고 앞 노트를 앞의 콤보 그룹이랑 묶고, 다음 노트부터 뉴콤보(스트림) 들어가세요.
04:17:287 (7) - 피니시
04:22:001 (1,1) - 빈집님께서 사용하신 방법은 시작 포인트에 중점을 둔 건데요, 이렇게 하면 중간에 있는 심벌 소리를 무시하게 됩니다. 연속스피너는 처음빼고 딱히 시작에 중점을 안둬도 괜찮다고 봅니다. 처음 스피너 끝을 한 칸 뒤로 밀어서 피니시 넣는게 음향적으로 더 완벽하니까요.


제가 보기엔 모딩 많이 받으셔야겠네요.

1. 01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
2. 02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502

1. 02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
2. 04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.

1. 00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
2. 01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
3. 01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
4. 02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
5. 03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
6. 04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
7. 04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
8. 04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
9. 05:03:269 - Useless inherited point

1. Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
2. Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組，其中每兩個拍子為一組，就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ，您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子，打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感；I hope change all if you can.

marshall_racer wrote:

DA FAQ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51730
IT'S ASDFKLFSDJ ... first DoKo's stealing our BG and now you are
QUIT THIS GAME DUDE, SRSLY
You can't tell me you've got this BG elsewhere, it's either from DoKo's or my map, though he took it from our map anyway

If you can proof you didn't steal it, I'll apologize ..

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Modding Queue

[Unbeatable]

[Layout]

1. 01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
2. 02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502

[rhythm]

1. 02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
2. 04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.

[Setting]

1. 00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
2. 01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
3. 01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
4. 02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
5. 03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
6. 04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
7. 04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
8. 04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
9. 05:03:269 - Useless inherited point

[Opinion]

1. Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
2. Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組，其中每兩個拍子為一組，就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ，您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子，打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感；I hope change all if you can.

Good lucky

1. Timig - 2nd red line - It is not unified. Please unify it
   from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.
2. Song folder - normal-slidertick.wav - looks like you are not using. Please delete if not used.

1. 00:08:287 (5) - add NC (big jump point
2. 00:37:715 (4,5) - Ctrl+R. It thinks that a flow improves more
3. 00:55:143 - green line move to 00:55:144. It is not put on a line. Please put kiai time at least on a line.
4. 00:58:572 (6) - add NC (big jump point
5. 00:58:858 (8) - grid move to x132,y176. ( symmetrical with 00:58:572 (6) ) and ( 00:59:001 (9) - move to x256,y312 ? )
6. 01:01:144 (1) - remove NC ( i think no need NC
7. 01:01:714 - same 00:55:143
8. 01:04:286 - ^
9. 01:40:144 (4,5,6,7,1) - Seem to flow a little bad to me x.x for ex: in my case http://puu.sh/EGOL
   

   216,172,100144,2,0,B|165:166|133:198,1,90.0000002980235,0|12
   200,260,100429,5,8
   256,88,100572,1,4
   408,184,100715,1,8

10. 01:40:429 (5) - add NC ?
11. 01:59:143 - same 00:55:143
12. 02:05:714 - ^
13. 02:05:858(x) - add note. Better place to note here is a good rhythm.
14. 02:06:001 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump is very confused. I recommend that you put here. (02:06:287.02:06:858.02:07:429.02:08:001.) I think that it is the rhythm that should make a anti-jump here.
15. 02:08:287 - same 00:55:143
16. 02:15:143 - ^
17. 02:54:287 (3,4) - i think too far
18. 03:10:225 - Unnecessary green line
19. 03:53:429 (4) - add finish ( same as others )
20. 03:54:715 (6,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: 03:54:715 (6) - add repeat. and 03:55:001 (1) - remove note.
21. 04:04:857 - same 00:55:143
22. 04:14:000 - ^
23. 04:22:001 (1) - remove finish ( dose not match imo x.x
24. 04:23:143 - Unnecessary green line
25. 04:41:287 - same 00:55:143
26. 05:03:269 - Unnecessary green line
27. 05:03:270 (1) - does not match the sound of the whistle. so 05:05:315 - S:C1⇒change to S is better.

1. 00:08:001 (4) - add clap to end of the slider ?
2. 02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about putting it without stacked ? for ex: http://puu.sh/EHKy
3. 03:18:429 (3,4) - Ctrl+R. I think it will flow better
4. 05:03:356 (1) - dose not match end imo x.x spinner end 05:06:168. ( same as Unbeatable diff is better imo )
   
   04:44:180~05:00:202 - How to use this hitsound has no meaning x.x; enough just to use soft-hitsound. or Do you forget the addition of the silence-sliderslide?

