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Ra-s 2012-06-22T15:05:39+00:00

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22:57 <Ra-s> : 준비
22:58 <BinJip> : 준비
22:59 <Ra-s> : 이거 BG가 이상하다...
22:59 <BinJip> : d
22:59 <BinJip> : ㅇ
22:59 <BinJip> : 그래서 BG구해달라고 했던거
22:59 <BinJip> : 이거 앨범곡이라서 커버가 500밖에안됨
23:00 <BinJip> : 맞출수가없음
23:00 <Ra-s> : 크기 억지로 늘린거같은데 아무리봐도
23:00 <BinJip> : 늘렸음일단
23:00 <Ra-s> : 540 * 450 아님?
23:00 <Ra-s> : 원래 사이즈가
23:00 <BinJip> : ㅇ
23:00 <BinJip> : 그럴껄
23:00 <BinJip> : 앨범BG큰게 없어
23:00 <Ra-s> : 애초에 이건
23:00 <Ra-s> : 이것보다 큰게 존재하지 않는데
23:01 <BinJip> : 만들수도없잖아
23:01 <Ra-s> : 내가 그래픽쪽에 종사하는 사람이 아니라
23:01 <Ra-s> : 절대 불가능하지 ㅋㅋ
23:01 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋ
23:02 <BinJip> : 일단 ㄴ넘어가
23:02 <Ra-s> : 아니 1024*768은 커녕 800*600도 없는데
23:02 <Ra-s> : 젼나 멘붕이다 이거
23:02 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ
23:02 <BinJip> : 구글 네이버 일본 네이버 다들어가봤지만
23:02 <BinJip> : 없음
23:02 <Ra-s> : 걍 이게 제일 낫다
23:04 <Ra-s> : 01:01:715 - unused timing
23:05 <BinJip> : ?
23:05 <Ra-s> : 저거 초록선
23:06 <BinJip> : 지우라고?
23:06 <Ra-s> : ㄴㄴ
23:06 <Ra-s> : 잘못봤네
23:06 <Ra-s> : kiai가 존나 애매함 이거 ㅠㅠ
23:06 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋ
23:06 <BinJip> : 난 잘넣은거같은데
23:07 <Ra-s> : 아니 이건 카이이가 없어도 이상하지 않은곡이라
23:07 <Ra-s> : 저렇게 넣어도 상관은 없음 근데 ㅋㅋ
23:07 <Ra-s> : 잘 넣은거 맞음
23:08 <Ra-s> : 02:05:858 - 이거
23:08 <Ra-s> : 02:05:715 - 여기가 낫지 않음?
23:08 <Ra-s> : 특별한경우나 태고가 아닌이상 빨간선에서 하는건 거의 없음
23:08 <Ra-s> : 키아이인 경우
23:08 <BinJip> : 고침 ㅇㅇ
23:09 <Ra-s> : 힛사 직접 박은거임?
23:09 <BinJip> : ㅇ
23:09 <Ra-s> : 오 이제 잘하네
23:09 <BinJip> : 힛사넣는데고 마우스휠로 왕복 했음
23:09 <BinJip> : 눈빠지는줄아랑ㅆ다
23:09 <Ra-s> : ㅋㅋㅋ
23:10 <Ra-s> : 맵도 괜찮네
23:10 <BinJip> : 피니쉬는 모딩에 있길래 넣음
23:10 <BinJip> : 이거 하루만에 만든거
23:10 <BinJip> : 11시간걸렸나
23:11 <Ra-s> : 04:41:715 - 여기 Break 누가 이렇게 하라서 한거임?
23:11 <BinJip> : 음..
23:11 <BinJip> : 몰라
23:11 <Ra-s> : 04:41:287 - 걍 여기까지 앞으로 당기는게 나을꺼 같은데
23:12 <BinJip> : 당김
23:12 <Ra-s> : 05:03:270 (1) - 스핀 이거
23:12 <Ra-s> : 소리 점점 줄어들게 하는게 더 어울릴꺼 같은데
23:12 <Ra-s> : 귀찮더라도 이런건 그게 더 나음
23:13 <BinJip> : ㅇㅋ
23:13 <Ra-s> : 그리고 맨뒤에 빨간선에 올려져있는거 그부분이 20% 되도록 서서히 줄어들게하고
23:13 <Ra-s> : soft whistle이거 넣으면 젓절할듟
23:14 <BinJip> : 원래 소리가 50이라서 끝까지 못간다 ㅋ
23:14 <BinJip> : 05:05:316 - 여기까지 20
23:14 <Ra-s> : ㅇㅋ 괜ㅊ낳음
23:15 <Ra-s> : 이 맵은 플레이도 해봐야겠다 모딩 다하고
23:15 <BinJip> : 04:04:144 (4,1) -
23:15 <BinJip> : 여기 점프크지?
23:15 <BinJip> : 연타 구부릴까
23:15 <Ra-s> : 함 해볼께
23:16 <Ra-s> : 그건 일단 플레이를 해보고 말할께
23:16 <Ra-s> : 아직은 잘 모르겠음 ㅋㅋ
23:16 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ
23:17 <Ra-s> : 이 정도 퀄에다가 노래까지 따지면 맷뱃 잘부르면 어프 되겠다
23:17 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋ
23:17 <BinJip> : 수능끝날때까지 못하면 민엽님 모딩있음
23:17 <BinJip> : 예약해놈 ㅋ
23:18 <Ra-s> : ㅋㅋ
23:18 <BinJip> : 보통 어프는 거의 반년은 걸리던데
23:18 <BinJip> : 이제 2주됬으니 이건..
23:19 <Ra-s> : 별도 꽤 모아놔야하고 모딩도 엄청 받아놔야함
23:19 <BinJip> : 내꺼 포스팅 117개인거도있음
23:19 <BinJip> : 모딩은 금방함
23:19 <Ra-s> : 00:39:001 (2) - ctrl r 한번 해봐
23:19 <Ra-s> : 참고로 힛사도 역전될껄
23:20 <BinJip> : 둘다 같은거라 상관없음
23:20 <BinJip> : 바꾸는거도 좋네
23:20 <Ra-s> : 아 그리고 슬라이더 끝점 whistle 이거 제거하는게 나아보이는데
23:21 <BinJip> : 그렇네..
23:21 <BinJip> : 이부분 4번째는 다지워야겟다
23:21 <Ra-s> : 이거 슬라이더 역전시켜서 얻는 혜택이 움직임 더 자연스럽게 하는거
23:21 <Ra-s> : 게다가 마침 이 슬라이더는 슬라이더 마지막 지지점이 슬라이더 끝점하고 일치된 상태라
23:21 <Ra-s> : ctrl r시켜도 모양이 별로 안손상됌 ㅋ
23:21 <BinJip> : ㅋ
23:22 <BinJip> : 모양 대칭되게 만들기 엄청어렵더라...
23:22 <Ra-s> : ㅇㅇ; ㅠㅠ
23:22 <BinJip> : 특키 커다란거
23:22 <Ra-s> : 나 같은 경우는
23:22 <Ra-s> : 그 x축 y축 가운데에 그래프처럼 있잖아
23:22 <Ra-s> : 거기에 한가운데에 둔다음에 만들음.
23:22 <BinJip> : 나도 그러는데
23:22 <Ra-s> : Tick이 y축 정중앙에 지나게
23:22 <BinJip> : 왔다리 갔다리해도 뭐가 안맞는경우가있어서
23:22 <Ra-s> : 그리고 더 정확히 하려면 슬라이더 시작점에 노트 놔보고 ctrl h 하고 끝점 맞추고
23:23 <BinJip> : 그런것도 씀 ㅋ
23:23 <BinJip> : 슬라이더 일자로 놓고도 해보고
23:23 <Ra-s> : 음 아까 내가 휘슬 4번째꺼 지우란거 더 이상 지적 안할께
23:23 <Ra-s> : 뒤에도 꽤 있네
23:23 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ
23:23 <BinJip> : 다지움
23:24 <BinJip> : 이제 스코어 2천만도 랭크되던데
23:24 <Ra-s> : 이거 몇점이었지?
23:24 <BinJip> : 6800만인가
23:24 <BinJip> : 6780?이었나
23:24 <Ra-s> : 어짜피 시간도 길고 bpm도 높아서 점수도 높네 ㅋㅋ
23:25 <Ra-s> : 어프일수밖에 없다
23:25 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ
23:25 <Ra-s> : 태고 한개 넣으면 적절할꺼 같은데
23:25 <Ra-s> : 00:54:287 (6) - NC?
23:26 <Ra-s> : 00:54:287 (1,4) - 이건 서로 대칭 아니어도 되는가?
23:26 <Ra-s> : 자신이 느끼는 노래 느낌하고 맞아가지고 일부로 그랬다면 별 상관없지만
23:26 <BinJip> : 1,4 저거 그냥 일자로 놓은건데
23:27 <BinJip> : 별한 20개정도만 모우면되겠네
23:28 <Ra-s> : 01:02:001 (5,1) - NC 교환?
23:28 <Ra-s> : 01:03:144 (7) - 그리고 이거 NC
23:28 <Ra-s> : 아니
23:28 <Ra-s> : 잠만
23:29 <Ra-s> : 맞구나
23:30 <BinJip> : ?
23:30 <BinJip> : 교환이라니?
23:30 <Ra-s> : 01:05:001 (5) - NC하는게 더 잘 읽힐꺼 같은데
23:30 <Ra-s> : 5번은 NC하고 뒤에 있는 1번은 NC제거
23:31 <Ra-s> : 01:05:430 (4) - ^
23:31 <BinJip> : ㅇ
23:31 <BinJip> : 저거 말할때 바꿈
23:32 <Ra-s> : 01:04:715 (3,2,2) - 오른쪽 두칸
23:32 <Ra-s> : 아 잠만
23:32 <Ra-s> : 이거 막 하다보면 병신 나머지 다 바꿔야함
23:32 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋ
23:32 <Ra-s> : 귀찮은데
23:32 <BinJip> : 그냥 놔둬
23:33 <Ra-s> : 몰라 대충해
23:34 <Ra-s> : 01:06:001 (1) - 이거 NC제거하고
23:34 <Ra-s> : 01:06:573 (2) - 여기에 NC ?
23:35 <Ra-s> : 01:07:858 (1) - 여기 NC있는것도 좀 이상함
23:35 <Ra-s> : 01:08:287 - 여기 NC가 나을려나?
23:36 <Ra-s> : 01:08:001 - 원래 여기에 뉴콤보하는게 맞는데 좌우대칭 패턴이라...
23:36 <BinJip> : 뉴콤도 어렵네
23:36 <Ra-s> : 오프셋만 잘맞추면 위에 큰하얀틱에 맞추면 대부분 다 됌
23:36 <Ra-s> : 또는 리딩이 쉽게 하던가
23:37 <Ra-s> : 큰하얀틱이 마디라서 여기에 NC하는게 보통 자연스러워
23:37 <Ra-s> : 01:24:501 (8) - 이 노트 꼭 필요함?
23:38 <BinJip> : 이상함?
23:38 <Ra-s> : 01:24:287 (7) - 여기 끝나는점에 힛사
23:38 <Ra-s> : 저거 아까 말한 8번이
23:38 <Ra-s> : 노트 지워보고 25%로 돌려서 봐봐
23:38 <Ra-s> : 아니 들어봐
23:39 <BinJip> : 없어도 될듯하긴한데
23:39 <Ra-s> : ㅇㅋ
23:40 <Ra-s> : 01:33:430 (1) - 여기 NC제거하고
23:40 <Ra-s> : 01:34:001 (3) - 에 넣는게 자연스러운거 같은데
23:40 <Ra-s> : 대칭...아..
23:41 <Ra-s> : 바꾸던지 말던지 상관없는 부분 ▲
23:41 <Ra-s> : 아니면 내가 말한것들 보류했다가 다른애가 언급하면 바꿔도 됌
23:42 <Ra-s> : 02:00:858 (1,3) - ^
23:43 <BinJip> : 02:56:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:43 <BinJip> : 여기좀 봐줘
23:44 <Ra-s> : 02:33:144 (1,2) - ^
23:44 <Ra-s> : 02:35:430 (1,2) - ^
23:44 <Ra-s> : 02:40:287 - 여기 Break 당겨
23:45 <Ra-s> : 됐다 봐달라하는곳 도착함
23:45 <BinJip> : 기타있는 부분 시리루가 브레이크너무 길다고 만들긴했는데
23:45 <BinJip> : 좀 이상한거같음
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:358 (5) -
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:573 - 여기엔 음이 없고
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:644 - 여기에 음이 있는데
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:715 (6) - 이것도
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:858 - 여기에 음 있고
23:46 <Ra-s> : 02:57:715 - 여기는 빈칸이나 그냥 일반노트 두는게 좋음. 슬라이더는 비추
23:47 <Ra-s> : 나머진 다 박자 맞아
23:47 <Ra-s> : 걱정마
23:48 <Ra-s> : 03:02:001 (6) - NC
23:48 <Ra-s> : 02:54:144 (3,5) - 참고로 여기는 음 없어
23:49 <Ra-s> : 넣는 빼든 상관은 없지만
23:49 <BinJip> : 저런 애매한소리 싫다..
23:49 <Ra-s> : 저거 연주하는사람도 힘들어 해
23:49 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋ
23:49 <Ra-s> : 존나 애매한데 저걸 연주해얗마
23:50 <Ra-s> : 03:03:144 (1) - 이 스핀 길이를
23:50 <Ra-s> : 03:05:144 - 여기까지 하는게 괜찮아보임
23:50 <Ra-s> : 그리고 Break를 03:07:715 - 여기까지 뒤로 밀어
23:51 <BinJip> : ?
23:51 <Ra-s> : 아 그럼 앞부분이 너무 비는데
23:51 <BinJip> : 앞에껄 뒤에껄
23:51 <Ra-s> : Break
23:51 <Ra-s> : 03:05:715 - 이 쯤에 있던거
23:51 <BinJip> : 앞에 너무빈다 ㅋ
23:52 <Ra-s> : 그래도 느낌은 저게 나은거 같음
23:52 <Ra-s> : 너무 비는게 문제지만 ㅋㅋ
23:52 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋ
23:52 <Ra-s> : 아예 스핀을
23:52 <Ra-s> : 존나 늘릴까
23:52 <BinJip> : 03:06:858 -
23:52 <BinJip> : 이까지 늘릴까
23:52 <Ra-s> : 스핀을 03:07:715 - 여기까지
23:52 <Ra-s> : 늘릴수도 있음
23:52 <BinJip> : 존나 긴대 ㅋㅋ
23:52 <Ra-s> : 그리고 소프트휘슬 넣어야하고
23:52 <Ra-s> : 어프인데 알빠 안임
23:52 <Ra-s> : 아님*
23:52 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
23:53 <Ra-s> : 소리 5퍼 말고 20퍼로 하고
23:53 <Ra-s> : soft whistle !
23:53 <BinJip> : 오토로 19000점 ㅋ
23:53 <Ra-s> : 괜찮아 어프인데 어짜피
23:53 <Ra-s> : 스핀싸움까지 가려나..
23:53 <Ra-s> : 아 SS싸움에서는 충분히 가겠지만
23:53 <Ra-s> : 이건 히하S 끼리 싸울땐
23:54 <Ra-s> : 크게 안미칠듯 ㅋㅋ
23:54 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋ
23:54 <Ra-s> : 키카 같은 게이가 아니면
23:54 <Ra-s> : 이딴걸 어케 ...
23:55 <BinJip> : 이거 논 SS는 많이 나올거같은데
23:55 <Ra-s> : ㅇㅇ 꽤...
23:55 <Ra-s> : 40위 좀 안쪽에는 실수로 100점 나온애들 있을듯
23:55 <BinJip> : ar8로하면 죄다 SS겠지
23:55 <Ra-s> : 좀 긴데다가 어프니까
23:55 <Ra-s> : 03:18:001 (7) - 여기 NC하고
23:55 <BinJip> : 근대 아까 기타 부분에 1/3박자가 있어서
23:55 <Ra-s> : 03:18:715 (1) - 여기 NC제거?
23:56 <Ra-s> : 03:33:430 (1) - NC제거
23:56 <Ra-s> : 03:34:144 (9) - Nc
23:57 <Ra-s> : 03:34:715 (1) - NC제거
23:57 <Ra-s> : 03:35:287 (7) - NC
23:58 <Ra-s> : 04:06:573 (1) - NC제거
23:58 <Ra-s> : 04:07:144 (13) - NC ?
23:58 <Ra-s> : 04:07:858 (1) - NC제거
23:58 <BinJip> : 12번까지가는데..
23:59 <Ra-s> : 별로 상관 없는데
23:59 <Ra-s> : 앞부분에도 3개정도 그런거 있었어
23:59 <Ra-s> : 아니면 너무 길면
23:59 <Ra-s> : 내가 한거 다 적용시키면 2쌍으로 12콤보 가잖아
23:59 <Ra-s> : 이거 중간에 하나씩 넣어줘도 괜찮을꺼 같아
23:59 <BinJip> : ㅇ
23:59 <Ra-s> : 근데 노래 느낌에는 원래 이게 맞거든
00:00 <Ra-s> : 근데 뒤에 점프때문에 리딩쉽게하려고 넣은 뉴콤하고
00:00 <Ra-s> : 짝이 안맞아
00:00 <Ra-s> : 존나 애매해...
00:00 <Ra-s> : 패턴이 뒤에 키아이는 반복이라
00:00 <Ra-s> : 아까 내가 말한것처럼 뉴콤 흘러가게 유지해주면 됌
00:01 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ
00:01 <Ra-s> : 오프셋만 잘 맞추면 뉴콤보를 큰흰선에다가 의지하면서 넣으면 잘 넣어짐
00:01 <Ra-s> : 나중엔 뉴콤보 익숙해지면 뉴콤보에 맞춰서 깔끔하게 대칭 넣을 수 있음
00:01 <Ra-s> : 지금은 억지로 바꾸면 대칭이 약간 무너져보이지만 그래도 대칭은 대칭
00:01 <Ra-s> : 대칭강조를 위해 NC를 사용하는 목적도 있지만
00:03 <Ra-s> : 끝
00:03 <BinJip> : 감사감사
00:03 <Ra-s> : 업뎃 ㄱㄱ
00:03 <Ra-s> : 우동도 이 맵 좋다고 했음
00:03 <Ra-s> : 별만 넉넉하면 별 주고 갈텐데
00:03 <BinJip> : 그런가
00:03 <Ra-s> : 내가 애초에 오늘 목적이 쿠도수 모으는 목적이라 ㅠㅠ
00:03 <BinJip> : ㅇㅇ ㅋ
00:03 <Ra-s> : -1개...ㅋㅋㅋ
00:03 <BinJip> : -1개는 뭐임 ㅋㅋ
00:03 <BinJip> : 뺏김?ㅋㅋ
00:03 <Ra-s> : 도중에 누가 뺏어감 ㅋㅋ
00:04 <Ra-s> : 로그 안올렸다가 뺏어갔어 ㅠㅠ
00:04 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:04 <Ra-s> : 빈집꺼 그 Renai 0 Killometer인가
00:04 <BinJip> : 내꺼 에서 뻇어갔네 ㅋㅋ
00:04 <Ra-s> : 이거 내가 1페이지에서 모딩 했잖아
00:04 <BinJip> : ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:04 <BinJip> : 9개월전꺼 막 뻇어감
00:04 <Ra-s> : 쩜ㅋ