1. 02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...I found these anti-jump stacks pretty unexpected, especially after all those jumps. Maybe make some jumps here too, by moving 02:06:001 (1,3,5,7) to (x,32)? (x here means it's still the same value; you just need to make sure the y axis is 32).
2. 02:08:001 (8) - Make this a 1/4 slider that repeats twice (begin at the current position, end at 02:08:215)? It fits with the music very well. If you do this, I suggest to make sure the end of the slider is located at (304,192) and make sure 02:08:286 (1)'s beginning is stacked below that.

1. ...A 1.2x speed-up on the kiai times for a 210 BPM song with 2.00 SV? Isn't that a bit... ridiculous?
2. 00:08:572 (3,4) - Ctrl+R? I know you're making a square pattern here, but... don't know, I think it'll play better with this.
3. 03:07:715 (1) - Don't really think this jump is necessary. Stacking it below 03:07:573 (7) should do.
4. 04:44:180 - This section is supposed to be slow, right? Using 0.5x BPM won't hurt.

alacat wrote:

Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?




good luck :3

1. 00:16:715 (2) - here looks better x:436 y:220
2. 00:25:429 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x:144 y:144 to make blanket look better
3. 00:33:144 (6,3) - it's not stacked perfectly
4. 00:36:287 (1,2,3,4) - this gives a better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358720
5. 01:03:715 (9,1) - slider blanket like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358721

   141,191,63715,2,0,B|68:192|28:268|60:332,2,180,4|0|4

6. 02:54:215 (2,3) - why 1/4..? missing note at 02:54:144 ?
7. 02:58:001 (5) - better here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358724
8. 03:18:287 (3) - move to x:152 y:188
9. 04:39:572 (4) - better blanket..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358728
10. 04:42:572 - drag break here..? gives a pause break effect
11. 05:06:252 - add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358730 ._.

1. 00:15:858 (5,6,7) - imo ctrl+r plays better here o.o
2. 00:23:144 (1) - I think this shape goes with music better orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358697
3. 01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo,,, back and forth jump at 210 bpm, it's so hard,,,,, and also, 01:04:001 (7) - stacks there ;__; maybe you can do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358701
4. 01:04:715 (3) - ctrl+r plays better here o.o
5. 01:44:287 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358703 looks better...
6. 02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358704 how about this._.
7. 02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - stack somewhere else...?
8. 03:42:001 (1,2) - you can do slider blanket better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358708

   92,268,222001,6,0,B|132:208|104:120|24:104,1,200.000000596047,4|8

9. 04:22:715 (2,3,4,5) - stream here

kosiga wrote:

from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.

1. 01:13:429 -
2. 03:10:001 -
3. 04:23:144 -

36,184,153429,6,0,B|36:100|104:100|104:100|108:168|176:180,1,240.000001788141,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 04:23:143 -

328,52,144287,6,0,B|328:144|184:144|184:52,3,220.000001192094,4|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 01:13:429 -
2. 03:10:001 -
3. 04:23:143 -
4. 05:03:269 -

389,94,8001,1,0,0:0:0
467,207,8144,2,0,B|395:290,1,105.000000298023

SPOILER

160,196,29144,1,8,0:0:0
239,373,29287,1,0,0:0:0
416,294,29429,1,0,0:0:0
336,116,29572,1,0,0:0:0
178,13,29715,1,8,0:0:0

256,320,30715,1,0,0:0:0
357,81,30858,1,0,0:0:0
256,64,31001,2,0,B|212:32|148:40,1,105.000000298023
357,303,31287,1,0,0:0:0

SPOILER

188,60,47858,5,2,0:0:0
114,269,48001,1,2,0:0:0
92,140,48144,1,2,0:0:0
210,189,48287,1,4,0:0:0
231,318,48429,6,0,B|261:354|325:352,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
433,291,48715,2,0,B|462:251|444:192,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

132,116,52429,5,0,0:0:0
380,116,52572,1,0,0:0:0
256,40,52715,1,2,0:0:0
380,116,52858,6,0,B|436:152|436:152|476:224|432:300,1,210.000000596047,4|

SPOILER

128,192,108287,2,0,B|124:132|168:88,1,105.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,192,108572,1,8,0:0:0
385,192,108715,6,8,B|431:75|303:24,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,109144,1,0,0:0:0
256,128,109287,1,8,0:0:0
205,25,109429,2,8,B|80:75|127:192,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,109858,1,8,0:0:0

164,141,131001,1,0,0:3:0
59,152,131144,1,0,0:3:0
38,254,131286,1,0,0:3:0
129,306,131429,1,0,0:3:0
206,237,131572,1,0,0:3:0
306,237,131715,5,0,0:3:0
383,306,131858,1,0,0:3:0
474,254,132001,1,0,0:3:0
453,152,132143,1,0,0:3:0
348,141,132286,1,0,0:3:0