nanda2009

925 posts

Joined October 2009

nanda2009 2012-06-23T02:05:42+00:00

Hello from my modding queue~

I don't find any errors in your mapset, good map

/

gudlak for rank!

DeeN

380 posts

Joined July 2008

DeeN 2012-06-23T12:49:06+00:00

wow that's cool

here's my heart

SPOILER

[General]
.osb? delete it

[Muteki]

00:05:715 (4,1) - break here i dont think there's jump good so how about this?

01:30:715 (3,4) -remove the (4) and make the silder(3）repeat 1 times
00:31:430 (6) - reverse selection
00:31:858 (7) - ^
01:58:001 (1,2,3,4) -how about this？ click to check→(http://puu.sh/D3QR)
02:12:430 (1) - reverse selection
03:43:573 (3,4) - ^
03:48:430 (1,2) - ^
03:48:715 (3,4) - ^

<SOUND MOD>

this song very fit soft-finish so i add some and u can check it→(http://puu.sh/D3UF)

↓that's where i add soft-finish

00:04:287 (1) - add soft finish
00:08:858 (1) - ^
00:12:715 - ^
00:17:001 - ^
00:17:287 - ^
00:17:715 - ^
00:18:144 (5) - ^
00:18:430 (7) - ^
00:35:287 - ^
00:36:001 - ^
00:36:287 (1) - ^
00:36:715 (4) - ^
00:45:430 - ^
00:53:430 - ^
00:54:001 (4) - ^
00:54:287 (1) - ^
00:54:573 - ^
00:54:858 - ^
00:55:001 (4) - ^
00:59:144 - ^
01:03:144 - ^
01:03:715 - ^
01:09:144 - ^
01:11:144 - ^
01:11:715 - ^
01:12:001 - ^
01:34:858 - ^
01:35:001 - ^
01:38:001 - ^
01:39:001 (2) - ^
01:39:430 (5) - ^
01:39:572 (1) - ^
01:39:858 - ^
01:40:287 - ^
01:40:572 (6) - ^
01:49:430 - ^
01:57:430 - ^
01:58:001 - ^
01:58:573 - ^
02:01:430 - ^
02:10:573 - ^
02:12:858 - ^
02:15:715 - ^
02:16:287 - ^
02:16:858 - ^
02:19:144 - ^
02:21:430 - ^
02:28:001 - ^
02:30:287 - ^
02:30:715 - ^
02:32:287 (1) - ^
02:34:573 - ^
02:35:001 (2) - ^
02:35:430 - ^
02:53:430 - ^
02:56:858 - ^
02:57:644 - ^
02:57:787 - ^
02:58:001 - ^
02:58:215 - ^
03:17:287 - ^
03:17:715 (5) - ^
03:18:144 (2) - ^
03:18:573 (4) - ^
03:18:858 (7) - ^
03:21:430 - ^
03:22:430 - ^
03:22:715 - ^
03:23:144 - ^
03:23:430 (4) - ^
03:23:715 (1) - ^
03:26:430 - ^
03:26:858 - ^
03:27:430 (7) - ^
03:27:715 (9) - ^
03:27:858 (1) - ^
03:37:430 - ^
03:41:858 (10) - ^
03:44:858 (5) - ^
03:45:430 (4) - ^
03:45:715 (2) - ^
03:46:001 (4) - ^
03:46:287 (6) - ^
03:55:287 (3) - ^
04:12:287 - ^
04:12:858 - ^
04:13:430 - ^
04:13:858 (8) - ^
04:16:287 (4) - ^
04:21:430 - ^
03:23:144 - ^
04:25:430 - ^
04:27:430 (8) - ^
04:27:715 (1) - ^
04:30:001 - ^
04:31:287 - ^
04:31:858 (1) - ^
04:34:573 - ^
04:35:573 - ^
04:36:287 (4) - ^
04:36:573 (6) - ^
04:36:858 (1) - ^
04:39:573 - ^
04:40:144 (6) - ^
04:40:430 - ^
04:40:858 (2) - ^
04:41:144 (4) - ^

also i think u can add more soft-whistle and clap not only c:soft-clap

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-23T14:33:49+00:00

DeeN
Ra-s
Dark Fang
HelloSCV
haha5957

thx ><

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-06-25T18:57:27+00:00

Muteki

00:00:287 (1) - I guess, change the clap sound in beginning with finish sound more better since in bg music, the cymbal sounder is more fit with finish instead the clap
00:04:287 (1) - remove finish sound? the sound seems too loud in here and not fit with the clap sound imo.
00:08:858 (1) - ^
00:16:715 (2) - in here too, the finish sound not fit with clap sound ><
00:25:215 (5,6) - stack this properly? a bit annoying with this untidy stacking
00:27:573 (5) - here again, I guess the finish sound should put in (6) instead in here. beside that, (6) is end of vocal
00:29:858 (7) - add finish in slider's end? fit with cymbal sounder

00:31:430 (6,7) - in my eyes, these slider isn't really tidy imo, want to try this more curve? -> picture

172,312,31430,2,0,B|208:352|296:352|340:312,1,180.000000596047,8|0
340,72,31858,2,0,B|304:32|216:32|172:72,1,180.000000596047,8|0

00:35:001 (2) - don't you think the slider in the end is weird to hear? I know you want to make same rhythm with (1) together, but the result is weird imo
00:36:858 (5) - add finish sound for cymbal sounder too?
00:41:430 (4) - ^
00:43:715 (3) - ^but in the beginning
00:48:287 (4) - ^ just add
00:50:430 (2) - ^in the end
01:10:287 (3) - why not add finish? i think the sound similar with 01:09:144 (2) -
01:11:715 (3) - remove finish sound in the end ;_; the sound isn't not good because you already add in begin
01:30:430 (2) - add clap sound? seems the sound fit with vocal and a bit drum sound in bg music
01:30:715 (3) - add finish sound in beginning too?
01:54:572 (4) - add finish sound again~
02:05:572 (4,5) - stack this properly ok? ;_;
02:06:001 (1) - add finish again~
02:17:430 (1) - ^ in beginning for cymbal sounder
02:24:287 (5) - ^
02:51:715 (3) - ^

02:52:715 (4) - more curve like this? -> picture

196,116,172715,2,0,B|156:52|64:68|16:104|16:180|16:240|72:300|152:292|200:248,1,450.000001490117,8|12

02:53:929 (2) - add finish in the end for cymbal sounder again?
03:00:573 (5) - add clap sound in here?
04:22:001 (1) - I think end this spinner at 04:23:073 was good to hear too

Good luck :3

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-26T04:08:14+00:00

Yasora wrote:
Muteki
00:00:287 (1) - I guess, change the clap sound in beginning with finish sound more better since in bg music, the cymbal sounder is more fit with finish instead the clap
00:04:287 (1) - remove finish sound? the sound seems too loud in here and not fit with the clap sound imo.
00:08:858 (1) - ^
00:16:715 (2) - in here too, the finish sound not fit with clap sound ><
00:25:215 (5,6) - stack this properly? a bit annoying with this untidy stacking
00:27:573 (5) - here again, I guess the finish sound should put in (6) instead in here. beside that, (6) is end of vocal
00:29:858 (7) - add finish in slider's end? fit with cymbal sounder
00:31:430 (6,7) - in my eyes, these slider isn't really tidy imo, want to try this more curve? -> picture
172,312,31430,2,0,B|208:352|296:352|340:312,1,180.000000596047,8|0
340,72,31858,2,0,B|304:32|216:32|172:72,1,180.000000596047,8|0
00:35:001 (2) - don't you think the slider in the end is weird to hear? I know you want to make same rhythm with (1) together, but the result is weird imo
00:36:858 (5) - add finish sound for cymbal sounder too?
00:41:430 (4) - ^
00:43:715 (3) - ^but in the beginning
00:48:287 (4) - ^ just add
00:50:430 (2) - ^in the end
01:10:287 (3) - why not add finish? i think the sound similar with 01:09:144 (2) -
01:11:715 (3) - remove finish sound in the end ;_; the sound isn't not good because you already add in begin
01:30:430 (2) - add clap sound? seems the sound fit with vocal and a bit drum sound in bg music
01:30:715 (3) - add finish sound in beginning too?
01:54:572 (4) - add finish sound again~
02:05:572 (4,5) - stack this properly ok? ;_;
02:06:001 (1) - add finish again~
02:17:430 (1) - ^ in beginning for cymbal sounder
02:24:287 (5) - ^
02:51:715 (3) - ^
02:52:715 (4) - more curve like this? -> picture
196,116,172715,2,0,B|156:52|64:68|16:104|16:180|16:240|72:300|152:292|200:248,1,450.000001490117,8|12
02:53:929 (2) - add finish in the end for cymbal sounder again?
03:00:573 (5) - add clap sound in here?
04:22:001 (1) - I think end this spinner at 04:23:073 was good to hear too
Good luck :3

thank you~!

Illumined

59 posts

Joined May 2012

Illumined 2012-06-26T06:02:29+00:00

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

I don't see any BG from your osz. Missing?

Muteki

Patterns are mostly set already, so here's some hitsound mod

01:06:287 - Missing clap
01:47:715 (1) - Keep this with previous combo color. (Remove new combo), then add it here 01:48:001 (2) -
01:51:144 (8) - Clap
02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,1) - nonsense blanket beats, but makes me laughed. orz
02:17:430 - Let's add more finish on this part!
02:19:715 - 1
02:20:715 (6) - 2
02:22:001 - 3
02:25:430 - 4
\Done/

02:54:144 (3) - Music had nothing here, so basically the rhythm should be like this

SPOILER

03:30:287 - Clap
03:34:287 - ^
03:37:287 (5) - ^
03:39:573 - Any finish here

?
04:02:573 (1) - Same as 01:47:715
04:08:430 (8) - Divide the combo here. (New combo)
04:13:287 (6) - Clap
04:22:001 (1,1) - New combo for these spinners
04:31:287 - Move this finish to 04:31:001 (6) -
04:34:287 (5) - Finish, like how you do here: 04:27:430 (8) -
04:38:858 - ^
05:02:589 - Whistle

Good luck!

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-26T06:28:36+00:00

Illumined wrote:
Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General
I don't see any BG from your osz. Missing?

Muteki
Patterns are mostly set already, so here's some hitsound mod
01:06:287 - Missing clap
01:47:715 (1) - Keep this with previous combo color. (Remove new combo), then add it here 01:48:001 (2) -
01:51:144 (8) - Clap
02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,1) - nonsense blanket beats, but makes me laughed. orz
02:17:430 - Let's add more finish on this part!
02:19:715 - 1 <- ?
02:20:715 (6) - 2 <- ?
02:22:001 - 3 <- ?
02:25:430 - 4 <- ?
\Done/

02:54:144 (3) - Music had nothing here, so basically the rhythm should be like this
SPOILER
03:30:287 - Clap
03:34:287 - ^
03:37:287 (5) - ^
03:39:573 - Any finish here ?
04:02:573 (1) - Same as 01:47:715
04:08:430 (8) - Divide the combo here. (New combo)
04:13:287 (6) - Clap
04:22:001 (1,1) - New combo for these spinners
04:31:287 - Move this finish to 04:31:001 (6) -
04:34:287 (5) - Finish, like how you do here: 04:27:430 (8) -
04:38:858 - ^
05:02:589 - Whistle

Good luck!

thx~

Illumined

59 posts

Joined May 2012

Illumined 2012-06-26T07:43:35+00:00

Those 1,2,3,4 means for adding finishs

hehe

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Dino99 2012-06-26T14:28:30+00:00