SPOILER

168,200,208287,6,0,B|296:200,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,200,208572,1,8,0:0:0
112,88,208715,2,0,B|236:88,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,88,209000,1,0,0:0:0
32,236,209144,2,0,B|136:236,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,236,209429,1,8,0:0:0
404,328,209572,2,0,B|272:328,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,328,209858,1,0,0:0:0
472,192,210001,2,0,B|364:192,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,192,210287,2,0,B|141:192|140:192,1,105.000000298023
80,60,210572,6,0,B|184:60,1,105.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,60,210858,1,0,0:0:0
260,192,211001,2,0,B|396:192,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,211287,1,8,0:0:0
256,40,211429,2,0,B|256:176,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,250,211715,1,0,0:0:0
364,112,211858,2,0,B|364:248,1,105.000000298023,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,322,212144,1,0,0:0:0

256,112,214572,6,0,B|256:244,1,105.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
218,305,214858,2,0,B|160:344,3,70.0000001986823

248,104,276287,5,0,0:0:0
340,56,276430,1,8,0:0:0
440,88,276573,1,0,0:0:0
391,183,276715,1,0,0:0:0
349,279,276858,5,4,0:0:0

1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.

1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3

1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    

    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    

    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-

16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.

1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end

1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
2. 01:28:572 - ^
3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    

    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047

13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!

Flask wrote:

Request from my Queue~

[General]

1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.

[Easy]

1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3

[Normal]

1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    

    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    

    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-

16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.

[Invincible]

1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end

[Ra's Hard]

1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
2. 01:28:572 - ^
3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    

    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047

13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!

I'm a bit tired now, so I don't mod S.S D: takes me 3 hours to mod this..
Anyway good luck

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Invincible]
01:59:429 (2,4,6,8) - make the place change a little every time, the effect would be better. Pattern changes
02:02:715 (5,6,7,8) - i think far like this is meaningless... Change closely

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko DS]
Use alternating colours next time~
Use default hitsounds, remove unnecessary timing points. Taiko hitsound volume try not to go below 60%. this bug orzzzzz.. fixed
00:01:715 - move to 00:01:858 good suggestion :33 moved
00:08:572 - d IMO 'kkk k k k..' fits better.
00:08:715 - d ^
00:29:572 (65,66,67) - add finish i think it's not so good.. the tension of that point isn't so high, right?

nice map~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko DS]
01:31:572 - still 0.75x here plz. it changes too sudden now. it's already fixed in CQ's modding :33
02:09:431 (212) - Unsnapped. fixed
02:42:429 - add k? hmm.. added some notes
02:44:715 & 02:44:787 - add d? ^
02:47:001 - add k? ^
03:05:429 - too silent. raise some volume here. :3
fun diff.

01:28:858 (3) - use 1/6 snap here, the right one should be http://puu.sh/1jzC5

NatsumeRin wrote:

01:28:858 (3) - use 1/6 snap here, the right one should be http://puu.sh/1jzC5

still there.

Ra-s wrote:

http://puu.sh/1kuCn
적어도 주말이 되야지 Breaktime부분을 매꿀 수 있는데...평일은 시간이 안됌

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

01:11:144 (1,3) - wrong snap ?!

Garven wrote:

[Invincible]

01:45:001 (1,2,3,4) - This is okay, but it would be best if you could extend the pattern so that the next time you mirror it the same part of the song is happening, so if you can, extend the pattern until 01:47:287 - Don't understand

02:00:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl + h this section, then set 01:59:429 (2,4) - around here (about 2x DS)

SPOILER

01:59:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part pattern change

02:53:644 (1,2,3) - This isn't really following the guitar right (and is what you should be following after that previous part)I tried fixing it, don't konw if I got it right though

Remainder is complete

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
02:17:429 - End kiai here fixed by Binjip :3
04:44:179 - Should lower the volume a bit here. ^
05:02:589 (107) - Maybe have a drum roll here instead? If you do, have it crescendo like the ride cymbal. no change becuz i think this last part needs stability more than a crescendo

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding concerning missed mods on the Easy and these points on the Insane.

[Invincible]
00:30:858 (3) - This jump right here.. is really bugging me. It's just out of nowhere to keep your pattern pretty, but it plays rather poorly.
00:48:429 (1,2) - This jump doesn't make sense when you compare the same part of the music with 00:46:144 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:429 (5) - Stack this with 00:57:858 (2) -
01:50:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These returns to stacks are a little confusing to read. Think you can make it more clear?
02:02:715 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't read very well afte doing a circular pattern at 02:01:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jump from 1 -> 2 is the culprit here. Maybe using more even spacing for all 4 instead of this random jump will fair better.
02:07:715 (5) - Change the spacing on this one too, considering the rest of the pattern.
02:59:715 (1) - This repeat arrow is slightly obscured by the hitburst from 02:58:858 (2) - . Should be easy to adjust.
03:35:144 (1) - I find this plays better unstacked
03:38:001 (4,5,6) - Maybe change these to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/505284 Flows much better
04:02:429 (2) - This should be the slider, and the end of 04:02:572 (1) - should be the circle, rhythmically.