Hi~~
Request from Barry's Modding Queue

<Muteki>

OD-1??
00:01:287 (1) - Remove finish?
00:44:287 (2,3) - I think change to a slider with a reserve is better~
00:46:858 (5) - Try this?? http://puu.sh/DMsm
00:53:858 (3,4,5,1) - If you want to make them to be straight~ You should move (5) to [X:260 Y:188] and move (1) to [X:324 Y:252]
02:15:715 (5) - I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/DMxN
02:21:787 (10,11) - How about this beat?
02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - Changing the order is more fun IMO!! http://puu.sh/DMB6
03:03:144 (1) - finish??
03:31:572 (1,2,3,4) - Make anti-jump??
03:34:715 (4,5) - Hmm...I think it's hard to play >_<" because the BPM is very high..
maybe replace it by 4 circles or a slider with 2 reserve??
03:47:644 (2,3) - ^
03:48:572 (2,3) - Ctrl + R?? more fun~

Good luck!! @w@

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-26T15:34:53+00:00

12BARRY21 wrote:
Hi~~
Request from Barry's Modding Queue

<Muteki>
OD-1??
00:01:287 (1) - Remove finish?
00:44:287 (2,3) - I think change to a slider with a reserve is better~
00:46:858 (5) - Try this?? http://puu.sh/DMsm
00:53:858 (3,4,5,1) - If you want to make them to be straight~ You should move (5) to [X:260 Y:188] and move (1) to [X:324 Y:252]
02:15:715 (5) - I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/DMxN
02:21:787 (10,11) - How about this beat?
02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - Changing the order is more fun IMO!! http://puu.sh/DMB6
03:03:144 (1) - finish??
03:31:572 (1,2,3,4) - Make anti-jump??
03:34:715 (4,5) - Hmm...I think it's hard to play >_<" because the BPM is very high..
maybe replace it by 4 circles or a slider with 2 reserve?? not hard 'ㅅ'
03:47:644 (2,3) - ^
03:48:572 (2,3) - Ctrl + R?? more fun~
Good luck!! @w@

ok, other suggestion fixed

thanks!

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,790 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-06-26T15:41:03+00:00

Hi!

[Muteki]

00:03:001 (2,3) - Fix this blanket by moving the last waypoint of 00:03:001 (2) - 2 grids up
00:16:715 (2) - I suggest you to make a shape like this here,to make a better slider to look and to make too a better blanket with 00:17:144 (3) -
00:19:572 (5) - Please increase the spacing here, since it breaks a bit the flow at this point
00:22:715 (1) - Move the new combo at 00:23:144 (2) - ,since here a new combo would stay better
00:54:287 (1) - Move this combo at 00:54:001 (4) - ,so that it follow the singer's voice
02:00:286 (8) - Place this at x:268 y:196 to make it equidistant with 02:00:001 (7,9) -
02:12:001 (9,10,11) - If you want to do something symmetric to make this entire pattern look better,just copypaste,flip horizontally and use CTRL+R on
02:11:572 (6,7,8) -. Once you have done that,you should have now something like this
03:44:572 (3) - Again,make this equidistant with 03:44:287 (1,2,4) - by moving it at x:168 y:200
04:02:858 (2,3,4,5) - Imho,you should really tweak this square pattern,since it isn't shaped really well. I suggest you to modify this pattern to make it look like this
04:16:287 (4) - New combo here
04:16:858 (1) - If you did ^,move the new combo here on 04:17:429 (5) -
04:29:429 (4,5) - Like in other cases,I suggest you to make this blanket look better
04:53:384 (3,4) - To make this symmetric,you could do just something like this

Good work,you just have to do some tweaks with your patterns. Good luck on approving your map ^^

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-26T15:57:19+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Hi!

[Muteki]

00:03:001 (2,3) - Fix this blanket by moving the last waypoint of 00:03:001 (2) - 2 grids up
00:16:715 (2) - I suggest you to make a shape like this here,to make a better slider to look and to make too a better blanket with 00:17:144 (3) -
00:19:572 (5) - Please increase the spacing here, since it breaks a bit the flow at this point
00:22:715 (1) - Move the new combo at 00:23:144 (2) - ,since here a new combo would stay better
00:54:287 (1) - Move this combo at 00:54:001 (4) - ,so that it follow the singer's voice
02:00:286 (8) - Place this at x:268 y:196 to make it equidistant with 02:00:001 (7,9) -
02:12:001 (9,10,11) - If you want to do something symmetric to make this entire pattern look better,just copypaste,flip horizontally and use CTRL+R on
02:11:572 (6,7,8) -. Once you have done that,you should have now something like this
03:44:572 (3) - Again,make this equidistant with 03:44:287 (1,2,4) - by moving it at x:168 y:200
04:02:858 (2,3,4,5) - Imho,you should really tweak this square pattern,since it isn't shaped really well. I suggest you to modify this pattern to make it look like this
04:16:287 (4) - New combo here
04:16:858 (1) - If you did ^,move the new combo here on 04:17:429 (5) -
04:29:429 (4,5) - Like in other cases,I suggest you to make this blanket look better
04:53:384 (3,4) - To make this symmetric,you could do just something like this
Good work,you just have to do some tweaks with your patterns. Good luck on approving your map ^^

all changed

thanks~

marshallracer

1,590 posts

Joined December 2010

marshallracer 2012-06-26T16:03:15+00:00

I don't even want to know if I want to take a look at it ... I'm too afraid this map could be better than what I've mapped x:

Anyway, what caught my attention was "Owari no Hoshi no Love Song" being in source AND tags : consider deleting it where it isn't needed

Sure

4,219 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2012-06-26T18:37:26+00:00

제 개인적인 희망인데요,
난이도 이름으로 "Unbeatable"을 추천합니다. "Muteki"는 일본어라서 이해 못 하는 사람들이 더 많을 거예요.

Translation :
Maybe it's my preference..
I suggest english word "Unbeatable" for diff name, which is more understandable than japanese word "Muteki".

Poggo

1,502 posts

Joined January 2012

Poggo 2012-06-27T13:11:28+00:00

hi from my mod Q :3

Unbeatable

00:08:858(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here better make volume 60% and normal without hitsounds. Sounds better
00:31:429(6,7) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/E24A
00:42:287(4,7) - maybe you can stack it better?
02:17:715(2,3) - stack better
03:18:715(5,6,7,8,9,10) - same on 00:08:858
03:27:858 - ^
04:04:287 - ^
04:31:858 - ^
05:06:167 - i think better end spiner om big white tick with volume 5% and add short double slider after http://puu.sh/E2gF

It's all for me

nice map) good luck~~

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-27T13:19:56+00:00

Katty Pie wrote:
hi from my mod Q :3

Unbeatable

00:08:858(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here better make volume 60% and normal without hitsounds. Sounds better
00:31:429(6,7) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/E24A
00:42:287(4,7) - maybe you can stack it better?
02:17:715(2,3) - stack better
03:18:715(5,6,7,8,9,10) - same on 00:08:858
03:27:858 - ^
04:04:287 - ^
04:31:858 - ^
05:06:167 - i think better end spiner om big white tick with volume 5% and add short double slider after http://puu.sh/E2gF

It's all for me nice map) good luck~~

thank ~

Sure

4,219 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2012-06-27T14:14:12+00:00

빈집짜응~

[General]
오디오 리드인 3000ms 은 너무 깁니다. 비디오 오프셋이 -1850ms 임을 고려했을때 2250ms 정도가 가장 이상적일 것 같네요.

[Unbeatable]
00:08:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2번부터 클랩이 없던데요, 클랩 다 넣고 볼륨50%로 맞춰보세요. 이거 이후로도 스네어 드럼을 스트림처리 하신 구간이 꽤 있던데 따로 언급 안하겠습니다. 소프트 쓰는거 보다 커스텀클랩 넣고 볼륨 줄이는게 훨씬 힘 있게 들려요.
00:24:429 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보 지우고
00:24:715 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤보 넣으세요. 앞 부분에 00:20:144 (1) 똑같은 패턴이 있습니다.
00:26:858 (7) - 클랩 들어가는 파트가 여기부터니까 다음 노트말고 여기에 뉴콤보 넣는 게 낫겠네요.
00:37:287 (2,3) - 역방향 흐름인데 순방향으로 가는게 낫지 않을까요? 3번부터 00:46:001 (7) 여기까지 좌우반전 들어가면 괜찮을 듯 합니다. 00:45:429 (5) 슬라이더 끝 방향이 현재 왼쪽을 향하고 있는점을 봐서 좌우반전 들어가면 훨씬 나을거 같아요.
01:31:572 (1) - 이렇게 바꿔보시는 건? http://puu.sh/E2H7
01:45:429 (4) - 피니시
02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 슬라이더랑 스페이싱을 봐서라도 좌우반전이 낫습니다.
02:53:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 일렉에 맞추신거죠? 일단 박자 틀렸고 설령 박자 맞다쳐도 처리하기 엄청 곤란해 보입니다. 제가 여러번 테스트 해봤는데 이게 가장 이상적인것 같네요.

스샷

1,2번은 1/3 스냅하세요.

02:56:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 여기도 틀렸습니다. 일렉 박자가 변칙적인데 그냥 아래처럼 단순화 시키세요.

스샷

3,5번은 1/3 스냅하세요.

03:02:001 (1) - 여기 왜 슬라이더틱을 스네어드럼 처리 하셨는지요? 가볍게 '딱' 하는 소리에 맞추신거 같은데 이걸 스네어 처리하는것 보다 기본 틱 소리로 처리하는게 더 어울린다고 봐요.
03:02:572 (3) - 위와 비슷한 이유입니다. 앞에 클랩을 뒤로 옮기세요.
03:03:144 (1) - 끝에 피니시 소리가 너무 약합니다.
03:22:429 (6) - 뒷노트 말고 여기에 뉴콤보
04:00:287 (4) - 피니시
04:04:358 (2) - 여기 스네어 드럼 없습니다. 삭제하고 앞 노트를 앞의 콤보 그룹이랑 묶고, 다음 노트부터 뉴콤보(스트림) 들어가세요.
04:17:287 (7) - 피니시
04:22:001 (1,1) - 빈집님께서 사용하신 방법은 시작 포인트에 중점을 둔 건데요, 이렇게 하면 중간에 있는 심벌 소리를 무시하게 됩니다. 연속스피너는 처음빼고 딱히 시작에 중점을 안둬도 괜찮다고 봅니다. 처음 스피너 끝을 한 칸 뒤로 밀어서 피니시 넣는게 음향적으로 더 완벽하니까요.

제가 보기엔 모딩 많이 받으셔야겠네요.

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-27T15:16:28+00:00

ykcarrot wrote:
빈집짜응~

[General]
오디오 리드인 3000ms 은 너무 깁니다. 비디오 오프셋이 -1850ms 임을 고려했을때 2250ms 정도가 가장 이상적일 것 같네요.

[Unbeatable]
00:08:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2번부터 클랩이 없던데요, 클랩 다 넣고 볼륨50%로 맞춰보세요. 이거 이후로도 스네어 드럼을 스트림처리 하신 구간이 꽤 있던데 따로 언급 안하겠습니다. 소프트 쓰는거 보다 커스텀클랩 넣고 볼륨 줄이는게 훨씬 힘 있게 들려요.
00:24:429 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보 지우고
00:24:715 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤보 넣으세요. 앞 부분에 00:20:144 (1) 똑같은 패턴이 있습니다.
00:26:858 (7) - 클랩 들어가는 파트가 여기부터니까 다음 노트말고 여기에 뉴콤보 넣는 게 낫겠네요.
00:37:287 (2,3) - 역방향 흐름인데 순방향으로 가는게 낫지 않을까요? 3번부터 00:46:001 (7) 여기까지 좌우반전 들어가면 괜찮을 듯 합니다. 00:45:429 (5) 슬라이더 끝 방향이 현재 왼쪽을 향하고 있는점을 봐서 좌우반전 들어가면 훨씬 나을거 같아요.
01:31:572 (1) - 이렇게 바꿔보시는 건? http://puu.sh/E2H7
01:45:429 (4) - 피니시
02:26:001 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 슬라이더랑 스페이싱을 봐서라도 좌우반전이 낫습니다.
02:53:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 일렉에 맞추신거죠? 일단 박자 틀렸고 설령 박자 맞다쳐도 처리하기 엄청 곤란해 보입니다. 제가 여러번 테스트 해봤는데 이게 가장 이상적인것 같네요.
스샷
1,2번은 1/3 스냅하세요.
02:56:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 여기도 틀렸습니다. 일렉 박자가 변칙적인데 그냥 아래처럼 단순화 시키세요.
스샷
3,5번은 1/3 스냅하세요.
03:02:001 (1) - 여기 왜 슬라이더틱을 스네어드럼 처리 하셨는지요? 가볍게 '딱' 하는 소리에 맞추신거 같은데 이걸 스네어 처리하는것 보다 기본 틱 소리로 처리하는게 더 어울린다고 봐요.
03:02:572 (3) - 위와 비슷한 이유입니다. 앞에 클랩을 뒤로 옮기세요.
03:03:144 (1) - 끝에 피니시 소리가 너무 약합니다.
03:22:429 (6) - 뒷노트 말고 여기에 뉴콤보
04:00:287 (4) - 피니시
04:04:358 (2) - 여기 스네어 드럼 없습니다. 삭제하고 앞 노트를 앞의 콤보 그룹이랑 묶고, 다음 노트부터 뉴콤보(스트림) 들어가세요.
04:17:287 (7) - 피니시
04:22:001 (1,1) - 빈집님께서 사용하신 방법은 시작 포인트에 중점을 둔 건데요, 이렇게 하면 중간에 있는 심벌 소리를 무시하게 됩니다. 연속스피너는 처음빼고 딱히 시작에 중점을 안둬도 괜찮다고 봅니다. 처음 스피너 끝을 한 칸 뒤로 밀어서 피니시 넣는게 음향적으로 더 완벽하니까요.

제가 보기엔 모딩 많이 받으셔야겠네요.

긴 모딩 감사합니다~

marshallracer

1,590 posts

Joined December 2010

marshallracer 2012-06-27T17:19:48+00:00

DA FAQ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51730
IT'S ASDFKLFSDJ ... first DoKo's stealing our BG and now you are
QUIT THIS GAME DUDE, SRSLY
You can't tell me you've got this BG elsewhere, it's either from DoKo's or my map, though he took it from our map anyway

If you can proof you didn't steal it, I'll apologize ..

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

ertyukjh010 2012-06-27T19:05:06+00:00

Request from Modding Queue

[Unbeatable]

[Layout]

01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502

[rhythm]

02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.

[Setting]

00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
05:03:269 - Useless inherited point

[Opinion]

Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組，其中每兩個拍子為一組，就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ，您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子，打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感；I hope change all if you can.

Good lucky

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-28T01:57:50+00:00

marshall_racer wrote:

DA FAQ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51730
IT'S ASDFKLFSDJ ... first DoKo's stealing our BG and now you are
QUIT THIS GAME DUDE, SRSLY
You can't tell me you've got this BG elsewhere, it's either from DoKo's or my map, though he took it from our map anyway

If you can proof you didn't steal it, I'll apologize ..

I not know the exact sources

I just received is -SS-

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-28T02:20:08+00:00

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Modding Queue

[Unbeatable]

[Layout]
01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502
[rhythm]
02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.
[Setting]
00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
05:03:269 - Useless inherited point
[Opinion]
Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組，其中每兩個拍子為一組，就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ，您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子，打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感；I hope change all if you can.
Good lucky

thank~

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

Joined March 2011

popner 2012-06-28T17:20:44+00:00

I didn't say you can ignore my rules by shooting a star.
Anyway, since you have shot a star at my map, i return one now.

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Mythol 2012-06-30T00:46:13+00:00

Requested mod from star~

[Unbeatable]
SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 should be fixed in .osu, and you must re-calculate slider lengths~ (I think this is rank-able now, so you don't have to fix, but looks nicer if you do)
00:11:715 (1,2,3,4) - Make these the same spacing?
00:36:572 (3) - 1 grip up ><
00:45:858 (6,7) - Try unstack like this?

SPOILER

01:01:144 (1) - Remove NC
01:01:715 (1) - ^
01:02:001 (2) - Add NC
01:11:572 (2) - Move note to

? same with 01:12:144 (4) but flipped
01:55:858 (6) - Move to here?

SPOILER

02:05:144 (2) -

SPOILER

02:10:429 (6) - Use x1.6 spacing for prev and next?

SPOILER

02:11:715 (7) - Add NC
02:11:858 (8,9) - I don't feel this jump fits well.. prefer if you switch 9 + 11
02:50:286 (1,2) - Switch order of these 2 with 02:49:429 (1,2)? I think going from smaller to bigger spacing fits better, and it helps the players prepare for the huge jumps
04:12:144 (2,4) - Ctrl + R? because you use this pattern a lot, and it flows nicer this way~

[S.S]
SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047 should be fixed in .osu, and you must re-calculate slider lengths~ (Same as Unbeatable diff)
01:33:572 (5,6,7) - Dislike this stack.. try this?

SPOILER

01:40:858 - Add note, feels empty!
01:45:001 (3) - NC here to be consistent with all other combos, and remove nc on 01:45:429 (1) and add on 01:45:572 (2) instead~
01:51:858 (3) - ^
01:54:144 (3) - ^
01:56:429 (4) - ^
03:07:715 (1) - Move to center? current jump seems a little big.. and it looks nice when the notes before are a circle around it
03:57:572 (5) - same as 01:45:001 (3)
03:59:858 (2) - ^
there are more of these but you can find on your own^
03:58:857 (1) - Remove NC
04:09:144 (1) - ^
04:09:429 (3) - Add NC

Too many inconsistent NC.. please check again ><
and I think there are too many stacks, maybe you can be more creative and change into patterns

maybe re-mod this diff when you fix NC because I was angered by them and didn't watch the map closely..

kosiga

1,548 posts

Joined May 2011

kosiga 2012-06-30T03:20:28+00:00

Hi~ BinJip

from my queue~

here my mod~

[General]

Timig - 2nd red line - It is not unified. Please unify it
from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.
Song folder - normal-slidertick.wav - looks like you are not using. Please delete if not used.

[Unbeatable]

00:08:287 (5) - add NC (big jump point
00:37:715 (4,5) - Ctrl+R. It thinks that a flow improves more
00:55:143 - green line move to 00:55:144. It is not put on a line. Please put kiai time at least on a line.
00:58:572 (6) - add NC (big jump point
00:58:858 (8) - grid move to x132,y176. ( symmetrical with 00:58:572 (6) ) and ( 00:59:001 (9) - move to x256,y312 ? )
01:01:144 (1) - remove NC ( i think no need NC
01:01:714 - same 00:55:143
01:04:286 - ^

01:40:144 (4,5,6,7,1) - Seem to flow a little bad to me x.x for ex: in my case http://puu.sh/EGOL

216,172,100144,2,0,B|165:166|133:198,1,90.0000002980235,0|12
200,260,100429,5,8
256,88,100572,1,4
408,184,100715,1,8

01:40:429 (5) - add NC ?
01:59:143 - same 00:55:143
02:05:714 - ^
02:05:858(x) - add note. Better place to note here is a good rhythm.
02:06:001 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump is very confused. I recommend that you put here. (02:06:287.02:06:858.02:07:429.02:08:001.) I think that it is the rhythm that should make a anti-jump here.
02:08:287 - same 00:55:143
02:15:143 - ^
02:54:287 (3,4) - i think too far
03:10:225 - Unnecessary green line
03:53:429 (4) - add finish ( same as others )
03:54:715 (6,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: 03:54:715 (6) - add repeat. and 03:55:001 (1) - remove note.
04:04:857 - same 00:55:143
04:14:000 - ^
04:22:001 (1) - remove finish ( dose not match imo x.x
04:23:143 - Unnecessary green line
04:41:287 - same 00:55:143
05:03:269 - Unnecessary green line
05:03:270 (1) - does not match the sound of the whistle. so 05:05:315 - S:C1⇒change to S is better.

[S.S]

00:08:001 (4) - add clap to end of the slider ?
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about putting it without stacked ? for ex: http://puu.sh/EHKy
03:18:429 (3,4) - Ctrl+R. I think it will flow better
05:03:356 (1) - dose not match end imo x.x spinner end 05:06:168. ( same as Unbeatable diff is better imo )

04:44:180~05:00:202 - How to use this hitsound has no meaning x.x; enough just to use soft-hitsound. or Do you forget the addition of the silence-sliderslide?

good luck~

LaceWingfield

392 posts

Joined October 2010

LaceWingfield 2012-06-30T08:49:43+00:00

hi~

all are my suggestion and feel free to ignore.

[S.S]
00:28:001 (2,3) - Curve this a little bit more so it would make blanket each other
00:40:572 (8) - x=324 , y=148 ?
00:47:572 (8) - either 1 or 2 grid down
00:50:715 (1) - 1 grid right?
00:55:144 - i guess at this kiai, using normal whistle is better.
01:27:572 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:59:144 - same as 00:55:144
02:28:715 (6) - somehow i don't like the position here.. 2 grid right and 1 grid down?
02:58:572 - 03:02:715 i guess use soft default at this part
04:44:520 (1) - remove whistle

[Unbeatable]
00:08:001 (4) - 1 grid left?
00:11:144 (7) - make slider blanket like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356734
00:13:429 (5) - spacing
00:30:144 (8) - x=184,y=260?
00:35:858 (5) - spacing
00:42:287 (4) - x=248,y=192?
01:08:715 (4) - spacing
01:53:715 (7) - 1 grid left?
03:10:429 (3) - ^
04:22:001 - remove finish from spinner
04:29:287 (3) - spacing
04:48:440 (1) - change this to a slider that ends at 04:48:610

That's all~ nice mapset

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-06-30T08:59:20+00:00

Mythol

kosiga

LaceWingfield

thanks~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,787 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2012-06-30T12:40:45+00:00

...I hope I'm not too late.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>Unbeatable

02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...I found these anti-jump stacks pretty unexpected, especially after all those jumps. Maybe make some jumps here too, by moving 02:06:001 (1,3,5,7) to (x,32)? (x here means it's still the same value; you just need to make sure the y axis is 32).
02:08:001 (8) - Make this a 1/4 slider that repeats twice (begin at the current position, end at 02:08:215)? It fits with the music very well. If you do this, I suggest to make sure the end of the slider is located at (304,192) and make sure 02:08:286 (1)'s beginning is stacked below that.

>S.S

...A 1.2x speed-up on the kiai times for a 210 BPM song with 2.00 SV? Isn't that a bit... ridiculous?
00:08:572 (3,4) - Ctrl+R? I know you're making a square pattern here, but... don't know, I think it'll play better with this.
03:07:715 (1) - Don't really think this jump is necessary. Stacking it below 03:07:573 (7) should do.
04:44:180 - This section is supposed to be slow, right? Using 0.5x BPM won't hurt.

Eh... yeah, just that. Don't know what should I rant again here.

Good luck on the way

kyuten

171 posts

Joined August 2008

kyuten 2012-07-01T04:06:08+00:00

Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[S.S]
-Beatmap-
00:11:144 (4,5) - This kind of overlap is a little hard to read for a 210BPM song with AR9 imo..
00:15:715 (4) - ^
00:15:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and the distance here makes it a bad plow

00:17:858 (3) - overlap
00:40:715 (9,10) - ctrl+R..? this flows better imo..
01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this ww?

SPOILER

01:05:857 (3,4,5,6) - make this a beautiful shape ww
02:01:144 (6) - a jump here 0 0? i prefer normal distance._.
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is better imo ww

SPOILER

02:12:144 (1,2,3,4) - the distance bewteen 2 and 4 is nearer than 2 and 3...when I played this part I missed 3 and aim to catch 4
03:27:929 (6) - delete this note 0 0?
04:22:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - use 1/4 here?

[Unbeatable]
-Timing-
03:10:000 - useless green line

others are all fine for me ww

[Overall]
Nice song and map ww
Actually when I played S.S its usually "ee what i missed (°Д°)?? where is next note (°Д°)??" and only got pass with 86acc..
And Unbeatable I think this is more beatable ww I can catch every note and get 94acc ww
Maybe this is too hard for me Tv T...

Good luck ~

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-07-01T08:22:40+00:00

Hinsvar

kyuten

thanks!

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2012-07-01T09:25:41+00:00

Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?

[S.S]
●SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047 →　2.0
●00:04:287 (4) - change to 1/8 slider?
●01:38:572 (1) - add clap
●02:19:429 (6,7,8,1) - not stack better imo
●04:13:572 (6) - change to 1/8 slider? and stack on 04:14:001 (1) -

good luck :3

BinJip

759 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

BinJip 2012-07-01T10:36:50+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?

good luck :3

ありがとうございます~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-07-02T09:33:52+00:00

from my queue

~~尼玛刚刷了一百多pp就给我这种图这不是打击我么, 什么心态~~ <-- ignore this line (off-topic, only for myself o.o)

Unbeatable

00:16:715 (2) - here looks better x:436 y:220
00:25:429 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x:144 y:144 to make blanket look better
00:33:144 (6,3) - it's not stacked perfectly
00:36:287 (1,2,3,4) - this gives a better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358720
01:03:715 (9,1) - slider blanket like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358721
```
141,191,63715,2,0,B|68:192|28:268|60:332,2,180,4|0|4
```
02:54:215 (2,3) - why 1/4..? missing note at 02:54:144 ?
02:58:001 (5) - better here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358724
03:18:287 (3) - move to x:152 y:188
04:39:572 (4) - better blanket..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358728
04:42:572 - drag break here..? gives a pause break effect
05:06:252 - ~~add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358730~~ ._.

S.S

00:15:858 (5,6,7) - imo ctrl+r plays better here o.o
00:23:144 (1) - I think this shape goes with music better orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358697
01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo,,, back and forth jump at 210 bpm, it's so hard,,,,, and also, 01:04:001 (7) - stacks there ;__; maybe you can do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358701
01:04:715 (3) - ctrl+r plays better here o.o
01:44:287 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358703 looks better...
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358704 how about this._.
02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - stack somewhere else...?
03:42:001 (1,2) - you can do slider blanket better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358708
```
92,268,222001,6,0,B|132:208|104:120|24:104,1,200.000000596047,4|8
```
04:22:715 (2,3,4,5) - stream here

that's all

Good luck~

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-07-02T11:35:46+00:00

hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
why you ignore kosiga's

kosiga wrote:
from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.

i still see it

[S.S]

[Unbeatable]

sorry but mapset is clean imo, please don't give kd /me runs

Ryu_old

Ryu_old 2012-07-03T09:01:07+00:00

[UB]
01:08:429 - 01:08:715 - slider 1 repeat
01:48:572 - 01:48:715 - slider
01:48:858 - 01:49:144 - slider 1 repeat
01:49:429 - 01:49:715 - slider
01:50:287 - 01:50:572 - slider 1 repeat
01:50:715 - remove
01:51:001 - ^

[S.S]
So Sexy

Good luck moemoe >w</

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-07-03T15:46:24+00:00

Oh hey

[Unbeatable]
02:53:644 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:54:572 (4) - Add clap at start slider
04:28:144 (3) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi)
04:49:974 (7) - New combo?
05:03:269 (1) - Why whistle? It shouldn't have a whistle at last spinner

[S.S.]
01:49:001 (1) - Not stack correctly with previous note
02:04:001 (2) - Move down a bit so it's not overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - An anti-jump after jump pattern will confuse the players, I guess
03:04:001 (4) - This note is touch the HP Bar
03:06:001 (5) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
04:11:429 (4) - I don't like if this place at same place as 04:11:429 (4).... Try to make something better?

That's all I got, sorry

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2012-07-03T16:39:48+00:00

[S.S]
개인적으로 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 노래네요. 기타와 어울리리라 생각했는데 쩝...
01:47:287 (3) - 이 노트가 특별히 점프가 아닌 이유가 있나요?
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - 굳이 안티 점프라 여겨질 멜로디도 없고 노트가 겹쳐있기까지하다보니 되려 넓은 스트림으로 여겨질까 걱정되네요. 좌우 지그재그로 내려오는 패턴이 어떨까요? 이전 슬라이더들과도 어울리리라 생각해요.
02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같은 이유입니다. 다른 패턴을 추천드려요.
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - 으아아 파트의 클라이막스다보니 거의 확실하게 스트림으로 여겨지게 되네요. 위 두 패턴은 몰라도 이건 정말 알아낼 방도가 없었어요.
04:44:520 (1) - 개인적으로 이 이후로 Soft Whistle을 너무 남용하신게 아닌가 싶네요. 노래의 에필로그나 다름없으니 잔잔한 여운을 남기는게 좋으리라 생각합니다. 예를 들어 일정한 리등으로 넣으며 볼륨을 조금 줄이는것도 좋은 방법이구요.

[Unbeatable]
위 모딩과 같이 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 난이도네요.
00:23:715 (3) - 슬라이더 모양이 흐름에 굉장히 어긋나네요. U가 되도록 고쳐보세요.
00:30:144 (8) - 좀 더 내리셔서 다음 슬라이더로의 움직임이 수월하게 해주세요.
01:29:001 (5) - 이거 1/3으로 고쳐주세요.
01:59:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 노래와 무관한 점프네요. 물론 그런 점프가 이전에 아예 없다고 (두 난이도 포함) 할순 없겠지만 이건 특히 어긋나게 느껴지네요. 이전 같은 슬라이더 + 노트 점프가 더 어울리리라 생각합니다 굳이 점프가 필요하다면.
02:06:001 (3) - 패턴이 3노트로 이루어지면 안되고 4노트로 이루어져야겠네요. 보컬이 패턴의 시작점이 되게 패턴과 히트사운드를 고쳐주세요.
02:36:144 (3,4) - 갑자기 여기서부터 정상 스페이싱이 되니 헷갈리네요. 점프로 고쳐주세요.
02:54:144 (2) - 이 노트를 지워주세요. 이유는 다음 슬라이더를 위함입니다.
02:54:286 (3) - 위를 하신 후, 이 슬라이더를 이전에 있는 파란색 선으로 옮겨주세요.
03:32:144 (3) - 박수 추가
03:34:715 (4,5) - 이것들 1/3입니다. 고칠 필요는 없습니다 어차피 플레이어가 못느낄수도 있으니.
03:45:001 (1,2,3,4) - 이전 노트로부터 이어지기 편하게 왼쪽으로 조금 옮겨주세요.
04:44:519 (2) - 이 이후부터 박수는 안어울린다고 생각합니다 (솔직한 심정으로 말하자면 피아노 공연에서 축하용 폭죽 터트리는 듯한 기분). Soft Whistle이 더 어울릴꺼에요.

화이팅!

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,191 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2012-07-28T02:44:43+00:00

[Unbeatable]

OD : -1

00:21:858 (6) - : NC

00:34:001 (3,1) - : 조금 겹치네요... 조금 넓혀 주세요.

00:42:287 (4) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:28:572 (3,4,5) - : 연타 길이 조금 좁혀주세요.

02:11:715 (7) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 NC

02:35:858 (1) - : 슬라이더하고 겹치는 건 조금 그렇습니다. 옆으로 해주세요.

02:53:644 (1,2) - : 박자가 조금 안맞는 것 같습니다. 1/4로 해보세요,

03:47:644 (2,3) - : 연타로 해주세요. 햇갈립니다.

04:06:144 (8) - : NC